R3 Music Box - Zen Zen Zense [CatchTheBeat] · forum

-Hex-

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-08-12T11:28:35+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Really sorry for taking so long, had no motivation for anything recently, but I'm hopefully back now! Welcome back \o/

[General]

Really not sure of the point of that last timing point? It's not in the ranked set and doesn't add anything to the song in my opinion, think it's better to just remove it. // In the ranked set, the map has timing point on 00:36:038 - this timeline. Correct me If I'm wrong

My map
Ranked set
Maybe move preview point to 00:00:035 - ? It just seems really odd to not have it snapped to that note. Not unrankable or anything, just feels and sounds slightly better to me. // I think it's fine to leave this as it's match for preview time

[Cup]

00:00:717 (1) - I think the note where the tick is in this slider is quite prominent and is strange to be ignored under a slider to me. Maybe do a 1/1 repeat slider instead? // Yup, changed to 1/1 repeat slider.
00:02:535 (3) - Hmm, I think a 3/2 slider would be nice here instead, to aim to follow the main rhythm of the music box in this difficulty. Maybe also move it a bit more to the left, like x:88, I feel the note is stronger than 2, and so deserves slightly more distancing. // Fair enough. The sound ends on 3/2 tick. Also moved (3) to x : 88 for better emphasize.
00:04:353 (1,2,3) - Maybe move this section a bit to the left, to get 1 a bit more emphasis, and then give 2 slightly less as 1 is definitely a stronger note than 2, yet 2 has higher distance right now. Try 1 on x:64, and then 2 on x:336 and 3 on x:296. // Did that for (1) but I moved (2) to x:344 and (3) to x:304 because I think that's good.
00:10:035 (1) - Not sure about this uncomfortable type of flow here with the song. I think it'd be a lot neater to just ctrl+H and move it to x:296. // Okay since modders keep asking to change this. I flipped it and moved (2) to the left.
00:13:217 (3) - Maybe use a slightly lower distance to this, it's one of the highest distances in the map right now and really not that strong of a note compared to some others. Try Ctrl+G and then move it to x:288 maybe? Moved to x:296 it sounds better for me.
00:16:626 (2,3) - For consistency with the earlier timeline, maybe do a circle followed by a 3/2 slider here? Okay
00:19:353 (3,4) - Timeline is very strange here considering previous rhythms you've followed. A timeline like this fits the rest of the map better. Changed to that timeline and added a circle on 00:20:717 - to give emphasize on the white tick.
00:21:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this type of timeline is a bit inconsistent with what you did earlier, try something similar to 00:06:853 (1,2,3) - , or change that to be similar to this. Okay. Changed for consistency
00:22:762 (1) - Very inconsistent with previous timelines, and just feels kinda boring to play here, I would recommend a more interesting timeline, maybe similar to what you did earlier. Remapped
00:24:580 (2) - And again with this. ^
00:31:853 (3) - Also with this, it just seems very strange that the ending of the song, which should be more intense, is instead just long sliders which don't follow much. ^

Sinnoh wrote:
mbomb requested help
aaa need to check everything I say bc some will be redundant with mbomb's mod

General
Remove sliderslide.wav lol, it's unused in CtB Oh damn.
00:36:395 (1) - Silence this spinner end I hope I made it correct.

Cup
00:10:035 (4) - NC Already did that.
00:06:853 (1) - https://puu.sh/x89eI/a948f6bc80.png use this pattern, you normally prioritise music when it changes pitch, larger change is unmapped here
Alternately, could do something like 00:08:898 (2,3) - since they are the same pattern I think it sounds better with my current placement. Keep this
00:10:035 (4) - Stronger note is on white tick, suggesting to shorten to 2/1 to map it I think sound starts on 00:10:035 - as I don't want to leave that important sound.
00:13:217 (3) - There's no sound on the slider tail, extend or shorten it by 1/2 Yeah, there is no sound on that slider tail. Make it shorter.
00:34:528 (1,2) - Reduce distance here, not that strong a note. Okay.

Thanks guys for your mods . That was really helpful (Although I'm not really sure about my change).
Updated Cup for now and will apply mods for Salad tomorrow. I will add HS to the re-mapped part tommorow.

Last edited by -Hex- 2017-08-12T13:06:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-08-12T12:39:03+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Really sorry for taking so long, had no motivation for anything recently, but I'm hopefully back now!

[Platter]

00:02:080 (5,6) - Not sure about this type of timeline here, doesn't really feel very nice to me. Maybe try timeline like this?
00:04:580 (3) - Since the first HDash in the map just happened, I think it'd be best to keep normal flow after, to get the player used to the mechanic. Try ctrl+H and moving it to x:32?
00:09:580 (4) - Current movement to this feels quite uncomfortable in my eyes, I think that a dash to the right would feel nicer to play here, and would avoid the pattern feeling too repetitive. Try x:448.
00:17:307 (6) - A bit of a strong dash, especially considering it's followed by another strong dash in the opposite direction. x:96 would feel a little more comfortable.
00:21:398 (1) - Hmm, this movement right now currently requires a weird slowdown, followed by a speedup into the slider, when the movement through the slider should be the slowdown to follow better flow. Try moving 1 to x:192 to fix this?
00:27:080 (1) - Pretty weak sound overall, don't think it's really fitting of a dash, try x:264 on this instead?
00:29:580 (4) - HDash here for consistency would be nice, try x:80?
00:31:853 (1,2) - Maybe Ctrl+H this section and move it to x:280, to make a HDash to the next note for consistency.
00:33:973 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, I don't think this slowdown section really calls for much dashes, other than to 7, which you actually don't have one in right now. I think a nice pattern would be 2 on x:184, 3 on x:464, 4 on x:200, 5 on x:496, 6 on x:408 and 7 on x:256.

Alright, done!

