Setomi wrote:
Requested mod! ♥
[Alternative Bananas]
Remove 00:09:727 (4) - & 00:12:470 (4) - since they're both on an empty sound and it's just the beginning of the song, no need for added rythm - I'm following the melody so I feel having those unmapped is weird
00:10:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These patterns doesn't really follow sound at all like having 00:10:670 (3,4) - with no movement, and having 00:11:012 (5,6,7) - mapped with the same distance even tho there are a lot of changes in sound - Well, I didn't map 00:08:441 (5,6,7,8,1) - with any movement and that's the same sound so I think it works as a "build-up" from no movement to some and eventually more dense and more dashes and hypers
00:16:670 (6) - Have this vertical to replicate how you mapped similar sound; 00:15:298 (2) - Changed it differently
00:19:670 (7) - remove - Made it consistent with the other similar sounds
00:21:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Really weird to play here, remap and try to focus on the heavy sounds - I don't see how this is weird to play, the jumps are all placed on strong beats?
00:25:841 (3) - remove - Done
00:25:927 (3) - Move to x:64 - Changed this section a bit but kind of done ish
00:26:098 (5) - replace with a circle and move 00:26:270 (6,7,8,9,10) - slightly to the left to create HDash - I have a consistent triple pattern so it makes no sense to me to make it a single note
00:28:841 (2) - Consider moving this more to the right (and changing following four circles appropriately) to create dash between slider end on (1) and circle (2) - Uh, the vocals is on slider end so I don't see why there should be a dash between 1 and 2 as there is no strong beat on 2
00:34:670 (4,5) - Remove these two and create something more fitting to the music (use low movement). Could make 00:34:155 (3) - a reverse slider for example - Ok done
00:40:241 (7) - remove - Done, also removed some other notes
00:43:070 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Consider making these patterns a bit more interesting, currently they're just back and forth - Remapped this section slightly
00:49:241 (1,2) - Create slightly more movement between these two - Done
00:59:870 (2) - This would fit as anti-flow since it would fit in with the movement from 00:58:155 (1,2,3,4) - Tried making it antiflowy
01:09:298 (3) - Either remove or place at x:416 ~ - Removed
01:11:184 (1,2,3) - Feels strange having no real emphasize here since it's a build up for stream - Put some hypers
I had a chat with benny regarding first kiai:
I personally think that having the timeline full with notes and barely any 'breaks' removes emphasize. The kiai is supposed to be 'kinda' focused on vocals and then I would suggest creating more 1/4 breaks creating emphasize for vocals. - I tried adding more breaks ):
Some pattering 'issues' (kiai):
01:13:584 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - These are just back and forths, consider changing up slightly here - I don't see the problem with having back n forths owo It fits the music
01:14:955 (3,4) - Weird beat and vocal distance here: (3) is on a 'hard' sound and (4) is basically on a silent sound - Changed this pattern a bit
01:20:784 (1,2) - (1) is on a 'hard' sound, considering adding more movement to this and having (2) follow - Added hyper
01:21:641 (2,3,4) - Move slighlty to the left to create walking distance to previous circle - err noo, it's a part of the kiai and it isn't even a hard dash
01:26:955 (1,2,3) - This is a dragged out vocal but mapped as there was a lot going on, consider simplifying these - Simplified this part
01:27:727 (1,2,3) - If you're focusing on vocals remove (1,3) or if you wanna focus on guitar sound in background add more movement - Tried fixing it
01:36:041 (4) - Since 01:35:184 (1,2,3) - had a lot of direction changes ctrl + g on 01:36:041 (4) - fits well to add more movement - Sure, done
01:39:641 (2,3) - Theses fits good being vertically mapped as a 'hold' pattern - Cool
01:41:184 (4) - Since these are one two 'heavy' beat sounds it would be nice to change direction here to emphasize that - Okay
01:43:412 (1) - ctrl + g move back to add more movement to a part where there's a lot of back and forths - Oki
Part from 02:22:841 to 02:26:955 has a weird timeline, this is a pretty calm part in general but the time line is complex with a lot of 1/4 circles:
02:23:097 (2) -, 02:23:698 (5) - slider end, 02:25:155 (4) -, 02:25:841 (7) -, 02:26:355 (3,5)
Creates the feeling of overmapped and/or not knowing what sounds you're actually playing. Consider simplifying - Made this part all 1/2's
02:53:183 (3) - same as before or ctrl + g 02:53:183 (3,4) - (fix hitsounds) and change 02:53:526 (5,6,7) - to fit new pattern - Deleted 3
Second Kiai pretty much the same as before, look into timeline and decide what sounds you actually want the player to be playing.
03:19:927 (4) - same as before - done
03:41:012 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe add something to slightly change movement, these four are just back and forth and/or following same direction - Okay, done
04:09:984 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These annoys me a lot because sometime you make a jump and sometimes you don't - I think the jumps are consistent?
04:14:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
04:20:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
04:25:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
04:39:298 (1) - ctrl + g move back
04:44:784 (1) - ^
05:12:212 (3) - ^ - All done
I'm pretty satisfied with the third kiai's timeline and general pattering, the only 'issue' I find is that there's a lot of back and forths (left rights) and I think you should go over the third kiai and change up some movements so it doesn't feel repetetive.
05:53:698 (1,2) - If you wanna up the difficulty a bit I would recommend you ctrl + g these. I personally think it's a good addition - done
05:57:984 (4) - Make this a bit more interesting consider it's on two 'loud' sounds - done
06:04:327 (5) - ctrl + g move back - done
Final kiai is good in timeline since it's basically just 1/4 streams but again I think you should go over and add appropriate emphasize, for example: - I don't understand what you mean here, I'm emphasizing the claps ?
06:45:469 (1,2) -
06:35:870 (1,2) -
06:37:241 (1,2) -
06:44:098 (1,2) -
06:45:469 (1,2) -
06:45:812 (3,4) -
06:48:212 (1,2) -
Why isn't part from 07:02:612 - to 07:12:212 - kiai? You had similar part in kiai before, think you should do the same here - Sure
07:08:099 (7) - anti flow for emphasize - ik what to do here
07:15:641 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Have some direction changes here (anti flow) - Sure
07:19:241 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^ - Sure
07:27:984 (6) - ctrl + g move appropriatly - Sure
07:33:298 (2,3,4,5) - Add more movement considering sound and hitsounds - Sure
07:44:269 (2,3,4,5) - ^ and could be fun to have a bit more interesting final pattern - Sure
Change diff name since you're no long associated with bananas -