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GeneralMake sure your audio volumes are consistent across all difficulties, and make sure the volume of the first timing point is the same as the volume of the first inherited point.
FINISHERS ARE INCONSISTENT ACROSS ALL DIFFICULTIES. Please try to make finishers consistent wherever possible. You may keep it inconsistent in cases when you'd like to make it easier for players to hit (in Kantans and Futsuus) or where the finisher is at the end of a 1/4 rhythm (in Onis and Inner Onis).
Kantan00:00:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If you were matching to the pitch here, I think something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775493 might make a bit more sense. If you're matching to the clicks, you should either make all these 3/1 hits all k's or make a more obvious pattern with your colouring.
00:19:916 (23) - You can add a finisher here, like you did in the Futsuu.
00:23:934 (29,30,31) - Perhaps you could remove the finishers on here? They're inconsistent with the other diffs, and I felt like you could make a small difficulty spike by having a 1/1 rhythm at 00:25:541 (31,32).
00:30:363 - You can add a hit here, and the rhythm at 00:27:952 (33,34,35,36) is too easy overall in comparison to the pre-kiai areas.
00:34:381 (40) - Changing to k might be better to emphasize the high pitch here, like you did in the Muzu. Same in the Futsuu.
00:38:131 - You can add a hit here to follow the melody that you were following at 00:37:327 (45,46). You may want to change the colours to something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775553 as well, to make it slightly easier to hit.
00:39:202 - This violin section is way too easy in comparison with the Futsuu. I'd recommend making the Futsuu a little bit easier, which I'll get to later.
01:03:845 (83,84,85) - Switching the colours on these might sound better to match to the pitch.
01:07:327 (89,90) - Delete for a 6/1 break?
01:08:666 (92,93) - Ctrl + G would match the pitch of the melody imo. However, 01:08:666 (92) - is kind of in an awkward spot; I'd move it to 01:10:273.
01:25:809 (119,120,121,122,123) - A rhythm like
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775849 matches all the 1/1 patterns that you've had so far.
01:43:488 (144) - You could change this to K to emphasize the start of the kiai and emphasize the high pitch of the melody.
01:45:095 (146) - Changing this to k would have a similar effect as the above.
Futsuu00:09:470 (25) - Change to k? This isn't following your k pattern that you've had on every big white tick.
00:10:006 (26,27,28) - 1/2 isn't necessary here; you could delete 27.
00:14:157 (40) - I'd delete this so you have a nice alternation pattern with your rhythms. However, 00:13:488 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - would become quite repetitive. If you'd like to make some more variety, how about
something like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776131 I tried to make it so that there's 1/1 that's matched to the melody, while incorporating your original rhythm as well. I personally think this would work very well, because 00:23:131 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - could be changed the exact same way to match the melody by doing this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777614000:26:211 - You could add a hit here to make a slight difficulty spike entering the kiai.
00:26:345 - Try making some 1/1 patterns longer in the first half of the 1st kiai. Also try to add some 1/2 in some places if you'd like, a possible spot could be 00:36:657 - but other places can still have 1/2 where there's no exact melody rhythm in the music. Another place where you could add 1/2 is at 00:26:881 (78,79).
00:39:470 (110) - Move to 00:38:934 - ? It would work better to create a pattern in the following quiet section.
00:45:497 (127) - Delete? 1/2 isn't necessary in a quiet part imo. Same at 01:36:925 (274).
00:51:256 (144,145) - You can add 1/1 hits between these two circles for a better difficulty curve.
00:58:488 - From here, you could make it more difficult, like you did in the Oni and Inner Oni. However, I'd perhaps You could also make this part more difficult in the Kantan if you'd like to.
01:01:434 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - I wouldn't use 1/2 here, considering the difficulty curve from the Futsuu and Oni. Please create a more proper difficulty curve here by comparing the difficulties from the Futsuu to the Oni.