All Applied. Thank you <3

Sinnoh wrote:
mbomb requested help
aaa need to check everything I say bc some will be redundant with mbomb's mod

Platter
Can I suggest to change NC so that you always NC on a large white tick? Some patterns are longer than others or are inconsistent between sections. Doing that makes it really easy to quickly fix, and you already do it in some sections. All Applied owo
Other NC stuff
don't worry these are really easy to do

00:02:080 (5) - Add
00:03:671 (1) - Remove
00:04:353 (2) - Add (This combo is 12 objects long so there's a lot of fruit on plate, doing this reduces.)
00:14:580 (1) - Remove
00:15:262 (2) - Add
00:16:626 (5) - Add
00:18:217 (1) - remove
00:18:898 (2) - add
00:35:718 (5) - add
00:03:671 (1) - This is mapping the sound in middle of the slider, but 00:00:035 (1) - doesn't. Suggest to use slider to circle pattern so you can map that sound. (for reference, vocal syllables are identical "kimi no/wo", but it's music box so lol) Throw the old slider. Replace with the reversed slider
00:14:580 (1) - ^ ^
00:02:080 (6) - Same thing, main melody is mapped 90% of the time so doesn't make sense not to map it here. Use same pattern as before I changed this to Mbomb's Mod. Sorry for late response on thread :/
00:08:217 (1,2) - Reduce distances here so it's a little more walkable. Pushed (2) to the left
00:09:580 (4) - Not a requirement for normal dashes, but moving this to x16 means youre less likely to crash into the wall when catching. *Buldozer coming. Jsszzzz
00:13:217 (4,1) - imo doesn't need a dash but your choice You can catch it by walking now
00:27:080 (1) - remove dash here Changed it already compared to Mbomb's Mod
00:31:853 (1) - If you ctrl-g this + move the next couple patterns left, it will increase distance from 00:31:398 (4) - . Flows better as stacking 1/1 directly on top of each other is uncommon. Walking is fine there Imo. I'll keep this :/
00:33:735 (1,2) - Compare to 00:26:398 (5) - , this one has a lot more movement. Reduce spacing between these He's already fixed it wohoo

Thanks for the mods. Uwu i love you guys <3

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-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-08-13T11:08:32+00:00

Let's continue this.

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
[Salad]

00:01:171 (3) - Since it's after the first dash in the map, maybe make movement slightly easier to recover from? x:192 would be nice. Moved to x:176 as 192 little bit closer in my opinion.
00:04:353 (2) - This type of slider doesn't really suit the song very well here, and is actually simpler than the timeline you used in the cup. Try using two 1/2 sliders, like you did in the cup, I think it fits well here. Whilst changing this, I'd also recommend starting the pattern at x:400, to ensure the player knows to dash here. Changed with my pattern.
00:08:217 (1) - Distancing to this feels a little awkward as it is now. Try moving it to x:376 and then using a shape like this. Changed and moved to x : 384
00:10:944 (3,1,2) - 1 here is definitely one of the strongest notes in the song, yet right now you have a very weak movement to it, when it definitely deserves a dash. Try Ctrl+H on 3 and moving it to x:336, and then move 1 to x:64 and 2 to x:128. Okay. Changed to that position.
00:12:762 (3) - This really isn't a strong note at all, I don't understand why there's a dash to this. Maybe move it a bit to the left, try something like x:312. Okay.
00:14:580 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hmm, distancing to 00:14:580 (1) - is very strong here, for a note which really doesn't deserve a dash. I found a good fix, but it requires a bit of rearanging. move 00:14:580 (1) - to x:344, 2 to x:128, 3 to x:368, 4 to x:176, and then move the start of 00:16:626 (1) - to x:424. Changed to that position.
00:18:898 (2) - Very slight reduction to x:72 would play nicer in my eyes. Moved to x: 80 to keep it consistent
00:20:489 (5) - Just about possible without dashing to a degree where I feel it could get confusing for a player. Maybe increase very slightly to x:456, avoiding it going off screen with a shape like this? Moved to x:440 as I don't want to hit the wall.
00:21:398 (1,2,3) - Hmm, I think the slider shape here plays weird with antiflow, so maybe it'd be better to just ctrl+H and move back to x:232? Feels a bit more natural with your other patterns. Okay
00:23:671 (3) - Would be nice to have a tiny bit more distance to this, feels a bit uncomfortable with so little distance considering the sound is stronger than 2. Try x:288. Doesn't give big difference in my opinion because the pattern is still walkable. I will try x : 280
00:26:398 (1) - Current distance to this is very difficult after the dash for a salad player. Try x:280 on it instead, should be a lot more comfortable for a lower skill level player. Moved to x:296 as I want to give challenge part on that pattern.
00:28:444 (1) - Distancing to this right now could be too strong for a non-dash for a salad player, reducing to like x:152 would be nice. Moving 2 to x:496 would be nice after that, and then maybe ctrl+G 00:30:035 (1) - and move it to x:320? Did for (1) But not for (2) as It's too far from (1) where new salad player will be confused to dash. Also for 00:30:035 (1) - place that note on the same place with previous note isn't a good idea I think. I will keep this
00:31:171 (3) - Try x:72 on this to ensure that a salad player knows to dash to it. Moved to x:112 to keep it consistent with 00:28:444 (1,2) -
00:33:735 (4) - I would reduce this a bit to like x:240, kinda uncomfortable after the dash right now. Moved to x:248 to make it consistent with 00:25:944 (3,1) -

Sinnoh wrote:
Salad
Tick rate 2 would probably work well, check with MBomb on that first. I will discuss about this.
00:06:171 (4) - Using a slider here might be better. Circles are slightly stronger than sliders for melody, so using a slider on background noises can be better here. I'm little bit confused on this as on here 00:06:626 - there is a sound here. I will think again about this to find the best solution.
00:07:080 (2,3) - Rhythm choice would be better if ctrl-g. Using sliders to map strong sounds on the tail reduces emphasis. You could probably make the pattern work after removing 00:06:171 (4) - For me it will be better to keep this timeline, as it's good to end that timeline with repeat slider
Then again imo just remove it, it's not really mapped elsewhere. eg. 00:13:217 (4) - 00:20:489 (5) - There is a sound on that tick. Ignore that sound make this map weird, I will keep this and also you can hear sound on that
00:20:035 (4,5) - Same thing mbomb mentioned. Just to help fix, if you rotate 00:19:353 (3) - 90 degrees + move 4 left, you have a bit more space to work with while fixing Fixed with moved to x:440 and then changed the slider's shape.
00:21:398 (1,2,3) - Timeline a little inconsistent with 00:23:444 (2,3) - , second one is a bit denser. Change a bit to be similar I disagree here even the timeline a little consistent it still plays well and don't ruin the flow of the map. Also it's get little bit boring if the pattern same thorough the map.
00:30:035 (1) - 00:31:853 (1) - timeline inconsistencies again, Both of them are different I think, also I want to make simple movement on that timeline
00:35:718 (3) - Rotate this by 70-80 degrees for nice and calm ending, same on cup Make it same like Cup.

aaaaa so many redundant things had to remove What ?

