CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!

Normal, Hard, EroSensei

Normal (Check)

It looks how it should, pretty good, couldnt see anything here thank you

Hard (Mod)

00:53:808 (53808|1,53899|2,53990|3,54081|1,54172|2,54263|3) - Reverse these for pitch (fix notes below)

01:04:172 (64172|0,64536|1,64536|3,64717|2,64899|0,65081|1,65263|0,65263|2,65445|1,65626|2,65808|3) - personally i dont agree with lns but thats my opinion (cuz im bad)

EroSensei (Mod)

00:13:081 - note here

00:13:263 (13263|0,13263|3) - delete one to make room for the note you just added

00:38:172 - you could add a note here (delete one above to make room)

00:41:445 (41445|2,41808|2,42172|2,42536|2,42899|2,43263|2,43626|2,43990|1,44354|1,44717|1,45081|1,45445|1,45808|1,46172|1,47263|0,47626|0,47990|0,48354|0,48717|0) - this whole section feels super repetitive and boring imo, switch up the lns so its not almost the same everytime

00:54:536 - this section feels great and 01:05:990 - when its almost the same you went full ln. Im not going to mod about the lns as im shit at them and my judgement could be clouded cause im shit, but the lns were unexpected and feels out of place, make the first part a bit more ln heavy to make it transition better. (hopefully that made sense)

01:26:354 (86354|1,86354|2,86899|1,87081|2) - the gaps in the lns make little to no sense imo.

01:28:263 (88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - what are thoooose, make the lns go up there and have them fade out

Nice map, goodluck getting it ranked!

Amiichii wrote:

