Itasha_S13 wrote:

o/ Hi :3

• 00:46:576 (4,5) - both sounds are different so I think you should not stack them, I recommend stacking this 00:46:576 (4) - with 00:45:766 (2) - and moving the next slider a bit down I don't want too much movement in this part
  00:49:820 (4,5) - same here, just not stack them :p same ):
  00:53:874 (4,1) - spacing between these is too short imo, since theres a different beat on 00:54:076 (1) - head, which is really more "strong". (If I was you, I'd stack 00:54:076 (1) - heads with 00:54:786 (4) - and it would be something like this http://prntscr.com/ev9s4o I get where you came up with this but that spacing would be too far while I'm building up it from a calm section, it's not in kiai yet xd
  00:58:941 (1,2) - spacing between these its TOO MUCH, should do ctrl+g on 00:59:144 (2) - This is pretty a valid suggestion, I will consider it. I don't want to apply it now because the spacing does seem too big but it's still comfortable to play
  01:00:766 (1) - I think this should be changed into circles, stacked on the next 1. (but making this would probably mess up the spacing with the slider before but if you can move the whole think to something better, I think it would play better) I'm following drums here, not piano :<. But both drums and piano do have likely a hold sound so I think slider is a better choice regards rhythm
  01:35:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - should change the shape of this, the drums aren't "equal", it should be more like http://prntscr.com/ev9w8k and why not, slight adding more space in the last notes, so it fits better with the music (I CHANGED THE BG SO YOU CAN SEE THE CIRCLES BETTER LOL) Agree, that would make the map more interesting :3. Didn't apply as suggested but somewhat
  01:42:320 (3,4,5,6) - hmmm Im not agree with the placement here, slider should first instead of the double, it should be 1 slider- 2 doubles or just make the same thing you did on 01:47:387 (3,4,5) - The rhythm calls for it ):
  01:58:536 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - *claps, make the same in the one I mentioned before ?* Which?
  02:28:941 (1) - idnt the spaving here a LITTLE bit messed up? you mean the jump from stream? no it's intentional
  02:34:718 (5,6) - I hear some 1/8 here, I recommend making these sliders, but adding a new inherit point to make them really short, that would be awesome o.o, I hope you agree <: You are right, a slider is better here. I don't know about adding a new inherit point but there shouldn't be one here
  02:36:847 (11) - > http://prntscr.com/eva1l2 ?? for some reason that straight slider triggered me changed 02:35:428 (3) - this to straight slider instead for more triggering elements :'x. But I noticed the inconsistency here, fixed a different thing
  02:39:279 (4) - should not be 1/4 :< even tho I know you like the pattern of sliders 02:38:671 (1,2,3,4) - *I recommend this http://prntscr.com/eva2rr http://prntscr.com/eva2wx* MY LOVELY PATTERRRNNNN NOOOOOOOOOOO ; A;. I agree with you here, I focused too much on pattern and neglected the rhythm, changed to something better
  03:17:590 (1,2,3,4) - why not just make these into single circles? I think its a bit overmapped this part and you've already used much kicksliders throughout the whole map q,.q but that's the sore purpose of this map's existence xd. Overmapped kicksliders
  03:24:279 (2,3) - this should be a triplet the slidertail doesn't sound the same with (2) and sliderhead
  03:50:833 (5) - make this a 1/2 slider and start stream on 03:51:137 - this would play and fit better imo not really, since this is a drum roll 03:51:036 (6) - I can't skip this
  03:53:063 (9) - this should be a single circle and the next slider should be a reverse, this would play/fit better and add more variety to the map :l I don't want to go for variation here, rhythm should be fine
  04:39:076 (3,4) - ctrl+g on these each individually? :> no because I wanted less dynamic movement here
  05:45:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - add more spacing here lol the intensity of the song isnt reflected in the map imo, IT NEEDS MORE SPACING ok ok xd
  
  nazis:
  01:01:070 (2,4) - 01:01:982 (4,3) - Stack these kappa that would hurt the flow
  02:32:185 (1,1) - stack these correctly kappaaaa fixed

