1. Advanced (2.6 stars, 266 notes)
2. Easy (1.49 stars, 108 notes)
3. Extra (5.35 stars, 450 notes)
4. Habi's Insane (4.57 stars, 375 notes)
5. Hard (3.57 stars, 341 notes)
6. Insane (4.62 stars, 390 notes)
7. Normal (1.7 stars, 154 notes)

Tsuruno wrote:

梦回打卡

[ Abhor ] wrote:

太强了。。。4天一个SET就快做完了ORZ

1. Isn't there a video you can use?
2. I suggest you to mention the metadata on the topic's first post

1. 00:45:843 (1) - This slider is actually out of the screen and it's unrankable.
2. 00:53:410 (5) - I would set NC here for consistency and for new vocal phase
3. 01:09:627 (1) - Missing clap on the reverse arrow
4. 01:19:917 (4) - Missing clap here as well, same on 01:28:565 (5)
5. 01:39:376 (2) - I would move this circle some grid upwards as well. It's not out of screen like before but it's covered by accuracy bar and looks ugly in my honest opinion xD Try to avoid this if you can do it without destroying the spacing of next elements
6. 01:44:241 (3) - NC for new higher vocal pitch
7. 01:48:025 (2) - Out of the screen!

1. I think the AR is a bit high being the BPM high. I would decrease it by 1 tick or by 0.5x manually from .osu file.
2. 00:55:032 (1) - I feel like this part is so empty without hitsounding. Consider to add clap on this circle or something else, on 00:55:572 (2) 's tail and so on on other elements as well to make it more enjoyable to hear while clicking it
3. 01:09:627 (1) - Missing clap
4. 01:19:917 (3) - Missing clap here and on 01:28:565 (4) (well, same for other diffs I guess I won't mention them again v_v)
5. 01:33:971 (2,3,4) - Check the spacing between these elements, it doesn't look the same actually

1. 00:36:789 (1) - I personally dislike how this slider is connected with the previous one actually. I would make it straight instead moving the tail on the right: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8961224 it connects better the pattern and it gets a better flow
2. 00:50:167 (1) - There should be a clap hitsound on the white tick. I do not understand why this slider ends here honestly xP Being an advanced diff, you can easily reduce this slider by 1/2 so you can add clap on its tail and a circle on the red tick where the slider is actually snapped

1. 00:18:816 (1) - Shouldn't be the red combo set on here like you did for advanced diff? idk just wondering
2. 00:44:897 (1,2) - I would swap these NC so you can use the red combo on the actual (2) to emphasize that bell sound in the music like you did for Advanced diff
3. 01:10:978 (6) - I do not get this antijump tbh xD Stack it with 01:10:167 (3) instead?

1. 00:02:329 (2,3) - I think CTRL + G them would make the pattern more natural to play
2. 00:03:410 (3) - I do not like how this slider appears tbh xD What about moving the red point some grid below so it looks like this? I think it's too pushed right now making it bad and ugly: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8961290
3. 00:04:424 (5) - Delete circle? It looks overmapped (there is no sound on the blue tick) and it is also actually inconsistent with other parts
4. 00:08:275 (6) - I would stack this with the slider's tail instead because it looks to forced there imo. If you do so try to move 00:08:410 (7) somewhere else as well
5. 00:41:924 (3) - This slider's tail is still out of the screen! >w<
6. 02:02:619 (1) - I would move this circle somewhere else because it's covered by accuracy bar and it looks ugly

