Yui Horie - PRESENTER [Taiko] · forum

Waribashi

Joined January 2013

Waribashi 2017-02-20T00:21:08+00:00

こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat
[Kantan]
スピナーの終了地点を00:30:617 (18) - から00:29:425 (18) - に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。次のノーツにスピナーが貼り付いてて少々忙しないかもしれません。
[yzrin's Futsuu]
01:17:504 (16) - delete (サビの同じリズム箇所(01:04:789 (1) - 01:11:147 (30) - )をとってなくて敢えてここを取る必要はないかなと感じました。)
[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:37:769 (24,25) - change to k d (変えるのなら00:39:359 (30,31) - ここも)
01:01:809 (6) - change to d (「響けば」の「ば」をとるのならば音階的に下がっているよう聞こえるのでここはkより低いdで取るべきだと思います。）
[Oni]
00:22:670 (26) - change to d (こ↑こ↓よくわかんなかったです)
00:31:710 (2,3) - delete (静かなパートということもあり密度をそれに合わせる形にしたほうがいいと感じます。）
00:33:299 (8,9) - delete (上と同様)
00:34:789 (14) - change to d
00:52:272 (44) - change to D
00:58:630 (75) - delete (ここを切ることによって前のドラムのキレの良さを再現できると思います）

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-20T02:24:58+00:00

KitajimaYN wrote:
こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat

[yzrin's Futsuu]
01:17:504 (16) - delete (サビの同じリズム箇所(01:04:789 (1) - 01:11:147 (30) - )をとってなくて敢えてここを取る必要はないかなと感じました。)
keep... あえて取らなくてもいいけど... voとりたさ... ん～...
[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:37:769 (24,25) - change to k d (変えるのなら00:39:359 (30,31) - ここも)
changed. なるほど、ここ一帯こねくり回しましたここ結構いい感じなのでfutsuuもchangeしました。
01:01:809 (6) - change to d (「響けば」の「ば」をとるのならば音階的に下がっているよう聞こえるのでここはkより低いdで取るべきだと思います。）
dの方が理にかなってるんですけど、kの方が良い説ある気がする（？）

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

modありがとうごじゃいました

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-27T10:15:40+00:00

KitajimaYN wrote:
こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat
[Kantan]
スピナーの終了地点を00:30:617 (18) - から00:29:425 (18) - に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。次のノーツにスピナーが貼り付いてて少々忙しないかもしれません。
- 確かにギリギリで叩ききったプレイヤーが次のノーツでミスをしてしまう可能性も無しではないので短くしました。
[Oni]
00:22:670 (26) - change to d (こ↑こ↓よくわかんなかったです)
- 他より音強いから～って置いたんだけど今見たらこれわっかんねえな戻しました。
00:31:710 (2,3) - delete (静かなパートということもあり密度をそれに合わせる形にしたほうがいいと感じます。）
- なるほど fixed !
00:33:299 (8,9) - delete (上と同様)
- fixed
00:34:789 (14) - change to d
- No change
00:52:272 (44) - change to D
- fixed
00:58:630 (75) - delete (ここを切ることによって前のドラムのキレの良さを再現できると思います）
- fixed

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

modありがとうございました！！返信遅れて申し訳ないです ;3

gaston_2199

1,179 posts

Joined February 2015

gaston_2199 2017-03-01T19:19:41+00:00

Hi!
NM from my queue~

[

Kantan]

00:22:670 (11) - Kat for consistence as 00:16:312 (3) -
00:25:054 - You can add kat here to follow the melody
00:25:451 (15) - This change to kat for the same reason as above (only if you accept)
00:31:014 (1,2) - Why not change to kat? Because the sound is sharper than this 00:37:372 (7,8) -
00:53:266 (26,27,28,29,30) - How about dkkdd? 00:54:061 (27,28) - I listen these notes turn up the volumen, so maybe change to kat
01:10:352 (48) - These notes 01:09:160 (46,47,49,50) - you follow the vocal. In my opinion it's sounds good if you delete 01:10:352 (48) - to emphatizes better the vocal

[

yzrin's Futsuu]

How about change the diff name to "yuzu's Futsuu"? Only my opinion c:

00:02:008 (3) - This note is unnesesary, no destacable sound. Maybe move to 00:03:597 - to follow the vocal?
00:03:994 (6) - Kat? vocal
00:23:465 (21,22) - Change to don? This 00:23:465 (21) - is the same that 00:17:107 (7) -, and this too 00:23:862 (22) - but the tone is more low than 00:17:504 (8) -

[

yzrin's Muzukashii]

00:32:802 (7) - Move this to 00:32:604 - to follow the piano, is better.
00:33:398 (9) - The same as above, move to 00:33:200 -
00:34:193 - Add kat to follow piano?
01:10:153 (41,43) - Delete this, because is the same than here 01:09:160 (37,38,39) - and emphatize the vocal

[

Oni]

00:10:153 (45) -Change to don?
01:23:465 (133,134) - Change to don? In the others diff was always don

That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-01T21:49:18+00:00

gaston_2199 wrote:
Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ Kantan]
00:22:670 (11) - Kat for consistence as 00:16:312 (3) -
- i think it is low pitch. No change
00:25:054 - You can add kat here to follow the melody
- ok
00:25:451 (15) - This change to kat for the same reason as above (only if you accept)
- I think it is the same as pitch with 00:27:041 (18) -
00:31:014 (1,2) - Why not change to kat? Because the sound is sharper than this 00:37:372 (7,8) -
- ok
00:53:266 (26,27,28,29,30) - How about dkkdd? 00:54:061 (27,28) - I listen these notes turn up the volumen, so maybe change to kat
- ok :3
01:10:352 (48) - These notes 01:09:160 (46,47,49,50) - you follow the vocal. In my opinion it's sounds good if you delete 01:10:352 (48) - to emphatizes better the vocal
- ok
[ Oni]
00:10:153 (45) -Change to don?
- I follow the vocal. I think this pitch is high
01:23:465 (133,134) - Change to don? In the others diff was always don
- ok changed
That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

Thank you for modding !!

