Bakari wrote:
Well, you requested a BN to check the set.
Forst of all, the code of conduct requires you to respond to every mod. So, please, do not ignore messages in the thread. Chances are, we'll be suggesting the same things over and over untill you explain why/why not to apply certain stuff. o ok
[General][Normal]
- Is there any chance we could get an HD background? Since the rankable maximum is 1920x1200 you could use something of much higher quality. I'll look
- Colours don't really fit with the background, this is something you might want to change if you keep the current bckground. will keep in mind
- I would increase Overall Difficulty / HP Drain for each difficulty by 1 or even two. They don't quite match with the approach rate/rhythm. gotcha
[Advanced]
- 00:01:888 (1) - the song has no long hold sounds, there are clear vocals/drums and for that reason the slider feels out of place. Try to split it into shorter objects? mk
- 00:08:608 (1) - none f the vocals/drum beats are clickable to player, 00:09:568 - this, for example ignores the strong beat and a circle here would be a better option, the laughter/giggle/whatever sound that is played on 00:08:848 - 00:09:088 - 00:09:328 - also sounds much stronger than anything you mapped on 00:08:608 - why not try something like this? alright
- 00:21:088 (1,2) - this kind of overlap could confuse beginners. Perhaps, we could prevent overlaps and re-arrange things? a poorly-made example yeah okay
- The kiai parts felt a bit overloaded with 1/2 beats in general. Remember that longer 1/2 chains also require some reading skills from beginners, and this is what makes long overlapping chains of 1/2 beats kind of unfriendly for beginners. Besides, the less 1/2 beats you use, the more special they will feel and the more emphasis they will give. inserted a couple breaks
The main thing that leaves a rather negative impression is the patterning itself, I believe, it is so because of the sharp angles and untidy blankets, for example 00:03:808 (2,3,1) - or 00:21:088 (1,2) - it is something that could be polished with a few more mods, so I guiess it's no big deal.[Hard]
- 00:08:608 (4) - see the comment on the similar slider in Normal for reference, the slider does go off the key sounds of this part and feels forced. ya
- 00:16:768 (4) - this probably would sound better as a circle. There is no actual reason to make a slider since the sound on 00:16:768 - kind of stands as an individual beat. yeah something was off about this
- 00:21:088 (1,2,3,4,1) - minor - wasn't it supposed to be symmetrical? The sound/patterning kind of suggests it. wasn't intentional but good suggestion
- 00:28:768 (1,2) - I would personally make some more direct transition between these two for softer flow. example ok
- 00:38:368 (1,2) - given that this is the only overlap of this kind in the difficulty it feels inconsistent/unintentional. Perhaps, you could add 1-2 more of those or avoid this one? fixed
Mostly blanketing and flow, rhythmically it felt okay.I guess that's about it, I don't quite like the way patterns are designed at times and it could be worked on in terms of rhythm, but that is a pretty decent set that has the potential.
- 00:05:008 (4) - two circles would work better as there are two individual beats that feel better when mapped individually. mk
- 00:07:648 - probably this also needs a single circle as there is a finish that clearly stands out. Probably a 1/2 slider and then a circle on the downbeat? ill see what i can do
- 00:08:608 (1) - see the comment on the similar slider in Normal for reference, the slider does go off the key sounds of this part and feels forced. it was supposed to map the pulling sound and I think its ok in this diff
- 00:32:848 (1) - the stronger beat is actually on 00:33:088 - and leaving it unclickable to the player is quite a confusing thing. Perhaps, the rhythm here should be more like this? shore
Not bad at all, could use some polishing and a couple of mods to improve the rhythm, but hey, it's still pretty cool even as it is!
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Best of luck!
Thanks will try to reply to other mods soon