Really nice map, I want to see this ranked. RANK IT Thank you :'3

btw

Why you wanted me to mod your map? I mean... I don't know you, how you find me or you just randomly ask people for mods? Secret (;

iYiyo wrote:

heyo~ hello hello :3

• 
  [cruel streams]

1. 00:06:731 (1,2) - why not doing same effect but with 1 slider? Then you should add red ticks where the music gives a strong beat... same as the rest of sliders
2. 00:59:752 - you use whistles every 1/2 but suddenly you also use it 01:00:462 - here. Imo it doesn't fit really because it isn't supporting the same type of sound you were covering before. Yes the music changes a bit, but in order to hitsound that, you could use another HS... maybe soft whistles? maybe no hitsounds would work fine aswell. I want to keep Elvis' original hitsound example. There is a reason for this whistle, it emphasizes the last Cymbal better, a tad better.
3. 01:05:124 - similar^ (there're a few more if you decide to change it) ^
4. 01:00:968 (1) - why the NC? Imo the "change" in this downbeat only occur 01:00:766 - here, therefore another NC isn't really necessary since the pattern is already emphasized. Adding more feels like nc spam D: wanted to highlight the stream but I guess you are right
5. 01:35:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it'd be better if you follow drums in a proper way. Right now 01:35:428 (3,3) - these 2 circles aren't part of the strong drums beat, so they feel a bit of overmapped :d The sound is indeed weaker than the rest but I don't think it's that weak to ignore it, playing around with hitsound here helps better.
6. 01:37:962 (4) - maybe copy 3 and ctr+h? Right now the placement feels a bit random. http://puu.sh/vh7Qb/88b36ad680.jpg I prefer my messy looking placements on this section :3
7. it'd be better if you emphasize 02:01:576 (2) - this with a NC instead of 02:01:374 (1) - I think. agree
8. 02:46:272 - Yes, you change SV here, that's why you're using a NC. However I don't think this is a really good place to change SV D: Right now 02:45:968 (5,1) - both sliders are part of the same "pattern" of the music. A better place to change SV and therefore NC would be 02:45:968 - or02:46:779 - I think. Try it! Since two people mentioned it I guess I will have to go with it, I'm partly agreed anyway xd
9. 04:39:786 (3,3) - 05:19:212 (1,3) - stack better? stacked better.
10. 05:30:462 (5) - whistle? whistle.
11. 05:35:935 (5) - this triplet feels like it lacking of hitsound because of that D: why no whistles? same for other triplets with blue tick not being hitsounded~ will recheck D;

Hope it helps a bit

Nice streams/ GL Thank you!

edited: Try to keep the .osz file under the 10MB as it doesn't have video on it changed bg from .png to .jpg
Also the Modding Assistant is complaining about the soft-hitfinish.wav and soft-hitfinish2.wav delay being >5ms. Try to fix them aswell! soon

iYiyo wrote:

heyo~

• 
  [cruel streams]

1. 00:06:731 (1,2) - why not doing same effect but with 1 slider? Then you should add red ticks where the music gives a strong beat... same as the rest of sliders
   while this is a slow section, i felt that it should be established as soon as possible that the map will have many 1/4 sliders used in a technical manner (not that these are particularly difficult, but they introduce the playable functionality well imo). also, it's not as though these sliders are inconsistent with the rest of the sliders, 00:28:304 (1,2) - and 00:39:090 (2,3) - must be taken into consideration as well. the sliders i used that have clear direction changes occur because of a reasonable amount of time between those elements. 00:02:012 (1) - being the only example before the 2 sliders you mentioned, the elements captured with this one slider occur after an entire 2/1 of song length. had there been interesting mapping elements during 1/2, i may have mapped 00:02:012 (1) - in different sliders.

