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[Taikos]
I think you could increase the kiai volume to 80%, the hitsounds are a little bit quiet in those parts.
[Muzukashii]
00:36:001 - 00:41:054 - I think you could add kats here because somehow you haven't mapped any of these 1/2 gaps in this half of the strophe, compared to 00:28:422 - 00:33:475 - . Alternatively add them 00:38:527 - 00:43:580 - here instead, but I think the others fit the song better.
00:51:159 - ^ but this really doesn't have to be
00:56:370 (124) - Remove this note, I personally don't think kkD as 1/4 should appear in a Muzukashii at any BPM. It still overlaps and looks weird so that might be confusing.
01:06:475 (157) - ^
01:16:738 (190) - This should be a big kat I think
01:22:106 (207) - What is this note doing here?? The melody doesn't play this so it feels weird
01:27:159 (223) - Move this 01:26:527 - here for same reason.
01:44:212 - Again, feel like you could add a 1/2 note here, prob a kat
01:59:527 (298) - Remove, big note on next note again
02:09:633 (330) - ^
02:19:738 (362) - ^
02:29:370 (390,391,392) - 1/4? 0.0 Remove the middle note, there is nothing here, makes it inconsistent with the other 1/4 in this map.
02:39:001 (422) - Move this 02:39:317 - here and change to don, I find this a little bit too complicated for a Muzukashii.
03:11:054 (17) - Should be changed to a kat, the other sounds like this are kats as well.
03:15:317 (30) - Same as always
03:18:317 (39,40) - Swap these notes, same as 17
03:25:422 (62) - Remove, same as always
03:35:527 (92) - ^
03:45:633 (123) - ^
03:49:580 - Missing a don?
03:55:896 (149) - Missing finisher???
04:06:001 - I think from this point onward you should remove some notes so it really loses density. On-going 1/1 doesn't really give the effect of the song ending imo.
[Oni]
00:04:738 (11) - Personally I feel like this disturbs the silence too much so I'd suggest to remove it.
00:14:843 (35) - ^
00:19:896 (49) - ^
00:22:422 (56) - ^
00:44:843 (116,117) - Mapping vocals here but not 00:50:054 - 00:50:212 - here? : (
00:51:001 - maybe even here, but it's up to you to decide if it makes 00:53:054 (140,141,142,143) - too unimportant then
01:06:001 (196) - Find it much more nicer to play with a kat on this note. Sounds nicer too considering 00:55:896 (150,151,152,153) -
01:24:001 - Missing kat or nothing here on purpose?
02:24:633 - ^
02:34:758 - ^
Also all the other gaps but those are possibly less important. Maybe they should be removed in Muzukashii?
01:57:791 (45) - Again playing in silence, remove :C
02:04:106 (71,72) - Swap these maybe, plays nicer and fits to 02:14:212 (116,117,118,119,120) -
02:27:159 (173) - Change to kat to differ it from the bass drum more.
03:24:948 (356,357) - Change to kats to be consistent with 03:35:054 (402,403,404,405) - ?
03:39:791 (423,424,425,426,427,428,429) - Try changing this to kkdkdkd. That would be a repetition of 03:29:685 (377,378,379,380,381,382,383) - with added kats the beginning - kinda like 03:09:475 (285,286,287,288,289,290,291) - with 03:19:580 (331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - !
--> this also fits to my suggestion earlier at 02:03:791 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - , which then gets repeated with more kats 02:13:896 (115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - (wasn't intentional, it works tho)
--> 01:10:738 (215) - change this to kat then too
03:48:317 (463) - why is there a big don here (03:50:843 (475) - ?)
03:53:370 (485) - ^
03:58:422 (19) - ^
03:55:738 (8) - change to kat, 03:55:896 (9) - change to big don for consistency with other finishers and 02:30:001 (185) -
04:06:001 - From here onward: Same as Muzu. I don't think it would be bad if there even was 2/1 here. 04:07:580 (55,57,59,60,61,63,65) - try these
Very nice song, good luck!
