[General]
- I think OD 8 for HD is a bit cruel for the actual difficulty of the chart. Probably 7.5 is better imo
- Think soft-hitwhistle has a bit of silence at the end, so I cut out like half a second from it, but the reverb/echo/whatever it's called is still there http://puu.sh/urOjw.wav
- You could save some filespace by turning the background into .jpg, which I've done here for you http://puu.sh/urOox.jpg . You'll have to change line 4 of the sb thing to "coeurdepiraterose.jpg" tho
SB size is kind of big but that's ok cause it's pretty
[NM]
00:16:106 (16106|3,16106|2) - Would recommend making this [23] instead since the last jump was a [34] chord, and you also avoid the small stack at 00:15:475 (15475|3,16106|3) -
00:31:738 (31738|2) - I would move this to 4, and then move 00:32:527 (32527|3) - to 2. Reason being that midway through this introductory section, you haven't used 3/4 stacks like the one at 00:31:264 (31264|2,31738|2) - , so suddenly using one now kind of breaks the structure you've set up in this section
00:50:527 (50527|0,50685|1) - Try moving to 3 and 1 respectively so that the right hand gets a bit more of the weight of the notes, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747756000:53:527 (53527|0,54001|0) - Similarly to what I mentioned about those stacks that kind of come out of nowhere. I would arrange the pattern a little more like so to avoid it, while also trying to keep the jumpier feel of the notes
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747757300:54:475 (54475|3,54949|2) - For the same reason as above, I would switch their columns here so it goes 3 - 4 instead to avoid the 3/4 stack. Alternatively, you can change all the 3/4 in this section to stacks to be consistent; either way works.
01:00:949 - to 01:02:212 - Feel like column 4 kind of got left out. Might try something like this to balance it out more
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747760701:04:106 - to 01:06:633 - Kind of feeling a lack of love for the right hand (specifically column 4) here D:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747761301:38:843 (98843|2) - While the BPM is only 95, I think it'd be more balanced to just move this onto the left hand in column 2 to avoid that right handed minitrill with 01:38:527 (98527|2,98685|3,98843|2) -
01:41:685 (101685|1) - Similar reason to above, but instead, move this to 3?
01:53:212 - to 01:56:527 - Oh poor column 2. Might try rearranging the measure a little like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747764001:58:422 (118422|1) - I think it'd be cool to extend this to 01:59:685 - since the sound is a build up and doesn't cut off until the next measure.
01:59:685 (119685|0,120001|0) - Kind of an unwarranted 1/2 stack imo, might try moving it to 2 or something instead
02:02:843 (122843|2,123159|2) - Similarly ^. Could move the second note to 4 to avoid the stack and balance col 4 out a bit
02:06:475 (126475|1) - Move to 1 since it feels kind of empty for a few beats
02:07:896 (127896|0,128212|0) - And so on. I see you're kind of using them more often, so I'll stop pointing it out, but I do wanna say that it'd be better to try and shift the stacks and what hands they're on. Example being 02:09:475 (129475|2,129791|2) - and 02:10:106 (130106|3,130422|3) - being two consecutive stacks on the same hand. It might be more evenly weighted if you put one of the stacks in column 1 or 2.
02:47:685 (167685|0) - You've got a snapping problem with the HD, so start this at 02:47:764 - instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746905802:49:580 (169580|1) - Similarly, move this up to 02:49:659 - to make the snap consistent
02:50:212 (170212|2,170212|3) - Move up to 02:50:370 - for consistent snapping
02:47:685 (167685|0) - If you do the above couple suggestions, extend this LN to end at 02:50:370 -
02:56:527 (176527|3) - I actually think this note belongs on the 1/16 above, at 02:56:567 - as that's where the piano comes in.
03:00:317 (180317|1,180317|3) - Should be on 03:00:396 - actually
03:00:948 (180948|2) - At 03:01:027 -
04:13:580 (253580|0,253580|1) - With how softly the violin (?) ends, I think it'd be nicer to just use a single LN, but that's only my preference. I don't mind either.
Most of the other stuff between that are just those 1/2 stacks which I believe to be intentional as a pattern choice, so cool stuff.
Hitsounds00:48:475 (48475|1) - Missing whistle here, use the drum sampleset too.
01:09:791 (69791|2) - Not really an issue, but Idk why you imported this at 70% when you've just been using editor claps/whistles/finishes the entire time. It's also imported at 70% vol when the rest of the section is using 80% vol. Might just remove the imported hitsound and readd the whistle.