Wishkey wrote:

Diff

1. 00:11:450 (3,1) - only the borders overlapping here looks a bit ugly, I'd either avoid it or overlap it a bit more like this kind of overlap 00:12:124 (1,1) - im sure this was a valid point when you first wrote it but i suppose asaiga fixed it for me, thanks asaiga c:
2. 00:20:888 (1,1) - quite a bit of unexpected speed up here in this section since that 1/4 snap with that ds, why don't make this a 1/2 gap like at 00:23:585 (1,1) - so its a bit calmer to play the swirl starting at 00:22:236 - leads into 00:23:585 (1) - , the direction is intuitive.
3. 00:35:719 (1,1) - why not make 00:37:742 (1) - the return slider starting on the prev downbeat here, fits the vocals imo since thats where the new word starts (also only non clikcalbe downbeat in the section) wtf i mretadred
4. 00:42:461 (2) - Could start the NC here, since these 3 notes are kinda connected in the music and that lonely NC doesnt look that nice imo at 00:44:820 (1) - my original intention was to have the player know where to go but it looks like asaiga fixed this one for me too, thanks asaiga! c:

Really cool map and song! Flowed really nice to me while playing, gl! i agree asaiga did omega gud job desu

HighTec wrote:

yo hello

[ General]

1. Files with supposedly more than 5ms delay: later
   soft-hitfinish.wav
   soft-hitfinish2.wav
   Would go over them again in Audacity to be sure of it

[ Tormented Self]

1. 00:42:461 (1,2,3) - feeling like this should be filled up with sliders. Sliders have been used beforehand to cover up vocals so it doesn't make a lot of sense to not do so here Disagree because somehow slow sliders kinda bring the players in a passive state while circles like these make a bit more prepared
2. 00:50:630 (6,7) - not a fan of the movement here. (7) is currently unemphasised as per movement eventho it's different than (6) and imo worth emphasising. maybe put (7) down a bit more to have it more notable when playing. i mean something like this moved
3. 00:54:482 (1) - due to the spacing of the jumps before, this note lacks its impact. in other words: i feel like this should be a rly emphasised note but with the current spacing it lacks that a lot. try moving 00:54:076 (1,2) - closer perhaps to have a bigger impact later but the drums are not that loud and speacial. I get where came up with this but due to the strain movement here, the straight stream downwards, I think it has enough impact
4. 00:58:941 (1,2) - i like the patterning, however this has too much spacing compared to the pattern before. i'm looking at 00:58:130 (1,2,3,4) - that as first barely requires movement to something screenjump with a sharp angle, which looks really inconsistent as the music doesn't change that dramatically. please decrease the spacing a bit ;w; I call this ''the roller coaster effect'' xd. The first 4 sliders are to build up the momentrum here, agreeing that this spacing is too much but it's totally doable
5. 01:20:833 (1,2,3) - ngl this is the only pattern to where the slider curve doesn't match the curve of the pattern. try to make the curves fit \w/ thank god there is only one. Fixed :'x
6. 02:01:576 (1,2,1) - the stream jump here feels really sudden and doesn't fit with any of your other patterning. would make the jump less big to fit more with stuff like 01:58:536 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - But I'm HanzeR's apprentice Fixed
7. 02:12:320 (7,8,1) - when playing this i got the feeling like the spacing of the triple is a little too big to fit with the movement from before. neither do i think that it fits the song intensity at that part I don't think it's any of a problem
8. 03:20:630 (1,2,3,4) - this really threw me off. since you don't expect 4taps due to the rest of the map making it very counter-intuitive to play. maybe some polishment would be nice to have, like perhaps some NC tricks so that it doesn't throw me off as hard as it did >w< made it 6 taps instead owo/. Should be easier now lo
9. 03:37:860 (1,2) - wouldn't it be more fun to give these notes some weird flow or spacing? the sound they follow is different from the kicksliders beforehand and making a noticable difference can be a cool thing to do. not in my case :<
10. 03:48:401 (1) - slidershape is not symmetrical i know, very picky, but pls ;w; I'm so bad at making sliders I don't even know how to fix this T w T. Adjusted somewhat

this is mostly what i noticed from the testplay, didnt go as much in depth as normal but i hope this satisfies you
some points mentioned above could be applied to other situations too, try to look through the map and if you agree, make adjudgements

cya thank you for checking, didn't make a major change on a whole map but fixed gud stuff :'3