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-03-02T01:30:41+00:00

gaston_2199 wrote:
Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ yzrin's Futsuu]
How about change the diff name to "yuzu's Futsuu"? Only my opinion c:
00:02:008 (3) - This note is unnesesary, no destacable sound. Maybe move to 00:03:597 - to follow the vocal?
ok
00:03:994 (6) - Kat? vocal
ok
00:23:465 (21,22) - Change to don? This 00:23:465 (21) - is the same that 00:17:107 (7) -, and this too 00:23:862 (22) - but the tone is more low than 00:17:504 (8) -
change d k

[ yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:32:802 (7) - Move this to 00:32:604 - to follow the piano, is better.
00:33:398 (9) - The same as above, move to 00:33:200 -
changed it a little by myself.
00:34:193 - Add kat to follow piano?
If it is piano sound, I think that this is correct.
01:10:153 (41,43) - Delete this, because is the same than here 01:09:160 (37,38,39) - and emphatize the vocal
ok.

That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

thanks for modding ~

フつ

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-02T09:22:13+00:00

update

Remus

452 posts

Joined July 2015

Remus 2017-03-03T14:34:50+00:00

Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).
00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
01:29:623 - as i said before

[Oni]

00:27:637 - i mentioned it in Muzu. Better to map and move spinner a bit.
00:33:796 (9) - kat for better rhytm.
01:04:392 (28) - the same reason as above. Lack of kats sometimes looks weird, when before/after this part there much of them(kats). Stability is always good, so better to fix here.
01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86) - kkkdk?
01:21:875 (121,125) - the same as above, but here you can skip this, because it is looks nice even without kats.
01:29:623 - if you decided to fix that moment before, fix here too.

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-03-04T10:15:05+00:00

Remus wrote:
Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
ok
00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
When putting the notes there will be uncomfortable at the beginning of the spinner.
00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).

It is best to start a notes from here
00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
I think kddk is better.
00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
ok
01:29:623 - as i said before
no

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.

thank you for modding :3

q

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-06T16:57:57+00:00

Remus wrote:
Hello.

[Oni]
00:27:637 - i mentioned it in Muzu. Better to map and move spinner a bit.
- No change
00:33:796 (9) - kat for better rhytm.
- ok
01:04:392 (28) - the same reason as above. Lack of kats sometimes looks weird, when before/after this part there much of them(kats). Stability is always good, so better to fix here.
- ok
01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86) - kkkdk?
- umm... keep...
01:21:875 (121,125) - the same as above, but here you can skip this, because it is looks nice even without kats.
- No change
01:29:623 - if you decided to fix that moment before, fix here too.
- No change

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.

Thank you for modding

Tomoka Rin

Former osu! Champion: OWC#1

378 posts

Joined June 2009

Tomoka Rin 2017-03-06T16:58:25+00:00

IRC savelog

00:18 Sanawieck: そういえばなんですけどmodって出来ますか？
00:21 *Sanawieck is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)]
00:21 Sanawieck: 前自分がやった感じのやつです！
00:21 Tomoka Rin: おおお
00:22 Tomoka Rin: やってみる
00:24 Tomoka Rin: えっと
00:24 Sanawieck: ＞ｗ＜ｂ
00:25 Tomoka Rin: ちょっと気になるところはね
00:26 Sanawieck: うん
00:26 Tomoka Rin: 01:03:994 (25,26) - ここdk、01:04:789 (31) - ここもkかな
00:28 Sanawieck: 01:03:994 (26) - ここｋにした！ 01:04:789 (31) - は後ろのドラム音取りたいからkeepにしたい
00:28 Tomoka Rin: うん
00:28 Sanawieck: dk に変えた！
00:31 Tomoka Rin: あと
00:31 Tomoka Rin: 00:40:749 (45) - ここ、kならどう
00:32 Tomoka Rin: dもいいけど
00:33 Tomoka Rin: ここはおすきにｗ
00:34 Sanawieck: とても悩む…ｗｗｗ
00:36 Sanawieck: 音程どおりにしたいのでここはdでいきます！
00:36 Tomoka Rin: うん...さっきも悩んでるｗ
00:37 Sanawieck: ｗｗ
00:40 Tomoka Rin: 　01:13:729 (80) -
00:41 Tomoka Rin: ここdになったら
00:42 Tomoka Rin: 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) -
00:43 Tomoka Rin: 元のはpianoについてる、https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499712
00:43 Tomoka Rin: これ変えたらもいいと思う
00:44 Tomoka Rin: あくまで個人的な意見けどｗ
00:44 Sanawieck: kkdkddk良い！！ｗｗ
00:44 Sanawieck: 変えたw
00:46 Tomoka Rin: 01:22:670 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
00:46 Tomoka Rin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499737
00:48 Tomoka Rin: 最後は01:28:829 (156) - kもdもいいよ、お好きにｗ
00:49 Sanawieck: うーんkeepで;;;
00:51 Tomoka Rin: はい(*ﾟ▽ﾟ)ﾉ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: 以上だ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: いい譜面やリズムと思うよ
00:51 Sanawieck: ありがとー！！！
00:52 Sanawieck: 嬉しい＞ω＜

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-06T17:02:42+00:00

Tomoka Rin wrote:
IRC savelog
00:18 Sanawieck: そういえばなんですけどmodって出来ますか？
00:21 *Sanawieck is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)]
00:21 Sanawieck: 前自分がやった感じのやつです！
00:21 Tomoka Rin: おおお
00:22 Tomoka Rin: やってみる
00:24 Tomoka Rin: えっと
00:24 Sanawieck: ＞ｗ＜ｂ
00:25 Tomoka Rin: ちょっと気になるところはね
00:26 Sanawieck: うん
00:26 Tomoka Rin: 01:03:994 (25,26) - ここdk、01:04:789 (31) - ここもkかな
00:28 Sanawieck: 01:03:994 (26) - ここｋにした！ 01:04:789 (31) - は後ろのドラム音取りたいからkeepにしたい
00:28 Tomoka Rin: うん
00:28 Sanawieck: dk に変えた！
00:31 Tomoka Rin: あと
00:31 Tomoka Rin: 00:40:749 (45) - ここ、kならどう
00:32 Tomoka Rin: dもいいけど
00:33 Tomoka Rin: ここはおすきにｗ
00:34 Sanawieck: とても悩む…ｗｗｗ
00:36 Sanawieck: 音程どおりにしたいのでここはdでいきます！
00:36 Tomoka Rin: うん...さっきも悩んでるｗ
00:37 Sanawieck: ｗｗ
00:40 Tomoka Rin: 　01:13:729 (80) -
00:41 Tomoka Rin: ここdになったら
00:42 Tomoka Rin: 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) -
00:43 Tomoka Rin: 元のはpianoについてる、https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499712
00:43 Tomoka Rin: これ変えたらもいいと思う
00:44 Tomoka Rin: あくまで個人的な意見けどｗ
00:44 Sanawieck: kkdkddk良い！！ｗｗ
00:44 Sanawieck: 変えたw
00:46 Tomoka Rin: 01:22:670 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
00:46 Tomoka Rin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499737
00:48 Tomoka Rin: 最後は01:28:829 (156) - kもdもいいよ、お好きにｗ
00:49 Sanawieck: うーんkeepで;;;
00:51 Tomoka Rin: はい(*ﾟ▽ﾟ)ﾉ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: 以上だ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: いい譜面やリズムと思うよ
00:51 Sanawieck: ありがとー！！！
00:52 Sanawieck: 嬉しい＞ω＜

