well idk what to do exactly no bn is interested most of them keep complaining about insane maybe i just look another gd or map it myself even HB is tilted -__ - !!
thank upkhg wrote:
testplay http://puu.sh/uA02T/ffc0a111bc.osr
[hb]map is good imo gl
- 00:30:595 (1,2) - i didnt have problems reading that but i agree with sergio. feels forced and the spacing is way lower without any reason fixed
- 00:12:678 (6) - maybe u can try using the code below. the first curve looks better imo (so u dont trigger sergio lo) changed on my own in same shapes i used in hard
95,247,12678,2,0,B|69:286|92:372|92:372|58:370|35:347,1,180.000006866455,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 00:44:731 (2,3,4,1,2) - sergio being too picky
- 01:22:428 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - agree with sergio. vocals there are the same as 01:23:370 (1,2,3,4) - theyre all on white ticks fixed this and only did 01:22:742 (3,4) - clickable for the drum like he did same thing here 01:21:485 (3,4) -
- 01:26:825 (6,1) - i dont agree with a that low spacing for such a strong beat, compare this with 01:25:412 (4,5) - youll see what im talking about. what about moving it to x410y254? this way the beat gets at least a bit more emphasis (the circle its perfectly aligned with the previous slider) agree on that fixed
thank u alot and good luck with ur map x)Maris Atipir wrote:
Sayuri!
*This modding is subjective writing:(
My first mod;-;HB's insane00:12:272 (5) - whistle? fixed
00:17:137 (2) - whistle on head. possibily, 3rd slider's head too fixed
00:18:353 (5) - NC and 00:19:975 (1) remove combo the nc is consistent its after every 2 downbeats
00:22:002 (1) - NC and 00:23:218 (1) remove combo same
00:38:606 (3,4,5) - I think this part is not matched on beat. How about slider?
→Like this -> https://s13.postimg.org/efk618lcn/1489190755029.jpg u can clearly hear a triple there for drum
00:47:873 (3) - this circle is not matched on beat. I think the slider is better than the circle. (add clap) i think its fine the last drums are emphasiezed in different way fixed hitsound
→Like this -> https://s7.postimg.org/r8ziqgkhn/1489191321314.jpgEasy00:17:137 (2) - whistle on head. fixed
00:25:651 (1) - spiner's end is not matched on beat. move spiner end on 00:28:488 spinner here is following the vocals so i stoped when she stopped and also i like to make enough recovery time for new players
00:35:307 (2,3) - Not mathed on beat. How about add slider 00:35:464 this red rine? (add clap) i dont want map the red line in easy with 191 bpm thats rly hard for new players and it be confusing to map one only red line the rythm is simplified i think its fine
01:24:626 - How about spiner?if its fine mapped no need spinner xdNormal00:05:380 (3) - Add whisle on head. and how about add finish on slider's end? fixed whistle no need finish in such calm music
00:12:678 (4,5,1) - Why don't you Change pattern? I think that part is not natural. But It is your style! It is advice:) its normal diff i dont want complicate the pattern should look clear and simple
→Like this -> https://s23.postimg.org/el8351lij/1489192803919.jpg
00:25:651 (1) - spiner's end is not matched on beat. move spiner end on 00:28:488 (copy on easy lol) same
01:06:407 (6,7) - That's too hard! How about this? dont think itts too hard if someone else mentioned ill change-> https://s22.postimg.org/yv067bwj5/1489193375698.jpg
01:26:511 (5,6) - same 01:06:407 (6,7)Hard00:20:786 (3) - Why not slider end this? 00:21:597 because there is no sound there it will be overmapped
00:34:051 (3) - How about this pattern? -> https://s9.postimg.org/otln00vu7/1489193804095.jpg cuz thats how i stacked the 1/1 snap and i did the other stack on 1/2 so i dont confuse players because they not same spacing
00:51:642 (4) - same 00:34:051 (3)
01:11:747 (4) - same 00:34:051 (3) same answer
GL I making heikousen too..! rank soon~!
00:25 Lilyanna: u like?
00:25 Rizen: nicely polished
00:25 Lilyanna: the jumps were little messy
00:25 Lilyanna: and i created these flower jumps xd
00:26 Lilyanna: idk im bad when it comes to insanes but i had to :3
00:26 Rizen: it plays nicely
00:26 Rizen: if ur goin for aesthetics, maybe flower shape at 01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - ?