-Jukke- wrote:

hihi mod as requested :3


01:06:543 - there is no sound here, i would also suggest you make 01:06:644 (3) - a single circle to emphasize it but you can keep it as a slider made it like this to have these as a whole pattern. There is no sound on that timestamp but it's used to keep the next slider emphasized plus it plays nicely
move 01:12:928 (2) - up and 01:22:658 (2) - down so it would be more like how you did it in other places for this section, usually the circle is not on the "in" side of the slider
the quads in that section felt surprisingly nice btw, great work on those I have no idea how I did that, thanks xd
01:26:914 (7,1) - blanket 7 more in with 1 flow would be too straining, I don't want to sacrifice flow for blanket
01:35:428 - there is no sound here I guess I will just delete that note
02:41:813 (6,1) - why are these two not spaced out? you did it before, so why not now? Depends on how the music goes, if it's still hype, I make a jump if it goes calmer than its previous part, I make constant spacing.
02:47:083 - no sound again same reasoning
02:54:482 (5) - this slider looks really unfitting please don't judge my slider art skill /w\
03:19:110 (4,1) - why did you space these two out but didnt do it elsewhere on this section? you did it in the section before yeah, but only here during this section Inconsistency it is, fixed
04:30:462 (6,1) - and 04:35:326 (5,1) - are way overspaced imo this part is the hypest since it combines more drums and vocal goes high as well, so I decided to spike this section a bit. :'>
04:42:218 - no sound again same reasoning
04:43:840 (2,3,4) - these are super awkward to play, maybe make the spacing different or change the rhythm (delete 3 and make 2 a slider for example) Currently I have no solution for this one, I will talk to my friend and we will see what I can change, this part is questionable to me as well :3
05:45:360 - no sound I can make it like the second kiai but somehow due to the vocal and this kiai, it feels more power than the 2nd kiai so I decided to map vocal here thus there are extra notes

overall i found the map super fun to play, it flowed nicely and hitting those spaced streams sightread was really pleasing, song is cool too. i love it. sorry if i wasnt of too much help, i just love the way those chorus parts play and dont really want any changes there Xdd thank you a lot!!❤

Itasha_S13 wrote:

1/8

o/ apparently you didnt get what I meant for this part 02:34:718 (5) - which is 1/8 I meant to do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7815085 so you keep the stream exactly like before, it plays the same, but you fill up the 1/8 sound at the same time with small sliders hmmmm maybe.. youl should make the same in every 1/8 part so I think youll decline but I stlll point it out xd I did misunderstand your point, but it made me realize something else. Every drum roll in the song I map it with a slider, I don't want 1/8 elements here.

PandaHero wrote:

Hello, as you requested.

[General]

1.Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms: I will get this done asap
soft-hitfinish.wav
soft-hitfinish2.wav
2. Aaah, I would like to see combo-colors that more related to bg I tried, the background is pretty monotonous so using similar colors just doesn't go well

[Tormented Self]

