just a noob mod if you dont mind
00:05:284 (1,2,3,4) - would sound nice with some drum additions
00:06:743 (1,1,1) - thease have a kick sound so you might wanna add something here too
00:19:229 (1) - i dont feel anyting special in this slider so i would whistle the body to make it consistent
00:20:202 (4) - the tail is a strong beat, would be better clickable
00:26:770 (4) - there is no beat
00:42:743 (1) - the guitar you follow here doesnt make that kind of sound. An extended slider would do it.
00:50:040 (2) - and it does here i think. This is a the good place for a 1/2 repeat slider
00:57:338 (5,6) - drum addition is a good option
01:08:040 (1,2) - maybe this part is in 1/3 i cant tell
01:10:473 (3) - consider whistling the body (sounds nice to me)
01:19:067 (3) - the little nazi in me says you need 10% more volume for kiais
01:28:148 (1) - i would replace the clap with a finish
01:30:094 (4) - whistle
01:34:635 (1) - again, i really dont like it. To me its just shouting for an extended slider.
01:37:878 (1,5) - some whistle maybe?
01:39:824 (1,1) - on body
From this point ill keep my hitsound suggestions because they are only preferances, and i feel like im forcing you to use them the way i see it should be.
01:48:257 (3) - what about a 1/2 slider and circle like this: 01:45:662 (3,4) -
02:02:527 (3) - and here something like 01:50:851 (3,4,5) - ?
02:19:716 (1) - i dont think you need to change the SV here. And come on... ugly 2010 slider, you can do better than this
02:23:608 (9) - what about nc this?
02:24:743 (2,1) - too much use of slider leniency imo.
02:26:527 (1,2,3) - equal spacing?
This part (and the previous 00:58:311) are really undermapped. I feel too much beats are missing. I suggest making thease sections more intensive or rising the sv.
02:35:770 (4,5,6) - better triangle please, looks ugly
02:43:554 (1,2) - the beat at the tail is strong. I would make two 1/2 sliders.
02:46:959 (3) - shouldnt this face upwards? and nc 02:47:284 (4) -
02:57:013 (3,4,5) - they need bigger spacing
02:59:932 (5,6) - ctrl+g
03:02:446 (6) - i dont hear anything here
03:13:067 This part is a mess... You created a rhythm so much different from what i hear in the music.
03:15:419 (12) - there is no beat here
03:15:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - instead of this the rhythm looks like
03:19:716 (1) - This is still increasing in the music so the spacing could too.
03:28:473 (8) - to me it seems like the music stops here. Removing 9 is a good option.
03:36:419 (1) - this ends on downbeat
03:37:013 (3) - and this starts on 1/3 + ends on blue + touches the hiterror bar
dayumnn03:37:473 (4) - what about a 1/4 repeat slider starting on red?
03:40:148 (4) - would flow better somewhere near 03:39:500 (2) - head
03:42:094 (2,4) - errrr owerlap
03:43:716 (8,9,10) -
my nazi sense is tinglingand it says you should make a right angled triangle.
03:45:662 (11,12,13,1,2,3,4) - i hear beats in blues but its fine
03:46:392 (5) - Although i dont here
03:55:878 (1) - and we are here again... Why did you slow it down? It looks nice tho
03:58:635 (4) - i prefer NC
04:07:067 (5,1) - looks like an accidental overlap. really minor thing
04:09:013 (2) - this curve is not practical i suggest changing it
04:09:986 (7,8) - if you add my previous option you will have more space to work with. so you might consider adding a jump to 7
04:16:797 (1,2,3,4) - its the climax of the song. Make them more interesting, rotations, curves, anything...
04:20:365 (5,6) - ctrl+g but if you do that the jump will be huge between 04:20:689 (1) -
04:21:986 (3,4) - you can add a not between them
04:27:175 (1,2,1,2) - this part is so strong... I can imagine this part with 1/4 sliders as paired. Its just too intensive for only 1/2 sliders imo.
04:36:257 (1,2,1,2,3) - and this is shouting for streams. (Im sorry if you feel like im forcing things on you but this part is the peak of the song and it should be so much harder)
04:45:986 (3) - i would add 3 circle instead of this. And in its current state it doesnt flow really well.
I deeply apologise if my mod felt forced. My wording is bad and i probably sound like an ahole right now.
Hope i could help.