Really sorry for taking so long, had no motivation for anything recently, but I'm hopefully back now!
[General]
Really not sure of the point of that last timing point? It's not in the ranked set and doesn't add anything to the song in my opinion, think it's better to just remove it.
Maybe move preview point to 00:00:035 - ? It just seems really odd to not have it snapped to that note. Not unrankable or anything, just feels and sounds slightly better to me.
[Cup]
00:00:717 (1) - I think the note where the tick is in this slider is quite prominent and is strange to be ignored under a slider to me. Maybe do a 1/1 repeat slider instead?
00:02:535 (3) - Hmm, I think a 3/2 slider would be nice here instead, to aim to follow the main rhythm of the music box in this difficulty. Maybe also move it a bit more to the left, like x:88, I feel the note is stronger than 2, and so deserves slightly more distancing.
00:04:353 (1,2,3) - Maybe move this section a bit to the left, to get 1 a bit more emphasis, and then give 2 slightly less as 1 is definitely a stronger note than 2, yet 2 has higher distance right now. Try 1 on x:64, and then 2 on x:336 and 3 on x:296.
00:10:035 (1) - Not sure about this uncomfortable type of flow here with the song. I think it'd be a lot neater to just ctrl+H and move it to x:296.
00:13:217 (3) - Maybe use a slightly lower distance to this, it's one of the highest distances in the map right now and really not that strong of a note compared to some others. Try Ctrl+G and then move it to x:288 maybe?
00:16:626 (2,3) - For consistency with the earlier timeline, maybe do a circle followed by a 3/2 slider here?
00:19:353 (3,4) - Timeline is very strange here considering previous rhythms you've followed. A timeline like this fits the rest of the map better.
00:21:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this type of timeline is a bit inconsistent with what you did earlier, try something similar to 00:06:853 (1,2,3) - , or change that to be similar to this.
00:22:762 (1) - Very inconsistent with previous timelines, and just feels kinda boring to play here, I would recommend a more interesting timeline, maybe similar to what you did earlier.
00:24:580 (2) - And again with this.
00:31:853 (3) - Also with this, it just seems very strange that the ending of the song, which should be more intense, is instead just long sliders which don't follow much.
[Salad]
00:01:171 (3) - Since it's after the first dash in the map, maybe make movement slightly easier to recover from? x:192 would be nice.
00:04:353 (2) - This type of slider doesn't really suit the song very well here, and is actually simpler than the timeline you used in the cup. Try using two 1/2 sliders, like you did in the cup, I think it fits well here. Whilst changing this, I'd also recommend starting the pattern at x:400, to ensure the player knows to dash here.
00:08:217 (1) - Distancing to this feels a little awkward as it is now. Try moving it to x:376 and then using a shape like this.
00:10:944 (3,1,2) - 1 here is definitely one of the strongest notes in the song, yet right now you have a very weak movement to it, when it definitely deserves a dash. Try Ctrl+H on 3 and moving it to x:336, and then move 1 to x:64 and 2 to x:128.
00:12:762 (3) - This really isn't a strong note at all, I don't understand why there's a dash to this. Maybe move it a bit to the left, try something like x:312.
00:14:580 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hmm, distancing to 00:14:580 (1) - is very strong here, for a note which really doesn't deserve a dash. I found a good fix, but it requires a bit of rearanging. move 00:14:580 (1) - to x:344, 2 to x:128, 3 to x:368, 4 to x:176, and then move the start of 00:16:626 (1) - to x:424.
00:18:898 (2) - Very slight reduction to x:72 would play nicer in my eyes.
00:20:489 (5) - Just about possible without dashing to a degree where I feel it could get confusing for a player. Maybe increase very slightly to x:456, avoiding it going off screen with a shape like this?
00:21:398 (1,2,3) - Hmm, I think the slider shape here plays weird with antiflow, so maybe it'd be better to just ctrl+H and move back to x:232? Feels a bit more natural with your other patterns.
00:23:671 (3) - Would be nice to have a tiny bit more distance to this, feels a bit uncomfortable with so little distance considering the sound is stronger than 2. Try x:288.
