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Dotsu

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Dotsu 2010-11-06T03:42:38+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月4日 at 14:25:03

Artist: Ayane
Title: ribbon
Source: Memories Off After Rain
Tags: KID Cyberfront Yue Imasaka Shirakawa Hotaru
BPM: 130
Filesize: 16353kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.05 stars, 117 notes)
Hard (4.87 stars, 292 notes)
Normal (4.33 stars, 191 notes)

Download: Ayane - ribbon
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 13th map~

From Memories Off After Rain.

Last edited by Dotsu 2010-12-04T06:25:17+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

Pokie

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Pokie 2010-11-15T12:08:24+00:00

eveless

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eveless 2010-11-15T12:08:38+00:00

13

KanbeKotori

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KanbeKotori 2010-11-15T12:11:10+00:00

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-11-15T12:18:11+00:00

Zelos

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Zelos 2010-11-16T00:05:20+00:00

orz, you damn good mapper.

nice job for a first submission.

im sorry i couldnt mod as you requested.

too good.

kodomonoyume

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kodomonoyume 2010-11-16T09:29:12+00:00

~

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2010-11-19T04:56:21+00:00

Hard:

Found nothing.

Normal:

Found nothing worth to be said :)

Easy:

Found nothing.

Lol, you shouldnt have asked such a noob modder as me to mod your map D:
Only thing extra i could say, is that the maps could be spiced up a bit more, such as placing some jumps, or invent something new. But then again, map is fine as it is.
Interesting note: I SS'ed them all on first try =o! (and im not a frequent sser,a nd not like you cared :x)

Mianki

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Mianki 2010-11-19T12:17:00+00:00

Hi, tried to mod it but found nothing

.

ErufenRito wrote:
Only thing extra i could say, is that the maps could be spiced up a bit more, such as placing some jumps, or invent something new. But then again, map is fine as it is.

I kinda agree with Eruefen. It's a great map, but it could use more jumps

. So I decided to look some places were you could place jumps (they're all suggestions):

Hard:

00:17:808 (1) Maybe 1.6 Distance spacing
00:25:193 (1) ^
00:30:731 (1) ^
00:39:962 (1) ^
00:54:731 (1) ^
00:58:423 (1.2.3) ^
01:11:346 (1) ^
01:18:731 (1) ^
01:22:654 (1.2.3.4) Rising jumps
01:26:116 (1)

Normal could also have some jumps, but not so big. Put some if you like.
Easy doesn't need jumps imo.

Aight. Have a star and good luck~

Revengexsoyah

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Revengexsoyah 2010-11-21T01:42:32+00:00

Hello

ONLY SUGGESTIONS.

~Easy~
00:06:731 : this form of slider can get to have a heart attack a noob xD
01:23:346 : down 2 grids.

01:37:193 : same as 00:06:731

~Normal~
Fine. (Y)

~Hard~
is so perfect.

kudosu star , for dedication and perfect mapping.
good luck

narakucrimson

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narakucrimson 2010-11-22T13:39:16+00:00

Hi! Lets get to this:

[General]

I think the offset should be at about 1170.
Remeber to always re-snap if you change the offset.

Btw, great job with the hitsounds!

[Easy]&[Normal]

Nothing too wrong here. I'd correct a few little overlappings, but hell, it's ok as it is xD
But, in Normal, things may get a little bit too overlapped. Anyway, if you like it as it is, I won't say a thing n.n

[Hard]

Ah, much better! I like this one a lot!

As you see, not much to say.
You have my star and support!

Sure

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Sure 2010-11-23T13:43:08+00:00

Hi, as per your request.

[General]
- Current offset is a little bit fast to me. Try 1195 and resnap all note include all green lines.
- Change the title from 'Ribbon' to 'ribbon'. Please check this
- Remove 'Vol.3 Graduation' from the source.
- 01:35:109 - End kiai time at here ?

[Hard]
00:40:416 (2,3) - Changing as below is more fit.

00:55:416 (2,3) - ^ same suggestion.

[Normal]
Oh no... you mistook at setting offset but I already gave you other offset.

Nothing to point out except that.

[Easy]
I think you should insert break time somewhere due to this diff is for beginner.
Mapset is good.

Nice map

Roddie

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Roddie 2010-11-24T04:41:03+00:00

Hi

Blue: Suggestions
Violet: I really think you should fix this in my opinion
Red: Must be fixed.

Easy:
01:37:186 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning of that slider. Add a finish instead.

Normal:
01:37:184 (3)-Remove that whistle. Add a clap instead.
01:46:414 (3)-Add a clap on the end of that slider.

Hard:
01:37:186 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning of that slider. Add a finish instead.

Impressive map set.

Nothing major I can point out. So, its all good.

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!

Fight69

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Fight69 2010-11-24T16:24:11+00:00

Download without video

Download with video

I dunno what happened, I've tried to download it 3-4 times...

Try a Full Submit, this will maybe work again

Saten

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Saten 2010-11-26T15:20:40+00:00

Works fine now.

Star~

Fight69

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Fight69 2010-11-26T17:52:23+00:00

Ok, let's go !

(my english can be sometimes a bit...uh...weird : Sorry

)

[General]

Offset : 1179
This sounds better for me (don't forget to resnap everything)

I don't recommend a white combo combo color, it hurt the eyes, especially during kiai time

[Hard]

Fine, awesome job !

