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Rizen
did soem final touchups c:

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00:25 Lilyanna: u like?
00:25 Rizen: nicely polished
00:25 Lilyanna: the jumps were little messy
00:25 Lilyanna: and i created these flower jumps xd
00:26 Lilyanna: idk im bad when it comes to insanes but i had to :3
00:26 Rizen: it plays nicely
00:26 Rizen: if ur goin for aesthetics, maybe flower shape at 01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - ?
00:26 Rizen: also there's a bit of inconsistency in the chorus
00:27 Lilyanna: yes i tried to do flower there
00:27 Lilyanna: but then i found i could stack objects also that shape is nice xD
00:27 Lilyanna: where is it pls the inconsistency
00:27 Lilyanna: ;w;
00:27 Lilyanna: ill fix it
00:28 Lilyanna: before bn checks it and hate me
00:28 Rizen: u know how there are these sounds in the chorus
00:28 Rizen: 00:50:543 (6) -
00:28 Rizen: the drum
00:28 Lilyanna: yes they all on head of a 1/2 slider
00:29 Lilyanna: not all
00:29 Rizen: 01:23:056 (5) -
00:29 Lilyanna: but consistent one is circle and one is slider
00:29 Lilyanna: ahh
00:30 Lilyanna: he said he wanted to do emphasize on vocal
00:30 Lilyanna: there
00:30 Lilyanna: so the mods
00:30 Lilyanna: like mrsergio and phkg
00:30 Lilyanna: told him to map it with sliders
00:30 Rizen: ah
00:30 Lilyanna: so i fixed that ;w;
00:30 Rizen: 01:00:595 (1,2) - could be circle into slider instead
00:30 Lilyanna: 01:20:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - like here
00:30 Rizen: cos vocals there is like on evry whhite tick
00:31 Rizen: ah, but that time has the drum with a clickable circle
00:31 Lilyanna: yes true
00:31 Lilyanna: :o
00:31 Lilyanna: i can add cirlce on 01:00:595 -
00:31 Lilyanna: and then 1/2 slider in downbeat?
00:32 Lilyanna: 01:00:909 (2) - this is not too strong right?
00:32 Rizen: yeah
00:32 Lilyanna: ok >w<
00:32 Rizen: wait
00:32 Lilyanna: yes
00:33 Rizen: yeah
00:33 Rizen: that's fine
00:33 Lilyanna: xD
00:33 Lilyanna: so i change how i said?
00:33 Rizen: yeah
00:33 Rizen: 01:01:380 (4) - could be two circles too
00:33 Lilyanna: okay
00:34 Rizen: because of two drum hits and also for consistencyy with 01:21:485 (3,4) -
00:34 Lilyanna: meh i like how the 1/2 go well with vocals thats highlights more the drums when there jumps
00:35 Lilyanna: oh
00:35 Lilyanna: i see
00:35 Lilyanna: fdsfdsdg
00:36 Rizen: maybe 01:13:632 (3) - could be two circles too
00:37 Rizen: cos vocal at 01:13:789 - is rather strong
00:37 Rizen: and this part of the half kiai isn't as similar to teh first half kiai
00:39 Lilyanna: okay
00:39 Lilyanna: im going to let it variated
00:40 Lilyanna: one kiai i let the 1/2
00:40 Lilyanna: and other ill let 2 circles
00:40 Rizen: yeah
00:40 Lilyanna: can that make sense?
00:40 Lilyanna: since they both work tbh
00:40 Rizen: the vocals are slightly different between the two
00:40 Rizen: i mean like
00:41 Rizen: 01:13:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs 00:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:41 Rizen: can hear a clear difference in vocals
00:41 Lilyanna: ye
00:42 Lilyanna: so i make 01:13:632 (3) - circles?
00:43 Rizen: yr
00:43 Lilyanna: and this 01:03:108 (1,2) - ctrl g?
00:43 Rizen: yeahh
00:44 Lilyanna: ok omg
00:45 Rizen: also about 01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:45 Rizen: maybe try a jump sequence like [https://puu.sh/uOrag/d01d0692f9.png this] instead
00:45 Rizen: so 01:17:401 (2) - has spacing emphasis
00:48 Rizen: tell me what u think :o
00:49 Lilyanna: i didnt want 2 to have jumps so it feels like the spacing is increasing
00:49 Rizen: but yeah taht's about it
00:49 Lilyanna: but
00:49 Lilyanna: u know more xd
00:49 Rizen: o
00:49 Rizen: if u don't agree, don't change it x.x
00:50 Rizen: if don't apply, mayb stack 01:17:401 (2) - with 01:15:988 (2) -
00:51 Lilyanna: i dont want stackss
00:51 Rizen: i mean like
00:51 Rizen: just for neatness
00:51 Rizen: not really a stack
00:51 Rizen: like what u did at 01:16:459 (4,4) -
00:51 Lilyanna: like look this jump 01:13:946 (5,6) -
00:51 Lilyanna: ahh
00:52 Lilyanna: fixed
00:52 Lilyanna: xd
00:52 Rizen: okie
ZekeyHache
ok let's see NO KUDOS let's see if they finally drop me from the bng with less activity xp

