Raiden wrote:

[Inner Oni]00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - Esto quedaría mejor como un dkkdkkd siguiendo la melodía.
00:25:742 - Puedes añadir un 1/4 aquí
00:26:077 (143,144,145,146,147) - Suena bastante mejor como kkkkd
00:31:166 (197) - Siguiendo el ritmo de k_k_d que has usado hasta ahora en los beats normales, esto debería ser un don
00:32:238 (204,209) - Ctrl+G por la misma razón ^
00:38:064 - Un 1/4 aquí fluye bastante bien
00:39:470 - A partir de esta nota, mueve las líneas verdes 1/4 antes para evitar problemas
00:48:979 (294,295,298,299) - Qué hacen estas notas? Aquí no hay nada pues queria dar un poco de mi ritmo nadie se ha quejado aun asi que los dejare por ahora
00:59:827 - Epa! Aquí hay 1/6! 3:^) ok
01:00:898 - Aquí hay otro!
01:01:434 - El beat entero es 1/6, no lo reduzcas a mitad. Mantén la consistencia.
01:07:863 - Es 1/6!
01:16:635 - y 01:16:769 - Siguen teniendo 1/4, por qué los dejas vacíos? lo que pasa es que yo queria hacer de esta mas simple que las demas que estan mapeadas XD entonces... ahi por que esta tan simple en algunos sitios
01:19:648 - 9 notas seguidas en 1/2 da una sensación de disminución de intensidad. Añade algún 1/4 para dar el efecto de que seguimos en la misma sección intensa
01:27:349 - Hay 1/4 por ahora lo dejare ddk para que la nota anterior tenga el Finish
01:29:090 - 01:29:492 - 01:29:492 - 01:29:626 - 01:29:760 - ^ sera d d d ddd d d por ahora :3 ( de hecho esta observacion la quiero hacer en un futuro pero esperare un poco mas a ver si puedo bajar la SR de las demas para poder subir esta )
01:40:407 (40,41,44,45) - Estos 1/2 qué pintan aquí? como dije antes mi propio ritmo xD los elimino cuando me digan que los elimine de nuevo ( de igual forma no estaba MUY seguro de dejarlos ahi )
01:43:488 - No le vendría mal un kiai hasta 01:53:131 -
01:50:050 (124) - Esto está mal. La melodía sigue yendo 1/3, además de que la transición es bastante incómoda de jugar.
El hecho de que sacrifiques 1/3 para poner bursts de 1/6 también afecta a la calidad del mapa, en mi opinión. Hablo de los huecos como 01:51:434 - y 01:52:506 - yay XD esperaba algo como esto... Los 1/6 seguiran aun lo que hice fue agregar esos 1/3 para asi aumentar la dificultad en esa ultima parte

Buen map. Puede que vuelva para el resto del set heh Tu mod nunca me lo espere XD Muchisimas gracias Raidon-sama :3 espero volverlo a ver y/o sea usted el primero en dar bubble? a esta porqueria de map que tiene el SR roto :X

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello, here is my M4M part:

Kantan

Good enough.

Futsuu

00:39:202 - The bar line is coming weirdly at this section.
00:51:256 - Instead of making SV change here, 00:52:059 - make it here. Because there is a weird vision here.

The sounds are right imo, but at the last section only, maybe you can use 2 or 3 more finishers because of the hard drums.

Muzukashii

00:00:631 - Mentioned in Oni and Inner Oni.
00:09:336 (32) - d
01:03:041 (21) - I don't think so that you followed keyboard sounds here, so 01:02:238 (17) - this and 01:03:041 (21) - this notes have to be same.
01:33:510 (155) - There is no sound here. Well, no keyboard sound.

The rest is nice imo.

Oni

00:00:631 (1,2) - 00:01:032 (3,4) - These two streams has exact keyboard notes, i recommend you to change them bot d k. But like this they are good too.
00:09:202 (32) - k
00:48:845 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Mentioned in Inner Oni mod.
01:09:671 (387) - There is no sound here.
01:13:889 (411) - Maybe, shift this one to 01:13:956 - here.
01:15:497 (423) - Shift this one to 01:15:564 - here and 01:15:497 (423,424) - ctrl + g
01:40:273 (562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569) - Same as 00:48:845.

Inner Oni

01:27:416 (219) - Wrong finisher, drop it or delete the previous note.

00:00:631 (1,2) - 00:01:032 (3,4) - These two streams has exact keyboard notes, i recommend you to change them bot d k. But like this they are good too.
00:01:032 (3,4) - Before this section you were following the sounds harmoniously but suddenly the patterns have changed here. Maybe deleting 00:48:979 (300,302,304,306) - these ones? It has the same situation in Oni diff.
01:06:925 - There is a kick sound here, but it's good as it is too.
01:09:068 (61) - There is no sound here. Maybe consider deleting it.
01:09:872 (68) - ^
01:10:675 (77) - ^
01:23:934 (192,193,194) - I listened a 1/6 stream here. Change them to 1/6 kkkkkkk maybe.
01:40:273 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - Same as 00:01:032

The rest is beautiful, please don't touch it I really enjoyed playing it ^^

Hope this helps, good luck~

1. 00:05:184 - change to d ? other diffs are don here.
2. 00:15:564 - delete this ? for consistent to 00:14:559 - since they have one triplet after 2 notes.
3. 00:15:697 - if you apply above, change to d for variation ?
4. 00:16:166 - might change these to kdd instead of kkd ? for variation to 00:16:970
5. 00:18:577 - make two triplets like you did at 00:17:773 - instead of single quintuplet. for consistent
6. 00:19:381 - this would be better if you make quintuplet like you did at 00:18:577 - for climax of this part
7. 00:51:256 - might this stream changed to kkkkkkkkkkkd instead of dddddddddk because 00:52:059 - is similar like 00:39:202
8. 01:06:791 - remove finish ? this melody is not strong enough
9. 01:27:148 - change to big kat ? for better structure from 01:25:809 - (D D D K K K)
10. 01:46:256 - change to d ? for consistent to 01:44:648

1. 00:00:631 - starting from here to 00:11:881 - might delete some notes to differentiate to inner oni ? they're all obviously same
2. 00:13:488 - these (00:14:291 - , 00:15:095 - , 00:15:898 - , 00:16:702 - , etc ) are big don. but why is this only big kat ? even they're same pitch
3. 00:18:108 - out of consistency ? maybe move to 00:17:840
4. 00:35:854 - delete this pls, like you did at 00:22:997
5. 00:57:684 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313) - this stream is same like you did on inner oni. might to delete note on (308) and (312)
6. 00:58:822 - same as above, delete this
7. 01:02:305 - delete this ? even the next note doesnt have triplet
8. 01:16:836 - delete this ? for give a lil break
9. 01:18:711 - same as above
10. 01:28:889 - ^
11. 01:29:961 - same ^

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi there o/

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:05:184 - change to d ? other diffs are don here.
2. 00:15:564 - delete this ? for consistent to 00:14:559 - since they have one triplet after 2 notes.
3. 00:15:697 - if you apply above, change to d for variation ?
4. 00:16:166 - might change these to kdd instead of kkd ? for variation to 00:16:970
5. 00:18:577 - make two triplets like you did at 00:17:773 - instead of single quintuplet. for consistent
6. 00:19:381 - this would be better if you make quintuplet like you did at 00:18:577 - for climax of this part
7. 00:51:256 - might this stream changed to kkkkkkkkkkkd instead of dddddddddk because 00:52:059 - is similar like 00:39:202
8. 01:06:791 - remove finish ? this melody is not strong enough
9. 01:27:148 - change to big kat ? for better structure from 01:25:809 - (D D D K K K)
10. 01:46:256 - change to d ? for consistent to 01:44:648

[Oni]

increase OD to 6 ? because this oni is harder than usual oni. also for better structure to OD too i guess (Inner 7 ~> Oni 6 ~> Muzu 5 ~> Futsuu 4 ~> Kantan 3)

1. 00:00:631 - starting from here to 00:11:881 - might delete some notes to differentiate to inner oni ? they're all obviously same ye cuz i want to be very consistent in those part XD almost in the beginnig on the song
2. 00:13:488 - these (00:14:291 - , 00:15:095 - , 00:15:898 - , 00:16:702 - , etc ) are big don. but why is this only big kat ? even they're same pitch DAMN sorry xD changing to K!
3. 00:18:108 - out of consistency ? maybe move to 00:17:840
4. 00:35:854 - delete this pls, like you did at 00:22:997
5. 00:57:684 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313) - this stream is same like you did on inner oni. might to delete note on (308) and (312)
6. 00:58:822 - same as above, delete this
7. 01:02:305 - delete this ? even the next note doesnt have triplet
8. 01:16:836 - delete this ? for give a lil break
9. 01:18:711 - same as above
10. 01:28:889 - ^
11. 01:29:961 - same ^

seems that gap between muzu to oni is too huge. :^) PP map... ;_;nvm is just a trash map
sorry i cant mod muzu and below. i dont have many time to do that ;w; np ;_;
hope my mod helps you, good luck Ily <3

1. 00:53:398 - maybe add note here ?
2. 01:52:863 - 01:49:648 - remove? this can get hard for ultra beginners huehue
   

1. 00:03:309 - there is no sound here but you could optionally remove this note
2. 00:04:916 - k
3. 01:38:934 - maybe add k ?
   

1. 00:03:309 - same as in futsuu
2. 01:19:113 - k
   

1. 00:03:309 - same as futsuu muzukashi @_@
2. 01:23:934 - maybe you could make a 1/4 ddd here too
   

1. 00:03:309 - same as all above wehhh
2. 01:49:916 - why didnt u make this just like in 01:43:488 - ? same sounds you could use the same patterns, playing only dkkdkkd feels kinda boring here, try to make it dkkdddkkkdkk like previous stream !
3. OPTIONAL: 01:57:952 - why not high SV finisher XDDDDDDDDDDDD lol
   
   

-TheHateD- wrote:

hi

[Kantan]

1. 00:53:398 - maybe add note here ?
2. 01:52:863 - 01:49:648 - remove? this can get hard for ultra beginners huehue

[Futsuu]

1. 00:03:309 - there is no sound here but you could optionally remove this note
2. 00:04:916 - k
3. 01:38:934 - maybe add k ?

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:03:309 - same as in futsuu
2. 01:19:113 - k

[Oni]

1. 00:03:309 - same as futsuu muzukashi @_@
2. 01:23:934 - maybe you could make a 1/4 ddd here too

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:03:309 - same as all above wehhh
2. 01:49:916 - why didnt u make this just like in 01:43:488 - ? same sounds you could use the same patterns, playing only dkkdkkd feels kinda boring here, try to make it dkkdddkkkdkk like previous stream !
3. OPTIONAL: 01:57:952 - why not high SV finisher XDDDDDDDDDDDD lol
   

this map looks really good and fun to play, hope this mod helps
good luck !

Midnaait wrote:

Hola, un mod que te debia del año pasado (?)
// = Sugerencia

[General]

Le falto un pixel al BG lel


Pon "SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-" de Source y quitalo de los tags
Recuerda que las diffs faciles deben tener HP mas alta que las dificiles debido a que tienen menos notas
El primer kiai deberia terminar en 00:39:202 - (Lo noté en el futsuu, no sé si estará en las otras diffs)

[Kantan]

00:22:863 - Aunque sea un sonido bastante prominente, deberias considerar borrarla para enfatizar la siguiente nota
00:35:720 - ^
00:44:827 - No es necesario, pero borrar esto daria un lindo break y tambien pegaria con el violin que se mantiene de la nota anterior
01:36:256 - ^ pero con el piano lol
01:42:684 - Ponle finish? Es un cambio bastante brusco de volumen

[Futsuu]

OD=4 Deberia ser un poco mas dificil que el Kantan
Nerf incoming (?)

(1) Primero que nada, limitale un poco mas a los 1/2, debido al alto bpm, que use signature de 3/4 y que esta cancion le gusta usar dobles lel
(2) Segundo, si usas 1/2 (No es necesario, pero si recomendable, ayudara un poco a nerfear la SR) Intenta que sean monocolor

00:07:461 - Borra esto por consistencia con 00:01:032
00:09:470 - // Cambia a d? Haria buen contraste con el siguiente pattern kkk
00:10:943 - Borra esto para hacer el inicio un poco mas simple
00:13:488 a 00:19:113 - Podrias seguir un poco mas la melodia, esta un poco aburrida y repetitiva esta parte, ademas, quitar algunas dobles no vendria mal
00:35:720 - Consideraria mover esto a 00:35:988 Para mantener mejor el ritmo de la canción
- Si lo has hecho cambialo a D
00:38:666 (59,60) - Borra estos dos para enfatizar el fin del kiai
00:40:006 - Podrias mover esa linea verde un poco a la izquierda? La linea se ve mal por alguna razón cuando juegas
00:41:881 - Mueve esto a 00:41:077 - Sonaria mejor debido a que aqui suena el violin
00:44:559 - Vendria bien un break de 3/1 debido a ser una parte bastante tranquila, eso y que el violin deja de sonar aqui
00:45:631 (79,80) - Ctrl+G. (2)
01:37:059 - (2)
01:38:934 (232,233) - // Ctrl+G? Suena mucho mejor en mi opinion
01:44:827 (246,247) - No haria daño invertir estas, como hiciste en 01:51:256 (263,264)
01:46:434 - ^

[Muzukashii]

Las dobles de 1/4 no deberian ser usadas, debido al bpm, para eso esta el Oni lol (Ejemplos: 01:05:653 (35,36) - 01:08:867 (48,49) - 01:09:671 (52,53) - 01:10:474 (56,57) - etc...). Realmente consideraria borrar la primer nota o moverla 1/4 a la izquierda para que quede todo 1/2
Precaución: Puede que esto baje drasticamente el SR, si no nerfeaste el Futsuu habra un problema grande rip

00:15:497 - // Borraria esto para añadir mas variedad y que no sea tan monótono
00:16:300 - // ^
00:25:876 - Moveria esta nota a 00:25:742 o a 00:26:144
00:28:421 - Borra esto, no sigue a nada que esté en 1/4
00:34:381 (135,136,137) - K K D Quedaria mejor, seguiria a la melodía
00:37:997 - // Borra esto y cambia 00:38:131 (149,150,151) - a kkd?
00:45:095 - Borra esto, misma razon que el futsuu
00:51:925 - Mueve esto a 00:51:657 para enfatizar el finish
01:44:827 (200,201) - d K como en el futsuu
01:46:434 (204,205) - ^
01:54:671 - Borra esto, o cambia la ultima nota del triplet por d

[Oni]

00:26:747 - // ddkkk se juega mejor en mi opinion, es un pattern que no requiere cambiar las manos
00:41:881 - Vendria bien borrar esta nota, como en las otras diffs
00:48:309 - ^
00:51:724 - Que te parece mover esto a 00:51:456 - para hacer un 5plet?
01:10:072 - Mueve esto a 01:09:939 - y cambialo a d, no hace nada en su posicion actual lol
01:33:309 - Ya sabes, borra esto
01:36:523 - ^
01:39:738 - ^

[Inner Oni]

00:27:081 - Pon un kat aqui? Se escucha algo de la melodia
- Si lo haces pon Ctrl+G en 00:26:947 (156,157) -
00:59:961 - Si escuchas con cuidado, el 1/6 se escucha menos intenso, cambia esta nota por d
- Añadiendo, 01:00:028 no se escucha ninguna percusión, borrala
01:42:148 - // Cambia a d para enfatizar las notas de los lados?
01:48:443 - No sé que sigue esta nota, recomiendo borrarla
01:48:711 - ^

Por qué me haces trabajar :^)
Suerte con el map

xtrem3x wrote:

(?)


