from my Q
Original song is better than this
- 00:22:110 (1,2) - Make same beat as 00:33:145 (1,2,3) - . that will express 00:23:145 - this tone changing and 00:23:835 - vocal
- 00:49:610 (10) - Overmapping, here is no sound to put circle
- 00:52:369 (10) - ^
- 00:54:438 (6) - ^
- 00:59:955 (6) - ^
- 01:03:404 (10) - ^, All of like these part... there is no sound like 01:11:679 - here.
- 01:29:093 - put circle, like 01:26:076 (2,3,4,5,6) - here.
- I think 01:25:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part have to be same as 01:28:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here. of course 01:26:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here and 01:29:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here too. because these parts has same sound.
- 01:37:455 (2,3) - Why you stack? In 01:38:835 (2,1) - here, you didn't
- 01:39:955 (4) - Overmapping, here is no sound to put circle
- 01:42:714 (3) - ^
- 01:50:990 (3) - ^
- 02:02:024 (3) - Hmm, Actually its not overmapping but this sound is too weak than 02:02:110 (4,5,6) - these sounds. For express 02:02:110 (4) - this sound, delete it. Like 02:07:628 (3,4,5) - here you did
- 02:04:783 (3) - ^
- 02:10:300 (4) - ^
- 02:13:059 (3) - ^, All of like this circle.
- 02:53:145 (7,8) - I don't understand why you stack here. the sounds tension is going up but your stack can't express it. move it to 464 84?
- 02:54:438 (4) - Overmapping. here is no sound to put circle
- 02:57:197 (3) - ^
- 03:05:473 (4) - ^
- 03:08:231 (3) - ^
- 03:13:145 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Delete it. like 01:58:662 - here you did. Of course I know there are guitar sounds but I got goose bumps in this blank
- 03:26:938 (2) - NC. new sound starts at here.
- 03:27:283 (5) - NC
- 03:33:145 (2) - NC. new sound
- 03:33:490 (6) - NC
- 03:34:179 (5) - NC
- 03:35:559 (5) - NC
- 03:38:317 (5) - NC
- 03:39:697 (5) - NC
- 03:41:076 (5) - NC
- 03:44:179 (2,6) - NC
- 03:45:214 (5) - NC
- 03:47:283 (5) - NC. wtf your nc cycle is inconsistent. plz unify all NC in 4 bit or 8 bit
- 04:58:576 (4) - Overmapping. here is no sound to put circle
- 05:01:335 (3) - ^
- 05:09:610 (4) - ^
- 05:12:369 (3) - ^
- 05:24:524 (1,1) - Del NC?
- 05:26:248 (2) - NC. new sound starts at here.