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(K)NoW_NAME - Morning Glory

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kunka
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Orange : change a little.
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Haganenno wrote:

[Easy]
00:17:781 (4) - place this on (445;260), will look better alligned to both sliders. fixed
00:21:054 (2) - same fix ^
00:31:963 (2) - same ^
00:40:690 (2) - same ^
01:03:038 - 01:03:311 - slider from 038 to 311 and 01:03:584 - hitcircle on 584 feels better I added a slider. However, the circle didn't add it. It is necessary to make a blank for a beginner.
01:23:493 (1) - this slider doesn't fit the aesthetics of this map. Doesn't fit the recent context and the overall context. Remap. Because it became the distorted form when I made the form that matched a sound, I did it in the simple circle.
01:27:311 (3) - potential NC fm,,ok

[Normal]
00:02:781 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like you messed up the rhythm at the beginning http://puu.sh/vHOZU/75ff19d605.png this is how I see rhythm. My rhythm revolves around mapping these longer sounds 00:02:781 - 00:03:600 - 00:03:872 - and so on. If you do not go through with this change, then change 00:03:872 (4) - at least, cuz now you have different objects mapping the same sound, especially the return slider makes no sense. I changed first notes. Reverse slider does not have the problem imo. Snap which is important in this section is 00:02:781 - and 00:03:600 - and 00:03:872 - and 00:04:690 - and 00:04:963 - and 00:06:054 - and 00:06:600 - . The reverse slider is indispensable notes to tie them. In addition, I don't use 1/2 slider and 1 circle in substitution for a reverse slider. It leads to giving a degree of difficulty, and I don't feel the need.
00:08:236 (3) - this slider is different from the others in this combo, copypasting 00:07:690 (2) - would be fine fixed
00:27:736 (3) - new players usually have trouble reading stuff. Give these hitcircles claps instead of whistles so they feel that strong 2-clap beat that will give them directions. That will also transform the beat into a complete banger so its great (do that in kiai too so player recognises the banger and knows what to click). I tried your suggestion. However, I felt a sense of incongruity. It's because there is not a snare sound in 00:27:736 (3) - of music. keep
00:36:600 (3,4,1) - you could aesthetically make it into a perfect triangle fixed
oh and NC the last note fixed

[Hard]
00:04:690 (4) - too far from previous object (I couldn't care less, but if you are going for time-distance equality for the entire map, I guess you should fix that). Because this sound is very strong, I enlarge the distance. There is not the problem with technique in itself.
00:22:145 (3,1) - ctrl+g rhythm wise 00:22:418 - must do snap.
00:24:463 (1) - you should defy time-distance equality for this and put it somewhere more far away. It feels like a 1/1 like the other three hitcircles. fmm,, I don't think so. The space is clearly larger than 1/1notes in before.

[Insane]
I don't see anything bad in this map, except maybe for hitsounding. Everything what I said about hitsounds before stands.
01:15:220 (3,6) - in this difficulty, these claps are annoying, esp at the ending. Doesn't sound that flow-ey. Just doesn't fit what's goin on in the map and the song. Use Custom4 is gonna be a cool banger tbh My hitsouds adds a sound similar to the real music. I don't add it for own sense. So the present does the best setting.

hf I was able to think in various ways. Thanks!
Garden
General
00:52:948 - uh maybe you'll need to move the timing point earlier by 4/1, it's pretty clear that 00:51:872 - sounds off, rest sections sound okay to me

Easy
00:58:402 (3,1,2) - there's no need to leave the 1/1 rhythm empty when the music is still strong there imo, 01:03:584 - is enough for a short break
01:22:948 (4,1) - consider https://puu.sh/vOgf2/6b0afa48d6.png. it creates some correlation between the sliders, and flows better too

Normal
01:22:402 (3,5) - with current approaching rate stack here might be a bit confusing to read for starters

Hard
00:54:038 (1) - seems it's the only slider with such shape in this part, not saying it looks bad just feels a bit out of place xD
01:09:857 (2) - maybe divide this one into two sliders cuz the overall rhythm is quite dense in the kiai section, also it would be a good variation from 00:10:963 (3) - 00:51:327 (3) -

Insane
00:09:781 (3,4) - 00:30:509 (3,4) - it would be more interesting if you unstack these doublets cuz the music is more lively than 00:36:236 (3,4) -
00:57:038 (5,1) - I don't see the vocal or anything is stronger than 00:55:948 (4,1) - 00:58:129 (5,1) - , it's kinda against your general spacing logic.

neat set
Topic Starter
kunka
Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Garden wrote:

General
00:52:948 - uh maybe you'll need to move the timing point earlier by 4/1, it's pretty clear that 00:51:872 - sounds off, rest sections sound okay to me 4/1?? Please tell me the concrete timeline. The present recognizes it to be most suitable offset. So I want me to teach it if there is a better timing.

Easy
00:58:402 (3,1,2) - there's no need to leave the 1/1 rhythm empty when the music is still strong there imo, 01:03:584 - is enough for a short break ok~ I fill in the blanks.
01:22:948 (4,1) - consider https://puu.sh/vOgf2/6b0afa48d6.png. it creates some correlation between the sliders, and flows better too ok~

Normal
01:22:402 (3,5) - with current approaching rate stack here might be a bit confusing to read for starters ok~ I changed pattern.