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K


Slider velocity en 1.40 minimo ...

Kantan

• 
  usa todos los interited points con velocidad de 0.70x (si, eso incluye crear otro con offset 631 para no tener variaciones) eh? D:!
  
  00:03:845 (5,6) - cambialas a d
  00:10:273 (13,15) - igual
  
  el slider extiendelo hasta 00:13:488- (posiblemente tambien debas cambiar el tick rate a 3 para que no sea tan dificil agarrar esos puntos y vaya en formato 1/3)
  
  00:26:345 - cambialo a K mas que nada por diferencia, por que ya empieza el kiai y se ve raro si la combinas con la parte que no tiene
  
  00:42:416 (54,56) - cambialos a d ... lo mismo que al inicio.
  
  01:25:809 - está muy cuestionada esta parte ... sería como una rompedera de reglas y sería algo muy denso comparando a toda la diff, así que no puedo dar un punto bueno para esta parte. cambiado a K K K K D
  
  01:29:023 - cambia a k .. aunque tiene menos sonido que la nota anterior sería mejor darle otro enfoque en esta parte
  
  01:33:845 (136,138) - cambia a d ... lo mismo que al inicio.
  
  01:44:291 (149,151) - cambialas a k ... muchas notas iguales se ve aburrido, ademas estas tienen un poco mas de sonido de fondo.
  
  01:55:541 (165,166,167) - borra estas notas y pones un spinner hasta 01:57:550- por los momentos no por que hay sonidos que puedo utilizar para dar un final mas limpio

Futsuu

• 
  todos los inherited a 0.75x y mismas indicaciones que kantan .-.
  
  00:05:720 - borra esta para un break
  
  00:09:336 - borra esta nota .. tiene mas sentido el triple siguiente
  
  00:13:488- hasta 00:26:345- veo algo forzada esta sección, (sabes, densidad) ... toda borrar algunas notas o solo seguir un ritmo especifico.
  
  00:51:256 - podría ir un slider acá hasta 00:51:791- dejare esa parte como un break XD
  
  00:54:202 (94,95) - d K estoy siguiendo el ritmo de fondo por ende necesita ir k D como todas las demas
  
  01:10:273 (142,143,144,145,146) - k k d d k
  
  01:21:131 - cambiala a k ... tiene mas sonido (mas enfasis que la siguiente)
  
  01:37:327 - mejor agrega otra nota acá

la inner es lo que mas trabajo me va a dar pero ya mañana posteo eso en este...

Alepat wrote:

F I X A P P L I Q U É P L Z

World Fraction wrote:

HEYOOOOOOOOO! Just a random mod for your Oni.
Blue is a suggestion and Red is something that got my attention. Took Midnaait's little icon thing



[Oni]

00:04:916 (17) - can be moved back to a 1/8 space imo which would be here 00:04:883 -
00:09:336 (33) - should be changed to don bcuz of the dip in the volume
00:28:756 (150) - should be changed to a don cuz it just sounds more pleasing
00:39:470 (213,216) - can be changed to kat ^
00:41:881 (222,225) - can be deleted to give some breaks and to follow the weird violin like instrument otherwise its very repetitive
00:43:488 (226) - change to kat?
00:44:291 (229,230,231,232) - can be deleted like 00:41:881 (222,225) -
00:45:898 (232,235) - change to kat same suggestion as 00:39:470 (213,216) -
00:48:309 - delete possibly?
00:48:577 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249) - i have no idea what you are trying to do with this pattern should probably change it to match the weird violin thing
01:30:631 - this area should be pretty much the same as what i mentioned above
01:49:916 (597,598,599,600,601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - tbh you might want to consider changing all of these to the opposite color imo

ANYWAYS, that's all I've got to say man. GOOD LUCK ChiChi!!

newyams99 wrote:

Sorry I'm late.

General

Make sure your audio volumes are consistent across all difficulties, and make sure the volume of the first timing point is the same as the volume of the first inherited point.

FINISHERS ARE INCONSISTENT ACROSS ALL DIFFICULTIES. Please try to make finishers consistent wherever possible. You may keep it inconsistent in cases when you'd like to make it easier for players to hit (in Kantans and Futsuus) or where the finisher is at the end of a 1/4 rhythm (in Onis and Inner Onis).

Edit: I think all are ok or well, the volumen... All are ok cuz xD is the same diff at Iner i delete some Inherit points... Just that oo, About the BIGS you're right XD i was listening and... well :C sorry

Kantan

00:00:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If you were matching to the pitch here, I think something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775493 might make a bit more sense. If you're matching to the clicks, you should either make all these 3/1 hits all k's or make a more obvious pattern with your colouring.

00:19:916 (23) - You can add a finisher here, like you did in the Futsuu.

00:23:934 (29,30,31) - Perhaps you could remove the finishers on here? They're inconsistent with the other diffs, and I felt like you could make a small difficulty spike by having a 1/1 rhythm at 00:25:541 (31,32).

00:30:363 - You can add a hit here, and the rhythm at 00:27:952 (33,34,35,36) is too easy overall in comparison to the pre-kiai areas.

00:34:381 (40) - Changing to k might be better to emphasize the high pitch here, like you did in the Muzu. Same in the Futsuu.

00:38:131 - You can add a hit here to follow the melody that you were following at 00:37:327 (45,46). You may want to change the colours to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775553 as well, to make it slightly easier to hit.

00:39:202 - This violin section is way too easy in comparison with the Futsuu. I'd recommend making the Futsuu a little bit easier, which I'll get to later.

01:03:845 (83,84,85) - Switching the colours on these might sound better to match to the pitch.

01:07:327 (89,90) - Delete for a 6/1 break?

01:08:666 (92,93) - Ctrl + G would match the pitch of the melody imo. However, 01:08:666 (92) - is kind of in an awkward spot; I'd move it to 01:10:273.

01:25:809 (119,120,121,122,123) - A rhythm like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775849 matches all the 1/1 patterns that you've had so far.

01:43:488 (144) - You could change this to K to emphasize the start of the kiai and emphasize the high pitch of the melody.

01:45:095 (146) - Changing this to k would have a similar effect as the above.

Futsuu

00:09:470 (25) - Change to k? This isn't following your k pattern that you've had on every big white tick.

00:10:006 (26,27,28) - 1/2 isn't necessary here; you could delete 27.

00:14:157 (40) - I'd delete this so you have a nice alternation pattern with your rhythms. However, 00:13:488 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - would become quite repetitive. If you'd like to make some more variety, how about
something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776131
I tried to make it so that there's 1/1 that's matched to the melody, while incorporating your original rhythm as well. I personally think this would work very well, because 00:23:131 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - could be changed the exact same way to match the melody by doing this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776140

00:26:211 - You could add a hit here to make a slight difficulty spike entering the kiai.

00:26:345 - Try making some 1/1 patterns longer in the first half of the 1st kiai. Also try to add some 1/2 in some places if you'd like, a possible spot could be 00:36:657 - but other places can still have 1/2 where there's no exact melody rhythm in the music. Another place where you could add 1/2 is at 00:26:881 (78,79).

00:39:470 (110) - Move to 00:38:934 - ? It would work better to create a pattern in the following quiet section.

00:45:497 (127) - Delete? 1/2 isn't necessary in a quiet part imo. Same at 01:36:925 (274).

00:51:256 (144,145) - You can add 1/1 hits between these two circles for a better difficulty curve.

00:58:488 - From here, you could make it more difficult, like you did in the Oni and Inner Oni. However, I'd perhaps You could also make this part more difficult in the Kantan if you'd like to.

01:01:434 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - I wouldn't use 1/2 here, considering the difficulty curve from the Futsuu and Oni. Please create a more proper difficulty curve here by comparing the difficulties from the Futsuu to the Oni.

01:17:238 - You could add a hit here and change the next hit to a d. Then make the Muzu harder so that there's be a better difficulty curve with the Oni.

01:22:059 - You could add a hit here to keep your 5 hit 1/1 patterns.

01:28:488 - ^

01:37:059 (275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - The 1/1 pattern doesn't need to be this long in a quiet section imo. You could add a hit at 01:42:148 - tho

01:43:488 - You could make this kiai more difficult as well. Add 1/1, and you may be able to add 1/2 at sections like 01:48:041 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310).

Muzukashii

Change the HP to 5 for a better HP curve.

00:00:764 (2,3) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve with the Oni.

00:05:720 (18) - ^

00:07:461 (24) - ^

00:14:157 - You could add a k here if you'd like.

00:19:782 - You could add a d here too.

00:20:385 - ^ 00:21:256 - ^ Both for difficulty curve.

00:25:273 (94) - Change to k to make it consistent with the Oni.

00:27:416 (109) - ^

00:29:827 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776469 This might work to create a more challenging rhythm for Muzu players.

00:36:523 (141) - You could move this to 00:36:389 - and change to d, and then add a hit at 00:36:657 - and change 00:36:791 (142) - to K if you'd like to match to the melody. I feel like it would work better to flow into the somewhat difficult pattern at 00:37:059 (143,144,145,146,147) -

00:38:666 (152,153,154,155,156,157) - This is the exact same rhythm as the Oni; I'd suggest making a bigger difference in rhythm by making this rhythm easier, or make the colour pattern more difficult in the Oni.

00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - You can keep the colours the same as the Oni if you'd like. Same at 01:30:899 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151).

00:43:488 (172) - ^ 00:47:773 (186) - ^

00:45:631 (180,181,182,183) - I'd make this a continuous 1/1 pattern since you had it at 00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167).

00:48:845 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - I personally think that the difficulty increase isn't necessary in all three of the harder difficulties; you can just keep a similar rhythm as the rest of the quiet section.

00:52:059 (204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - You can just make this a long 1/1 pattern to create a better difficulty curve. Adding a hit at 00:58:354 - is good too.

00:56:613 (215,216,217,218,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The difficulty is way too easy here, considering that the Oni becomes extremely difficult. You should make some additions here, but you should also make the Oni slightly less difficult here.

01:01:434 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - As mentioned before, the difficulty curve is messed up here; the Muzu is more difficult than the Oni. Please resolve this problem.

01:05:452 (34,35,36) - Make this 1/2 if you're not going to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) which is a similar melody rhythm. However, if you do decide to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) - I'd recommend changing most of these 1/4 rhythms into triplets so that you don't have so many 3/4 gaps. What you did at 01:15:095 (78,79,80,81) - works well to match the melody's rhythm atm, so you should use that rhythm throughout this section and the 2nd kiai.

01:08:934 (49) - I'd change this to k for some variety and to match to the pitch of the melody.

01:18:510 (96,97) - I wouldn't recommend using 1/4 that switches colour in a Muzu. Again, I'd suggest doing what I suggested earlier about changing into a triplet.

01:21:724 (108,109) - ^ 01:24:939 (120,121) - ^

01:19:916 (102) - A k would work better to match the high pitch of the melody imo.

01:25:541 (123) - I'd change this to a d and make 01:25:809 (124,125,126) - K K K, like you had it in the Futsuu. Same in Oni.

01:29:023 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - This could be more similar to the end of the first kiai for a larger difficulty spike.

01:33:309 (154) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve. Same at 01:35:720 (164).

01:34:849 (160,161) - I wouldn't have 1/4 in the quiet part.

01:37:327 - Add a hit to be consistent with the Futsuu.

01:39:202 (177) - I'd change this to k, like you had it in the Futsuu and Oni.

01:40:006 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Again, there's no need to raise the difficulty here in the harder difficulties. I'd just keep it similar to what you had before.

01:43:488 - This kiai can be much denser. At least make this section all 1/1 please. Add some 1/2 if you'd like to.

01:54:604 (235,236,237) - I don't think you need any 1/4 that changes colours, as stated before.

Oni

00:04:113 (13) - Move to 00:03:309 - to be consistent with the Inner Oni.

00:13:756 (52,53,54,55,56) - I'd make this slightly harder than the other 1/2 patterns because it's got the melody rhythm here.

00:15:363 (64,65,66,67,68) - I don't see why this doesn't have 1/4 :/ Same in the kiai, I don't see why some patterns don't use 1/4 and other ones do.

00:23:934 (114) - You could change this to K to emphasize the fact that it's higher than 00:24:738 (120).

00:31:434 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - You could possibly make this denser and connect the 1/2 so that there's some difficulty in this section.

00:35:184 (184) - Change to D to stay consistent with the other parts that sound like this.

00:38:532 - Adding a hit here wouldn't be bad to make a small difficulty spike. Same at 01:29:961.

00:58:488 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332) - This is suddenly quite difficult. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776701

01:07:595 (363) - You could add a hit here if you'd like to raise the difficulty a bit.

01:09:135 - ^

01:16:702 (420,421) - You could add hits between these two hits. In addition, you could make a bit more colour variety at 01:16:166 (416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428) - like you did in the Muzu.

01:17:773 - I'd try to minimize the amount of 1/1 that you use in this kiai, since it's an Oni and to create a better difficulty curve with the Muzu. Try making places such as 01:19:648 (441,442,443,444) - and 01:23:398 (465,466,467,468,469,470) - denser where there are many 1/1 gaps.