01:17:238 - You could add a hit here and change the next hit to a d. Then make the Muzu harder so that there's be a better difficulty curve with the Oni.
01:22:059 - You could add a hit here to keep your 5 hit 1/1 patterns.
01:28:488 - ^
01:37:059 (275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - The 1/1 pattern doesn't need to be this long in a quiet section imo. You could add a hit at 01:42:148 - tho
01:43:488 - You could make this kiai more difficult as well. Add 1/1, and you may be able to add 1/2 at sections like 01:48:041 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310).
MuzukashiiChange the HP to 5 for a better HP curve.
00:00:764 (2,3) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve with the Oni.
00:05:720 (18) - ^
00:07:461 (24) - ^
00:14:157 - You could add a k here if you'd like.
00:19:782 - You could add a d here too.
00:20:385 - ^ 00:21:256 - ^ Both for difficulty curve.
00:25:273 (94) - Change to k to make it consistent with the Oni.
00:27:416 (109) - ^
00:29:827 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776469 This might work to create a more challenging rhythm for Muzu players.
00:36:523 (141) - You could move this to 00:36:389 - and change to d, and then add a hit at 00:36:657 - and change 00:36:791 (142) - to K if you'd like to match to the melody. I feel like it would work better to flow into the somewhat difficult pattern at 00:37:059 (143,144,145,146,147) -
00:38:666 (152,153,154,155,156,157) - This is the exact same rhythm as the Oni; I'd suggest making a bigger difference in rhythm by making this rhythm easier, or make the colour pattern more difficult in the Oni.
00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - You can keep the colours the same as the Oni if you'd like. Same at 01:30:899 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151).
00:43:488 (172) - ^ 00:47:773 (186) - ^
00:45:631 (180,181,182,183) - I'd make this a continuous 1/1 pattern since you had it at 00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167).
00:48:845 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - I personally think that the difficulty increase isn't necessary in all three of the harder difficulties; you can just keep a similar rhythm as the rest of the quiet section.
00:52:059 (204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - You can just make this a long 1/1 pattern to create a better difficulty curve. Adding a hit at 00:58:354 - is good too.
00:56:613 (215,216,217,218,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The difficulty is way too easy here, considering that the Oni becomes extremely difficult. You should make some additions here, but you should also make the Oni slightly less difficult here.
01:01:434 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - As mentioned before, the difficulty curve is messed up here; the Muzu is more difficult than the Oni. Please resolve this problem.
01:05:452 (34,35,36) - Make this 1/2 if you're not going to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) which is a similar melody rhythm. However, if you do decide to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) - I'd recommend changing most of these 1/4 rhythms into triplets so that you don't have so many 3/4 gaps. What you did at 01:15:095 (78,79,80,81) - works well to match the melody's rhythm atm, so you should use that rhythm throughout this section and the 2nd kiai.
01:08:934 (49) - I'd change this to k for some variety and to match to the pitch of the melody.
01:18:510 (96,97) - I wouldn't recommend using 1/4 that switches colour in a Muzu. Again, I'd suggest doing what I suggested earlier about changing into a triplet.
01:21:724 (108,109) - ^ 01:24:939 (120,121) - ^
01:19:916 (102) - A k would work better to match the high pitch of the melody imo.
01:25:541 (123) - I'd change this to a d and make 01:25:809 (124,125,126) - K K K, like you had it in the Futsuu. Same in Oni.
01:29:023 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - This could be more similar to the end of the first kiai for a larger difficulty spike.
01:33:309 (154) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve. Same at 01:35:720 (164).
01:34:849 (160,161) - I wouldn't have 1/4 in the quiet part.
01:37:327 - Add a hit to be consistent with the Futsuu.
01:39:202 (177) - I'd change this to k, like you had it in the Futsuu and Oni.
01:40:006 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Again, there's no need to raise the difficulty here in the harder difficulties. I'd just keep it similar to what you had before.
01:43:488 - This kiai can be much denser. At least make this section all 1/1 please. Add some 1/2 if you'd like to.