It's finish . If you have any comment, you can post on here as I'm not really sure with my change.
Thanks guys.

Absolute Zero

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Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-08-21T16:19:18+00:00

00:34:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - Timing points here should be really, really soft. All I can hear are the hitsounds, which is not good.

[Cup]
Still needs some fine-tuning. I’ll go through what I think needs work, and give a few examples.

Rhythm
You follow the melody precisely in weird places, so it sounds like the beats themselves are a little unstable while playing. Sometimes, you omit strange notes, like this:
00:06:171 - I would add a hitcircle here. You’ve followed the note on 00:05:944 (3), which isn’t as strong as this one.
Other times, you cover notes:
00:10:035 (1) - This slider covers a lot of music notes that you’ve hit before. For example, 00:10:26, 00:10:489, and 00:10:717 are all very clear beats.
Sometimes you sacrifice the main beat for a weaker beat, like at the slider at
00:16:626 (2) - Masking 00:17:080 with the slider makes both a weird tick and a strange sound at the end of the slider.
Finally, there are sections where I think you shouldn’t map every note, like at
00:24:580 (1,2,3) - This is a little dense for a cup. I would make this more 1/1 slider.

Placement is fine, but I'd strongly reconsider your rhythm choices for now.

[Salad]
In my personal preference, it would have been nice to also follow some of the base rhythms, but seeing that it's already decently dense, I wouldn't change most of following the melody.
00:08:217 (1) - Timeline would look better like below in terms of rhythm.

Ticker is on 00:08:217

00:10:035 (1) - I think this timeline would look better with a pattern like such that follows the music.

Ticker is on 00:10:376

00:20:035 (4,5) - Unnecessary dash here. I think the music doesn't support it--lower distancing.
00:25:262 (2) - This is probably better represented as two 1/2 sliders instead.
00:27:080 (2) - I think you can lower the spacing here at least a tiny bit--they're very soft beats and constant movement isn't justified (I think).
00:29:353 (2) - I would flip this slider, since it's a little challenging to play, especially for a salad player.

[Skycreeper's Platter]
00:02:535 (2,3) - Flip (2) around its head to make the dash more manageable--right now it's a strong dash from antiflow.
00:05:944 (5) - Personal preference: why not curve this more? The straight slider you've had is a little awkward to play right now.
00:12:080 (2,3) - I would have this be a lower distance than 00:11:626 (1,2).
00:23:444 (3) - Could you flip (3) around its head? Antiflow's a bit hard to play.
00:27:535 (2,3) - Woah, lower distance! Pretty questionable dash here.
00:28:444 (1,2) - Make this a reverse 1/2 slider instead. Not that much pitch difference.
00:29:353 (3) - I don't really think the music calls for a hyper here.

Still could use some work in my eyes.

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-08-21T16:44:06+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
[Skycreeper's Platter]
00:02:535 (2,3) - Flip (2) around its head to make the dash more manageable--right now it's a strong dash from antiflow.
00:05:944 (5) - Personal preference: why not curve this more? The straight slider you've had is a little awkward to play right now.
00:12:080 (2,3) - I would have this be a lower distance than 00:11:626 (1,2).
00:23:444 (3) - Could you flip (3) around its head? Antiflow's a bit hard to play.
00:27:535 (2,3) - Woah, lower distance! Pretty questionable dash here.
00:28:444 (1,2) - Make this a reverse 1/2 slider instead. Not that much pitch difference.
00:29:353 (3) - I don't really think the music calls for a hyper here.

Still could use some work in my eyes.

Thank you. That was good >w<

Piringnya Skycreeper

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Source:君の名は。
Tags:kimi no na wa ha radwimps your name cover skycreeper
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-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-08-22T09:12:32+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
00:34:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - Timing points here should be really, really soft. All I can hear are the hitsounds, which is not good. Lowered

[Cup]
Still needs some fine-tuning. I’ll go through what I think needs work, and give a few examples.

Rhythm
You follow the melody precisely in weird places, so it sounds like the beats themselves are a little unstable while playing. Sometimes, you omit strange notes, like this:
00:06:171 - I would add a hitcircle here. You’ve followed the note on 00:05:944 (3), which isn’t as strong as this one.
Other times, you cover notes: Added
00:10:035 (1) - This slider covers a lot of music notes that you’ve hit before. For example, 00:10:26, 00:10:489, and 00:10:717 are all very clear beats. Changed
Sometimes you sacrifice the main beat for a weaker beat, like at the slider at
00:16:626 (2) - Masking 00:17:080 with the slider makes both a weird tick and a strange sound at the end of the slider. Okay, changed
Finally, there are sections where I think you shouldn’t map every note, like at
00:24:580 (1,2,3) - This is a little dense for a cup. I would make this more 1/1 slider. I disagree here, even though It's Cup. Better to map the strong beat like this one to make it sounds good as you said earlier also it's a simple movement so it's not really hard to catch. I will keep this.

Placement is fine, but I'd strongly reconsider your rhythm choices for now.

[Salad]
In my personal preference, it would have been nice to also follow some of the base rhythms, but seeing that it's already decently dense, I wouldn't change most of following the melody.
00:08:217 (1) - Timeline would look better like below in terms of rhythm. Changed
Ticker is on 00:08:217
00:10:035 (1) - I think this timeline would look better with a pattern like such that follows the music. Okay
Ticker is on 00:10:376

00:20:035 (4,5) - Unnecessary dash here. I think the music doesn't support it--lower distancing. I think it's okay as the previous note has weak sound compared with those notes. It deserves to get big spacing.
00:25:262 (2) - This is probably better represented as two 1/2 sliders instead. It sounds weird for me
00:27:080 (2) - I think you can lower the spacing here at least a tiny bit--they're very soft beats and constant movement isn't justified (I think). Moved 2 grids closer.
00:29:353 (2) - I would flip this slider, since it's a little challenging to play, especially for a salad player. Didn't flip it but I moved 2 grids closer and then tilt the slider a bit to nerf that pattern.

Thank you AZ for the mod !

Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-08-28T11:00:58+00:00

no kudosu

General:

The guidline says that the diffs should all end at the same spot (the spinner on Skycreeper's Platter ends a bit later than on Cup and Salad). Even though it is because of a gd I think having the same ending spot for every diff is better

Cup:

00:35:718 (3,4,5) - is currently a 1/4 pattern which is breaking the guideline. Making it a slider instead would fix that
00:36:395 (1) - according to the rc you need to have atleast 1/2 bar between the end of the previous pattern and the start of the spinner. Currently it is 1/4 (blame the low bpm but a rule is a rule). You can put the start of the spinner to 00:36:752 -

-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-08-29T10:11:50+00:00

Sanyi wrote:
no kudosu

General:
The guidline says that the diffs should all end at the same spot (the spinner on Skycreeper's Platter ends a bit later than on Cup and Salad). Even though it is because of a gd I think having the same ending spot for every diff is better // Make it same.
Cup:
00:35:718 (3,4,5) - is currently a 1/4 pattern which is breaking the guideline. Making it a slider instead would fix that It's only simple movement and even it's 1/4 pattern, it should be easy to catch.
00:36:395 (1) - according to the rc you need to have atleast 1/2 bar between the end of the previous pattern and the start of the spinner. Currently it is 1/4 (blame the low bpm but a rule is a rule). You can put the start of the spinner to 00:36:752 - Well, there is a gap between those notes and spinner so players won't get confused with the spinner

Thanks again Sanyi \o/

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-09-02T13:35:06+00:00

You asked my opinion on this a few days ago and I was just looking for stuff to mod so here's a thing I guess

General

Nothing to report

Cup

00:10:035 (1,2,3,4) - Minor suggestion, but I feel these would look nicer if the sliders were slanted slightly. The repetition of vertical sliders creates a stop/start movement which goes against the calm, flowing nature of the music imo
00:26:398 (4,1,2) - Spacing is a little high compared to what you had before this point, which might catch some players out since the music isn't particularly strong. (1) at x-272 or so would be a bit more comfortable

Salad

00:07:307 (3,1) - Would be a good idea to reduce this walk distance a tiny bit, in order to account for the direction changes at (3). If players go too far to the left on (3)'s tail, it can be very ambiguous whether dash is needed or not to reach (1) which could result in misses
00:10:944 (3,1) - Making (1) a curved slider (vertical at the start, curving to the right) would make the antiflow on this dash just a bit more lenient. At the moment it's quite easy for a new player to overshoot and miss a few droplets
00:20:035 (4,5) - Could be increased a little to make the dash more clear, something like 2.2x DS would be nice
00:21:398 (1) - Can be curved more for prettier slider droplet formation and better flow, looks a bit squashed at the moment
00:28:444 (1,2) - 00:30:717 (2,3) - These could also be increased a little for more clear dash and to help build emphasis towards the end of the song

Platter

00:07:307 (2,3) - Could be increased a little for clearer dash, easy to overshoot as it is right now. 00:06:853 (1,2) - could probably be moved to the right slightly to make room
00:12:080 (2,3) - Making this a horizontal slider with antiflow emphasises the increased intensity and pitch change. Perhaps try something like this?
00:28:444 (1,2) - Low distance here looks a bit weird and creates a flowstop in play which you didn't use anywhere else. Ctrl+H 00:29:353 (2,3) - and moving to x-176 maintains spacing and flow

Really nice set, these were mostly just some picky style suggestions but I hope they helped regardless.

Good luck! (:

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-09-02T16:34:04+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
You asked my opinion on this a few days ago and I was just looking for stuff to mod so here's a thing I guess

General
Nothing to report

Platter
00:07:307 (2,3) - Could be increased a little for clearer dash, easy to overshoot as it is right now. 00:06:853 (1,2) - could probably be moved to the right slightly to make room Good One
00:12:080 (2,3) - Making this a horizontal slider with antiflow emphasises the increased intensity and pitch change. Perhaps try something like this? Changed as your suggestion
00:28:444 (1,2) - Low distance here looks a bit weird and creates a flowstop in play which you didn't use anywhere else. Ctrl+H 00:29:353 (2,3) - and moving to x-176 maintains spacing and flow Ups. Sorry, I have no idea what I gonna do with that pattern in the past. Thanks
Really nice set, these were mostly just some picky style suggestions but I hope they helped regardless.

Good luck! (:

Piring

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-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-09-03T07:35:59+00:00

[Cup]

00:10:035 (1,2,3,4) - Moved to x:168 as x:272 is little bit closer IMO and also to make it consistent with 00:33:735 (4) -

[Salad]
00:10:944 (3,1) - Didn't curve that slider but I just tilted that slider to make it easier and also It's little bit closer which players would recognize that pattern walkable, so I just space them a bit with this slider.

Fixed the rest and Updated !

Thank you so much JBH <3

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2017-09-03T15:35:00+00:00

I took notice of this map from this queue so I'm here.

[General]

What would I have anything else to say here on a simple set? That would be weird

[Skycreeper's Platter]

00:10:489 (2,3) - Not against dash leading into anti-flow, but with how vertical (3) is aligned, players who do go for the full horizontal movement might overshoot the repeat fruit, while the players who stand still might miss the repeat fruit because they are too far from it. Would rather flip (3) horizontally.
00:14:580 (1,1,2,3) - Ok this is kinda on the grey area imo. Firstly the first 3 notes make an anti-flow pattern, which would be fine on this BPM (especially with 1/1 gap), but the difficulty of this movement is heightened because of the far distance between (1) > (2). Cause of this a dash is required to catch all 3 later notes, which could be unrankable due to hyper leading into anti-flow. Not to mention the very first set of notes, 00:00:035 (1,2,3,4) - you only had a clear dash on the last note ((4)), so why not only have a dash on 00:16:171 (3) - here only for consistency? I suggest you to tone down the distance between 00:15:262 (1,2) - . And also while at it remove the NC on 00:14:580 (1) - cause it's not a start of new measure yet.
00:23:217 (2,3) - This distance feels somewhat unclear if it's a dash or not compared to 00:25:035 (2,3) - either make the former a non-dash or make both dashes.
00:28:444 (1,2) - (2) bears a high pitched bell, yet it has such a low distance compared to (2) > (3) - it feels like a flowstop, and it feels really awkward when a dash is right after it. I would horizontally flip 00:29:353 (2,3) - and place the pair further apart to the left so that flowstop ain't a thing.