IRCありがとう！！！！！

update !

davidminh0111

Beatmap Nominator

1,358 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-04-07T11:30:52+00:00

Sorry, I can't mod your because i don't mod graveyard beatmap

davidminh0111

Beatmap Nominator

1,358 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-04-08T00:25:04+00:00

Hello from my modding queue:
Oni:
00:35:782: Remove this
01:14:226 (83, 85): Remove this
01:15:517: Add Drum

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-04-10T01:33:50+00:00

davidminh0111 wrote:
Hello from my modding queue:
Oni:
00:35:782: Remove this
- No change
01:14:226 (83, 85): Remove this
- No change
01:15:517: Add Drum
- No change

Thanks for modding

Ozu

648 posts

Joined July 2011

Ozu 2017-04-19T08:17:12+00:00

( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD

[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat

[ Kantan ]

00:44:127 (15) - D? there isn't any notes around here so eazy to play big note, and sound is emphasized here.
00:47:306 (19) - ^

01:05:981 (42,43,44,45) - k k d d? to lay down offbeat burden.

01:28:829 (71) - add d seems OK. not difficult, fit very nice.

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

01:05:981 (17,18,19) - looks like just 1/4 ddk because of bgm.

*suggestion 1*
01:06:378 (18) - delete
*suggestion 2*
01:05:981 (17,18,19) - dkd
*suggestion 3*
01:06:180 (18) - add d <- most i like

01:07:570 (20,21,22) - ^

[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

Perfect to me~♪(*´∀｀)

[ Oni ]

00:19:690 (13) - k? if you don't want to k, how about 00:19:888 (14,15,16,17) - kkdk?

00:45:120 (13) ,00:48:299 (27) - K? Big note is love <3

01:24:259 (136,137,138) - little much d in this stream. change here like kdd so that avoid one color.

01:28:829 (156,157) - D K?

sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-04-19T09:00:57+00:00

404 AccNotFound wrote:
( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

01:05:981 (17,18,19) - looks like just 1/4 ddk because of bgm.

*suggestion 1*
01:06:378 (18) - delete
*suggestion 2*
01:05:981 (17,18,19) - dkd
*suggestion 3*
01:06:180 (18) - add d <- most i like

01:07:570 (20,21,22) - ^

no change,
I tried it variously. However, I decided that the shape of the current form is a form that the rhythm and the break are moderately taken.

I thought that Futsuu players should do the one-step difficult rhythm as well.

[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

Perfect to me~♪(*´∀｀)
( ˘ω˘ )thank you( ˘ω˘ )

sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~

thank you for modding ~

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-04-21T16:41:53+00:00

404 AccNotFound wrote:
( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD

[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat

[ Kantan ]

00:44:127 (15) - D? there isn't any notes around here so eazy to play big note, and sound is emphasized here.
00:47:306 (19) - ^

01:05:981 (42,43,44,45) - k k d d? to lay down offbeat burden.

01:28:829 (71) - add d seems OK. not difficult, fit very nice.

- All changed :3

[ Oni ]

00:19:690 (13) - k? if you don't want to k, how about 00:19:888 (14,15,16,17) - kkdk?
- No change

00:45:120 (13) ,00:48:299 (27) - K? Big note is love <3
- umm... keep

01:24:259 (136,137,138) - little much d in this stream. change here like kdd so that avoid one color.
- ok

01:28:829 (156,157) - D K?
- changed d K

sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~

Thank you for modding !!

Karee Pan

185 posts

Joined December 2015

Karee Pan 2017-04-25T16:41:14+00:00

Hey!
From my queue.

[ Kantan ]

00:46:114 (17,18,19,20) - Sounds like this should be d k K d . Also mirrors the previous pattern nicely.
01:21:080 (61) - move to 01:20:882
01:22:272 (63) - Consider deleting this. It seems tough for Kantan

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

00:36:577 (11) - Sounds like a d to me.
00:43:531 - Looks like a good spot to keep the doubles going with a d, If applied, then i would also delete 00:46:908 (35) for consistency.
01:07:570 (20) - Maybe switch to k ? Even though the vocals stay the same the guitar pitch rise makes this sound better as a k to me

[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

00:31:412 (2) , 00:33:001 (8) , 00:36:180 (20) - I don't see any reason for these notes in a very calm part of the song
00:36:577 (20) - d sounds better to me
01:03:398 (13) , 01:16:114 (19) - k like the previous pattern to follow the vocal ?

[ Oni ]

00:19:491 (11) - Melody says d, bassdrum says d, gotta be a d.
00:19:888 (14) - To me k sounds better and flows alot better
00:22:670 (26) - k imo
00:25:650 (38,39,40,41,42) - I would go with dkkdk for some variety, might be just my preference.
01:27:339 - Could add a note

Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it

Best of Luck!

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-04-26T14:51:35+00:00

Karee Pan wrote:
Hey!
From my queue.

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

00:36:577 (11) - Sounds like a d to me.
I think kk is better.
00:43:531 - Looks like a good spot to keep the doubles going with a d, If applied, then i would also delete 00:46:908 (35) for consistency.
ok
01:07:570 (20) - Maybe switch to k ? Even though the vocals stay the same the guitar pitch rise makes this sound better as a k to me
I would like to make the map even simple according to vocal.

