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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 04 October 2017 at 18:25:56

Artist: R3 Music Box
Title: Zen Zen Zense
Source: 君の名は。
Tags: kimi no na wa ha radwimps your name cover skycreeper
BPM: 132
Filesize: 2978kb
Play Time: 00:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cup (1,22 stars, 59 notes)
  2. Salad (1,71 stars, 71 notes)
  3. Skycreeper's Platter (2,03 stars, 71 notes)


Download: R3 Music Box - Zen Zen Zense
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Cup by Me
Salad by Me
Platter by Skycreeper-
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Platter by Skycreeper :D

 
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posted

Skycreeper- wrote:

Platter by Skycreeper :D

 
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TitleUnicode:å‰Âå‰Âå‰Â世
Artist:R3 Music Box
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Creator:-Hex-
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Thank you .

Ready for Mods !!
posted
Good luck :3
posted
Kak -Hex- Good Luck~~
kalau mau buat hybrid map yg ada stdnya,bilang ke saya ya :'u
posted

MisakiAN wrote:

Kak -Hex- Good Luck~~
kalau mau buat hybrid map yg ada stdnya,bilang ke saya ya :'u
Thanks .
Nanti deh ane pikirkan kalau mau buat hybrid ok_hand:

SYAHME wrote:

Good luck :3
Thank you.
posted
thx for copying my description
posted
Thanks.
posted
salad
00:09:126 -00:09:807 - 00:10:717 - hmm maybe add a circle in these sections since I think note density should be ok if you add the cirkols
00:35:718 (3) - hmm consider putting the hs volume for this slider to 25%
Its pretty clean tbh xd
Platter
00:15:035 (2) - hmmm kinda think you should space this out a bit more since its one of the most important sounds in the music
00:15:717 (4) - kinda think this slider shape can give better flow over here

00:35:718 (4,6) - ctrl g for antiflow (if you want to xd)

Sorry for the short mod wew
gl
posted

JeirYagtama wrote:

salad
00:09:126 -00:09:807 - 00:10:717 - hmm maybe add a circle in these sections since I think note density should be ok if you add the cirkols = Great
00:35:718 (3) - hmm consider putting the hs volume for this slider to 25% = Reduced
Its pretty clean tbh xd xD

Sorry for the short mod wew
gl
Thanks for the mods !
posted
mas hex buat diff cup ada sedikit yang off
udah saya benerin pake ama dengerin dulu siapa tahu pas ;)

[url][https://www.solidfiles.com/v/NGrKM7dAXX5p6]

diff cup
posted

JeirYagtama wrote:

Platter
00:15:035 (2) - hmmm kinda think you should space this out a bit more since its one of the most important sounds in the music Moved :D
00:15:717 (4) - kinda think this slider shape can give better flow over here Changed.

00:35:718 (4,6) - ctrl g for antiflow (if you want to xd) As You Wish ;)

Sorry for the short mod wew
gl
Thanks for the Mod. Much appreciated


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TitleUnicode:前前前世
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posted
Updated !

Updated notes to the correct timing snap with Ikhlasul Akbar.
posted
NM from queue
Skycreeper's Platter

  1. 00:00:035 (1,2) - This is an unrankable issue because the hyperdash leads into an anti-flow pattern. Platters are meant to be introductionary to hyperdashes so I'd highly suggest you CTRL+G 00:00:717 (2) - so that the pattern following the hyperdash isn't so tricky for players at this level. The same issue occurs at 00:01:626 (4,1,2) - , 00:05:944 (1,2,3) - , 00:07:762 (1,2,3) - and 00:31:853 (1,2,3) - .

  2. 00:08:444 (2,3,4,5,6) - I can see the intention here. But, it cannot be fc'd without having to dash at least twice. I suggest reducing the spacing slightly (and playtest it) to ensure that it doesn't require any dashing so that the player can play this pattern at ease.

  3. 00:20:717 (6,1) - I don't see the reason to increase the spacing here. It's not that strong of a beat. So how about using the same spacing that you used at 00:22:762 (1,2,3,4) - for consistency.