[Salad]

00:21:398 (1) - You're skipping a sound on the white tick at 00:21:626 - . You basically didn't for the first whole part of the song so I don't get why you did this here. Same goes 00:22:762 (1) - , 00:30:035 (1) - . An alternative fix would be making the first section of the song similar to this instead (in that you use some 1/1 sliders to create note density gap with platter).
00:25:262 (2,3) - (3) basically has the same pitch and strength as 00:23:671 (3) - 's tail, which wasn't even an individual fruit to begin with, so this dash comes off consistency. Would remove the dash for that.

[Cup]

00:27:080 (1,2,3,1) - You can definitely hear that (1), (2) and (3) all share a low-volume sound compared to the 2nd (1) - yet the 2nd (1) has such a low distance, it's yet another flowstop, which makes this movement kinda awkward considering the music. Would try to reduce the distances between 00:27:080 (1,2,3) - while buffing the one between 00:27:989 (3,1) - instead.

Hey not bad, nothing much to say cause the song's short and the map's fine
Good luck

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-09-04T09:06:55+00:00

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:
I took notice of this map from this queue so I'm here.

[General]
What would I have anything else to say here on a simple set? That would be weird
[Skycreeper's Platter]
00:10:489 (2,3) - Not against dash leading into anti-flow, but with how vertical (3) is aligned, players who do go for the full horizontal movement might overshoot the repeat fruit, while the players who stand still might miss the repeat fruit because they are too far from it. Would rather flip (3) horizontally. Ok sure
00:14:580 (1,1,2,3) - Ok this is kinda on the grey area imo. Firstly the first 3 notes make an anti-flow pattern, which would be fine on this BPM (especially with 1/1 gap), but the difficulty of this movement is heightened because of the far distance between (1) > (2). Cause of this a dash is required to catch all 3 later notes, which could be unrankable due to hyper leading into anti-flow. Not to mention the very first set of notes, 00:00:035 (1,2,3,4) - you only had a clear dash on the last note ((4)), so why not only have a dash on 00:16:171 (3) - here only for consistency? I suggest you to tone down the distance between 00:15:262 (1,2) - . And also while at it remove the NC on 00:14:580 (1) - cause it's not a start of new measure yet. Ok. I feel like I'm not a consistent person anymore xD. Anyway, applied.
00:23:217 (2,3) - This distance feels somewhat unclear if it's a dash or not compared to 00:25:035 (2,3) - either make the former a non-dash or make both dashes. Non-dash. I choose you!
00:28:444 (1,2) - (2) bears a high pitched bell, yet it has such a low distance compared to (2) > (3) - it feels like a flowstop, and it feels really awkward when a dash is right after it. I would horizontally flip 00:29:353 (2,3) - and place the pair further apart to the left so that flowstop ain't a thing. Flipped
Hey not bad, nothing much to say cause the song's short and the map's fine
Good luck

Thank you for mods. Hope this will get ranked soon <3

Piring Sayur

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-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-09-04T11:03:26+00:00

[Salad]
00:25:262 (2,3) - Keep this. It's really great to end combo like that, remove that dash would make my diff become boring.

Fixed the rest. Thank you !!

Bubble please ;w;

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,052 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-09-18T15:49:32+00:00

Hello there, terribly late. From my own BN requests and the recommend us beatmaps queue.

[Cup]

00:06:171 (4) - This note should be deleted. While it's a downbeat, it's not following the melody, which is what you're mainly focusing in this diff. Additionally, you've skipped the downbeat in several sections like 00:06:171 (4) - , 00:06:171 (4) - and 00:13:444 - .
00:09:126 (3) - Maybe you can change this for a 1/1 slider, to keep it consistent with 00:07:307 (3,1) - .
00:10:035 (1,2,3,4) - I'd reduce the distances between these a bit, since the song is calm.
00:16:626 (2,3,4) - This is dense compared to 00:02:080 (2,3) -, which are the same sounds. So I'd replace it for the latter pattern for consistency.
00:20:717 (3) - This note can be removed; similar reason as the first suggestion.
00:30:035 (1) - To me it makes much more sense to start this on the white tick at 00:30:262 - and make it 1/2 shorter, as it focus on the same sounds as 00:28:444 (1) - .
00:31:853 (1,2) -. ^The same stuff applies. In this case, I also suggest you to merge 00:32:535 (2,3) - into a single 1/2 slider, as you did for 00:31:171 (2) - .

[Salad]

00:00:717 (2,3) - I'd reduce this distance, considering it comes after a dash that's introduced quite early in the song, so it's better to have more leniency for the movement back.
00:03:671 (1,2) - I'd reduce this distance by moving (2) two gridspaces to the left. The movement to the repeat in the second slider can feel quite tight depending on how players time the dash.
00:09:126 (3,4) - This distance is randomly larger than your previous walkable distances. I suggest moving 00:08:217 (1,2,3) - to the left as a whole, since it also covers 00:07:307 (3,1) - feeling a bit ambiguous.
00:16:171 (4,1) - This feels a bit ambiguous compared to previous distances (00:15:262 (2,3,4) - ). If you intend it to be walked, reduce the distance; if you intend it to be dashes, increase it more. Though, judging by 00:01:626 (4,1) - , it should be walked.
00:19:353 (3,4) - Again, feels a bit ambiguous since it's slightly larger than your usual walkable distance. I'd reduce the distance by making (4) more vertical.
On 00:21:853 (2,3,4) -, 00:23:444 (3,4) - and 00:24:580 (1,2) - the distance is randomly increased, so I'd reduce it.
00:25:944 (3,1) - This is a bit harsh, coming after a dash. I'd reduce the distance, either by moving (1) closer, or by making (1) go right instead. Same stuff applies on 00:33:243 (3,4) - .

