1. My Love (6.4 stars, 1818 notes)

Some nice pics C:

Akali wrote:

Song is in 7/4 time signature

Epiclol wrote:

Going to try to mod here, bare with me I'm not a good modder

General

Ar might be a bit too high. You might want to lower it changed it to 9.5
Turn off grid snapi sometimes forget to turn it off at the beginning when im mapping
This song has explicit lyrics, be sure to make a warninggood point going to do that

My Love

00:00:000 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - You should really redo these sliders because they don't look or feel appealing at allgoing to look into that
00:09:150 (4) - Make the slider start on a white tick (Side note, It's okay for some sliders to start on red ticks but for these parts in particular they don't sound good at all because there's a loud sound at the end of your sliders which is on a white tick)changed
00:10:050 (4) - ^changed
00:11:250 (4) - ^changed
00:13:350 (4) - ^changed
00:14:250 (4) - ^changed
00:16:912 - suggestion to add a note herechanged
00:18:412 - ^changed
00:24:412 (4,5,6) - This 1/8 section is a bit too spaced, might want to bring them closerchanged
00:25:462 (2,3,4) - It'd be better if you mapped this in 1/4 instead of 1/8there isnt really any sound to empathize that
00:26:962 (4,1) - The awkward pause between the 4 and the 1 feels unnatural, you should really add notes between these sectionsI spaced them more
00:32:962 - to 01:08:062 - Really boring part of the song which is always tedious on how to map it. You shouldn't make these circles so spaced since the song isn't intense nor is the vocals.yea it is going to look into it
00:34:312 (4) - Make the slider start on a white tickchanged
00:36:862 (4,5,6,7,1) - When I hear this part of the song I imagine a weird/odd kind of pattern but yours is pretty much straight foward. I would recommend doing something like thiswowie i really like that pattern, changed!
00:45:262 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:53:662 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:54:112 (4) - Make the slider start on a white tickchanged
01:09:262 (1,2) - I doubt anyone will be able to hit these two notes with ease. Make it into a 1/8 slider and see how that feels. If it's fine then you might want to do it for the resti think this is more about predictablility, because for me the 2 notes played better than the 1/8 slider
01:15:562 (3,4,5,6,7,2,3,4,5,6) - Nasty stream blanket with that 1 in the middlechanged
01:23:362 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Redo this 1/8 to 1/4 stream, the spacing could be done betterchanged
01:55:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sounds like a 1/8 stream but you put in 1/4, You could make it into a 1/8 reverse slider so it won't be harsh on playersi dont really hear anything in between the notes?
01:58:387 (3,4,5) - With this kind of flow puts the player really offchanged it to a 5 note burst
02:08:099 (7) - Delete thisi tried to empathize the this sound with the second note(did the same in the beginning(01:09:262 (1,2))) because its a hard sound in a slow part
02:10:199 (7) - ^
03:24:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This might be overkill'might' :^) changed it to sliders
03:28:537 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Do not NC these, because of the pattern you made here it is unreadable and confusing. How about this?changed
03:30:299 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You could make these straight for pattern and flow difficulty like thischanged, damn i suck at coming up with patterns
03:32:099 (7) - Deleteexplained
03:34:087 (7) - ^
03:34:087 (7) - ^ By the way the loud sound doesn't start hereoops changed
03:38:212 (3,4) - put these two on yellow ticks, when you put them on red and white it goes too fasti only changed 3 because 4 has the sound on that tick
04:08:512 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - You should remap this to emphasize the sounds moreevery sound in that part is empathized most of those patterns i did in 50/25% speed, that when you hear them you cant really hear them in 100% tho, going to look into it
04:25:012 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:28:762 (5,1,2,3) - Redo these sliderschanged because boring sliders
04:37:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these jumps closer to each otherits a pretty slow part. I did that to make that part not really boring, if i put them closer together that might happen
04:37:799 - What the fu... (Talking about the lyrics since I just noticed them):^)

In general for your first map it was pretty okay. You could make so many more crazy patterns than just streams to get the player engaged in your map. I wish you the best of luck on your map! Thanks! yea i know but there wasnt really an option to do that most of the sounds in the song are close together

Tae wrote:

graved maps can't get any closer to loved :thinking:

now for actual issues:

(already mentioned these few to you)
00:31:387 (4,5) - you may want to polish this up slightly, it does look rather off at the moment fixed
00:55:762 (1) - what is this mapped to? a *tumb* sound you dont really hear it too well tho but i will keep it like this
00:53:512 - you missed a p important sound here :thinking: fixed
for the first ~50 seconds, map more of the vocals, as this will reduce the empty space and therefore awkwardness
some of your double tap thingies dont actually have a note on the second one, have a look into that
yea i will look into the doubles and i also will be somewhat redoing the first part aswell as the last part of the map
(also because i know a bit more about mapping aswell)