01:13:580 (73580|0) - Missing whistle
01:13:896 (73896|2) - Missing clap
01:18:633 (78633|1) - Not really understanding this being at 43% vol either, but ok. What I do wanna mention is you probably wanna double the hitsound volume and apply it at 86% since you used double hitsounds in the HD
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746902101:19:896 (79896|1) - Missing whistle
01:20:527 (80527|3) - ^
01:24:949 (84949|0) - ^
01:26:527 (86527|3,86685|0) - These hitsounds are inconsistent with the ones in HD, so idk what you were trying to go for here. Uh, I think it'd be better to keep the drum hit claps and make 01:26:527 (86527|3,86685|1) - drum hitclaps in the HD (also add a whistle at 01:26:685 (86685|0) - to be consistent with the one at 01:26:527 (86527|2) - )
01:44:527 (104527|0) - Think you're missing a whistle here for the kick
03:22:422 (202422|1) - Missing whistle
04:06:001 (246001|0) - Up to you to add it or not, but you have two finishes in the HD diff, one is soft and the other is normal set, but in this diff, you only use the soft-hitfinish. Could add the normal hitfinish to this note if you wanted
[HD]
00:04:738 - Would greatly recommend adding a short note here for the piano is it? Or whatever that short staccato sound is
00:32:527 (32527|3) - I'd consider moving to 1 so that the pattern goes from right column holds -> left column holds
00:35:054 - Add a note here to cap the LN off as it feels empty to release the LN without a physical or visual cue from the note as to its timing
00:38:843 - I notice you've been using triples for these longer LN starts, so I might add a note in 4 and move 00:39:317 (39317|3) - to avoid a 3/4 stack unless intentional.
00:38:843 (38843|1) - I would also extend this to end at 00:40:422 - for the same reason I mentioned about about having a short note at the end of the LN to act as a cut off for when to release it
00:41:370 (41370|1) - Same reason above, would end it at 00:41:843 -
00:44:843 (44843|3) - Since this isn't the same sound as 00:44:370 (44370|3) - , I would advise against stacking them, so move to 3?
00:55:264 - Right here, I'm pretty sure that drum roll that comes in is 1/8, and to me, it's kind of underwhelming that you didn't map it. Since the BPM is pretty low, I'd try something like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747772301:01:580 (61580|0) - Move to 2 for symmetry with 01:01:264 (61264|2,61264|0) - ?
01:06:001 (66001|2,66159|3,66317|2,66475|3,66633|2) - Since the BPM is so low, there's nothing actually uncomfortable about this, but visually I think it would look nicer if spread out a bit better across both hands. Try this instead?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747772601:25:896 (85896|1) - Would consider moving this to 3 to give a bit more space between 01:25:896 (85896|1,86133|1) -
01:58:422 - Similar to what I mentioned in the drum roll leading into the first verse, I would try using a similar 1/8 patterning for the drums here too, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747774002:09:159 - There's also a 1/8 roll here too. You could try a really easy and linear roll like this since it's kind of short
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747774602:40:738 (160738|2) - Would recommend putting this in column 1 on the other hand just for balance
02:56:606 (176606|0) - Similar to what I said in NM, the sound actually comes in on 02:56:567 - so this should be moved there.
03:00:317 (180317|0,180317|1) - same, this should be on the 1/8 above at 03:00:396 -
03:00:317 (180948|3) - 1/8 early, so move this to 03:01:027 -
03:04:106 - underwhelming 1/4 D:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/747775403:14:843 - Similarly to the above, you could again, try using a linear roll here (as in it flows only in one direction, going from left -> right or right -> left only). I'll leave it up to you to try something if you want
03:35:054 - Similarly ^. Not only are you limited to linear rolls, you could try anti rolls (2-1-3-4) or split rolls (1-2-4-3) instead too!
04:13:501 - There's a 1/16 glissando here, so you could try this to represent it
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7477778Hitsounds00:37:896 (37896|2) - Missing whistle
01:01:264 (61264|2) - Double hitsound, remove one clap
01:18:633 (78633|2,78633|3) - Double hitsound, remove one of the drum-hitwhistles
01:20:212 (80212|1,80212|0) - Double HS, remove one of the claps
01:44:527 (104527|0) - Missing whistle
02:12:948 (132948|2) - missing whistle
02:20:527 (140527|2) - Add soft-hitwhistle to be consistent with the NM
03:07:264 (187264|2) - Missing whistle
03:11:054 (191054|3) - missing soft-hitwhistle
03:20:527 (200527|1) - missing whistle
03:28:106 (208106|2) - missing whistle
03:30:633 (210633|2) - missing whistle
03:31:264 (211264|2) - missing whistle
03:32:527 (212527|0) - Missing whistle
03:33:159 (213159|0) - missing whistle
03:34:422 (214422|2) - missing whistle
03:35:685 (215685|2) - missing finish
03:38:212 (218212|1) - Missing whistle
03:38:843 (218843|3) - missing whistle
03:43:264 (223264|0) - Missing whistle
03:50:527 (230527|1) - Add clap to be consistent with the NM