1. 00:02:464 (3) - Same here, still covered by accuracy bar. I would move the whole 00:02:194 (1,2,3) some grid upward so you can have a more balanced starting jump between 00:02:464 (3,1) that opens the map more properly
2. 00:04:424 (4) - Same opinion of Insane diff
3. 00:06:113 (3) - Move this at x: 392 y:92? You would obtain a more efficient pattern and flow while jumping: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8961362
4. 00:12:464 (2,3) - I feel this antijump kinda unconfortable to play and I would avoid it just placing the (3) somewhere else instead
5. 00:13:072 (5) - Same of 00:04:424 (4) for this circle as well
6. 00:17:329 (5) - You know <3
7. 00:18:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - oh wow @_@
8. 01:03:320 (1) - I feel this circle off time because if you listen properly with 25% playback rate it should be snapped on the red tick where the vocal starts and I feel like if this circle 01:05:482 (1) should be snapped on the blue tick for the same reason, same for 01:07:645 (1) and so on. I do not have a really good hearing but I am not 100% sure this part is 1/3 even if it looks so.. I would check more carefully here, same for other diffs as well! (I noticed it just now sorry so I mention it).
9. 01:28:025 (4,5,6) - Fix the spacing on this triple because the (5) looks further from (4)'s tail comparing it with the spacing you used for between the circles
10. 01:46:944 (3) - If you want to keep this stack consider to make it more readable because actually it's a bit hard to get it at the first try. It's the same for 01:55:592 (3). I guess this is given by being set on white colour that make it more flashing during kiai time because I didn't have any kind of problem at read this 01:51:268 (3) at the first try tho
11. 01:54:241 (2) - Check the stack xP It is not perfectly stacked with slider's tail

Chewin wrote:

From my M4M Queue (´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀)

General

1. Isn't there a video you can use? actually I cut mp3, and if I put video in, it means I need to cut video also, and thats just too much for me orz.....
2. I suggest you to mention the metadata on the topic's first postlet me find somebody check it for me first.

Easy

1. 00:45:843 (1) - This slider is actually out of the screen and it's unrankable.
2. 00:53:410 (5) - I would set NC here for consistency and for new vocal phase
3. 01:09:627 (1) - Missing clap on the reverse arrow
4. 01:19:917 (4) - Missing clap here as well, same on 01:28:565 (5)
5. 01:39:376 (2) - I would move this circle some grid upwards as well. It's not out of screen like before but it's covered by accuracy bar and looks ugly in my honest opinion xD Try to avoid this if you can do it without destroying the spacing of next elements
6. 01:44:241 (3) - NC for new higher vocal pitch
7. 01:48:025 (2) - Out of the screen!

fix all！
Normal

1. I think the AR is a bit high being the BPM high. I would decrease it by 1 tick or by 0.5x manually from .osu file.
2. 00:55:032 (1) - I feel like this part is so empty without hitsounding. Consider to add clap on this circle or something else, on 00:55:572 (2) 's tail and so on on other elements as well to make it more enjoyable to hear while clicking it
3. 01:09:627 (1) - Missing clap
4. 01:19:917 (3) - Missing clap here and on 01:28:565 (4) (well, same for other diffs I guess I won't mention them again v_v)
5. 01:33:971 (2,3,4) - Check the spacing between these elements, it doesn't look the same actually

fix all！
Advanced

1. 00:36:789 (1) - I personally dislike how this slider is connected with the previous one actually. I would make it straight instead moving the tail on the right: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8961224 it connects better the pattern and it gets a better flow
2. 00:50:167 (1) - There should be a clap hitsound on the white tick. I do not understand why this slider ends here honestly xP Being an advanced diff, you can easily reduce this slider by 1/2 so you can add clap on its tail and a circle on the red tick where the slider is actually snapped

fix allLLLLLLLL！
Hard

1. 00:18:816 (1) - Shouldn't be the red combo set on here like you did for advanced diff? idk just wondering
2. 00:44:897 (1,2) - I would swap these NC so you can use the red combo on the actual (2) to emphasize that bell sound in the music like you did for Advanced diff
3. 01:10:978 (6) - I do not get this antijump tbh xD Stack it with 01:10:167 (3) instead?

