Mod from PM request, just a few suggestions:
Oni
Oni
- I think 00:04:096 (11,12,13,14,15) - kkddk would be better, you have a strong finish on the last note, or maybe try 00:04:655 (14,15) ctrl+g and add a d on 00:04:375 for the drums.
- I think you should move 00:17:605 to 00:17:419 and change to d, and change 00:17:698 to d as well. 00:17:698 (67,68) dd would be nice for low sound in contrast to high sounds of 00:16:953 (62,63).
- The triple 01:26:083 (290,291,292) feels a bit off because the drumroll starts on 01:25:896, how about moving 01:26:176 to 01:25:990 and change both 01:25:990 and 01:26:083 to d? I think it could also sound good with the drums if you move 01:26:269 to 01:25:524 and add a finish on 01:26:456.
- The 1/2 ddk stuff like 01:05:586 (125,126,127) feels really off because the instrument between 01:04:841 (123,124) feels much stronger like you mapped at 01:08:195 (132,133,134). How about moving 01:05:773 to 01:04:655? Better fit with vocals imo. Same with 01:17:698.
- I think it would sound much better if you move 01:14:344 to 01:13:599 for the strong drum sound, keeping it on 01:14:344 doesn't make much sense imo.
- 01:28:319 (185,186,187) kdk? Fits better to instruments imo.
- I think it sound better for vocals if you move 01:26:642 to 01:25:897 and change to d, 01:26:642 doesn't really emphasize anything.
- 00:17:512 I think better remove or move this to 00:19:375, it feels nicer for spacing between 00:16:766 (21,23) imo.
- I think it would sound nice if you remove or move 00:45:835 to 00:44:344 and change 00:48:071 to d, this part is relatively calm.