ET

15:19 [Harlequin]: ka ami boleh minta mod? owo
15:19 Amiichii: dare?
15:19 Amiichii: wkwk
15:20 Amiichii: mod apaan?
15:20 Amiichii: saia noob
15:20 Amiichii: TwT
15:20 [Harlequin]: rahasia :"
15:20 [Harlequin]: kamu ET ;w;
15:20 [Harlequin]: mod map kuh dong
15:21 Amiichii: ET darimana TwT
15:21 Amiichii: map sendiri aja ga bisa maenin
15:21 Amiichii: wkwk
15:22 [Harlequin]: ET mapping nya :v
15:22 *[Harlequin] is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299481 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX-]
15:22 [Harlequin]: ka amii juga nge map kan ya ;w;
15:23 Amiichii: anata
15:23 Amiichii: dare?
15:23 Amiichii: :'v
15:23 Amiichii: thanks for pic
15:23 Amiichii: xD
15:24 *Amiichii is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299481 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [EroSensei]] <osu!mania> |4K|
15:24 [Harlequin]: mainkan xD
15:25 Amiichii: hm
15:25 Amiichii: skill ilang
15:25 [Harlequin]: ET ET
15:25 Amiichii: ga bisa feeling play lg
15:25 Amiichii: TwT
15:25 Amiichii: wkwk
15:26 Amiichii: awalannya kok kyak mapku yak?
15:26 Amiichii: :'v
15:26 Amiichii: sblm reff
15:26 Amiichii: wkwk
15:26 [Harlequin]: masa :v?
15:26 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299481 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [EroSensei]]
15:26 [Harlequin]: ya 4k sih patternnya sempit2
15:27 Amiichii: 00:13:990 - addnote
15:27 Amiichii: kosistensi harusnya triple
15:27 Amiichii: 00:14:990 -  ga di add?
15:27 Amiichii: 00:16:899 - triple 
15:27 Amiichii: same as above
15:28 Amiichii: 00:17:626 - triple
15:28 Amiichii: 00:19:808 - triple
15:28 Amiichii: dst
15:28 Amiichii: konsistenis sama 00:18:354 (18354|0,18354|1,18354|3,19081|2,19081|3,19081|0) -  lho
15:29 [Harlequin]: yg triple2 itu dah di add pwp
15:29 Amiichii: 00:27:263 (27263|0,27626|0,27990|1) - 
15:29 Amiichii: HS ilang
15:29 Amiichii: wkwk
15:30 Amiichii: HS sel_l
15:30 [Harlequin]: oh iya :'v
15:30 Amiichii: wkwk
15:30 Amiichii: dst
15:30 Amiichii: cek sendiri
15:30 Amiichii: :p
15:30 Amiichii: wkwk
15:30 Amiichii: bnyk tuh :'v
15:31 [Harlequin]: iya ini lagi di tambah :'
15:32 Amiichii: 00:40:899 (40899|0) - ke 3
15:32 Amiichii: 00:41:020 (41020|3) - ke 2
15:32 Amiichii: 00:41:142 (41142|2) - ke 2
15:32 Amiichii: 00:41:263 (41263|1) - ke 3
15:33 Amiichii: 00:41:445 (41445|2,41626|3,41626|1,41626|0,41808|2,41990|0,41990|1,42172|2,42354|0,42354|1,42354|3,42536|2,42717|0,42717|3,42899|2,43081|0,43081|1,43081|3,43263|2,43445|0,43445|3,43626|2,43808|0,43808|3,43990|1,44172|0,44172|2,44354|1,44536|2,44536|3,44536|0,44717|1,44899|3,44899|2,45081|1,45263|3,45263|2,45263|0,45445|1,45626|3,45626|0,45808|1,45990|0,45990|3,45990|2,46172|1,46354|3,46354|0) - ctrl+H
15:33 Amiichii: wkwk
15:33 [Harlequin]: oke dah wkwkw
15:34 Amiichii: 01:02:717 - add 1/2s
15:34 Amiichii: vocal
15:35 [Harlequin]: itu ga di add biar ada penekanan dikit buat vocal owo
15:35 Amiichii: 01:21:808 - hithat menghilang
15:35 Amiichii: lah
15:35 Amiichii: kan yg penting ada vocal bunyi
15:35 Amiichii: wkwk
15:35 Amiichii: yawes serah lu
15:35 Amiichii: wkwk
15:35 Amiichii: dah
15:35 Amiichii: kw2kw
15:36 Amiichii: 00:17:081 (17081|2,17445|2) - beda pitch
15:36 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1301459 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Hard]]
15:36 [Harlequin]: bentar mas :'v
15:36 Amiichii: 00:16:717 (16717|3) - ini lebih tinggi dari 00:16:354 (16354|3) - 
15:37 Amiichii: 00:17:445 (17445|2) - ini 1/2s 00:14:536 (14536|3) - ini 1/1s
15:37 Amiichii: hayoo mau yang mana?
15:37 Amiichii: kosisten dungs
15:37 Amiichii: wkwk
15:38 Amiichii: 00:46:354 (46354|0,46536|1,46899|0) - hand balance
15:39 [Harlequin]: re-arrange
15:39 Amiichii: 01:21:808 - hithat menghilang
15:39 Amiichii: wkwk
15:39 Amiichii: 01:26:899 - dariawal reff ikut vocal kok disini ga dimap?
15:39 Amiichii: uwu
15:39 Amiichii: dah
15:39 Amiichii: njir
15:39 Amiichii: bgnya
15:39 Amiichii: wkwk
15:40 [Harlequin]: binggung patternnya kek gimana harusnya yg terakhir wkkw
15:42 Amiichii: wkwk
15:42 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1302507 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Normal]]
15:42 Amiichii: 00:23:808 - ~00:28:172 -  cuman 1/1s
15:42 Amiichii: 00:28:172 - ~ 00:29:626 - kok malah 1/2s?
15:42 Amiichii: kaget jadinya
15:42 Amiichii: ga konsisten sih
15:42 Amiichii: wkwk
15:43 [Harlequin]: masukin suara saxo aja disitu sih bosen juga 1/2 nge beat drum =w=
15:43 Amiichii: wkwk
15:43 Amiichii: kalo aku konsistensi doang ceknya ini sih
15:43 Amiichii: wkwk
15:44 Amiichii: 01:15:990 (75990|2) - delete
15:44 Amiichii: ga ada 1/2s dari tadi
15:44 Amiichii: wkwk
15:44 Amiichii: klo pengen vocal. ni harusnya jg di map 01:17:445 - 
15:44 Amiichii: 01:21:445 (81445|3) - wut is this?
15:45 [Harlequin]: wkwkw nyelip :'v
15:45 Amiichii: 01:21:808 - disini kali?
15:45 Amiichii: wkwk
15:45 Amiichii: dah
15:45 Amiichii: wkwk
15:45 Amiichii: goodluck
15:45 Amiichii: 'w')b
15:45 Amiichii: then
15:45 Amiichii: who are you?
15:45 Amiichii: :'v
15:45 [Harlequin]: post dulu please xD
15:46 [Harlequin]: mau hapus hitsound =w=
15:46 Amiichii: wani piro?
15:46 Amiichii: wkwk

1. 00:13:626 - 00:17:263 - 00:20:172 - Make them double because of consistency of double notes on the white lines
2. 00:38:172 - add a note
3. 00:53:263 (53263|1,53263|2) - seem unnecessary
4. 01:02:717 (62717|2) - maybe replace this with a LN ended at 01:02:899 - since u always use LN for voice sounds
5. 01:17:263 (77263|0,77354|1,77445|3,77536|2) - instead of catching such ambivalent notes, u can put two LNs to represent the voice

1. 00:37:990 (37990|2) - make this LN end at 00:38:172 - and this 00:38:354 (38354|3) - starts at 00:38:172 -
2. 00:41:445 (41445|1,41808|1,42172|1,42536|1,42899|1,43263|1,43626|1) - 00:43:990 (43990|2,44354|2,44717|2,45081|2,45445|2,45808|2,46172|2,46536|2) - 00:47:263 (47263|0,47626|0,47990|0,48354|0,48717|0) - suggest variation to more column
3. 00:53:263 (53263|1,53263|2) - same in Hard
4. 00:54:717 - 00:55:081 - and etc you use triple, but here, in between them 00:56:172 - 00:56:536 - you use double. However, the drum pattern is regular, so I think u should figure out one regular pattern for such and apply to that part around
5. 01:02:717 - same in Hard
6. 01:27:717 (87717|1,87717|0,87717|2,87717|3,88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - four LNs are enough ends, delete those single notes

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, NM requested throught online PM (Check out the mod i did for ur another map today XD)

Since I have been treating this song for the last whole month, I will go further mod the two top diffs.

