Normal mod, from my modding queue.
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[General]
- Consider to change HP drain to 7
- 아주 NICE
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- 00:05:184 (2) - why not split this slider and map this beat 00:05:355 - here because I hear a sound.
- 00:05:698 (3) - same as above, 00:05:870 - here.
- 00:06:555 (5) - same as above, 00:06:727 - here.
- 00:07:412 (1) - why you end the sliderend here, I can't hear any sound. Please end the slider 00:07:584 - here.
- 00:07:927 (3) - same as above, end 00:08:098 - here, please.
- 00:08:527 (6,8) - remove these hitcircles as there are no sounds here.
- 00:09:298 (3) - same as mod number one, 00:09:470 - here.
- 00:09:727 (4) - remove this hitcircle.
- 00:10:412 (2) - remove this hitcircle.
- 00:11:012 (5) - make this a hitcircle, there's no sound 00:11:098 - here.
- 00:12:041 (3) - same as mod number one, 00:12:212 - here.
- 00:12:470 (4) - remove this hitcircle.
- 00:12:898 (1) - same as mod number one, 00:13:070 - here.
- 00:13:412 (3) - same as mod number one, 00:13:584 - here.
- 00:14:612 (3) - end the slider 00:14:784 - here as I can't hear any sound 00:14:870 - here.
- 00:23:098 (3) - remove this hitcircle.
- 00:26:355 (6,8) - remove these hitcircles as there are no sounds here.
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- 00:33:470 (1) - you can split this slider like this: because of the vocal start 00:33:812 - here.
- 00:38:612 (4) - to me, it much better end the slider 00:38:784 - here because the vocal strongly stops here.
- 00:38:870 - if you took the suggestion above, you can put hitcircle here.
- 00:38:955 (1) - I can hear a beat inside this slider, 00:39:041 - here. Why not make this part same as next the part? like 00:39:641 (4,5,6) - this and 00:40:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - this.
- 00:45:984 (2) - end the slider here 00:46:412 - here because you can make the sliderend a hyperdash to the 00:46:498 - vocal here, you also hitsound 00:46:498 - this strong vocal with a finish.
- 00:49:327 - put note here?
- 00:55:927 (2,3,4) - why not make these hitcircle become reverse slider to cover the vocal, it is much better.
- 01:00:984 - this and 01:01:155 - I can't here strong streams sound, consider make a reverse slider start from 01:00:898 - here, 01:01:070 - here and 01:01:241 - here, to cover the vocal sound.
- 01:09:555 - I can hear beat here and 01:10:070 - here, it doesn't affect too much if you map that beat.
- I won't check timeline anymore because you do not follow much my suggestions. It is your right what to map and not, I don't want to bother you about the timeline anymore, just don't map obviously at the weakest beat that I can't clearly hear.
- I will focus more on the pattern, 7 minutes map make my insanity gone lol xp.
- 00:10:670 (4,5) - do this need a hyperdash? no strong beat here.
- 00:11:012 (5,6,7) - this is hard to catch and adjust after a hyperdash, maybe you can make the pattern look like 00:08:441 (5,6,7,8,1) - this is safer to catch but you need to ctrl+h first.
- 00:11:527 (1,2) - this also doesn't seem it need to have a hyperdash despite there's no strong beat here.
- 00:11:698 (2,3) - same as above.
- 00:14:441 (2) - just want to make it center between previous and nest notes, move to x:200 is much better.
- 00:16:498 (5,6) - this hyperdash is too strong, it is hard to catch the sliderend 6 and the next notes, consider make 6 closer the right at x:424.
- 00:18:384 (1,2) - this is kinda hard to me like you have to dash then temporary stop + hyperdash to get the next notes, maybe you can make the pattern easier like 00:17:698 (1,2) - this.
- 00:20:441 (1,2) - this is still fine to me but maybe it kinda hard to catch the next notes because of strong hyperdash.
- 00:21:984 (5) - this is kinda confusing, make the reverse slider horizontal completely to add more movements.
- 00:22:327 (6,1) - same as above above.
- 00:24:127 (2,3) - this and 00:24:555 (4,5) - this hyperdash is too strong so it makes the catches of the next notes become hard. You need to catch the notes quickly, maybe consider change the pattern into an easier one.
- 00:25:584 (2,3) - no need to do a hyperdash here, move 00:25:927 (3) - to x:224 to make it center between previous and next notes.
- 00:26:612 (9) - why not make this spicier by moved to x:472.
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- 00:33:127 (7) - make this left a little bit at x:448, to make sure that players can catch properly the next slider.
- 00:38:612 (4,1) - this is kinda hard edge dash, maybe you can make 4 become a hyperdash or make them closer a little bit.
- 00:44:784 (3) - you use 2.59x space here, why not make it same like 00:45:812 (1) - this, you use 2.38x space here.
- 00:46:670 (3) - same as above, try to use 2.38x space here.
- 01:03:812 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this streams part is kinda hard with that pattern, consider change the pattern easier for moderate players like me.
- 01:13:584 (3,4,1,2) - this pattern is kinda hard to catch, at least you can make the 3,4 different or 1,2 different pattern.
- 01:17:698 (3,4,1,2) - same as above.
- 01:20:098 (1,2) - I think you don't need a hyperdash here, a hyper might suit here.
- 01:20:441 (2,3,1,2) - same as above above.
- 01:23:184 (2,3,4,5) - same as above.
- 01:25:927 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is really hard, I can't control this part.
- 02:55:755 - in the kiai part, I hope you can try testplay nd find some difficult part to play. Like I mention in the first kiai.
- 04:09:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this pattern is kinda unexpected, maybe you can remove the stack and find suitable pattern?
- 04:14:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - yeah, this is kinda confusing either.
- 04:20:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as above.
- 04:25:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - same as above.
- 05:13:755 (3,4,5,6) - lel, my finger!!!
- 05:28:841 (5) - you can easily slip to the right and miss to catch the next notes.
- 05:53:698 (1,2) - please don't make a pattern like this, ctrl+g or change into a suitable and playable pattern.
- 06:31:070 - this kiai part until 06:55:755 - here, you can ask for testplayers to test for you. I play and some pattern might hard for me, I guess you must test for yourself then you know where is wrong or not. Sorry, I'm not yet an overdose mappers xp.
- 06:58:498 (4) - ctrl+h then move to x:360, more suitable.
- 06:59:870 (1,2,3) - move to x:296? and 07:00:727 (4) - move to x:176?
- That all from me, the pattern is kinda same so I don't need to go into details after the first kiai. I hope you can fix some pattern that I talk about, spacing is okay, hyperdash too, maybe at the slow part, there are 2 or 3 patterns that are confusing to me.