00:17:517 (2,1) - uncomfortable movement here, I suggest to move 00:18:191 (1) - down. It will be cool if you make here smth like this The current pattern is not uncomfortable at all, your isn't either. But judging from the sound, this makes more sense with the music
00:39:427 (3,1) - same as before, you can move 1 slider up and right (X:203 Y:82 is perfect as for me). that would ruin the aesthetics and too far ):
00:54:279 (2,1) - will be better, if you make spacing between these objects similar to 00:54:076 (1,2) - I see your point, I partly agree but there are a few things. I want to begin every kiai using a similar pattern, a straight downwards stream. The straining curve of the stream to break the circular flow of the sliders is enough to emphasize what needs to be emphasized
01:00:360 (4) - you can place this slider in relation to 2 slider in the same way as you did here 00:59:752 (1,3), it will looks nice. The reason why I don't make them like that is because of the movement I want to create here. Indeed that will look better but the oval flow isn't as much likable as this one for me
01:00:563 (5,1) - I would like to make spacing between these objects bigger, because you slowing down cursor here and it feels strange. Feel the same, I fixed it somewhat. Hope it's better
01:19:921 (4,5,6,7) - hm, move it ~X:190 Y:241, it will looks like patterns that you did before. not exactly there but close
01:20:428 (8,9) - if you did ^ move it down for keeping spacing. Yes
01:24:786 (3,4) - I don't like how it looks, maybe will be better to make this sliders parallel to each other? No I don't want to do that, I'm sorry for my bad patterning skill here but it feels the best to me, because I made them xd. Tried asking some others for help in this slow section but people are busy so I had to do this on my own.
01:28:029 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:31:272 (3,4) - oh, it works well here, cool. uwu
01:50:022 (1,2) - hm, not beauty for me, maybe this will be better? not exactly as suggested but fixed close to what you have :3
02:25:698 (1,4) - these sliders place to close to each other, move it to ~X:156 Y:90, so it 02:25:698 (1,2,3,4) - will looks more like one pattern. spaced them a little bit further
02:29:549 (4) - without curve this slider looks better - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7826521 you are completely right, it does. Fixed
02:35:022 (7) - is this finish really necessary here? o.o yes, Elvis did that :3. I see where he came up with that so I use thatl
04:33:198 (2) - ^ I think the finish hs here supports this sound the best
04:45:157 (1) - ^ ya this isn't
02:39:583 (5,6) - place it right in the middle between 02:39:076 (3) - and 02:38:874 (2) - (aesthetic stuff ;w;) moved a bit
02:38:468 (7) - oh wait, and this too same
04:27:928 (4) - just move it a bit up, for making 04:27:522 (2,4) - symmetrical to 04:27:320 (1,3) -, so this pattern - 04:27:320 (1,2,3,4) will be looks better (pretty minor, I know). moved
05:32:590 (1) - put nc here, I think it will be more plesant to read o.o I don't think so xd
05:32:995 (3,1) - swap nc here, if you did this ^ I didn't

Second half of map is really cool, good job :3 thank you very much for some great polishings! :3

00:58:130 (1,2,3,4) - Here should be flow break in each objects bcs of Violin sound. K lets say u didnt broke bcs of aesthetic, but here 00:58:941 (1,2,3,4) - u starting flow broke with each Violin sounds.These 2 Violin sections Are of the same nature. I recommend for you do flow break method, it gonna give good impact:
00:58:333 (2) - ctrl+G
00:58:739 (4) - ^
05:50:225 (2) - ^
05:50:630 (4) - ^


05:32:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here is about the same. U didnt flow break notwithstanding Vocal have flow break Nature. It will have some good impact if:
05:32:387 (2) - ^
05:32:793 (4) - ^
If u listen me 05:32:995 (5) - this will have Approximately the same spacing between prev and next objects.


About streams.. In your mapping style accurate flow is VERY important. So pls do 1x spacing between circle space when vocal is active in kiai section.
04:34:921 (1,2,3,4,5) - here is x1.1 also in my opinion this stream have bad flow. 04:34:718 (2,1,2) - maybe if u make degree between 1 and 2(circle) like 1 and 2(slider) it will help. Also i cant find analog with x1.1 spacing of this stream in others kiai so hoping u should fix it.


03:15:157 (5) - here need new begin of flow direction:
03:15:360 (7) - ctrl+G and stack 03:15:157 (5,6) - on his head
03:15:563 (8) - Ctrl+G
03:15:766 (9) - ^

04:12:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i dont think this stream deserve to be so spaced in calm part also round streams like these is uncomfortable
00:54:887 (1) - u can put him better
02:02:995 (1) - about pause. Maybe without pause here ? Bcs 02:12:725 (1) - after this circle player have much time for rest before intense kiai.
03:58:130 (1) - ^

m3gB3g wrote:

~hi Hello
just some short feedback

00:58:130 (1,2,3,4) - Here should be flow break in each objects bcs of Violin sound. K lets say u didnt broke bcs of aesthetic, but here 00:58:941 (1,2,3,4) - u starting flow broke with each Violin sounds.These 2 Violin sections Are of the same nature. I recommend for you do flow break method, it gonna give good impact: I acutally had flowbreak thing before, the first time I mapped this. But then someone else came along and suggested to make it more static to build up the momentrum and there it is. Not planning to change this pattern for now
00:58:333 (2) - ctrl+G
00:58:739 (4) - ^
05:50:225 (2) - ^
05:50:630 (4) - ^ Would be uncomfortable to play