[Platter]

00:00:717 (2,3,4) - I'd reduce these distances. (2,3) is tightly walkable after the dash, while (3,4) is barely walkable (it requires a really precise timing), and with little reason for it to be a dash. Both should be walkable IMO.
00:02:535 (2,3,4) - These are rather ambiguous distance. If you intend it to be dashed, make it larger. If you intend it to be walked, make it shorter.
I really don't get why 00:04:580 (2,3) - is larger than 00:05:489 (4,5) -, when 00:05:944 (5) - should be emphasized more than 00:05:035 (3) - . Reduce the distance between 00:04:580 (2,3) - .
00:05:944 (5,1) - I'd shorten this distance a bit, to make it clearer that it's walkable.
^Similar stuff with 00:08:217 (1,2) - and 00:10:035 (1,2,3) - . In case you intended 00:10:489 (2,3) - to be dashed, the distance should be larger, and only between those objects.
00:11:626 (1,2) - I'd reduce this distance a bit to add some leniency after the dash.
00:13:217 (4,5) - Don't see why this should be dashes, so I'd reduce the distance.
00:15:717 (2,3) - Again, the distance is randomly increased, so I'd reduce it to make it walkable.
00:16:626 (1,2) - This dash is really uncalled for. Make this distance walkable.
00:17:762 (3,4) - This is another distance that should be walkable, so reduce it.
00:25:944 (4,5) - Reduce this distance. All your previous distances after HDashes on similar patterns (00:22:307 (3,1) - and 00:24:126 (4,1) - ) were walkable, so this one comes by surprise.
00:27:535 (2,3) - Another distance that's randomly increased, so it should be reduced.
00:28:444 (1,2,3) - This is a bit harsh to play, since it's too dashes in a row. There's the option of making 00:28:444 (1,2) - walkable, or making 00:29:353 (2,3) - walkable, depending on what do you want to emphasize.
00:30:035 (1,2,3) - If you intended (2,3) to be dashed, you should move (2) to the left, to make the contrast between both distances clearer. If you intended the pattern to be walked, both distances should be reduced.

-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-09-19T09:40:34+00:00

[Cup]

00:06:171 (4) - Deleted (3) instead. As I fell it's a little bit useless to map. While (4) has strong sound compared with (3)
00:09:126 (3) - No change. It's intentional for variety matter.
00:20:717 (3) - As I deleted (3) on 00:06:171 - I will keep that.
00:30:035 (1) - But, the sounds starts on red tick instead. For me, I would like to map that timestamp as close as possible with the rhythm. Also I don't shorten that slider, as I would like to cover all the music on that timestamp with slider for simple movement.
00:31:853 (1,2) - Did something else.

Fixed the rest. Thanks !!

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-09-20T14:47:42+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Hello there, terribly late. From my own BN requests and the recommend us beatmaps queue.
[Platter]
00:00:717 (2,3,4) - I'd reduce these distances. (2,3) is tightly walkable after the dash, while (3,4) is barely walkable (it requires a really precise timing), and with little reason for it to be a dash. Both should be walkable IMO. Decreased (2,3) distance. And increased the distance between (3,4) so we can make a clear dash.
00:02:535 (2,3,4) - These are rather ambiguous distance. If you intend it to be dashed, make it larger. If you intend it to be walked, make it shorter. Larger
I really don't get why 00:04:580 (2,3) - is larger than 00:05:489 (4,5) -, when 00:05:944 (5) - should be emphasized more than 00:05:035 (3) - . Reduce the distance between 00:04:580 (2,3) - . Reduced distance between (2,3) and increased distance between (4,5) a bit
00:05:944 (5,1) - I'd shorten this distance a bit, to make it clearer that it's walkable. Ok
^Similar stuff with 00:08:217 (1,2) - and 00:10:035 (1,2,3) - . In case you intended 00:10:489 (2,3) - to be dashed, the distance should be larger, and only between those objects. Sure
00:11:626 (1,2) - I'd reduce this distance a bit to add some leniency after the dash. Ye
00:13:217 (4,5) - Don't see why this should be dashes, so I'd reduce the distance. Ups, Ok
00:15:717 (2,3) - Again, the distance is randomly increased, so I'd reduce it to make it walkable. Rather than reduce it. I prefer Increase it. (3) has high picth note Imo
00:16:626 (1,2) - This dash is really uncalled for. Make this distance walkable. Ye
00:17:762 (3,4) - This is another distance that should be walkable, so reduce it. It's already walkable
00:25:944 (4,5) - Reduce this distance. All your previous distances after HDashes on similar patterns (00:22:307 (3,1) - and 00:24:126 (4,1) - ) were walkable, so this one comes by surprise. Green Light!
00:27:535 (2,3) - Another distance that's randomly increased, so it should be reduced. Feel the tone difference between 00:27:080 (1,2) - and 00:27:989 (3) -
00:28:444 (1,2,3) - This is a bit harsh to play, since it's too dashes in a row. There's the option of making 00:28:444 (1,2) - walkable, or making 00:29:353 (2,3) - walkable, depending on what do you want to emphasize. Acceptable
00:30:035 (1,2,3) - If you intended (2,3) to be dashed, you should move (2) to the left, to make the contrast between both distances clearer. If you intended the pattern to be walked, both distances should be reduced. Increased the distance.

Thanks for the mods.

Piring

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-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-09-20T19:38:51+00:00

Updated

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2017-09-23T18:48:57+00:00

boop from my modding queue, dropping some quick opinions here

[Cup]

00:03:898 (5) - 00:14:580 (1) - 00:18:217 (1) - Pretty much the same/similar rhythm but the first one is different from others for some reason
1. 00:00:035 - And tbh I was wondering why there's nothing here when you mapped the rhythms I mentioned above lol
00:25:262 (2) - Should be something else, 1) Your repeat sliders are placed horizontally so this one's inconsistent with others 2) the reverse arrow is uhhh near the border of the screen which isn't recommended anyways, try not to go farther than x:496

[Salad]

00:03:671 (1,2,1,2,3) - aaa the rhythm here is unnecessarily dense compared to the rest of the diff, honestly 00:04:580 - isn't really needed to be mapped imo
00:19:353 (3,4,5) - Forcing back-and-forth movements with big spacings like these is really uncomfortable to play lol, try decreasing the spacings here a bit.

[Skycreeper's Platter]

00:04:353 (1,2,3,4) - Try this rhythm https://puu.sh/xH6nS/6bd4a9bb90.png instead? Would reflect the bell or whatever sound better.
00:06:853 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 00:21:398 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Would be nice if you can be more consistent with your dash/hyperdash usage, the same type of dash should be used on both of these parts considering the rhythm is not much different.
00:19:353 (2) - This thing is completely vertical lol which usually forces movement to stop in gameplay, you didn't do this anywhere else in the map tho so it looks pretty random.
00:29:353 (2,3) - Make this a hyperdash? Since you already did it with 00:30:717 (3,4) - 00:32:535 (2,3) then might as well do it here too since the rhythm is repeating.

aa hope this helps
good luck!