yep I totally agree, why I try to do this '-'?..
fix all！
Insane

1. 00:02:329 (2,3) - I think CTRL + G them would make the pattern more natural to play
2. 00:03:410 (3) - I do not like how this slider appears tbh xD What about moving the red point some grid below so it looks like this? I think it's too pushed right now making it bad and ugly: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8961290
3. 00:04:424 (5) - Delete circle? It looks overmapped (there is no sound on the blue tick) and it is also actually inconsistent with other parts
4. 00:08:275 (6) - I would stack this with the slider's tail instead because it looks to forced there imo. If you do so try to move 00:08:410 (7) somewhere else as wellIm...kind like what flow here has right now, but if somebody say it again I will change it<3
5. 00:41:924 (3) - This slider's tail is still out of the screen! >w<
6. 02:02:619 (1) - I would move this circle somewhere else because it's covered by accuracy bar and it looks ugly

fix all/
Extra

1. 00:02:464 (3) - Same here, still covered by accuracy bar. I would move the whole 00:02:194 (1,2,3) some grid upward so you can have a more balanced starting jump between 00:02:464 (3,1) that opens the map more properly
2. 00:04:424 (4) - Same opinion of Insane diff
3. 00:06:113 (3) - Move this at x: 392 y:92? You would obtain a more efficient pattern and flow while jumping: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8961362
4. 00:12:464 (2,3) - I feel this antijump kinda unconfortable to play and I would avoid it just placing the (3) somewhere else instead
5. 00:13:072 (5) - Same of 00:04:424 (4) for this circle as well
6. 00:17:329 (5) - You know <3
7. 00:18:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - oh wow @_@ haha xD, if is tooooooooo crazy I will change that sometimes, now just for fun
8. 01:03:320 (1) - I feel this circle off time because if you listen properly with 25% playback rate it should be snapped on the red tick where the vocal starts and I feel like if this circle 01:05:482 (1) should be snapped on the blue tick for the same reason, same for 01:07:645 (1) and so on. I do not have a really good hearing but I am not 100% sure this part is 1/3 even if it looks so.. I would check more carefully here, same for other diffs as well! (I noticed it just now sorry so I mention it).
9. 01:28:025 (4,5,6) - Fix the spacing on this triple because the (5) looks further from (4)'s tail comparing it with the spacing you used for between the circles
10. 01:46:944 (3) - If you want to keep this stack consider to make it more readable because actually it's a bit hard to get it at the first try. It's the same for 01:55:592 (3). I guess this is given by being set on white colour that make it more flashing during kiai time because I didn't have any kind of problem at read this 01:51:268 (3) at the first try thohmmmm if somebody say it again I will fix
11. 01:54:241 (2) - Check the stack xP It is not perfectly stacked with slider's tail

fix all
Comment on the mapset: Easy, Normal, Hard, Advanced and (have some doubt about Insane flow but I guess this is a personal taste) are very well made. About the Extra I have felt a bit in troubles to mod it properly because this is a different style compared to nowdays extra that makes you feel while modding like "wow i do not know how to behave with this because the style is so particular" (I can write this because I know very well your maps and your mapping style xP) so.. to be able to comment it properly I should testplay it but I couldn't play now TwT TwT I will try to find some test player first, but hope you also could be one of the player when you can play

That's all by me, I wish you good luck tutuhaha!

z1085684963 wrote:

我可以做个假的aho ex嘛

Hollow Wings wrote:

是的，谁敢反对2ha，就打烂他的狗头

Extra

1. 00:10:708 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉这段跳略大了特别最后41那里，要么小点。
2. 00:53:590 (1,2,3,4) - 突然的1/3，间距务必变更大。
3. 01:13:836 (5,1) - 突然的跳放在这很突兀，建议改小这里，然后把这种大跳用在类似01:16:538 (2,3) - 或者01:25:187 (2,3) - 这种地方，会比较合vocal轨。
4. 01:37:214 (1,2) - 和01:45:322 (1,2,3,4) - 大概懂这里为毛是红combo不过感觉没那么必要。还有02:10:187 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也是。
5. 什么，2ha用了大段对称，这不是我认识的2ha噗。。。

Insane： 这i好难，好多遮挡，本身没啥问题。比考斯habi拖了我的gd orz
Hard & Advanced：你为毛那么熟练啊。因为我酷到爆
Normal：00:30:437 (3,2) - 逼死强迫症。为什么我没有发现！
Easy：01:11:248 (2,1) - 最低难度建议不要轻易stack。[/color]

为什么要写那么多，直接飞不好吗？其实是写不出来啥。

good luck!