05:32:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here is about the same. U didnt flow break notwithstanding Vocal have flow break Nature. It will have some good impact if:
05:32:387 (2) - ^
05:32:793 (4) - ^
If u listen me 05:32:995 (5) - this will have Approximately the same spacing between prev and next objects. The previous pattern already has something like this so I want to change it, if I apply this the spacing would be too far and not fitting with the music


About streams.. In your mapping style accurate flow is VERY important. So pls do 1x spacing between circle space when vocal is active in kiai section.
04:34:921 (1,2,3,4,5) - here is x1.1 also in my opinion this stream have bad flow. 04:34:718 (2,1,2) - maybe if u make degree between 1 and 2(circle) like 1 and 2(slider) it will help. Also i cant find analog with x1.1 spacing of this stream in others kiai so hoping u should fix it. because this part is hype and it has different rhythm so I spike it


03:15:157 (5) - here need new begin of flow direction: no need
03:15:360 (7) - ctrl+G and stack 03:15:157 (5,6) - on his head
03:15:563 (8) - Ctrl+G
03:15:766 (9) - ^ too much movement

04:12:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i dont think this stream deserve to be so spaced in calm part also round streams like these is uncomfortable It's not that calm to not be spaced stream, I think it's good enough
00:54:887 (1) - u can put him better how? I don't see any wrong with this particulary xd
02:02:995 (1) - about pause. Maybe without pause here ? Bcs 02:12:725 (1) - after this circle player have much time for rest before intense kiai.
03:58:130 (1) - ^ But there is nothing to map on these 2 parts. Forcing objects aren't good

Badass song
Badass BG
Badass mapping
This totally deserving to be ranked

Good Luck, hoping my feedback was usefull

Xexxar wrote:

Then mod it? There's nothing stopping you from doing so.

_DT3 wrote:

Nu uhh, I still wanted to mod before a BN checked it ;w;

東方永夜抄　～ Imperishable Night.

Lasse wrote:

00:20:888 (1) - are you mapping without sliderends cause this looks kinda fucked http://i.imgur.com/3wk6Dip.jpg oh fuck hahaha, honestly i had not looked at the map with sliderends a single time, fixed LOL, i just ended the slider where the red point was previously

Lasse wrote:

you didn't tell me it's touhou + merami when asking for a check 👀
I just randomly saw it bubbled in wip now I will just use /np in the future uwu

source is missing a dot at the end, just copy http://www16.big.or.jp/~zun/html/th08top.html the space in this quote is in another format so it's large, you sure about this? Otherwise I added a '' . '' at the end
=>

東方永夜抄　～ Imperishable Night.

add "merami" to tags cause website search is bad added
od is quite low for spaced streams at this bpm, 8.7-9 would be nice to reduce notelock Increased to 8.8, I'm not familiar with notelock thing so I prefer keeping OD low xd

hitsound volume of intro until 00:45:158 - seems way too loud, try around 30%? fixed
would also be nice if you used a different sampleset and hitsounded piano with default soft whistles or something like that Since I have no basic in keysounding so I added 3rd soft sample. Please recheck if it makes sense more green lines
cheer hitsound is extremely unfitting for this song replaced xd


