Xexxar wrote:

Then mod it? There's nothing stopping you from doing so.

_DT3 wrote:

Nu uhh, I still wanted to mod before a BN checked it ;w;

東方永夜抄　～ Imperishable Night.

Lasse wrote:

00:20:888 (1) - are you mapping without sliderends cause this looks kinda fucked http://i.imgur.com/3wk6Dip.jpg oh fuck hahaha, honestly i had not looked at the map with sliderends a single time, fixed LOL, i just ended the slider where the red point was previously

Lasse wrote:

you didn't tell me it's touhou + merami when asking for a check 👀
I just randomly saw it bubbled in wip now I will just use /np in the future uwu

source is missing a dot at the end, just copy http://www16.big.or.jp/~zun/html/th08top.html the space in this quote is in another format so it's large, you sure about this? Otherwise I added a '' . '' at the end
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東方永夜抄　～ Imperishable Night.

add "merami" to tags cause website search is bad added
od is quite low for spaced streams at this bpm, 8.7-9 would be nice to reduce notelock Increased to 8.8, I'm not familiar with notelock thing so I prefer keeping OD low xd

hitsound volume of intro until 00:45:158 - seems way too loud, try around 30%? fixed
would also be nice if you used a different sampleset and hitsounded piano with default soft whistles or something like that Since I have no basic in keysounding so I added 3rd soft sample. Please recheck if it makes sense more green lines
cheer hitsound is extremely unfitting for this song replaced xd


00:20:888 (1) - are you mapping without sliderends cause this looks kinda fucked whttp://i.imgur.com/3wk6Dip.jpg
01:06:239 (1,2) - other stuff here kinda empphasizes piano but this put it on sliderend. song has 1/2 emphasis here so whole rhythm seems unfitting tbh I had 1/2 before on the first time I created this. But the previous pattern 01:04:617 (1,2,3,4) - has 1/2 too so it would be boring to play 1/2 after 3/4 slider again. I talked to a friend and we decided that to make this part follows the drums instead, there are upcoming rhythms that have similar sound anyway so it wouldn't break consistency I think.
02:02:995 - this just seems like a really weird spot for a break, would suggest to fill this, even if 's like mostly 1/1 circles or whatever // 03:58:130 - similar here filled both with 1/1 circles hitsounded with drum sample. Not very pretty patterns but hope they are sufficient.
02:21:441 (4,1,2,1) - check with stacking enabled // 04:16:576 (4,1,2) - I think it's better now
02:31:678 - vocal emphasizes blue tick, so why not http://i.imgur.com/Zzc5pjF.jpg that would break my pattern there ; w;. I thought this was actually fine because the drums sound are more dominant and clicking 5 notes is more inuitive to play 02:31:779 (3,4,5,6,1) -
02:34:414 (3,4) - makes more sense to ctrlg rhythm emphasis wise I think not ctrl+g but added a note in between
03:20:428 (8,9) - could be nice as 1/4 slider to emphasize following piano better as piano on 03:20:529 (9) - is really weak really? it's just high pitch not that weak xd
03:21:441 (5) - and this would be nice as 2 circles lol changed to circles
second chorus rhythm is pretty much same so things from first most likely aplpy here too mwee
04:37:049 (1,2) - with your tendency to copy paste sliders, having these the same would make sense changed
04:41:914 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - rhythm is pretty unfitting to me cause most emphasis melody wise is on the white ticks I changed patterns at the end of the post into something like this to keep consistency. I follow drums here
05:02:793 - could add a circle instead of skipping vocal cause that transitions better into the vocal stuff right after added note
05:45:766 (4,5,1) - could be spaced more cause going from huge vocal jumps to stacked vocal triple is a bit weak made it cross screen jump lol jk

remove the cheer and call me back Removed. Come back come back owo/

Lasse wrote:

I just randomly saw it bubbled in wip now

MrSergio wrote:

I had this map in my "to check?" list for some reason, opened the thread and saw 2 bubbles. weeeeeeeee
Oh well, here we go I guess

- 01:05:022 (3) - maybe remove that ugly whistle from tail =3= replied below
- 02:21:239 (3) - auto sampleset to create contrast on the last beat? // 04:16:374 (3) - same
- 02:27:117 (8) - ah, the fact this is using that hitsounding kinda turns me off. It's a matter of consistency here: 02:26:914 (7,8) - I would expect both to have some similar features seeing they are visually similar.
This doesn't happen, since, as I said, 8 is using a different hitsounding. So... instead, what do you think of this? Then I will make this slider with a red anchor. Because I don't map thing like this in my map, the playability is poor for my taste. Applied the same for this 02:31:171 (2) -
- 02:32:590 (3) - ah, this is similar to 01:05:022 (3) - so now I wonder if I'm not hearing something here o.O
I believe hitsounding and patterns should go hand-in-hand, hence why I suggest to remove that whistle on tail (otherwise you can do something similar to what I suggested above, but that would ruin your patterns and I wouldn't want that tbh) okay, these whistles are removed
- 02:40:901 (4) - I'm being annoying even for myself, but uhhhh... consistency with the rest in case you change something (I'm also curious as to why we have these kicks on slider tails sometimes) (I won't really point them out anymore since you know... ) Explained in-game. I asked EvilElvis for a look at the map, he did some hitsound examples for me and I followed a part of it. The point of the whistle on tail is to emphasize the last finish-hs slider. But since I'm partly agreed that it's better to not have it there so removed

List of removed hitwhistle on slidertail

1. 02:32:590 (3) -
2. 01:05:022 (3) -
3. 02:45:766 (4) -
4. 04:27:725 (3) -
5. 05:52:252 (4) -

Added whistles on these 04:41:914 (1,1,1) - I think I forgot
04:49:212 - and 04:49:617 - changed to 70% to match consistency.
04:50:022 - and 05:59:549 - changed to 50% 70% to match consistency
05:43:536 - added whistle on head, forgot :v


Also made some changes myself
02:21:847 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this stream here I forgot to hitsound and it's added now. Also added whistle on these drum-sampled red and white ticks notes for some effects.
Same 04:16:982 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
But this 00:54:482 - no change

Lastly, replaced the current normal-hitfinish with something better.


Yeah... besides that strange hitsounding at times, I have not much to say

Naxess wrote:

Just logging that we did some minor changes: changed around the pattern at 05:24:076 - and slider shape at 04:49:617 - along with removing some unnecessary finish hitsounds, mainly things like 01:06:948 - 04:49:617 - , where they got a bit excessive. Added "withered leaf" to tags.

Still #2