  4. 00:27:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - There's nothing that stands out in the music here. So change sampleset back to normal-1

    Spacing seems a bit overdone. Also a bit inconsistent. 00:22:762 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:24:126 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - for example. It's not that noticable visually, but during gameplay it's going to feel pretty awkward playing, being of the same intensity musically wise. Just something to think about in future maps.
Salad

  1. 00:00:035 (1,2) - Can be fc'd without dashing. If your intention was to space it out for emphasize, it needs a very slight increase. Same thing happens at 00:05:489 (1,2) - , 00:14:580 (1,2) -

  2. 00:02:762 (3,4) - This is a very odd note to add a dash on because the beat isn't really that intense since the melody is going down a pitch. How about decreasing the spacing to clear up this confusion? Same thing at 00:11:626 (1,2,3) - ?

  3. 00:06:853 (1,2,3) - This looks a bit awkward visually. How about moving 00:07:080 (2) - to x:40 to create this cool aestetic? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361419

    Spacing is pretty weird in this difficulty because everything from 00:14:580 - and forward can be fc'd without dashing which may be confusing for players on this level as they won't be so sure about which beats you're supposed to dash on or not.
  • Cup

  1. 00:21:398 (2,3,4) - Looks a bit awkward aestetically. Simular to what I mentioned in the salad, you can convert 00:21:853 (4) - into notes and place them like this for a cool pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361505

  2. 00:35:718 (3,1) - In cups at this bpm you need 1/2 beats between the start of the spinner and the end of the last section. So you're gonna have to start spinner at 00:36:752 - .
posted
Thanks for the Mods DavidEd. All applied, that was really helpful.

Increased the distance on some parts to avoid confusion.
posted
 
Thanks for the Mod, DavidEd. All mods were applied successfully


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Silahkan di nazi Mas xd
posted
Updated.
Need more mods.
posted
here I am, wew, didn't think I could do req from my queue that fast :thinking:
[Salad]
  1. 00:16:626 (1,2) - Pretty ambiguous spacing. Reduce it or increase, but I think you didn't mean to place a dash here, so I think it's better to reduce the distance a little bit
  2. 00:19:353 (3,4,5) - Imo the distance doesn't deserve such high spacing. there's no high pitches, so I suggest to move (4) somewhere to ~x216
  3. 00:23:444 (2,3) - I am suggesting to be consistent with 00:21:398 (1,2,3) - and so I think it's good to move (2) right and CTRL H (3) and move it to left. Here is the pic for you for better understanding what I mean
  4. 00:25:262 (2,3) - Imo there's no high pitch sounds so this dash is necessary


[Skycreeper's Platter]
  1. 00:07:762 (1) - This curve suck to be honest, so just make simple curve for better catching this after hdashing to it. Here is the example for what I mean
  2. 00:27:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - AAA WHAT ARE THESE HITSOUNDS FOR??? Also it's blatant overmapping, suggesting removing (2) and (4)

if that's your first map then I'm impressed. good luck with ranking!
posted
I will reply to Myle's mod within 1 or 2 days.

Happy Eid Mubarak guys.
posted

Myle wrote:

here I am, wew, didn't think I could do req from my queue that fast :thinking:

[Skycreeper's Platter]
  1. 00:07:762 (1) - This curve suck to be honest, so just make simple curve for better catching this after hdashing to it. Here is the example for what I mean Changed with the simple curve you were talking about
  2. 00:27:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - AAA WHAT ARE THESE HITSOUNDS FOR??? Also it's blatant overmapping, suggesting removing (2) and (4) Removed hitsounds. Removed circle number (2) and (4)

if that's your first map then I'm impressed. good luck with ranking!
Thanks for mod :D

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416,344,19580,2,0,B|497:344|513:344|405:344,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,20489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,20717,2,0,B|416:96|312:176|448:176|480:232,1,210,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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32,192,22307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,23671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,240,25035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,56,25717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,192,28898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,296,32762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,88,32989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,33243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,33735,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,33973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,312,34528,2,0,B|88:264|144:280|184:312|208:240,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,35718,1,4,0:2:0:0:
256,192,35878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,36038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36395,12,0,37466,0:0:0:0:
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