01:43:488 - Add 1/1 hits between the 1/3 rhythms to make this kiai slightly more difficult. You could also alternate between kkkd and dddk 1/3 rhythms to create more variety.

Inner Oni

00:14:291 - This section is quite similar to the Oni. You may want to modify the Oni and Inner Oni to establish a greater difference.

00:24:068 (129) - I don't see a reason for this to be a k; I think it would work better if you could change it to d to match the lower background instrumentals.

00:28:086 (168) - I'd personally change this to a d. This way, the k's at 00:28:220 (170,171,172,173,174,175) - match the positions of the k's at 00:29:023 (178,179,180,181,182).

00:28:889 (177,178,179,180,181,182) - Coupled with the suggestion above, you should try to make this part of the rhythm more similar to 00:28:086 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175).

00:29:693 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - Rather than having so many triplets in a row, it may be good to make some 1/2 patterns and longer 1/4 patterns instead.

00:39:202 (261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) - I'd change the colours to be consistent to the Oni here.

00:48:845 (298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - As mentioned before, I don't think a difficulty increase is necessary here.

00:58:488 (378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) - I'd change this to ddddkkdkd or something. I don't like dddkkk, and I felt like it'd match the background instrumentals better. Idk tho xD

00:59:827 (398,399,400,401) - I'd change this one to kddd and the one at 01:00:898 (414,415,416,417) - to kkkd since the pitch is higher on the second one.

01:01:434 (421,422,423,424,425,426,427) - Patterns like these are kinda difficult to read, and could be simplified to kkkdddk. I strongly recommend you make the 1/6 pattern a bit simpler here.

01:19:514 - You can add a d here for a continuous pattern, like you had at 01:21:256.

01:25:809 (629,630,631) - Again, I personally think that this would sound better as K K K.

01:30:631 (664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,673) - I'd make the colours consistent to the Oni here.

01:40:541 (703,704,705,706,707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715,716) - Again, no need to make it difficult imo.

01:41:881 (711) - You had a D here in the Oni and Muzu, so maybe you should keep it consistent?

01:43:577 (730,731,732,733) - Creating some variety in this 1/3 section would be cool, so how about changing this to kdkk? Same at 01:45:184 (748,749,750,751).

01:53:666 (833) - Changing this to d would nicely match the low instrumentals here imo.

That's all.

Call me back~~

1. 00:04:849 (16,17) - the way it is is currently fine. But if you really want the piano note, it's here : 00:04:883 - . Tho, 1/4 is fine. So, it's up to you.
2. 00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I'd say, the current pattern is fine, but I still think, dkkdkkd flow quite weird with the K here. 00:14:291 (62) - . I'd say, ddkdkkd will make the pattern flow better.
3. 00:17:171 (86) - this kat feel kinda a lil out of place. You did use kat on those notes 00:16:970 (83,84,87) - to emphasize the high pitched note. But this one 00:17:171 (86) - isn't on it. Tho, I can understand you want to make it different from this one 00:16:166 (76,77,78,79,80) - .
4. 00:29:693 (188,189,190) - How about a dkk ? it goes very well with the high pitched piano note.
5. 00:32:773 (215) - I'd say this one as D feels better than a K. The triple k make a D flow better. It'll also make difference with those 2 notes : 00:33:577 (218,221) - . Which, is I think, stronger.
6. 01:34:827 - I'd say the piano note is actually here. (so don't forget on other diff)
7. 01:37:595 (691) - 01:39:202 (697) - How about a kat here ? Since the pitch is starting to get high on this note.

1. 00:24:604 (123) - I'd say this one as is fine. But I think changing this one as kat will make the next big D a better emphasis.
2. 01:14:023 (405) - how about changing this one as kat ? the spam don is kinda strange in my opinion.
3. 01:15:764 (418) - This one as kat is good. But changing this one as don will make this note 01:15:898 (419) - stronger.
4. 01:41:881 (570) - according to your kat usage on this part, maybe it'll be better to change it into big kat ?

Kin wrote:

Hi~

here is a fast check.

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:04:849 (16,17) - the way it is is currently fine. But if you really want the piano note, it's here : 00:04:883 - . Tho, 1/4 is fine. So, it's up to you.
2. 00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I'd say, the current pattern is fine, but I still think, dkkdkkd flow quite weird with the K here. 00:14:291 (62) - . I'd say, ddkdkkd will make the pattern flow better.
3. 00:17:171 (86) - this kat feel kinda a lil out of place. You did use kat on those notes 00:16:970 (83,84,87) - to emphasize the high pitched note. But this one 00:17:171 (86) - isn't on it. Tho, I can understand you want to make it different from this one 00:16:166 (76,77,78,79,80) - .
4. 00:29:693 (188,189,190) - How about a dkk ? it goes very well with the high pitched piano note.
5. 00:32:773 (215) - I'd say this one as D feels better than a K. The triple k make a D flow better. It'll also make difference with those 2 notes : 00:33:577 (218,221) - . Which, is I think, stronger.
6. 01:34:827 - I'd say the piano note is actually here. (so don't forget on other diff)
7. 01:37:595 (691) - 01:39:202 (697) - How about a kat here ? Since the pitch is starting to get high on this note.

[Oni]

1. 00:24:604 (123) - I'd say this one as is fine. But I think changing this one as kat will make the next big D a better emphasis.
2. 01:14:023 (405) - how about changing this one as kat ? the spam don is kinda strange in my opinion.
3. 01:15:764 (418) - This one as kat is good. But changing this one as don will make this note 01:15:898 (419) - stronger.
4. 01:41:881 (570) - according to your kat usage on this part, maybe it'll be better to change it into big kat ?

I'd say, the map in general have some interesting part & pattern. But I'd also say, it's currently not ready for the qualify right now.
good luck! \o

Volta wrote:

hi :3
most critical issue in the map is the gap between kantan and futsuu is too high.
you can try to add more notes in kantan, and remove some in futsuu. here some suggestions.

Kantan

1.00x green lines are fine, no need to make them 0.7x :c o-ok

00:14:023 - add d
00:14:827 - add d
00:15:631 - add k
00:17:238 - add d
00:18:041 - add k

00:23:666 - add d
00:24:470 - add k
00:25:273 - add d

00:26:345 ~ this kiai part is very intense but too spacious >.<
00:25:809 - and 00:26:077 - add d to mark the start of kiai
00:26:881 - add d
00:27:148 - add k
00:27:684 - add d
00:28:488 - add k
00:30:095 - add k
00:30:898 - add d

00:38:666 - add d
00:38:934 - add d

00:44:827 - this can make a nice rest spot like at 01:36:256 - consider to remove it
00:49:381 - i think it's better to remove this to have consistent rhythm.

00:59:023 - add d
00:59:827 - add d
01:00:631 - add k
01:03:041 - add d

01:13:488 - remove
01:13:756 - remove
01:14:291 - add d
01:16:702 - add k
> so they would consistent with 01:07:863 - and give longer rest

the 2nd kiai can also be made a little harder
01:18:309 - add d
01:19:916 - add d
01:22:327 - add d
01:24:738 - add d
01:25:541 - add k
01:29:559 - add k

01:33:845 - change to d like you did at 00:42:416 - ?

01:44:023 - add k
01:44:827 - add d
01:45:631 - add k
01:50:988 - add d

Futsuu

try to remove some notes in futsuu, especially in calm parts.
00:03:577 - remove
00:06:791 - ^
00:07:595 - ^
00:10:006 - ^

00:10:675 - remove
00:10:943 - ^
00:10:809 - add note here instead for more simple rhythm

00:42:148 - remove
00:43:488 - can change to k for variation of 00:41:077 -
00:45:898 - remove
00:46:702 - ^
00:47:506 - add d

01:33:577 - remove
01:34:916 - change to k?
01:37:327 - remove

there could be some more to remove though.

good luck :>

newyams99 wrote:

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u w u

02:23 [_Chichinya_]: HB MA FRENDO
02:23 Surono: TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTttttttt
02:23 Surono: y
02:23 Surono: asdfasdgsafdgasfd
02:27 [_Chichinya_]: aklsdjalksdjlkasjdlkasdjlasd
04:46 Surono: a
04:46 Surono: dem afk
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04:46 [_Chichinya_]: i'm here
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04:46 Surono: yea
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: AwA appliku taim?
04:46 Surono: wuthc me play dis
04:47 Surono: AWAWAWA
04:47 [_Chichinya_]: AWA
04:47 Surono: tacossssss hard afsdfafdad., me rip heuhue
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: xD =W= do you want some tacos? =W=
04:48 Surono: yummy
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04:50 [_Chichinya_]: wait i'm preparing the tacos :^)
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04:50 Surono: awhgkjwagijakwgjawg tacos
04:51 [_Chichinya_]: T A C O S <3
04:51 Surono: owo
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
04:52 Surono: 00:59:872 - yus
04:52 Surono: 01:01:523 - yus
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: yas
04:52 Surono: yus = invert of colors
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: lol XD ok
04:52 Surono: dem who say it overmappuh desu ~~~~~
04:53 Surono: yeah it is song, dam hard :"D
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:434 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425) - that... old form is back <3
04:53 Surono: <3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking: old form was kkddkkd
04:53 Surono: kkddddk
04:53 Surono: its hurt </3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: map this song was like @_@what i need to map
04:53 Surono: kkddkkd is easier too owo
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Mid tell me that :C
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: after that was ... kkddkdk
04:54 Surono: AGASgjsgahagdjgf
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: one pattern "hard" to play
04:54 Surono: kdk, rip midfingers.
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Charlo suggest me that
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: AGREE XD
04:54 Surono: agree for whhich?
04:54 Surono: kkddkkd?
04:54 Surono: fair with alternating.. but others opinion is madness X"D
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: >Rip Midfingers
04:55 Surono: yeah, kkddkdk.. at kdk is rip
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: is hard to... kddk players actually
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: so... kkkdddk is better
04:55 Surono: brruuuuuuuuuuu
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: in my oppinion
04:55 Surono: rrrr
04:55 Surono: rrrrrrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: D:! WU
04:55 Surono: !!!!!!!!!1111
04:55 Surono: owo !
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: rrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: oneoneoneone
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: owo one
04:55 Surono: oneoeneoeneoeno
04:56 [_Chichinya_]: twotwotwotwotwotwotwotwo D:!!!!!!!!!!!!!
04:57 Surono: 01:14:425 - u,wu i cri.......
04:57 Surono: just don it.. for tacos yummy.. dont worry sr not decrease..
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: idk why this song attracme so hard
04:57 Surono: also dont map for pepes u,wu
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkkd
04:57 Surono: aeguyahgiugwkwg
04:57 Surono: wut
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: XD
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkd*
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: askldjaslkdjasld
04:57 Surono: madnuts
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: sorry i wrote one k lajdklasjd
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - maybe this...
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: dddk ?
05:00 Surono: 01:24:872 - from here~~~~~~~~~~
05:00 Surono: ddk d kdkkd
05:00 Surono: 01:21:858 - at least don this gib different emphasize with next dkkkd.
05:01 Surono: cuz flow are differe uwuwuwuw
05:01 Surono: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - u can keep that since left pattern are many kats
05:01 Surono: 01:17:372 - if u kat this, will rip when continue 01:17:506 - here .. 4 kats ;w;
05:01 [_Chichinya_]: okidoki
05:02 Surono: madnuts
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: x'D jalksdjaslkdjaslkdj ye
05:02 Surono: 01:29:827 - kat
05:02 Surono: many don in left
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: mini don break :thinking:
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: donbriku
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: buriku*
05:03 Surono: owo ?
05:03 Surono: OWO !!!!
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: AwA !!!!!!!!!
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - mindblow to play... the kat mostly should emphasized at white tick cuz there is the good alteration
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - example until 01:44:559 - here... kddkddkkkkddk
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: hmmm
05:05 Surono: 01:44:023 - yus makes sense if here kkkk
05:05 Surono: and selfmod.. make it readable.. or playable.. ;w;
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,723,724) - change to? kddk?
05:06 Surono: at least.. with tick shuld emphasized with kat for playablelity
05:06 Surono: yush.. but at leastttttttt.
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: @w@
05:06 Surono: 01:43:153 - don until here
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: i was trying to follow the drum and the melody :thinking: was bad?
05:07 Surono: thats why people afraid to rank ur map uwu
05:07 Surono: but.. the consistency is at white tick u,wu
05:07 Surono: 01:42:684 - drurururururuurur
05:07 Surono: 01:43:220 - tataktkatkaktak
05:07 [_Chichinya_]: ;_; but they don't help me to fix it aa ;_; only you
05:07 Surono: X"D
05:08 Surono: just make it easier... so people will luv to rank it <3
05:08 Surono: I am lookin for this, dont worry waifu gokuhh uwu
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking:
05:08 Surono: HHHMMMMMMMMMMM OWO
05:08 Surono: KHINTING?!??!?!
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vUjdR/cccb6ed0e2.jpg
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: ?
05:09 Surono: 01:44:827 - yesh from here kkkk for colors then 01:45:095 - repeat again like 01:43:488 - from here.
05:09 Surono: uwu ........ where is that.....
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: the stream
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:684 (710,711,712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722) -
05:09 Surono: 01:43:488 - but here u want don?
05:10 Surono: ;~;
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: yes cuz the durm
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: and follow the d d d
05:10 Surono: then 1/3?
05:10 Surono: are you have idea?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,731,740,749) -
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: see?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: don is a lower sound... and in these part the sound is like KAT
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: that's why i'm using don
05:11 Surono: 01:43:488 - if from music.. is actually emphasized as kddkddkkkkddkddkkkk and repat boring but that can be easier to play
05:12 Surono: if you feel that boring.. just make variety every kkkk like change it to kkdk or kdkk
05:12 Surono: dem........
05:12 Surono: but the current, I cant read it.... bcus I nub `_L`
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: kddkddkkkk :thinking
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: let me try
05:12 Surono: shinsekai is nightmares, u know that
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: no worry i'm nub to
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: =W= that's why i want to change my name into
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai-
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: you imagine that?
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: one diff called
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai Destruction
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: :^)
05:13 Surono: ................................. :^)
05:13 Surono: 01:49:916 - sadsadgsadgsagd
05:13 Surono: 01:51:256 (86,87,88,89,90) - IUKFWJuFHKJFWUHJKFWUIFWkjfwFWJKFWJKLFWFWLKmfwwff
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: x'D ajdklasjdklajsdkl wait i'm fixing the 1/3 part
05:14 Surono: 01:52:863 - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
05:14 Surono: M A D N E S S
05:14 Surono: my fingerz already ded.. even I dont try that... ohhhhh, I just hit'd that before.. when u wathcin meh ahsuhuhe
05:14 Surono: rip me
05:14 Surono: okey savelog.,
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: KLASJDLKAJSDKLAJSLDKASJKLDJSKLDJD dddddk
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: SUFFER !!
05:15 Surono: ohhhh 1 thing ,.
05:15 Surono: 01:54:604 - just ddd
05:15 Surono: dudud, cuz 01:53:800 - is mainsounds
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: 01:52:863 (817,818,819,820,821,822,823) - the only hard hard hard 1/6 pattern on this set XD
05:15 Surono: theres no mainsounds uwu
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: oki
05:15 Surono: readable buttttttttttt. madnuts