Hard
00:54:038 (1) - seems it's the only slider with such shape in this part, not saying it looks bad just feels a bit out of place xD I switched to a wavy slider lol
01:09:857 (2) - maybe divide this one into two sliders cuz the overall rhythm is quite dense in the kiai section, also it would be a good variation from 00:10:963 (3) - 00:51:327 (3) - ok~

Insane
00:09:781 (3,4) - 00:30:509 (3,4) - it would be more interesting if you unstack these doublets cuz the music is more lively than 00:36:236 (3,4) - fmm,,,k. I changed it to slider.
00:57:038 (5,1) - I don't see the vocal or anything is stronger than 00:55:948 (4,1) - 00:58:129 (5,1) - , it's kinda against your general spacing logic. You're right. fixed

neat set Thank you~Garden :) I submit metadata just to make sure to reduce your burden to just in case.

Official site of the anime / image
Official site of the (K)NoW_NAME / image

Sound track has not been yet released.
Furthermore, the song contents is still undecided, too. https://puu.sh/vOkEX.jpg
So the "TV size" doesn't write it in a title.
-Nanaka-
Kudosu貰ってなかった
00:11:690 (2,5) -Hardのこれ 00:11:781 (3,1) - に重ねても視覚情報的には他のやつと距離変わんないから重ねちゃっていいと思うよ