[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

00:31:412 (2) , 00:33:001 (8) , 00:36:180 (20) - I don't see any reason for these notes in a very calm part of the song
I erased it a little.
00:36:577 (20) - d sounds better to me
k
01:03:398 (13) , 01:16:114 (19) - k like the previous pattern to follow the vocal ?
I use a different color scheme to avoid duplication. 01:12:637 (2,3,4,5) -

Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it
Best of Luck!

thank you for modding~ :3

hutsuu

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-04-27T09:28:25+00:00

Karee Pan wrote:
Hey!
From my queue.

[ Kantan ]

00:46:114 (17,18,19,20) - Sounds like this should be d k K d . Also mirrors the previous pattern nicely.
- changed k d D k
01:21:080 (61) - move to 01:20:882
- ok
01:22:272 (63) - Consider deleting this. It seems tough for Kantan
- ok

[ Oni ]

00:19:491 (11) - Melody says d, bassdrum says d, gotta be a d.
- ok
00:19:888 (14) - To me k sounds better and flows alot better
- umm... keep
00:22:670 (26) - k imo
- No change
00:25:650 (38,39,40,41,42) - I would go with dkkdk for some variety, might be just my preference.
- No change
01:27:339 - Could add a note
- ok

Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it
Best of Luck!

Thank you for modding !!

Arrival

1,418 posts

Joined June 2012

Arrival 2017-05-14T02:14:34+00:00

Hello

[Kantan]

00:29:325 - This green line is useless as it is, leave the whole slider at 75% volume or reduce it from 75 to 65 graduatelly.

00:50:087 (22,24) - Consider putting these notes as finishers. Choice is yours

01:06:676 (43,45) - Avoid mapping blue ticks on Kantan. Although I see you want to map the vocals, there are also dominant sounds on 01:06:577 - and 01:08:166 - which sould be prioritized since we're on the easiest difficultu of the set. Put these 2 notes on the previous red ticks.

01:28:829 (70) - Add this as a finisher too

Really tired i'll do the rest tomorrow. PM me in game if I forget

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-05-14T07:29:11+00:00

Arrival wrote:
Hello

[Kantan]

00:29:325 - This green line is useless as it is, leave the whole slider at 75% volume or reduce it from 75 to 65 graduatelly.
- ok

00:50:087 (22,24) - Consider putting these notes as finishers. Choice is yours
- Add finisher to 00:50:683 (23) -

01:06:676 (43,45) - Avoid mapping blue ticks on Kantan. Although I see you want to map the vocals, there are also dominant sounds on 01:06:577 - and 01:08:166 - which sould be prioritized since we're on the easiest difficultu of the set. Put these 2 notes on the previous red ticks.
- ok

01:28:829 (70) - Add this as a finisher too
- ok

Really tired i'll do the rest tomorrow. PM me in game if I forget

Thank you for modding

Arrival

1,418 posts

Joined June 2012

Arrival 2017-05-17T20:25:22+00:00

Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .

[Futsuu]

00:51:279 - 00:52:868 - I'd suggest to add 2 kats here to reflect more the intensity of the part, as it is it is a bit undermapped, even for a futsuu.

01:16:908 (14,15,16,17) - Swapping these to k d d k would definetly fit better for the vocals than d k k d.

[Muzukashii]

00:15:319 (2) - This note doesn't fit on any sounds and makes the pattern too long overall. Please delete it.

00:49:888 (69) - Considering the 3/2 snapping of these notes 00:50:385 (71,72) - I'd recommend deleting this note to make a small 1/1 break. Furthermore, this 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - is mapping to the instruments and not the vocals, making this note quite unfitting to the pattern.

01:05:584 - The break here is pretty big and breaks a bit the density of the kiai, also considering you mapped these 2 notes 01:07:173 (29,36) - .

[Oni]

00:01:014 - Weird to play, there is no actual beat here. I'd suggest simply deleting this note.

00:07:372 (32) - The density increase is pretty weird here, and the map is swapping from beats to piano without break which sounds odd. So same here, deleting this note would be necessary.

00:10:153 (44) - No finisher here although there are at 00:10:948 (47,50,53) - ?

00:15:021 - 00:15:815 - Add notes here to represent the build up better !

00:16:710 - 00:27:438 - This part feels a bit underwhelming compared to the build up. Consider adding a bit of density.

00:51:180 - 00:52:769 - What about triplets here ?

00:56:445 (67) - Either put a triplet or add a note at 00:56:345 - to emphasize the build up -> Here is though what I'd have made for this part
-> 00:55:054 -

I think there is a good flow with the doublets and quads, and it fits the song pretty well.
If you do this I don't recommend putting a finisher at 00:56:445 (70) - though.

00:58:829 (75,76,77,78) - What about only letting this note : 00:59:226 (77) - ? It would make a way better emphasis on the vocals than every note here.

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think you should use the same structure as 01:07:769 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - . As it is its a bit awkward, the second structure feels definetly better.

01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I understand you want to be along woth the piano here, however this feels a little bit sudden considering the density of the kiai and how you mapped it without thinking of the piano before, most of all folowing the vocals. I'd recommend deleting this note 01:14:425 (85) - .

01:24:061 (134,136) - Maybe removing these notes would make a better emphasis ?

That's all for now, call me back.

Last edited by Arrival 2017-05-18T00:38:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-05-17T23:01:17+00:00

Arrival wrote:
Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .
fixed.

[Futsuu]

00:51:279 - 00:52:868 - I'd suggest to add 2 kats here to reflect more the intensity of the part, as it is it is a bit undermapped, even for a futsuu.
ok, changed~

01:16:908 (14,15,16,17) - Swapping these to k d d k would definetly fit better for the vocals than k d d k.
ok, changed kd-dk

[Muzukashii]

00:15:319 (2) - This note doesn't fit on any sounds and makes the pattern too long overall. Please delete it.
ok, deleted.

00:49:888 (69) - Considering the 3/2 snapping of these notes 00:50:385 (71,72) - I'd recommend deleting this note to make a small 1/1 break. Furthermore, this 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - is mapping to the instruments and not the vocals, making this note quite unfitting to the pattern.