Hollow Wings wrote:

是的，谁敢反对2ha，就打烂他的狗头

Extra

1. 00:10:708 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉这段跳略大了特别最后41那里，要么小点。
2. 00:53:590 (1,2,3,4) - 突然的1/3，间距务必变更大。
3. 01:13:836 (5,1) - 突然的跳放在这很突兀，建议改小这里，然后把这种大跳用在类似01:16:538 (2,3) - 或者01:25:187 (2,3) - 这种地方，会比较合vocal轨。
4. 01:37:214 (1,2) - 和01:45:322 (1,2,3,4) - 大概懂这里为毛是红combo不过感觉没那么必要。还有02:10:187 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也是。
5. 什么，2ha用了大段对称，这不是我认识的2ha噗。。。

Insane： 这i好难，好多遮挡，本身没啥问题。
Hard & Advanced：你为毛那么熟练啊。
Normal：00:30:437 (3,2) - 逼死强迫症。
Easy：01:11:248 (2,1) - 最低难度建议不要轻易stack。

为什么要写那么多，直接飞不好吗？其实是写不出来啥。

good luck!

Stormiverse wrote:

NM from my QQQQQ!

Wow, this is a really good set. I'm having trouble finding stuff to fix
All I can do now is blanket stuff which isn't very useful
No kudos plz.

[Normal]

00:39:356 (1) - fix blanket

SPOILER

00:40:437 (2,3) - check Distance Snap between these, why 1.2x?
00:41:518 (1) - blanket

SPOILER

00:43:005 (3) -

SPOILER

01:12:890 (3) -

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:08:816 (1) - maybe copy 00:08:410 (3) - instead?

[Insane]

00:42:599 (1) -

SPOILER

01:18:836 (2) - this is a 1/2 jump in 222bpm, so you can blanket 01:18:295 (1) -
01:26:944 (1) - minor fix to achieve perfection

SPOILER

Again, no kudos plz.

~

Hollow Wings wrote:

为什么要写那么多，直接飞不好吗？

Tsuruno wrote:

我有一个想法

Hollow Wings wrote:

为什么要写那么多，直接飞不好吗？

HabiHolic wrote:

Sorry for late tutuhaha T.T

My Insane diff!

Habi's Insane

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 2059
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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Bookmarks: 18811
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:Unknown Mother-Goose
TitleUnicode:アンノウン・マザーグース
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:tutuhaha
Version:Habi's Insane
Source:
Tags:vocaloid hatsune miku cut ver
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:658008