[General]
  1. First BPM line is actually 74 BPM~
[HB's Insane]
  1. 01:26:825 (6) - touches the score on 4:3 resolutions
I can't pass the last diff, which is demotivating for me to check this in more depth since I'm not allowed to nominate diffs I can't pass xp (and I usually check sets when I'm interested in nomination)

well, good luck! ;w;
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
well this is were i give up i guess gj u did it, i really tried everything all i get is weird excuses u guys demotivated me to even map in general i guess i quit untill i can try again when things really changes, but now its not fun anymore its not even worth to try this harder in such community , idk what i am mapping for anymore.

btw @ezek please some mappers rank something and they themselves can't even play or pass!
ZekeyHache
You don't have to give up just for that~ In some of my maps I had to wait extra months or even years to find someone who wants to nominate~ Just don't let the map on the graveyard and you'll find someone eventually~
And I know some mappers get their sets ranked when they can't even pass them, but because of the BNG rules, I am not allowed to nominate a set if I can't pass all the diffs because according to the rules, I cannot judge something I can't pass. So it's not up to me, don't take it personal~
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
okay i didnt know that and ye ill try not to give up >w< , thank you for ur time ezek!
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

ezek wrote:

ok let's see NO KUDOS let's see if they finally drop me from the bng with less activity xp

[General]
  1. First BPM line is actually 74 BPM~ checked more bpm with few people including Bonsai and its 74 so fixed


[HB's Insane]
  1. 01:26:825 (6) - touches the score on 4:3 resolutions fixed


I can't pass the last diff, which is demotivating for me to check this in more depth since I'm not allowed to nominate diffs I can't pass xp (and I usually check sets when I'm interested in nomination)

well, good luck! ;w;
ty ;w; updated
Zero__wind
recheck, no kd

General
Clear.

Easy
the map generally feels fine but I'm quite fed up with the hitsounding in the kiai tbh. I can see that you have made the hitsounds consistent in a way, but it's not matching with the music and it really doesn't sound that nice.
since the rhythm is sticked to 1/1 in this Easy, all you need to do is to use soft whistle on the 1st and 3rd white tick of every stanza like 00:49:443 - and 00:50:071 -
, while using soft clap for the 2nd and 4th white tick of every stanza instead, like 00:49:757 - and 00:50:386 - . in this way, your hitsounds can match with the music more accurately.
take some examples of what you need to fix:
00:49:443 (1) - soft whistle instead of clap at its end
00:50:700 (2) - ^
00:50:386 (2,1) - ^
00:54:469 (1) - soft whistle at the reversing point instead
00:56:354 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
00:56:668 (1) - soft clap instead of whistle for both its head and end
00:57:611 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
and on...