00:26:398 (1) - Current distance to this is very difficult after the dash for a salad player. Try x:280 on it instead, should be a lot more comfortable for a lower skill level player.
00:28:444 (1) - Distancing to this right now could be too strong for a non-dash for a salad player, reducing to like x:152 would be nice. Moving 2 to x:496 would be nice after that, and then maybe ctrl+G 00:30:035 (1) - and move it to x:320?
00:31:171 (3) - Try x:72 on this to ensure that a salad player knows to dash to it.
00:33:735 (4) - I would reduce this a bit to like x:240, kinda uncomfortable after the dash right now.
[Platter]
00:02:080 (5,6) - Not sure about this type of timeline here, doesn't really feel very nice to me. Maybe try timeline like this?
00:04:580 (3) - Since the first HDash in the map just happened, I think it'd be best to keep normal flow after, to get the player used to the mechanic. Try ctrl+H and moving it to x:32?
00:09:580 (4) - Current movement to this feels quite uncomfortable in my eyes, I think that a dash to the right would feel nicer to play here, and would avoid the pattern feeling too repetitive. Try x:448.
00:17:307 (6) - A bit of a strong dash, especially considering it's followed by another strong dash in the opposite direction. x:96 would feel a little more comfortable.
00:21:398 (1) - Hmm, this movement right now currently requires a weird slowdown, followed by a speedup into the slider, when the movement through the slider should be the slowdown to follow better flow. Try moving 1 to x:192 to fix this?
00:27:080 (1) - Pretty weak sound overall, don't think it's really fitting of a dash, try x:264 on this instead?
00:29:580 (4) - HDash here for consistency would be nice, try x:80?
00:31:853 (1,2) - Maybe Ctrl+H this section and move it to x:280, to make a HDash to the next note for consistency.
00:33:973 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, I don't think this slowdown section really calls for much dashes, other than to 7, which you actually don't have one in right now. I think a nice pattern would be 2 on x:184, 3 on x:464, 4 on x:200, 5 on x:496, 6 on x:408 and 7 on x:256.
Alright, done!
[General]
Really not sure of the point of that last timing point? It's not in the ranked set and doesn't add anything to the song in my opinion, think it's better to just remove it.
Maybe move preview point to 00:00:035 - ? It just seems really odd to not have it snapped to that note. Not unrankable or anything, just feels and sounds slightly better to me.
[Cup]
00:00:717 (1) - I think the note where the tick is in this slider is quite prominent and is strange to be ignored under a slider to me. Maybe do a 1/1 repeat slider instead?
00:02:535 (3) - Hmm, I think a 3/2 slider would be nice here instead, to aim to follow the main rhythm of the music box in this difficulty. Maybe also move it a bit more to the left, like x:88, I feel the note is stronger than 2, and so deserves slightly more distancing.
00:04:353 (1,2,3) - Maybe move this section a bit to the left, to get 1 a bit more emphasis, and then give 2 slightly less as 1 is definitely a stronger note than 2, yet 2 has higher distance right now. Try 1 on x:64, and then 2 on x:336 and 3 on x:296.
00:10:035 (1) - Not sure about this uncomfortable type of flow here with the song. I think it'd be a lot neater to just ctrl+H and move it to x:296.
00:13:217 (3) - Maybe use a slightly lower distance to this, it's one of the highest distances in the map right now and really not that strong of a note compared to some others. Try Ctrl+G and then move it to x:288 maybe?
00:16:626 (2,3) - For consistency with the earlier timeline, maybe do a circle followed by a 3/2 slider here?
00:19:353 (3,4) - Timeline is very strange here considering previous rhythms you've followed. A timeline like this fits the rest of the map better.
00:21:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this type of timeline is a bit inconsistent with what you did earlier, try something similar to 00:06:853 (1,2,3) - , or change that to be similar to this.
00:22:762 (1) - Very inconsistent with previous timelines, and just feels kinda boring to play here, I would recommend a more interesting timeline, maybe similar to what you did earlier.
00:24:580 (2) - And again with this.
