Stefan wrote:

I think we can do here something!

[General]
-) Tags in Oni are conflicting with the rest, however you've put one space character too much between "Takago JUDYDANNY" for every diff except Oni: LOL my bad miss ;__; delete one space : Kantan~Muzu



Just remove this.
-) Use the Resnap function (Timing Tab > 'Resnap all notes') to fix your unsnapped notes, they're unsnapped for 1ms. Make sure the Beat Snap Divisor is on 1/4 when you do that. Fixed
[Oni]
01:23:568 (392) - This rather goes from my side and is less something objective; I find that this part (and the next point) are the two exceptions of the difficulty being "longer" and "more difficult" to play. It /may/ fit not so well and could overrun the player since the map tends to be pretty simple with fivelets and triplets but in a good mix. Personally I'd recommend to remove the note so both significant rhythm are still kept.I think that it's the last place of kiai. So I don't want to erase it and not the one deviated from Vocal. 01: 23: 381 (390) - I think that it will erase this place
01:29:344 (428) - Like the previous point, my personal opinion is to remove the note so it simplifies the pattern slightly. I was also checking if kkkkD was possible (along with 01:29:810 (432) - to change to D) but making the note to D doesn't sound so well at all.. so I threw away the idea. Hmmm.. okay.

[Muzukashii]
00:35:586 (112,113) - While I see for the rest why you don't follow every drum hit with a kat, this isn't the case for these two notes. Neither vocals or bgm would give you reason to use kd here instead of dk, the only reason I could figure out is to have a switch with 00:35:586 (112,113) - but idk, these two notes feels off from the whole part and the structure.00: 35: 027 (110, 111, 112, 113) - I put this in a pattern and I want to stay like this because it is in conformity with Vocal


yup, I think we're ready.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

"Stefan"

I think we can do here something!
[Futsuu]
00:11:176 (22) - to differ the note from 00:11:363 (23,24) - better you should change it to d. It makes it more obvious why you use 00:11:363 (23,24) - as kk.

based on accompaniment note, It needs a consistent with before k-kk imo.
00:24:779 (56) - between the part of 00:19:748 - 00:41:922 - this is the only note that feels off from the song. All other notes on 1/2 had a somewhat good reason to be used or are used well at all but that note should be removed.
based on accompaniment note, I think its needed.

Kiai - I feel that some weird inconsistencies are here which may lead to spread problems in the end. The lenght of the combo pattern are good but I'd use less 1/2 notes, 01:04:655 (23) - , 01:07:636 (32) - , 01:16:580 (55) - , 01:20:679 (68) - , 01:25:524 (4,5) - should be removed. (01:25:338 (3) - could become K afterwards if you'd like to).
If remove or change 2-2, they're not clear as single diffs. Ill keep them.

[Kantan]
00:23:102 - What about a don note here? I see that the first half is calmer but it almost feels too calm and plain. We can add some "more" here.
00:28:319 - Could possibly done here too if you ask me.
applied the add somewhere, I changed the alternative way.
00:35:400 (5) - Wouldn't it look nicer if you're consistent with 00:37:263 (2,3) - ? Means to move the note to 00:35:773 - . I mean, 00:37:263 (2,3) - works well with the break before but it looks weird as well when you put 00:35:400 (5) - on 2/1 and not on 3/1.
This is consistent with 00:31:300 - , It only sounds clear the vocal on the fourth beat of the measure. Its not same strategy with Futsuu too.

Thanks for mod~ (¦3[___]
@Kantan　00:19:748 - ~ 00:30:182 - changed the some color and added 2 notes.
@Futsuu: 00:16:394 - removed not to sound the guitar (gap with 00:14:903 - ).

http://puu.sh/vTqFk/a184491a51.zip

Stefan wrote:

Okay.

Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue, my map waiting for you to mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600 I have work until May 22. I will checkMod it by 24th

[General]

> I am concerned by the title. I did not see any 'Short ver.' wordings from the official website: http://www.cuffs-cube.jp/products/mamiy ... oad/sound/ (I know that you may have copied the ranked ver. of this song, but that might not be the correct one) okay. title : 1/5 Short ver. -> 1/5

[Muzukashii]

> 00:07:822 - You missed a Finish here, comparing with 01:35:773 - Oh my bad miss Change it

> 01:26:828 - I dont understand why you put a Finish here, explain it a bit please? It is not too big, but there is sound. Also I want to leave it as it is a place to become the climax of the song.

[Oni]

> 00:07:822 - same in Muzu Same :3

> 01:15:835 - change it to d can improve the flow better imo yeah. I think so changed

> 01:29:810 - changing it to D can show a greater consistency with 00:01:860 - , and greater contrast with the previous mono-kat triplet.oh why i use kat... change it ~

[]

Call me back when the metadata and mapset is confirmed and fixed respectively.

Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue, my map waiting for you to mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[General]

> I am concerned by the title. I did not see any 'Short ver.' wordings from the official website: http://www.cuffs-cube.jp/products/mamiy ... oad/sound/ (I know that you may have copied the ranked ver. of this song, but that might not be the correct one)

Title: [1/5] ショート ver.
Romanized title: [1/5] Short ver.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

@toara: removed bookmarks please ww

Skylish wrote:

Confirmed the correct metadata, which should be:

Title: [1/5] ショート ver.
Romanized title: [1/5] Short ver.

Toara, please fix the titles for all difficulties. Call me back.

> Move the mapset to 'Pending beatmaps' as well.