1. Ayyri's Inner Oni (5.38 stars, 681 notes)
2. Futsuu (2.29 stars, 316 notes)
3. Kantan (1.77 stars, 179 notes)
4. Muzukashii (3.06 stars, 478 notes)
5. Oni (4.32 stars, 615 notes)
6. Ura Oni (6.25 stars, 828 notes)

Bubble History:

In spanish cuz YOLO... Gracias a aquellas personas que me apoyaron en tooooooodo el sufrimiento que fue llegar hasta este punto!!! en serio les debo una por no dejar que me rindiera con este proyexto y quiero agradecer especial mente a Vulkin, Axer y muchas otras personas que me apoyaron demasiado en este proyecto de larga duracion ♥ Muchisimas Gracias ... De verdad los adoro

ENJOY PLAYING THIS MAP TY!

Taikocracy TY ♥
Surono :3 All fixed S i r
Rebub Surono Thanks... I have my promise now ^^ dw
Taikocracy fixed...
Rebub Taikocracy I'LL DO MY BEST!!
Myself
Volta AAAAAAA TY

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mod(s) and Help(s):
- Volta ♥ ty for fix those errors UVU/ final Fixing o7
- Gamerock gracias for help me uvu
- Agu aguaguaguaguasguaguagu TY ♥ :333
- gaston_2199 Gracias amiwo
- Nardoxyribonucleic Ty for quick chek :3
- Surono Thankiu sir
- Taikocracy Gracias <3
- TKS Ty senpai :3
- Zetera Ty for your lovely mod
- Axer Te amo :*
- frukoyurdakul TY TY TY ♥ :3 I'll call you back soon
- Tyistiana Ty
- JessiChan Gracias mami ♥
- Game rock muchas gracias <3 te amo :*
- Nyan TY Dr.Nyan <3 ily
- frukoyurdakul Thanks!
- Arrival ty for the quick check on "Oni"
- Hanjamon Muchisimas gracias <3 de verdad
- Sur IRC Ura check
- Stefan DAM ty for that help dude oo i forgot those xD
- Vulkin!! Ty for the Re-Check =W= and finisher help and again O
- Nepus's re-check... Ty xd
- Surono Dem boi :^) i'll make more tacos for you ty
- omegaflo, Midnaait, Vulkin, Skylish ty for the test and opinion
- Volta Thanks for the gift ? ily Volta ?
- Kin TY <3 :3
- newyams99 TY FOR THE MOD ;_; I'VE WAINTING FOR THIS!!
- World Fraction thanks man uwu
- Taikocracy Muchas Gracias :^) Te amo
- Dainesl Thanks for the IRC mod ? ily!!
- Midnaait Te hice trabajar por que te adoro uwu
- -TheHateD- ILY ty for mod uvu <3
- Nishizumi uwu ty for accept my mappu <3
- frukoyurdakul Thanks!
- Raiden El mod inesperado <3 Gracias !
- Alepat que te paso... Te extraño wn... Gracias por el mod
- Grimbow Thanks my dud
- bjpe0810 thanks for your mod dude
- Smallwu ty for your mod uwu <3
- R Thanks <3
- OnosakiHito for test play and Mod Inner Oni diff <3 Thanks
- xtrem3x Thanks to help me ?
- IControl thanks <3 i'll wait other part of the mod >:3
- newyams99 ty for the suggestion!
- Vulkin Gracias por el mod XD
- Nepuri Spread help and timing help <3
- Vulkin mod <3 Thanks
- Aloda Thanks you too

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Nepuri wrote:

This map is, wooooooooooow OWO (astounded by the number of issues, no offense)

Kantan (Futsuu in disguise)

First off the bat, no 1/2 WHATSOEVER UNRANKABLE! not really :^) if you know how to adap the 1/2 is totally rankeable, cuz this song have too much 1/2 if you don't know :C
00:23:800 (44,45) - nerf pls
00:36:657 (81,82) - ^
00:50:452 (105,106,107) - Finisher? fits with the sound
01:18:309 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - this is just way too OP for a Kantan WTF man 5 1/1 is crazy difficult already and this will most likely be a futsuu if this kind of pattering continues
So please make the kantan more kantan.yes i know XD i'm trying to make this more Easier but THE SONG HAVE TOO MUCH SOUNDS TO MAP!!!

Futsuu (The real one, i think)

This is almost like the kantan in its current state, rendering the ranking progress hard if not fixed immediately.

Muzukashii

I dont think i want to mod this, because it has to undergo structure changes, more in the 'Spread' Box

Oni

Spread makes it impossible. sorry man

Inner Oni

Same sadly, sad to see such a good mapping job fall apart because of spread!well i don't nerf this one cuz i love this diff.. so =/

THE HOLY SPREAD BOX (Do not touch(Please do))

So yes heres a Graph explaining where your diffs lie, distance saying where it lies on Difficultywise, 3 slashes being A normal gap, 2 being a bit too similar (but still rankable), 1 being way too similar to be ranked. all above 4 is too big of a gap
Other (ranked kantans)
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Your Kantan (Pretty hard, got some Futsuu Level patterns in there) HAS TO DOWNGRADE IK MAN IS HARD TO MAKE SOME EZ WHEN THE SONG HAVE TOO MUCH SOUNDS TO MAP :^)!!!!
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Your Futsuu (Make more 1/2 in it, otherwise fine if you downgrade kantan) ye Xd i'm working on that
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Your Muzukashii (too much 1/4 to balance out the 1/2 lack in the Futsuu, downgrade a bit)
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Your Oni (Way too exotic patterns and way too long streams to compensate the 1/4 of the (hopefully downgraded) Muzukashii, downgrade to accomodate muzukashii)
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Your Inner Oni (Its quite dense and fits with the Oni, but has to be downgraded aswell if you want to fix the spread well)

I hope i could help you with the spread!
GLHF ranking!

Vulkin wrote:

Capitalize Title as "Applique" kds pls /runs

(PlaceHolder)

-Kantan-
00:13:756 (17) - delete
00:14:693 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - move to 00:14:291
00:22:863 (29) - delete
00:26:613 (35) - delete
00:26:345 (34) - make k
00:29:023 (38,39) - delete
00:35:720 (48) - delete
00:38:666 (52,53) - delete
00:57:952 (84,85) - delete
01:00:363 (88) - delete
01:03:309 (94) - make k
01:05:988 (100) - delete
01:09:202 (107) - move to 01:09:738 (108)
01:10:006 (109) - move to 01:10:541 (110)
01:10:809 (111,112) - delete
01:12:416 (113) - delete
01:17:238 (123,124) - delete
01:19:648 (127) - delete
01:22:863 (133) - delete
01:23:934 (135,136) - Ctrl+G
01:26:345 (140,143) - delete
01:30:095 (146) - delete
01:48:577 (177) - delete
01:49:381 (178,179) - delete
01:52:595 (185) - delete

-Futsuu-
00:05:720 (18) - Delete
00:13:086 (44,46) - delete
00:21:925 (10,11) - make k
00:24:336 (17,18) - move to 00:24:202
00:32:639 (46) - delete
00:37:461 (60) - delete first then 00:37:059 (58,59,60) Ctrl+G
00:38:131 (61,62,63) - Ctrl+G
01:00:631 (129,130) - Make K
01:03:309 (139) - Make K
01:08:800 (157) - Move to 01:09:202
01:09:470 - Add K
01:11:211 (166) - Delete
01:11:345 (167) - Make K
01:11:613 - Add Don
01:12:014 (171) - delete
01:12:684 (172) - add d
01:18:041 (188) - delete
01:18:443 (189) - delete
01:18:577 (189) - make d
01:19:648 (193) - delete
01:24:872 (208) - delete
01:26:345 (212) - delete
01:27:148 (214) - delete

i dont have that much time ;w; but this'll probably do i think

Aloda wrote:

Hello! M4M here, sorry I took so long

General

01:43:488 - 01:54:738 Consider making this Kiai maybe maybe

Kantan

The section from 00:13:889 (17) to 00:19:916 (24) feels very awkward to me. Although I can tell which beats you've mapped it to when listening in the editor, it's very difficult to follow while playing. I suggest moving 00:13:889 (17) to 00:14:291 then have this at 00:14:827 - 00:15:631 - 00:16:434 - 00:17:238 - 00:18:041 and 00:18:845 then finally move 00:19:514 (24) to 00:19:648 . This feels a lot more natural to play in my opinion. loss the rhythm :c sorry but no

00:55:006 (85,86) - ctrl+g This adds a little variety and sounds better to me.

00:57:684 (91) - Remove

01:03:845 (106,107) - Consider making these finishers ok

01:09:738 - Add a d

01:10:006 (121) - Move to 01:10:541

01:10:809 (123) - Remove

Futsuu

The start is this diff is a little too intense. Your use of 1/2 is about the same as that of in the Kiai despite this being a much softer section. Consider removing 00:00:764 (2) - 00:07:461 (24) - 00:10:943 (37) - 00:13:086 (45) and 00:13:354 (47) same reason has before :< sry

00:34:113 (50,51) - ctrl+g

00:43:220 (81,82) - ctrl+g

00:44:023 (84) - k -> d

00:49:648 (101) - d -> k

00:54:202 (111,112) - ctrl+g

00:55:139 (114) - Remove ok

00:55:943 (117) - Remove ok

00:56:747 (120) - Remove ok

As Nepuri already said, the huge jump in difficulty between Futsuu/Muzu and Muzu/Oni is a big issue. To be honest, you could just make 01:43:488 (595) - 01:49:916 (628) of the Oni a little harder and call it an Inner Oni. The actual Inner Oni feels very overmapped to me and I suggest either remapping it or doing what I just mentioned, scrapping the old Inner and making a new Oni. nah... I want rank that Inner too so... I'll make Oni cuz this song have too much sounds what i need map i think xD my inner oni is the most EZ in the Beatmap seccion and i'll make that more Easier for hat.. cuz i want rank it

As for the Muzu, try cutting down on the 1/4 usage as this is a relatively high bpm song. i'll fix Muzu no...

If you'd like me to mod these diffs as they are now, let me know, but I strongly suggest you make some big changes to them beforehand. ~~

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

no se por que en ingles ctm >:C

Vulkin wrote:

Allright lemme pick up the mod i have forgotten for like more than a month now lol
Remember to not to give kds on this post because i already modded before lol

-Muzukashii-
Note: At 00:52:595 - 00:56:881 - instead of k d i would put kkk d but it would be kinda kill for star rating so lol eh? :O
00:19:916 (83,84,85,86) - Finisher? to fit with those at the BG si va
00:23:934 (93) - k cuz pitch increase ya
00:25:273 (100) - ^^ mmm no por ahora
00:32:773 (141,142,143,144,145) - Finisher?
00:52:059 (215) - d, fits with the incoming k d lol
01:05:653 - add k?
01:08:867 - add d?
01:10:474 - ^
01:19:581 (100,102,104,106) - delete?
01:25:206 (121) - ^

-Oni-
Note: Oni's pretty good, cant find that many issues lol
01:05:452 (369,370,372,373) - k?
01:06:791 (375,376) - d?
01:34:849 - add d?
01:54:202 - add d?

-Inner Oni-
00:04:872 (16,17,18) - d? nop ya te dije que esos sonidos se quedaran como kats... por que son sonidos del piano
00:57:684 (363) - d?
Just suggestion but can you make from 00:58:488 - 01:00:898 alternate color every 1/1 starting with d? to follow that melody or something idk how is it called lol me explicas por PM pls...
01:06:747 (44,45) - d? nop por lo mismo
01:14:760 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - ctrl+g? solo cambie una
01:16:099 - add d
01:16:166 (120) - change to k
01:34:849 - add d?

Gomen nasai for late mod D: and good luck on your map

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

no se por que en ingles ctm >:C

Se me olvida aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa maldita memoria asjkashfiuatuiqasgruigh xD NPNNPNPN lo importante es el contenido del mod :3 y lo que esta en blanco es que acepte xD ya tu saes gracias por el mod pape

Nepuri wrote:

Hey again!

Just noting that this song is on WALTZ timing




I hope you make progress with this map!
Good luck and Happy mapping!

IControl wrote:

iControl's mod

Kantan

00:03:845 (5) - d I think in this section to many k's are a little boring to play even if some is just starting to learn how to play mm no cuz i want follow the clock sound ( tic-toc )


00:08:666 (11) - ^ same has before


00:17:505 (21) - k same reason but with to many d's this time


00:20:720 (25) - d


00:24:336 (31) - add d? (red tic) I think this note sounds important enough to not be ignored especially since the bass is going to be very strong in the next section of the song. Also if you are worried about the sr ill help you lower it later on in the mod


00:25:273 (33) - k sounds higher than lower


00:30:363 (40) - k reasons above


00:32:773 (44) - D? I'm not sure if you like to use finishers but this would be a good place for some


00:33:577 (45) - ^


00:34:381 (46,47,48) - D K D? still not sure but it wouldn't be bad to place them here too


00:35:720 - add k this note sounds very loud shouldn't be ignored


00:35:988 (50) - D ^


00:37:327 - add k ^


00:42:416 (59) - d this section should be modding like the other one before if you agree with my changes same reason has before


00:52:595 (74) - these should be removed in this section because they don't seem to important and they are causing the sr to go very high


00:55:006 (77) - I think this one is fine because its right before another new part of the song


00:58:220 (82) - add d


00:59:827 (85) - remove I these should be treated like red tics in kantan and only be used sparingly since the bpm is very high. It is also causing the sr to go up


01:02:238 (89) - remove ^


01:04:648 (94) - ^


01:08:666 (101) - remove


01:09:202 (102,103) - remove


01:09:738 - add k sounds important


01:10:006 (103) - remove


01:10:541 - add d sounds important


01:10:809 (105,106) - remove


01:11:345 - add K?


01:12:684 (107,108) - cltr g sounds lower than higher


01:14:291 (110) - move to 01:14:023 - change to k This sounds better imo


01:14:559 (111) - D?


01:15:095 (112) - remove The rest of the map pretty much repeats from here so apply changes to the whole map if you agree


Sorry this mod is short but I'm busy irl D: A quick overview of futsuu was that you were using the red tics unsparingly so try removeing alot like what i did with kantan Good Luck

xtrem3x wrote:

Random Mods


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

cambia el SV a 1.40 .. aun siendo kantan y futsuu puedes usar inherited points a 0.80x para compensar ese asunto.

en 00:12:684- es mejor que dividas en partes iguales los cambios de velocidad para dejarlo en 1.00x al final ... son 7 notas, así que empieza con 0.88x (esto en oni, en Inner y en Muzukashii pones los mismos inherited points pero en kantan y futsuu quitaselos) lo pensare

el punto 00:40:006- dejalo en 00:40:005- por que al jugarlo la linea va separada de la nota (aunque ya se volvio un poco común ese problema) pero igual a arreglarlo.

lo mismo en 00:51:256- dejalo en 00:51:255-

Kantan

• 
  ahi luego ...

Futsuu

• 
  ahi luego ...

Muzukashii

• 
  00:29:961 (129,130) - un ctrl+g a estas notas ...
  00:30:631 (132,133,134) - lo mismo...
  
  00:37:059 - de esto a [url=http://puu.sh/qkOxj.jpg]esto[/urll]
  
  00:51:256 - en esta parte solo deja un triple justo antes de la ultima nota (00:52:059- )
  
  01:04:581- borrala, ya con solo ver el montón se ve dificil.
  
  01:42:684 - lo mismo que en 00:51:256-

Oni

• 
  00:17:305 - borrala ... sale bien raro como está aquí.
  
  00:32:639 - aqui falta una nota al menos una roja ...
  00:51:322 - lo mismo
  
  00:52:059 - agregale un finish ... parece obvio.
  
  01:17:171 - mueve esta nota a 01:17:037 ... el triple suena mas convincente
  
  01:18:644 - borra esta nota .. no tiene sonido para que sea 5 notas.
  
  01:19:648 (458,459) - (no son los numeros actuales) pero igual cambialas a d ... el sonido alto está en la 3ra nota.
  
  01:29:023 - cambia esto por esto,mmm no por que podria ser un oco mas complicado

Inner

• 
  ahi luego ...