00:31:853 (3) - Also with this, it just seems very strange that the ending of the song, which should be more intense, is instead just long sliders which don't follow much.
[Salad]
00:01:171 (3) - Since it's after the first dash in the map, maybe make movement slightly easier to recover from? x:192 would be nice.
00:04:353 (2) - This type of slider doesn't really suit the song very well here, and is actually simpler than the timeline you used in the cup. Try using two 1/2 sliders, like you did in the cup, I think it fits well here. Whilst changing this, I'd also recommend starting the pattern at x:400, to ensure the player knows to dash here.
00:08:217 (1) - Distancing to this feels a little awkward as it is now. Try moving it to x:376 and then using a shape like this.
00:10:944 (3,1,2) - 1 here is definitely one of the strongest notes in the song, yet right now you have a very weak movement to it, when it definitely deserves a dash. Try Ctrl+H on 3 and moving it to x:336, and then move 1 to x:64 and 2 to x:128.
00:12:762 (3) - This really isn't a strong note at all, I don't understand why there's a dash to this. Maybe move it a bit to the left, try something like x:312.
00:14:580 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hmm, distancing to 00:14:580 (1) - is very strong here, for a note which really doesn't deserve a dash. I found a good fix, but it requires a bit of rearanging. move 00:14:580 (1) - to x:344, 2 to x:128, 3 to x:368, 4 to x:176, and then move the start of 00:16:626 (1) - to x:424.
00:18:898 (2) - Very slight reduction to x:72 would play nicer in my eyes.
00:20:489 (5) - Just about possible without dashing to a degree where I feel it could get confusing for a player. Maybe increase very slightly to x:456, avoiding it going off screen with a shape like this?
00:21:398 (1,2,3) - Hmm, I think the slider shape here plays weird with antiflow, so maybe it'd be better to just ctrl+H and move back to x:232? Feels a bit more natural with your other patterns.
00:23:671 (3) - Would be nice to have a tiny bit more distance to this, feels a bit uncomfortable with so little distance considering the sound is stronger than 2. Try x:288.
00:26:398 (1) - Current distance to this is very difficult after the dash for a salad player. Try x:280 on it instead, should be a lot more comfortable for a lower skill level player.
00:28:444 (1) - Distancing to this right now could be too strong for a non-dash for a salad player, reducing to like x:152 would be nice. Moving 2 to x:496 would be nice after that, and then maybe ctrl+G 00:30:035 (1) - and move it to x:320?
00:31:171 (3) - Try x:72 on this to ensure that a salad player knows to dash to it.
00:33:735 (4) - I would reduce this a bit to like x:240, kinda uncomfortable after the dash right now.
[Platter]
00:02:080 (5,6) - Not sure about this type of timeline here, doesn't really feel very nice to me. Maybe try timeline like this?
00:04:580 (3) - Since the first HDash in the map just happened, I think it'd be best to keep normal flow after, to get the player used to the mechanic. Try ctrl+H and moving it to x:32?
00:09:580 (4) - Current movement to this feels quite uncomfortable in my eyes, I think that a dash to the right would feel nicer to play here, and would avoid the pattern feeling too repetitive. Try x:448.
00:17:307 (6) - A bit of a strong dash, especially considering it's followed by another strong dash in the opposite direction. x:96 would feel a little more comfortable.
00:21:398 (1) - Hmm, this movement right now currently requires a weird slowdown, followed by a speedup into the slider, when the movement through the slider should be the slowdown to follow better flow. Try moving 1 to x:192 to fix this?
00:27:080 (1) - Pretty weak sound overall, don't think it's really fitting of a dash, try x:264 on this instead?
00:29:580 (4) - HDash here for consistency would be nice, try x:80?
00:31:853 (1,2) - Maybe Ctrl+H this section and move it to x:280, to make a HDash to the next note for consistency.
00:33:973 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, I don't think this slowdown section really calls for much dashes, other than to 7, which you actually don't have one in right now. I think a nice pattern would be 2 on x:184, 3 on x:464, 4 on x:200, 5 on x:496, 6 on x:408 and 7 on x:256.
Alright, done!
