moph wrote:
soz
i cry.moph wrote:
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- feel like 01:06:759 - should be mapped as its a pretty loud, maybe turn 01:06:676 (1) - into a 1/4 slider + a single - ye ye
- 01:09:343 (1) - feel like rhythm can be improved here, sound here is muuuch weaker than the rest of the stream 01:09:009 (5,6,7,8) - the note it ends on here 01:09:426 - is also stronger than the note it starts on, maybe try using the same rhythm as I did here? 00:47:676 (5,6,1,2) -
same situation here I guess 01:19:676 (5,6,7,8,1) - - yuh yuh- 01:13:343 (1,2) - not 100% this fits very well rhythm wise, 01:13:593 (2) - starts on the weakest note within the bar while this 01:13:676 - one of the stronger notes isn't clickable. I'd recommend changing the second repeat slider to something else. Same applies to here 01:24:259 (2) - - I gotchu
- 01:15:676 (3,4,5,6,1) - could make this prettier :^) - :^( bettteeerrrrr
- 01:54:843 (1,2) - move this slightly further away for more emphasis? - yup yup
- 01:57:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - my main problem with this is the fact that there is such a huge jump to 01:58:093 (2) - without much in the music to support it. It also doesn't read as a 1/4 very well or play well considering the direction of the stream. I'd recommend starting the stream on 01:58:009 - and shortening 01:57:843 (1) - to a 1/4 - re-mapped this section to better suit the guitar.
- 02:00:676 (1) - not too sure on the rhythm here, 02:00:009 (1,2,3,4) - you've been following the guitar mostly here so I think it might be better to start this stream 02:00:926 - here as that matches the guitar. 02:00:676 (1) - shortening this by 1/4 will also mean you get to map this note 02:00:843 - which is pretty strong imo. - yuppp, like above changed it to suit guitar
- 02:01:176 (6) - to follow the guitar maybe turn 02:01:176 (6,7) - into a 1/4 slider? - tried a triple instead
- 02:34:176 (5) - feel like this slider could start 1/2 later to match the held guitar sound as well as the strong beat it starts on it. Change 02:34:176 - to just a single? - moved some stuff around
- 02:46:009 (6,7) - maybe try the same rhythm I did here 02:24:676 (1,2,3) -? It's not 100% musically correct now that I listen to at 25% it but I still think it fits quite well. - ah ha, something i can disagree with. I believe the 1/8's here are too dominating to be changed into anything else, i could go with your rhythm choice but your previous part is more has a more technical side to it with shorter notes being played on guitar, where as mine they're much longer with 1/2 notes being played. soz boz
- 02:51:843 (4) - fine as is but could change to a 1/4 slider + single, having 02:52:009 - clickable would be nice - yeah why not
- 03:35:676 (1) - again fine as is but imo would be better somewhere like (428,304) - ooo i like that
- 04:17:676 (1,2,3,4,5) - hm just for consistency with how the other streams are maybe move it here? https://puu.sh/uESXy.png - yup good idea
- 04:35:176 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this https://puu.sh/uET4T.png this way the kick sliders match up with the guitar - oooo yup
- 04:39:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - thiiiis doesn't really line up with the music. 04:39:176 (1) - isn't really anything here to justify that much of a change, if anything it should start here 04:39:342 (3) -. Additionally 04:39:676 (7) - probably should be empty as there are no new sounds here. try this https://puu.sh/uETjT.png - yepo went with that,
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