m4m
Freedom
- 00:57:425 (2,3) - I agree that this jump deserve to be a HDash, but you're using too much spacing without justification. I advise you to keep the spacing as 00:57:281 (1,2) - since the sound is similar.
- 01:03:050 (3,4) - This one deserve to be a HDash
- 01:09:973 (3,4) - ^
- 01:13:290 (2,3) - Same thing, but 01:13:723 (3,4,5) - doesn't because we can't hear any strong beat, so I advise you to remove them.
Here is an, example: - Same thing for the next section, 01:16:896 (3,4) - deserve a HDash.
- 01:18:050 (1,2,3) - Here, 01:18:483 (2,3) - is stronger than 01:18:050 (1,2) - yet you add a HDash for 01:18:483 (2,3) -. I advise you to swap them, put the HDash between (2) and (3).
- 01:22:377 (1,2,3) - Same thing than 01:13:723 (3,4,5) -
- 01:36:223 (1,2,3) - You're using too much spacing for the HDash, it overemphasize it because the beat isn't that strong. I advise you to reduce it.
- 02:16:030 (1,2,3) - Here you're using ~5.80x spacing for each Hypers while you're using ~3.50x for 02:17:761 (1,2,3) - . Try to keep the same spacing for them please, ~3.50x fit better in my opinion.
- 02:19:491 (1,2,3) - ^
Oh, you can also use different spacing for them since the intensity is increasing. But 02:16:030 (1,2,3) - should have less spacing than 02:17:761 (1,2,3) -. - 02:26:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This whole section only have the same simple 1/1 left right movement, I would like to see something more creative and challenging since the timeline is full of 1/3s.
For example you can add antiflows, reverse triangle for 02:27:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and many other patterns.
You can also put a pattern in the middle instead of always using left side and right side.
Here is an example of what you can do: - From 03:22:861 - to 03:47:963 - I advise you to increase the spacing scaling to 3.20x, because we can actually platter walk (catch everything without using dash) the whole section.
- For the second kiai, it's very similar to the first one, but we can clearly hear that it's way more intense. I advise you to increase the spacing scaling here too:
03:51:161 (3,4) - You can use 2.0x spacing for 1/2 normal dash
03:52:891 (3,4) - ^ - The last kiai is way too repetitive, you already copy paste the 2 first kiai. I advise you to map it without being influenced by the other kiais, it's the ending and it should be different.
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Well, the flow is great, but I don't like the map because you're not really creative: these 3 kiais have been copied, pasted and mirrored. We can't call that consistency because the second kiai is way more intense than the first one, without mentioning the last one.
We see similar pattern everywhere in your map like 01:44:876 (3,4,5) - and 03:54:622 (3,4,5) -
I think symmetry limits you more than anything else, the grid size too.
We see similar pattern everywhere in your map like 01:44:876 (3,4,5) - and 03:54:622 (3,4,5) -
I think symmetry limits you more than anything else, the grid size too.