1. 00:12:416 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - Tryeither this or [url]this[/url]
2. 00:12:416 ~ 00:13:488 - You should make the acceleration smoother. I'm not quite sure why you use such odd values for the green lines. Try this instead.
3. 00:19:849 (110) - Delete this note and change 00:19:916 (111) - to K for the reason mention on next point.
4. 00:20:720 (114,117,119,121) - Change to K. I wonder why you only used normal kats, since those have huge impact.
5. 00:13:488 ~ 00:19:916 - I would like to suggest you to think one more time by yourself about this part with adding finishers for every clash that happens to appear, similar to what I suggested one point before. The 1/4 are fine, but the possible finisher sounds are very significant in this part, and ignoring them means to ignore an opportunity for some very interesting beatplacements. Please give it a try to have a mix out of finishers, 1/2 and 1/4.
6. 00:32:506 ~ 00:35:184 - Highlighted notes are finishers.
   
7. 00:35:720 ~ 00:39:202 - Highlighted notes are finishers. I suggested these two points for a better structure. Maybe you like it.
   
8. 00:40:006 - Barline isn't with note aligned. Fix that by moving the greenline to 00:39:939 -.
9. 00:51:256 - ^
10. 00:59:827 (392,393,394,395) - Remove this one and stick to 1/4. Due to this 1/6 all upcoming notes are wrongly snapped. Yes, there is some kind of "thrill" sound which would make a 1/6 fit, but in this case it is rather disturbing than anything else, for said reason.
11. 01:00:898 (409,410,411,412) - And 01:00:898 (409,410,411,412) - are not accurate. If anything it would be a dddd in both cases. EIther go for these or just use normal 1/4. It really drags down the quality of the beatmap.
12. 01:06:747 (44,45,46,47,48,49) - User finishers. I would probably even see this a disqualification reason since the sounds clearly indicate the use of finishers, unlike 00:04:872 (16,17) - where a 1/8 fits well.
13. 01:08:064 (56,57) - Recommending to delete the d. You have in the whole map no finisher at the end of 1/4, so it rather appears to be inconsistent.
14. 01:11:345 ~ 01:14:559 - Same as before about finisher use.
15. 01:19:113 (146,149) - I think you should consider for every sound of this kind to have finishers.

OnosakiHito wrote:

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:12:416 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - Tryeither this or [url]this[/url]
2. 00:12:416 ~ 00:13:488 - You should make the acceleration smoother. I'm not quite sure why you use such odd values for the green lines. Try this instead.
3. 00:19:849 (110) - Delete this note and change 00:19:916 (111) - to K for the reason mention on next point.
4. 00:20:720 (114,117,119,121) - Change to K. I wonder why you only used normal kats, since those have huge impact.
5. 00:13:488 ~ 00:19:916 - I would like to suggest you to think one more time by yourself about this part with adding finishers for every clash that happens to appear, similar to what I suggested one point before. The 1/4 are fine, but the possible finisher sounds are very significant in this part, and ignoring them means to ignore an opportunity for some very interesting beatplacements. Please give it a try to have a mix out of finishers, 1/2 and 1/4.
6. 00:32:506 ~ 00:35:184 - Highlighted notes are finishers.
   
7. 00:35:720 ~ 00:39:202 - Highlighted notes are finishers. I suggested these two points for a better structure. Maybe you like it.
   
8. 00:40:006 - Barline isn't with note aligned. Fix that by moving the greenline to 00:39:939 -.
9. 00:51:256 - ^
10. 00:59:827 (392,393,394,395) - Remove this one and stick to 1/4. Due to this 1/6 all upcoming notes are wrongly snapped. Yes, there is some kind of "thrill" sound which would make a 1/6 fit, but in this case it is rather disturbing than anything else, for said reason.
11. 01:00:898 (409,410,411,412) - And 01:00:898 (409,410,411,412) - are not accurate. If anything it would be a dddd in both cases. EIther go for these or just use normal 1/4. It really drags down the quality of the beatmap.
12. 01:06:747 (44,45,46,47,48,49) - User finishers. I would probably even see this a disqualification reason since the sounds clearly indicate the use of finishers, unlike 00:04:872 (16,17) - where a 1/8 fits well.
13. 01:08:064 (56,57) - Recommending to delete the d. You have in the whole map no finisher at the end of 1/4, so it rather appears to be inconsistent.
14. 01:11:345 ~ 01:14:559 - Same as before about finisher use.
15. 01:19:113 (146,149) - I think you should consider for every sound of this kind to have finishers.

I will come later for the lower difficulties. But that's it for now.
Btw. some of the suggestions I gave can be considered for the other diffs as well.

[R] wrote:

yo

RIP 2 kudos
[Kantan]
maybe deletesome note like 00:19:113 - ok | 00:35:720 - | 00:44:827 - you need a bit break once
00:22:863 - delete, this kinda hard for beginer after hitting 00:21:523 (26,27,28) - not yet
00:31:970 - delete maybe
00:50:184 - move 00:49:381 -
01:02:238 - add note ?
01:25:809 - As 1/1, no pattern is longer than 5 notes, guess you can change "ooxooox" to "o ooo o" pattern this is a little test for new players so i keep for the moments

[Futsuu]
Spread at begining is almost same with muzukashii
00:00:764 - i recommended to remove rather than follow the piano, maybe consistency 00:07:193 -
00:03:577 - delete
00:06:523 - delete
00:09:202 (30,31,32) - muzukashii have kkk here
00:10:943 - delete nope
00:12:416 - delete
00:32:639 - add note ? i'll think about this
00:35:854 - same ^ ^
00:36:657 - delete

[Muzukashii]
00:12:952 - add don here, futsuu have note here
00:13:220 - add don
01:01:568 - add kat
01:02:238 - change don
01:03:175 (21,22,23) - change kkk for variety
01:11:077 - change kat, no recommended to make dkk in 1/4 since this high bpm nope i'll change this note 01:11:211 (62) - more comfortable for all i guess

well maybe just that from me Tehee~ soy you like my inner and oni diff(s) ^//w//^
Good Luck

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue
[General]
Add Tags : "MÚSECA", "MUSECA", "SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-" and "SDVX"
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All diff except Inner Oni - Turn off Widescreen Support
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Slider Velocity
Kantan / Futsuu : 1.2
Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni : 1.4
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Change "100%" to "50%"
Same timing point, different volume. That's strange, isn't it?

*New Thing* 00:26:613 Move this to 00:26:345 - Kiai Time should start at here
*New Thing* 2 When you update, you can update to "Pending Beatmaps"

[Kantan]
00:12:684 - 00:12:952 - 00:13:086 - 00:13:220 - Remove SVs (They're no effect, here just a Slider!)

00:19:113 - K? Follow regular pattern as before

00:19:916 (23) - d If you accept 00:19:113 ^

00:31:166 (40) - k I think sound pitch same as 00:30:363

00:31:970 - Add d Follow regular pattern as before

00:39:470 - 00:39:738 - 00:40:006 - 00:40:273 - 00:40:541 - Remove pls, Kantan shouldn't has any speed increase

01:53:131 (170) - D Better I think
[Futsuu]
Skip :3
Just a suggest : Make your SVs better like Kantan
[Muzukashii]
00:52:059 (221) - D

01:03:175 (22,23,24) - ddd I know what are you doing here, but ddd sounds more fit

01:27:148 (129,130) - Ctrl+G

01:42:416 (166) - d Because sounds same as 01:41:881

01:42:684 (167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - kkk k k kkk

01:43:488 (175) - D If you do accept 01:42:684 ^

01:54:537 (213) - Move to 01:54:671 Just one ddk, I think it's OK. And sounds great :3

Actually, I think Finisher in Muzu is too much. Try to reducing them?
[Oni]
00:25:273 - 00:26:345 - Become these The original isn't fun I think, and the last one is Finisher

00:38:264 (205) - k

00:38:532 (207,208) - Remove

00:39:939 - The green line move to 00:40:006

00:50:988 (255) - D?

00:51:256 - 00:52:059 - Become these I think they're more fit :3, last one is Finisher

01:27:148 (486,487) - Finisher (487) and Ctrl+G
[Inner Oni]
00:12:952 (48) - k

00:13:220 (51,52) - k

00:22:863 - 00:24:738 - I don't know, but I think they need you to become better. Sound strange here :3

00:25:273 - 00:26:345 - Become these The original isn't fun I think, and the last one is Finisher

00:38:131 (244) - k

00:38:666 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - kkkd kkkd K

00:39:939 - The green line move to 00:40:006

00:58:488 - 01:01:702 - Become these Yes they're long, but most of them are good I believe

01:07:461 (46) - d

01:17:595 (126) - k

01:20:184 (148) - K?

01:27:148 (207,208) - Ctrl+G

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GL with Rank! >3<

bjpe0810 wrote:

Hi M4M~
It is difficult for me to write English.So I will write Japanese and English,just in case
thanks

Kantan

AiMod　You have to fix.
sorry X_X

You use too many D and K.　An effect of D and K is reduced to half.You should refrain from using D and K generally.
I think that color in itself of beatmap is not bad.You should let beatmap limit the place using D and K to part-time turning point and cymbals.
(Kantanでは、DやKが多く使われ過ぎています。これはDやKの本来の効力が半減して、プレイ感が失われます。全体的に多すぎるため、文字に書き起こすと、文章力が増えてしまいますので、あなたの感覚に任せます。基本的には、パートの変わり目や目立つシンバルの音のみにDやKを置くとよいでしょう。配色自体は悪くないと思います) はい、音はこれらの部分で強すぎるので、私はあまりにもDくらいとKを使用します。

Futsuu

About D and K Please refer to the above.
And you should reduce the number of notes.(A difference of the number of the combos with other degrees of difficulty.)
I think 150-300-450-600-800 is best.　><!!　Same reason has before

Muzukashii

00:26:144 (111,112) - delete? difficult　いえ, is muzukashii for a reason XD

00:28:354 (124,125) - delete? same reason has before

00:39:001 (169,170) - delete? difficult i can't delete those ntes come on xd is a strong sound...

00:51:657 (217) - delete? nope, this note proportionate more rhythm in that part

01:11:144 (61) - delete or change to d. I recommend single color in Muzu. nice ddd <3

01:43:086 (171) - delete? difficult same reason has before

01:43:287 (172) - ^ ^

01:54:470 (211) - change to k and 01:54:738 (214) - change to d . I recommend single color in Muzu. nah this is a little test only in that final stream i want leave that ddk :3

Oni

00:26:680 (133,134,135,136) - ctrl+g oooh nice and 00:26:814 - delete? no

00:27:818 (142,143) - ctrl+g and move to 00:27:751 - nope

00:30:363 (161) - change to d? oki

00:36:523 (191) - change to d? ? it's d already...

00:37:394 (198,199) - change to dd? mmmm this would be concidered....

00:45:095 (231) - delete? rest sound need be mapped

00:57:684 (302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - so long and difficult. You should change to other pattern. it's long but is not hard for a experiment player
00:58:488 (311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319) - ^
00:59:291 (320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328) - ^

01:36:523 (538) - delete? rest nope

01:44:023 (572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595) - same pattern.You should attach a change. no because is the same sound XD so i leave that like that ww

01:49:113 (601) - change to d? ok

Inner Oni

00:09:336 (33,34) - ctrl+g? clock sound(ここのパートでは1拍目になっている時計の音にkを置いているので統一) www、私はそれを見ていません

00:31:702 (199) - change to d? nope

00:31:970 (201) - change to d? yep

01:13:354 - add d? no sound in that part

01:15:564 - add d? bassdrum nice

01:25:742 - add d or k? bassdrum no becasue the next note is a D

01:27:416 (208) - delete finish and 01:27:282 - add dd?(1/4) bassdrum ok

01:49:737 (121,122) - delete and 01:49:782 - add k? and 01:49:916 - 1/3 begin from here. listen the sound...

01:53:532 - add d or k? ok

01:54:202 - add d or k? ^

good luck!! THANKS

Grimbow wrote:

Mod

M4M time \o\ \o/ /o/

My mods are heavily based on the relation of the notes to the music, feel free to deny everything if your mapping style doesn't follow my style of modding!

d - Small don (red note)
D - Big don (red note with a finish)
k - Small kat (blue note)
K - Big kat (blue note with a finish)

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion
Blue is a comment

[Kantan]

You have a LOT of finishes in this diff. While I do understand that there's a lot of crashing, booming and banging going on in this song, having every other note/long strings of finishes feels really odd to play and they should be mainly reserved for emphasizing certain parts in the music (Like 00:50:452 (69) - here. That would be a good place for a finish that doesn't have one!), and that effect is lost when the map is a good 70% finishers.
With that said..
00:14:291 (17) - Remove the finish on this note and change it to a k, it seems to me that you are following the synth here more than the crashes or FX, and the synth hits a really high pitch here, and it would contrast well with the next note
00:15:095 (18,19,20,21,22) - Remove the finishes on these notes, you can still follow the synth without following the crashes
00:19:113 (23) - Remove this note, you don't seem to have any breaks in this Kantan and this would be an appropriate place for one since the synth here is a held note from 00:18:309 (22) -
00:23:934 (31,32,33) - Remove the finishes on these notes. Keeping them in ruins the emphasis that 00:23:131 (30) - gets from the finish and makes the transition into the kiai feel a lot less powerful than it could be
00:27:148 (35) - Change this to a k? The synth here pretty much peaks and the notes after it, to me, seem lower in tone
00:31:970 (41) - Delete this note to give the player a short break, since there hasn't been any since the last one suggested and the synth here also falls on a held note so it doesn't feel out of place to have a rest
00:33:577 (44,45,46,47) - Remove the finishes on these notes, they take the emphasis away from the note with a finish at 00:35:988 (49) - and they also land on synth, not just the FX
00:36:791 (50,51,52,53) - Same with these, remove the finishes so the last note in the kiai feels more powerful and the transition is more apparent
00:50:452 (69) - This would be a good place to add a finish!
00:51:256 (71) - Here too! This works well with the previous suggestion if you give it a try in the editor, the D dK feels really powerful to play!
00:52:059 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - Remove the finish on all these notes, they can follow the synth without following the crashes or FX and it still feels and sounds fine to play
00:57:684 (80) - Delete this note for another break, it lands on a held note and there hasn't been a break since the kiai
00:58:220 (81,82) - Remove the finish from this and ctrl+g it so that it follows the synth better, the synth here goes from low to high and d k better follows that flow
01:00:898 (85) - Change this to a k so that it better matches the high pitch that the synth hits here
00:59:291 (83,84,85) - Also, remove the finishes from these notes! The note at 01:01:702 (86) - doesn't feel as powerful or emphasized as it could because of these, so if you remove them this note gets the emphasis it deserves!
01:14:023 (108) - This note feels really out of place and doesn't seem to be mapping anything in the music? If you move it to 01:13:488 - then it will land on a synth note and have good purpose
01:16:166 (111,112) - Change these to a k's so that they match the pitch of the synth climbing and peaking (Also makes a neat ddkkk pattern!)
01:20:988 (118) - This doesn't need a finish, it's the same background synth as the notes around it and doesn't warrant the emphasis, please remove the finish!
01:25:809 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - This feels pretty harsh for a kantan, especially since they are all big notes. I don't feel that a beginner would have the co-ordination to hit all of these as intended so I think you should first, change 01:26:345 (128) - to a d to keep it as d d d d d k since that is a simple enough pattern, then remove all the finishers on 01:25:809 (126,127,128,129,130,131) - these notes so that only the last has the finish. There is lots of room in the other difficulties to have the D D K D D D K, but I feel like this one doesn't need it.
01:29:827 (135) - Change to a k since the synth here peaks pretty high!
01:42:684 (153) - Add a finish to this note since the volume and tone of the music changes pretty harshly here
01:43:488 (154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162) - These don't need finishes on them, the notes play and sound fine without them and the emphasis isn't really needed
01:49:113 (161) - Delete this note, there hasn't been a break in quite a while and the next section is pretty intense so beginners might need the small break to prepare!
01:54:738 (173) - Add a finish to this note, it would map the shattering sound pretty well and the emphasis would feel great!

