I will only mod Linces Deceived, because I dont understand taiko.
01:36:593 (1,2) - I wouldnt place both of them on the same place. In earlier patterns, you used perfect overlaps of 2 circles when the sound was the same, here its not.
01:37:455 (2,3) - i would recommend you to switch those 2 and readjust them, because you dont have a sound on the beginning of the slider
01:37:973 (1,2) - same as 01:36:593 (1,2) -
01:39:352 (1) - to symphasize with the HARD AND LOUD sound ( e.g. beginning of the kiai ), you could ctrl+g
01:46:766 (3,4,5) - there is no sound to 4, you could make this another slider as an example ( just replace the triple by a slider )
01:52:283 (4,5,6) - no sound on 5
01:58:317 (8) - if you wanna emphasize the text by not placing anything, i would recommend you placing a circle on the next white tick ( when he starts talking )
02:08:835 (4,5) - copy paste 4 instead of making 2 different sliderbodies
02:45:559 (1,1,1,1) - either place them further away or stack them
02:53:145 (7,8) - i understand using this stack here, but it doesnt flow too well because the sound is one of the loudest in the map so i would emphasize it with a movement
02:55:731 (3,4,5) - no sound on 4
02:57:800 (8) - place this under 02:58:835 (2) -
03:19:697 (5,6) - i would place them as 03:19:352 (3,4) - because you paste the direction of patterns in this part always in 2
03:35:559 (5) - NC
03:35:473 (4,5) - same sound as 03:33:748 (9,1) - , 03:32:024 (4,1) - and some other, so maybe make this a sharper shape?
03:45:904 (1,2) - i would change these to 1/4th bursts, you have inconsistency in your patterning if you let these slider stay ( you map them as in the next pattern, even tho its a build up to the one before, where you only used streams and repetetive slider )
03:49:697 (1,2) - letting the 2nd slider on the same place begin doesnt flow good, ctrl+g 2nd slider
03:50:042 (3,4) - ^ but then, you have a bad transition to the next slider, so i would recommend turning it by 90°
04:13:490 (2,3) - ctrl + g since you have the same sound on 1 and 2 ( and it flows better to 3 )
04:16:248 (2,3) - ^
04:19:179 (4) - no sound on this
04:21:248 (2) - ^
04:24:869 (1,2,3,4) - the first time you use red sliderpoints for 1/2 slider, so i would use them
04:28:662 (4) - ctrl+g because that movement change is too drastic in such a, for the song, rather calm part
04:30:042 (4) - ^
04:39:007 (2) - here, e.g., ^this is ok, because you have a strong sound that emphasizes this movement to the slider =)
04:39:352 (4,5) - again red sliderticks :p i would stay with only 1/1 slider or longer slider having red ticks in your map for the consistency.
04:40:386 (2,3,4,5,6) - i wouldnt make this burst so long, because youre still in a build up, delete 5 and make 6 a jumpie jump.
04:43:145 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
04:49:007 (3,4,5) - doenst fit into this ( and the previous pattern ) in its style, i wouldnt recommend using a triple in such a singletap heavy pattern
04:50:386 (9) - NC
04:51:766 (9) - NC
05:17:283 (1) - maybe ctrl+g(?)
05:24:179 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this plays weird
05:31:766 (1,2) - same as 03:49:697 (1,2) -
05:32:110 (3,4) - same as 03:50:042 (3,4) -
05:40:731 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make these 1/8th repetetive slider aswell
06:10:386 (3) - dont louden up the end of this. use 5% or silent hitsound here and begin the 70% sound at the next circle, same for 06:21:421 (2) -
06:17:628 (1) - dont use a red slidertick slider here since you dont use them in this part at all, or use this shape 06:22:800 (2) - to make it consistent
Another big point: You made sure about aestethics a lot. Ive seen it, the map looks unbelievably good
it flows good aswell, but please, dont copy paste this much.. especially seen in the kiais. ( I havent said anything about 2nd lask kiai triples because theyre the same as before ) Sometimes you made efforts about not copypasting, those flow good aswell, but dont fit your aestethics. Should be enough for rank tho! =)
Also, fuck OD8, thats too easy, make it od9. ( or something between 8 and 9 ) Your map is fairly hard in aim parts, why not make it appreciated by the OD aswell?