from my nm q
gll
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- 00:04:200 (2) - overlap this better (tail)
- 00:13:200 (1) - stack this on 00:11:925 (8) -
- 00:16:776 (1,2,3) - rip flow
- 00:19:776 (7) - nc
- 00:19:326 (5,6,8) - bad overlap
- 00:25:176 (2) - should be nc
- 00:53:076 (5,1) - blanket better
- 00:59:526 (5) - angle this downwards or upwards so people can see 00:59:676 (6) - better and actually hit it; 01:07:926 (5) - , etc.
- 01:14:376 (1,2,3) - i recommend stacking 01:14:376 (1) - on 01:13:776 (2) -
- 01:15:576 (2,3,4,5,6) - keep this curve similar to 01:16:176 (2,3,4,5,6) -
- 01:27:051 (1,2) - bad overlap with the upcoming stream
- 01:40:626 (2,3,4) - this would probably look better as a gradual increase of a curve (ex: straight slider, slightly curved, more curved) or the same slider
- 01:43:026 (1) - overlap
- 01:59:676 (3,1,2) - ds?; same here 02:00:501 (2) -
- 02:09:313 (1,1) - overlap
- 03:04:176 (4,1) - shortest ds ever
- 03:11:994 (1,2,3,4) - angle these better to look like a circle cuz it looks like an autistic flower rn
- 03:56:976 (1,3) - overlap
- 04:20:076 (1) - slider should be at the same curve as previous
- 04:28:776 (1) - i dont think this is allowed
- 05:02:376 (2) - i think this slider should be longer with 05:04:476 (3) - at the very end
gll