[Kantan]
00:10:460 - Finisher here, I think, because it's like a pretty big tempo change as well as a drum crash in the background. Fits well
00:31:216 - ^ Kinda the same here.
01:12:729 - ^
Hear me out, maybe you can make this kantan have a little intense part by adding notes here 01:23:594 - 01:26:188 - 01:28:783 - 01:29:756 - ? I think it gives it a nice rhythm and makes it stick out from the part where you didn't do this, since its the end of the song, it might challenge players. I think that bumps the SR up a little bit but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
[Futsuu]
Mmk so the finisher thing I outlined in Kantan is also prevalent here, so keep that in mind.
01:12:080 - Imo should be a kat, the sounds before are pretty defined.
[Muzu]
Ok so the finisher thing is in every diff i take it, at this point I guess it's a concious decision but it would be ok to apply my change
There is not many nitpicks with the overall mapping, like whatsoever, I just think it's a little difficult. Halving up long sequences by removing notes like 00:15:811 - 00:21:000 - 00:26:189 - is what I would do for the whole map. If it's 2 measures long, make them 1 measure long, essentially. There is not enough differentiating muzu and oni so you should probably do this.
[Oni]
00:26:189 - Change this to kkd, this is literally one of the only kdd in the entire map and it sticks out badly.
01:07:702 - ^
01:17:594 - kdkkd is a better pattern, I just generally dislike ending anything in kdd.
[Inner Oni]
00:26:189 - kkd for the same reasons as oni
01:02:513 - ^
HP 6 on like every diff
OD 5.5 on Oni if that's cool
Just rank this it's good
00:10:460 - Finisher here, I think, because it's like a pretty big tempo change as well as a drum crash in the background. Fits well
00:31:216 - ^ Kinda the same here.
01:12:729 - ^
Hear me out, maybe you can make this kantan have a little intense part by adding notes here 01:23:594 - 01:26:188 - 01:28:783 - 01:29:756 - ? I think it gives it a nice rhythm and makes it stick out from the part where you didn't do this, since its the end of the song, it might challenge players. I think that bumps the SR up a little bit but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
[Futsuu]
Mmk so the finisher thing I outlined in Kantan is also prevalent here, so keep that in mind.
01:12:080 - Imo should be a kat, the sounds before are pretty defined.
[Muzu]
Ok so the finisher thing is in every diff i take it, at this point I guess it's a concious decision but it would be ok to apply my change
There is not many nitpicks with the overall mapping, like whatsoever, I just think it's a little difficult. Halving up long sequences by removing notes like 00:15:811 - 00:21:000 - 00:26:189 - is what I would do for the whole map. If it's 2 measures long, make them 1 measure long, essentially. There is not enough differentiating muzu and oni so you should probably do this.
[Oni]
00:26:189 - Change this to kkd, this is literally one of the only kdd in the entire map and it sticks out badly.
01:07:702 - ^
01:17:594 - kdkkd is a better pattern, I just generally dislike ending anything in kdd.
[Inner Oni]
00:26:189 - kkd for the same reasons as oni
01:02:513 - ^
HP 6 on like every diff
OD 5.5 on Oni if that's cool
Just rank this it's good