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-09-25T16:17:26+00:00

Electoz wrote:
boop from my modding queue, dropping some quick opinions here
[Skycreeper's Platter]

00:04:353 (1,2,3,4) - Try this rhythm https://puu.sh/xH6nS/6bd4a9bb90.png instead? Would reflect the bell or whatever sound better. Ok. Applied
00:06:853 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 00:21:398 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Would be nice if you can be more consistent with your dash/hyperdash usage, the same type of dash should be used on both of these parts considering the rhythm is not much different. :)) Ok
00:19:353 (2) - This thing is completely vertical lol which usually forces movement to stop in gameplay, you didn't do this anywhere else in the map tho so it looks pretty random. Lol. Ok
00:29:353 (2,3) - Make this a hyperdash? Since you already did it with 00:30:717 (3,4) - 00:32:535 (2,3) then might as well do it here too since the rhythm is repeating. Kinda odd. But ok. Seems the rythm is simillar (or even same).
aa hope this helps
good luck!

Thanks for mod

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-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-09-26T14:21:41+00:00

[Cup]

00:00:035 - That's intentional. To gives a time for player to ready. (That's normal I think for lower difficulty)
Changed 00:14:580 (1) - instead to make simple movement.

[Salad]

00:04:580 - There is a sound at there. I heard bell sounds, so it worth to map and also 00:03:671 (1,2,1,2,3) - I think it's okay to map with these timeline it's really nice to play that cover all the beats.

Fixed the rest!! and Updated.
Thanks.

@Skycreeper- : Ane rubah dikit NC nya karena banyak yg kelewatan. Mudah2-an gak keberatan 'w'

Last edited by -Hex- 2017-09-27T14:05:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

MBomb

MBomb 2017-09-27T12:23:47+00:00

I guess I'll recheck now.

[Cup]

00:11:626 (5,1,2,3) - Maybe move this part a bit more to the right, for extra emphasis on the pitch change and strong note. x:408 works well.
00:15:262 (2) - Higher distance could be nice for the start of the section and also the high pitch on the note, x:224 works great.

[Salad]

00:11:626 (1,2) - Increase to x:40 to make sure a player knows to dash this.
00:29:353 (2) - Maybe increase distancing to this too, to allow for more leniency in seeing it as a dash. x:472 and making it completely horizontal to the left feels nice.
00:31:171 (4) - Same with this one, maybe x:80 and completely horizontal to the right?

[Platter]

00:05:944 (5,1,2) - HDash to 5 could be nice there, for the strong pitch and such. Try x:128 on 5, x:360 on 1, and x:368 on 2?

Alright that's all, call me back. Starred because it's looking nearly ready to me.

-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-09-27T14:07:44+00:00

Fixed all.
Thanks again !!

Updated Skycreeper's diff.

Last edited by -Hex- 2017-09-28T04:26:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Poii

1,441 posts

Joined February 2016

Poii 2017-09-27T15:22:42+00:00

Come on boii xD

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-09-28T04:19:07+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
I guess I'll recheck now.
[Platter]

00:05:944 (5,1,2) - HDash to 5 could be nice there, for the strong pitch and such. Try x:128 on 5, x:360 on 1, and x:368 on 2?

Alright that's all, call me back. Starred because it's looking nearly ready to me.

Applied. Thanks

Thanks Mbomb. Love you <3

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MBomb

MBomb 2017-09-28T22:32:38+00:00

Looking good.

Bubbled <3

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

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ZiRoX 2017-09-29T00:53:04+00:00

Rechecking.

[Salad]

00:20:035 (4,5) - I think this dash is a bit overdone, as the sounds don't hint such strength. I'd reduce the distance a bit by moving (5)'s head a bit to the right, around x:392.
00:25:944 (3,1) - This movement is still a bit harsh after the dash IMO. Maybe you can move 00:26:398 (1,2) - around 2-3 gridspaces to the left.

[Platter]

00:01:171 (3,4) - The dash isn't fitting here; yes, the pitch on (4) is higher than the previous note, but it's not really a strong sound. It deserves a larger distance than (2,3), however, so I'd put (4) on x:152.
00:03:217 (3,1) - This distance should be walkable; the sound on (1) isn't that strong to require the dash it currently has.
00:05:944 (5,1) - Dash feels a bit large for what the sounds suggest; I'd reduce the distance a bit.
00:07:307 (2,3) - and 00:09:126 (3,4) - Try to avoid having HDashes right into the wall. The RC recommends having the 2nd object at least at x:16.
00:15:717 (3,4) - Similar stuff as mentioned for 00:01:171 (3,4) - .
00:16:626 (1,2,3) - Having two dashes of different snap is really confusing; pick one and make it walkable instead.
00:18:898 (1,2) - Try to reduce this distance to add some leniency after the HDash. I recommend moving 00:19:353 (2,3) - together to the right a bit.
00:24:580 (1,2) - Suddenly the distance between this objects is large, when for the previous patterns you've used a much smaller one. Maybe you can make (1) more vertical or moving it a bit to the right, or a combination of both.
00:27:535 (2,3) - Same issue as mentioned for 00:01:171 (3,4) - . Moving (3) to the right should also fix 00:27:989 (3,1) - being barely walkable.
00:29:580 (3,1) - I'd make this walkable, to add leniency after the HDash. For 00:31:398 (4,1) - the pattern is clearly walkable and the sounds are the same.
00:33:735 (1,2) - This should have a smaller distance, sounds aren't THAT strong.
00:33:973 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Reduce the distances between these patterns a bit, some feel really tight to walk and the song is slowing down, so dashes aren't really fitting.

-Hex-

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Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-09-29T01:16:41+00:00

[Salad]

00:20:035 (4,5) - Moved to x:392 and then changed the slider shape.

Fixed the rest ! . Thanks for the re-check.
I will update after Skycreeper reply.