00:19:162 (1,2) - potentially increase spacing between these because of the length between them? as above gonna rework it
00:21:674 - there's a sound here :thinking:
00:22:912 - and here fixed
00:23:512 (1,2) - ok idk much about hitsounding but if u add a clap to the end of each of these it sounds gucci sounds perfect ok_hand
00:25:687 - would personally lessen the curvature of this fixed
00:27:112 - there's a sound hereee why am i missing so many sounds NotLikeThis
00:28:462 (4,5,6,7) - would add some claps onto these too sounds ök_hand: never thought about using clap for those
01:14:362 (1,2,3) - potentially make this a straight line? mmh that looks alright

ok after this point the song becomes... i don't even know, and I have no idea what is meant to be mapped and what isn't, so I'd just have a look into your aesthetics if I were you, I mentioned sliders before, so... uh, yeah...
yep gonna take a close look at it and remap some parts aswell

thanks for the mod c:

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squirrelpascals wrote:

Hi! I thought it was funny how im actually mapping this song right now too haha, I'll give you a little mod for this

mah luve

maybe throw some custom cc in here to make ur map look swaggy :3 good idea :thinking:

• 00:14:400 (4) - move it down to flow from the previous slider better? fixed

• 00:16:762 - Put something clickable here, since its on a more important beat? done

• 00:17:462 (3,5) - should both be placed on 1/3 notes fixed it with a slider

• 00:24:412 (4,5,6) - SPace these closer together? they read like 1/2 jumps atm o didnt noticed that(i changed the beginning like 2 times) changed it to a slider to avoid irregular rhythm(because 5 is on a 1/8 yellow tick)

• 00:25:687 (4) - snap to the 1/3 tick? done

• 00:36:862 (4) - nc to signify spacing change? changed

• 00:37:462 (1) - move this nc to the next object on the downbeat, it makes more sense musically changed

• 00:39:562 (4,5,6) - I think you should decrease the spacing here to add some spacing contrast (also goes for similar jump sequences like this) done with a lot of them

• 00:46:162 - Another strong beat here, i think you should move the slider here to emphasize the vocals changed, tho the hard part about doing that is that the vocals are on 1/8 yellow ticks, dont know why but it is lmao

• 00:48:262 (4) - snap to white tick fixed

• 00:50:362 (16) - move nc here to the downbeat. changed

• 01:02:662 (5) - start another slider here to emphasize the vocal? changed

• 01:23:062 - start the stream here, since the drumroll starts here? mmh i never noticed that that it started there :thinking: , changed

• 01:23:962 - Okay, this is a very strong beat. you know what to do fixed

• 01:27:412 - same fixed

• 01:32:362 - also same xd why did i do that, that is so obvious lmao

• 01:40:799 (2) - while this part is mapped in a correct manner, you should snap this to the white tick changed

• 01:42:112 - strong beat here. I wont mod for this anymore because I think you get the jist of what im saying fixed

• 01:47:062 (7) - tilt this down to flow from the stream better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7794763 changed

• 01:56:062 (4) - nc here changed

• 02:01:762 (3) - same, move it changed

• 02:07:949 (5,6,1) - i think the larger spacing should go between 02:07:949 (5,6) - to emphasize that guitar note changed, also changed for the later one

I can only mod to here at the moment given my current time.
But if you want to poke me on a later date, maybe after you get some more mods, i can go over the second half for you Thanks you this was already really helpfull so i will definitly do that c:

Good luck on your first map c: thanks

Mijn Aim Zuigt wrote:

Two timing points at the same time on 01:32:099 o didnt notice that, fixed it

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3

[My Love]
00:25:462 (4) move left
00:36:262 (2) ^
00:36:862 (4,5,1,2) May try to do so for a little more complexity?