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2017-05-09 21:05 -Nanaka-: 00:28:827 (6) - 
2017-05-09 21:05 -Nanaka-: これ変えた方が良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:05 kunka: やっぱ、そう思う?
2017-05-09 21:05 kunka: それlamiの提案で変えてん
2017-05-09 21:05 -Nanaka-: 00:28:872 - にあっても違和感ないし
2017-05-09 21:06 -Nanaka-: これ最高にうちにくい
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: だよねー
2017-05-09 21:06 -Nanaka-: ここだけ違うパターンだから
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: 1/6できてるのに急に1/4やもんなー
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: 確かにunsnapかもしれんけど
2017-05-09 21:06 -Nanaka-: 普通にうてなかったんご
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: 1/6nohouga
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: 合ってると思うんやけど
2017-05-09 21:07 kunka: やっぱ戻すわ
2017-05-09 21:07 kunka: hitsound聞いてもなんか変やしtaiko modeで見たら違和感半端ない
2017-05-09 21:08 -Nanaka-: 00:52:948 (1,2,3,4) - ここもっとつめない?
2017-05-09 21:08 -Nanaka-: 00:54:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - こことのギャップもあるし
2017-05-09 21:09 -Nanaka-: Vo伸びてるのにぶつぎる必要あんま感じないんだけど
2017-05-09 21:10 kunka: 00:53:402 (3) - に入れるって事?
2017-05-09 21:10 -Nanaka-: 単純に00:53:402 - 00:53:948 - に足すか 音取り自体変えるか
2017-05-09 21:13 kunka: 00:53:948 (5) - ここなぁ、、入れたいんやけど
2017-05-09 21:13 -Nanaka-: 01:08:493 (2) - これ見にくいし255/284あたりにしない?
2017-05-09 21:13 -Nanaka-: http://puu.sh/vKvID/a3ed1de0f2.jpg
2017-05-09 21:13 -Nanaka-: ブランケットくずれるけどこっちのがうちやすそう
2017-05-09 21:14 kunka: やっぱそう思う?
2017-05-09 21:14 -Nanaka-: うん
2017-05-09 21:14 kunka: 作ってて「これは罠だなウン」とか思ってた
2017-05-09 21:14 -Nanaka-: www
2017-05-09 21:15 kunka: なおす
2017-05-09 21:16 -Nanaka-: 00:33:054 (3,4) - これスライダーのがいいことない?
2017-05-09 21:16 -Nanaka-: パターン的にもだけど曲調は4にそんな強度いらないとおも
2017-05-09 21:17 kunka: せやね
2017-05-09 21:21 -Nanaka-: 01:02:766 (1,3) - これNC変えてもよさそうだけど
2017-05-09 21:22 kunka: 入れ替えって事?
2017-05-09 21:22 -Nanaka-: そうそう
2017-05-09 21:23 -Nanaka-: 白線別にいれるまでもないかなみたいなとこある
2017-05-09 21:24 kunka: んー、、個人的には一貫性重視したいからちょとおいとくん
2017-05-09 21:24 -Nanaka-: k
2017-05-09 21:24 -Nanaka-: 01:04:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - これ偶数で打ちやすいわけでもないし01:05:493 - からPianoはいってくるから01:04:948 (1,2,3,4) - をリバース二つにして後半連打にしたくない?
2017-05-09 21:25 -Nanaka-: 音分けたいよね
2017-05-09 21:25 -Nanaka-: 00:50:781 (1,2,1) - 見たいな方がすき
2017-05-09 21:27 kunka: りょ。これはちと直すの時間かかりそうw
2017-05-09 21:28 -Nanaka-: www
2017-05-09 21:28 -Nanaka-: Hardいい?
2017-05-09 21:28 kunka: k
2017-05-09 21:29 -Nanaka-: 00:05:509 (3) - こいつだけサークルの2連だからこれスライダーで良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:30 -Nanaka-: 00:07:963 (4) - こいつめっちゃ違和感あるから00:07:418 (3) - これリバースさせた方があわない?
2017-05-09 21:32 kunka: おk、直し時間かかるけど
2017-05-09 21:33 -Nanaka-: 00:11:690 (2,3) - 00:16:690 (4,5) - このふたつテストプレイで重なっちゃうから少し離して良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:34 -Nanaka-: 00:28:827 (4) - これIと同じで
2017-05-09 21:34 -Nanaka-: 00:45:327 (1,2) - これ音取り逆じゃない?
2017-05-09 21:35 -Nanaka-: 今までVoでリバースさせてたイメージ歩けど
2017-05-09 21:36 -Nanaka-: 1.2重ねるなら00:50:236 (3,4) - も重ねた方が良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:36 -Nanaka-: むしろ1.2離して良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:37 -Nanaka-: 00:58:948 - このソフトホイッスルいるの?
2017-05-09 21:37 -Nanaka-: だったら01:03:311 - こっちとかもないと意味わかんなくない?
2017-05-09 21:38 kunka: それ悩んでた
2017-05-09 21:38 kunka: 上のホイッスルは個人的にはほしい
2017-05-09 21:38 kunka: 下のは実はpanp音がunsnap
2017-05-09 21:39 kunka: piano
2017-05-09 21:39 kunka: だから付けるとおかしくね?と思って付けてない
2017-05-09 21:39 -Nanaka-: 普通にやるときはスローとかで聴かないし気付かないと思うけどね
2017-05-09 21:39 -Nanaka-: 音でかければでかいほど
2017-05-09 21:41 -Nanaka-: ちょっとほかゲーよばれたから残りと思いついたらポストしとくね!
2017-05-09 21:42 kunka: ww
2017-05-09 21:42 kunka: いてらー!ありー!!
2017-05-11 21:17 -Nanaka-: これ低難易度見直さないとやばいんじゃない?
2017-05-11 21:17 kunka: そう?
2017-05-11 21:17 -Nanaka-: 220ってNormalで1/2あかんと思うで
2017-05-11 21:18 -Nanaka-: 連打と同じ扱いだと思う
2017-05-11 21:19 -Nanaka-: スライダー含みの形でならいいとおもうけど
2017-05-11 21:19 kunka: 同じくらいのランクド見てみる
