Finally a new post instead.
No kds for this.
General
E--N------H--I--Ex.
although you can change cs in normal to 3.5, the gap still exists.
Make hard with more sliders and less 1/2 notes can be better. Also I recommend to remove the 03:15:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - .
If you dont want to make the Hard easier, then make the normal harder is also ok.
Good luck!
If you decide to make some change, then call me back to recheck this.
The ExtRabbit's diff is really cool, I love it very much.
No kds for this.
- Just some complaints.
- My personal suggestions.
- Highly recommended.
- Unrankable, you have to fix it.
General
- Just post as a prove of the title: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/nm23655854
- I tested several times and get Offset+6.
- 03:41:427 - i recommend to end your 3rd kiai here in Easy, Normal and ExtRabbit's diff to keep same.
- ar3, 2.5 seems a bit low for a 175bpm easy diff.
- 01:02:341 (2,1) - quite hard for newbies to catch the rhythm, recommend to make a slider instead.
- 01:12:284 (1,2) - 1.05x?
- 02:00:284 (1,2) - blanket better?
- 02:20:856 (3,4) - 1.04x?
- 02:23:256 (2,3) - keep consistent with 01:15:027 (1,2) - ? so remove 02:23:256 (2) - is better.
- 02:36:970 (2) - also recommend to remove this note
- 02:45:199 (4) - ^
- 02:56:170 (2) - ^
- 03:33:884 (3) - start the slider at 03:33:713 - ? end at the same time.
- 03:36:627 (1,2,1,2,3) - feel a bit weird on this rhythm, try this? http://puu.sh/fv3Gb/4af8755095.jpg
- 04:21:199 (2,3,4,1) - try to keep the rhythm easy to get, like: http://puu.sh/fv3Nd/9e78f9c1fc.jpg ?
- 04:44:856 (1,1) - remove the last note and extend the spin to 04:47:599 -
When making easy diff you should consider for new players, the space of notes should better be 1/1, so the suggestions above all removes the 1/2 beats.
- cs3.5? it can avoid many overlap and make better thread for me.
- 01:30:799 (2) - let the tail a bit left? better not touch the tail of 01:29:941 (1) -
- 01:41:084 (1) - remove nc
- 01:44:684 - add a note? definately clap sound here
- 02:12:627 (1) - remove nc
- 02:15:541 (1,2) - sounds a bit weird, try this? http://puu.sh/fxUsx/ebe6730bd7.jpg
- 02:53:599 (3,4) - 1/1 slider instead?
- 03:43:141 (1) - remove nc
- 04:10:827 (1) - ^
- OD6, 5.5 is a bit low.
- 00:42:113 (1) - why not end at 00:43:484 - ? in fact there are no beat at 00:44:170 -
- 00:57:199 - is it really good to miss the beat here? it may cause confusion when playing
- 01:06:799 (1,2) - that distance may be misread as 1/2... at least should be like the distance as 01:09:541 (1,2) -
- 01:27:541 (4) - nc?
- 01:36:970 (1,2) - also the distance
- 01:44:856 (1) - not necessary to nc
- 01:50:170 (5) - for consistency, nc? or remove nc at 01:39:199 (1) -
- 01:58:913 - same as 00:57:199 -
- 02:03:370 (2) - why 3/4 repeat slider... unreasonable the rhythm is on 1/2 obviously
- 02:04:227 (4,1) - ahh
- 02:09:713 (5) - nc?
- 02:10:227 (6) - same as 02:03:370 (2) -
- 02:11:256 (1) - although it may be your style, but i dont think the slider fits the rhythm here. 02:11:599 - the beat is totally ignored by you.
- 02:36:970 (1,2) - ctrl+g?
- 02:39:370 (3,4) - nazi blanket
- 02:40:227 (1,2,3) - tripet is quite unreasonble here, just like what you did before(01:27:541 (4) - ) is much better here.
- 02:48:113 (6) - nc?
- 02:59:084 (3) - ^
- 03:27:884 (4) - 03:30:627 (3) - 03:33:713 (7) - nc?
- 03:36:113 (1) - remove nc?
- 03:43:141 - 03:54:117 - same as 00:57:199 -
- 03:47:599 (2) - same as 02:03:370 (2) -
- 04:07:827 (1,2) - 1.1x?
- 04:13:999 - 04:14:341 - definitely the beat here is more obvious than 04:14:170 (5) - ... it plays quite weird now.
- 04:16:741 - add a note?
- 01:10:741 (1,2,3) - slider end sounds really unconfortable, also the beat at white tick is more obvious than vocal here imo.
- 01:47:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this overmap cant be passed.
- 01:49:741 (3) - tripets start at white tick is really unreasonable, remove the note and try another pattern?
- 02:31:141 (4) - nc for better readability?
- 02:38:856 (2,3,4,5,6) - the vocal following let me feel tapping nothing when playing
- 00:19:827 (7) - are you sure it can be snapped on 1/16? 1/8 is better for me, also consider for taiko playing...
- 01:08:684 (1,2,3,4,5) - They should be all snapped on 1/6. I'm sure.
- 01:11:427 (1,2,3,1,2) - 01:14:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, also to the following patterns
- 01:19:313 (2,2,2,2) - although i think it's very coooool, but it may be hard to get a pass, jump with 1/8 kick sliders can easily cause combo break.
- 02:31:827 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
- 03:37:312 (7) - slider end unsnapped.
- 04:20:170 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the stream is quite overdone
- 04:47:599 (1) - to 1/8
E--N------H--I--Ex.
although you can change cs in normal to 3.5, the gap still exists.
Make hard with more sliders and less 1/2 notes can be better. Also I recommend to remove the 03:15:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - .
If you dont want to make the Hard easier, then make the normal harder is also ok.
Good luck!
If you decide to make some change, then call me back to recheck this.
The ExtRabbit's diff is really cool, I love it very much.