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.68
SliderTickRate:1

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88,168,100863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,168,100998,6,0,L|96:120,1,42,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,28,101268,2,0,L|158:69,1,42,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,120,101538,1,4,0:0:0:0:
304,56,101673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,101809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,102079,6,0,L|408:232,1,126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,348,102619,2,0,L|376:304,1,42,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,102890,2,0,L|303:245,1,42,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,307,103160,6,0,P|205:292|163:296,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,320,103565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,320,103700,2,0,L|80:276,1,42,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,136,103971,2,0,L|64:180,1,42,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,104241,6,0,P|223:224|275:192,1,126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,176,104781,2,0,P|327:159|275:192,1,126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,244,105322,6,0,P|468:188|452:128,1,126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,105863,2,0,L|408:344,1,168,4|4,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,352,106673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,106809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,106944,2,0,L|168:344,1,84,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,220,107484,6,0,L|104:212,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,164,107890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,164,108025,2,0,P|176:120|160:76,1,84,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,7,108565,6,0,P|304:68|324:126,1,126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,172,109106,2,0,L|476:160,1,84,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,109646,2,0,L|216:248,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,248,110052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,248,110187,1,4,0:0:0:0:
144,168,110457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,95,110727,6,0,P|46:152|56:214,1,126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,280,111268,2,0,L|96:368,1,84,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,160,111809,2,0,L|244:76,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,112349,2,0,L|336:264,2,42,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,112890,6,0,P|83:227|28:200,2,126,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,40,113971,2,0,L|100:128,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,123,114376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,123,114511,1,4,0:0:0:0:
216,292,114781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,168,115052,6,0,P|348:134|286:139,1,126,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,96,115592,2,0,L|224:12,1,84,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,116133,2,0,L|64:296,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,116673,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,364,116809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,116944,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,276,117214,6,0,B|296:240|296:240|228:256,1,126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,117754,2,0,P|200:152|200:112,1,84,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,24,118295,2,0,P|104:62|104:104,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,118700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,118836,1,4,0:0:0:0:
296,132,119106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,119376,6,0,L|56:256,1,126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
15,188,119917,2,0,P|24:147|15:106,1,84,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,24,120457,2,0,P|182:64|191:105,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,105,120863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,105,120998,1,4,0:0:0:0:
296,216,121268,1,4,0:0:0:0:
456,104,121538,6,0,L|324:88,2,126,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,122619,2,0,L|488:292,1,84,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,291,123025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,291,123160,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,356,123430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,123700,6,0,L|276:160,1,42,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,76,123971,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,175,124106,2,0,P|74:175|39:152,1,84,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,44,124511,6,0,L|100:96,1,42,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,264,124781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,236,124917,2,0,P|224:188|224:152,1,84,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,72,125322,2,0,L|336:80,1,42,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,176,125592,2,0,L|456:184,1,42,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,264,125863,6,0,P|456:280|432:312,1,84,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,368,126268,2,0,L|268:356,1,84,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,272,126673,2,0,L|216:268,1,42,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,344,126944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,284,127079,2,0,P|12:236|12:188,1,84,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,124,127484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,188,127619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,188,128025,6,0,L|304:176,1,84,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,128430,2,0,L|364:168,1,84,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,92,128836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,248,128971,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,320,129106,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,320,129241,2,0,L|184:312,1,84,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,264,129646,2,0,L|108:220,1,42,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,160,129917,2,0,L|16:116,1,42,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,40,130187,6,0,P|132:48|160:72,1,84,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,128,130592,2,0,L|328:120,1,84,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,72,130998,2,0,P|400:48|388:32,1,42,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,136,131268,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,136,131403,2,0,L|480:228,1,84,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,296,131809,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,200,131944,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Yugu wrote:

占着坑先不拉x
cao，写了那么久的摸结果垃圾服务器页面崩溃全美丽 fxxk you ppy
先凭印象还原一下(估计会还原出来个水摸)

Extra

按照2hahahahahahahahahahahahaha姐姐的风格应该不会管overlap和包

00:05:572 (3,1,2) - 间距不同，不知道是无意的还是故意的，是我我会弄相同fix
00:06:383 (4,5) - 跳有点大，感觉音乐没有那么激烈fix
00:10:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 根据voice摆的话间距递减比较好调了一点点
00:18:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉这段有点混乱，感觉跟着voice也不是很清楚米有办法惹
00:19:716 (6,1) - 要叠不叠的状态有点尴尬，但是后面的滑条又要弄对称这个还ok？
00:22:464 (2) - 似曾相识的滑条啊哈哈
00:36:654 (1,2,3,4,1) - 有点不太好看(fix
00:45:572 (2,2) - 感觉滑条形状有点关联性比较好(看)orz
00:54:131 (4) - 改成顺时针吧fix
00:53:590 (1,2,3) - 感觉这里切节奏也给点提示?都加红了还没提示！
01:05:572 (2,3,4) - 感觉这几个折返打起来有点拗手，是因为中间的折返凹进去的缘故吗先酱紫，要是有人挑的话我就改
01:15:052 (1,2,3) - 这个间距不同fix
02:02:619 (1,2,3,4,1) - 啊啊啊啊啊，为什么不是个五角星fix

美丽

Insane

让我回想下之前的摸，反正也不是很大的摸

00:18:816 (5) - 切了节奏NC?
01:16:538 (2,3) - 和这类似的节奏的stack要不要分清一点?因为这段的stack包含挺多不同节奏的(1/2，1/1，3/4)，怕读混
fix
美丽

摸不动了，溜了溜了
(为啥后面一段是kiai，我听着前面那段倒像是kiai)

Hollow Wings wrote:

为什么要写那么多，直接飞不好吗？

a32 wrote:

前三个难度是刚开始摸的 结果继续的时候更新了...如果有已经改的请无视

[Easy]
00:45:843 (1) – 这个好像快出去了..
00:52:329 (3,4) – 我觉得slider提前1/2做一个往返可能更好一点?
00:55:572 (1) - 感觉放在左右对称的地方好看些
01:09:627 (1) - 感觉可以加3个clap(或者都加finish) 现在只有一个finish有点太单薄
01:19:917 (4) – 漏了个clap
01:28:565 (5) – 同样漏音效了 这个地方用finish感觉也不错
02:03:700 (1) – 换成默认的soft-finish可能更好听?