[Futsuu]

00:23:131 (13) - Add a finish here, this note would benifit greatly from the emphasis!
00:23:934 (16) - Remove the finish on this note, it doesn't really stand out enough on its own to require a finish
00:26:077 (23,24,25) - ddK, ddD, kkK or kkD are bad ideas, they look ugly and feel bad to play so I suggest removing the finish at 00:26:345 (25) - or deleting 00:26:211 (24) - to make this viable again
00:57:684 (113,114,115,116) - Remove the finishes on these notes, they don't all need the emphasis here
00:58:220 (115) - Change this one to a d, the synth here is increasing and it would contrast nicely with the note after being a k
01:01:702 (125) - Please remove finish, as stated above triplets with finishes at the end do not play well
01:02:506 (128) - Same here, ddD does not play comfortably. Remove finish
01:03:309 (131) - Same here, please remove the finish
01:04:648 (134,135,136) - kkD is a bad idea as stated earlier, please remove the finish here 01:04:916 (136) -
01:06:791 (141,142,143,144,145,146) - You don't need these finishes, remove them. You are following the piano here and the emphasis isn't needed
01:08:666 (147) - Change this to a d, the synth here is lower than the note previous to it
01:10:006 (151) - Move this note to 01:09:470 - . Currently that gap is empty and it has a very prominent beat there, and the note you are moving is currently not mapping anything in particular in the song so it makes sense to move it
01:13:488 (162,163,164,165) - These notes do not need finishes, you are following the piano pitch here and the piano is quiet
01:15:363 (168,169,170) - These don't need finishes either, the synth isn't doing anything that would warrant them
01:16:970 (172) - Remove the finish on this and change it to a k, the synth peaks here but the finish should be reserved to emphasize the start of the kiai which is very near by
01:19:381 (179,180,181,182,183) - No need for these notes to have finishes either, the piano is a soft sound and doesn't warrant the harshness of a finish
01:21:523 (185,186) - Ctrl+g these notes, the synth increases in pitch instead of decreasing and the dk will follow this closer
01:26:345 (199,200,202) - Change these notes to D's, the tone of the piano hits doesn't change at all during this part and this seems like a bit much of a jump from the Kantan as it stands
01:51:791 (268) - Delete this note, the pattern is a bit too long as it currently stands and especially with all the finishes you have makes it a bit too complicated for a futsuu.
01:52:327 (270) - Remove the finish on this note, I don't see why this note has one if any of the ones around it doesn't?
01:53:934 (276) - Remove the finish on this or remove 01:53:800 (275) - so that it doesn't follow the same problem as above
01:54:604 (278) - Delete this and add a finish to 01:54:738 (279) - . The note at 1:54 could benefit greatly from a finish due to the glass shattering noise and landing on a harsh transition point in the music

I'll finish the rest of the mod tomorrow as it is now midnight here and I need to sleep, please no kds until I have finished it as I don't feel I deserve them unless I complete the mod. Thank you.



[Muzukashii]

Now that I look back over my first part of the mod I really wish I had brought up the spread between the muzu and the futsuu If you want to go over it with me in PM please feel free to message me but I will continue modding each individual difficulty on its own for now. Again, my apologies

Please fix the SV of this difficulty, it is 1.96 currently which leads me to believe you've opened AI mod at some point. To fix this, go into the .osu file and change Slidermultiplier to 1.4 and save it.
00:14:157 (52) - Delete this note. The density change from the futsuu to here is pretty big and having 8 5-note patterns one after another is pretty overkill for a muzukashii. Also, in deleting it, the finish at 00:14:291 (53) - isn't so awkward to play and won't be a hassle for people just getting into the swing of harder maps!
00:14:961 (57) - Delete this note for the same reason as above
00:15:764 (62) - This one too
00:16:568 (67) - Kill this one also
00:17:372 (72) - Delete it
00:19:782 (86) - Murder it
00:22:863 (92,93) - Remove the finish on one of these notes so that the other one can benefit from the emphasis instead of both of them. (I'd personally suggest to remove the one on 00:23:131 (93) - )
00:23:934 (97) - This doesn't need a finish, it doesn't warrant the emphasis, please remove the finish
00:24:738 (102) - I can understand why the finish was added on this one but I'd suggest to remove it so that it is consistent with the two notes after it which are the same sound in the music, but don't have finishes.
00:25:876 (108,111) - Delete one of these notes, a ddd ddd is a bit too much for a muzukashii as this is the difficulty where you are beginning to introduce 1/4 triplets and patterns so you don't want to overwhelm the player straight away. It's also 224bpm and ddd ddd is hard enough to hit at that bpm already!
00:35:720 (150) - Remove the finish on this note and add one to 00:35:988 (151) - since 00:35:988 (151) - is the note where the section change lands on, the emphasis is more important for this note than it is on the one before it
00:39:001 (169) - Delete this note for the same reason as earlier, two 1/4 triplets at this BPM next to each other is a bit too difficult for a muzukashii
00:50:452 (211) - Add a finish here! This note feels great to play on both keys as there is a heavy bass kick in the music here
00:51:657 (217,219) - Delete these two notes, this little section here is pretty hard to play for a muzu difficulty (It requires a hand switch if you can't singletap 224BPM and I doubt many people at muzukashii level have learned this yet)
00:58:756 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - None of these notes need finishes please remove the finishes on them, there's nothing spectacular enough happening in the music to warrant all of them needing the emphasis
01:01:434 (14) - This doesn't need a finish either, playing KkD is very awkward even at higher levels and where this note lands in the music there's nothing to suggest needing a finish here
01:04:782 (32) - The notes around this make the pattern very difficult, but if you remove this note then there is a small break made between the 1/4 ddd and the finish which is enough time for the player to prepare themselves to hit the finish
01:11:077 (61,62,63,64) - I suggest either removing the triplet here (by deleting 01:11:144 (62) - ) or removing the finish on 01:11:345 (64) - because as it stands, ddd K is very awkward to hit at this speed
01:13:488 (72,73,74) - Remove the finish on these notes and delete 01:14:425 (76) - . The finishes on the first bunch of notes take away the emphasis from the note at 01:14:559 (77) - and that is a prominent beat in the music, and deleting 01:14:425 (76) - will make it so that you don't have a strange ddK pattern here and will make this section flow a bit better
01:19:648 (102,103,104,105,106,107) - I don't feel like these notes need the finish on them either since they are following the tone of the piano here so I suggest you remove them
01:22:595 (113) - Same with this note, there's nothing extraordinary in the music that calls for a finish to be placed here so I suggest removing it
01:23:398 (117) - Here also, please remove the finish
01:43:287 (174) - Please delete this note for the same reason mentioned last time this pattern came up, it forces an awkward hand switch in a player that is only just getting used to 1/4 patterns and there is a finish right after so there would be no time for them to recover
01:48:309 (188) - Dkk is a bad idea in this difficulty, plus the finish isn't placed on anything that warrants it in the music so I suggest removing the finish

[Oni]

00:04:849 (16,17) - Change these to k's, the piano is a pretty high pitch here and the k sound is better suited to these pitches
00:38:666 (207) - You should make this a triplet, you had it as two triplets in the muzukashii so I don't see why you made it easier in the Oni?
00:38:934 (208) - Same with this, make this a triplet also
00:47:773 (242) - Change this to a k, it would better follow the pitch that the violin is setting here
00:59:291 (320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328) - Wow that's an evil pattern right there
01:00:095 (329,330) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the pitches in the music go from lower to higher where these notes land so it would map this appropriately
01:06:791 (366,367,368,369) - Same as in other difficulties, I don't feel like these notes need the finishes on them since they are just following the piano in the background
01:08:398 (375,376) - Change these to k's, they are snare hits on the drum and that's what the k is best suited to map
01:09:202 (380,381) - These too, change these two to k's, 01:09:738 (382) - this to a d and 01:10:006 (383) - to a k so you properly follow the drum here!
01:10:273 (384,387) - Change these to k's as well for the same reason!
01:19:648 (444,445,446,447,448) - Same as last time, remove the finishers as they are just following the piano background and nothing that needs the emphasis
01:39:202 (548) - Change this note to a k to follow the violin pitch here!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand finished! This took me a little while and I am sorry that I took a break in the middle I hope my mod helps in some way and best of luck in ranking this!

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Alepat wrote:

Vengo a ayudar un poco sobre tu mapa, espero te sirva de algo, comencemos!

d= nota roja
D= nota roja grande
k= nota azul
K= nota azul grande
SV= Slider Velocity
Dato para el mapper: informa de cuantas estrellas subirá o bajará si se utiliza todo el mod de dicha dificultad
Comentario: breve opinión mía sobre la dificultad

[General]
deja todos los tags en minúscula
ES DE SUMA IMPORTANCIA AGREGAR UN SPINNER: desde el segundo 0 hasta el minuto 1:57 (Si es que entendiste el easter egg)

[Kantan]
00:14:291 (17) - Este k va colado, cambialo a d
00:22:863 (28) - Cambiar a d, por el sonido bajo y que... sea más fácil, a parte no se siente tan tan repetitivo
00:25:541 (32) - Cambiar a D
00:29:559 (37,38,39) - Se te adelantó un d (Para hacerlo igual al principio de 00:16:702 (20,21,22) - ). Arreglalo dejandolo en k k d respectivamente
00:32:506 (40) - Cambiar a d (mismo punto de la nota 28)
00:58:488 (79) - Cambiar a D
01:25:809 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - Por el sonido siento que va mejor al revés, flipealo todo


Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad subirá a 1,84* (+0,01)

Comentario: Muy buena diff, no se pierde la esencia de un Kantan, lo único que le vi medianamente mejorable es la dificultad en cuanto a las notas grandes (en unas partes va demasiado fácil y en otras sube mucho la dificultad para el mapa en cuestión)

[Futsuu]
00:24:470 (17) - Siento un poco incómoda esa nota, puedes cambiarla a k o eliminarla (o simplemente no hacer nada, puede ser algo mio)

00:48:577 (91,92) - y 00:50:184 (95,96) - Tienen el mismo sonido que el 00:48:577 (91,92) - , no hace falta hacer patterns flipeados, vuelvelos d k y d K respectivamente

01:25:541 - No sé que opinarías sobre añadir un d, ¿Se hará más difícil para un Futsuu por el stream de notas grandes?

01:25:809 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203) - Lo mismo que en Kantan, Flipealo todo

00:50:988 (97) - Cambiar a K

01:42:684 (245) - ^^

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad seguirá siendo de 3,14* (+0,00)

Comentario: Está bien mapeado, pero se queda ahí como muy repetitivo (y personalmente se me hace un poco aburrido, pero que se le va a hacer), sin embargo siento que no hay que tocar mucho de aquí.

[Muzukashii]
00:14:291 (52) - Agregar el finish, para concordar con el resto de notas grandes

00:29:023 (121) - Cambiar a d, el stream siguiente se siente más rico en ritmo

00:58:220 (3) - cambiar a d, da un pequeño recuerdo al pattern ya conocido k d d k en el reloj

01:30:631 - hasta 01:42:416 - es una recomendación, no es necesario que lo hagas: Siento esta parte muy vacía respecto al pattern k d d k del reloj anterior que comienza en 00:39:202 -, quedaría muy bien un copy paste del mismo, aunque con unas pequeñas modificaciones al inicio. SI ACEPTAS ESTO, COPIA TODO EL PATTERN DE 00:39:202 - (Incluyendo el SV) Y MODIFICA LO SIGUIENTE

Borra todas las notas de 01:30:898 - hasta 01:42:416 - y pegalo en 01:30:898 - (Recuerda Re-snapear, he visto que por una milésima o dos va desincronizado)

Te dejo el stream copiado si gustas

00:39:470 (164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204) -

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV


Acto Seguido modifiquemos el pattern
01:30:898 (145) - k
01:31:434 (147) - d
01:40:407 (177,178,181,182) - eliminar
01:42:148 - Agregar d
01:42:416 (1) - cambiar a k
De ahí saca toda tu imaginación para mejorar ese pattern y que quede algo distinto

01:53:666 (42) - Mueve la nota a 01:53:532 - y añade un d en 01:54:202 - para hacer énfasis al siguiente stream

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad seguirá siendo de 3,20* (+0,00)

Comentario: Le falta pulir un poco, pero me gusta, lo que si vi que le hace falta separarse mucho de la dificultad de Futsuu en estrellas (Futsuu 3,14* VS 3,20* Muzukashii), Puede ser que el Futsuu sea muy dificil para su categoría, ya que un Futsuu es un "Normal", y un Muzukashii viene siendo "Hard", imaginate un map de STD (un modo que no tiene nada que ver aquí pero me entiendes) en el que el Normal sea más dificil que un Hard en cuanto a estrellas (no cuentan los mapas antiguos), para el ranking los BN te dejarían todo el cuchicuchi muerto.

[Oni]
00:58:354 - Puedes permitirte algo de dificultad antes de pasar al siguiente stream, agrega un d
00:59:291 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333) - cambiar el pattern a ddddkkkkd
01:09:939 (388) - eliminalo y agrega las notas
01:10:006 (388) - cambia a k
01:10:072 - agrega un k
01:10:139 (390) - agrega un d
01:10:541 (393) - cambia a d
01:10:742 (394) - elimina

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV

01:41:881 (567) - cambia D
01:42:148 - agrega d
01:53:666 (637) - mueve la nota hasta 01:53:532 -

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad subirá a 4,53* (+0,20)

Comentario: está bien mapeado, le encuentro una breve mezcla entre un muzukashii y un Inner Oni tirando a Oni, hay varios fragmentos que quedan vacíos que bajan la emoción, deberías revisar eso.

[Inner Oni]
00:04:883 (16) - recomiendo dejar la nota igual que en Oni (en 00:04:849 - ) sé que es un Inner Oni pero lo veo muy random que se quede ahí
01:00:095 (393,394) - cambiar a k (para formar mejor el long stream, sigue esto con el siguiente mod)
01:00:296 (396) - cambiar a d (para formar mejor el long stream)
01:00:831 (404,405) - Flip, queda muy mal el kddk ahí

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV

01:52:863 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - Quizá muy random para ser 1/6? Yo lo dejaría de un solo color (como ddddddk), pero ahí va en tu gusto

Datos para el mapper: si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad bajará a 6,18* (-0,01)

Comentario: muy bien trabajado, aunque le falta pulir el long stream, que en el final se vio muy random, y los 1/6 no los quise tocar mucho para mantener la esencia y que quede claro que TÚ eres el mapper.

Mucha suerte en tu map! Gracias uwu Hice la mayoria <3

Alepat.

Raiden wrote:

[Inner Oni]00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - Esto quedaría mejor como un dkkdkkd siguiendo la melodía.
00:25:742 - Puedes añadir un 1/4 aquí
00:26:077 (143,144,145,146,147) - Suena bastante mejor como kkkkd
00:31:166 (197) - Siguiendo el ritmo de k_k_d que has usado hasta ahora en los beats normales, esto debería ser un don
00:32:238 (204,209) - Ctrl+G por la misma razón ^
00:38:064 - Un 1/4 aquí fluye bastante bien
00:39:470 - A partir de esta nota, mueve las líneas verdes 1/4 antes para evitar problemas
00:48:979 (294,295,298,299) - Qué hacen estas notas? Aquí no hay nada pues queria dar un poco de mi ritmo nadie se ha quejado aun asi que los dejare por ahora
00:59:827 - Epa! Aquí hay 1/6! 3:^) ok
01:00:898 - Aquí hay otro!
01:01:434 - El beat entero es 1/6, no lo reduzcas a mitad. Mantén la consistencia.
01:07:863 - Es 1/6!
01:16:635 - y 01:16:769 - Siguen teniendo 1/4, por qué los dejas vacíos? lo que pasa es que yo queria hacer de esta mas simple que las demas que estan mapeadas XD entonces... ahi por que esta tan simple en algunos sitios
01:19:648 - 9 notas seguidas en 1/2 da una sensación de disminución de intensidad. Añade algún 1/4 para dar el efecto de que seguimos en la misma sección intensa
01:27:349 - Hay 1/4 por ahora lo dejare ddk para que la nota anterior tenga el Finish
01:29:090 - 01:29:492 - 01:29:492 - 01:29:626 - 01:29:760 - ^ sera d d d ddd d d por ahora :3 ( de hecho esta observacion la quiero hacer en un futuro pero esperare un poco mas a ver si puedo bajar la SR de las demas para poder subir esta )
01:40:407 (40,41,44,45) - Estos 1/2 qué pintan aquí? como dije antes mi propio ritmo xD los elimino cuando me digan que los elimine de nuevo ( de igual forma no estaba MUY seguro de dejarlos ahi )
01:43:488 - No le vendría mal un kiai hasta 01:53:131 -
01:50:050 (124) - Esto está mal. La melodía sigue yendo 1/3, además de que la transición es bastante incómoda de jugar.
El hecho de que sacrifiques 1/3 para poner bursts de 1/6 también afecta a la calidad del mapa, en mi opinión. Hablo de los huecos como 01:51:434 - y 01:52:506 - yay XD esperaba algo como esto... Los 1/6 seguiran aun lo que hice fue agregar esos 1/3 para asi aumentar la dificultad en esa ultima parte

Buen map. Puede que vuelva para el resto del set heh Tu mod nunca me lo espere XD Muchisimas gracias Raidon-sama :3 espero volverlo a ver y/o sea usted el primero en dar bubble? a esta porqueria de map que tiene el SR roto :X

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello, here is my M4M part:

Kantan

Good enough.

