Mir wrote:
hello im here on request
[General]
Do you have a hitclap that actually sounds like a snare or something cuz atm it sounds like a kick and you can bind that to something else and make more intricate hitsounding that way. fix
Chances are your MP3 bitrate is something variable or just bleh because your audio filesize is now 15mb? Can you do something about that lol. Make sure it's constant 192kbps at most. fix
Inconsistent values:
Artist unicode:
Easy: 柚サです
Normal: 柚サです
Hard: ゆさです
Insane: ゆさです
Extra: ゆさです
Bird Rooftop: ゆさです fix
Preview time:
Easy: 55504
Normal: 55504
Hard: 55504
Insane: 55504
Extra: 55504
Bird Rooftop: 55193 fix
Image dimensions should be at most 1920x1200, anything higher is unrankable. Change your BG to a .jpg as well to save filesize. fix
Your OD settings are really low for the higher diffs. Insane at OD7? Topdiff on 8.7? Try Insane 7.5, Extra 8-8.5, Top 9? fix
[Easy]
- 00:51:831 (3,1) - Don't do this in an Easy, not enough time for the player to realize there's a spinner there. I would recommend just mapping this section out. dont really understand the reasoning behind this bc there is technically no rule against this and its perfectly playable but fix anyways
- 01:03:023 - Avoid slider only sections on lower diffs. Sliders are harder to follow than circles despite being more lenient overall, putting in some circles from here on for some variation would be a good idea imo. dont really wanna change this, i dont really want to increase the difficulty anymore and i like it for what it is
- 01:20:121 - Missing clap. fix
- 01:25:095 (3) - A pixel offscreen. fix
[Normal]
- 00:13:282 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you're trying to follow vocals you can probably do this. Yeah it'd skip the snare but the vocal rhythm is more pronounced here imo. It's really up to you but if you plan on following drums 00:14:370 (3) - switches focus to vocals since 00:14:525 - is skipped so be aware of that. Apply this to the rest of these rhythms if you agree. i dont know why trying to cover both tracks and having the beat consistent is bad. as of right now i think it plays ok but i'll wait for other BN opinions or something
- 00:47:479 (5) - Way offscreen. fix
- 00:52:841 (1) - Yeah same as Easy, don't do this in lower diffs. // 01:25:484 (1) - fix
- 01:04:266 (3,4) - Some of these could be circles to show the buildup here.// 01:14:214 (3) - would prefer simpler normal, but i'll wait for more opinions on this too
[Hard]
- 00:01:157 (2,3) - Excessive spacing so early imo, should tone it down so the latter parts stand out. fix
- 00:37:064 - There's a strong snare here that might be nice to have clickable. //00:39:551 - 00:47:012 - etc\ fix
- 00:41:106 (2,3) - A bit much spacing imo lol. fix
- 00:44:681 (2) - I'd probably recommend two 1/2 sliders since there's a strong snare on the end here and you'd be representing vocals better with 1/2 sliders. Dunno how you want to do this but if anything the end of the slider is marginally stronger than the head to me, so it should be clickable. fix
- 00:53:230 (2,3) - These totally sound like you can put circles here with spacing emphasis even considering you did things like 00:17:634 (3,4) - etc fix
- 01:25:484 (1) - Perhaps start it on the white tick after at least? fix
[Insane]
- 00:36:598 (4) - Ending note is much stronger than that of the head, would probably be better to make the tail of this clickable. fix
Filler rhythm stuff here I explain in the higher diffs and at the end. tbh filler rhythms work for insane because imo its super gray area in which not everything needs to be emphasised overly well, especially for a tv size such as this.
[Extra]
- 00:56:183 (3) - Offscreen. fix
- 00:25:251 (4,5,6,1) - Flow is pretty wide-angle here, is this intentional? Looks inconsistent since all other instances of this were sharper angles. it was intentional because i made the distance smaller because of the weird angle, but i fixed it anyways
- 00:36:753 - Strong beat on slider end you could make clickable. // 00:46:857 (1) - fix
- 00:42:815 (6,7,1) - 1 has less emphasis than 7 but 6>7 is a lot weaker imo. Give 1 more spacing? fix
- 00:50:898 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I think a more gradual buildup would be more appropriate than a couple of small circles then screenjumps coupled with how 00:53:074 - has no sound there could be some nerfing involved here. fix, but i made the distance smaller there for a reason. even though the drum there is very soft its still audible to me in gameplay, so i prefer just not emphasising it as much
[Bird Rooftop]
I don't really get the diffname lol. bird rooftop is the transliteration of "now loading" in chinese, some weird thing
- 00:03:955 (3,4) - 00:06:442 (3) - Rhythm should be relatively consistent between these two. I think the first represents the guitar better because more of it is clickable. disagreeing with this one because the music in both sections are different; 1st section has it held on the 5th guitar while the 2nd has it held on the 4th (very very minor)
- 00:27:893 (5) - Could be two circles for vocals. Esp when you used 00:27:427 (3) - as non-filler vocal stuff. (it has no vocal on the end) fix
- 00:31:935 (1) - I don't think this note needs so much emphasis, I barely hear anything on it. fix
- 00:45:613 (1,2) - If you moved away 2 you could avoid the "it looks like it should be blanketed" look. fix
- 00:46:080 (2,3,4) - 00:36:131 (2) - Choose a rhythm and be consistent with it fix, used 1/1 non reverse
- 00:46:857 (1) - Same thing with this red tick. Would be better clickable imo. // 00:34:577 - fix
-00:51:054 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again a more gradual buildup would fit a lot more than these jumps imo. Also 00:53:074 - has nothing on it, so this could just be deleted for respite in the jump section. fix similarly to above
- 00:57:271 (3,4,5) - Not a fan of how 5 has a vocal on the end but 3 doesn't yet both try to follow vocals. I'd use circles for 5 or make 3>4 a reverse like this fix
- 00:58:670 (3,4) - 00:58:981 (5,6) - Sounds like these could also be sliders considering 00:59:292 (1) - has two sounds on it that could be circles instead. fix
- 01:13:903 (7,8,1) - 1 could use more emphasis, consider nerfing 7>8. fix
- 01:18:567 (3) - Same rhythm thing. fix
Overall not a fan of some of the rhythm still, kinda feels like you're swapping between layers like I mention some examples in each diff where I say "two circles" or "maybe slider" usually it's to make the stuff that's more important there clickable and stuff that isn't important not clickable so you don't end up with ambiguous rhythm. yea but not having rhythmic variability is also a big thing, and if you were to force yourself into the containers of strictly "held vocals = 1/2 slider, faster vocals = 2 circles, guitars = slider etc. etc. it will just make everything even more stagnant. i tried my best to do it, especially for the extra diffs so i fixed as much as i couldve
The buildups in the higher diffs could use some more building up and not starting from 100% and going to 110% if you know what I mean, cuz that kinda doesn't represent what the song is doing. i tried my bestest
Good luck!