2017-05-11 21:24 kunka: 見事にサークル絡みの1/2が見当たらない
2017-05-11 21:47 -Nanaka-: Normalの00:53:493 (2,4) - これサークルにして
2017-05-11 21:47 -Nanaka-: 00:55:129 (1) - これ1/1リバースにしたがよくない
2017-05-11 21:47 -Nanaka-: 00:55:948 (3,4,5) - これVo
2017-05-11 21:47 -Nanaka-: 00:55:402 (2) - これなに伸ばしてんねんっておもわない?
2017-05-11 21:48 kunka: 「みちぃ、いいいいいいいいいい」って感じ?
2017-05-11 21:48 -Nanaka-: いは00:55:129 (1) - やろwww
2017-05-11 21:48 -Nanaka-: 01:06:038 (1) -
2017-05-11 21:48 -Nanaka-: これね
2017-05-11 21:49 -Nanaka-: 01:07:129 (3) - これも手前と一緒でサークルで良いと思う
2017-05-11 21:49 -Nanaka-: 01:08:220 (1,2) - も同じパターンでよくない?
2017-05-11 21:50 kunka: んー
2017-05-11 21:52 -Nanaka-: わりとTvサイズはパターン守った方がbetterじゃないかなぁ
2017-05-11 21:52 kunka: ↑最初のやつのサークルはkeep.でも00:55:129 (1,2) - はリバースする
2017-05-11 21:53 kunka: リバース提案はall fixedってみる
2017-05-11 21:53 -Nanaka-: なるほど
2017-05-11 21:53 -Nanaka-: まあ00:54:584 (4,1) - がスライダー続くからサークル提案しただけだから
2017-05-11 21:53 -Nanaka-: 気にならないなら良いと思う
2017-05-11 21:54 kunka: 歌詞が伸びてるからスライダーにしたいのん
2017-05-11 21:54 -Nanaka-: なるほd
2017-05-11 21:55 -Nanaka-: 00:35:781 (1,2) - これも逆のがあってるとおもうから試してみて
2017-05-11 21:56 kunka: リバース3連続?!w
2017-05-11 21:56 -Nanaka-: いや
2017-05-11 21:56 -Nanaka-: Ctrl+Gリズム
2017-05-11 21:56 -Nanaka-: ってことかな
2017-05-11 21:57 kunka: あーそゆことね
2017-05-11 21:57 kunka: おk
2017-05-11 21:58 -Nanaka-:  01:12:584 - EがサークルだしNもサークルおいて01:12:720 - からで良いと思う
2017-05-11 21:59 -Nanaka-: 01:23:493 - も
2017-05-11 21:59 kunka: fm
2017-05-11 22:00 -Nanaka-: 3ビートの長さあればいいから
2017-05-11 22:00 -Nanaka-: そこはそんなこだわらなくても良いと思う
2017-05-11 22:01 kunka: k
2017-05-11 22:02 -Nanaka-: Normalはもうわいの目からはいうことない
2017-05-11 22:03 -Nanaka-: 1/2の扱いはまかせるわぁ
2017-05-11 22:04 kunka: それBNによって変わりそう
2017-05-11 22:07 -Nanaka-: E 00:17:781 - サークル欲しくない?
2017-05-11 22:07 -Nanaka-: 00:19:963 -
2017-05-11 22:08 -Nanaka-: こっちだった
2017-05-11 22:08 kunka: んー
2017-05-11 22:08 kunka: 一応、一貫性って事でぬいたんやけど
2017-05-11 22:09 -Nanaka-: おはようしたい
2017-05-11 22:09 -Nanaka-: 手前はなんも言ってないからセーフで
2017-05-11 22:09 kunka: んー、、りょ。それでいってみる
2017-05-11 22:10 -Nanaka-: 00:37:418 (4) - これいらないから00:39:600 - こっち足さない?
2017-05-11 22:10 -Nanaka-: Drumもあるし無視するには惜しい感じある
2017-05-11 22:13 kunka: 00:37:418 (4) - 消したくねぇぇぇ
2017-05-11 22:13 kunka: 普通に足すか
2017-05-11 22:13 kunka: ずっと同じパティーンになるがw
2017-05-11 22:14 -Nanaka-: この曲難しそう
2017-05-11 22:14 -Nanaka-: 3/4リバースつかいづらい
2017-05-11 22:15 kunka: 同じリズム続くし
2017-05-11 22:15 -Nanaka-: 00:37:690 (1) - これ2/1リバースで
2017-05-11 22:15 -Nanaka-: 00:39:327 - サークルでも良いと思うけど
2017-05-11 22:16 -Nanaka-: まあ配置がくそだるそう
2017-05-11 22:16 kunka: ですよねー
2017-05-11 22:17 kunka: それやるとさっきの追加のサークルのとこ2連サークルになって微妙にむずい
2017-05-11 22:17 -Nanaka-: 00:52:948 (1) - とかは1/1二つとかでも
2017-05-11 22:17 -Nanaka-: いやいうて
2017-05-11 22:17 kunka: 1/1すらいだーにしるか
2017-05-11 22:17 -Nanaka-: 00:44:236 (1,2) - こいつあるから
2017-05-11 22:18 -Nanaka-: まあ良いと思うけど
2017-05-11 22:18 -Nanaka-: 個人的にはサークルのが
2017-05-11 22:19 kunka: んー試してみるか
2017-05-11 22:19 -Nanaka-: 00:33:327 (1,2) - こっからパワーアップしてる感あってすきだわ
2017-05-11 22:19 kunka: どゆこと?w
2017-05-11 22:20 -Nanaka-: なんかだんだんむずくみたいな?
2017-05-11 22:20 -Nanaka-: 同じパターンだけど音増えてる
2017-05-11 22:20 -Nanaka-: みたいな
2017-05-11 22:20 kunka: あー
2017-05-11 22:20 kunka: 同じパティーンじゃつまらんし、バスサウンドはどうしても拾いたかったからこうなった
2017-05-11 22:21 -Nanaka-: 01:00:584 (3) - これ1/1リバースでよくないかな
2017-05-11 22:22 -Nanaka-: 01:00:584 - サークルで次1/1でもいいけど
2017-05-11 22:24 -Nanaka-: 01:01:675 (1) - これVoでなんとなくリバースさせてるのは分かるけど01:03:038 (2) - こいつの音なんやねんってなるから
2017-05-11 22:24 -Nanaka-: http://puu.sh/vMEw1/043e3fcc7b.jpg
2017-05-11 22:24 -Nanaka-: 手前変えるのと一緒にこうしたい感
2017-05-11 22:25 kunka: むっず
2017-05-11 22:26 -Nanaka-: まじか
2017-05-11 22:26 -Nanaka-: わい普通におきそうだわ
2017-05-11 22:26 -Nanaka-: これでむずかったらこのDiff2/1スライダーパターンしかなくない
2017-05-11 22:27 -Nanaka-: いうてNが似たようなリズムだったわ
2017-05-11 22:28 kunka: w
2017-05-11 22:28 kunka: 01:00:584 (3,4) - これはkeepやわ、、今のリズムが好き
2017-05-11 22:28 -Nanaka-: 01:25:675 (1,2) - これ1/1二つで以上かな
2017-05-11 22:28 kunka: 01:01:675 (1) - は考える
2017-05-11 22:29 -Nanaka-: 了解ウォッチ