Futsuu

00:39:202 - The bar line is coming weirdly at this section.
00:51:256 - Instead of making SV change here, 00:52:059 - make it here. Because there is a weird vision here.

The sounds are right imo, but at the last section only, maybe you can use 2 or 3 more finishers because of the hard drums.

Muzukashii

00:00:631 - Mentioned in Oni and Inner Oni.
00:09:336 (32) - d
01:03:041 (21) - I don't think so that you followed keyboard sounds here, so 01:02:238 (17) - this and 01:03:041 (21) - this notes have to be same.
01:33:510 (155) - There is no sound here. Well, no keyboard sound.

The rest is nice imo.

Oni

00:00:631 (1,2) - 00:01:032 (3,4) - These two streams has exact keyboard notes, i recommend you to change them bot d k. But like this they are good too.
00:09:202 (32) - k
00:48:845 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Mentioned in Inner Oni mod.
01:09:671 (387) - There is no sound here.
01:13:889 (411) - Maybe, shift this one to 01:13:956 - here.
01:15:497 (423) - Shift this one to 01:15:564 - here and 01:15:497 (423,424) - ctrl + g
01:40:273 (562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569) - Same as 00:48:845.

Inner Oni

01:27:416 (219) - Wrong finisher, drop it or delete the previous note.

00:00:631 (1,2) - 00:01:032 (3,4) - These two streams has exact keyboard notes, i recommend you to change them bot d k. But like this they are good too.
00:01:032 (3,4) - Before this section you were following the sounds harmoniously but suddenly the patterns have changed here. Maybe deleting 00:48:979 (300,302,304,306) - these ones? It has the same situation in Oni diff.
01:06:925 - There is a kick sound here, but it's good as it is too.
01:09:068 (61) - There is no sound here. Maybe consider deleting it.
01:09:872 (68) - ^
01:10:675 (77) - ^
01:23:934 (192,193,194) - I listened a 1/6 stream here. Change them to 1/6 kkkkkkk maybe.
01:40:273 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - Same as 00:01:032

The rest is beautiful, please don't touch it I really enjoyed playing it ^^

Hope this helps, good luck~

1. 00:05:184 - change to d ? other diffs are don here.
2. 00:15:564 - delete this ? for consistent to 00:14:559 - since they have one triplet after 2 notes.
3. 00:15:697 - if you apply above, change to d for variation ?
4. 00:16:166 - might change these to kdd instead of kkd ? for variation to 00:16:970
5. 00:18:577 - make two triplets like you did at 00:17:773 - instead of single quintuplet. for consistent
6. 00:19:381 - this would be better if you make quintuplet like you did at 00:18:577 - for climax of this part
7. 00:51:256 - might this stream changed to kkkkkkkkkkkd instead of dddddddddk because 00:52:059 - is similar like 00:39:202
8. 01:06:791 - remove finish ? this melody is not strong enough
9. 01:27:148 - change to big kat ? for better structure from 01:25:809 - (D D D K K K)
10. 01:46:256 - change to d ? for consistent to 01:44:648

1. 00:00:631 - starting from here to 00:11:881 - might delete some notes to differentiate to inner oni ? they're all obviously same
2. 00:13:488 - these (00:14:291 - , 00:15:095 - , 00:15:898 - , 00:16:702 - , etc ) are big don. but why is this only big kat ? even they're same pitch
3. 00:18:108 - out of consistency ? maybe move to 00:17:840
4. 00:35:854 - delete this pls, like you did at 00:22:997
5. 00:57:684 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313) - this stream is same like you did on inner oni. might to delete note on (308) and (312)
6. 00:58:822 - same as above, delete this
7. 01:02:305 - delete this ? even the next note doesnt have triplet
8. 01:16:836 - delete this ? for give a lil break
9. 01:18:711 - same as above
10. 01:28:889 - ^
11. 01:29:961 - same ^

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi there o/

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:05:184 - change to d ? other diffs are don here.
2. 00:15:564 - delete this ? for consistent to 00:14:559 - since they have one triplet after 2 notes.
3. 00:15:697 - if you apply above, change to d for variation ?
4. 00:16:166 - might change these to kdd instead of kkd ? for variation to 00:16:970
5. 00:18:577 - make two triplets like you did at 00:17:773 - instead of single quintuplet. for consistent
6. 00:19:381 - this would be better if you make quintuplet like you did at 00:18:577 - for climax of this part
7. 00:51:256 - might this stream changed to kkkkkkkkkkkd instead of dddddddddk because 00:52:059 - is similar like 00:39:202
8. 01:06:791 - remove finish ? this melody is not strong enough
9. 01:27:148 - change to big kat ? for better structure from 01:25:809 - (D D D K K K)
10. 01:46:256 - change to d ? for consistent to 01:44:648

[Oni]

increase OD to 6 ? because this oni is harder than usual oni. also for better structure to OD too i guess (Inner 7 ~> Oni 6 ~> Muzu 5 ~> Futsuu 4 ~> Kantan 3)

1. 00:00:631 - starting from here to 00:11:881 - might delete some notes to differentiate to inner oni ? they're all obviously same ye cuz i want to be very consistent in those part XD almost in the beginnig on the song
2. 00:13:488 - these (00:14:291 - , 00:15:095 - , 00:15:898 - , 00:16:702 - , etc ) are big don. but why is this only big kat ? even they're same pitch DAMN sorry xD changing to K!
3. 00:18:108 - out of consistency ? maybe move to 00:17:840
4. 00:35:854 - delete this pls, like you did at 00:22:997
5. 00:57:684 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313) - this stream is same like you did on inner oni. might to delete note on (308) and (312)
6. 00:58:822 - same as above, delete this
7. 01:02:305 - delete this ? even the next note doesnt have triplet
8. 01:16:836 - delete this ? for give a lil break
9. 01:18:711 - same as above
10. 01:28:889 - ^
11. 01:29:961 - same ^

seems that gap between muzu to oni is too huge. :^) PP map... ;_;nvm is just a trash map
sorry i cant mod muzu and below. i dont have many time to do that ;w; np ;_;
hope my mod helps you, good luck Ily <3

1. 00:53:398 - maybe add note here ?
2. 01:52:863 - 01:49:648 - remove? this can get hard for ultra beginners huehue
   

1. 00:03:309 - there is no sound here but you could optionally remove this note
2. 00:04:916 - k
3. 01:38:934 - maybe add k ?
   

1. 00:03:309 - same as in futsuu
2. 01:19:113 - k
   

1. 00:03:309 - same as futsuu muzukashi @_@
2. 01:23:934 - maybe you could make a 1/4 ddd here too
   

1. 00:03:309 - same as all above wehhh
2. 01:49:916 - why didnt u make this just like in 01:43:488 - ? same sounds you could use the same patterns, playing only dkkdkkd feels kinda boring here, try to make it dkkdddkkkdkk like previous stream !
3. OPTIONAL: 01:57:952 - why not high SV finisher XDDDDDDDDDDDD lol
   
   

-TheHateD- wrote:

hi

[Kantan]

1. 00:53:398 - maybe add note here ?
2. 01:52:863 - 01:49:648 - remove? this can get hard for ultra beginners huehue

[Futsuu]

1. 00:03:309 - there is no sound here but you could optionally remove this note
2. 00:04:916 - k
3. 01:38:934 - maybe add k ?

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:03:309 - same as in futsuu
2. 01:19:113 - k

[Oni]

1. 00:03:309 - same as futsuu muzukashi @_@
2. 01:23:934 - maybe you could make a 1/4 ddd here too

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:03:309 - same as all above wehhh
2. 01:49:916 - why didnt u make this just like in 01:43:488 - ? same sounds you could use the same patterns, playing only dkkdkkd feels kinda boring here, try to make it dkkdddkkkdkk like previous stream !
3. OPTIONAL: 01:57:952 - why not high SV finisher XDDDDDDDDDDDD lol
   

this map looks really good and fun to play, hope this mod helps
good luck !

Midnaait wrote:

Hola, un mod que te debia del año pasado (?)
// = Sugerencia

[General]

Le falto un pixel al BG lel


Pon "SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-" de Source y quitalo de los tags
Recuerda que las diffs faciles deben tener HP mas alta que las dificiles debido a que tienen menos notas
El primer kiai deberia terminar en 00:39:202 - (Lo noté en el futsuu, no sé si estará en las otras diffs)

[Kantan]

00:22:863 - Aunque sea un sonido bastante prominente, deberias considerar borrarla para enfatizar la siguiente nota
00:35:720 - ^
00:44:827 - No es necesario, pero borrar esto daria un lindo break y tambien pegaria con el violin que se mantiene de la nota anterior
01:36:256 - ^ pero con el piano lol
01:42:684 - Ponle finish? Es un cambio bastante brusco de volumen

[Futsuu]

OD=4 Deberia ser un poco mas dificil que el Kantan
Nerf incoming (?)

(1) Primero que nada, limitale un poco mas a los 1/2, debido al alto bpm, que use signature de 3/4 y que esta cancion le gusta usar dobles lel
(2) Segundo, si usas 1/2 (No es necesario, pero si recomendable, ayudara un poco a nerfear la SR) Intenta que sean monocolor

00:07:461 - Borra esto por consistencia con 00:01:032
00:09:470 - // Cambia a d? Haria buen contraste con el siguiente pattern kkk
00:10:943 - Borra esto para hacer el inicio un poco mas simple
00:13:488 a 00:19:113 - Podrias seguir un poco mas la melodia, esta un poco aburrida y repetitiva esta parte, ademas, quitar algunas dobles no vendria mal
00:35:720 - Consideraria mover esto a 00:35:988 Para mantener mejor el ritmo de la canción
- Si lo has hecho cambialo a D
00:38:666 (59,60) - Borra estos dos para enfatizar el fin del kiai
00:40:006 - Podrias mover esa linea verde un poco a la izquierda? La linea se ve mal por alguna razón cuando juegas
00:41:881 - Mueve esto a 00:41:077 - Sonaria mejor debido a que aqui suena el violin
00:44:559 - Vendria bien un break de 3/1 debido a ser una parte bastante tranquila, eso y que el violin deja de sonar aqui
00:45:631 (79,80) - Ctrl+G. (2)
01:37:059 - (2)
01:38:934 (232,233) - // Ctrl+G? Suena mucho mejor en mi opinion
01:44:827 (246,247) - No haria daño invertir estas, como hiciste en 01:51:256 (263,264)
01:46:434 - ^

[Muzukashii]

Las dobles de 1/4 no deberian ser usadas, debido al bpm, para eso esta el Oni lol (Ejemplos: 01:05:653 (35,36) - 01:08:867 (48,49) - 01:09:671 (52,53) - 01:10:474 (56,57) - etc...). Realmente consideraria borrar la primer nota o moverla 1/4 a la izquierda para que quede todo 1/2
Precaución: Puede que esto baje drasticamente el SR, si no nerfeaste el Futsuu habra un problema grande rip

00:15:497 - // Borraria esto para añadir mas variedad y que no sea tan monótono
00:16:300 - // ^
00:25:876 - Moveria esta nota a 00:25:742 o a 00:26:144
00:28:421 - Borra esto, no sigue a nada que esté en 1/4
00:34:381 (135,136,137) - K K D Quedaria mejor, seguiria a la melodía
00:37:997 - // Borra esto y cambia 00:38:131 (149,150,151) - a kkd?
00:45:095 - Borra esto, misma razon que el futsuu
00:51:925 - Mueve esto a 00:51:657 para enfatizar el finish
01:44:827 (200,201) - d K como en el futsuu
01:46:434 (204,205) - ^
01:54:671 - Borra esto, o cambia la ultima nota del triplet por d

[Oni]

00:26:747 - // ddkkk se juega mejor en mi opinion, es un pattern que no requiere cambiar las manos
00:41:881 - Vendria bien borrar esta nota, como en las otras diffs
00:48:309 - ^
00:51:724 - Que te parece mover esto a 00:51:456 - para hacer un 5plet?
01:10:072 - Mueve esto a 01:09:939 - y cambialo a d, no hace nada en su posicion actual lol
01:33:309 - Ya sabes, borra esto
01:36:523 - ^
01:39:738 - ^

[Inner Oni]

00:27:081 - Pon un kat aqui? Se escucha algo de la melodia
- Si lo haces pon Ctrl+G en 00:26:947 (156,157) -
00:59:961 - Si escuchas con cuidado, el 1/6 se escucha menos intenso, cambia esta nota por d
- Añadiendo, 01:00:028 no se escucha ninguna percusión, borrala
01:42:148 - // Cambia a d para enfatizar las notas de los lados?
01:48:443 - No sé que sigue esta nota, recomiendo borrarla
01:48:711 - ^

Por qué me haces trabajar :^)
Suerte con el map

xtrem3x wrote:

(?)


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K


Slider velocity en 1.40 minimo ...

Kantan

• 
  usa todos los interited points con velocidad de 0.70x (si, eso incluye crear otro con offset 631 para no tener variaciones) eh? D:!
  
  00:03:845 (5,6) - cambialas a d
  00:10:273 (13,15) - igual
  
  el slider extiendelo hasta 00:13:488- (posiblemente tambien debas cambiar el tick rate a 3 para que no sea tan dificil agarrar esos puntos y vaya en formato 1/3)
  
  00:26:345 - cambialo a K mas que nada por diferencia, por que ya empieza el kiai y se ve raro si la combinas con la parte que no tiene
  
  00:42:416 (54,56) - cambialos a d ... lo mismo que al inicio.
  
  01:25:809 - está muy cuestionada esta parte ... sería como una rompedera de reglas y sería algo muy denso comparando a toda la diff, así que no puedo dar un punto bueno para esta parte. cambiado a K K K K D
  
  01:29:023 - cambia a k .. aunque tiene menos sonido que la nota anterior sería mejor darle otro enfoque en esta parte
  
  01:33:845 (136,138) - cambia a d ... lo mismo que al inicio.
  
  01:44:291 (149,151) - cambialas a k ... muchas notas iguales se ve aburrido, ademas estas tienen un poco mas de sonido de fondo.
  
  01:55:541 (165,166,167) - borra estas notas y pones un spinner hasta 01:57:550- por los momentos no por que hay sonidos que puedo utilizar para dar un final mas limpio

Futsuu

• 
  todos los inherited a 0.75x y mismas indicaciones que kantan .-.
  
  00:05:720 - borra esta para un break
  
  00:09:336 - borra esta nota .. tiene mas sentido el triple siguiente
  
  00:13:488- hasta 00:26:345- veo algo forzada esta sección, (sabes, densidad) ... toda borrar algunas notas o solo seguir un ritmo especifico.
  
  00:51:256 - podría ir un slider acá hasta 00:51:791- dejare esa parte como un break XD
  
  00:54:202 (94,95) - d K estoy siguiendo el ritmo de fondo por ende necesita ir k D como todas las demas
  
  01:10:273 (142,143,144,145,146) - k k d d k
  
  01:21:131 - cambiala a k ... tiene mas sonido (mas enfasis que la siguiente)
  
  01:37:327 - mejor agrega otra nota acá

la inner es lo que mas trabajo me va a dar pero ya mañana posteo eso en este...

Alepat wrote:

F I X A P P L I Q U É P L Z

World Fraction wrote:

HEYOOOOOOOOO! Just a random mod for your Oni.
Blue is a suggestion and Red is something that got my attention. Took Midnaait's little icon thing



[Oni]

00:04:916 (17) - can be moved back to a 1/8 space imo which would be here 00:04:883 -
00:09:336 (33) - should be changed to don bcuz of the dip in the volume
00:28:756 (150) - should be changed to a don cuz it just sounds more pleasing
00:39:470 (213,216) - can be changed to kat ^
00:41:881 (222,225) - can be deleted to give some breaks and to follow the weird violin like instrument otherwise its very repetitive
00:43:488 (226) - change to kat?
00:44:291 (229,230,231,232) - can be deleted like 00:41:881 (222,225) -
00:45:898 (232,235) - change to kat same suggestion as 00:39:470 (213,216) -
00:48:309 - delete possibly?
00:48:577 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249) - i have no idea what you are trying to do with this pattern should probably change it to match the weird violin thing
01:30:631 - this area should be pretty much the same as what i mentioned above
01:49:916 (597,598,599,600,601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - tbh you might want to consider changing all of these to the opposite color imo

ANYWAYS, that's all I've got to say man. GOOD LUCK ChiChi!!

newyams99 wrote:

Sorry I'm late.