[Hard]

1. 00:13:626 - 00:17:263 - 00:20:172 - Make them double because of consistency of double notes on the white lines yes but actually this is only for kick, so i just add 1 note for kick in the end of LN
2. 00:38:172 - add a note kinda strange but i will think it again
3. 00:53:263 (53263|1,53263|2) - seem unnecessary this is for hand balance for 00:53:081 (53081|0,53081|3) -
4. 01:02:717 (62717|2) - maybe replace this with a LN ended at 01:02:899 - since u always use LN for voice sounds yes but this is for snare
5. 01:17:263 (77263|0,77354|1,77445|3,77536|2) - instead of catching such ambivalent notes, u can put two LNs to represent the voice maybe not , there focus strong on drum

[EroSensei]

1. 00:37:990 (37990|2) - make this LN end at 00:38:172 - and this 00:38:354 (38354|3) - starts at 00:38:172 - actually there LN for bass
2. 00:41:445 (41445|1,41808|1,42172|1,42536|1,42899|1,43263|1,43626|1) - 00:43:990 (43990|2,44354|2,44717|2,45081|2,45445|2,45808|2,46172|2,46536|2) - 00:47:263 (47263|0,47626|0,47990|0,48354|0,48717|0) - suggest variation to more column yes but this is for PR[/color]
3. 00:53:263 (53263|1,53263|2) - same in Hard
4. 00:54:717 - 00:55:081 - and etc you use triple, but here, in between them 00:56:172 - 00:56:536 - you use double. However, the drum pattern is regular, so I think u should figure out one regular pattern for such and apply to that part around yes i only use 2 notes because the LN is nopt continue
5. 01:02:717 - same in Hard
6. 01:27:717 (87717|1,87717|0,87717|2,87717|3,88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - four LNs are enough ends, delete those single notesyeah but no for empahasize these LN

Good Luck. Overall Nice pattern and some good ideas. Hope my mods help

Dellvangel wrote:

IRC mod

14:49 [Harlequin]: halo dell, boleh req mod kah kalo lagi ga sibuk ?
14:49 Dellvangel: irc aja langsung sini
14:49 Dellvangel: np mapnya
14:50 [Harlequin]: yeay xD
14:50 *[Harlequin] is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1301459 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX-]
14:50 [Harlequin]: tadinya mau minta mod buat di diff easy tapi kalo mau irc ayok deh xD
14:51 *Dellvangel is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299481 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [EroSensei]]
14:51 *[Harlequin] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299481 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [EroSensei]]
14:52 Dellvangel: pantes kok pas dl sizenya gede, semua bg convert ke jpg aja
14:52 [Harlequin]: wkwk oh iya belum di convert maish png yaa
14:53 [Harlequin]: ntar wa convert wkwk
14:54 Dellvangel: ke col 4, balance sama 00:00:536 (536|0,536|1,717|0,717|1) - san 00:02:717 (2717|1) - 
14:54 Dellvangel: *dan
14:56 Dellvangel: 00:09:445 (9445|1) - ke col 3, buat variasi biar beda sama 00:06:354 (6354|0,6354|1,6536|1,6536|0,6536|3) - 
14:56 Dellvangel: test test
14:56 Dellvangel: ga ada reply?
14:57 [Harlequin]: okeee okeeee
14:57 [Harlequin]: ane sambil berpikir juga wjkwkw xD
14:57 [Harlequin]: maafkan slow respon ;w;
14:57 Dellvangel: ok
14:58 Dellvangel: 00:27:081 (27081|3,27263|0) - balik kolomnya, lebih rapi dan balance
14:59 [Harlequin]: okee applied
14:59 [Harlequin]: btw nanti boleh minta saran di diff easy nya?
14:59 Dellvangel: diff gd? rip
14:59 Dellvangel: males mod di forum
14:59 [Harlequin]: iya nih ;w;
15:00 [Harlequin]: aga gimana gitu kebingungan gw =w=
15:01 [Harlequin]: wkwkw gpp kok kalo ga bisa xD
15:01 Dellvangel: 00:32:172 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8307833 gini aja
15:01 Dellvangel: emang diff easynya kenapa?
15:01 [Harlequin]: gimana ya susah ngejelasinya =w=
15:02 Dellvangel: 00:38:172 - add, konsistensi sama 00:36:717 - 
15:02 Dellvangel: lol
15:02 [Harlequin]: btw yg itu applied
15:02 [Harlequin]: add di col 2 kah?
15:03 Dellvangel: ya
15:03 [Harlequin]: okiii
15:04 Dellvangel: 00:52:354 (52354|3) - ke col 2 buat hand balance, lebih gampang dimain juga
15:04 [Harlequin]: boleh2
15:06 Dellvangel: 01:04:536 (64536|0,64536|1) - tukar col nya, emphasis low pitch vocal
15:06 Dellvangel: sama hand balance
15:06 [Harlequin]: oke niceeee
15:07 Dellvangel: 01:05:990 - lmao, mulai dari sini rip ln nya
15:07 Dellvangel: star 3+ pattern gini
15:07 [Harlequin]: wkwkwk abis awalnya bukan kek gini rip kaka gw =w=
15:08 Dellvangel: lmao, rip
15:08 Dellvangel: terpaku ke vocal banget
15:08 Dellvangel: masih ada instru lain yg bisa diikutin
15:08 Dellvangel: gitar tuh contohya
15:09 [Harlequin]: iya sih cuman ane ga begitu kedengeran karena headset yg terbatas ;w;
15:09 *Dellvangel cuma pake headset harga 25k beli di konter ecek2
15:09 [Harlequin]: akwoawk sama xD
15:09 Dellvangel: itu tiap red line ada suara gitar 1/2 beat kok, kedengeran
15:10 Dellvangel: 01:06:172 - 01:06:536 - dll
15:10 Dellvangel: daripada gitu ngeshield sadis astaga
15:10 [Harlequin]: iya juga sih tapi pengen kaya gini dulu deh ;w;
15:11 Dellvangel: ok
15:12 Dellvangel: 01:16:990 (76990|2,77081|1,77172|0,77263|2,77263|3,77354|1,77445|0,77445|3,77536|2) - rip flow
15:12 [Harlequin]: x;D
15:12 Dellvangel: jangan stars 1 arah monoton gitu deh
15:12 Dellvangel: *stairs
15:13 [Harlequin]: oh iya wkw okii re-araange xD
15:14 Dellvangel: ok ke diff hard
15:14 *Dellvangel is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1301459 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Hard]]
15:15 [Harlequin]: okii wait kak
15:15 Dellvangel: 00:11:081 (11081|3) - col 1 aja, ada ln di col 3 jadi aneh mainnya pake tangan kanan semua
15:16 [Harlequin]: moved owo
15:16 Dellvangel: 00:23:263 (23263|0,23354|3,23445|1,23536|2,23626|0,23717|1,23808|2) - ctrl+h, better flow
15:17 [Harlequin]: changed
15:17 Dellvangel: 00:32:536 (32536|0,33990|3,34172|0,34536|3,34899|0,35081|3) - kenapa col 1 sama 4 semua? disebar aja col nya
15:18 Dellvangel: 00:38:172 - add same reason kayak diff yg tadi
15:18 [Harlequin]: oh iya yg LN re-arranged
15:19 Dellvangel: 00:52:899 (52899|3,53081|3) - 1/4 ln kayak sebelahnya aja, lebih seru dimain, nanggung cuma sebelah
15:20 [Harlequin]: jadi dua dua nya ya
15:20 [Harlequin]: oke mantap
15:20 Dellvangel: 00:53:808 - https://dell.s-ul.eu/PFEic1XO gini aja, karena pitchnya turun bukan naik
15:21 Dellvangel: kanan buat pitch tinggi, kiri buat rendah kayak piano
15:21 [Harlequin]: oh iya bener sih xD
15:21 Dellvangel: 00:55:081 (55081|1) - col 4, hand balance
15:21 [Harlequin]: moveddd
15:22 Dellvangel: 01:00:899 (60899|2) - ke col 1, buat balance sama 01:01:263 (61263|3) - 
15:22 [Harlequin]: accepted
15:22 Dellvangel: 01:04:536 - rip
15:22 Dellvangel: wkwkwk
15:22 Dellvangel: star 2.71 lmao
15:23 [Harlequin]: wkwkw buat cover di diff erosensei juga sih :'v
15:23 Dellvangel: kalo buat star 3 shield masih ok lah, star 2 rip
15:24 Dellvangel: bayangin orang yg pp sekitar 1500an main pattern gitu lol
15:25 [Harlequin]: minta rekomendasi pattern boleh :'v? aga kebingungan juga soalnya wkwkw rip newbie
15:25 Dellvangel: wait
15:27 Dellvangel: https://dell.s-ul.eu/Lo3oeFpU
15:27 Dellvangel: gitu aja
15:27 [Harlequin]: okaiii
15:28 Dellvangel: 01:13:990 (73990|2,74172|1) - ctrl+h, pitchnya beda sama 01:13:445 (73445|2) - 
15:29 [Harlequin]: okai di ubah owo
15:29 [Harlequin]: okeee
15:30 Dellvangel: 01:21:808 - add note, diff paling susah juga add
15:30 Dellvangel: berasa ada yg kurang
15:30 Dellvangel: 01:26:354 - rip lol
15:31 [Harlequin]: oh iya kok bolong disitu wkwkw
15:32 [Harlequin]: wkwkk wa juga stuck disitu :'
15:32 Dellvangel: 01:26:354 - jadi gini https://dell.s-ul.eu/vRXdlWzV
15:33 Dellvangel: ok ke diff normal
15:34 [Harlequin]: oke saved
15:35 Dellvangel: 00:13:808 (13808|3,13990|2) - tukar colnya, hand balance
15:35 [Harlequin]: okeee
15:36 Dellvangel: 00:14:899 - aneh ini akhiran ln tapi ga ada notenya, ada suara gitar juga gpp di add
15:36 Dellvangel: 00:20:717 - sama
15:37 [Harlequin]: okee adeen
15:37 [Harlequin]: *added
15:38 Dellvangel: 00:26:717 - sayang nih ga di ln sampe 00:33:990 - 
15:38 Dellvangel: ada backsoundnya
15:38 Dellvangel: daripada 1 2 12 mulu
15:38 Dellvangel: *1 2 1 2
15:39 Dellvangel: eh bukan sampe situ
15:39 Dellvangel: wait
15:39 Dellvangel: sampe 00:28:172 - 
15:39 Dellvangel: terus 00:32:536 - sampe 00:33:990 - 
15:40 [Harlequin]: okee waitt owo
15:41 [Harlequin]: donee ow
15:41 Dellvangel: 01:16:172 - jadi https://dell.s-ul.eu/LvYCcsDn better flow sama hand balance
15:42 Dellvangel: 01:21:808 - bolong juga
15:42 [Harlequin]: doneee
15:42 [Harlequin]: added thooo
15:43 Dellvangel: coba gw liat2 diff ez
15:43 [Harlequin]: okeii okeii
15:44 Dellvangel: datar amat eznya lol, padahal bisa dilayer instru lain buat variasi
15:44 [Harlequin]: wkwkw gimana dong :'
15:45 Dellvangel: kalo gw mod adanya malah jadi gw yg ngemap, soalnya keknya bakal gw ubah kebanyakan patternnya
15:45 Dellvangel: ide dasarnya itu
15:45 [Harlequin]: wkwkw udah beberapa orang ngomong begini =w=
15:45 Dellvangel: 1/1 beat semua ga ada variasi layer apa2 rip
15:46 [Harlequin]: padahal gw tadi suruh dia selfmod tapi dia ga mau karena bingung
15:46 Dellvangel: lmao  rip
15:46 Dellvangel: lmao bingung gimana, banyak instru lain loh
15:46 [Harlequin]: tadi gw udah ajak buat irc malah ga mau
15:46 [Harlequin]: ;w;
15:47 [Harlequin]: btw nanti di post ya modnya makasih loh x3
15:47 Dellvangel: contohnya kek tadi gw saranin di nm di 00:26:717 - sama 00:32:536 - kan bisa di ln
15:47 Dellvangel: oke
15:48 [Harlequin]: iya gw juga pikiran nya kaya gitu sih ;w;
15:48 [Harlequin]: tp diff gw juga masih ccd wkwkw :'v
15:48 Dellvangel: wkwkwk
15:48 Dellvangel: cari mod terus lol