Certainly break is necessary.
But I think that I do not need a 1/1 interval break.
deleted 00:50:385 (71) -

For 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - , no change as a pattern of consistency. 00:45:517 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55) -

01:05:584 - The break here is pretty big and breaks a bit the density of the kiai, also considering you mapped these 2 notes 01:07:173 (29,36) -
ok
01:05:385 - add d
01:05:584 - add k

You should hear a high sound. I picked it up.
01:07:173 -
01:08:763 -

That's all for now, call me back.

Futsuu

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58531
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:PRESENTER (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:PRESENTER (TV Size)
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:Sanawieck
Version:yzrin's Futsuu
Source:DOG DAYS
Tags:elements garden nakamura kanata ending yuzu__rinrin
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OverallDifficulty:4
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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-05-18T11:03:36+00:00

Arrival wrote:
Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .
- ok

[Oni]

00:01:014 - Weird to play, there is no actual beat here. I'd suggest simply deleting this note.
- ok

00:07:372 (32) - The density increase is pretty weird here, and the map is swapping from beats to piano without break which sounds odd. So same here, deleting this note would be necessary.
- ok

00:10:153 (44) - No finisher here although there are at 00:10:948 (47,50,53) - ?
- added finisher

00:15:021 - 00:15:815 - Add notes here to represent the build up better !
- 00:15:021 added d 00:15:815 added k

00:16:710 - 00:27:438 - This part feels a bit underwhelming compared to the build up. Consider adding a bit of density.
- added little notes

00:51:180 - 00:52:769 - What about triplets here ?
- changed ddk

00:56:445 (67) - Either put a triplet or add a note at 00:56:345 - to emphasize the build up -> Here is though what I'd have made for this part
- it's difficult to 00:56:345 add note. no change
-> 00:55:054 - I think there is a good flow with the doublets and quads, and it fits the song pretty well.
If you do this I don't recommend putting a finisher at 00:56:445 (70) - though.
- change it

00:58:829 (75,76,77,78) - What about only letting this note : 00:59:226 (77) - ? It would make a way better emphasis on the vocals than every note here.
- it's unnatural to me. so deleted 00:58:829 (75,76,77,78)

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think you should use the same structure as 01:07:769 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - . As it is its a bit awkward, the second structure feels definetly better.
- ok changed

01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I understand you want to be along woth the piano here, however this feels a little bit sudden considering the density of the kiai and how you mapped it without thinking of the piano before, most of all folowing the vocals. I'd recommend deleting this note 01:14:425 (85) - .
- ok

01:24:061 (134,136) - Maybe removing these notes would make a better emphasis ?
- it's unnatural to delete these notes. no change

That's all for now, call me back.

Thank you Arrival !!!!

Arrival

1,418 posts

Joined June 2012

Arrival 2017-05-24T14:10:40+00:00

irc log

2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: 01:11:345 (49) - Remove this note in kantan so we have a 4/1 break in the kai
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: for new players
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: and I think everything is good

~~Do it and call me~~Done.

Everything seems good now. Good luck !

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-05-24T14:19:19+00:00

Arrival wrote:
irc log
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: 01:11:345 (49) - Remove this note in kantan so we have a 4/1 break in the kai
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: for new players
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: and I think everything is good

~~Do it and call me~~Done.

Everything seems good now. Good luck !

Arrival <3 Thank you !!

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-05-24T15:23:32+00:00

thanks Arrival :3

Skylish

1,069 posts

Joined June 2013

Skylish 2017-05-26T17:53:32+00:00

From my modding queue. My mod waiting for your mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[General]

> I am concerned by the title, there's no '(TV size)'in the official ED track:

[Kantan]

> 00:13:332 - how about end the spinner at this timing? You started the spinner at the beginning of piano chord, the ending should also follow the end of piano chords lol.

> 00:21:478 - this note is strong enough to be a Finisher in Kantan, Finish it to show the consistency better with Oni.

> 00:26:246 (17,18) - same case as above

> 00:50:087 - This should be another Finisher to show the high-pitch vocal and strong base drum hit.

> 01:06:577 - / 01:08:166 - I would like to suggest shifting them 1/4 forward to completely fit the vocal notes. As the spacing is large enough, it would not be a big problem for Kantan level players to hit these off-beat notes accurately imo.

> 01:28:233 - Finish it too, you put Finish on all piano chords likely.

[Oni]

> 00:00:816 - just directly use 80% in the red timing point and remove the green one, that's unnecessary.

> 00:13:332 - how about changing it to k, to show a mirror pattern with 00:12:140 (50,51,52) - , just like what you did at 00:10:551 (44,45,46) - / 00:11:345 (47,48,49) -

> 00:14:524 - change it to d can improve the flow and prevent kat-spamming

> 00:50:087 - same as Kantan's

> 00:51:676 - ^

> 00:16:412 - changing it to d can show a better emphases on those piano high-pitch notes at 00:16:312 (15,17) - , and also avoid spamming kat everywhere +_+

> 01:13:928 - remove this note to keep the consistency well with 01:01:213 - , variation is already done in the triplet at 01:14:127 -

> 01:19:292 - / 01:20:286 - / 01:20:882 - / 01:21:875 - Where are the Finishes, comapring with exactly the same pattern usage at the section of 00:50:087 -

> 01:21:875 - this part flaws the structure:

- missing vocal emphasis at 01:22:570 - which you were following actually
- repetitive usage of dons (similar case at 00:14:524 - )
- 01:22:670 - the flow of this stream is a rocky (anti-flow)
- 01:23:465 - / 01:23:663 - high-pitch notes with potential Finishers, using dons for displaying them seems not really that nice

How about this: 01:21:875 (119) -

+ 01:22:471 - ddd shows the vocal part well, matching the style at 00:36:378 -
+ 01:22:272 - changed to k to prevent accumulative uses of single colour, that'd be too boring otherwise
+ 01:22:769 - this note is removed to show a better seperation from vocal to instrumental part
+ 01:22:868 - the flow of stream is finely polished
+ 01:23:465 - / 01:23:663 - k k now to show the piano note

> 01:28:233 - / 01:28:829 - where are the Finishers again?

[yzrin's Futsuu]

! All of your difficulties have too strong vol., consider -15~20% of them, or follow Sana's settings.

> 00:10:153 (1) - ending it at 00:13:332 - fits the piano end as well, like what you did in Muzukashii

> 00:21:478 - Finish? It is strong enough to be a Finisher absolutely.

> 00:26:246 (28,29,30) - Finish them too since you emphasized them in Muzukashii.