00:20:888 (1) - are you mapping without sliderends cause this looks kinda fucked whttp://i.imgur.com/3wk6Dip.jpg
01:06:239 (1,2) - other stuff here kinda empphasizes piano but this put it on sliderend. song has 1/2 emphasis here so whole rhythm seems unfitting tbh I had 1/2 before on the first time I created this. But the previous pattern 01:04:617 (1,2,3,4) - has 1/2 too so it would be boring to play 1/2 after 3/4 slider again. I talked to a friend and we decided that to make this part follows the drums instead, there are upcoming rhythms that have similar sound anyway so it wouldn't break consistency I think.
02:02:995 - this just seems like a really weird spot for a break, would suggest to fill this, even if 's like mostly 1/1 circles or whatever // 03:58:130 - similar here filled both with 1/1 circles hitsounded with drum sample. Not very pretty patterns but hope they are sufficient.
02:21:441 (4,1,2,1) - check with stacking enabled // 04:16:576 (4,1,2) - I think it's better now
02:31:678 - vocal emphasizes blue tick, so why not http://i.imgur.com/Zzc5pjF.jpg that would break my pattern there ; w;. I thought this was actually fine because the drums sound are more dominant and clicking 5 notes is more inuitive to play 02:31:779 (3,4,5,6,1) -
02:34:414 (3,4) - makes more sense to ctrlg rhythm emphasis wise I think not ctrl+g but added a note in between
03:20:428 (8,9) - could be nice as 1/4 slider to emphasize following piano better as piano on 03:20:529 (9) - is really weak really? it's just high pitch not that weak xd
03:21:441 (5) - and this would be nice as 2 circles lol changed to circles
second chorus rhythm is pretty much same so things from first most likely aplpy here too mwee
04:37:049 (1,2) - with your tendency to copy paste sliders, having these the same would make sense changed
04:41:914 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - rhythm is pretty unfitting to me cause most emphasis melody wise is on the white ticks I changed patterns at the end of the post into something like this to keep consistency. I follow drums here
05:02:793 - could add a circle instead of skipping vocal cause that transitions better into the vocal stuff right after added note
05:45:766 (4,5,1) - could be spaced more cause going from huge vocal jumps to stacked vocal triple is a bit weak made it cross screen jump lol jk

remove the cheer and call me back Removed. Come back come back owo/

Lasse wrote:

I just randomly saw it bubbled in wip now

MrSergio wrote:

I had this map in my "to check?" list for some reason, opened the thread and saw 2 bubbles. weeeeeeeee
Oh well, here we go I guess

- 01:05:022 (3) - maybe remove that ugly whistle from tail =3= replied below
- 02:21:239 (3) - auto sampleset to create contrast on the last beat? // 04:16:374 (3) - same
- 02:27:117 (8) - ah, the fact this is using that hitsounding kinda turns me off. It's a matter of consistency here: 02:26:914 (7,8) - I would expect both to have some similar features seeing they are visually similar.
This doesn't happen, since, as I said, 8 is using a different hitsounding. So... instead, what do you think of this? Then I will make this slider with a red anchor. Because I don't map thing like this in my map, the playability is poor for my taste. Applied the same for this 02:31:171 (2) -
- 02:32:590 (3) - ah, this is similar to 01:05:022 (3) - so now I wonder if I'm not hearing something here o.O
I believe hitsounding and patterns should go hand-in-hand, hence why I suggest to remove that whistle on tail (otherwise you can do something similar to what I suggested above, but that would ruin your patterns and I wouldn't want that tbh) okay, these whistles are removed
- 02:40:901 (4) - I'm being annoying even for myself, but uhhhh... consistency with the rest in case you change something (I'm also curious as to why we have these kicks on slider tails sometimes) (I won't really point them out anymore since you know... ) Explained in-game. I asked EvilElvis for a look at the map, he did some hitsound examples for me and I followed a part of it. The point of the whistle on tail is to emphasize the last finish-hs slider. But since I'm partly agreed that it's better to not have it there so removed

List of removed hitwhistle on slidertail

1. 02:32:590 (3) -
2. 01:05:022 (3) -
3. 02:45:766 (4) -
4. 04:27:725 (3) -
5. 05:52:252 (4) -

Added whistles on these 04:41:914 (1,1,1) - I think I forgot
04:49:212 - and 04:49:617 - changed to 70% to match consistency.
04:50:022 - and 05:59:549 - changed to 50% 70% to match consistency
05:43:536 - added whistle on head, forgot :v


Also made some changes myself
02:21:847 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this stream here I forgot to hitsound and it's added now. Also added whistle on these drum-sampled red and white ticks notes for some effects.
Same 04:16:982 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
But this 00:54:482 - no change

Lastly, replaced the current normal-hitfinish with something better.


Yeah... besides that strange hitsounding at times, I have not much to say

Naxess wrote:

Just logging that we did some minor changes: changed around the pattern at 05:24:076 - and slider shape at 04:49:617 - along with removing some unnecessary finish hitsounds, mainly things like 01:06:948 - 04:49:617 - , where they got a bit excessive. Added "withered leaf" to tags.

Still #2