Surono wrote:

newyams99 wrote:

`_L`

naxyimyam69's mod yea just, yea wtf.

u w u

02:23 [_Chichinya_]: HB MA FRENDO
02:23 Surono: TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTttttttt
02:23 Surono: y
02:23 Surono: asdfasdgsafdgasfd
02:27 [_Chichinya_]: aklsdjalksdjlkasjdlkasdjlasd
04:46 Surono: a
04:46 Surono: dem afk
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: owowowow
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: i'm here
04:46 Surono: apliqwquwuwquwq
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: xD
04:46 Surono: yea
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: AwA appliku taim?
04:46 Surono: wuthc me play dis
04:47 Surono: AWAWAWA
04:47 [_Chichinya_]: AWA
04:47 Surono: tacossssss hard afsdfafdad., me rip heuhue
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: xD =W= do you want some tacos? =W=
04:48 Surono: yummy
04:48 *[_Chichinya_] giving some tacos to Surono
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
04:48 Surono: asdfsafdfsadhsadads image of tacos pls
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: wait i'm preparing the tacos :^)
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: [http://static.tvazteca.com/imagenes/2012/52/Tacopedia-enciclopedia-del-taco-1752224.jpg enjoy :^) <3 i made this for you ma frendo]
04:50 Surono: awhgkjwagijakwgjawg tacos
04:51 [_Chichinya_]: T A C O S <3
04:51 Surono: owo
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
04:52 Surono: 00:59:872 - yus
04:52 Surono: 01:01:523 - yus
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: yas
04:52 Surono: yus = invert of colors
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: lol XD ok
04:52 Surono: dem who say it overmappuh desu ~~~~~
04:53 Surono: yeah it is song, dam hard :"D
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:434 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425) - that... old form is back <3
04:53 Surono: <3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking: old form was kkddkkd
04:53 Surono: kkddddk
04:53 Surono: its hurt </3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: map this song was like @_@what i need to map
04:53 Surono: kkddkkd is easier too owo
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Mid tell me that :C
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: after that was ... kkddkdk
04:54 Surono: AGASgjsgahagdjgf
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: one pattern "hard" to play
04:54 Surono: kdk, rip midfingers.
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Charlo suggest me that
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: AGREE XD
04:54 Surono: agree for whhich?
04:54 Surono: kkddkkd?
04:54 Surono: fair with alternating.. but others opinion is madness X"D
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: >Rip Midfingers
04:55 Surono: yeah, kkddkdk.. at kdk is rip
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: is hard to... kddk players actually
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: so... kkkdddk is better
04:55 Surono: brruuuuuuuuuuu
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: in my oppinion
04:55 Surono: rrrr
04:55 Surono: rrrrrrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: D:! WU
04:55 Surono: !!!!!!!!!1111
04:55 Surono: owo !
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: rrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: oneoneoneone
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: owo one
04:55 Surono: oneoeneoeneoeno
04:56 [_Chichinya_]: twotwotwotwotwotwotwotwo D:!!!!!!!!!!!!!
04:57 Surono: 01:14:425 - u,wu i cri.......
04:57 Surono: just don it.. for tacos yummy.. dont worry sr not decrease..
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: idk why this song attracme so hard
04:57 Surono: also dont map for pepes u,wu
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkkd
04:57 Surono: aeguyahgiugwkwg
04:57 Surono: wut
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: XD
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkd*
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: askldjaslkdjasld
04:57 Surono: madnuts
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: sorry i wrote one k lajdklasjd
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - maybe this...
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: dddk ?
05:00 Surono: 01:24:872 - from here~~~~~~~~~~
05:00 Surono: ddk d kdkkd
05:00 Surono: 01:21:858 - at least don this gib different emphasize with next dkkkd.
05:01 Surono: cuz flow are differe uwuwuwuw
05:01 Surono: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - u can keep that since left pattern are many kats
05:01 Surono: 01:17:372 - if u kat this, will rip when continue 01:17:506 - here .. 4 kats ;w;
05:01 [_Chichinya_]: okidoki
05:02 Surono: madnuts
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: x'D jalksdjaslkdjaslkdj ye
05:02 Surono: 01:29:827 - kat
05:02 Surono: many don in left
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: mini don break :thinking:
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: donbriku
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: buriku*
05:03 Surono: owo ?
05:03 Surono: OWO !!!!
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: AwA !!!!!!!!!
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - mindblow to play... the kat mostly should emphasized at white tick cuz there is the good alteration
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - example until 01:44:559 - here... kddkddkkkkddk
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: hmmm
05:05 Surono: 01:44:023 - yus makes sense if here kkkk
05:05 Surono: and selfmod.. make it readable.. or playable.. ;w;
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,723,724) - change to? kddk?
05:06 Surono: at least.. with tick shuld emphasized with kat for playablelity
05:06 Surono: yush.. but at leastttttttt.
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: @w@
05:06 Surono: 01:43:153 - don until here
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: i was trying to follow the drum and the melody :thinking: was bad?
05:07 Surono: thats why people afraid to rank ur map uwu
05:07 Surono: but.. the consistency is at white tick u,wu
05:07 Surono: 01:42:684 - drurururururuurur
05:07 Surono: 01:43:220 - tataktkatkaktak
05:07 [_Chichinya_]: ;_; but they don't help me to fix it aa ;_; only you
05:07 Surono: X"D
05:08 Surono: just make it easier... so people will luv to rank it <3
05:08 Surono: I am lookin for this, dont worry waifu gokuhh uwu
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking:
05:08 Surono: HHHMMMMMMMMMMM OWO
05:08 Surono: KHINTING?!??!?!
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vUjdR/cccb6ed0e2.jpg
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: ?
05:09 Surono: 01:44:827 - yesh from here kkkk for colors then 01:45:095 - repeat again like 01:43:488 - from here.
05:09 Surono: uwu ........ where is that.....
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: the stream
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:684 (710,711,712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722) -
05:09 Surono: 01:43:488 - but here u want don?
05:10 Surono: ;~;
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: yes cuz the durm
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: and follow the d d d
05:10 Surono: then 1/3?
05:10 Surono: are you have idea?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,731,740,749) -
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: see?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: don is a lower sound... and in these part the sound is like KAT
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: that's why i'm using don
05:11 Surono: 01:43:488 - if from music.. is actually emphasized as kddkddkkkkddkddkkkk and repat boring but that can be easier to play
05:12 Surono: if you feel that boring.. just make variety every kkkk like change it to kkdk or kdkk
05:12 Surono: dem........
05:12 Surono: but the current, I cant read it.... bcus I nub `_L`
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: kddkddkkkk :thinking
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: let me try
05:12 Surono: shinsekai is nightmares, u know that
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: no worry i'm nub to
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: =W= that's why i want to change my name into
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai-
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: you imagine that?
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: one diff called
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai Destruction
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: :^)
05:13 Surono: ................................. :^)
05:13 Surono: 01:49:916 - sadsadgsadgsagd
05:13 Surono: 01:51:256 (86,87,88,89,90) - IUKFWJuFHKJFWUHJKFWUIFWkjfwFWJKFWJKLFWFWLKmfwwff
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: x'D ajdklasjdklajsdkl wait i'm fixing the 1/3 part
05:14 Surono: 01:52:863 - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
05:14 Surono: M A D N E S S
05:14 Surono: my fingerz already ded.. even I dont try that... ohhhhh, I just hit'd that before.. when u wathcin meh ahsuhuhe
05:14 Surono: rip me
05:14 Surono: okey savelog.,
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: KLASJDLKAJSDKLAJSLDKASJKLDJSKLDJD dddddk
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: SUFFER !!
05:15 Surono: ohhhh 1 thing ,.
05:15 Surono: 01:54:604 - just ddd
05:15 Surono: dudud, cuz 01:53:800 - is mainsounds
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: 01:52:863 (817,818,819,820,821,822,823) - the only hard hard hard 1/6 pattern on this set XD
05:15 Surono: theres no mainsounds uwu
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: oki
05:15 Surono: readable buttttttttttt. madnuts

modder higher diff and helped at 1/3 patterns

lookin for this mapset, GL.

Nepuri wrote:

Mod per constant asking for 3ish months lol
Hope im not late with all the BN's appearing...
Recheck zzz.

Kantan

00:58:488 (94) - why is this a finisher and not the other notes (00:59:291 (96,98,100)) - ; They lie on the same sound.
Additionally, 01:01:702 (101,103) - are Finishers, while 01:03:309 (105,107) - are not.
Thus, it cant be an intuitive finisher (One used to make different sections more clear) and you should do something about it in any case.

00:21:523 (3,4,5) - are kkk, 00:34:381 (30,31,32) - are kkd, again on same sounds, please do something about it.

00:32:773 (55,56) - D D, but 00:19:916 (28) - D d, lying on same sections in the music, Do something about it; btw repetition is wanted in kantans

00:31:970 - add a note here, its the kiai and the beat is much more steady here, would make sense to make kiai a bit more differently in structure from the part before, and also tone up the difficulty a tad bit.

00:56:613 - add a k to make the structure more uniform and less erratic?

01:16:702 (126,127,128) - theres the violin and crunch sounds you already mapped as kdddk or ddddk, whatever; The kk k is not really satisfactory for consistency reasons. Id much rather see a kkddk more fitting to the crunchy 1/6 sounds, aswell as the consistency.

01:29:559 (155,156,157,158) - Similar goes to this, kkddk for reasons already explained above.

01:37:863 (166,167) - crtl+g? has the same pitch variation as 00:39:202 - onward, so this change will make them uniform.

01:46:434 - add a note here? Theres still the 1/3 sounds going on and should be another note.

01:50:452 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - these structure is weird, the crunch sounds kind of dictate a xx xx xx xx xx kind of rhythm, and i think its better than a sudden 5let i guess.

Before i continue, I want you to reconsider a lot of finishers especially in the lower difficulties, aswell as across the difficulties since they really are extremely inconsistent.
In Futsuu for example, i feel like 30% of the map is Finishers. That number can really be toned down, as emphasis by note placement/coloring will be enough to do the job in my opinion. Please REALLY think about those, as newyams even said
Brief example: 00:23:934 (65,68) - are not finishers; why are 00:17:506 (47,50,53,56) - finishers then?!
Also; 00:52:863 (147,149,151,153,155,157) - too many finishers.

This map is gonna go nowhere if the finishers dont make sense if im honest.

Futsuu

HP6, to allow for a smooth transition in HP.

00:23:532 (63,64,65,66,67,68) - why are these not structured like 00:17:104 (45,46,47,48,49,50) - , even tho they should represent the same musical pattern? is not the same listen the music more... xd and maybe you can find what i'm following

00:39:470 - Unused Green Line, Please remove.

00:48:577 (135,136) - dk for the violin pitch you very clearly mapped to this section.

00:50:184 (139) - again d for the violin pitch, but if you wanted some contrast between this note and upcoming finishers thats fine too.

01:43:488 - This part is too hard if you look at the kantan ver of this. This section in particular should be nerfed a bit in 1/2 density i guess, since Kantan only posesses brief 1/1 here.

In general i feel like this Futsuu could use a bit more 1/1 and also a bit more 1/2 aswell just to make the gap between Futsuu and Kantan Just right!
Buff as you like i guess!
That Spread my main Issue, with this besides the Finishers, which you should also fix up/reconsider

Muzukashii

00:09:336 (29) - d to match the pitch a little bit better and also contrast 00:09:470 (30) - which lies on a sharp tone.

00:12:416 - unused green line, please remove

00:35:988 (144,145,146,147,148) - this is not uniform in note placement with 00:23:131 (85,86,87,88,89) -; Please fix to make them more consistent.

00:26:613 - unused green line, please remove

00:29:291 (120) - color to k to capture the slightly rising pitch? It fits a little better in my opinion

00:32:238 (134,135,136,137,138) - change to kdkkd to be a bit more similar to 00:31:434 (130,131,132) - with a d kdk d kdk oriented rhythm?

00:37:997 - add a d here to capture the strong 1/2 beat much better. The k's will still be good to emphasize the melody with this too.
Additionally, 00:37:059 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - and 00:24:202 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - are not very similar in structure, so i suggest you change that unless you have good reason to do so.

00:45:363 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - the silent part looks like it has a k on each downbeat, why is this combo set breaking it.
This one follows the Violin pitch, while others are oriented on clock ticks. Please make them more uniform in mapping focus to avoid the sudden change in focus.

01:01:434 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - why is this easier than its futsuu counterpart, cmon...

01:08:666 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - this part is not too clear with what its mapped on to me. it kind of contradicts the flute thing, but also contradicts the background snares. I suggest you make that intention clearer?

01:12:081 (67,68) - this is mapped in 1/4, but 01:05:452 (35,36,37) - is not mapped this way. Please fix somehow! And 01:15:095 (79,80,81,82) - is mapped yet differently!

01:42:148 (191) - remove to make the change in melody (the muffled thump) more appearant and leave a bigger impact?

01:43:488 - this part is also easier than futsuu counterpart?!?! Please fix that ASAP.

From here on out, i wont check the top diffs, because the most critical errors are lying on the lower diffs, which you SERIOUSLY should fix, seeing as multiple BN mods havent been sufficient!
I hope you take this a bit seriously and get these lower diffs done properly.