[Normal]
01:09:627 01:10:167 01:10:708 这三个地方加clap?
01:16:133 (1,2,3) -感觉排的不太齐 ds也有点差距 可以修改一下
01:19:917 (3) – 漏了个clap(好像和easy一样的地方 难道是故意的吗 不过感觉还是加的好)
01:28:565 (4) – 见easy
01:44:241 (1,2,3) – 让3和1的尾部 关于2对称 感觉更好看

[Advanced]
00:45:302 (2) – 感觉这里头部同样需要一个whistle
00:50:167 (1) – 和前面统一柑橘更好 这边突然换了下法感觉有点奇怪
01:10:167 (2) – 头部要不finish要不clap吧 空着总觉得有点空了(好像E和N那边也是差不多 不想加当然也没太大问题)
01:19:917 (4) – clap

[Hard]
00:02:194 (1) – 音量可以稍微小一点

[Insane]
00:53:951 (3,4) – 间距突然变大有点难读感觉
01:48:295 (4) – 往右下放一点个人柑橘更好看

[Extra]
00:15:302 (3,4) – 感觉两个位置对调更顺手点
00:21:113 (4) – 好像不是很对称 感觉可以修正一下
00:53:590 (1,2,3,4) -感觉有点奇怪(2 3 对调一下试试?)
01:16:673 (3) -这个滑条好像没拉好..?

感觉通篇都在乱挑刺 根本mod不出东西 质量太高了
祝早日rank! 另外期待有人做full ver. 后面有一段超好听的!

Saturnalize wrote:

dry bass for the second half in case you're interested. I haven't test the volume, though

wwwwwwwowaka

extra
00:36:924 (3,4) - this can have a ctrl+g to give more back and forth movement (right now from 1 to 1 NC is up up down up, with ctrl+g it would be up down up down)

insen
02:08:025 (1) - Since the extra has notes here, I think it would be better to map this part also. Kick slider would be good to prevent difficulty spike

adv
00:18:816 (1,1) - would be boring if this easier hard diff has spinner here, the vocal is actually good enough to put slider. Something like this >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8996667

no kd

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

清群mod单
[normal]
01:07:464 (1,2) - 锐角flow 好像不太舒服
[adv]
00:33:140 (2,4) - 把这俩删了简化一下节奏 毕竟222bpm 1/2单戳对于新人【】 后同
01:44:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 改成四个滑条
01:50:727 (1) - 前面是3/4我觉得这个也应该3/4 后同

[Hard]
00:45:032 (1,1) - 擦的很微妙 改一下吧
01:19:781 (5) - 改成1/4滑条？ 我觉得折返点没有音
01:26:403 (1,2) - 老实说我觉得很丑了【】
01:35:592 (1,2) - ^
01:40:457 (3,3) - 擦到了
01:39:917 (1,2,3) - 打起来不舒服【】
01:43:160 (1,1) - 擦到了
01:44:241 (1,1) - ^
我觉得需要一个lightinsane
insane
00:13:816 (2,2) - 这个 擦得也蛮微妙呢


啊 不会摸

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

requested by kanor

General
一样可以把ボーカロイド 初音ミク 这种日文也加tag里

Easy
01:44:241 (1) - 这nc感觉不是很有必要，可以去掉
改！
Advanced
01:17:214 (3,4,5) - 这如果是想摆个等边三角形的话那看上去不太等边

Hard
00:18:816 (1,2,3) - 这里两个滑条的头能和note在一条直线上会比较好看，比如下图这样：

~

改！
Insane
00:18:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I里面这一长串1/6实在太难了，换成四个折返滑条比较好吧
01:45:727 (6,7,8) - 这里其实挺容易读成1/4单点的，可以像01:28:025 (4,5,6) - 这样拉开点距离来好识别是个1/8三连
改！

