Hi
00:12:950 (2,3,4,5,6) - Personally I would move this whole pattern to the right so it sort of blankets with 00:12:700 (1) -. Not too much though
00:14:575 (6) - move this note up to make a star. It looks better this way
01:07:512 (4,5) - Not really a problem but if this was stacked I think it would look better
01:11:450 (5,6) - the spacing here seems too big.
03:59:387 (2,3,4) - spacing too big ;w;
I cant find anything else wrong with this. It's soo good ;w;
00:12:950 (2,3,4,5,6) - Personally I would move this whole pattern to the right so it sort of blankets with 00:12:700 (1) -. Not too much though
00:14:575 (6) - move this note up to make a star. It looks better this way
01:07:512 (4,5) - Not really a problem but if this was stacked I think it would look better
01:11:450 (5,6) - the spacing here seems too big.
03:59:387 (2,3,4) - spacing too big ;w;
I cant find anything else wrong with this. It's soo good ;w;