good luck!

Virtue- wrote:

selfmod

SELFMOD AF

Lenfried- wrote:

>:(

niichan

00:02:717 (2717|2) - should be a 1/2 ln
00:14:717 - vs 00:20:536 - soooome inconsistency here so id go with moving 00:20:717 (20717|3) - to 3 so that it makes more sense with the drums and is quite more enjoyable to play
tbh id move 00:24:536 (24536|3) - to 1 and 00:24:717 (24717|0) - to 3 for a more even miniijack placement. Consider this: 00:23:990 (23990|1,24172|1,24717|0,24899|0,25445|0,25626|0) -
00:29:990 - did u just copypasta and ctrl h apply what is done in ^ but with different column usages of course
00:40:536 - this. is some out of place semi-tricky jacking. Not the best pattern. Better go for something like: https://puu.sh/wmBYa/3283642d3e.png dont mind the triple stack this is much easier to play tbh

ill get back on this tomorrow

more niichan

00:54:899 (54899|3) - move to 3 because jacking into a white line is feels better than jacking from a white line
01:02:899 (62899|3) - to 2 with the same reason

i guess that should do.

Best of luck!

Unpredictable wrote:

hey this mod is long overdue and finally got to it.

1|2|3|4

Harlequin vs. V's Easy

- I don't see why it has a OD of 7 for an easy map. I would recommend changing to 6 or 6.5.
- 01:27:717 (87717|0) - I think the LN ends here 01:28:626 instead.
Overall, nice job. Looks good.

Normal

- 00:05:869 (5869|1,6111|2) - These two notes are super off and I'm not sure exactly what they're even following. Put one note here 00:05:808 and the other one here 00:06:081
- 00:15:263 Why not add a note here? You can definitely hear sound and its a good follow up to the doubles.
- 00:44:172 Add another note to make this a double? Sounds like all the other doubles you have here.
- 01:12:172 (72172|2,72536|1,72899|2) - I think we can fix this part including some notes above this. I suggest moving this 01:12:172 (72172|2) - to column 2, 01:12:536 (72536|1) - this to column 3, 01:12:899 (72899|2) - this to column 4, 01:13:263 (73263|3) - this to column 2, and 01:13:626 (73626|1) - this to column 4.
- 01:18:354 (78354|1) - would move this to column 1
- 01:28:626 same thing as before, would extend LNs to here.

Hard

- 00:11:081 (11081|0) - would move this to column 4
- 00:37:263 (37263|0) - would move this to column 3 and 00:37:626 (37626|3) - to column 1
- 01:22:172 (82172|0,82354|3,82354|0,82536|2,82717|3,82717|2) - I think this can do with some fixing. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570742 ?
- 01:28:626 Extend LNs

Onii-chan Daisuki!!! (this diff name lol)

honestly nothing much to say. i sorta like this LN mess and its pretty cool.

I think you can definitely try for rank. It would be cool if you did. Anyways, enjoy mod.