Hollow Wings wrote:

为什么要写那么多，直接飞不好吗？

1. 00:54:762 - i dont understand why you didnt mapped this section on insane and higher diffs. since you mapped it on lower diffs doesnt make sense to skip it since you have more freedom in harder diffs

1. i know its an easy diff and rhythm should be simplified for the sake of being friendly to beginners but i think you went too far. most of the beginning is a chain of 3/4 sliders, later we have really low density sections where i cant differentiate which layer of the music are you following and in general very repetitive and not so representative of the song rhythms until the end. you reached a point where the map doesnt represent the music anymore.
   since your normal diff is under 2* stars and complies with the difficulty-specific criteria id suggest to just remove this diff. not every song supports a easy diff and considering the bpm and some complex rhythms like the ones on this section 00:53:410 -01:11:248 - id say this song is one of these.
   in case you still want to keep the diff ill suggest you to focus your mapping on anything but drums since these are the ones making most of your rhythms monotone and dont be afraid of making the diff more dense if that makes it more representative of the song

1. 00:37:194 (1) - i think you forgot to add a break here cuz all the higher diffs have them here
2. 00:43:681 (1,2,3) - the note thats closer to (1) is (3) and that will be misleading for newer players. having a more clear path between notes would be nice
   didnt took a deep look at the diff but its mostly fine

1. 01:19:781 (5) - must be a 1/8 with just one reverse according to the music

pkhg wrote:

[General]

1. 00:54:762 - i dont understand why you didnt mapped this section on insane and higher diffs. since you mapped it on lower diffs doesnt make sense to skip it since you have more freedom in harder diffs

hmmm...cuz Im litter bit wrong about how to do for those rhythm so....

[Easy]

1. i know its an easy diff and rhythm should be simplified for the sake of being friendly to beginners but i think you went too far. most of the beginning is a chain of 3/4 sliders, later we have really low density sections where i cant differentiate which layer of the music are you following and in general very repetitive and not so representative of the song rhythms until the end. you reached a point where the map doesnt represent the music anymore.
   since your normal diff is under 2* stars and complies with the difficulty-specific criteria id suggest to just remove this diff. not every song supports a easy diff and considering the bpm and some complex rhythms like the ones on this section 00:53:410 -01:11:248 - id say this song is one of these.
   in case you still want to keep the diff ill suggest you to focus your mapping on anything but drums since these are the ones making most of your rhythms monotone and dont be afraid of making the diff more dense if that makes it more representative of the song

yep I totally understand why you say that, but this diff more like a “insurance” that if somebody think “Normal is too hard for new player D:!!!!”.....
Anyway, I will think about to adjust rhythm litter bit, try to make it more useful for whole map and diff xD
[Normal]

1. 00:37:194 (1) - i think you forgot to add a break here cuz all the higher diffs have them here
2. 00:43:681 (1,2,3) - the note thats closer to (1) is (3) and that will be misleading for newer players. having a more clear path between notes would be nice
   didnt took a deep look at the diff but its mostly fine

fix!

didnt found any big issue on the other diffs gl

CET 6 wrote:

发错地方很难受 一定要再发一次XD

2ha妹妹

路过 no kudosu

extra的音效 （没看前面的mod不知道有没有人提）

01:58:430 - 加个物件 然后和 原01:58:836 (3,4) - 都加上 clap 音效 共4下clap 前面类似的地方也可以加上
不过改排列麻烦 每个mapper的音效喜点也不一样 我就随便说说 XD

tutuhaha wrote:

CET 6 wrote:

发错地方很难受 一定要再发一次XD

2ha妹妹

路过 no kudosu

extra的音效 （没看前面的mod不知道有没有人提）

01:58:430 - 加个物件 然后和 原01:58:836 (3,4) - 都加上 clap 音效 共4下clap 前面类似的地方也可以加上
不过改排列麻烦 每个mapper的音效喜点也不一样 我就随便说说 XD

你，很厉害的了！