General

Make sure your audio volumes are consistent across all difficulties, and make sure the volume of the first timing point is the same as the volume of the first inherited point.

FINISHERS ARE INCONSISTENT ACROSS ALL DIFFICULTIES. Please try to make finishers consistent wherever possible. You may keep it inconsistent in cases when you'd like to make it easier for players to hit (in Kantans and Futsuus) or where the finisher is at the end of a 1/4 rhythm (in Onis and Inner Onis).

Edit: I think all are ok or well, the volumen... All are ok cuz xD is the same diff at Iner i delete some Inherit points... Just that oo, About the BIGS you're right XD i was listening and... well :C sorry

Kantan

00:00:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If you were matching to the pitch here, I think something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775493 might make a bit more sense. If you're matching to the clicks, you should either make all these 3/1 hits all k's or make a more obvious pattern with your colouring.

00:19:916 (23) - You can add a finisher here, like you did in the Futsuu.

00:23:934 (29,30,31) - Perhaps you could remove the finishers on here? They're inconsistent with the other diffs, and I felt like you could make a small difficulty spike by having a 1/1 rhythm at 00:25:541 (31,32).

00:30:363 - You can add a hit here, and the rhythm at 00:27:952 (33,34,35,36) is too easy overall in comparison to the pre-kiai areas.

00:34:381 (40) - Changing to k might be better to emphasize the high pitch here, like you did in the Muzu. Same in the Futsuu.

00:38:131 - You can add a hit here to follow the melody that you were following at 00:37:327 (45,46). You may want to change the colours to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775553 as well, to make it slightly easier to hit.

00:39:202 - This violin section is way too easy in comparison with the Futsuu. I'd recommend making the Futsuu a little bit easier, which I'll get to later.

01:03:845 (83,84,85) - Switching the colours on these might sound better to match to the pitch.

01:07:327 (89,90) - Delete for a 6/1 break?

01:08:666 (92,93) - Ctrl + G would match the pitch of the melody imo. However, 01:08:666 (92) - is kind of in an awkward spot; I'd move it to 01:10:273.

01:25:809 (119,120,121,122,123) - A rhythm like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775849 matches all the 1/1 patterns that you've had so far.

01:43:488 (144) - You could change this to K to emphasize the start of the kiai and emphasize the high pitch of the melody.

01:45:095 (146) - Changing this to k would have a similar effect as the above.

Futsuu

00:09:470 (25) - Change to k? This isn't following your k pattern that you've had on every big white tick.

00:10:006 (26,27,28) - 1/2 isn't necessary here; you could delete 27.

00:14:157 (40) - I'd delete this so you have a nice alternation pattern with your rhythms. However, 00:13:488 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - would become quite repetitive. If you'd like to make some more variety, how about
something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776131
I tried to make it so that there's 1/1 that's matched to the melody, while incorporating your original rhythm as well. I personally think this would work very well, because 00:23:131 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - could be changed the exact same way to match the melody by doing this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776140

00:26:211 - You could add a hit here to make a slight difficulty spike entering the kiai.

00:26:345 - Try making some 1/1 patterns longer in the first half of the 1st kiai. Also try to add some 1/2 in some places if you'd like, a possible spot could be 00:36:657 - but other places can still have 1/2 where there's no exact melody rhythm in the music. Another place where you could add 1/2 is at 00:26:881 (78,79).

00:39:470 (110) - Move to 00:38:934 - ? It would work better to create a pattern in the following quiet section.

00:45:497 (127) - Delete? 1/2 isn't necessary in a quiet part imo. Same at 01:36:925 (274).

00:51:256 (144,145) - You can add 1/1 hits between these two circles for a better difficulty curve.

00:58:488 - From here, you could make it more difficult, like you did in the Oni and Inner Oni. However, I'd perhaps You could also make this part more difficult in the Kantan if you'd like to.

01:01:434 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - I wouldn't use 1/2 here, considering the difficulty curve from the Futsuu and Oni. Please create a more proper difficulty curve here by comparing the difficulties from the Futsuu to the Oni.

01:17:238 - You could add a hit here and change the next hit to a d. Then make the Muzu harder so that there's be a better difficulty curve with the Oni.

01:22:059 - You could add a hit here to keep your 5 hit 1/1 patterns.

01:28:488 - ^

01:37:059 (275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - The 1/1 pattern doesn't need to be this long in a quiet section imo. You could add a hit at 01:42:148 - tho

01:43:488 - You could make this kiai more difficult as well. Add 1/1, and you may be able to add 1/2 at sections like 01:48:041 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310).

Muzukashii

Change the HP to 5 for a better HP curve.

00:00:764 (2,3) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve with the Oni.

00:05:720 (18) - ^

00:07:461 (24) - ^

00:14:157 - You could add a k here if you'd like.

00:19:782 - You could add a d here too.

00:20:385 - ^ 00:21:256 - ^ Both for difficulty curve.

00:25:273 (94) - Change to k to make it consistent with the Oni.

00:27:416 (109) - ^

00:29:827 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776469 This might work to create a more challenging rhythm for Muzu players.

00:36:523 (141) - You could move this to 00:36:389 - and change to d, and then add a hit at 00:36:657 - and change 00:36:791 (142) - to K if you'd like to match to the melody. I feel like it would work better to flow into the somewhat difficult pattern at 00:37:059 (143,144,145,146,147) -

00:38:666 (152,153,154,155,156,157) - This is the exact same rhythm as the Oni; I'd suggest making a bigger difference in rhythm by making this rhythm easier, or make the colour pattern more difficult in the Oni.

00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - You can keep the colours the same as the Oni if you'd like. Same at 01:30:899 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151).

00:43:488 (172) - ^ 00:47:773 (186) - ^

00:45:631 (180,181,182,183) - I'd make this a continuous 1/1 pattern since you had it at 00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167).

00:48:845 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - I personally think that the difficulty increase isn't necessary in all three of the harder difficulties; you can just keep a similar rhythm as the rest of the quiet section.

00:52:059 (204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - You can just make this a long 1/1 pattern to create a better difficulty curve. Adding a hit at 00:58:354 - is good too.

00:56:613 (215,216,217,218,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The difficulty is way too easy here, considering that the Oni becomes extremely difficult. You should make some additions here, but you should also make the Oni slightly less difficult here.

01:01:434 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - As mentioned before, the difficulty curve is messed up here; the Muzu is more difficult than the Oni. Please resolve this problem.

01:05:452 (34,35,36) - Make this 1/2 if you're not going to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) which is a similar melody rhythm. However, if you do decide to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) - I'd recommend changing most of these 1/4 rhythms into triplets so that you don't have so many 3/4 gaps. What you did at 01:15:095 (78,79,80,81) - works well to match the melody's rhythm atm, so you should use that rhythm throughout this section and the 2nd kiai.

01:08:934 (49) - I'd change this to k for some variety and to match to the pitch of the melody.

01:18:510 (96,97) - I wouldn't recommend using 1/4 that switches colour in a Muzu. Again, I'd suggest doing what I suggested earlier about changing into a triplet.

01:21:724 (108,109) - ^ 01:24:939 (120,121) - ^

01:19:916 (102) - A k would work better to match the high pitch of the melody imo.

01:25:541 (123) - I'd change this to a d and make 01:25:809 (124,125,126) - K K K, like you had it in the Futsuu. Same in Oni.

01:29:023 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - This could be more similar to the end of the first kiai for a larger difficulty spike.

01:33:309 (154) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve. Same at 01:35:720 (164).

01:34:849 (160,161) - I wouldn't have 1/4 in the quiet part.

01:37:327 - Add a hit to be consistent with the Futsuu.

01:39:202 (177) - I'd change this to k, like you had it in the Futsuu and Oni.

01:40:006 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Again, there's no need to raise the difficulty here in the harder difficulties. I'd just keep it similar to what you had before.

01:43:488 - This kiai can be much denser. At least make this section all 1/1 please. Add some 1/2 if you'd like to.

01:54:604 (235,236,237) - I don't think you need any 1/4 that changes colours, as stated before.

Oni

00:04:113 (13) - Move to 00:03:309 - to be consistent with the Inner Oni.

00:13:756 (52,53,54,55,56) - I'd make this slightly harder than the other 1/2 patterns because it's got the melody rhythm here.

00:15:363 (64,65,66,67,68) - I don't see why this doesn't have 1/4 :/ Same in the kiai, I don't see why some patterns don't use 1/4 and other ones do.

00:23:934 (114) - You could change this to K to emphasize the fact that it's higher than 00:24:738 (120).

00:31:434 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - You could possibly make this denser and connect the 1/2 so that there's some difficulty in this section.

00:35:184 (184) - Change to D to stay consistent with the other parts that sound like this.

00:38:532 - Adding a hit here wouldn't be bad to make a small difficulty spike. Same at 01:29:961.

00:58:488 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332) - This is suddenly quite difficult. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776701

01:07:595 (363) - You could add a hit here if you'd like to raise the difficulty a bit.

01:09:135 - ^

01:16:702 (420,421) - You could add hits between these two hits. In addition, you could make a bit more colour variety at 01:16:166 (416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428) - like you did in the Muzu.

01:17:773 - I'd try to minimize the amount of 1/1 that you use in this kiai, since it's an Oni and to create a better difficulty curve with the Muzu. Try making places such as 01:19:648 (441,442,443,444) - and 01:23:398 (465,466,467,468,469,470) - denser where there are many 1/1 gaps.

01:43:488 - Add 1/1 hits between the 1/3 rhythms to make this kiai slightly more difficult. You could also alternate between kkkd and dddk 1/3 rhythms to create more variety.

Inner Oni

00:14:291 - This section is quite similar to the Oni. You may want to modify the Oni and Inner Oni to establish a greater difference.

00:24:068 (129) - I don't see a reason for this to be a k; I think it would work better if you could change it to d to match the lower background instrumentals.

00:28:086 (168) - I'd personally change this to a d. This way, the k's at 00:28:220 (170,171,172,173,174,175) - match the positions of the k's at 00:29:023 (178,179,180,181,182).

00:28:889 (177,178,179,180,181,182) - Coupled with the suggestion above, you should try to make this part of the rhythm more similar to 00:28:086 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175).

00:29:693 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - Rather than having so many triplets in a row, it may be good to make some 1/2 patterns and longer 1/4 patterns instead.

00:39:202 (261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) - I'd change the colours to be consistent to the Oni here.

00:48:845 (298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - As mentioned before, I don't think a difficulty increase is necessary here.

00:58:488 (378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) - I'd change this to ddddkkdkd or something. I don't like dddkkk, and I felt like it'd match the background instrumentals better. Idk tho xD

00:59:827 (398,399,400,401) - I'd change this one to kddd and the one at 01:00:898 (414,415,416,417) - to kkkd since the pitch is higher on the second one.

01:01:434 (421,422,423,424,425,426,427) - Patterns like these are kinda difficult to read, and could be simplified to kkkdddk. I strongly recommend you make the 1/6 pattern a bit simpler here.

01:19:514 - You can add a d here for a continuous pattern, like you had at 01:21:256.

01:25:809 (629,630,631) - Again, I personally think that this would sound better as K K K.

01:30:631 (664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,673) - I'd make the colours consistent to the Oni here.

01:40:541 (703,704,705,706,707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715,716) - Again, no need to make it difficult imo.

01:41:881 (711) - You had a D here in the Oni and Muzu, so maybe you should keep it consistent?

01:43:577 (730,731,732,733) - Creating some variety in this 1/3 section would be cool, so how about changing this to kdkk? Same at 01:45:184 (748,749,750,751).

01:53:666 (833) - Changing this to d would nicely match the low instrumentals here imo.

That's all.

Call me back~~

1. 00:04:849 (16,17) - the way it is is currently fine. But if you really want the piano note, it's here : 00:04:883 - . Tho, 1/4 is fine. So, it's up to you.
2. 00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I'd say, the current pattern is fine, but I still think, dkkdkkd flow quite weird with the K here. 00:14:291 (62) - . I'd say, ddkdkkd will make the pattern flow better.
3. 00:17:171 (86) - this kat feel kinda a lil out of place. You did use kat on those notes 00:16:970 (83,84,87) - to emphasize the high pitched note. But this one 00:17:171 (86) - isn't on it. Tho, I can understand you want to make it different from this one 00:16:166 (76,77,78,79,80) - .
4. 00:29:693 (188,189,190) - How about a dkk ? it goes very well with the high pitched piano note.
5. 00:32:773 (215) - I'd say this one as D feels better than a K. The triple k make a D flow better. It'll also make difference with those 2 notes : 00:33:577 (218,221) - . Which, is I think, stronger.
6. 01:34:827 - I'd say the piano note is actually here. (so don't forget on other diff)
7. 01:37:595 (691) - 01:39:202 (697) - How about a kat here ? Since the pitch is starting to get high on this note.

1. 00:24:604 (123) - I'd say this one as is fine. But I think changing this one as kat will make the next big D a better emphasis.
2. 01:14:023 (405) - how about changing this one as kat ? the spam don is kinda strange in my opinion.
3. 01:15:764 (418) - This one as kat is good. But changing this one as don will make this note 01:15:898 (419) - stronger.
4. 01:41:881 (570) - according to your kat usage on this part, maybe it'll be better to change it into big kat ?

Kin wrote:

Hi~

here is a fast check.

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:04:849 (16,17) - the way it is is currently fine. But if you really want the piano note, it's here : 00:04:883 - . Tho, 1/4 is fine. So, it's up to you.
2. 00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I'd say, the current pattern is fine, but I still think, dkkdkkd flow quite weird with the K here. 00:14:291 (62) - . I'd say, ddkdkkd will make the pattern flow better.
3. 00:17:171 (86) - this kat feel kinda a lil out of place. You did use kat on those notes 00:16:970 (83,84,87) - to emphasize the high pitched note. But this one 00:17:171 (86) - isn't on it. Tho, I can understand you want to make it different from this one 00:16:166 (76,77,78,79,80) - .
4. 00:29:693 (188,189,190) - How about a dkk ? it goes very well with the high pitched piano note.
5. 00:32:773 (215) - I'd say this one as D feels better than a K. The triple k make a D flow better. It'll also make difference with those 2 notes : 00:33:577 (218,221) - . Which, is I think, stronger.
6. 01:34:827 - I'd say the piano note is actually here. (so don't forget on other diff)
7. 01:37:595 (691) - 01:39:202 (697) - How about a kat here ? Since the pitch is starting to get high on this note.

[Oni]

1. 00:24:604 (123) - I'd say this one as is fine. But I think changing this one as kat will make the next big D a better emphasis.
2. 01:14:023 (405) - how about changing this one as kat ? the spam don is kinda strange in my opinion.
3. 01:15:764 (418) - This one as kat is good. But changing this one as don will make this note 01:15:898 (419) - stronger.
4. 01:41:881 (570) - according to your kat usage on this part, maybe it'll be better to change it into big kat ?

I'd say, the map in general have some interesting part & pattern. But I'd also say, it's currently not ready for the qualify right now.
good luck! \o

Volta wrote:

hi :3
most critical issue in the map is the gap between kantan and futsuu is too high.
you can try to add more notes in kantan, and remove some in futsuu. here some suggestions.

Kantan

1.00x green lines are fine, no need to make them 0.7x :c o-ok

00:14:023 - add d
00:14:827 - add d
00:15:631 - add k
00:17:238 - add d
00:18:041 - add k

00:23:666 - add d
00:24:470 - add k
00:25:273 - add d

00:26:345 ~ this kiai part is very intense but too spacious >.<
00:25:809 - and 00:26:077 - add d to mark the start of kiai
00:26:881 - add d
00:27:148 - add k
00:27:684 - add d
00:28:488 - add k
00:30:095 - add k
00:30:898 - add d

00:38:666 - add d
00:38:934 - add d

00:44:827 - this can make a nice rest spot like at 01:36:256 - consider to remove it
00:49:381 - i think it's better to remove this to have consistent rhythm.

