general thing:
seriously shouldn't bpm be 96? and 01:05:057 - you'll need to add an extra red line at 01:05:682 - to reset downbeats
and need metadata reference
Pyrotechnic:
the beginning should be retimed i guess, many notes are noticeably off like 00:04:432 (3,5) -
01:10:682 - miss a clap?
02:18:807 - 01:45:682 - hitsound missing
02:38:494 (2) - should whistle for the vocal like 02:39:744 (1,1) - etc. ?
02:41:619 (3,4) - 02:42:869 (3,4) - this is the only flipping pattern with different movement design in this section, i suppose this to be a mistake
02:48:182 (4) - 02:53:182 (4) - 04:24:749 - 04:25:218 - maybe add a finish
03:46:932 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the pattern should be given much more spacing than it currently has, strong 1/2 drums + important instrument transitions
03:56:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - similar point as above, it kinda fits here maybe i'm just personally expecting more movements here
03:50:525 - 03:54:588 - 03:55:525 - 04:00:525 - and etc. up to you but i suggest following these drumsounds, it won't affect your following vocals imo
04:50:588 - slidertick sound is off, need some timing adjustments
04:52:716 (1) - just my extra thoughts, maybe you can add some clock ticking hitsounds to the slider ticks to justify the emptiness of last seconds. (kinda similar to ending of this song:
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/588367)
call me when you are ready :>