Vulkin wrote:

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2017-05-20 16:40 Vulkin: o
2017-05-20 16:40 Vulkin: ok aca las del kantan
2017-05-20 16:41 [_Chichinya_]: voy
2017-05-20 16:42 Vulkin: 00:52:863 (85) - Este no creo que debe tener finish
2017-05-20 16:43 Vulkin: porque los siguientes del mismo sonido no lo tienen (y no deberian tenerlo imo)
2017-05-20 16:43 Vulkin: nota que el 84 debe tenerlo porque es como el principio w
2017-05-20 16:43 [_Chichinya_]: pongo en duda estas
2017-05-20 16:43 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:702 (103,105,107,109) -
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: tienes razon o.o
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: las demas no lo son
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: y practicamente son el mismo sonido xd
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: UF esa escapada papaaa 01:16:970 (129) -
2017-05-20 16:44 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: coño dejame actualizarte el map
2017-05-20 16:44 Vulkin: adelante
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: por que los cambios de nepuri xd me desconfiguraron la mierda esta
2017-05-20 16:45 [_Chichinya_]: ya listo
2017-05-20 16:45 Vulkin: bajando de nuevo
2017-05-20 16:46 Vulkin: (el net se me puso lento, pta la wea)
2017-05-20 16:46 [_Chichinya_]: me pasa
2017-05-20 16:48 Vulkin:  01:01:702 (103,105,107) - para los finishers aca, yo borraria 01:02:238 (104,106) - para darle al jugador de kantan mas tiempo de reaccion
2017-05-20 16:49 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:50 Vulkin: 01:26:345 (149,151) - Estas tambien borralas, mucho finisher ahi
2017-05-20 16:50 Vulkin: 01:27:416 (150) - y este no creo que le sea necesario ponerle finisher
2017-05-20 16:50 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:53 Vulkin: Ahora con los futsuu
2017-05-20 16:53 [_Chichinya_]: siento que los dK no son buenos para una fut xd
2017-05-20 16:53 Vulkin: iba a decir eso XD
2017-05-20 16:54 Vulkin: para un muzu creo que estarian bien
2017-05-20 16:54 Vulkin: pero para futsuu... ñee
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: agrege uno aqui
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:26:345 (74) -
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: elimine el de aqui
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:22:863 (61) -
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: consistencia xd
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:23:131 (62) -  lo puse ahi
2017-05-20 16:56 Vulkin: eso esta bien
2017-05-20 16:56 Vulkin: 00:38:131 - ddK d ddk ehh
2017-05-20 16:56 [_Chichinya_]: agrege uno aqui 00:39:202 (111) -
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: ahora quedo asi
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: ddk d d K
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: para seguir siguiendo los 1/6 que no estan :^)
2017-05-20 16:57 Vulkin: xD 
2017-05-20 16:57 Vulkin: mucho mejor asi
2017-05-20 16:58 Vulkin: 00:50:988 (141) - quitelo?
2017-05-20 16:58 Vulkin: ( el finish)
2017-05-20 16:58 [_Chichinya_]: deleted? 01:04:113 (178,181) -
2017-05-20 16:58 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:59 [_Chichinya_]: mejor quito este 01:04:916 (181) -
2017-05-20 16:59 Vulkin: si eso iba a decir
2017-05-20 16:59 Vulkin: 01:04:113 (178) - el de aca igual ya sigue el cambio de ritmo
2017-05-20 16:59 [_Chichinya_]: pero la consistencia estara bien? con la kantan :thinking:
2017-05-20 17:00 [_Chichinya_]: aja ya quite los dos
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: sep tienes razon
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: mejor los dos
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: 01:11:345 (201) - ?
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: remove
2017-05-20 17:01 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:01 Vulkin: 01:25:809 - ?
2017-05-20 17:01 [_Chichinya_]: 01:20:988 (229) -
2017-05-20 17:02 [_Chichinya_]: puedo eliminar todos esos
2017-05-20 17:02 Vulkin: 01:20:988 (229,239) - estos dos borrarle el finish
2017-05-20 17:03 Vulkin: y para 01:25:809 - no estoy seguro
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: ya los borre
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: si dicen algo
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: los pongo .w.
2017-05-20 17:04 Vulkin: ok
2017-05-20 17:04 Vulkin: 01:49:113 (305,306,307) - estos 3 saquelos
2017-05-20 17:05 Vulkin: el de 01:49:916 (308) - creo que esta bien
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: quetal un tremendo ctrl+g
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:416 (288,289) -
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: kD
2017-05-20 17:06 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:06 Vulkin: mejor tambien
2017-05-20 17:06 [_Chichinya_]: lesto
2017-05-20 17:06 [_Chichinya_]: xD hice unas cosas tho
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: ahora la muzu
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: CTM
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: 00:13:488 - tanto finish xD
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: hice lo mismo
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: 00:23:131 (110) -
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: aqui y elimine el dkd
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: lo cambie por un simple k d
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: cual dkd?
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: que recomiendas :c
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: ya va primero ahi donde me marcaste
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: XD
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: 00:23:131 (86) - aca creo que finish no
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: 00:13:488 (46) - este estaba bien con finish
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: me referia a 00:14:291 (51) - 00:15:095 (54) - 00:15:898 (58) - 00:16:702 (61) - 
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: aja listo con esas
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: que son mejor sin el finish
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: si XD
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: oke
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: 00:26:077 - ddd K es mejor creo yo
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: lo dejare en el ultimo
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: osea este 00:19:916 (100) -
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: yap
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: btw cambie esto 00:26:881 (138) -  por d
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: xd
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: 00:36:791 (149) - borre
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: mejor tambien xD
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: yao
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: 00:39:202 (165) - hagalo D
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: no wn esa D no por que es violin
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: ademas del clock sound
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: diria que esa es la unica parte en la que estoy seguro que es consistente af
2017-05-20 17:12 Vulkin: entonces 00:38:934 (163,164) - d ?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: desde aqui elimine 00:52:059 (265) -
2017-05-20 17:13 Vulkin: 01:17:639 (98) - d?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: son s
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: estas en la oni?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: LOL
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vWk6F/dff014f58d.jpg
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: aun en la muzu
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: voy
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: ctm 
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: XD
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: JDALSDJALKSDJSA
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: pa la  oni me voy entonces
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: ya cmabie esas
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/961416 Morimori Atsushi - Applique [Muzukashii]]
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/961417 Morimori Atsushi - Applique [Oni]]
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: pa muzu voy
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: deletee esta tambien
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: 00:36:791 (149) -
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: lol
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: por la ctm en cual diff estamos XD
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: ldkjakjsakjaklsdjs
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: muzu
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: xD
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: lo que pasa es que pense que te fuiste con la otra
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: a
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: 00:36:791 -  de aqui?
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: 00:36:791 (149) - si mejor sin finisher
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: ya ahora vamos para la oni
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: ya se lo quite
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: jaslkjas
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: oke
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:17 [_Chichinya_]: con eso vi que ahora si tengo consistencia xD
2017-05-20 17:18 Vulkin: 00:13:488 - puro finisher cada 3/1
2017-05-20 17:18 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:18 [_Chichinya_]: si
2017-05-20 17:18 [_Chichinya_]: esos ya los quite
2017-05-20 17:19 [_Chichinya_]: como te dije
2017-05-20 17:19 [_Chichinya_]: deje este 00:19:916 (100) -
2017-05-20 17:19 Vulkin: a ok
2017-05-20 17:21 Vulkin: ahora por ultimo al ura
2017-05-20 17:21 Vulkin: ctm me dio frio
2017-05-20 17:21 [_Chichinya_]: wut
2017-05-20 17:21 [_Chichinya_]: yo ando... tomando tang de guanabana
2017-05-20 17:22 Vulkin: xd
2017-05-20 17:22 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
2017-05-20 17:23 Vulkin: ahora comiendo lechuga con maiz
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: :0
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: dale vamo con la ura
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: al principio los finishers creo que estan bien
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: total es una diff mas alta
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: 00:26:278 (153) - de hecho borre esta nota y haga 00:26:345 (154) - finish
2017-05-20 17:25 [_Chichinya_]: yap
2017-05-20 17:25 Vulkin: al ura no creo que se le sea necesario cambiarle tanto
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: si ando quitando unas cositas ahi
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: xD creo que de finish estaria bien
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: 01:49:113 - aca creo que seria mejor un dkkdkkdkk en 1/3
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: 01:30:631 (673) -  finish!!!!!!!
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: ve XD
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: dkkdkkddd
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: sep finish!
2017-05-20 17:27 Vulkin: 01:34:872 (689) - este creo que suena mejor en 01:34:849 - 
2017-05-20 17:27 [_Chichinya_]: listo

Surono wrote:

orz low diffs... btw you can nerf a bit for Oni bcus some base pattern or stream are harsh I guess, somehow it close with Inner. will be back soon with dem mod ( and how thats low diffs has high sr.. ) find modders again pls for Oni ~ Kantan, take care more to oni and low diffs. dem spread density gap blabla

Vulkin wrote:

3er mod (o 4to?) que hago en este set xD

NO ME DES KUDOSU POR ESTE POST ;_;

(Note to Ayyri: I won't check your diff by request of Chichinya (Only Mod Kantan to Oni), sorry)

-Kantan-
00:28:756 - una k aca no seria malo, por ser kiai yo creo que estaria bien (00:31:970 - te excusas de saltar esta diciendo que sigues el violin xd)
00:38:666 (49) - esta creo que seria mejor borrarla, ir de 3/1 a 1/1 de una no creo que es buena idea, por lo menos al principio de la cancion no imo no por ahora por que sigue el 1/6
00:38:934 (49) - ^ para nerfear un poco mas ño :C
01:04:113 (82) - Cambiala a K, Asi hace consistencia con la nota anterior (01:03:309 (81) - )
01:08:934 - una k aca seria lo ideal creo yo, porque asi sigues el sonido del instrumento
01:38:666 (136,137) - Ctrl+G con estas dos notas y yo creo que seguira el tono un poco mejor, ademas que la k hara consistencia de sonido con las notas a venir

-Futsuu-
00:20:720 (50) - Suena un poco mejor sin el finisher, puesto que 00:19:916 (49) - no lo tiene tampoco, asi da mas prioridad a 00:21:523 (51,52,53) -
00:55:006 (141,142) - Ctrl+G, Da mas variacion
00:55:809 (143,144) - ^
01:01:434 (160,161) - Ctrl+G, Sigue mejor el tono
01:03:041 (164,165) - ^
01:08:934 (182) - hagala k por el tono, sigue lo mismo que 01:08:131 (180) - , el cual es una k
01:15:095 (200,201) - Ctrl+G

-Muzukashii-
00:24:604 (92) - k? sigue el mismo tono que 00:24:470 (91) -
01:12:081 (67,68) - hagalas dd para que tenga consistencia con el par anterior
01:14:827 (78) - 01:15:631 (82) - estas dos hagalas d para que no hayan tantas k ahi
01:18:443 - porque no seguir los doublets (o triplets que hiciste en el kiai) aca?, tienen el mismo sonido, ademas asi podrias tener consistencia con 01:24:872 -
01:28:086 - porque no un kkk aca?, el sonido lo mappeaste como triplet en el kiai, y ya que esta en kiai no le veo el porque no

-Oni-
00:51:456 (258) - Este sonaria un poco mejor en 00:51:322 -
01:11:345 - K d k kd k d K seguiria mejor
01:39:738 (550,553,556) - Borrelas para dar mas descanso
01:43:153 (563) - ^
01:52:327 - dkkd para que tenga consistencia con el cambio de colores que hiciste antes

Suerte con el set!!

Stefan wrote:

Giving it a quick check because Ari was asking for.

[Ura Oni]
00:58:354 (385,386) - Switching them would be better since 00:58:220 (384) - goes with d on the same sound like 00:58:354 (385) - , while I find the ligher sound on 00:58:488 (386) - should be emphasized with k, not with don.
01:08:398 - 01:11:211 - Personally I really have no idea what exactly were you following here, without intending to sound harsh or anything. Quick explaination or anything like that would be nice. a llittle of overmapping by me adding my own rhythm cuz if i leave that part would be too boring... almost for me
01:16:434 (540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548) - try kkddkddkk instead. This sounds rather what the song gives
01:43:220 (728) - Except of the very imperceptible "beam" sound here, there is no reason to switch on d. Sound is pretty constant. >_> ik xD i changed that cuz... stamina (?)

[Inner Oni]
00:37:997 (198,199) - I've said to switch them so 00:38:131 (199,200) - with similar sounds share the same hitsound.

The difficulty itself is actually okay but feels weird with the significantely calmer parts sometimes, like 01:17:773 - 01:30:631 - but I guess it will be okay anyway.

[Oni]
SV usage in this difficulty is pretty whacky and needs some improvement.

00:12:416 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - The SV build looks bad... instead of 0.05x jumps, try 0.03 instead, check the screenshot: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/s4LS2Qx9.png
00:39:202 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220) - SV on 00:39:202 - shouldn't drop to 1.00x since it's connected to the previous pattern of 00:37:863 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213) - , it looks detached. 00:39:202 - should have 1.05x but with disabled Kiai, 00:39:470 - with 1.00x and so on.
00:51:256 - move the line to 00:51:189 - since it cause the barline to spaz out right now.
01:31:702 - Why would you drop from 0.85x to 0.75x? either use 0.80x before and then on 01:31:970 - to have 0.75x just stick with 0.80x as the genera oh fuck i forgot that D:!l SV for this section.

Difficulty itself looks okay, objectively said.

[Muzukashii]
personally I have doubts in using doublets for that sort of Muzukashii, Oni barely uses them so I don't really know if you need them at all. five-lets instead could be done to fit better with what Oni gives.

Feel free to give it KD or not, good luck!

