Sailexk wrote:
just a noob mod if you dont mind
00:05:284 (1,2,3,4) - would sound nice with some drum additions I don't like the drum samples
00:06:743 (1,1,1) - thease have a kick sound so you might wanna add something here too added whistles
00:19:229 (1) - i dont feel anyting special in this slider so i would whistle the body to make it consistent fixed
00:20:202 (4) - the tail is a strong beat, would be better clickable fixed
00:26:770 (4) - there is no beat it's very subtle
00:42:743 (1) - the guitar you follow here doesnt make that kind of sound. An extended slider would do it. fixed
00:50:040 (2) - and it does here i think. This is a the good place for a 1/2 repeat slider fixed
00:57:338 (5,6) - drum addition is a good option doesn't sound any different imo
01:08:040 (1,2) - maybe this part is in 1/3 i cant tell this is fine
01:10:473 (3) - consider whistling the body (sounds nice to me) fixed
01:19:067 (3) - the little nazi in me says you need 10% more volume for kiais I'll add 5
01:28:148 (1) - i would replace the clap with a finish fixed
01:30:094 (4) - whistle fixed
01:34:635 (1) - again, i really dont like it. To me its just shouting for an extended slider. leaving it as it is
01:37:878 (1,5) - some whistle maybe? fixed
01:39:824 (1,1) - on body fixed
From this point ill keep my hitsound suggestions because they are only preferances, and i feel like im forcing you to use them the way i see it should be.
01:48:257 (3) - what about a 1/2 slider and circle like this: 01:45:662 (3,4) - fixed
02:02:527 (3) - and here something like 01:50:851 (3,4,5) - ? I'll add something else instead
02:19:716 (1) - i dont think you need to change the SV here. And come on... ugly 2010 slider, you can do better than this fixed
02:23:608 (9) - what about nc this? fixed
02:24:743 (2,1) - too much use of slider leniency imo. fixed
02:26:527 (1,2,3) - equal spacing? they are equal
This part (and the previous 00:58:311) are really undermapped. I feel too much beats are missing. I suggest making thease sections more intensive or rising the sv. it's fine as it is
02:35:770 (4,5,6) - better triangle please, looks ugly fixed
02:43:554 (1,2) - the beat at the tail is strong. I would make two 1/2 sliders. no
02:46:959 (3) - shouldnt this face upwards? and nc 02:47:284 (4) - fixed
02:57:013 (3,4,5) - they need bigger spacing no
02:59:932 (5,6) - ctrl+g no
03:02:446 (6) - i dont hear anything here ?
03:13:067 This part is a mess... You created a rhythm so much different from what i hear in the music. that's how I interpret it
03:15:419 (12) - there is no beat here fixed
03:15:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - instead of this the rhythm looks like
too unintuitive
03:19:716 (1) - This is still increasing in the music so the spacing could too.
03:28:473 (8) - to me it seems like the music stops here. Removing 9 is a good option. fixed
03:36:419 (1) - this ends on downbeat reworked this part
03:37:013 (3) - and this starts on 1/3 + ends on blue + touches the hiterror bar dayumnn reworked this part
03:37:473 (4) - what about a 1/4 repeat slider starting on red? no
03:40:148 (4) - would flow better somewhere near 03:39:500 (2) - head fixed
03:42:094 (2,4) - errrr owerlap fixed
03:43:716 (8,9,10) - my nazi sense is tinglingand it says you should make a right angled triangle. no
03:45:662 (11,12,13,1,2,3,4) - i hear beats in blues but its fine same
03:46:392 (5) - Although i dont here fixed
03:55:878 (1) - and we are here again... Why did you slow it down? It looks nice tho for the next part that is less intensive
03:58:635 (4) - i prefer NC fixed
04:07:067 (5,1) - looks like an accidental overlap. really minor thing ? there's no overlap at all here
04:09:013 (2) - this curve is not practical i suggest changing it it's fine
04:09:986 (7,8) - if you add my previous option you will have more space to work with. so you might consider adding a jump to 7 no
04:16:797 (1,2,3,4) - its the climax of the song. Make them more interesting, rotations, curves, anything... the jumps are enough
04:20:365 (5,6) - ctrl+g but if you do that the jump will be huge between 04:20:689 (1) - no
04:21:986 (3,4) - you can add a not between them fixed
04:27:175 (1,2,1,2) - this part is so strong... I can imagine this part with 1/4 sliders as paired. Its just too intensive for only 1/2 sliders imo. 1/2 sliders fit better
04:36:257 (1,2,1,2,3) - and this is shouting for streams. (Im sorry if you feel like im forcing things on you but this part is the peak of the song and it should be so much harder) fixed
04:45:986 (3) - i would add 3 circle instead of this. And in its current state it doesnt flow really well. fixed
I deeply apologise if my mod felt forced. My wording is bad and i probably sound like an ahole right now. no problem, thanks for the mod!
Hope i could help.