mod for jon's diff
00:11:361 (2,3) - I dunno about you, but these 3/1 gaps sound fairly awkward rhythm wise, and I noticed that you were trying to follow the notes in the music for 00:11:361 (2) - and 00:12:313 (3,4,5) - but it ends up not working too well because of the "note" at 00:14:218 (6) - which actually falls on the red tick (00:14:059 - ) just before (and also 00:11:361 (2) - SHOULD be at 00:11:519 - instead but that doesn't work very well either rhythm wise, so I don't think mapping to these sounds for a kantan is possible.) I would suggest an much simpler rhythm like so: https://puu.sh/vJ5B1/46197caa1f.png because I don't think the current rhythm is very intuitive for beginner players. (Please apply this rhythm in all later examples of the song.)
00:18:662 - I'm a little confused as to why there is a large cluster of 1/1 notes here, which is fine, but nothing on at 00:19:932 - which desperately needs a note?
00:39:297 - You could probably put a note here to make this section feel less empty.
Apply on all later repeats in the song, obviously.
00:11:361 (2,3) - I dunno about you, but these 3/1 gaps sound fairly awkward rhythm wise, and I noticed that you were trying to follow the notes in the music for 00:11:361 (2) - and 00:12:313 (3,4,5) - but it ends up not working too well because of the "note" at 00:14:218 (6) - which actually falls on the red tick (00:14:059 - ) just before (and also 00:11:361 (2) - SHOULD be at 00:11:519 - instead but that doesn't work very well either rhythm wise, so I don't think mapping to these sounds for a kantan is possible.) I would suggest an much simpler rhythm like so: https://puu.sh/vJ5B1/46197caa1f.png because I don't think the current rhythm is very intuitive for beginner players. (Please apply this rhythm in all later examples of the song.)
00:18:662 - I'm a little confused as to why there is a large cluster of 1/1 notes here, which is fine, but nothing on at 00:19:932 - which desperately needs a note?
00:39:297 - You could probably put a note here to make this section feel less empty.
Apply on all later repeats in the song, obviously.