[Duel Master]
Also I think the intro could get some love and be more interesting but I think you already know that
Great song <3
(Perdona que el mod esté en inglés pero se me fue de la cabeza y no me di cuenta hasta que ya casi había terminado lol)
- 00:01:772 (2) - try this on x186 y344
- 00:23:008 (1) - questionable flow?
- 00:33:120 (4) - I feel like this could be cooler if higher up, like you did from 00:32:278 (5) - to 00:32:783 (2) -
- 00:41:884 (1) - I see what you were going for by eliminating the spacing but I don't think such small spacing flows well nor is
fun to play - 01:03:794 (2) - try placing this more to the right for better flow, around x195 y31
- 01:22:334 (1) - weird flow, try 01:21:997 (4) - on a sharper angle like x217 y256 and 01:22:165 (5) - being on x430 y361
- 01:31:772 (1) - on this whole section a ton of 1/2 sliders feel really random and not supporting any sound, I suggest matching
them to the start of vocal notes. - 01:48:626 (3) - I think you should keep increasing spacing on these jumps to keep up with the song's build up
- 02:20:648 (3,4) - linear movement broken by the circle slider, I think you can improve this
- 02:48:963 (2) - this should be further, on the whole previous section the cursor movement has a semi-fast pace and this jump
breaks that movement into a really slow one, try around x381 y291. - 03:16:603 (4,5,6) - I really think this triple should be curved
- 03:39:862 (1) - awkward flow
- 04:03:120 (3) - try this on x218 y263 I think it's better and more fun
- 04:04:806 (1) - try this on x22 y145 and 04:04:974 (2) - on x107 y278
- 04:08:176 (1) - I think you could've gone with more interesting rhythms here but this one works so not gonna ask you to change
it cx - 04:48:626 (1) - I don't think you should break the previous flow to start this jump section, with this note around x219 y315 you
can start to work out a new jump section 04:48:794 (2) - on x459 y311 should work as a follow up - 05:00:086 (3) - I don't think this movement is worth it for the linear aesthetics, I'd put (3) on x87 y247 and (6) around x204
y343 - 05:08:176 (1) - reaaaaaally awkward, try it around x360 y238 and go from there
- 05:33:794 (1,2,3,4) - I'd ctrl+J this and place it back down, the movement is more natural and then fix the jump towards
05:34:131 (1) - acordingly - 05:54:019 (1,2,3,4) - this creates an odd cursor movement but I don't think it's as bad being the last one on the map, just
letting you know. - 05:55:536 (3,4) - really underwhelming spacing, either space out 3 more on the triple but this being the last part doesn't feel
right.
Also I think the intro could get some love and be more interesting but I think you already know that
Great song <3
(Perdona que el mod esté en inglés pero se me fue de la cabeza y no me di cuenta hasta que ya casi había terminado lol)