Maxus wrote:

blablabla

21:27 Maxus: 00:09:263 (9263|3,9445|1) - diflip ja mnurut wa biar mirror ama 00:07:808 - 
21:27 Maxus: lbih konsisten jg strukturnya ama pattern 1-4 4-1 sblmny
21:27 [Harlequin]: flipped x3
21:28 [Harlequin]: beneran kalo HS nya standar sih wa paham tapi kalo di tambah ga paham gw =w=
21:28 Maxus: HS custom mksdnya kah :oo
21:28 [Harlequin]: nah itu kaya C W F masih ngerti =w=
21:29 Maxus: 00:13:445 (13445|0,13808|2) - bkin col 4 dan col 1 ja biar pling ga msih ad ngikut pitchnya
21:29 Maxus: klo snare, hat, dsbny bgg y :v
21:29 [Harlequin]: nah bingung itu gw :v
21:30 [Harlequin]: btw di ubah ke ke 4 sama 1 owo)b
21:31 Maxus: map balon byk tuh hs customny kyk anemoi wkwk
21:31 Maxus: 00:21:626 - coba dbkin kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940287
21:31 Maxus: flow stair 1-2-3-4 nya ga ad sblmny pdhl 4-3-2-1 byk tuh :v
21:32 [Harlequin]: oke di ubah koko :v
21:32 Maxus: 00:31:808 (31808|0) - col 3 lbih ngeflow imo biar simetris ma 00:29:626 (29626|0,29990|1,30354|2) - 
21:32 Maxus: aku pensiun ah entar :v
21:33 [Harlequin]: mantap :v
21:33 [Harlequin]: yah kalo lu pensiun wa juga lah :v
21:33 Maxus: kok ngikut2 gw njir :vv
21:34 Maxus: 00:39:808 (39808|0) - jadi normal note dah, soalny wa ykin org bkal pda protes ma pattern yg skrg wkwk
21:34 [Harlequin]: nanti map gw ga ada yang rank :v
21:34 Maxus: soalny pda strict bgt ma diff easy enth knp 
21:35 [Harlequin]: oke ane ubah koko :v
21:37 Maxus: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940354 kyk gni dah stlh wa pkir2 :v
21:38 [Harlequin]: ane udah ubah kaya gitu :v
21:39 Maxus: cie koko jaog ubahnya =w=
21:40 [Harlequin]: kebetulan sama aja itu ubahnya =w=
21:40 Maxus: 00:52:172 - mnurut wa rada dipotek ja LN nya, ama delete 00:53:263 - , jadi kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940371
21:40 Maxus: bguslah -w-
21:42 Maxus: 01:04:899 - 01:05:626 - masing2 tambah 1/2 LN biar lebih syncron ama synthnya
21:42 Maxus: jgn lupa C nya jg
21:42 [Harlequin]: oke oke :v
21:42 [Harlequin]: soap koko :v
21:42 [Harlequin]: *siap
21:43 Maxus: 01:20:536 (80536|0,80536|1,81263|0,81626|1,82354|0,82717|1,83445|0,83445|1,84172|0,84536|1) - trlalu berat sbelah wa rasa :v
21:44 [Harlequin]: okai re-arrange :v
21:45 Maxus: kyk gmn tuh direarrangeny :v
21:46 [Harlequin]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940415 :v
21:47 Maxus: boleh2 :v
21:48 *Maxus is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1302507 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Normal]]
21:48 [Harlequin]: aseekk :v
21:48 Maxus: easy dh ready :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: okai :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: ini diff easy 85% buatan gw lol
21:49 Maxus: 00:28:354 (28354|1,28536|0) - flip ja biar ga shield
21:49 Maxus: sklian ja blg itu diff lu :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: wkaowkoaw :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: oke itu flip btw :v
21:50 [Harlequin]: diff normal best BG anjay
21:51 Maxus: kget wa diff normal lu bgus /run :p
21:51 [Harlequin]: bagus darimana D:
21:52 Maxus: 01:22:717 (82717|3) - pindah col 3 biar ga gitu stack 
21:52 Maxus: solid normalnya =w=
21:52 Maxus: wa mrasa kyk klo wa yg buat /run
21:52 [Harlequin]: wkaowka moved :v
21:52 Maxus: ok itu ja :v
21:52 [Harlequin]: awakwoaw diff nya terlalu jelek ya :v
21:53 Maxus: bgus lah =w=
21:54 Maxus: 00:13:445 (13445|0,13808|2) - kykny cma ini LN yg ga dijack
21:55 Maxus: 00:16:354 (16354|3,16717|3) - 00:19:263 (19263|2,19626|2) - smua dijack wkwk
21:55 [Harlequin]: iya anjit wkaowk ccd adik gw :v
21:56 Maxus: tp tetep solid overall =w=)b
21:56 Maxus: 00:24:899 (24899|1,25081|0,25263|1,25445|0) - jgn bgini klo bisa
21:57 [Harlequin]: kok kaya gitu sih patternya awkoak , re-arrange =w=b
21:59 Maxus: 00:49:990 (49990|1) - klo bs rearrange biar nih LN muat di col 3, soalny jd ga simetris ma 00:50:717 (50717|3,51445|0,52172|1) - wkkw
22:01 Maxus: itu ja kykny
22:03 *Maxus is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299481 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Onii-chan Daisuki!!!]]
22:04 [Harlequin]: bentar koko masih re-araange yang hard :'v
22:04 Maxus: waduh =w="
22:04 [Harlequin]: oke done :v
22:06 Maxus: 00:12:899 (12899|3) - pindah col 2 biar lbi seimbang wkwk
22:06 [Harlequin]: oke nice shoot :v
22:07 Maxus: 00:30:536 (30536|3,30717|1,30717|0,30717|3,31263|3,31445|3,31445|1,31445|0) - coba bedain 2 pattern ini dah
22:07 Maxus: 00:24:717 - ama ini jg, biar bervariasi
22:09 [Harlequin]: okee okee :v
22:10 Maxus: 00:52:354 (52354|3) - ke col 1 lbih balance
22:11 [Harlequin]: sip mantap =w=b
22:11 Maxus: 01:22:899 (82899|2,83081|3) - switch column biar jackny ga gitu rentetan ama 01:21:626 (81626|2,82172|2,82354|2,82717|2) - 
22:11 Maxus: itu ja :v
22:12 [Harlequin]: oke dah di switch =w=b
22:13 Maxus: update lah wkkw
22:13 [Harlequin]: OHH IYAAA WAOKWAOWK :V
22:13 [Harlequin]: gw cuman save doang =w=
22:14 Maxus: 01:28:263 (88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - stelah gw pikir2 lg dr kmrin, noteny kykny snapnya rada gaje ya
22:14 Maxus: apa delete ja biar play safe?
22:15 [Harlequin]: iya sih 1/4 kaya ga masuk juga kalo di denger 25% =w=
22:15 Maxus: tktnya ga boleh wkwk
22:16 [Harlequin]: berarti aga di panjing lagi ya LN nya =w=?
22:16 Maxus: delete ja 4 note trkhirny
22:17 Maxus: wwkwk
22:17 [Harlequin]: udh di delete :v
22:18 [Harlequin]: gpp kah ending nya ga sama kaya diff hard? owo
22:19 Maxus: gpp kok wkwk
22:19 Maxus: itu fleksibel
22:19 Maxus: kcuali klo BN lg nyoba ngenazi
22:19 Maxus: *lain lg
22:19 [Harlequin]: ekaoeka oke deh itu udah di delete Lv
22:19 [Harlequin]: :v
22:20 Maxus: btw oni-chan daisukii!!! itu ada di animeny lgsg kah?
22:20 [Harlequin]: si sagirinya kan suka sama kakanya :v
22:21 [Harlequin]: jadi wa kasih nama diff itu wakwok
22:23 Maxus: msih ad yg mw lu ubah?

