Lol.
Giralda wrote:
Lol.
P A N wrote:
Giralda wrote:
Lol.
Natsu wrote:
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- check if soft-hitwhistle.wav has a delay, since the automod thing is pointing it out.
fixed all the nc
- 00:33:935 (2) - I think is better to NC 00:33:935 (2) - instead of 00:33:772 (1) - , looks kinda random atm. same in 01:18:120 (1,2) -
- 00:39:479 (6,1) - according to your other patterns the NC should be at 6 in the stanza, like 00:34:261 (1) - 00:42:087 (1) - etc
- 00:44:696 (1,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4) - not a fan of this pattern at all, it does feels weird when playing, in my opinion you should try to get a way to make the pattern more intuitive to play, specially talking about the antijumps and your NCs also don't help tbh. i changed the ncs a bit.
i think it's fine to have mixed 1/2 spacing with 1/1, the spacing shouldn't be too high cuz the song gets very calm. players can also play this just fine, i got a lot of test plays.- 00:57:739 (4,1) - again the NCs aren't consistent, for example 00:34:261 (1,2) -
- 01:06:951 (2,3,4) - when testing this also feels weird, 2 and 3 should have more spacing than 3 and 4, not only because 3 is stronger than 4, but also the gap between 2 and 3 in the timeline is bigger adjusted a bit, people read doubles like triples imo so it isnt that big of a deal. if it was a distance snapped map i'd agree but it isnt.
- 01:32:305 (1) - any reason for this NC?
- 01:40:212 (1,2,3) - I really don't agree with this, is the only time you use a 1/8 triplet and it's hard to play, it kills combos or acc, just use a repeat slider =( changed to double..
HardSh1n1's Easy
- 00:44:370 (5,6) - the 2 beats are strong ones (5 more than 6) why only 6 has different spacing? 01:02:631 (4,5) - same, 01:05:239 (5,6) - this has similar sound, but they don't have any spacing difference, either do mini jumps for every similar beat or for none, because it feels random.
- I'd use AR 7,5
- 00:49:914 (1,2) - Esto si lo debes de cambiar, se mira realmente feo y con el mapa viéndose tan limpio es inconsistente, hace que los dos deslizadores no se toquen, ademas de que tu deslizador 2 queda demasiado arriba del campo de juego y es el único overlap en todo el mapa, si lo debes de cambiar.
- HP2 estaría mejor balanceada con los demás ajustes.
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thanks!Natsu wrote:
Hardsure
- 00:44:370 (5,6) - the 2 beats are strong ones (5 more than 6) why only 6 has different spacing? 01:02:631 (4,5) - same, the second note you pointed out in both places have a finish hitsound on them. the first notes have clap hitsounds. I use higher spacing for the finishes.
01:05:239 (5,6) - this has similar sound, but they don't have any spacing difference, either do mini jumps for every similar beat or for none, because it feels random. why should i increase the spacing for same-intensity notes? that doesnt make sense imo- I'd use AR 7,5
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both () and <> should be fine imoGaia wrote:
and for the record the tv size for serment should be in brackets too js
well, it's pretty obvious that this entire map was kind of rushed so i'll take it down and work on some more stuff, hopefully you can help me out since i'm not really sure about some of your points. thanks for modding!Okorin wrote:
[flame haze]
did you forget hitsounds on 00:18:609 (4,5,6) - and 00:27:087 (5) - 00:27:576 (1) - why do these have whistles on their bodies uhh whoops.messed up here when i edit this part after hitsounding.
i assume the entire map looking unpolished and a bit unorganized is your kind of thing so i won't comment on that aspect unless you want to improve it
not quite sure what you mean here, if you mean the fact that everything overlaps and the visual spacing isnt all identical that's on purpose.
if you meant something else please elaborate.
01:29:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs 01:34:261 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - might just be me but the parts with vocals and drums have more things going on than the parts where it's just drums and vocals are long and held so why are the sections with less going on the harder patterns and hitsounded additively, it would make more sense to me the other way around
this part is interesting to talk about. i dont want to sound like i'm totally bs-ing stuff but basically i don't think back and forth jumps are actually that difficult, like yea the spacing is high but everyone knows that they're significantly easier than most other types of jumps. taking that into consideration, we can also see that the note density is significantly lower in this part (it's all 1/2 spam, but the vocal part has triples, different slider stuff,
etc.) aside from that, the 1-2 jumps are on a guitar thing that stood out a lot to me while mapping, and to me it seems like the vocals are at their climax;
the fact that the note is held out means more exciting stuff should happen imo, rather than something like a 8/1 slider (obviously an exaggeration). hopefully this explanation makes sense, but i'm willing to nerf it if it's still too much of a "diff spike".
00:49:750 (6,1,2) - feels like a pretty odd way to connect two patterns yousually go for back forth movement but this is one of the very few instances where you go for linear movement and i think you should of have stuck to back forths hmm. i disagree, i use fairly similar movements in otheer places too. for example, 00:26:272 (6,1,2) - , which is actually on the exact same phrase in the chorus, or 00:54:805 (5,6,1) - which is somewhat right-angle-esque. aside from that, the spacing is quite low for most of these any way - the uncomfortable (i guess) movement created by a linear angle isn't as pronounced.
also your whistle sample is mildly annoying since it doesnt really fit any instrument in particular in the song idk the point was to be additive,
i think it sounds fine...+ there's two on 00:15:348 (3,4) - admittedly the one on 00:15:348 (3) - is a mistake, but generally the whistles are supposed to follow the main guitar line that i was mapping to. and i dont understand what's happening or why