> 00:30:617 - extend the spinner ending to this timing? It seemed you carelessly shortened the spinner.

> 00:45:120 - / 00:48:299 - Finish them as well? Loud instrumental part can be heard.

> 01:09:557 (24,27) - either they are on the accurate spots or they should be gone. They sound off (and actually they are really off lol) and do not have a really good gameplay effect. I think removal of them is just fine.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

! Vol. issue

> 00:00:816 -

Your current ver. is not identifiable to those hidden 3/2 patterns. You can feel it very clearly at 00:03:200 - / 00:07:968 - (check the mod below too)

> 00:05:186 - remove it to make the vocal outstand.

> 00:07:968 - a similar pattern at 00:03:200 - is expected here. 00:08:365 - shifting it 1/4 to match the 3/2 patterns.

> 00:21:478 - same in Futsuu

> 00:36:180 - shift it 1/2 forward to match the vocal and follow the style you used before at 00:06:974 -

> 00:48:299 - Finisher can still be used here

> 00:53:862 - triplet kat to express the vocal better?

> 01:27:041 - shift it 1/4 backward this time, you can understand why I am suggesting it

> 01:27:736 - changing it to d can improve the note flow better imo

[]

Please confirm the metadata, call me back when everything is settled.

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-05-27T01:23:49+00:00

Skylish wrote:
From my modding queue. My mod waiting for your mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[General]

> I am concerned by the title, there's no '(TV size)'in the official ED track:

PRESENTER Ranked map
[]
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/32725 old
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/316230
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/342603 new
[]
It is difficult for us to judge whether or not to attach it, because the notation oscillation has occurred on Ranked map.

I think that attaching TVsize makes it easier to understand, but I will leave this decision to Sana.

[yzrin's Futsuu]

! All of your difficulties have too strong vol., consider -15~20% of them, or follow Sana's settings.

fixed

> 00:10:153 (1) - ending it at 00:13:332 - fits the piano end as well, like what you did in Muzukashii
ok

> 00:21:478 - Finish? It is strong enough to be a Finisher absolutely.
ok

> 00:26:246 (28,29,30) - Finish them too since you emphasized them in Muzukashii.
ok

> 00:30:617 - extend the spinner ending to this timing? It seemed you carelessly shortened the spinner.
ok

> 00:45:120 - / 00:48:299 - Finish them as well? Loud instrumental part can be heard.
ok

> 01:09:557 (24,27) - either they are on the accurate spots or they should be gone. They sound off (and actually they are really off lol) and do not have a really good gameplay effect. I think removal of them is just fine.
ok

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

! Vol. issue

> 00:00:816 -

Your current ver. is not identifiable to those hidden 3/2 patterns. You can feel it very clearly at 00:03:200 - / 00:07:968 - (check the mod below too)
ok

> 00:05:186 - remove it to make the vocal outstand.
ok

> 00:07:968 - a similar pattern at 00:03:200 - is expected here. 00:08:365 - shifting it 1/4 to match the 3/2 patterns.
ok

> 00:21:478 - same in Futsuu
ok

> 00:36:180 - shift it 1/2 forward to match the vocal and follow the style you used before at 00:06:974 -
ok

> 00:48:299 - Finisher can still be used here
ok

> 00:53:862 - triplet kat to express the vocal better?
ok

> 01:27:041 - shift it 1/4 backward this time, you can understand why I am suggesting it
ok

> 01:27:736 - changing it to d can improve the note flow better imo
ok

[]

Please confirm the metadata, call me back when everything is settled.

Thanks Skylish! :3　

Sorry for simple reply. i'm busy lol

@Sanawieck 音量調節がおかしかったら変えても大丈夫です。W

ふつう

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むずかしい

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crim

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crim 2017-05-28T12:21:40+00:00

1/2

Skylish wrote:
From my modding queue. My mod waiting for your mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[General]

> I am concerned by the title, there's no '(TV size)'in the official ED track:

I'm very worried it T_T
the official track is full ver. but I didn't choose it (i chose Anime ED ver → https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz2hN0VbmFY )
so i think not have to remove (TV size)...

[Kantan]

> 00:13:332 - how about end the spinner at this timing? You started the spinner at the beginning of piano chord, the ending should also follow the end of piano chords lol.
- fixed

> 00:21:478 - this note is strong enough to be a Finisher in Kantan, Finish it to show the consistency better with Oni.
- fixed

> 00:26:246 (17,18) - same case as above
- fixed

> 00:50:087 - This should be another Finisher to show the high-pitch vocal and strong base drum hit.
- fixed

> 01:06:577 - / 01:08:166 - I would like to suggest shifting them 1/4 forward to completely fit the vocal notes. As the spacing is large enough, it would not be a big problem for Kantan level players to hit these off-beat notes accurately imo.
- fixed

> 01:28:233 - Finish it too, you put Finish on all piano chords likely.
- fixed !

i'm very busy. i couldn't reply your check of Oni.
tomorrow i'll reply it. sorry

Last edited by crim 2017-05-29T10:40:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Skylish

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Skylish 2017-05-28T23:30:12+00:00

There's still no '(TV size)' wording in the official ED.

I think there's necessary to remove it.

EDIT: Otherwise if you insist on using (TV size), may you find out the OST of it since I can't even find the album lol.

crim

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crim 2017-05-29T14:16:52+00:00

2/2

Skylish wrote:
From my modding queue. My mod waiting for your mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[Oni]

> 00:00:816 - just directly use 80% in the red timing point and remove the green one, that's unnecessary.
- it's a my mistake ;3 removed

> 00:13:332 - how about changing it to k, to show a mirror pattern with 00:12:140 (50,51,52) - , just like what you did at 00:10:551 (44,45,46) - / 00:11:345 (47,48,49) -
- fixed !

> 00:14:524 - change it to d can improve the flow and prevent kat-spamming
- fixed

> 00:50:087 - same as Kantan's
- ok

> 00:51:676 - ^
- ok :3

> 00:16:412 - changing it to d can show a better emphases on those piano high-pitch notes at 00:16:312 (15,17) - , and also avoid spamming kat everywhere +_+
- ok ! w !

> 01:13:928 - remove this note to keep the consistency well with 01:01:213 - , variation is already done in the triplet at 01:14:127 -
- ok ~ !

