G'day sir, here's M4M.
[Kantan]
00:11:433 - I think You should add some notes after the drop to separate from the quiet start. the 4 spots like this could work.
00:52:946 - Then we could consider adding 4 of them here too.
[Futsuu]
00:15:162 00:25:541 - Could add d's here for some intensity.
00:45:486 (130) - This could just be a d cause of the pitch rise at (131)
[Muzukashii]
00:47:432 (216) - Deleting this would work better for building some intensity in this section
00:51:324 (239) - It's probably a bit much for Muzu, but switching this to d and putting the k to 00:51:162 instead would keep the double k's going and work on the intensity build as well. Just a thought.
[Oni]
00:36:162 (200) - Consider deleting this note, this 5plet feels out of place for this section considering how calm you map the rest of it.
00:48:081 - You could consider a 1/3 kddk here instead, to me it flows alot better than 2 lone doubles.
[Inner Oni]
00:25:703 (190) - d would separate the double snare nicely
00:36:243 (264) - Pretty distinguishing bassdrum sound here so this could be a d.
00:48:081 - how about kddkddkdkkdkk, I feel it might represent the pitch rise a bit.
Sorry, mod is somewhat stub. Map is really well done, feels like nitpicking finding much of anything to change. Good job!
[Kantan]
00:11:433 - I think You should add some notes after the drop to separate from the quiet start. the 4 spots like this could work.
00:52:946 - Then we could consider adding 4 of them here too.
[Futsuu]
00:15:162 00:25:541 - Could add d's here for some intensity.
00:45:486 (130) - This could just be a d cause of the pitch rise at (131)
[Muzukashii]
00:47:432 (216) - Deleting this would work better for building some intensity in this section
00:51:324 (239) - It's probably a bit much for Muzu, but switching this to d and putting the k to 00:51:162 instead would keep the double k's going and work on the intensity build as well. Just a thought.
[Oni]
00:36:162 (200) - Consider deleting this note, this 5plet feels out of place for this section considering how calm you map the rest of it.
00:48:081 - You could consider a 1/3 kddk here instead, to me it flows alot better than 2 lone doubles.
[Inner Oni]
00:25:703 (190) - d would separate the double snare nicely
00:36:243 (264) - Pretty distinguishing bassdrum sound here so this could be a d.
00:48:081 - how about kddkddkdkkdkk, I feel it might represent the pitch rise a bit.
Sorry, mod is somewhat stub. Map is really well done, feels like nitpicking finding much of anything to change. Good job!