貼れない会話が結構あって厳選するの大変だったわwwwwwwwwwwwww
Topic Starter
kunka

-Nanaka- wrote:

Kudosu貰ってなかった
00:11:690 (2,5) -Hardのこれ 00:11:781 (3,1) - に重ねても視覚情報的には他のやつと距離変わんないから重ねちゃっていいと思うよ

log
2017-05-09 21:05 -Nanaka-: 00:28:827 (6) - 
2017-05-09 21:05 -Nanaka-: これ変えた方が良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:05 kunka: やっぱ、そう思う?
2017-05-09 21:05 kunka: それlamiの提案で変えてん
2017-05-09 21:05 -Nanaka-: 00:28:872 - にあっても違和感ないし
2017-05-09 21:06 -Nanaka-: これ最高にうちにくい
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: だよねー
2017-05-09 21:06 -Nanaka-: ここだけ違うパターンだから
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: 1/6できてるのに急に1/4やもんなー
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: 確かにunsnapかもしれんけど
2017-05-09 21:06 -Nanaka-: 普通にうてなかったんご
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: 1/6nohouga
2017-05-09 21:06 kunka: 合ってると思うんやけど
2017-05-09 21:07 kunka: やっぱ戻すわ
2017-05-09 21:07 kunka: hitsound聞いてもなんか変やしtaiko modeで見たら違和感半端ない
2017-05-09 21:08 -Nanaka-: 00:52:948 (1,2,3,4) - ここもっとつめない?
2017-05-09 21:08 -Nanaka-: 00:54:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - こことのギャップもあるし
2017-05-09 21:09 -Nanaka-: Vo伸びてるのにぶつぎる必要あんま感じないんだけど
2017-05-09 21:10 kunka: 00:53:402 (3) - に入れるって事?
2017-05-09 21:10 -Nanaka-: 単純に00:53:402 - 00:53:948 - に足すか 音取り自体変えるか
2017-05-09 21:13 kunka: 00:53:948 (5) - ここなぁ、、入れたいんやけど
2017-05-09 21:13 -Nanaka-: 01:08:493 (2) - これ見にくいし255/284あたりにしない?
2017-05-09 21:13 -Nanaka-: http://puu.sh/vKvID/a3ed1de0f2.jpg
2017-05-09 21:13 -Nanaka-: ブランケットくずれるけどこっちのがうちやすそう
2017-05-09 21:14 kunka: やっぱそう思う?
2017-05-09 21:14 -Nanaka-: うん
2017-05-09 21:14 kunka: 作ってて「これは罠だなウン」とか思ってた
2017-05-09 21:14 -Nanaka-: www
2017-05-09 21:15 kunka: なおす
2017-05-09 21:16 -Nanaka-: 00:33:054 (3,4) - これスライダーのがいいことない?
2017-05-09 21:16 -Nanaka-: パターン的にもだけど曲調は4にそんな強度いらないとおも
2017-05-09 21:17 kunka: せやね
2017-05-09 21:21 -Nanaka-: 01:02:766 (1,3) - これNC変えてもよさそうだけど
2017-05-09 21:22 kunka: 入れ替えって事?
2017-05-09 21:22 -Nanaka-: そうそう
2017-05-09 21:23 -Nanaka-: 白線別にいれるまでもないかなみたいなとこある
2017-05-09 21:24 kunka: んー、、個人的には一貫性重視したいからちょとおいとくん
2017-05-09 21:24 -Nanaka-: k
2017-05-09 21:24 -Nanaka-: 01:04:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - これ偶数で打ちやすいわけでもないし01:05:493 - からPianoはいってくるから01:04:948 (1,2,3,4) - をリバース二つにして後半連打にしたくない?
2017-05-09 21:25 -Nanaka-: 音分けたいよね
2017-05-09 21:25 -Nanaka-: 00:50:781 (1,2,1) - 見たいな方がすき
2017-05-09 21:27 kunka: りょ。これはちと直すの時間かかりそうw
2017-05-09 21:28 -Nanaka-: www
2017-05-09 21:28 -Nanaka-: Hardいい?
2017-05-09 21:28 kunka: k
2017-05-09 21:29 -Nanaka-: 00:05:509 (3) - こいつだけサークルの2連だからこれスライダーで良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:30 -Nanaka-: 00:07:963 (4) - こいつめっちゃ違和感あるから00:07:418 (3) - これリバースさせた方があわない?
2017-05-09 21:32 kunka: おk、直し時間かかるけど
2017-05-09 21:33 -Nanaka-: 00:11:690 (2,3) - 00:16:690 (4,5) - このふたつテストプレイで重なっちゃうから少し離して良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:34 -Nanaka-: 00:28:827 (4) - これIと同じで
2017-05-09 21:34 -Nanaka-: 00:45:327 (1,2) - これ音取り逆じゃない?
2017-05-09 21:35 -Nanaka-: 今までVoでリバースさせてたイメージ歩けど
2017-05-09 21:36 -Nanaka-: 1.2重ねるなら00:50:236 (3,4) - も重ねた方が良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:36 -Nanaka-: むしろ1.2離して良いと思う
2017-05-09 21:37 -Nanaka-: 00:58:948 - このソフトホイッスルいるの?
2017-05-09 21:37 -Nanaka-: だったら01:03:311 - こっちとかもないと意味わかんなくない?
2017-05-09 21:38 kunka: それ悩んでた
2017-05-09 21:38 kunka: 上のホイッスルは個人的にはほしい
2017-05-09 21:38 kunka: 下のは実はpanp音がunsnap
2017-05-09 21:39 kunka: piano
2017-05-09 21:39 kunka: だから付けるとおかしくね?と思って付けてない
2017-05-09 21:39 -Nanaka-: 普通にやるときはスローとかで聴かないし気付かないと思うけどね
2017-05-09 21:39 -Nanaka-: 音でかければでかいほど
2017-05-09 21:41 -Nanaka-: ちょっとほかゲーよばれたから残りと思いついたらポストしとくね!
2017-05-09 21:42 kunka: ww
2017-05-09 21:42 kunka: いてらー!ありー!!
2017-05-11 21:17 -Nanaka-: これ低難易度見直さないとやばいんじゃない?
2017-05-11 21:17 kunka: そう?
2017-05-11 21:17 -Nanaka-: 220ってNormalで1/2あかんと思うで
2017-05-11 21:18 -Nanaka-: 連打と同じ扱いだと思う
2017-05-11 21:19 -Nanaka-: スライダー含みの形でならいいとおもうけど
2017-05-11 21:19 kunka: 同じくらいのランクド見てみる