00:59:023 - add d
00:59:827 - add d
01:00:631 - add k
01:03:041 - add d

01:13:488 - remove
01:13:756 - remove
01:14:291 - add d
01:16:702 - add k
> so they would consistent with 01:07:863 - and give longer rest

the 2nd kiai can also be made a little harder
01:18:309 - add d
01:19:916 - add d
01:22:327 - add d
01:24:738 - add d
01:25:541 - add k
01:29:559 - add k

01:33:845 - change to d like you did at 00:42:416 - ?

01:44:023 - add k
01:44:827 - add d
01:45:631 - add k
01:50:988 - add d

Futsuu

try to remove some notes in futsuu, especially in calm parts.
00:03:577 - remove
00:06:791 - ^
00:07:595 - ^
00:10:006 - ^

00:10:675 - remove
00:10:943 - ^
00:10:809 - add note here instead for more simple rhythm

00:42:148 - remove
00:43:488 - can change to k for variation of 00:41:077 -
00:45:898 - remove
00:46:702 - ^
00:47:506 - add d

01:33:577 - remove
01:34:916 - change to k?
01:37:327 - remove

there could be some more to remove though.

good luck :>

newyams99 wrote:

`_L`

u w u

02:23 [_Chichinya_]: HB MA FRENDO
02:23 Surono: TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTttttttt
02:23 Surono: y
02:23 Surono: asdfasdgsafdgasfd
02:27 [_Chichinya_]: aklsdjalksdjlkasjdlkasdjlasd
04:46 Surono: a
04:46 Surono: dem afk
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: owowowow
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: i'm here
04:46 Surono: apliqwquwuwquwq
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: xD
04:46 Surono: yea
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: AwA appliku taim?
04:46 Surono: wuthc me play dis
04:47 Surono: AWAWAWA
04:47 [_Chichinya_]: AWA
04:47 Surono: tacossssss hard afsdfafdad., me rip heuhue
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: xD =W= do you want some tacos? =W=
04:48 Surono: yummy
04:48 *[_Chichinya_] giving some tacos to Surono
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
04:48 Surono: asdfsafdfsadhsadads image of tacos pls
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: wait i'm preparing the tacos :^)
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: [http://static.tvazteca.com/imagenes/2012/52/Tacopedia-enciclopedia-del-taco-1752224.jpg enjoy :^) <3 i made this for you ma frendo]
04:50 Surono: awhgkjwagijakwgjawg tacos
04:51 [_Chichinya_]: T A C O S <3
04:51 Surono: owo
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
04:52 Surono: 00:59:872 - yus
04:52 Surono: 01:01:523 - yus
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: yas
04:52 Surono: yus = invert of colors
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: lol XD ok
04:52 Surono: dem who say it overmappuh desu ~~~~~
04:53 Surono: yeah it is song, dam hard :"D
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:434 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425) - that... old form is back <3
04:53 Surono: <3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking: old form was kkddkkd
04:53 Surono: kkddddk
04:53 Surono: its hurt </3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: map this song was like @_@what i need to map
04:53 Surono: kkddkkd is easier too owo
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Mid tell me that :C
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: after that was ... kkddkdk
04:54 Surono: AGASgjsgahagdjgf
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: one pattern "hard" to play
04:54 Surono: kdk, rip midfingers.
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Charlo suggest me that
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: AGREE XD
04:54 Surono: agree for whhich?
04:54 Surono: kkddkkd?
04:54 Surono: fair with alternating.. but others opinion is madness X"D
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: >Rip Midfingers
04:55 Surono: yeah, kkddkdk.. at kdk is rip
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: is hard to... kddk players actually
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: so... kkkdddk is better
04:55 Surono: brruuuuuuuuuuu
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: in my oppinion
04:55 Surono: rrrr
04:55 Surono: rrrrrrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: D:! WU
04:55 Surono: !!!!!!!!!1111
04:55 Surono: owo !
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: rrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: oneoneoneone
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: owo one
04:55 Surono: oneoeneoeneoeno
04:56 [_Chichinya_]: twotwotwotwotwotwotwotwo D:!!!!!!!!!!!!!
04:57 Surono: 01:14:425 - u,wu i cri.......
04:57 Surono: just don it.. for tacos yummy.. dont worry sr not decrease..
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: idk why this song attracme so hard
04:57 Surono: also dont map for pepes u,wu
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkkd
04:57 Surono: aeguyahgiugwkwg
04:57 Surono: wut
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: XD
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkd*
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: askldjaslkdjasld
04:57 Surono: madnuts
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: sorry i wrote one k lajdklasjd
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - maybe this...
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: dddk ?
05:00 Surono: 01:24:872 - from here~~~~~~~~~~
05:00 Surono: ddk d kdkkd
05:00 Surono: 01:21:858 - at least don this gib different emphasize with next dkkkd.
05:01 Surono: cuz flow are differe uwuwuwuw
05:01 Surono: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - u can keep that since left pattern are many kats
05:01 Surono: 01:17:372 - if u kat this, will rip when continue 01:17:506 - here .. 4 kats ;w;
05:01 [_Chichinya_]: okidoki
05:02 Surono: madnuts
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: x'D jalksdjaslkdjaslkdj ye
05:02 Surono: 01:29:827 - kat
05:02 Surono: many don in left
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: mini don break :thinking:
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: donbriku
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: buriku*
05:03 Surono: owo ?
05:03 Surono: OWO !!!!
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: AwA !!!!!!!!!
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - mindblow to play... the kat mostly should emphasized at white tick cuz there is the good alteration
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - example until 01:44:559 - here... kddkddkkkkddk
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: hmmm
05:05 Surono: 01:44:023 - yus makes sense if here kkkk
05:05 Surono: and selfmod.. make it readable.. or playable.. ;w;
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,723,724) - change to? kddk?
05:06 Surono: at least.. with tick shuld emphasized with kat for playablelity
05:06 Surono: yush.. but at leastttttttt.
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: @w@
05:06 Surono: 01:43:153 - don until here
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: i was trying to follow the drum and the melody :thinking: was bad?
05:07 Surono: thats why people afraid to rank ur map uwu
05:07 Surono: but.. the consistency is at white tick u,wu
05:07 Surono: 01:42:684 - drurururururuurur
05:07 Surono: 01:43:220 - tataktkatkaktak
05:07 [_Chichinya_]: ;_; but they don't help me to fix it aa ;_; only you
05:07 Surono: X"D
05:08 Surono: just make it easier... so people will luv to rank it <3
05:08 Surono: I am lookin for this, dont worry waifu gokuhh uwu
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking:
05:08 Surono: HHHMMMMMMMMMMM OWO
05:08 Surono: KHINTING?!??!?!
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vUjdR/cccb6ed0e2.jpg
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: ?
05:09 Surono: 01:44:827 - yesh from here kkkk for colors then 01:45:095 - repeat again like 01:43:488 - from here.
05:09 Surono: uwu ........ where is that.....
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: the stream
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:684 (710,711,712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722) -
05:09 Surono: 01:43:488 - but here u want don?
05:10 Surono: ;~;
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: yes cuz the durm
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: and follow the d d d
05:10 Surono: then 1/3?
05:10 Surono: are you have idea?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,731,740,749) -
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: see?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: don is a lower sound... and in these part the sound is like KAT
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: that's why i'm using don
05:11 Surono: 01:43:488 - if from music.. is actually emphasized as kddkddkkkkddkddkkkk and repat boring but that can be easier to play
05:12 Surono: if you feel that boring.. just make variety every kkkk like change it to kkdk or kdkk
05:12 Surono: dem........
05:12 Surono: but the current, I cant read it.... bcus I nub `_L`
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: kddkddkkkk :thinking
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: let me try
05:12 Surono: shinsekai is nightmares, u know that
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: no worry i'm nub to
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: =W= that's why i want to change my name into
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai-
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: you imagine that?
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: one diff called
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai Destruction
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: :^)
05:13 Surono: ................................. :^)
05:13 Surono: 01:49:916 - sadsadgsadgsagd
05:13 Surono: 01:51:256 (86,87,88,89,90) - IUKFWJuFHKJFWUHJKFWUIFWkjfwFWJKFWJKLFWFWLKmfwwff
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: x'D ajdklasjdklajsdkl wait i'm fixing the 1/3 part
05:14 Surono: 01:52:863 - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
05:14 Surono: M A D N E S S
05:14 Surono: my fingerz already ded.. even I dont try that... ohhhhh, I just hit'd that before.. when u wathcin meh ahsuhuhe
05:14 Surono: rip me
05:14 Surono: okey savelog.,
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: KLASJDLKAJSDKLAJSLDKASJKLDJSKLDJD dddddk
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: SUFFER !!
05:15 Surono: ohhhh 1 thing ,.
05:15 Surono: 01:54:604 - just ddd
05:15 Surono: dudud, cuz 01:53:800 - is mainsounds
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: 01:52:863 (817,818,819,820,821,822,823) - the only hard hard hard 1/6 pattern on this set XD
05:15 Surono: theres no mainsounds uwu
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: oki
05:15 Surono: readable buttttttttttt. madnuts

Surono wrote:

newyams99 wrote:

`_L`

naxyimyam69's mod yea just, yea wtf.

u w u

02:23 [_Chichinya_]: HB MA FRENDO
02:23 Surono: TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTttttttt
02:23 Surono: y
02:23 Surono: asdfasdgsafdgasfd
02:27 [_Chichinya_]: aklsdjalksdjlkasjdlkasdjlasd
04:46 Surono: a
04:46 Surono: dem afk
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: owowowow
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: i'm here
04:46 Surono: apliqwquwuwquwq
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: xD
04:46 Surono: yea
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: AwA appliku taim?
04:46 Surono: wuthc me play dis
04:47 Surono: AWAWAWA
04:47 [_Chichinya_]: AWA
04:47 Surono: tacossssss hard afsdfafdad., me rip heuhue
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: xD =W= do you want some tacos? =W=
04:48 Surono: yummy
04:48 *[_Chichinya_] giving some tacos to Surono
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
04:48 Surono: asdfsafdfsadhsadads image of tacos pls
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: wait i'm preparing the tacos :^)
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: [http://static.tvazteca.com/imagenes/2012/52/Tacopedia-enciclopedia-del-taco-1752224.jpg enjoy :^) <3 i made this for you ma frendo]
04:50 Surono: awhgkjwagijakwgjawg tacos
04:51 [_Chichinya_]: T A C O S <3
04:51 Surono: owo
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
04:52 Surono: 00:59:872 - yus
04:52 Surono: 01:01:523 - yus
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: yas
04:52 Surono: yus = invert of colors
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: lol XD ok
04:52 Surono: dem who say it overmappuh desu ~~~~~
04:53 Surono: yeah it is song, dam hard :"D
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:434 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425) - that... old form is back <3
04:53 Surono: <3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking: old form was kkddkkd
04:53 Surono: kkddddk
04:53 Surono: its hurt </3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: map this song was like @_@what i need to map
04:53 Surono: kkddkkd is easier too owo
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Mid tell me that :C
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: after that was ... kkddkdk
04:54 Surono: AGASgjsgahagdjgf
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: one pattern "hard" to play
04:54 Surono: kdk, rip midfingers.
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Charlo suggest me that
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: AGREE XD
04:54 Surono: agree for whhich?
04:54 Surono: kkddkkd?
04:54 Surono: fair with alternating.. but others opinion is madness X"D
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: >Rip Midfingers
04:55 Surono: yeah, kkddkdk.. at kdk is rip
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: is hard to... kddk players actually
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: so... kkkdddk is better
04:55 Surono: brruuuuuuuuuuu
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: in my oppinion
04:55 Surono: rrrr
04:55 Surono: rrrrrrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: D:! WU
04:55 Surono: !!!!!!!!!1111
04:55 Surono: owo !
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: rrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: oneoneoneone
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: owo one
04:55 Surono: oneoeneoeneoeno
04:56 [_Chichinya_]: twotwotwotwotwotwotwotwo D:!!!!!!!!!!!!!
04:57 Surono: 01:14:425 - u,wu i cri.......
04:57 Surono: just don it.. for tacos yummy.. dont worry sr not decrease..
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: idk why this song attracme so hard
04:57 Surono: also dont map for pepes u,wu
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkkd
04:57 Surono: aeguyahgiugwkwg
04:57 Surono: wut
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: XD
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkd*
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: askldjaslkdjasld
04:57 Surono: madnuts
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: sorry i wrote one k lajdklasjd
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - maybe this...
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: dddk ?
05:00 Surono: 01:24:872 - from here~~~~~~~~~~
05:00 Surono: ddk d kdkkd
05:00 Surono: 01:21:858 - at least don this gib different emphasize with next dkkkd.
05:01 Surono: cuz flow are differe uwuwuwuw
05:01 Surono: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - u can keep that since left pattern are many kats
05:01 Surono: 01:17:372 - if u kat this, will rip when continue 01:17:506 - here .. 4 kats ;w;
05:01 [_Chichinya_]: okidoki
05:02 Surono: madnuts
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: x'D jalksdjaslkdjaslkdj ye
05:02 Surono: 01:29:827 - kat
05:02 Surono: many don in left
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: mini don break :thinking:
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: donbriku
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: buriku*
05:03 Surono: owo ?
05:03 Surono: OWO !!!!
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: AwA !!!!!!!!!
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - mindblow to play... the kat mostly should emphasized at white tick cuz there is the good alteration
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - example until 01:44:559 - here... kddkddkkkkddk
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: hmmm
05:05 Surono: 01:44:023 - yus makes sense if here kkkk
05:05 Surono: and selfmod.. make it readable.. or playable.. ;w;
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,723,724) - change to? kddk?
05:06 Surono: at least.. with tick shuld emphasized with kat for playablelity
05:06 Surono: yush.. but at leastttttttt.
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: @w@
05:06 Surono: 01:43:153 - don until here
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: i was trying to follow the drum and the melody :thinking: was bad?
05:07 Surono: thats why people afraid to rank ur map uwu
05:07 Surono: but.. the consistency is at white tick u,wu
05:07 Surono: 01:42:684 - drurururururuurur
05:07 Surono: 01:43:220 - tataktkatkaktak
05:07 [_Chichinya_]: ;_; but they don't help me to fix it aa ;_; only you
05:07 Surono: X"D
05:08 Surono: just make it easier... so people will luv to rank it <3
05:08 Surono: I am lookin for this, dont worry waifu gokuhh uwu
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking:
05:08 Surono: HHHMMMMMMMMMMM OWO
05:08 Surono: KHINTING?!??!?!
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vUjdR/cccb6ed0e2.jpg
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: ?
05:09 Surono: 01:44:827 - yesh from here kkkk for colors then 01:45:095 - repeat again like 01:43:488 - from here.
05:09 Surono: uwu ........ where is that.....
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: the stream
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:684 (710,711,712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722) -
05:09 Surono: 01:43:488 - but here u want don?
05:10 Surono: ;~;
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: yes cuz the durm
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: and follow the d d d
05:10 Surono: then 1/3?
05:10 Surono: are you have idea?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,731,740,749) -
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: see?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: don is a lower sound... and in these part the sound is like KAT
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: that's why i'm using don
05:11 Surono: 01:43:488 - if from music.. is actually emphasized as kddkddkkkkddkddkkkk and repat boring but that can be easier to play
05:12 Surono: if you feel that boring.. just make variety every kkkk like change it to kkdk or kdkk
05:12 Surono: dem........
05:12 Surono: but the current, I cant read it.... bcus I nub `_L`
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: kddkddkkkk :thinking
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: let me try
05:12 Surono: shinsekai is nightmares, u know that
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: no worry i'm nub to
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: =W= that's why i want to change my name into
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai-
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: you imagine that?
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: one diff called
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai Destruction
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: :^)
05:13 Surono: ................................. :^)
05:13 Surono: 01:49:916 - sadsadgsadgsagd
05:13 Surono: 01:51:256 (86,87,88,89,90) - IUKFWJuFHKJFWUHJKFWUIFWkjfwFWJKFWJKLFWFWLKmfwwff
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: x'D ajdklasjdklajsdkl wait i'm fixing the 1/3 part
05:14 Surono: 01:52:863 - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
05:14 Surono: M A D N E S S
05:14 Surono: my fingerz already ded.. even I dont try that... ohhhhh, I just hit'd that before.. when u wathcin meh ahsuhuhe
05:14 Surono: rip me
05:14 Surono: okey savelog.,
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: KLASJDLKAJSDKLAJSLDKASJKLDJSKLDJD dddddk
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: SUFFER !!
05:15 Surono: ohhhh 1 thing ,.
05:15 Surono: 01:54:604 - just ddd
05:15 Surono: dudud, cuz 01:53:800 - is mainsounds
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: 01:52:863 (817,818,819,820,821,822,823) - the only hard hard hard 1/6 pattern on this set XD
05:15 Surono: theres no mainsounds uwu
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: oki
05:15 Surono: readable buttttttttttt. madnuts

modder higher diff and helped at 1/3 patterns

lookin for this mapset, GL.