[Normal]

01:00:500 - This clap sounds a bit weird here IMO, add a whistle
01:00:731 - Add a clap and delete the whistle

Nice

[Easy]

00:01:193 (1) - Delete clap at the end of this slider
00:02:577 (2) - Add a clap
00:05:808 (2) - Delete clap at the beggining and add a clap at the end of this slider
00:09:500 (2) - Delete clap
00:09:962 (3) - Add a clap
00:12:269 (1) - Add a clap at the end
00:13:192 (2) - Delete the clap at the beggining and add a clap at the end
00:15:039 (3) - Delete clap and add a finish
00:31:640 (4) - Delete clap and add a whistle
01:29:794 (1) - (meganazi) 1 grid down for the 2nd waypoint and 1 grid left for the last waypoint

It's just a lot of HS modding, great diff

It's a solid mapset !
Star for you~ !

VTC

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VTC 2010-11-27T05:49:39+00:00

good nice

Shulin

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Shulin 2010-11-27T16:35:38+00:00

Nice map, couldn't find anything worth mentioning.

Good job

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2010-11-28T21:09:30+00:00

Normal
00:46:880 (7) Consider moving this note just a little. It would make it look nicer.
Hard
00:15:304 (3) No hitsound here?
00:17:341 (5) Beat here isn't lined up, though that could be intentional.
01:12:957 (1) Might look better non-linear
01:36:034 (3) Same.

But I like this overall, so it gets a Star!

Jesss

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Jesss 2010-11-29T00:04:54+00:00

Hi!!~~ it's my Modding Time

[Overall]

SPOILER

i didn't see anything wrong with infos.

[Easy]

SPOILER

- 00:05:803 (2) - i can be annoying with minimal fixes...but i reccommend to move it 1 grid to the left and up (lvl3), then 1 grid to the right (lvl3) Something like this.
- 00:19:649 (3) - Rotate 11 degrees Anticlockwise, then move it 1 grid left.
- 00:40:880 (2) - move 2 grid to the right, 1 down and 1 right again (lvl3).
- 01:19:188 (1) - 2 grids down (lvl3)
- 01:31:649 (2) - 1 grid tto left (lvl3)
just make those movements and everything will go better.

[normal]

SPOILER

- 00:11:457 (2) - 1 grid down.
- 00:59:803 (4) - 1 grid to right.
Nothing more found.

[Hard]

SPOILER

- 00:10:187 (4) - move 1 grid down, then 1 grid to left (lvl3).
- 00:26:803 (1) - move 1 grid up and then to left (lvl3).
- 01:03:957 (1) - instead circle, use slider (?)
No more problems found.

Hey, your map is very well done, despite that sensation that you weren't following grids (._.)...i just wrote little suggestions, hope them helps you...i think the map is ready for MAT modding and Bubbling!! I wanna see that map ranked ASAP!! oh and of course...STAR!!☆~~

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-11-29T06:19:49+00:00

General:
- Re-Kiai Time at 01:18:726?

...that's it. Consider it, and I'll bubble.

EDIT: My first bubble. Hope I don't screw up anything >.<

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-11-29T16:34:00+00:00

So I'm late. I got several Taiko mapping request in that time, sorry for that.

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-11-29T21:09:05+00:00

lepidopodus wrote:
So I'm late. I got several Taiko mapping request in that time, sorry for that.

just because the map is bubbled, it doesn't mean it's too late!
it's up to the mapper's choice whether he/she wants to pop the bubble for more diffs or not.

Dotsu

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Dotsu 2010-12-01T14:10:03+00:00

YGOkid8 wrote:
lepidopodus wrote:
So I'm late. I got several Taiko mapping request in that time, sorry for that.
just because the map is bubbled, it doesn't mean it's too late!
it's up to the mapper's choice whether he/she wants to pop the bubble for more diffs or not.

I have asked lepidopodus and he said that he won't make a Taiko diff ~(I sent him a mod request)

Alace

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Alace 2010-12-04T05:46:15+00:00

軟拍手不是那麼適合這一首歌,所以要是下在非 2 4拍的地方聽起來沒有那麼理想
拿hard作例子

<hard>
00:14:111 (1,2,3,4) - 像這個地方其實可以很爽快的在白線下4個finish XD
00:15:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡因為鼓聲也淡出了,所以可以把clap也remove掉
00:50:111 (3,4,5,6) - 像這種外加的clap 可能敬要整首歌都有一套這樣的加法,如果只是幾個地方加聽起來會有點突然
01:02:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 像這裡就有一些不順暢
01:50:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 如同前面

不過因為節奏排法都定了,這些那些額外的clap可能不是那麼好改,就挑對你有用又方便的改吧

Dotsu

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Dotsu 2010-12-04T06:59:53+00:00

Alace wrote:
軟拍手不是那麼適合這一首歌,所以要是下在非 2 4拍的地方聽起來沒有那麼理想
拿hard作例子

<hard>
00:14:111 (1,2,3,4) - 像這個地方其實可以很爽快的在白線下4個finish XD fixed
00:15:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡因為鼓聲也淡出了,所以可以把clap也remove掉 fixed
00:50:111 (3,4,5,6) - 像這種外加的clap 可能敬要整首歌都有一套這樣的加法,如果只是幾個地方加聽起來會有點突然removed some
01:02:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 像這裡就有一些不順暢
01:50:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 如同前面 fixed

不過因為節奏排法都定了,這些那些額外的clap可能不是那麼好改,就挑對你有用又方便的改吧

Thank you very much~

Alace

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Alace 2010-12-04T07:03:05+00:00

forgiive my hitsounds nazi

ranked gogogo~

eveless

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eveless 2010-12-04T07:06:57+00:00

grats!