01:54:604 (235,236,237) - I don't think you need any 1/4 that changes colours, as stated before.
Oni00:04:113 (13) - Move to 00:03:309 - to be consistent with the Inner Oni.
00:13:756 (52,53,54,55,56) - I'd make this slightly harder than the other 1/2 patterns because it's got the melody rhythm here.
00:15:363 (64,65,66,67,68) - I don't see why this doesn't have 1/4 :/ Same in the kiai, I don't see why some patterns don't use 1/4 and other ones do.
00:23:934 (114) - You could change this to K to emphasize the fact that it's higher than 00:24:738 (120).
00:31:434 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - You could possibly make this denser and connect the 1/2 so that there's some difficulty in this section.
00:35:184 (184) - Change to D to stay consistent with the other parts that sound like this.
00:38:532 - Adding a hit here wouldn't be bad to make a small difficulty spike. Same at 01:29:961.
00:58:488 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332) - This is suddenly quite difficult. How about something like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777670101:07:595 (363) - You could add a hit here if you'd like to raise the difficulty a bit.
01:09:135 - ^
01:16:702 (420,421) - You could add hits between these two hits. In addition, you could make a bit more colour variety at 01:16:166 (416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428) - like you did in the Muzu.
01:17:773 - I'd try to minimize the amount of 1/1 that you use in this kiai, since it's an Oni and to create a better difficulty curve with the Muzu. Try making places such as 01:19:648 (441,442,443,444) - and 01:23:398 (465,466,467,468,469,470) - denser where there are many 1/1 gaps.
01:43:488 - Add 1/1 hits between the 1/3 rhythms to make this kiai slightly more difficult. You could also alternate between kkkd and dddk 1/3 rhythms to create more variety.
Inner Oni00:14:291 - This section is quite similar to the Oni. You may want to modify the Oni and Inner Oni to establish a greater difference.
00:24:068 (129) - I don't see a reason for this to be a k; I think it would work better if you could change it to d to match the lower background instrumentals.
00:28:086 (168) - I'd personally change this to a d. This way, the k's at 00:28:220 (170,171,172,173,174,175) - match the positions of the k's at 00:29:023 (178,179,180,181,182).
00:28:889 (177,178,179,180,181,182) - Coupled with the suggestion above, you should try to make this part of the rhythm more similar to 00:28:086 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175).
00:29:693 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - Rather than having so many triplets in a row, it may be good to make some 1/2 patterns and longer 1/4 patterns instead.
00:39:202 (261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) - I'd change the colours to be consistent to the Oni here.
00:48:845 (298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - As mentioned before, I don't think a difficulty increase is necessary here.
00:58:488 (378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) - I'd change this to ddddkkdkd or something. I don't like dddkkk, and I felt like it'd match the background instrumentals better. Idk tho xD
00:59:827 (398,399,400,401) - I'd change this one to kddd and the one at 01:00:898 (414,415,416,417) - to kkkd since the pitch is higher on the second one.
01:01:434 (421,422,423,424,425,426,427) - Patterns like these are kinda difficult to read, and could be simplified to kkkdddk. I strongly recommend you make the 1/6 pattern a bit simpler here.
01:19:514 - You can add a d here for a continuous pattern, like you had at 01:21:256.
01:25:809 (629,630,631) - Again, I personally think that this would sound better as K K K.
01:30:631 (664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,673) - I'd make the colours consistent to the Oni here.
01:40:541 (703,704,705,706,707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715,716) - Again, no need to make it difficult imo.
01:41:881 (711) - You had a D here in the Oni and Muzu, so maybe you should keep it consistent?
01:43:577 (730,731,732,733) - Creating some variety in this 1/3 section would be cool, so how about changing this to kdkk? Same at 01:45:184 (748,749,750,751).
01:53:666 (833) - Changing this to d would nicely match the low instrumentals here imo.
That's all.
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