gl koko

Julie wrote:

Can't stop singing this with your brother :joy:

For all diff:
add sel_l hitsound here 00:37:990 - ? Sample for the easiest diff. Same drum as those 1/1 loud sel_l

[Harlequin vs. V's Easy]

00:22:536 (22536|2) - Nothing bad here, just maybe move it to the 2nd column for the left hand, since you're having quite a lots of right hand here :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8953938 // sure owo

00:59:445 (59445|1) - I think you forgot your whistle here, to keep it consistent with other difficulty and 00:55:808 (55808|2,56536|1) - , 00:58:717 (58717|3) - // my bad =w=.

[Hard]

00:26:717 (26717|3) - I suppose you made the LN longer in easy and normal so that is easier to unhold it on a white stick for player. I think in Hard it should be fine to end it 00:27:990 - like in Insane. // fixed and same with another next part

00:49:990 - to 00:52:899 - I honestly hate the gap between normal and hard to hard and insane. This part is nearly the same as insane skillwise and there is also some kind of trill here 00:50:717 (50717|2,50717|1,50899|2,51081|1,51263|2,51445|1) - . Try to nerf it a bit. // im nerf it for note inside the LN becoming one for C and W

01:15:445 (75445|2,75990|2) - Try not to jack these 2 LN, doesn't fit the pitch.// sure, re-arrange it

01:17:172 (77172|3) - There isn't any new sound here 01:17:172 - , only the "tss" of the voice, but that isn't what you are trying to match. Delete that note so it follow more the song drum. // oh yeah you are right xD

01:25:990 (85990|0,85990|1) - I honestly prefer if you change the hitsound here, since there no these drum sound 01:25:748 // should i cahnge to another HS or just delete it? owo (85748|1,85869|3,86111|2,86232|0) - . I would recommend "clap" to "bell"// sure.