so you actually need to change quite some stuff if you agree on the reasoning, just be sure to make the whole kiai consistent if you decide to change

HB's Insane
00:38:448 (2) - missing clap
01:03:265 (1,2) - I think they're too close to each other can you move 2 to somewhere else to make the spacing more fitting? maybe something like this
01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to switch order like this to make the flow to 01:18:187 (1) - smoother?
01:22:428 (2) - should use soft clap on head for consistency
01:23:056 (5) - and probably remove the whistle on head for consistency

Normal and Hard are fine to me so this should be all

call me back
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

Zero__wind wrote:

recheck, no kd

General
Clear.

Easy
the map generally feels fine but I'm quite fed up with the hitsounding in the kiai tbh. I can see that you have made the hitsounds consistent in a way, but it's not matching with the music and it really doesn't sound that nice.
since the rhythm is sticked to 1/1 in this Easy, all you need to do is to use soft whistle on the 1st and 3rd white tick of every stanza like 00:49:443 - and 00:50:071 -
, while using soft clap for the 2nd and 4th white tick of every stanza instead, like 00:49:757 - and 00:50:386 - . in this way, your hitsounds can match with the music more accurately.
take some examples of what you need to fix:
00:49:443 (1) - soft whistle instead of clap at its end
00:50:700 (2) - ^
00:50:386 (2,1) - ^
00:54:469 (1) - soft whistle at the reversing point instead
00:56:354 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
00:56:668 (1) - soft clap instead of whistle for both its head and end
00:57:611 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
and on...

so you actually need to change quite some stuff if you agree on the reasoning, just be sure to make the whole kiai consistent if you decide to change
changed

HB's Insane
00:38:448 (2) - missing clap fixed
01:03:265 (1,2) - I think they're too close to each other can you move 2 to somewhere else to make the spacing more fitting? maybe something like this well i changed it but not like u said cuz will create big jump after also there is another object under it so i moved it up u will see
01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to switch order like this to make the flow to 01:18:187 (1) - smoother? aww fixed xd
01:22:428 (2) - should use soft clap on head for consistency oups is cuz i copy pasted the slider i forgot to fix hitsound fixed
01:23:056 (5) - and probably remove the whistle on head for consistency yep fixed

Normal and Hard are fine to me so this should be all

call me back
thank u >w<
Zero__wind
feels much better now
Rebubbled.
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
Thank you />w</
Nao Tomori
placeholdered like i promised
_handholding

Naotoshi wrote:

placeholdered like i promised
thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bn
Starset

Kisses wrote:

you're my favourite bn
Kaitjuh

Kisses wrote:

thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bn
i dont even know why this is becoming a thing
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
i dont get it o_o what happening
Log Off Now

Lilyanna wrote:

i dont get it o_o what happening
a meme my dear, a meme
Nao Tomori
we irc mod about rhythm and changed a pixel off blanket
Stjpa

Kisses wrote:

Naotoshi wrote:

placeholdered like i promised
thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bn
Namki
congrats <3
_handholding
I should GD all of lily's maps cos they all get ranked
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
lol kisses
Nao Tomori
i should convert all of kisses maps to taiko cuz they only follow drums /me runs
Jakomo73
Grats lilyanna :D
Haruto
aaand you rank this song before me LUL

Congrats anyway~
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
sorry Haruto and ur set is cool and more famous
and thx everyone
Kyouren
Gratzz but are you sure about metadata? I mean it's just different in intro

http://sayuri-web.com/sp/#!/discography ... sen-season

3. 平行線 -アニメ「クズの本懐」ED ver.-
IamKwaN
Different intro, why would we use another marker for the song then?
Kyouren
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
o now i understand what you mean lol well still any cut made in the song doesnt change the metadata lol i think as long as its still same song
Meowcenaries
congrats, cute song.
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
ty owo
pkhg
gratz on bn
CyberX
Cgtz
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