2017-05-11 21:24 kunka: 見事にサークル絡みの1/2が見当たらない
2017-05-11 21:47 -Nanaka-: Normalの00:53:493 (2,4) - これサークルにして
2017-05-11 21:47 -Nanaka-: 00:55:129 (1) - これ1/1リバースにしたがよくない
2017-05-11 21:47 -Nanaka-: 00:55:948 (3,4,5) - これVo
2017-05-11 21:47 -Nanaka-: 00:55:402 (2) - これなに伸ばしてんねんっておもわない?
2017-05-11 21:48 kunka: 「みちぃ、いいいいいいいいいい」って感じ?
2017-05-11 21:48 -Nanaka-: いは00:55:129 (1) - やろwww
2017-05-11 21:48 -Nanaka-: 01:06:038 (1) -
2017-05-11 21:48 -Nanaka-: これね
2017-05-11 21:49 -Nanaka-: 01:07:129 (3) - これも手前と一緒でサークルで良いと思う
2017-05-11 21:49 -Nanaka-: 01:08:220 (1,2) - も同じパターンでよくない?
2017-05-11 21:50 kunka: んー
2017-05-11 21:52 -Nanaka-: わりとTvサイズはパターン守った方がbetterじゃないかなぁ
2017-05-11 21:52 kunka: ↑最初のやつのサークルはkeep.でも00:55:129 (1,2) - はリバースする
2017-05-11 21:53 kunka: リバース提案はall fixedってみる
2017-05-11 21:53 -Nanaka-: なるほど
2017-05-11 21:53 -Nanaka-: まあ00:54:584 (4,1) - がスライダー続くからサークル提案しただけだから
2017-05-11 21:53 -Nanaka-: 気にならないなら良いと思う
2017-05-11 21:54 kunka: 歌詞が伸びてるからスライダーにしたいのん
2017-05-11 21:54 -Nanaka-: なるほd
2017-05-11 21:55 -Nanaka-: 00:35:781 (1,2) - これも逆のがあってるとおもうから試してみて
2017-05-11 21:56 kunka: リバース3連続?!w
2017-05-11 21:56 -Nanaka-: いや
2017-05-11 21:56 -Nanaka-: Ctrl+Gリズム
2017-05-11 21:56 -Nanaka-: ってことかな
2017-05-11 21:57 kunka: あーそゆことね
2017-05-11 21:57 kunka: おk
2017-05-11 21:58 -Nanaka-:  01:12:584 - EがサークルだしNもサークルおいて01:12:720 - からで良いと思う
2017-05-11 21:59 -Nanaka-: 01:23:493 - も
2017-05-11 21:59 kunka: fm
2017-05-11 22:00 -Nanaka-: 3ビートの長さあればいいから
2017-05-11 22:00 -Nanaka-: そこはそんなこだわらなくても良いと思う
2017-05-11 22:01 kunka: k
2017-05-11 22:02 -Nanaka-: Normalはもうわいの目からはいうことない
2017-05-11 22:03 -Nanaka-: 1/2の扱いはまかせるわぁ
2017-05-11 22:04 kunka: それBNによって変わりそう
2017-05-11 22:07 -Nanaka-: E 00:17:781 - サークル欲しくない?
2017-05-11 22:07 -Nanaka-: 00:19:963 -
2017-05-11 22:08 -Nanaka-: こっちだった
2017-05-11 22:08 kunka: んー
2017-05-11 22:08 kunka: 一応、一貫性って事でぬいたんやけど
2017-05-11 22:09 -Nanaka-: おはようしたい
2017-05-11 22:09 -Nanaka-: 手前はなんも言ってないからセーフで
2017-05-11 22:09 kunka: んー、、りょ。それでいってみる
2017-05-11 22:10 -Nanaka-: 00:37:418 (4) - これいらないから00:39:600 - こっち足さない?
2017-05-11 22:10 -Nanaka-: Drumもあるし無視するには惜しい感じある
2017-05-11 22:13 kunka: 00:37:418 (4) - 消したくねぇぇぇ
2017-05-11 22:13 kunka: 普通に足すか
2017-05-11 22:13 kunka: ずっと同じパティーンになるがw
2017-05-11 22:14 -Nanaka-: この曲難しそう
2017-05-11 22:14 -Nanaka-: 3/4リバースつかいづらい
2017-05-11 22:15 kunka: 同じリズム続くし
2017-05-11 22:15 -Nanaka-: 00:37:690 (1) - これ2/1リバースで
2017-05-11 22:15 -Nanaka-: 00:39:327 - サークルでも良いと思うけど
2017-05-11 22:16 -Nanaka-: まあ配置がくそだるそう
2017-05-11 22:16 kunka: ですよねー
2017-05-11 22:17 kunka: それやるとさっきの追加のサークルのとこ2連サークルになって微妙にむずい
2017-05-11 22:17 -Nanaka-: 00:52:948 (1) - とかは1/1二つとかでも
2017-05-11 22:17 -Nanaka-: いやいうて
2017-05-11 22:17 kunka: 1/1すらいだーにしるか
2017-05-11 22:17 -Nanaka-: 00:44:236 (1,2) - こいつあるから
2017-05-11 22:18 -Nanaka-: まあ良いと思うけど
2017-05-11 22:18 -Nanaka-: 個人的にはサークルのが
2017-05-11 22:19 kunka: んー試してみるか
2017-05-11 22:19 -Nanaka-: 00:33:327 (1,2) - こっからパワーアップしてる感あってすきだわ
2017-05-11 22:19 kunka: どゆこと?w
2017-05-11 22:20 -Nanaka-: なんかだんだんむずくみたいな?
2017-05-11 22:20 -Nanaka-: 同じパターンだけど音増えてる
2017-05-11 22:20 -Nanaka-: みたいな
2017-05-11 22:20 kunka: あー
2017-05-11 22:20 kunka: 同じパティーンじゃつまらんし、バスサウンドはどうしても拾いたかったからこうなった
2017-05-11 22:21 -Nanaka-: 01:00:584 (3) - これ1/1リバースでよくないかな
2017-05-11 22:22 -Nanaka-: 01:00:584 - サークルで次1/1でもいいけど
2017-05-11 22:24 -Nanaka-: 01:01:675 (1) - これVoでなんとなくリバースさせてるのは分かるけど01:03:038 (2) - こいつの音なんやねんってなるから
2017-05-11 22:24 -Nanaka-: http://puu.sh/vMEw1/043e3fcc7b.jpg
2017-05-11 22:24 -Nanaka-: 手前変えるのと一緒にこうしたい感
2017-05-11 22:25 kunka: むっず
2017-05-11 22:26 -Nanaka-: まじか
2017-05-11 22:26 -Nanaka-: わい普通におきそうだわ
2017-05-11 22:26 -Nanaka-: これでむずかったらこのDiff2/1スライダーパターンしかなくない
2017-05-11 22:27 -Nanaka-: いうてNが似たようなリズムだったわ
2017-05-11 22:28 kunka: w
2017-05-11 22:28 kunka: 01:00:584 (3,4) - これはkeepやわ、、今のリズムが好き
2017-05-11 22:28 -Nanaka-: 01:25:675 (1,2) - これ1/1二つで以上かな
2017-05-11 22:28 kunka: 01:01:675 (1) - は考える
2017-05-11 22:29 -Nanaka-: 了解ウォッチ