> 01:19:292 - / 01:20:286 - / 01:20:882 - / 01:21:875 - Where are the Finishes, comapring with exactly the same pattern usage at the section of 00:50:087 - 01:19:292 - / 01:20:286 - / 01:20:882 - added to Finisher.
but i don't think put finisher at 01:21:875 - i don't fell strong sound

> 01:21:875 - this part flaws the structure:

- missing vocal emphasis at 01:22:570 - which you were following actually
- repetitive usage of dons (similar case at 00:14:524 - )
- 01:22:670 - the flow of this stream is a rocky (anti-flow)
- 01:23:465 - / 01:23:663 - high-pitch notes with potential Finishers, using dons for displaying them seems not really that nice

How about this: 01:21:875 (119) -

+ 01:22:471 - ddd shows the vocal part well, matching the style at 00:36:378 -
+ 01:22:272 - changed to k to prevent accumulative uses of single colour, that'd be too boring otherwise
+ 01:22:769 - this note is removed to show a better seperation from vocal to instrumental part
+ 01:22:868 - the flow of stream is finely polished
+ 01:23:465 - / 01:23:663 - k k now to show the piano note
- i'm very worried your nice suggestion.
As a result, i put notes in this way

01:22:769 if don't put note, I feel that something is missing...

> 01:28:233 - / 01:28:829 - where are the Finishers again?
- ok!!

Please confirm the metadata, call me back when everything is settled.

Skylish wrote:
There's still no '(TV size)' wording in the official ED.

I think there's necessary to remove it.
- I see. remove :3

EDIT: Otherwise if you insist on using (TV size), may you find out the OST of it since I can't even find the album lol.

Skylish, thank you for modding !!!

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Skylish 2017-05-29T15:06:24+00:00

IRC checking with Sana

2017-05-29 22:18 Sanawieck: hi Skylish :3
2017-05-29 22:18 Skylish: hey

2017-05-29 22:19 Sanawieck: i updated my map. please check it ;3
2017-05-29 22:19 Skylish: np it please?
2017-05-29 22:20 Sanawieck: ok
2017-05-29 22:20 Sanawieck: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER]
2017-05-29 22:25 Skylish: did you really fix your Kantan?
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: I am pretty sure I am checking the most updated ver. https://puu.sh/w4ydI/92f770ee54.png
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: but I did not see you changed what you said to fix
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: for example: 00:13:332 -
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: did you make some mistakes when you updated the mapset? :thinking:
2017-05-29 22:28 Sanawieck: !?
2017-05-29 22:28 Sanawieck: Just a moment, please. T_T
2017-05-29 22:28 Skylish: no problem
2017-05-29 22:28 Skylish: I will be waiting
2017-05-29 22:32 Sanawieck: i couldn't update only Kantan diff ;w;
2017-05-29 22:32 Sanawieck: done... maybe...
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: sorry for long waiting
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: are you here/ free for a IRC checking?
2017-05-29 22:49 Sanawieck: okay :3
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: In Oni: 01:17:703 (101) -
2017-05-29 22:50 Skylish: 01:17:504 (100,101) -
2017-05-29 22:50 Skylish: ctrl+G (d k) to follow the vocal pitch better?
2017-05-29 22:51 Sanawieck: ok !!
2017-05-29 22:51 Sanawieck: changed !w!
2017-05-29 22:55 Skylish: 01:26:445 (144,145) -
2017-05-29 22:55 Skylish: ctrl+G too? same reason
2017-05-29 22:57 Sanawieck: ok :3 i think so too
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: I think that's all
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: do you have anything want to ask?
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: otherwise I am going to re-bubble the mapset as the title is changed
2017-05-29 23:00 Sanawieck: nope !
2017-05-29 23:00 Sanawieck: i'll update
2017-05-29 23:00 Skylish: okay please update
2017-05-29 23:01 Skylish: oh forget to mention, would you like to change the HP of Oni from 5 to 6?
2017-05-29 23:01 Sanawieck: done
2017-05-29 23:02 Skylish: good
2017-05-29 23:02 Skylish: lol your 'done' is refering to the updating action
2017-05-29 23:03 Sanawieck: www
2017-05-29 23:03 Sanawieck: i want to keep HP
2017-05-29 23:03 Skylish: you think HP=5 in Oni is fine?
2017-05-29 23:03 Skylish: just asking, not challenging you
2017-05-29 23:04 Sanawieck: oh
2017-05-29 23:04 Sanawieck: i'll change HP 6 of oni ww
2017-05-29 23:04 Skylish: okay, (maybe you were a bit confused few mintues ago
2017-05-29 23:05 Skylish: plesae update it again, sorry for late noticing
2017-05-29 23:05 Sanawieck: ok updated

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crim 2017-05-29T15:36:19+00:00

Skylish wrote:
IRC checking with Sana
2017-05-29 22:18 Sanawieck: hi Skylish :3
2017-05-29 22:18 Skylish: hey
2017-05-29 22:19 Sanawieck: i updated my map. please check it ;3
2017-05-29 22:19 Skylish: np it please?
2017-05-29 22:20 Sanawieck: ok
2017-05-29 22:20 Sanawieck: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER]
2017-05-29 22:25 Skylish: did you really fix your Kantan?
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: I am pretty sure I am checking the most updated ver. https://puu.sh/w4ydI/92f770ee54.png
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: but I did not see you changed what you said to fix
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: for example: 00:13:332 -
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: did you make some mistakes when you updated the mapset? :thinking:
2017-05-29 22:28 Sanawieck: !?
2017-05-29 22:28 Sanawieck: Just a moment, please. T_T
2017-05-29 22:28 Skylish: no problem
2017-05-29 22:28 Skylish: I will be waiting
2017-05-29 22:32 Sanawieck: i couldn't update only Kantan diff ;w;
2017-05-29 22:32 Sanawieck: done... maybe...
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: sorry for long waiting
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: are you here/ free for a IRC checking?
2017-05-29 22:49 Sanawieck: okay :3
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: In Oni: 01:17:703 (101) -
2017-05-29 22:50 Skylish: 01:17:504 (100,101) -
2017-05-29 22:50 Skylish: ctrl+G (d k) to follow the vocal pitch better?
2017-05-29 22:51 Sanawieck: ok !!
2017-05-29 22:51 Sanawieck: changed !w!
2017-05-29 22:55 Skylish: 01:26:445 (144,145) -
2017-05-29 22:55 Skylish: ctrl+G too? same reason
2017-05-29 22:57 Sanawieck: ok :3 i think so too
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: I think that's all
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: do you have anything want to ask?
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: otherwise I am going to re-bubble the mapset as the title is changed
2017-05-29 23:00 Sanawieck: nope !
2017-05-29 23:00 Sanawieck: i'll update
2017-05-29 23:00 Skylish: okay please update
2017-05-29 23:01 Skylish: oh forget to mention, would you like to change the HP of Oni from 5 to 6?
2017-05-29 23:01 Sanawieck: done
2017-05-29 23:02 Skylish: good
2017-05-29 23:02 Skylish: lol your 'done' is refering to the updating action
2017-05-29 23:03 Sanawieck: www
2017-05-29 23:03 Sanawieck: i want to keep HP
2017-05-29 23:03 Skylish: you think HP=5 in Oni is fine?
2017-05-29 23:03 Skylish: just asking, not challenging you
2017-05-29 23:04 Sanawieck: oh
2017-05-29 23:04 Sanawieck: i'll change HP 6 of oni ww
2017-05-29 23:04 Skylish: okay, (maybe you were a bit confused few mintues ago
2017-05-29 23:05 Skylish: plesae update it again, sorry for late noticing
2017-05-29 23:05 Sanawieck: ok updated