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

1. Ayyri's Inner Oni has tag inconsistency with other diffs, fix please.

1. 00:11:881 - cambialo a k, aqui no hay otro sonido que el del reloj? suena mucho mejor y ademas en las otras diffs llevas k ahi.
2. 00:13:889 - aqui sugerire algo para un mejor spread con la Futsuu? añadir un d en 00:13:889 - 00:15:497 - 00:17:104 - , ya que no queda tan vacio y no es tan facil en comparacion a la Futsuu.
3. 00:24:470 - añade un k aqui por el spread.
4. 00:26:345 - aqui tengo otra cosa en mente para mejorar el spread y el kiai ya que este esta muy vacio a comparacion de la Futsuu que es dificil, seria añadir nota (k o d, como veas que quede mejor) en 00:26:613 - 00:28:220 - 00:28:756 - 00:29:827 - y eliminar 00:31:970 - para consistencia con el espaciado de 00:19:113 - .
5. 00:35:720 - si aplicaste ^ aqui igual, añade nota en 00:35:720 - y 00:37:327 - y eliminar 00:38:666 - ya que actualmente tienes 5 notas 1/1 en la Futsuu y queda muy parecido por lo que deberia ser esto mas facil.
6. 00:42:952 - añade un d aqui y un k en 00:43:756 - para mejorar el spread.
7. 00:46:970 - aqui igual para el spread, añade un k aqui y un d en 00:47:773 - .
8. 00:59:827 - añade un d aqui para el spread.
9. 01:04:648 - k aqui y d o k en 01:05:452 - por la misma razon que ^.
10. 01:07:327 - d aqui y k en 01:07:863 - para el spread.
11. 01:11:077 - añade un d aqui para el spread tambien.
12. 01:14:291 - k aqui por lo mismo.
13. 01:17:238 - elimina esta nota por el tema del spread, ya que tienes un pattern de 5 1/1 en la Futsuu aqui.
14. 01:21:523 - mueve esta nota a 01:20:720 - , ya que ahi es donde tienes el pattern dificil de la Futsuu.
15. 01:24:738 - aqui igual, mueve esta nota a 01:23:934 - por la misma razon que ^.
16. 01:26:077 - añade k en 01:26:077 - y 01:26:345 - para el spread.
17. 01:30:095 - elimina esta nota por la misma razon que antes.
18. 01:32:773 - añadir d aqui ya que tienes un kddk en la futsuu?
19. 01:34:381 - añade k aqui y d en 01:35:184 - por el tema del spread.
20. 01:38:398 - añade k aqui y en 01:39:202 - por la misma razon.
21. 01:44:827 - elimina esta nota para un mejor spread con la Futsuu.
22. 01:46:434 - elimina, misma razon que ^.
23. 01:48:577 - añade notas en 01:48:577 - 01:48:845 - 01:49:113 - y 01:49:648 - para un mejor spread.

1. 00:17:372 - cambiar a k? ofrece mas variacion que solo dk y suena bastante bien.
2. 00:19:782 (48,49) - control+g en estas notas? (kd), lo mismo que ^ acerca de la variacion y creo que suena bien.
3. 00:28:622 - añade un k aqui para mejorar el spread con la Muzukashii.
4. 00:31:568 - añade un k aqui por la misma razon que ^.
5. 00:38:800 - añade un d aqui por la misma razon que ^.
6. 01:17:372 - añade un d aqui, misma razon que ^.
7. 01:18:443 - añade un k aqui por lo mismo.
8. 01:21:657 - un k aqui por lo mismo que ^?
9. 01:24:872 - añade un k aqui por la misma razon del spread.
10. 01:27:952 - añade k en 01:27:952 - 01:28:086 - 01:28:488 - y 01:28:756 - para el spread.

1. 00:25:943 - aun no es el kiai y esto es casi igual de denso que en la Oni, asi que sugiero eliminar esta nota.
2. 00:27:818 - añade un k aqui para mejorar el spread.
3. 00:29:157 - un d aqui por lo mismo que ^.
4. 00:31:836 - añadir un k aqui? ya que tienes un pattern bastante largo en la Oni en esta parte.
5. 00:32:639 - recomiendo eliminar esta nota ya que es muy parecido a la Oni.
6. 00:36:523 - añade un d aqui para mejorar el spread con la Oni, ademas creo que dddk ddddk queda bastante bien.
7. 00:52:729 - añade k aqui para mejorar el spread.
8. 00:53:532 - lo mismo ^.
9. 00:54:336 - ^.
10. 00:55:139 - ^.
11. 00:55:943 - ^.
12. 00:56:747 - ^.
13. 00:57:818 - añade un d aqui por lo mismo.
14. 01:19:782 - añade un k aqui y en 01:20:854 - para mejorar el spread.
15. 01:22:997 - quiza un d vendria bien aqui por la misma razon.
16. 01:23:666 - por que esta parte esta vacia y en la Kantan y Futsuu si? recomiendo añadir algunas notas.
17. 01:30:497 - añade un d aqui para el spread.
18. 01:43:086 - esto es exactamente igual a la Oni, recomiendo hacerlo mas corto eliminando esta nota.
19. 01:48:711 - un k aqui por el spread?
20. 01:54:604 - cambia 01:54:604 - y 01:54:671 - a k para hacer este triplete a kkk, no has usado ddk en todo el mapa y esto es una Muzukashii, asi que recomiendo hacerlo mas simple con kkk.

1. 00:57:550 - sugiero eliminar esta nota ya que este pattern es demasiado largo para una Oni normal y considerando que el bpm es 224 es bastante agotador.
2. 01:24:939 - tienes una nota en la Muzukashii aqui pero no en la Oni, añade un k.

1. 00:26:613 - i know what are you trying to do, but i think from 00:26:613 - to 00:27:014 - aren't necessary these inherit points, adding one inherit at 00:26:412 - with x1.00 of sv it's fine imo.
2. 00:52:059 - i think this note sounds more like D than a K, so i suggest changing to D as it's easier to hit the big note too?
3. 00:52:863 - if you applied ^ i suggest doing the same in 00:52:863 - 00:54:470 - 00:55:282 - and 00:56:077 - .

1. 00:39:068 - cambiar esta nota a k y 00:39:202 - a D? ya que 00:39:068 - suena mas como k debido al pitch y 00:39:202 - mas grave.
2. 01:30:497 - igual que ^, cambiar 01:30:497 - a k y 01:30:631 - a D?

Hanjamon wrote:

Hey Chichi o/ aqui el mod que me pediste.

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

1. Ayyri's Inner Oni has tag inconsistency with other diffs, fix please.

[Kantan]

1. 00:11:881 - cambialo a k, aqui no hay otro sonido que el del reloj? suena mucho mejor y ademas en las otras diffs llevas k ahi. dejame decirte que si fuera por mi XD todas esas notas fueran k
2. 00:13:889 - aqui sugerire algo para un mejor spread con la Futsuu? añadir un d en 00:13:889 - 00:15:497 - 00:17:104 - , ya que no queda tan vacio y no es tan facil en comparacion a la Futsuu.
3. 00:24:470 - añade un k aqui por el spread.
4. 00:26:345 - aqui tengo otra cosa en mente para mejorar el spread y el kiai ya que este esta muy vacio a comparacion de la Futsuu que es dificil, seria añadir nota (k o d, como veas que quede mejor) en 00:26:613 - 00:28:220 - 00:28:756 - 00:29:827 - y eliminar 00:31:970 - para consistencia con el espaciado de 00:19:113 - .
5. 00:35:720 - si aplicaste ^ aqui igual, añade nota en 00:35:720 - y 00:37:327 - y eliminar 00:38:666 - ya que actualmente tienes 5 notas 1/1 en la Futsuu y queda muy parecido por lo que deberia ser esto mas facil.
6. 00:42:952 - añade un d aqui y un k en 00:43:756 - para mejorar el spread.
7. 00:46:970 - aqui igual para el spread, añade un k aqui y un d en 00:47:773 - .
8. 00:59:827 - añade un d aqui para el spread.
9. 01:04:648 - k aqui y d o k en 01:05:452 - por la misma razon que ^.
10. 01:07:327 - d aqui y k en 01:07:863 - para el spread.
11. 01:11:077 - añade un d aqui para el spread tambien.
12. 01:14:291 - k aqui por lo mismo.
13. 01:17:238 - elimina esta nota por el tema del spread, ya que tienes un pattern de 5 1/1 en la Futsuu aqui.
14. 01:21:523 - mueve esta nota a 01:20:720 - , ya que ahi es donde tienes el pattern dificil de la Futsuu.
15. 01:24:738 - aqui igual, mueve esta nota a 01:23:934 - por la misma razon que ^.
16. 01:26:077 - añade k en 01:26:077 - y 01:26:345 - para el spread.
17. 01:30:095 - elimina esta nota por la misma razon que antes.
18. 01:32:773 - añadir d aqui ya que tienes un kddk en la futsuu?
19. 01:34:381 - añade k aqui y d en 01:35:184 - por el tema del spread.
20. 01:38:398 - añade k aqui y en 01:39:202 - por la misma razon.
21. 01:44:827 - elimina esta nota para un mejor spread con la Futsuu.
22. 01:46:434 - elimina, misma razon que ^.
23. 01:48:577 - añade notas en 01:48:577 - 01:48:845 - 01:49:113 - y 01:49:648 - para un mejor spread.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:17:372 - cambiar a k? ofrece mas variacion que solo dk y suena bastante bien.
2. 00:19:782 (48,49) - control+g en estas notas? (kd), lo mismo que ^ acerca de la variacion y creo que suena bien.
3. 00:28:622 - añade un k aqui para mejorar el spread con la Muzukashii.
4. 00:31:568 - añade un k aqui por la misma razon que ^.
5. 00:38:800 - añade un d aqui por la misma razon que ^.
6. 01:17:372 - añade un d aqui, misma razon que ^.
7. 01:18:443 - añade un k aqui por lo mismo.
8. 01:21:657 - un k aqui por lo mismo que ^?
9. 01:24:872 - añade un k aqui por la misma razon del spread.
10. 01:27:952 - añade k en 01:27:952 - 01:28:086 - 01:28:488 - y 01:28:756 - para el spread.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:25:943 - aun no es el kiai y esto es casi igual de denso que en la Oni, asi que sugiero eliminar esta nota.
2. 00:27:818 - añade un k aqui para mejorar el spread.
3. 00:29:157 - un d aqui por lo mismo que ^.
4. 00:31:836 - añadir un k aqui? ya que tienes un pattern bastante largo en la Oni en esta parte.
5. 00:32:639 - recomiendo eliminar esta nota ya que es muy parecido a la Oni.
6. 00:36:523 - añade un d aqui para mejorar el spread con la Oni, ademas creo que dddk ddddk queda bastante bien.
7. 00:52:729 - añade k aqui para mejorar el spread.
8. 00:53:532 - lo mismo ^.
9. 00:54:336 - ^.
10. 00:55:139 - ^.
11. 00:55:943 - ^.
12. 00:56:747 - ^.
13. 00:57:818 - añade un d aqui por lo mismo.
14. 01:19:782 - añade un k aqui y en 01:20:854 - para mejorar el spread.
15. 01:22:997 - quiza un d vendria bien aqui por la misma razon.
16. 01:23:666 - por que esta parte esta vacia y en la Kantan y Futsuu si? recomiendo añadir algunas notas.
17. 01:30:497 - añade un d aqui para el spread.
18. 01:43:086 - esto es exactamente igual a la Oni, recomiendo hacerlo mas corto eliminando esta nota.
19. 01:48:711 - un k aqui por el spread?
20. 01:54:604 - cambia 01:54:604 - y 01:54:671 - a k para hacer este triplete a kkk, no has usado ddk en todo el mapa y esto es una Muzukashii, asi que recomiendo hacerlo mas simple con kkk. se que es una muzu y me han dicho lo mismo lo dejo por que quiero hace esto como un pequeño reto para los nuevos, es como que hacerles aprender un nuevo patron para hacerle el FC es una pequeña idea que tengo desde hace 1 año como ya pudiste ver XD por esa razon aun no la cambio... esperare a ver que dicen de esta idea los demas.

[Oni]

1. 00:57:550 - sugiero eliminar esta nota ya que este pattern es demasiado largo para una Oni normal y considerando que el bpm es 224 es bastante agotador.
2. 01:24:939 - tienes una nota en la Muzukashii aqui pero no en la Oni, añade un k.

[Ayyri's Inner Oni]

1. 00:26:613 - i know what are you trying to do, but i think from 00:26:613 - to 00:27:014 - aren't necessary these inherit points, adding one inherit at 00:26:412 - with x1.00 of sv it's fine imo.
2. 00:52:059 - i think this note sounds more like D than a K, so i suggest changing to D as it's easier to hit the big note too?
3. 00:52:863 - if you applied ^ i suggest doing the same in 00:52:863 - 00:54:470 - 00:55:282 - and 00:56:077 - .

[Ura Oni]

1. 00:39:068 - cambiar esta nota a k y 00:39:202 - a D? ya que 00:39:068 - suena mas como k debido al pitch y 00:39:202 - mas grave.
2. 01:30:497 - igual que ^, cambiar 01:30:497 - a k y 01:30:631 - a D?

Creo que las diffs bajas aun necesitan su trabajo, por ahora solo puedo desearte suerte, animo~

Surono wrote:

hate me

kwek

Surono wrote:

Futsu ~ Oni and madness Ura I guess that makes dem this set, if you think its rip you could start other songs that plan to map. :C

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Well hello. M4M promise through in-game.

[General]

00:04:849 (16,17) - Shift those 1/12 snap back for all diffs, the piano notes are coming on that spot.

01:34:849 (543) - This sound is on 1/3 snap, not 1/4.

[Ura Oni]

00:10:675 (38,39) - Change those to kat? You followed the high piano notes starting from 00:09:202 (32,33,34) - here and the two notes I mentioned have the same keyboard pitch with 00:10:273 (37) - this note. not really >_> i follow the clock sound XD and those notes are lower than 00:10:273 (37) -

00:16:166 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - Differ these two? I mean, all the other sections have different notes on different sounds so I think you can vary this one too. My suggestion will be 00:17:171 (86) - deleting this note. It will emphasize the keyboard sound on 00:17:104 (85) - this note better. i need to comment this, nice!

00:19:715 (109,110) - Personal opinion, but I'd reverse them. In that way the pattern can emphasize the keyboard sounds better. no because 00:20:720 (113,116,118,120) - all are kats xD big kats

00:37:863 (245) - Change to kat due to the snare and keyboard sound.

00:45:363 (285,286,287) - ddk? That way you can put dons for low pitch sounds and kat for a high pitch sound and will follow the keyboard better this way.

00:48:577 (298,302) - Change those ones to k, in order to follow the high pitch keyboard sounds.

00:48:979 (300,304) - These two seems overmapped, there are no sounds on them and no need to put any because of the difficulty spread. That looks bad this way. wot that part have a sound like 00:44:023 (279,280,281,282) -

00:59:358 (388,389) - Ctrl + g? Will follow the drums better.

00:59:916 (397) - k here to maintain consistency with 01:00:988 (413) - this one.

01:01:434 (417,418,419,420,421,422) - Instead of kd (dddk), I recommend 1/6 kdddddk, there are no 1/4 sounds on that pattern.