00:53:549 (6,1,2,3,4) May try to do so?:

02:50:212 (5) move right
03:12:599 (3) move slightly right
03:15:937 (7) move right changed everything

celerih wrote:

Mod from my queue

[ My Love]

1. Offset for the second timing point should be 16476
2. 00:09:300 (4,1) - 00:10:500 (6,1) - For the 1/1 gaps you would be better off having overlaps since the song ends abruptly
3. 00:16:462 (5) - Here you have two distinct sounds so instead of repeats you should use 2 1/4 sliders
4. 00:17:462 (5) - Make it only 1/6 long
5. 00:19:162 (4) - same thing were you have two distinct sound yet you map it as a repeat
6. 00:22:762 (1) - Make this into a slider that ends on 00:22:912 -
7. 00:24:422 (4) - Make this slider end on 00:24:572 -
8. 00:29:072 (1) - !/2 slider here, you're missing on 00:29:222 -
9. 00:31:472 (5) - Slider end for 00:31:772 - is kind of not enough
10. 00:42:272 (2,3,5) - Avoid overlapping like this
11. 00:49:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - The stream here could be made into a more interesting shape, or at least try making the curve more equal
12. 00:59:522 (5,6) - Line these up so the buzz slider kinda goes into the slider
13. 01:07:922 (5,6) - same as above
14. 01:09:272 (3,4) - Give these notes more emphasis since they don't stand out much right now
15. 01:10:172 (3) - Sound on the slider end is stronger than the sound on the head so 2 circles would be better
16. 01:21:122 (1,2) - Remove the repeats and place circles because they are stronger sounds
17. 01:23:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just have a buzz slider here. Doubling the bpm in the middle of a stream is incredibly hard to read
18. 01:39:422 (1,2,3) - Repeat 1/8 would be better here
19. 01:40:772 (3) - You're missing the note on 01:40:922 - and the slider should end on 01:41:072 -
20. 01:42:272 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - Space this stream out more from the last section, it's going to be read as a 1/4 gap
21. 01:44:822 (2,3) - Making the rhythm this would work much better with the song
22. 01:46:922 (3,4) - Make these two into a kickslider since they are different from the rest of the stream
23. 01:48:647 (15,16,17) - 1/8 buzzslider
24. 01:54:759 (1,2,1,2) - Turn this into a repeat slider that starts on 01:54:722 - end on 01:54:834 - and repeats 3 times
25. 01:56:747 - Missing a note here, you could have 01:56:597 (1) - repeat to hit it
26. 02:27:872 (7,1,2) - this is 1/16th
27. Be careful to sounds changing in the middle of streams. It's important that you represent these changes with spacing, or kicksliders or any other way you can think of. Also, you seem to put a lot of more important sounds on slider ends, be careful of that. Make sure to slow down the song and listen carefully if you're unsure. This is an extremely difficult song to map, like ridiculously difficult. Good luck!

everything has been changed/fixed, going to look through the map for similar types of problems you listed here

kookoo11 wrote:

from my nm q

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• 00:04:200 (2) - overlap this better (tail)fixed

• 00:13:200 (1) - stack this on 00:11:925 (8) - fixed

• 00:16:776 (1,2,3) - rip flownot enough examplaintion as to why this doesnt flow correctly so i will ignore it

• 00:19:776 (7) - nc fixed

• 00:19:326 (5,6,8) - bad overlap fixed

• 00:25:176 (2) - should be nc why? 00:24:876 (1) - this one is on the big white tick so it would be pretty useless to put it on 00:25:176 (2) its fine as it is

• 00:53:076 (5,1) - blanket better fixed

• 00:59:526 (5) - angle this downwards or upwards so people can see 00:59:676 (6) - better and actually hit it; 01:07:926 (5) - , etc.these are lined up like that so it looks as the buzz slider goes into the slider and i dont know but the slider is clearly visible, i removed one revers on it so the player will not sliderbreak as easily

• 01:14:376 (1,2,3) - i recommend stacking 01:14:376 (1) - on 01:13:776 (2) - fixed

• 01:15:576 (2,3,4,5,6) - keep this curve similar to 01:16:176 (2,3,4,5,6) - fixed

• 01:27:051 (1,2) - bad overlap with the upcoming stream fixed

• 01:40:626 (2,3,4) - this would probably look better as a gradual increase of a curve (ex: straight slider, slightly curved, more curved) or the same slider changed

• 01:43:026 (1) - overlap fixed

• 01:59:676 (3,1,2) - ds?; same here 02:00:501 (2) - fixed

• 02:09:313 (1,1) - overlap fixed

• 03:04:176 (4,1) - shortest ds ever fixed

• 03:11:994 (1,2,3,4) - angle these better to look like a circle cuz it looks like an autistic flower rn lmao changed

• 03:56:976 (1,3) - overlap fixed

• 04:20:076 (1) - slider should be at the same curve as previous fixed

• 04:28:776 (1) - i dont think this is allowed well the burst before it shows which way the slider will go but i changed them because they look like garbage

• 05:02:376 (2) - i think this slider should be longer with 05:04:476 (3) - at the very end changed

gll