Hi, from your PM request c:
[Oni]
good luck!
[Oni]
- 00:17:139 (63,64) - maybe ctrl+g since it sounds like there is the same drum at 62,63
- 00:35:214 - try adding something here so it doesn't skip the vocal
- 00:43:040 (168) - change to k? since there is also piano here
- 00:46:394 - try to add something to not skip the sound here too i think its pretty strong
- 01:00:182 (241,242) - change both into k?
- 01:25:338 (382) - finish
- 01:37:636 (444) - change to k
- HP = 6?
- 00:11:735 (33) - move to 00:12:108 - maybe? guitar is stronger there
- 00:15:648 (45) - change to d since there is no melody here
- 00:28:133 - try adding d here
- 00:35:027 (106,107,108,109) - try rhythm like this http://puu.sh/pNI1k/3c926cf88c.jpg
- 01:21:611 (273) - change to k?
- 01:25:337 (286) - finish
- 01:26:828 (293) - ^
- 01:27:574 (295,296,297,298,299,300) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/pNIkz/e1d10d31cb.jpg
- 00:01:114 (1) - i think deleting this would be better
- 00:35:399 (67,68,69,70,71) - 00:38:381 (73,74,75,76,77) - try to use something different between them since they are not similar they shouldn't get the same patterns lol
- 01:05:400 (126) - try moving it to 01:05:773 - i think that sounds more natural
- 01:17:325 (158) - ^
- 01:25:337 (178) - finish
- 00:01:114 (1) - delete
- 01:04:468 (67,68,69) - you can add a note somewhere between these to make it a little less empty. i think the kiai on this diff is a little too easy
- 01:07:450 (70,71,72) - ^
- 01:16:393 (80,81,82) - ^
- 01:19:375 (83,84,85) - ^
good luck!