Reset Bubble~

Metadata check: p/6035939

Thank you for Bubble <3

Arrival

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Arrival 2017-05-30T16:33:15+00:00

We had a talk with Skylish and Nardoxyribonucleic about these notes in Kantan 01:06:676 (43,45) -

They should be reverted to red ticks for something easier.

Call me immedietly after that

yuzu__rinrin

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yuzu__rinrin 2017-05-30T16:46:38+00:00

asleePnkmjp

crim

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crim 2017-05-30T19:12:39+00:00

Arrival wrote:
We had a talk with Skylish and Nardoxyribonucleic about these notes in Kantan 01:06:676 (43,45) -

They should be reverted to red ticks for something easier.
- changed !!

Call me immedietly after that

Arrival

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Arrival 2017-05-30T19:28:34+00:00

Everything is fine, good luck !

Surono

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Surono 2017-05-30T19:29:20+00:00

hey congrats pnkmhjy%#%#jgp for first rank map! owo

crim

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crim 2017-05-30T19:34:59+00:00

Arrival wrote:
Everything is fine, good luck !

Thank you Arrival !! >w<

crim

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crim 2017-05-30T19:35:34+00:00

Surono wrote:
hey congrats pnkmhjy%#%#jgp (!?!?!?!?) for first rank map! owo

Thank you Suronoooooooooo !!

yuzu__rinrin

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yuzu__rinrin 2017-05-30T22:13:15+00:00

1stRankedおめでとうヾ(｡>﹏<｡)ﾉﾞ

crim

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crim 2017-05-30T22:24:44+00:00

yuzu__rinrin wrote:
1stRankedおめでとうヾ(｡>﹏<｡)ﾉﾞ

ありがとうううう！٩(๑òωó๑)۶

toara_fict

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toara_fict 2017-05-31T03:04:10+00:00

あら＾～

Y O U T A

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Y O U T A 2017-05-31T04:04:58+00:00

1st Ranked おめでとう！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

alacat

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alacat 2017-05-31T04:20:26+00:00

おめでとうございます。Romanised Artistですが、過去のRanked mapより公式の表記が優先されます。CDや公式サイトを見るとYui Horieと表記されているので、変更するべきだと思います。変更する際にPMください〜

crim

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crim 2017-05-31T04:50:48+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
あら＾～

あ＾〜

Y O U T A wrote:
1st Ranked おめでとう！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

ありがとう！！･:*+.(( °ω° ))/.:+

crim

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crim 2017-05-31T04:55:09+00:00

alacat wrote:
おめでとうございます。Romanised Artistですが、過去のRanked mapより公式の表記が優先されます。CDや公式サイトを見るとYui Horieと表記されているので、変更するべきだと思います。変更する際にPMください〜

ありがとうございます。
Romanised Artistについては現在pcに触れられない状況なので今日の夜頃に改めてご連絡致します。

alacat

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alacat 2017-05-31T10:50:46+00:00

Disqualify for change the artist to "Yui Horie"

http://king-cr.jp/artist/horie/profile/

crim

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crim 2017-05-31T10:57:42+00:00

alacat wrote:
Disqualify for change the artist to "Yui Horie"

http://king-cr.jp/artist/horie/profile/

fixed !

alacat

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alacat 2017-05-31T12:16:22+00:00

ok, Back~

yuzu__rinrin

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yuzu__rinrin 2017-05-31T12:22:12+00:00

(｡◕ˇдˇ◕｡)/

Skylish

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Skylish 2017-05-31T13:07:27+00:00

I should~~snap~~ slap myself.... I only checked the TITLE, but not the ARTIST, even though I had already provided the Source....

#shameonskylish

I am sorry that you need to suffer a DQ for your first ranked mapset, I am so sorry, sana....

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Charlotte

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Charlotte 2017-05-31T13:09:08+00:00

おめでとう

crim

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crim 2017-05-31T13:19:53+00:00

alacat wrote:
ok, Back~

ありがとうございます～！

crim

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crim 2017-05-31T13:21:24+00:00

Skylish wrote:
I should~~snap~~ slap myself.... I only checked the TITLE, but not the ARTIST, even though I had already provided the Source....

#shameonskylish

I am sorry that you need to suffer a DQ for your first ranked mapset, I am so sorry, sana....

No problem...!!!!! :3
I'm really grateful for you <3

Charlotte wrote:
おめでとう

ありがとうございます～！！！

Surono

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Surono 2017-05-31T14:14:40+00:00

regratz pnkpjpmpgpgpgp :3

Skylish wrote:
I should~~snap~~ slap myself.... I only checked the TITLE, but not the ARTIST, even though I had already provided the Source....

#shameonskylish

I am sorry that you need to suffer a DQ for your first ranked mapset, I am so sorry, sana....

cute Stylish, im proud of you. <3

toara_fict

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toara_fict 2017-05-31T16:58:20+00:00