Nepuri wrote:

Mod per constant asking for 3ish months lol
Hope im not late with all the BN's appearing...
Recheck zzz.

Kantan

00:58:488 (94) - why is this a finisher and not the other notes (00:59:291 (96,98,100)) - ; They lie on the same sound.
Additionally, 01:01:702 (101,103) - are Finishers, while 01:03:309 (105,107) - are not.
Thus, it cant be an intuitive finisher (One used to make different sections more clear) and you should do something about it in any case.

00:21:523 (3,4,5) - are kkk, 00:34:381 (30,31,32) - are kkd, again on same sounds, please do something about it.

00:32:773 (55,56) - D D, but 00:19:916 (28) - D d, lying on same sections in the music, Do something about it; btw repetition is wanted in kantans

00:31:970 - add a note here, its the kiai and the beat is much more steady here, would make sense to make kiai a bit more differently in structure from the part before, and also tone up the difficulty a tad bit.

00:56:613 - add a k to make the structure more uniform and less erratic?

01:16:702 (126,127,128) - theres the violin and crunch sounds you already mapped as kdddk or ddddk, whatever; The kk k is not really satisfactory for consistency reasons. Id much rather see a kkddk more fitting to the crunchy 1/6 sounds, aswell as the consistency.

01:29:559 (155,156,157,158) - Similar goes to this, kkddk for reasons already explained above.

01:37:863 (166,167) - crtl+g? has the same pitch variation as 00:39:202 - onward, so this change will make them uniform.

01:46:434 - add a note here? Theres still the 1/3 sounds going on and should be another note.

01:50:452 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - these structure is weird, the crunch sounds kind of dictate a xx xx xx xx xx kind of rhythm, and i think its better than a sudden 5let i guess.

Before i continue, I want you to reconsider a lot of finishers especially in the lower difficulties, aswell as across the difficulties since they really are extremely inconsistent.
In Futsuu for example, i feel like 30% of the map is Finishers. That number can really be toned down, as emphasis by note placement/coloring will be enough to do the job in my opinion. Please REALLY think about those, as newyams even said
Brief example: 00:23:934 (65,68) - are not finishers; why are 00:17:506 (47,50,53,56) - finishers then?!
Also; 00:52:863 (147,149,151,153,155,157) - too many finishers.

This map is gonna go nowhere if the finishers dont make sense if im honest.

Futsuu

HP6, to allow for a smooth transition in HP.

00:23:532 (63,64,65,66,67,68) - why are these not structured like 00:17:104 (45,46,47,48,49,50) - , even tho they should represent the same musical pattern? is not the same listen the music more... xd and maybe you can find what i'm following

00:39:470 - Unused Green Line, Please remove.

00:48:577 (135,136) - dk for the violin pitch you very clearly mapped to this section.

00:50:184 (139) - again d for the violin pitch, but if you wanted some contrast between this note and upcoming finishers thats fine too.

01:43:488 - This part is too hard if you look at the kantan ver of this. This section in particular should be nerfed a bit in 1/2 density i guess, since Kantan only posesses brief 1/1 here.

In general i feel like this Futsuu could use a bit more 1/1 and also a bit more 1/2 aswell just to make the gap between Futsuu and Kantan Just right!
Buff as you like i guess!
That Spread my main Issue, with this besides the Finishers, which you should also fix up/reconsider

Muzukashii

00:09:336 (29) - d to match the pitch a little bit better and also contrast 00:09:470 (30) - which lies on a sharp tone.

00:12:416 - unused green line, please remove

00:35:988 (144,145,146,147,148) - this is not uniform in note placement with 00:23:131 (85,86,87,88,89) -; Please fix to make them more consistent.

00:26:613 - unused green line, please remove

00:29:291 (120) - color to k to capture the slightly rising pitch? It fits a little better in my opinion

00:32:238 (134,135,136,137,138) - change to kdkkd to be a bit more similar to 00:31:434 (130,131,132) - with a d kdk d kdk oriented rhythm?

00:37:997 - add a d here to capture the strong 1/2 beat much better. The k's will still be good to emphasize the melody with this too.
Additionally, 00:37:059 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - and 00:24:202 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - are not very similar in structure, so i suggest you change that unless you have good reason to do so.

00:45:363 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - the silent part looks like it has a k on each downbeat, why is this combo set breaking it.
This one follows the Violin pitch, while others are oriented on clock ticks. Please make them more uniform in mapping focus to avoid the sudden change in focus.

01:01:434 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - why is this easier than its futsuu counterpart, cmon...

01:08:666 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - this part is not too clear with what its mapped on to me. it kind of contradicts the flute thing, but also contradicts the background snares. I suggest you make that intention clearer?

01:12:081 (67,68) - this is mapped in 1/4, but 01:05:452 (35,36,37) - is not mapped this way. Please fix somehow! And 01:15:095 (79,80,81,82) - is mapped yet differently!

01:42:148 (191) - remove to make the change in melody (the muffled thump) more appearant and leave a bigger impact?

01:43:488 - this part is also easier than futsuu counterpart?!?! Please fix that ASAP.

From here on out, i wont check the top diffs, because the most critical errors are lying on the lower diffs, which you SERIOUSLY should fix, seeing as multiple BN mods havent been sufficient!
I hope you take this a bit seriously and get these lower diffs done properly.

Vulkin wrote:

ReCheck por IRC

2017-05-20 16:40 Vulkin: o
2017-05-20 16:40 Vulkin: ok aca las del kantan
2017-05-20 16:41 [_Chichinya_]: voy
2017-05-20 16:42 Vulkin: 00:52:863 (85) - Este no creo que debe tener finish
2017-05-20 16:43 Vulkin: porque los siguientes del mismo sonido no lo tienen (y no deberian tenerlo imo)
2017-05-20 16:43 Vulkin: nota que el 84 debe tenerlo porque es como el principio w
2017-05-20 16:43 [_Chichinya_]: pongo en duda estas
2017-05-20 16:43 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:702 (103,105,107,109) -
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: tienes razon o.o
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: las demas no lo son
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: y practicamente son el mismo sonido xd
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: UF esa escapada papaaa 01:16:970 (129) -
2017-05-20 16:44 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: coño dejame actualizarte el map
2017-05-20 16:44 Vulkin: adelante
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: por que los cambios de nepuri xd me desconfiguraron la mierda esta
2017-05-20 16:45 [_Chichinya_]: ya listo
2017-05-20 16:45 Vulkin: bajando de nuevo
2017-05-20 16:46 Vulkin: (el net se me puso lento, pta la wea)
2017-05-20 16:46 [_Chichinya_]: me pasa
2017-05-20 16:48 Vulkin:  01:01:702 (103,105,107) - para los finishers aca, yo borraria 01:02:238 (104,106) - para darle al jugador de kantan mas tiempo de reaccion
2017-05-20 16:49 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:50 Vulkin: 01:26:345 (149,151) - Estas tambien borralas, mucho finisher ahi
2017-05-20 16:50 Vulkin: 01:27:416 (150) - y este no creo que le sea necesario ponerle finisher
2017-05-20 16:50 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:53 Vulkin: Ahora con los futsuu
2017-05-20 16:53 [_Chichinya_]: siento que los dK no son buenos para una fut xd
2017-05-20 16:53 Vulkin: iba a decir eso XD
2017-05-20 16:54 Vulkin: para un muzu creo que estarian bien
2017-05-20 16:54 Vulkin: pero para futsuu... ñee
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: agrege uno aqui
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:26:345 (74) -
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: elimine el de aqui
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:22:863 (61) -
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: consistencia xd
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:23:131 (62) -  lo puse ahi
2017-05-20 16:56 Vulkin: eso esta bien
2017-05-20 16:56 Vulkin: 00:38:131 - ddK d ddk ehh
2017-05-20 16:56 [_Chichinya_]: agrege uno aqui 00:39:202 (111) -
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: ahora quedo asi
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: ddk d d K
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: para seguir siguiendo los 1/6 que no estan :^)
2017-05-20 16:57 Vulkin: xD 
2017-05-20 16:57 Vulkin: mucho mejor asi
2017-05-20 16:58 Vulkin: 00:50:988 (141) - quitelo?
2017-05-20 16:58 Vulkin: ( el finish)
2017-05-20 16:58 [_Chichinya_]: deleted? 01:04:113 (178,181) -
2017-05-20 16:58 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:59 [_Chichinya_]: mejor quito este 01:04:916 (181) -
2017-05-20 16:59 Vulkin: si eso iba a decir
2017-05-20 16:59 Vulkin: 01:04:113 (178) - el de aca igual ya sigue el cambio de ritmo
2017-05-20 16:59 [_Chichinya_]: pero la consistencia estara bien? con la kantan :thinking:
2017-05-20 17:00 [_Chichinya_]: aja ya quite los dos
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: sep tienes razon
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: mejor los dos
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: 01:11:345 (201) - ?
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: remove
2017-05-20 17:01 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:01 Vulkin: 01:25:809 - ?
2017-05-20 17:01 [_Chichinya_]: 01:20:988 (229) -
2017-05-20 17:02 [_Chichinya_]: puedo eliminar todos esos
2017-05-20 17:02 Vulkin: 01:20:988 (229,239) - estos dos borrarle el finish
2017-05-20 17:03 Vulkin: y para 01:25:809 - no estoy seguro
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: ya los borre
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: si dicen algo
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: los pongo .w.
2017-05-20 17:04 Vulkin: ok
2017-05-20 17:04 Vulkin: 01:49:113 (305,306,307) - estos 3 saquelos
2017-05-20 17:05 Vulkin: el de 01:49:916 (308) - creo que esta bien
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: quetal un tremendo ctrl+g
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:416 (288,289) -
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: kD
2017-05-20 17:06 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:06 Vulkin: mejor tambien
2017-05-20 17:06 [_Chichinya_]: lesto
2017-05-20 17:06 [_Chichinya_]: xD hice unas cosas tho
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: ahora la muzu
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: CTM
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: 00:13:488 - tanto finish xD
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: hice lo mismo
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: 00:23:131 (110) -
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: aqui y elimine el dkd
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: lo cambie por un simple k d
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: cual dkd?
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: que recomiendas :c
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: ya va primero ahi donde me marcaste
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: XD
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: 00:23:131 (86) - aca creo que finish no
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: 00:13:488 (46) - este estaba bien con finish
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: me referia a 00:14:291 (51) - 00:15:095 (54) - 00:15:898 (58) - 00:16:702 (61) - 
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: aja listo con esas
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: que son mejor sin el finish
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: si XD
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: oke
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: 00:26:077 - ddd K es mejor creo yo
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: lo dejare en el ultimo
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: osea este 00:19:916 (100) -
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: yap
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: btw cambie esto 00:26:881 (138) -  por d
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: xd
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: 00:36:791 (149) - borre
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: mejor tambien xD
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: yao
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: 00:39:202 (165) - hagalo D
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: no wn esa D no por que es violin
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: ademas del clock sound
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: diria que esa es la unica parte en la que estoy seguro que es consistente af
2017-05-20 17:12 Vulkin: entonces 00:38:934 (163,164) - d ?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: desde aqui elimine 00:52:059 (265) -
2017-05-20 17:13 Vulkin: 01:17:639 (98) - d?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: son s
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: estas en la oni?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: LOL
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vWk6F/dff014f58d.jpg
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: aun en la muzu
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: voy
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: ctm 
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: XD
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: JDALSDJALKSDJSA
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: pa la  oni me voy entonces
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: ya cmabie esas
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/961416 Morimori Atsushi - Applique [Muzukashii]]
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/961417 Morimori Atsushi - Applique [Oni]]
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: pa muzu voy
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: deletee esta tambien
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: 00:36:791 (149) -
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: lol
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: por la ctm en cual diff estamos XD
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: ldkjakjsakjaklsdjs
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: muzu
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: xD
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: lo que pasa es que pense que te fuiste con la otra
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: a
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: 00:36:791 -  de aqui?
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: 00:36:791 (149) - si mejor sin finisher
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: ya ahora vamos para la oni
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: ya se lo quite
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: jaslkjas
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: oke
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:17 [_Chichinya_]: con eso vi que ahora si tengo consistencia xD
2017-05-20 17:18 Vulkin: 00:13:488 - puro finisher cada 3/1
2017-05-20 17:18 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:18 [_Chichinya_]: si
2017-05-20 17:18 [_Chichinya_]: esos ya los quite
2017-05-20 17:19 [_Chichinya_]: como te dije
2017-05-20 17:19 [_Chichinya_]: deje este 00:19:916 (100) -
2017-05-20 17:19 Vulkin: a ok
2017-05-20 17:21 Vulkin: ahora por ultimo al ura
2017-05-20 17:21 Vulkin: ctm me dio frio
2017-05-20 17:21 [_Chichinya_]: wut
2017-05-20 17:21 [_Chichinya_]: yo ando... tomando tang de guanabana
2017-05-20 17:22 Vulkin: xd
2017-05-20 17:22 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
2017-05-20 17:23 Vulkin: ahora comiendo lechuga con maiz
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: :0
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: dale vamo con la ura
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: al principio los finishers creo que estan bien
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: total es una diff mas alta
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: 00:26:278 (153) - de hecho borre esta nota y haga 00:26:345 (154) - finish
2017-05-20 17:25 [_Chichinya_]: yap
2017-05-20 17:25 Vulkin: al ura no creo que se le sea necesario cambiarle tanto
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: si ando quitando unas cositas ahi
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: xD creo que de finish estaria bien
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: 01:49:113 - aca creo que seria mejor un dkkdkkdkk en 1/3
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: 01:30:631 (673) -  finish!!!!!!!
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: ve XD
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: dkkdkkddd
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: sep finish!
2017-05-20 17:27 Vulkin: 01:34:872 (689) - este creo que suena mejor en 01:34:849 - 
2017-05-20 17:27 [_Chichinya_]: listo

Surono wrote:

orz low diffs... btw you can nerf a bit for Oni bcus some base pattern or stream are harsh I guess, somehow it close with Inner. will be back soon with dem mod ( and how thats low diffs has high sr.. ) find modders again pls for Oni ~ Kantan, take care more to oni and low diffs. dem spread density gap blabla

Vulkin wrote:

3er mod (o 4to?) que hago en este set xD

NO ME DES KUDOSU POR ESTE POST ;_;

(Note to Ayyri: I won't check your diff by request of Chichinya (Only Mod Kantan to Oni), sorry)

-Kantan-
00:28:756 - una k aca no seria malo, por ser kiai yo creo que estaria bien (00:31:970 - te excusas de saltar esta diciendo que sigues el violin xd)
00:38:666 (49) - esta creo que seria mejor borrarla, ir de 3/1 a 1/1 de una no creo que es buena idea, por lo menos al principio de la cancion no imo no por ahora por que sigue el 1/6
00:38:934 (49) - ^ para nerfear un poco mas ño :C
01:04:113 (82) - Cambiala a K, Asi hace consistencia con la nota anterior (01:03:309 (81) - )
01:08:934 - una k aca seria lo ideal creo yo, porque asi sigues el sonido del instrumento
01:38:666 (136,137) - Ctrl+G con estas dos notas y yo creo que seguira el tono un poco mejor, ademas que la k hara consistencia de sonido con las notas a venir

-Futsuu-
00:20:720 (50) - Suena un poco mejor sin el finisher, puesto que 00:19:916 (49) - no lo tiene tampoco, asi da mas prioridad a 00:21:523 (51,52,53) -
00:55:006 (141,142) - Ctrl+G, Da mas variacion
00:55:809 (143,144) - ^
01:01:434 (160,161) - Ctrl+G, Sigue mejor el tono
01:03:041 (164,165) - ^
01:08:934 (182) - hagala k por el tono, sigue lo mismo que 01:08:131 (180) - , el cual es una k
01:15:095 (200,201) - Ctrl+G

-Muzukashii-
00:24:604 (92) - k? sigue el mismo tono que 00:24:470 (91) -
01:12:081 (67,68) - hagalas dd para que tenga consistencia con el par anterior
01:14:827 (78) - 01:15:631 (82) - estas dos hagalas d para que no hayan tantas k ahi
01:18:443 - porque no seguir los doublets (o triplets que hiciste en el kiai) aca?, tienen el mismo sonido, ademas asi podrias tener consistencia con 01:24:872 -
01:28:086 - porque no un kkk aca?, el sonido lo mappeaste como triplet en el kiai, y ya que esta en kiai no le veo el porque no

-Oni-
00:51:456 (258) - Este sonaria un poco mejor en 00:51:322 -
01:11:345 - K d k kd k d K seguiria mejor
01:39:738 (550,553,556) - Borrelas para dar mas descanso
01:43:153 (563) - ^
01:52:327 - dkkd para que tenga consistencia con el cambio de colores que hiciste antes

Suerte con el set!!

