hi, nm from queue
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nice map and good luck!00:10:177 (1,1) - time after the spinner is pretty short. it seems really sudden
00:33:584 (1) - uncover this for readability?
00:36:303 (8,1,2,3,4) - make this "blanket" better
00:36:716 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ same thing
00:39:600 (3,1) - not a fan of this being stacked
00:46:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make this look more circular? it helps with playability and it looks better
01:00:782 (1,2,3,4) - at such a high speed, back and forth movement is really uncomfortable. i'd suggest changing this to something with better circular flow
01:04:655 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this "blanket" can be improved
01:23:034 (1,2) - blanket?
01:25:012 (4,5) - ^
01:30:782 (3,5) - ^
02:11:857 (2,4) - ^ :/
02:48:286 (2,1) - ^
02:50:594 (1,2) - these 2 whistles in a row sounds bad imo
02:55:154 (2,3,4,5) - hard to tell this is 1/6
02:55:594 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - same thing about high speed and circular flow
02:56:445 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - i don't really like the super short gaps between spinners and stuff
03:01:720 (1,1,1,1) - ^
03:05:264 (2,3) - double check this blanket
03:30:319 (1,2,3,4,1) - make this a tiny bit more circular
04:01:646 (4) - ctrl+g ?
04:41:145 (1,2) - why is this spacing so high wtf
04:45:145 (8,1) - imperfect blanket
for the most part, this map plays pretty well.
00:33:584 (1) - uncover this for readability?
00:36:303 (8,1,2,3,4) - make this "blanket" better
00:36:716 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ same thing
00:39:600 (3,1) - not a fan of this being stacked
00:46:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make this look more circular? it helps with playability and it looks better
01:00:782 (1,2,3,4) - at such a high speed, back and forth movement is really uncomfortable. i'd suggest changing this to something with better circular flow
01:04:655 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this "blanket" can be improved
01:23:034 (1,2) - blanket?
01:25:012 (4,5) - ^
01:30:782 (3,5) - ^
02:11:857 (2,4) - ^ :/
02:48:286 (2,1) - ^
02:50:594 (1,2) - these 2 whistles in a row sounds bad imo
02:55:154 (2,3,4,5) - hard to tell this is 1/6
02:55:594 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - same thing about high speed and circular flow
02:56:445 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - i don't really like the super short gaps between spinners and stuff
03:01:720 (1,1,1,1) - ^
03:05:264 (2,3) - double check this blanket
03:30:319 (1,2,3,4,1) - make this a tiny bit more circular
04:01:646 (4) - ctrl+g ?
04:41:145 (1,2) - why is this spacing so high wtf
04:45:145 (8,1) - imperfect blanket
for the most part, this map plays pretty well.