[Onii-chan Daisuki!!!]
00:00:536 - to 00:09:445 - This point is not necessarily for consistence, but it could be consistent and a cooler feeling on the drum side.
Example 00:00:536 - and 00:00:717 - same drum, so same note column which is cool . You did the same for 00:06:354 (6354|1,6354|0,6536|1,6536|0,6536|3) - , 00:07:808 (7808|0,7808|3,7808|2,7990|3,7990|0,7990|2) - .
So why not doing it here too 00:01:990 (1990|1,1990|3,1990|2,2172|1,2172|0,2172|3) - , 00:03:445 (3445|1,3445|0,3445|2,3626|3,3626|0,3626|2) - and 00:09:263 (9263|1,9263|0,9263|3,9445|2,9445|3,9445|0) - .
I personally find it more feeling for the drum, and give a nice drum hit note feeling as well xD. // hehe nice idea cool xD

00:13:445 (13445|3,13808|1) - I think you did the hard diff too, make these the same column like in hard, same pitch, way cooler then a random LN trill 00:13:263 (13263|1,13445|3,13808|1) - XD.
And then you can move this 00:14:172 (14172|2) - to left side if you want. // pretty nice, i change to the same with hard diff

00:16:354 (16354|3,16717|1) -, 00:19:263 (19263|3,19626|2) - ^ Same reason. // same

00:32:536 (32536|1) - Wonder if you want to end it here like you did on other diff 00:33:990 - , since it does continue a bit longer unlike this one 00:26:717 (26717|2) - . // i just wan to keep this like what you said at Hard diff, the LN should be stop at the red thick x3

01:00:172 - No finish hitsound like here 00:57:263 - ? It have a cymbal to finish the stanza. (Apply for all diff) // my bad =w=

01:16:899 (76899|1,76899|3,76990|2,77081|0,77172|1,77263|2,77263|3,77354|0,77445|1,77536|2) - Sound cool with the hitsound, but you're completely changing the drum of the song, and sadly this can be DQable. There isn't any new sound here 01:17:172 - , only the "tss" of the voice, but that isn't what you are trying to match. Delete that note so it follow more the song drum.

01:25:990 (85990|0,85990|1) - I honestly prefer if you change the hitsound here, since there no these drum sound 01:25:748 (85748|0,85748|3,85869|2,85869|3,86111|1,86111|2,86232|3,86232|0) - . I would recommend "clap" to "bell".

01:26:354 (86354|0,86354|3,86899|1,87081|2) - The idea is cool, but I feel this sound 01:27:445 - is kinda confusing to play, is so clear, how about end the LN here 01:27:445 - like other diff? Since that's where all the instrument matching the LN stop, while the voice "hito-riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" end here 01:28:172 - xD. // im re-arrange a bit, let me update first and we can discuss it if not suit

01:27:717 (87717|1,87717|0,87717|3,87717|2) - Hey, I like the way you end it, really cool, but um, I don't know if is 100% fitting, I mean in seeing, is probably the best and player can kinda know what you were trying to do. My biggest issue with this is that the declining sound start here : 01:28:081 - , like you notice on your Hard diff. So it will be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8953816. My other suggestion is I was wondering, how about make this 01:27:717 (87717|3) - long to 01:28:536 - just like the other diff, for consistency and also for ending at the end of the sound . I find it fitting 3 stairs then a longer one, your choice owo.

Just a comment on the diff, this is your first map to rank, so I'll kinda let it pass, since it will basically mean maybe remapping what I'm about to point out, and so far is not really a big issue, but is something you might want to put attention on your future map.
You've been having a lots of LN end + 3 notes, which make it nearly a 4 notes hold on part with clap. and most drum you vary it this way : clap-whistle-clap-whistle-etc. My biggest concern is that not necessarily how it work, yes on most map and song it work this way, but not all. For example : 00:16:536 - and 00:16:899 - , same sound and same drum, but since you put clap, you turn it into a different drum, which is not what happening in the song. Is nearly like 80% of the diff, so I won't tell you to change it, since it still sound nice, but something to be careful in the future.// yeah i will learn about more mapping since my brother just tell me about the basic mapping due he is very busy 3 month ago, and thank you for your suggestion i will learn more how about mapping.
xD

I like how the BG size flow~ xD // aye SIRRR!!! xD
https://puu.sh/xldm1/3d5cbd2f22.png

Julie wrote:

Last recheck

[Hard and onii-chan daisuki desu]
I think I mess up my explanation here
01:25:748 (85748|3,85748|0,85869|2,85869|3,85990|0,85990|1,86111|1,86111|2,86232|0,86232|3) -
I mean bell on this part 01:25:990 - , other one 01:25:748 - , 01:26:111 - and 01:26:232 - are clap.
Also I just notice something but I don't really hear a drum here 01:25:869 - , I hear 2 sound here that are 1/4.
A drum here 1/6 01:25:748 - , then a 2 sound 1/4 here 01:25:808 - and 01:25:899 - // yeah you are right it's kinda clear to hear owo anyway changed

[onii-chan daisuki desu]
01:28:263 (88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - Hmm it seem like you redid the ending, make these note at least 5-15% hitsound. Yeah your current hitsound is low and ok but not everyone will be using your hitsound, some will just have a loud sound one every note and the end will be too loud at 50% XD.// and for this part im thinking again, it's nice to follow your suggestion before you check it , im change it into that XD

Julie wrote:

YAY CONGRATZ 1ST QUALIFY MAP!!!
Looking foward for your future work owo!!

Maxus wrote:

hope we don't miss anything this time, checked it multiple times and supposed to be alright now :3
reminder of 24h

Qualified! >w<

-Kamikaze- wrote:

pls change the last diffname for the love of god

-Kamikaze- wrote:

pls change the last diffname for the love of god

-Kamikaze- wrote:

pls change the last diffname for the love of god