Stefan wrote:

Giving it a quick check because Ari was asking for.

[Ura Oni]
00:58:354 (385,386) - Switching them would be better since 00:58:220 (384) - goes with d on the same sound like 00:58:354 (385) - , while I find the ligher sound on 00:58:488 (386) - should be emphasized with k, not with don.
01:08:398 - 01:11:211 - Personally I really have no idea what exactly were you following here, without intending to sound harsh or anything. Quick explaination or anything like that would be nice. a llittle of overmapping by me adding my own rhythm cuz if i leave that part would be too boring... almost for me
01:16:434 (540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548) - try kkddkddkk instead. This sounds rather what the song gives
01:43:220 (728) - Except of the very imperceptible "beam" sound here, there is no reason to switch on d. Sound is pretty constant. >_> ik xD i changed that cuz... stamina (?)

[Inner Oni]
00:37:997 (198,199) - I've said to switch them so 00:38:131 (199,200) - with similar sounds share the same hitsound.

The difficulty itself is actually okay but feels weird with the significantely calmer parts sometimes, like 01:17:773 - 01:30:631 - but I guess it will be okay anyway.

[Oni]
SV usage in this difficulty is pretty whacky and needs some improvement.

00:12:416 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - The SV build looks bad... instead of 0.05x jumps, try 0.03 instead, check the screenshot: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/s4LS2Qx9.png
00:39:202 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220) - SV on 00:39:202 - shouldn't drop to 1.00x since it's connected to the previous pattern of 00:37:863 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213) - , it looks detached. 00:39:202 - should have 1.05x but with disabled Kiai, 00:39:470 - with 1.00x and so on.
00:51:256 - move the line to 00:51:189 - since it cause the barline to spaz out right now.
01:31:702 - Why would you drop from 0.85x to 0.75x? either use 0.80x before and then on 01:31:970 - to have 0.75x just stick with 0.80x as the genera oh fuck i forgot that D:!l SV for this section.

Difficulty itself looks okay, objectively said.

[Muzukashii]
personally I have doubts in using doublets for that sort of Muzukashii, Oni barely uses them so I don't really know if you need them at all. five-lets instead could be done to fit better with what Oni gives.

Feel free to give it KD or not, good luck!

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

1. Ayyri's Inner Oni has tag inconsistency with other diffs, fix please.

1. 00:11:881 - cambialo a k, aqui no hay otro sonido que el del reloj? suena mucho mejor y ademas en las otras diffs llevas k ahi.
2. 00:13:889 - aqui sugerire algo para un mejor spread con la Futsuu? añadir un d en 00:13:889 - 00:15:497 - 00:17:104 - , ya que no queda tan vacio y no es tan facil en comparacion a la Futsuu.
3. 00:24:470 - añade un k aqui por el spread.
4. 00:26:345 - aqui tengo otra cosa en mente para mejorar el spread y el kiai ya que este esta muy vacio a comparacion de la Futsuu que es dificil, seria añadir nota (k o d, como veas que quede mejor) en 00:26:613 - 00:28:220 - 00:28:756 - 00:29:827 - y eliminar 00:31:970 - para consistencia con el espaciado de 00:19:113 - .
5. 00:35:720 - si aplicaste ^ aqui igual, añade nota en 00:35:720 - y 00:37:327 - y eliminar 00:38:666 - ya que actualmente tienes 5 notas 1/1 en la Futsuu y queda muy parecido por lo que deberia ser esto mas facil.
6. 00:42:952 - añade un d aqui y un k en 00:43:756 - para mejorar el spread.
7. 00:46:970 - aqui igual para el spread, añade un k aqui y un d en 00:47:773 - .
8. 00:59:827 - añade un d aqui para el spread.
9. 01:04:648 - k aqui y d o k en 01:05:452 - por la misma razon que ^.
10. 01:07:327 - d aqui y k en 01:07:863 - para el spread.
11. 01:11:077 - añade un d aqui para el spread tambien.
12. 01:14:291 - k aqui por lo mismo.
13. 01:17:238 - elimina esta nota por el tema del spread, ya que tienes un pattern de 5 1/1 en la Futsuu aqui.
14. 01:21:523 - mueve esta nota a 01:20:720 - , ya que ahi es donde tienes el pattern dificil de la Futsuu.
15. 01:24:738 - aqui igual, mueve esta nota a 01:23:934 - por la misma razon que ^.
16. 01:26:077 - añade k en 01:26:077 - y 01:26:345 - para el spread.
17. 01:30:095 - elimina esta nota por la misma razon que antes.
18. 01:32:773 - añadir d aqui ya que tienes un kddk en la futsuu?
19. 01:34:381 - añade k aqui y d en 01:35:184 - por el tema del spread.
20. 01:38:398 - añade k aqui y en 01:39:202 - por la misma razon.
21. 01:44:827 - elimina esta nota para un mejor spread con la Futsuu.
22. 01:46:434 - elimina, misma razon que ^.
23. 01:48:577 - añade notas en 01:48:577 - 01:48:845 - 01:49:113 - y 01:49:648 - para un mejor spread.

1. 00:17:372 - cambiar a k? ofrece mas variacion que solo dk y suena bastante bien.
2. 00:19:782 (48,49) - control+g en estas notas? (kd), lo mismo que ^ acerca de la variacion y creo que suena bien.
3. 00:28:622 - añade un k aqui para mejorar el spread con la Muzukashii.
4. 00:31:568 - añade un k aqui por la misma razon que ^.
5. 00:38:800 - añade un d aqui por la misma razon que ^.
6. 01:17:372 - añade un d aqui, misma razon que ^.
7. 01:18:443 - añade un k aqui por lo mismo.
8. 01:21:657 - un k aqui por lo mismo que ^?
9. 01:24:872 - añade un k aqui por la misma razon del spread.
10. 01:27:952 - añade k en 01:27:952 - 01:28:086 - 01:28:488 - y 01:28:756 - para el spread.

1. 00:25:943 - aun no es el kiai y esto es casi igual de denso que en la Oni, asi que sugiero eliminar esta nota.
2. 00:27:818 - añade un k aqui para mejorar el spread.
3. 00:29:157 - un d aqui por lo mismo que ^.
4. 00:31:836 - añadir un k aqui? ya que tienes un pattern bastante largo en la Oni en esta parte.
5. 00:32:639 - recomiendo eliminar esta nota ya que es muy parecido a la Oni.
6. 00:36:523 - añade un d aqui para mejorar el spread con la Oni, ademas creo que dddk ddddk queda bastante bien.
7. 00:52:729 - añade k aqui para mejorar el spread.
8. 00:53:532 - lo mismo ^.
9. 00:54:336 - ^.
10. 00:55:139 - ^.
11. 00:55:943 - ^.
12. 00:56:747 - ^.
13. 00:57:818 - añade un d aqui por lo mismo.
14. 01:19:782 - añade un k aqui y en 01:20:854 - para mejorar el spread.
15. 01:22:997 - quiza un d vendria bien aqui por la misma razon.
16. 01:23:666 - por que esta parte esta vacia y en la Kantan y Futsuu si? recomiendo añadir algunas notas.
17. 01:30:497 - añade un d aqui para el spread.
18. 01:43:086 - esto es exactamente igual a la Oni, recomiendo hacerlo mas corto eliminando esta nota.
19. 01:48:711 - un k aqui por el spread?
20. 01:54:604 - cambia 01:54:604 - y 01:54:671 - a k para hacer este triplete a kkk, no has usado ddk en todo el mapa y esto es una Muzukashii, asi que recomiendo hacerlo mas simple con kkk.

1. 00:57:550 - sugiero eliminar esta nota ya que este pattern es demasiado largo para una Oni normal y considerando que el bpm es 224 es bastante agotador.
2. 01:24:939 - tienes una nota en la Muzukashii aqui pero no en la Oni, añade un k.

1. 00:26:613 - i know what are you trying to do, but i think from 00:26:613 - to 00:27:014 - aren't necessary these inherit points, adding one inherit at 00:26:412 - with x1.00 of sv it's fine imo.
2. 00:52:059 - i think this note sounds more like D than a K, so i suggest changing to D as it's easier to hit the big note too?
3. 00:52:863 - if you applied ^ i suggest doing the same in 00:52:863 - 00:54:470 - 00:55:282 - and 00:56:077 - .

1. 00:39:068 - cambiar esta nota a k y 00:39:202 - a D? ya que 00:39:068 - suena mas como k debido al pitch y 00:39:202 - mas grave.
2. 01:30:497 - igual que ^, cambiar 01:30:497 - a k y 01:30:631 - a D?

Hanjamon wrote:

Hey Chichi o/ aqui el mod que me pediste.

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

1. Ayyri's Inner Oni has tag inconsistency with other diffs, fix please.

[Kantan]

1. 00:11:881 - cambialo a k, aqui no hay otro sonido que el del reloj? suena mucho mejor y ademas en las otras diffs llevas k ahi. dejame decirte que si fuera por mi XD todas esas notas fueran k
2. 00:13:889 - aqui sugerire algo para un mejor spread con la Futsuu? añadir un d en 00:13:889 - 00:15:497 - 00:17:104 - , ya que no queda tan vacio y no es tan facil en comparacion a la Futsuu.
3. 00:24:470 - añade un k aqui por el spread.
4. 00:26:345 - aqui tengo otra cosa en mente para mejorar el spread y el kiai ya que este esta muy vacio a comparacion de la Futsuu que es dificil, seria añadir nota (k o d, como veas que quede mejor) en 00:26:613 - 00:28:220 - 00:28:756 - 00:29:827 - y eliminar 00:31:970 - para consistencia con el espaciado de 00:19:113 - .
5. 00:35:720 - si aplicaste ^ aqui igual, añade nota en 00:35:720 - y 00:37:327 - y eliminar 00:38:666 - ya que actualmente tienes 5 notas 1/1 en la Futsuu y queda muy parecido por lo que deberia ser esto mas facil.
6. 00:42:952 - añade un d aqui y un k en 00:43:756 - para mejorar el spread.
7. 00:46:970 - aqui igual para el spread, añade un k aqui y un d en 00:47:773 - .
8. 00:59:827 - añade un d aqui para el spread.
9. 01:04:648 - k aqui y d o k en 01:05:452 - por la misma razon que ^.
10. 01:07:327 - d aqui y k en 01:07:863 - para el spread.
11. 01:11:077 - añade un d aqui para el spread tambien.
12. 01:14:291 - k aqui por lo mismo.
13. 01:17:238 - elimina esta nota por el tema del spread, ya que tienes un pattern de 5 1/1 en la Futsuu aqui.
14. 01:21:523 - mueve esta nota a 01:20:720 - , ya que ahi es donde tienes el pattern dificil de la Futsuu.
15. 01:24:738 - aqui igual, mueve esta nota a 01:23:934 - por la misma razon que ^.
16. 01:26:077 - añade k en 01:26:077 - y 01:26:345 - para el spread.
17. 01:30:095 - elimina esta nota por la misma razon que antes.
18. 01:32:773 - añadir d aqui ya que tienes un kddk en la futsuu?
19. 01:34:381 - añade k aqui y d en 01:35:184 - por el tema del spread.
20. 01:38:398 - añade k aqui y en 01:39:202 - por la misma razon.
21. 01:44:827 - elimina esta nota para un mejor spread con la Futsuu.
22. 01:46:434 - elimina, misma razon que ^.
23. 01:48:577 - añade notas en 01:48:577 - 01:48:845 - 01:49:113 - y 01:49:648 - para un mejor spread.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:17:372 - cambiar a k? ofrece mas variacion que solo dk y suena bastante bien.
2. 00:19:782 (48,49) - control+g en estas notas? (kd), lo mismo que ^ acerca de la variacion y creo que suena bien.
3. 00:28:622 - añade un k aqui para mejorar el spread con la Muzukashii.
4. 00:31:568 - añade un k aqui por la misma razon que ^.
5. 00:38:800 - añade un d aqui por la misma razon que ^.
6. 01:17:372 - añade un d aqui, misma razon que ^.
7. 01:18:443 - añade un k aqui por lo mismo.
8. 01:21:657 - un k aqui por lo mismo que ^?
9. 01:24:872 - añade un k aqui por la misma razon del spread.
10. 01:27:952 - añade k en 01:27:952 - 01:28:086 - 01:28:488 - y 01:28:756 - para el spread.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:25:943 - aun no es el kiai y esto es casi igual de denso que en la Oni, asi que sugiero eliminar esta nota.
2. 00:27:818 - añade un k aqui para mejorar el spread.
3. 00:29:157 - un d aqui por lo mismo que ^.
4. 00:31:836 - añadir un k aqui? ya que tienes un pattern bastante largo en la Oni en esta parte.
5. 00:32:639 - recomiendo eliminar esta nota ya que es muy parecido a la Oni.
6. 00:36:523 - añade un d aqui para mejorar el spread con la Oni, ademas creo que dddk ddddk queda bastante bien.
7. 00:52:729 - añade k aqui para mejorar el spread.
8. 00:53:532 - lo mismo ^.
9. 00:54:336 - ^.
10. 00:55:139 - ^.
11. 00:55:943 - ^.
12. 00:56:747 - ^.
13. 00:57:818 - añade un d aqui por lo mismo.
14. 01:19:782 - añade un k aqui y en 01:20:854 - para mejorar el spread.
15. 01:22:997 - quiza un d vendria bien aqui por la misma razon.
16. 01:23:666 - por que esta parte esta vacia y en la Kantan y Futsuu si? recomiendo añadir algunas notas.
17. 01:30:497 - añade un d aqui para el spread.
18. 01:43:086 - esto es exactamente igual a la Oni, recomiendo hacerlo mas corto eliminando esta nota.
19. 01:48:711 - un k aqui por el spread?
20. 01:54:604 - cambia 01:54:604 - y 01:54:671 - a k para hacer este triplete a kkk, no has usado ddk en todo el mapa y esto es una Muzukashii, asi que recomiendo hacerlo mas simple con kkk. se que es una muzu y me han dicho lo mismo lo dejo por que quiero hace esto como un pequeño reto para los nuevos, es como que hacerles aprender un nuevo patron para hacerle el FC es una pequeña idea que tengo desde hace 1 año como ya pudiste ver XD por esa razon aun no la cambio... esperare a ver que dicen de esta idea los demas.

[Oni]

1. 00:57:550 - sugiero eliminar esta nota ya que este pattern es demasiado largo para una Oni normal y considerando que el bpm es 224 es bastante agotador.
2. 01:24:939 - tienes una nota en la Muzukashii aqui pero no en la Oni, añade un k.

[Ayyri's Inner Oni]

1. 00:26:613 - i know what are you trying to do, but i think from 00:26:613 - to 00:27:014 - aren't necessary these inherit points, adding one inherit at 00:26:412 - with x1.00 of sv it's fine imo.
2. 00:52:059 - i think this note sounds more like D than a K, so i suggest changing to D as it's easier to hit the big note too?
3. 00:52:863 - if you applied ^ i suggest doing the same in 00:52:863 - 00:54:470 - 00:55:282 - and 00:56:077 - .

[Ura Oni]

1. 00:39:068 - cambiar esta nota a k y 00:39:202 - a D? ya que 00:39:068 - suena mas como k debido al pitch y 00:39:202 - mas grave.
2. 01:30:497 - igual que ^, cambiar 01:30:497 - a k y 01:30:631 - a D?

Creo que las diffs bajas aun necesitan su trabajo, por ahora solo puedo desearte suerte, animo~

Surono wrote:

hate me

kwek

Surono wrote:

Futsu ~ Oni and madness Ura I guess that makes dem this set, if you think its rip you could start other songs that plan to map. :C