[Taikos]
I think you could increase the kiai volume to 80%, the hitsounds are a little bit quiet in those parts.
[Muzukashii]
00:36:001 - 00:41:054 - I think you could add kats here because somehow you haven't mapped any of these 1/2 gaps in this half of the strophe, compared to 00:28:422 - 00:33:475 - . Alternatively add them 00:38:527 - 00:43:580 - here instead, but I think the others fit the song better.
00:51:159 - ^ but this really doesn't have to be
00:56:370 (124) - Remove this note, I personally don't think kkD as 1/4 should appear in a Muzukashii at any BPM. It still overlaps and looks weird so that might be confusing.
01:06:475 (157) - ^
01:16:738 (190) - This should be a big kat I think
01:22:106 (207) - What is this note doing here?? The melody doesn't play this so it feels weird
01:27:159 (223) - Move this 01:26:527 - here for same reason.
01:44:212 - Again, feel like you could add a 1/2 note here, prob a kat
01:59:527 (298) - Remove, big note on next note again
02:09:633 (330) - ^
02:19:738 (362) - ^
02:29:370 (390,391,392) - 1/4? 0.0 Remove the middle note, there is nothing here, makes it inconsistent with the other 1/4 in this map.
02:39:001 (422) - Move this 02:39:317 - here and change to don, I find this a little bit too complicated for a Muzukashii.
03:11:054 (17) - Should be changed to a kat, the other sounds like this are kats as well.
03:15:317 (30) - Same as always
03:18:317 (39,40) - Swap these notes, same as 17
03:25:422 (62) - Remove, same as always
03:35:527 (92) - ^
03:45:633 (123) - ^
03:49:580 - Missing a don?
03:55:896 (149) - Missing finisher???
04:06:001 - I think from this point onward you should remove some notes so it really loses density. On-going 1/1 doesn't really give the effect of the song ending imo.
[Oni]
00:04:738 (11) - Personally I feel like this disturbs the silence too much so I'd suggest to remove it.
00:14:843 (35) - ^
00:19:896 (49) - ^
00:22:422 (56) - ^
00:44:843 (116,117) - Mapping vocals here but not 00:50:054 - 00:50:212 - here? : (
00:51:001 - maybe even here, but it's up to you to decide if it makes 00:53:054 (140,141,142,143) - too unimportant then
01:06:001 (196) - Find it much more nicer to play with a kat on this note. Sounds nicer too considering 00:55:896 (150,151,152,153) -
01:24:001 - Missing kat or nothing here on purpose?
02:24:633 - ^
02:34:758 - ^
Also all the other gaps but those are possibly less important. Maybe they should be removed in Muzukashii?
01:57:791 (45) - Again playing in silence, remove :C
02:04:106 (71,72) - Swap these maybe, plays nicer and fits to 02:14:212 (116,117,118,119,120) -
02:27:159 (173) - Change to kat to differ it from the bass drum more.
03:24:948 (356,357) - Change to kats to be consistent with 03:35:054 (402,403,404,405) - ?
03:39:791 (423,424,425,426,427,428,429) - Try changing this to kkdkdkd. That would be a repetition of 03:29:685 (377,378,379,380,381,382,383) - with added kats the beginning - kinda like 03:09:475 (285,286,287,288,289,290,291) - with 03:19:580 (331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - !
--> this also fits to my suggestion earlier at 02:03:791 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - , which then gets repeated with more kats 02:13:896 (115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - (wasn't intentional, it works tho)
--> 01:10:738 (215) - change this to kat then too
03:48:317 (463) - why is there a big don here (03:50:843 (475) - ?)
03:53:370 (485) - ^
03:58:422 (19) - ^
03:55:738 (8) - change to kat, 03:55:896 (9) - change to big don for consistency with other finishers and 02:30:001 (185) -
04:06:001 - From here onward: Same as Muzu. I don't think it would be bad if there even was 2/1 here. 04:07:580 (55,57,59,60,61,63,65) - try these
Very nice song, good luck!