貼れない会話が結構あって厳選するの大変だったわwwwwwwwwwwwww
色々ありがとん! hardのstack直しといた! 貼れないやつww多分、消すやろなぁって思ってたw
Topic Starter
kunka

Garden wrote:

Insane
00:09:781 (3,4) - 00:30:509 (3,4) - it would be more interesting if you unstack these doublets cuz the music is more lively than 00:36:236 (3,4) - fmm,,,k. I changed it to slider.
It was my misreading. I thought it to be "unsnap"lol. I returned it to the circle and changed it to unstack :D
Garden
set the second offset to around 51858? 00:51:872 (1,2,3) - these three objects would sound more accurate with this offset, you can try 25% and listen
Topic Starter
kunka

Garden wrote:

set the second offset to around 51858? 00:51:872 (1,2,3) - these three objects would sound more accurate with this offset, you can try 25% and listen
I revised it by contents of pm which I sent to you.
Probably I think that I don't have any problem.
Topic Starter
kunka
I made a change as follows.
* I changed the timing points to one.
* I changed bpm to 220.02. Analysis soft is displayed with 220.02. https://puu.sh/vyUdv.png Rhythm is severe in this song. I thought that the decimal point was necessary in aiming at exact snap.
* Correction of the unsnap by the bpm change.
* Correction of the offset.
Topic Starter
kunka
I added timing points to 00:52:395 - to take the correct timing.
Topic Starter
kunka
And I put it back imao
Offset only revised
Garden
sounds fine to me
Topic Starter
kunka

Garden wrote:

sounds fine to me
THANK YOU VERY MUCH :)
Kagetsu
hi

[General]
  1. soft-sliderslide2.wav is unused?
  2. you could add "know name" to tags, the map is pretty difficult to find through the browser
[Insane]
  1. long 1/3 chains might sound overmapped / too dense for what music is offering, generally, you might want to contrast strong beats from the weaker ones, i'll explain more in detail in the next points
  2. 00:12:044 (4,5) - this could be a slider instead, it follows the voice in a better way imo, besides, 00:12:226 (5) - is not that strong so it shouldn't be clickable
  3. 00:13:680 (1,2) - i think a 1/1 slider makes more sense, because the voice is a held sound
  4. 00:16:408 (4,5) - this could be 1/1 as well...
  5. 00:18:044 (1,2) - same reason as 00:12:044 (4,5) -
  6. 00:20:499 (2,3) - although the symmetry looks cool, i think it doesn't represent the music, 00:21:044 (4,1) - is far different from 00:20:499 (2,3) - so i would just convert 00:20:499 (2,3) - into a 1/1 slider
  7. 00:27:590 (5) - you could use 2 circles instead of a slider, the beats on 00:27:590 - and 00:27:771 - are strong enough to do so
  8. 00:36:226 (3,4) - i think this is the only stack in the map? it looks kinda weird imo... maybe using a slider makes more sense, as the music is decreasing its pace again
  9. 00:52:395 (3,1) - mind reducing the spacing between these two objects? the distance might be too much atm
[Hard]
  1. i think the ar is way too low, especially for these kind of tricky rhythms, ar 8 seems like a more reasonable option
  2. 00:35:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't think this should be that dense, maybe this works better
  3. 00:43:680 (2) - this sounds super off, it should be snapped in 1/3
  4. 01:17:940 (4,1) - shouldn't it be unstacked like your previous choices?
[Normal]
  1. it bugs me that the whole diff is snapped in 1/2, most of the music is 1/3... although there are some drums that may sound like 1/2, it doesn't fit the song in my opinion, because the 1/3 rhythm is really prominent. snapping should be consistent through the whole mapset
  2. could also change the ar to 5.5
please note that i only mentioned a few rhythms as an example, there may be similar instances where the issues repeat so please check the map carefully.