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-09-29T02:10:02+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Rechecking.
[Platter]
00:01:171 (3,4) - The dash isn't fitting here; yes, the pitch on (4) is higher than the previous note, but it's not really a strong sound. It deserves a larger distance than (2,3), however, so I'd put (4) on x:152.
00:03:217 (3,1) - This distance should be walkable; the sound on (1) isn't that strong to require the dash it currently has.
00:05:944 (5,1) - Dash feels a bit large for what the sounds suggest; I'd reduce the distance a bit.
00:07:307 (2,3) - and 00:09:126 (3,4) - Try to avoid having HDashes right into the wall. The RC recommends having the 2nd object at least at x:16.
00:15:717 (3,4) - Similar stuff as mentioned for 00:01:171 (3,4) - .
00:16:626 (1,2,3) - Having two dashes of different snap is really confusing; pick one and make it walkable instead.
00:18:898 (1,2) - Try to reduce this distance to add some leniency after the HDash. I recommend moving 00:19:353 (2,3) - together to the right a bit.
00:24:580 (1,2) - Suddenly the distance between this objects is large, when for the previous patterns you've used a much smaller one. Maybe you can make (1) more vertical or moving it a bit to the right, or a combination of both.
00:27:535 (2,3) - Same issue as mentioned for 00:01:171 (3,4) - . Moving (3) to the right should also fix 00:27:989 (3,1) - being barely walkable.
00:29:580 (3,1) - I'd make this walkable, to add leniency after the HDash. For 00:31:398 (4,1) - the pattern is clearly walkable and the sounds are the same.
00:33:735 (1,2) - This should have a smaller distance, sounds aren't THAT strong.
00:33:973 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Reduce the distances between these patterns a bit, some feel really tight to walk and the song is slowing down, so dashes aren't really fitting.

Ok, applied them all. Thanks for it

Piringnya Mateng gan

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-Hex-

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Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-09-29T02:13:30+00:00

Okay. Done

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,052 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-09-30T20:32:22+00:00

Aaaand last couple of things:

[Salad]

00:20:489 (5) - I think I overdid it a bit with the suggestion, as now it is a bit ambiguous - sorry for that. I suggest putting the slider head on x:408 instead and making the slider curve a little more, like this:
SPOILER
00:25:944 (3,1) - I'd go for a little more leniency, so I'd move 00:26:398 (1,2,3,4) - to x:240.

[Platter]

00:04:807 (3,4,5) - The quick succesion of dashes might be a bit harsh, particularly with (3,4) being antiflow. I suggest you put (4) like this, instead:
SPOILER
00:05:944 (5,1) - Thinking about it a bit more, I think the dash isn't really fitting here. Also, 00:08:217 (1,2) - is a really ambiguous distance. So let's do something that fixes both: move 00:06:853 (1) - to x:272, move 00:07:307 (2,3,1) - to x:432 and make 00:08:671 (2) - horizontal by moving the slider head.
00:24:580 (1) - I'd make this even more vertical, like this:
SPOILER

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-10-01T02:54:26+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Aaaand last couple of things:
[Platter]
00:04:807 (3,4,5) - The quick succesion of dashes might be a bit harsh, particularly with (3,4) being antiflow. I suggest you put (4) like this, instead:
SPOILER
00:05:944 (5,1) - Thinking about it a bit more, I think the dash isn't really fitting here. Also, 00:08:217 (1,2) - is a really ambiguous distance. So let's do something that fixes both: move 00:06:853 (1) - to x:272, move 00:07:307 (2,3,1) - to x:432 and make 00:08:671 (2) - horizontal by moving the slider head.
00:24:580 (1) - I'd make this even more vertical, like this:
SPOILER

Thanks for check. I hope it'll be the last.

Piring Terbang

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Edit : Based on ZiroX's PM, I apply the pattern you were talking about. Thanks

Last edited by Dapulezatos 2017-10-01T15:38:09+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-10-01T03:39:22+00:00

Fixed all !!.

Updated. Thanks again ZiroX (:

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,052 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-10-01T22:19:44+00:00

Fixed one more small thing.

Rebubbled!

MBomb

MBomb 2017-10-01T23:05:29+00:00

Hello, ZiRoX wanted to rebubble due to reasons, so I'll be qualifying. Quick check through making sure I'm fine with everything and I am, so will qualify in 24 hours, due to rule being there has to be 24 hours between bubble and qualify. If there's any last minute changes you want to make, tell me to make sure I'm fine with them.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-10-02T00:28:09+00:00

small stuff before mbomb:

cup:

00:03:217 (4,5) - 3/2 gap and a standstill could definitely use at least some movement
00:07:307 (3) - only time in this section you never used a triplet for these sounds, needs to be more consistent
00:08:217 (1,2,3) - similar issue here but kinda more forgiving, you could try a timeline like this maybe
00:10:035 (1,2,3,4) - pretty cramped, 00:10:489 (2) - x:408 and 00:11:171 (4) - x:190 gives better emphasis as well
00:20:035 (2,3,1) - dangerous antiflow
00:21:853 (3) - similar case to what i bolded before
00:24:580 (1) - also same
etc etc, you tend to skip the IMPORTANT beats a lot in this diff for the sake of variety or something idk

salad:

00:07:762 - i really expected the strong sounds like this to be dashed to. a similar issue happened here which led to a dq p/6210530
00:20:489 (5) - not sure why this is a slider, it doesn't end on anything and it skips an important sound that you've been emphasizing previously on 00:20:717 -
00:22:307 - similar to the first point
00:29:580 - you were dashing to this sound before too

platter:

00:00:035 (1) - too vertical, not much movement here, a more horizontal tilt would be nice
00:03:671 (1,2) - Antiflow hyperdashes in a platter are unrankable
00:12:762 (3,4) - increased distance here would be nice

Consider the points above, the set imo could use 1 or 2 mods before being pushed again. Good luck!

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-10-02T07:30:51+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
small stuff before mbomb:
platter:

00:00:035 (1) - too vertical, not much movement here, a more horizontal tilt would be nice
00:03:671 (1,2) - Antiflow hyperdashes in a platter are unrankable
00:12:762 (3,4) - increased distance here would be nice
Consider the points above, the set imo could use 1 or 2 mods before being pushed again. Good luck!

Thanks for check

Piring

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-Hex-

363 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-10-04T11:23:10+00:00

Sorry for late reply.

[Cup]

00:07:307 (3) - I would like to keep this simple movement to keep it consistent with your timeline in 00:08:217 (1,2,3) -
00:20:035 (2,3,1) - Still easy to catch even it's antiflow.
00:21:853 (3) - Same as above.

[Salad]