01:05:586 (445) - Delete? There is no sound on it.

01:07:461 (459) - Move this one 1/4 snap further (on 01:07:528 - this spot) to follow the keyboard and drum sounds together. dK, that's a little Extreme for this i mean is too hard...

01:10:943 (492,493) - Ctrl + g? Will follow the drums better since there is a snare sound on 01:11:077 - this.

01:30:296 (651) - Delete this one to maintain consistency with other parts (a.k.a 00:38:867 - this spot for example.)

01:34:849 (672) - Sounds better in 1/3 snap, I mean on 01:34:827 - this spot.

01:49:113 (767,768,769,770,771,772) - These are in 1/3, not 1/2.

That's all for this difficulty.

[Ayyri's Inner Oni]

00:04:849 (16,17) - If Shinsekai- applies on my suggestion in Inner Oni, you should shift these two 1/12 snap back.

00:26:947 - Add a note here? You didn't skip the keyboard sound on the first pattern. (00:14:090 (57) - This note I mean.)

00:29:827 (155,156) - I don't know having this doublet on Inner Oni, since it doesn't exist in Ura Oni. But I understand your reason to map it that way because it supports the keyboard sounds.

01:00:363 (331,332,333) - Change to ddddk in 1/4? Will create a better spread with Ura Oni and support the drum sounds on them.

01:22:327 (469,471) - I don't get it the special reason about mapping them as finishers. I think you can remove them and add a note to 01:22:528 - here if you don't want to create a single 5-plet 1/2 pattern.

That's all for this difficulty.

[Oni]

00:18:778 (92) - I think you can remove this one, you don't have 5-plets until this pattern.

00:38:934 (211,212,213) - The sounds are the same you've followed so I recommend changing this one to kkk in order to follow the other difficulties and follow the sounds better. same has before

00:50:452 (307,308) - These two are DONs on Ura Oni, and it fits well so I recommend changing to them in this difficulty as well.

00:51:858 - Add a note? The snares are going all the way with it and it'll create a better spread with Inner Oni.

01:15:564 - Add a don here, it'll support the kick sound on that spot.

01:35:452 (529,530) - This gap is inconsistent with other part even though the sounds are the same. I think you can add a note here. i knopw but the oni need a break i think..

01:43:287 - Same suggestion with 01:15:564.

01:52:863 (617,618,619) - I understand if you've followed the keyboard but I think you need to follow drums since you're following them on this 1/3 spot already, and it'll create a better structure. My recommendation would be kkkd. i put that like a kkd cuz 1/6 sound

That's all for this diff.

[Muzukashii]

00:31:501 - You don't have a note on Oni, so you can delete this one because there is no sound on it.

00:36:122 (141) - This note looks weird, but it'll be good if you move 1/2 snap further. (00:36:256 - on this spot.) At least it'll follow drums this way.

00:38:934 (154) - I strongly recommend changing this one to a triplet. (kkk would be good.) no cuz other diff are k d follow the sound to higher to minimum

00:39:202 - You can follow the keyboard on Ura Oni, that way it sounds better. No need to change because of the difficulty spread, the notes are already coming in 1/1.

01:30:363 - Same suggestion with 00:38:934. Can you xplainme this on game? ^^;;

That's all for this diff.

[Futsuu]

00:18:979 (43,44) - Ctrl + g on those? Will create diversity with 00:15:764 (34,35) - these two.

01:30:229 - Add a note here to maintain consistency with 00:38:800 (98) - this.

01:35:050 (247) - No sound on this note, deleting it will be good. 'kay

01:43:488 - This kiai doesn't seem emphasized enough, it needs some 1/2 sounds on good spots. I recommend 01:48:711 - this gap because there is a snare sound on it. i don't want make it too dense

That's all for this difficulty.

[Kantan]

00:25:273 (32) - Change to kat? Will support the keyboard sound on it. changed this one 00:25:541 (33) - can help maybe

I'm not experienced mapping Kantan so that'll be my only suggestion.

I hope my mod helps, good luck on the ranking way!

Nyan wrote:

ye Kantan to Oni is good enough

[Muzukashii]

01:43:488 - Get back to 1.00x AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA D:! FORGOT TY TY TY

[Ura Oni]


to


01:09:872 (477,478,479) - kdd
01:16:568 (525,526,527) - kkkkk or kkkkd
01:27:416 (626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633) - you can add some notes here like other parts of that Kiai

Kantan

Futsuu

Muzukashii

Oni

Inner Oni

JessiChan wrote:

Kantan

1. 00:02:238 (2) - 00:10:273 (8) - Lo mejor es que las mantengas todas azules, ya que estás poniéndolas donde suena el tic tac ese no se, lo que sea. Y así aprovechas y quizá baje las estrellas para que sea un verdadero Kantan
2. 00:22:327 (21) - Póngale azul también, suena bien y recuerda esto, es Kantan y si es cool a veces romper unas que otras reglas, pero si está empezando lo mejor es que este seguimiento de tres notas sea unicolor, como en este caso que te estoy recomendando cambiarlo a azul, no sonará mal, creeme.
3. 00:28:220 (30) - Es mejor que este lo muevas para aca: 00:27:684 -
4. 00:29:827 (33) - Ese para aca: 00:29:291 - Y este: 00:30:363 (34) - Lo cambies a azul
5. 00:35:184 (40) - Cambie a azul, baje las estrellitas mi amor.
6. 00:39:202 (47) - Cambialo a azul asi das seguimiento a la nota que le prosigue pues xDD como al inicio con el tic tac y es más fácil para los kantan players si borras esta: 00:38:934 (46) -
7. 01:04:648 (83) - Borra esa nota para que no se haga tan difícil el big que le sigue.
8. 01:14:291 (96) - Mueve ese para aca: 01:13:756 - Es mejor y da más espacio para la big mi amor ♥
9. 01:17:506 (102) - Borra la notita
10. 01:30:363 (123) - Igual ^
11. 01:37:059 (131) - Recuerda el tic tac, azul
12. 01:39:470 (133) - Y aca igual
13. 01:49:648 (150) - Borra esa y la nota que le sigue cambiala a rojo

Futsuu

1. Bueno hijo bello, intentemos algo ¿Si? (aplica lo que te diré y si no te gusta le das a volver a lo guardado completo)
   º 00:15:764 (31) - 00:18:979 (40) - Borra esas, no suena mal pero le da demasiada stars a la diff
   º 00:17:506 (36) - Cambiala a azul
   º 00:19:916 (43) - Y cambiala a rojo.
2. 00:49:648 (120) - Puedes cambiarlo a azul para variar, ya que este azul aca es importante en ese tic tac
3. 00:56:077 (135) - Azul
4. 01:04:113 (157) - Azul y así entregas más fácil las siguientes notas
5. 01:26:881 (223) - Elimina esa nota :3
6. 01:49:381 (274) - Elimina esta

Muzukashii

1. 00:21:523 (79) - Cambialo a Rojo
2. 00:34:381 (135) - Igual
3. 00:38:934 (153) - Azul
4. Hagamos algo, que esto aca es difícil para estos players: 00:52:863 (201,202) - ctrl y estos: 00:53:666 (205) - 00:54:470 (209) - Azules
5. 00:56:077 (214,215) - 00:56:881 (218,219) - ctrl también ^
6. 00:57:818 (222) - 00:58:889 (227) - rojo por favor ewe
7. 01:10:943 (277) - Cambialo a rojo
8. 01:14:023 (291) - Rojo también
9. 01:20:452 (323) - un azul sería increíble
10. 01:20:854 (325,326) - Ctrl + g a este para que combine con lo anterior que te dije
11. 01:43:488 (420,421) - 01:44:291 (424,425) - ctrl + g y a este: 01:44:827 (426) - azul
12. 01:46:434 (434,435,436,437) - ddd k
13. 01:50:452 (454) - Azul 01:51:791 (460,461,462,463) - kkk d

Oni

1. 00:15:564 (66,67) - haz ctrl + g o_o suena chévere asi
2. 00:16:970 (76,77) - ctrl + g
3. 00:17:773 (82) - Azul
4. 00:26:613 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - Invierte todos los colores, o sea kkddk d k
5. 00:27:684 (140) - Azul
6. 00:29:157 (150,151) - ctrl + g
7. 00:51:858 (260) - Borra eso, confunde
8. 00:57:952 (301) - Azul
9. 00:58:488 (306) - Rojo
10. 01:15:497 (403,404,405) - No entendi eso, borra la nota azul y corres la siguiente nota a donde estaba el azul, o sea quedaría d d
11. 01:28:689 (491,492) - y 01:29:626 (499,500) - ctrl + g
12. 01:43:287 (556) - Borra esa nota
13. 01:46:434 (575,577) - ctrl + g

Inner Oni

1. 00:17:840 (90,91) - ctrl + g?
2. 00:23:867 (130,131) - ctrl + g
3. 00:24:604 (136) - Azul
4. 01:08:599 (466,467) - ctrl + g ewe no me suenan bien esos dkd
5. 01:11:077 (490,491,492) - Iguaal ewe
6. 01:27:014 - Sería genial si agregaras un rojo aca

Buena suerte hijo :3

Vulkin wrote:

should i become BN to bubble this?

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~ Shinsekai-
From my modding queue as you've request NM on here =w=
Sorry for a late ;-; oh np np XD
Let's have a look on this nice music! >w<

[ Overall]
On Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii
00:00:631 moves to 00:00:764 - I think that player will follow the pitch which it's powerful. Since, 00:00:764 have a pitch which it's stronger than 00:00:631. So I think that to move, it'll be better for the ease of player to follow the notable pitch. hmmm -w- i follow the Clock sound tic toc tic toc tic toc that's why but let's give a try
PS. If moved, change it to d due to the pitch.

[ Kantan]
Note : I found that we have too much k on Kantan, a newbie hates k , including me when I'm new to Taiko, so considering to change some lower pitch if we have to compare to the nearby note to d
This point, I'm talking to
00:03:845 - Compare to the piano sound on 00:02:238
00:07:059 - Compare to 00:05:452
00:10:273 - BG music was lost in this point, give me a feeling of d more than k
all acepted

[ Futsuu]
00:03:845 / 00:07:059 / 00:10:273 - d . As I've said before on Kantan.

00:39:939 - How about move green line here to 00:40:006 ? , For consistency of green line on 00:39:738 eeeh :0 the green line is fine... xD
00:47:238 (111,112,113,114) - Maybe d d k d , in order to emphasize 00:47:773 pitch which it's different from the others.
00:51:256 - How about d , similar rhythm to 00:49:381 (117,118)
Kay :3 all acepted again

[ Muzukashii]
Except from the overall suggestion.
Others are good to go~ :3

[ Oni]
01:02:372 / 01:03:175 - Deleted , since I've noticed that you follow the pitch like 01:04:648 (336,337,338) more than drums sound since you've ignore the drum sound on 01:04:381 , so consider to delete to make a difference from 01:02:372 (330,331) which it have 1/2 rhythm and 01:04:648 (336,337,338) which it have 1/4 rhythm
01:03:041 / 01:03:309 - Change this point to k D , for the consistency of pattern if we have compare this point to Muzukashii. In Muzukashii, 01:03:041 is k and 01:03:309 is D
01:54:604 (616,617,618) - Change to kkd , since 01:54:738 is a low pitch , deserved to d more than k in this part. And to make some difference to 01:53:800 (611,613)

[ Ayyri's Inner Oni]
00:00:631 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe change this to match Oni / Ura Oni , I understand that this is your GD , but I think that player will be confused if they found that the pattern is different.
00:52:059 (264,269,279,286,296) - Maybe change to D , different pitch compare to 00:53:666 which it's higher than 00:52:059 (264,269,279,286,296)
01:03:041 (352,353,354) - How about k k D due to 01:03:041 have a higher pitch than 01:03:309 and for the consistency of the finisher on 01:02:506

[ Ura Oni]
I just curious that why the green line like 00:39:403 is not placed to the note position. In my opinion, The green line should be placed in the same position that you've put a note.is ok... Some times you will need move the green line one space behind xD

00:50:988 - Maybe K , to make a difference to 00:50:452 which it have a lower pitch. no, cuz that sound is a drum sound...
00:55:006 (342,343,344,345,346) - How about ddddk ? , seems fitter in order t make a difference to 00:55:809 (348,349,350,351,352)

tbh,this map is flawless for me! :3
Hope this can help you some.
Good luck!

Alepat wrote:

Ha pasado mucho tiempo desde que puse #FIXAPPLIQUE Cuanto a que lo vuelvo mierda de nuevo por que a nadie le gusta el map ewe , veo que se ha fixeado! déjame arreglar el hashtag...

#FIXEDAPPLIQUE

Como muestra de gratitud, hice un vídeo gameplay para la ocasión, por si lo quieren ver: https://youtu.be/J9rCEuFQV54

DustMoon wrote:

I'm noob modder
d=Don
D=Big Don
k=Katsu
K=Big Katsu

URAURAURA

00:21:523 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - dkkdkkd ,ah00:21:523 (125) - 00:21:925 (128) - 00:22:327 (131) - are big sound you're right

00:31:434 (215) - d

00:45:497 (302,303) - Ctrl+g

00:49:648 (319) - same00:50:184 (322) - sound,plz use same kathmmm

01:01:434 (444) - d

01:16:635 (555) - d
01:29:492 (684) - k

01:57:952 (894) - Don,happy end no cuz I'm folling the clock

1. 00:04:850 (16,17) - I found out that these two should be 1/8 shifted back. On 25% speed it fits really well, so consider it changing.
2. 00:15:430 - To keep the notes equal stanza by stanza (except the first one due to the keyboard), add a note here (suggestion, kat), 00:17:305 - here (kat)
   , 00:17:037 (84) - change this to don in order to represent the keyboard shift change.
3. 00:19:916 (110,111,112,113) - I liked K d d K much more, rather than this. The KAT finishers represent the drum hit way better.
4. 00:48:979 (299,303) - Those two are overmapped unneccessarily, and I don't see a reason to put those notes there. The section goes 1/2 notes only, and that's not a good spot for variation.
5. 01:10:139 (480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492) - About this, how about 01:10:139 (480) - turning this to a don, 01:10:273 (481,482,483,484,485) - kdkkd, 01:10:675 (486,487,488,489) - ddk d, 01:11:077 (490,491,492) - kkk ? Will follow everything better in my opinion.
6. 01:29:626 - Add a don here in order to emphasize the drum sound. (Trill sound, I mean.)
7. 01:32:773 (667) - Kat, due to keyboard pitch.
8. 01:37:327 (686,687) - Ctrl + g on those, same reason as above.
9. 01:38:131 (689) - Kat, same reason.
10. 01:40:006 - 01:40:809 - 01:41:613 - Also, turn these to kats in order to represent the keyboard better.