I will return later to check whether the rhythms have been improved, so we will see then...
Yuii-

Kagetsu wrote:

[General]
  1. soft-sliderslide2.wav is unused?
insane: 00:10:135 (6,1,2) - it's used
and during other sections as well
Topic Starter
kunka
Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Kagetsu wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. soft-sliderslide2.wav is unused? As yuii shows it, I'll use it.
  2. you could add "know name" to tags, the map is pretty difficult to find through the browser ok~
[Insane]
  1. long 1/3 chains might sound overmapped / too dense for what music is offering, generally, you might want to contrast strong beats from the weaker ones, i'll explain more in detail in the next points
  2. 00:12:044 (4,5) - this could be a slider instead, it follows the voice in a better way imo, besides, 00:12:226 (5) - is not that strong so it shouldn't be clickable ok~
  3. 00:13:680 (1,2) - i think a 1/1 slider makes more sense, because the voice is a held sound ok~
  4. 00:16:408 (4,5) - this could be 1/1 as well... fixed
  5. 00:18:044 (1,2) - same reason as 00:12:044 (4,5) - fixed
  6. 00:20:499 (2,3) - although the symmetry looks cool, i think it doesn't represent the music, 00:21:044 (4,1) - is far different from 00:20:499 (2,3) - so i would just convert 00:20:499 (2,3) - into a 1/1 slider hmm,,,,ok.
  7. 00:27:590 (5) - you could use 2 circles instead of a slider, the beats on 00:27:590 - and 00:27:771 - are strong enough to do so nice!
  8. 00:36:226 (3,4) - i think this is the only stack in the map? it looks kinda weird imo... maybe using a slider makes more sense, as the music is decreasing its pace again fixed
  9. 00:52:395 (3,1) - mind reducing the spacing between these two objects? the distance might be too much atm ok(w I reduced distance of the 00:52:395 (3,1) - by making placement by the symmetry with the 00:53:486 (4) -
[Hard]
  1. i think the ar is way too low, especially for these kind of tricky rhythms, ar 8 seems like a more reasonable option ok~~
  2. 00:35:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't think this should be that dense, maybe this works better ok~
  3. 00:43:680 (2) - this sounds super off, it should be snapped in 1/3 To be honest, I noticed it after bubble, too ww FIXED!!!!
  4. 01:17:940 (4,1) - shouldn't it be unstacked like your previous choices? ok~
[Normal]
  1. it bugs me that the whole diff is snapped in 1/2, most of the music is 1/3... although there are some drums that may sound like 1/2, it doesn't fit the song in my opinion, because the 1/3 rhythm is really prominent. snapping should be consistent through the whole mapset
    I was really troubled at the time of making. I think that 1/3 is very difficult for norma diff. However, I accepted your suggestion and made modifications. As I thought, I think that it's difficult...w Because AR is low, 1/3stack is overlaps very much. Difficulty improves when I remove stack. Uneasiness is left in the present map...
  2. could also change the ar to 5.5 ok~
please note that i only mentioned a few rhythms as an example, there may be similar instances where the issues repeat so please check the map carefully.

I will return later to check whether the rhythms have been improved, so we will see then...ok~~ Thank you Kagetsu :)
Topic Starter
kunka
- About normal diff -
I thought really deeply...
I adopted 1/3snap. Further, I changed DS (1.1 → 1.25)
This is because it removes unpleasant overlap to remove stack.
Probably I think that it was made the modifications that are better than last fix map.
Kagetsu
hi

[General]
  1. 01:25:077 - (on all diffs) i think it should be on the white tick instead, the song is just off lol
[Easy]
  1. you could add a spinner around 00:50:771 - , otherwise the scores will be the same
[Insane]
  1. 00:53:395 (3) - (and others) i don't think this should be clickable, a rhythm like sounds more appropiate. make sure to contrast strong and weak rhythms. (compare 00:53:940 (6,1) - with 00:54:486 (3,4) - , for example)
i think you can call garden to rebubble once you fix this
Topic Starter
kunka

Kagetsu wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. 01:25:077 - (on all diffs) i think it should be on the white tick instead, the song is just off lol eeeeeeeeee,,There is the drum sound in 01:25:077 - clearly (´Д`;; Because the rhythm of the 1/6 is made by 01:24:531 (1,2) - , it's very natural rhythm. It hear a sound off sync when it move to white tick.

    [Easy]
    1. you could add a spinner around 00:50:771 - , otherwise the scores will be the same End-point of the spinner must make 00:51:850 - or 00:51:850 - if I change it. Because there is the reset of the offset by 00:51:850 - , the end-point can't set 00:51:850 - . In addition, I can't adopt the 00:52:940 (1) - because a blank to next note is short.
    [Insane]
    1. 00:53:395 (3) - (and others) i don't think this should be clickable, a rhythm like sounds more appropiate. make sure to contrast strong and weak rhythms. (compare 00:53:940 (6,1) - with 00:54:486 (3,4) - , for example) fmm,,ok~. I removed all the circles where there was not a sound such as the 00:53:395 -
i think you can call garden to rebubble once you fix this thanks for recheak!
Garden
easy
00:51:317 (2,3) - you can manually adjust spacing a bit they are touching each other right now

rest are fine
Topic Starter
kunka

Garden wrote:

easy
00:51:317 (2,3) - you can manually adjust spacing a bit they are touching each other right now fixed!
rest are fine yataa~(´∀`)
Garden
rebub
Kagetsu
ok
Topic Starter
kunka
Thank you, garden and kagetsu :) :)
Adol Christin
gratz kunka
Grim Rapper
grats for qualified kunka~!
Topic Starter
kunka
Thank you, adol and grim~
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