1. 00:26:345 (131) - While Ura Oni doesn't have finishers after streams, I think the Inner should not have them as well.
2. 00:01:032 (3,4) - Same pitch, same pattern? Would flow better.
3. 00:19:715 - Add a don here to keep intensity with the previous pattern.
4. 00:29:827 - Hmm, I don't know if it matches the structure. Even if the keyboard supports this kind of pattern, I think simplifying it would be better, since on Ura Oni it's simpler.
5. 00:38:465 (203) - Delete this note and 00:38:532 (204) - change this to don to make it more simple, because the usage of 1/6 kkkd on Inner Oni is a bit hard in my opinion. Also, it will match with Oni, which is better than this.
6. 01:01:300 - I think you should delete this note in order to provide some difficulty spread with Ura Oni.
7. 01:04:648 (360,361) - What those finishers represent? Simple kats would work better on them.
8. 01:07:863 (375,376,377,378) - This can be changed to kkd 1/4, the trill sound is not that prominent compared to others.
9. 01:14:291 - ^
10. 01:17:238 - ^
11. 01:30:095 - ^
12. 01:34:827 (545) - This should be snapped on 1/3, like Ura Oni.

1. 00:13:488 - Some of the patterns are easier on Inner Oni. Always try to keep the spread between them.
2. 00:14:559 (57,58,59,60,61) - Keep the structure you're following, no need to a 5-plet there.
3. 00:21:925 (105,106) - Reverse those to match with Ura Oni. This applies on 00:34:782 (182,183) - those two as well.
4. 00:30:028 (158) - Delete this one to keep the structure.
5. 00:45:095 - Delete this one to emphasize the next triplet.
6. 00:57:818 (298,299) - Swap those to provide a simpler rhythm.
7. 00:58:488 - From here, I think ddd kkd k suit better. It will also match the next structure.
8. 01:01:099 (323) - Deleting this will provide the same break that declared on Ayyri's Inner Oni and Ura Oni.
9. 01:11:881 (378,379) - Suggestion: Turn them into kats to define the pitch change on keyboard.
10. 01:15:229 (395,396,397) - Instead of kkd, how about dk starting from the blue tick? Will emphasize better to keyboard.
11. 01:20:318 (432) - Delete this note to provide the structure you've created.
12. 01:27:416 (476,477) - This break is too much, add a note on to the middle. Suggestion: don.
13. 01:28:756 (484) - Kat to emphasize the keyboard. It will also fit with Ura Oni.
14. 01:46:613 (568) - I think this should be changed to don, to create a simpler pattern.
15. 01:54:470 (615,616,617,618) - k ddk to unify them with Ura Oni.

1. 00:49:113 (187,190) - Delete those to make a difference between Oni and this.
2. 01:21:657 - Keep the rhythm you're following. A triplet is too much there, since there are 2 keyboard notes. Just map it as 1/2 and since it's kiai, you cna add a note on 01:21:256 - this spot. Or, you can map them as a 1/4 doublet, like kk.
3. 01:24:939 - ^
4. 01:54:738 (472) - Kat to unify them with Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni. This may apply to all lower diffs.

1. 00:00:764 (1) - That was a weird start. For the sake of structure, move that to white tick.
2. 00:45:631 (108,110) - Same pitches, they should be same. I recommend keeping them as kats.
3. 00:48:041 (114) - ^
4. 00:49:381 (117,118) - Ctrl + g for the sake of keyboard.
5. 01:16:166 (189,190) - Considering how intense this part on Muzukashii, add some notes (mainly 1/1) to keep the difficulty spread.
6. 01:50:452 - Starting from here, vary this part. 2-plets are going too much, especially d k and k d would be boring after a while.

1. 00:13:488 - Make this part harder, to create a variation with intro, and to create a better build up to 00:19:916 - this part.
2. 00:21:925 (16) - Even though it's obvious enough, I think you should remove this. 3/2 rhythm on Kantan would be confusing on this tempo.
3. 00:38:666 (37) - On this tempo, I think you're not supposed to use a complex 1/1 pattern like k k d K, instead, delete this note and it will also provide a better kiai-ending.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello there.

[General]

01:30:631 - Decrease the volume after the note, like on that spot. Check everywhere on this, I don't want to point out on every diff.

[Ura Oni]

1. 00:04:850 (16,17) - I found out that these two should be 1/8 shifted back. On 25% speed it fits really well, so consider it changing.
2. 00:15:430 - To keep the notes equal stanza by stanza (except the first one due to the keyboard), add a note here (suggestion, kat), 00:17:305 - here (kat)
   , 00:17:037 (84) - change this to don in order to represent the keyboard shift change.
3. 00:19:916 (110,111,112,113) - I liked K d d K much more, rather than this. The KAT finishers represent the drum hit way better.
4. 00:48:979 (299,303) - Those two are overmapped unneccessarily, and I don't see a reason to put those notes there. The section goes 1/2 notes only, and that's not a good spot for variation.
5. 01:10:139 (480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492) - About this, how about 01:10:139 (480) - turning this to a don, 01:10:273 (481,482,483,484,485) - kdkkd, 01:10:675 (486,487,488,489) - ddk d, 01:11:077 (490,491,492) - kkk ? Will follow everything better in my opinion.
6. 01:29:626 - Add a don here in order to emphasize the drum sound. (Trill sound, I mean.)
7. 01:32:773 (667) - Kat, due to keyboard pitch.
8. 01:37:327 (686,687) - Ctrl + g on those, same reason as above.
9. 01:38:131 (689) - Kat, same reason.
10. 01:40:006 - 01:40:809 - 01:41:613 - Also, turn these to kats in order to represent the keyboard better.

[Oni]

1. 00:13:488 - Some of the patterns are easier on Inner Oni. Always try to keep the spread between them.
2. 00:14:559 (57,58,59,60,61) - Keep the structure you're following, no need to a 5-plet there.
3. 00:21:925 (105,106) - Reverse those to match with Ura Oni. This applies on 00:34:782 (182,183) - those two as well.
4. 00:30:028 (158) - Delete this one to keep the structure.
5. 00:45:095 - Delete this one to emphasize the next triplet.
6. 00:57:818 (298,299) - Swap those to provide a simpler rhythm.
7. 00:58:488 - From here, I think ddd kkd k suit better. It will also match the next structure.
8. 01:01:099 (323) - Deleting this will provide the same break that declared on Ayyri's Inner Oni and Ura Oni.
9. 01:11:881 (378,379) - Suggestion: Turn them into kats to define the pitch change on keyboard.
10. 01:15:229 (395,396,397) - Instead of kkd, how about dk starting from the blue tick? Will emphasize better to keyboard.
11. 01:20:318 (432) - Delete this note to provide the structure you've created.
12. 01:27:416 (476,477) - This break is too much, add a note on to the middle. Suggestion: don.
13. 01:28:756 (484) - Kat to emphasize the keyboard. It will also fit with Ura Oni.
14. 01:46:613 (568) - I think this should be changed to don, to create a simpler pattern.
15. 01:54:470 (615,616,617,618) - k ddk to unify them with Ura Oni.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:49:113 (187,190) - Delete those to make a difference between Oni and this.
2. 01:21:657 - Keep the rhythm you're following. A triplet is too much there, since there are 2 keyboard notes. Just map it as 1/2 and since it's kiai, you cna add a note on 01:21:256 - this spot. Or, you can map them as a 1/4 doublet, like kk.
3. 01:24:939 - ^
4. 01:54:738 (472) - Kat to unify them with Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni. This may apply to all lower diffs.

General suggestion: Recheck the finisher usages. If you mapped it as DON on a diff, make sure you change it to here.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:00:764 (1) - That was a weird start. For the sake of structure, move that to white tick.
2. 00:45:631 (108,110) - Same pitches, they should be same. I recommend keeping them as kats.
3. 00:48:041 (114) - ^
4. 00:49:381 (117,118) - Ctrl + g for the sake of keyboard.
5. 01:16:166 (189,190) - Considering how intense this part on Muzukashii, add some notes (mainly 1/1) to keep the difficulty spread.
6. 01:50:452 - Starting from here, vary this part. 2-plets are going too much, especially d k and k d would be boring after a while.

[Kantan]

1. 00:13:488 - Make this part harder, to create a variation with intro, and to create a better build up to 00:19:916 - this part.
2. 00:21:925 (16) - Even though it's obvious enough, I think you should remove this. 3/2 rhythm on Kantan would be confusing on this tempo.
3. 00:38:666 (37) - On this tempo, I think you're not supposed to use a complex 1/1 pattern like k k d K, instead, delete this note and it will also provide a better kiai-ending.

Before I go on this further, I think you should get more mods on this. Call me back when you get 3 more. oke doke

Axer wrote:

Muzukashii

01:15:296 - there's no noise here there is a noise but it's too faint to notice, instead move it to 01:15:564 -
http://puu.sh/xJ11n/cc4ae0a00d.png
to
http://puu.sh/xJ11S/eb6e83e21c.png
01:34:827 - there are a bunch of doubles already on the map so one double here wouldn't hurt and it fits

Oni

01:34:827 (508) - move to 01:34:833 -

That's about it, Ura Oni is a masterpiece, the song is lit and everything is great.
Don't know why this isn't ranked yet, it's hq.
Good luck either way!

Zetera wrote:

Heyo, M4M. (Street - Hacking Code)

Gosh, this is hard to mod, there is barely anything I would like to suggest!

[General]

Your OD/HP gaps look a little bit inconsistent, why not use some decimals? This is absolutely optional, though. i need think about it ewe

[Kantan]

This is a personal preference, but I feel like 00:51:256 (48) - just screams for a K instead of a k.

[Futsuu]

I feel like starting with SVs in the Muzu is a great setup. Are you sure about using SV in this diff? I thought the doubles at 00:39:738 - may be very hard to read.
01:26:881 - I bet this got removed because of a mod. I think putting a k here too doesn't add too much intensity and it follows the music just right.
[Muzukashii]

00:51:256 - might as well be a triplet, because that's what you did at 01:42:684 - , and these two patterns are consistent in your oni diff.

01:53:131 - I don't know whether this is intentional, but I feel like it's horrible to read. I'd just stick with x1.00!

[Oni]

From this point on, there is a pattern that concerns me personally quite a bit. I am a kkdd player, and thinking back to my days of training, patterns like 00:51:256 - really killed me. Especially on this speed, kkk k k k k is extremely hard to hit. However, I see this as an opportunity to include a hard, practisable element into a ranked map, which is why I think it should be included in this particular diff as it is. There is more of a problem with that in the Inner Oni though.

You could nerf that pattern a little bit by reducing the muzukashii pattern to k k k k k k D and using kkk k k D in the Oni, but you don't necessarily have to.

[Inner Oni]

You might want to use the volume settings that were used in the Ura Oni or the Oni.

00:51:256 - This pattern is straight up harder in the Inner than in the Ura. It is hard to estimate when to stop hitting ks, and before you even notice it, you have either gone out of stamina or hit the K at the end way too early. The Ura Oni has the advantage of using a d at the end of the stream, making it a little bit easier to control. This stream right here, however, doesn't only avoid stopping with a d, but also follows upo with a K finisher. That's detrimental for kkdd players and possibly even improving kddk players; not to mention that the next few patterns are solely ks. I feel like the stream would benefit from going away from the monos and towards using a little bit more complexity, e.g. kkkkddddkkk D.

Another very hard pattern is 00:38:398 -. The fast singletapping speed of the ks is the most pungent factor that makes the switch to tapping the 1/6 patterns very difficult. How about this for a change? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9187036




That's it. I can't mod the Ura, I think it's optimal. Good luck! TY

TKS wrote:

Hi, i will almost leave out the suggestion of color changing.

[diffspread]

• 
  let me point out some spread thing as below.

1. 00:00:631 - ~ 00:13:488 - between Kantan to Futsuu has relatively good spread, but Futsuu to Muzukashii seems not good to be honest. you should remove some notes of Muzukashii to make more better spread. (also you can notice that your diffs are lacking the consistency like 00:00:631 (1) - only has don in Futsuu. )
   
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2. 00:13:488 - ~ 00:19:916 - in Futsuu, i dont know the reason why you are following too complex rhythms there. i think that this part is almost harder than Muzukashii.
3. 00:51:322 (193) - in Muzukashii or Oni, there is no reason to have the same pattern. nerf Muzukashii or just add notes for Oni (eg. kkk kkk k k d).
   
   although there is no big diffspread problem as far as i can see, the mapset still has room for improvement.
   
   [Kantan]
   1. 00:13:488 - ~00:18:309 - twins are quite hard for Kantan. also 00:26:345 - ~ 00:31:166 - has enough breaks even though the part has more strong melody than the previous part.
   2. 00:15:898 (14) - should be removed finisher. just see Futsuu ~ Oni.
   [Futsuu]
   1. 00:38:800 (92) - absolutely no needed.
   2. 00:44:827 (105) - make break here. this is actually calm part that needs enough break.
   3. 00:47:238 (109) - why you suddenly stop to follow tick sound. main melody also has high pitched.
   4. 00:57:416 (134) - remove. a bit hard rhythm for Futsuu.
   5. 01:30:229 (230) - sounds weird. the same as 00:38:800 -
   6. 01:36:256 (239) - remove. the same reason as 00:44:827 -
   [Muzukashii]
   1. 01:23:264 (338) - should be moved to 01:23:331 - . you did it in calm part 01:34:849 -
   [Oni]
   1. 01:34:849 - easier than Muzukashii...
   [Ura Oni]
   1. 00:04:883 (16) - snap to 1/4 correctly. 1/8 makes really no sense.
   2. 01:34:827 (676) - snap to 1/4 correctly. 1/3 makes really no sense.

you are really wondering about the diffspread but there is no serious problem. if i had to say, i think that you are lacking of respecting song. therefore, some part has really imbalanced pattern, lacks the consistency, and ruins quality of the set. i dont mean this is a bad map but the set needs more mod tbh.

good luck anyway.