00:26 Rizen: also there's a bit of inconsistency in the chorus
00:27 Lilyanna: yes i tried to do flower there
00:27 Lilyanna: but then i found i could stack objects also that shape is nice xD
00:27 Lilyanna: where is it pls the inconsistency
00:27 Lilyanna: ;w;
00:27 Lilyanna: ill fix it
00:28 Lilyanna: before bn checks it and hate me
00:28 Rizen: u know how there are these sounds in the chorus
00:28 Rizen: 00:50:543 (6) -
00:28 Rizen: the drum
00:28 Lilyanna: yes they all on head of a 1/2 slider
00:29 Lilyanna: not all
00:29 Rizen: 01:23:056 (5) -
00:29 Lilyanna: but consistent one is circle and one is slider
00:29 Lilyanna: ahh
00:30 Lilyanna: he said he wanted to do emphasize on vocal
00:30 Lilyanna: there
00:30 Lilyanna: so the mods
00:30 Lilyanna: like mrsergio and phkg
00:30 Lilyanna: told him to map it with sliders
00:30 Rizen: ah
00:30 Lilyanna: so i fixed that ;w;
00:30 Rizen: 01:00:595 (1,2) - could be circle into slider instead
00:30 Lilyanna: 01:20:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - like here
00:30 Rizen: cos vocals there is like on evry whhite tick
00:31 Rizen: ah, but that time has the drum with a clickable circle
00:31 Lilyanna: yes true
00:31 Lilyanna: :o
00:31 Lilyanna: i can add cirlce on 01:00:595 -
00:31 Lilyanna: and then 1/2 slider in downbeat?
00:32 Lilyanna: 01:00:909 (2) - this is not too strong right?
00:32 Rizen: yeah
00:32 Lilyanna: ok >w<
00:32 Rizen: wait
00:32 Lilyanna: yes
00:33 Rizen: yeah
00:33 Rizen: that's fine
00:33 Lilyanna: xD
00:33 Lilyanna: so i change how i said?
00:33 Rizen: yeah
00:33 Rizen: 01:01:380 (4) - could be two circles too
00:33 Lilyanna: okay
00:34 Rizen: because of two drum hits and also for consistencyy with 01:21:485 (3,4) -
00:34 Lilyanna: meh i like how the 1/2 go well with vocals thats highlights more the drums when there jumps
00:35 Lilyanna: oh
00:35 Lilyanna: i see
00:35 Lilyanna: fdsfdsdg
00:36 Rizen: maybe 01:13:632 (3) - could be two circles too
00:37 Rizen: cos vocal at 01:13:789 - is rather strong
00:37 Rizen: and this part of the half kiai isn't as similar to teh first half kiai
00:39 Lilyanna: okay
00:39 Lilyanna: im going to let it variated
00:40 Lilyanna: one kiai i let the 1/2
00:40 Lilyanna: and other ill let 2 circles
00:40 Rizen: yeah
00:40 Lilyanna: can that make sense?
00:40 Lilyanna: since they both work tbh
00:40 Rizen: the vocals are slightly different between the two
00:40 Rizen: i mean like
00:41 Rizen: 01:13:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs 00:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:41 Rizen: can hear a clear difference in vocals
00:41 Lilyanna: ye
00:42 Lilyanna: so i make 01:13:632 (3) - circles?
00:43 Rizen: yr
00:43 Lilyanna: and this 01:03:108 (1,2) - ctrl g?
00:43 Rizen: yeahh
00:44 Lilyanna: ok omg
00:45 Rizen: also about 01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:45 Rizen: maybe try a jump sequence like [https://puu.sh/uOrag/d01d0692f9.png this] instead
00:45 Rizen: so 01:17:401 (2) - has spacing emphasis
00:48 Rizen: tell me what u think :o
00:49 Lilyanna: i didnt want 2 to have jumps so it feels like the spacing is increasing
00:49 Rizen: but yeah taht's about it
00:49 Lilyanna: but
00:49 Lilyanna: u know more xd
00:49 Rizen: o
00:49 Rizen: if u don't agree, don't change it x.x
00:50 Rizen: if don't apply, mayb stack 01:17:401 (2) - with 01:15:988 (2) -
00:51 Lilyanna: i dont want stackss
00:51 Rizen: i mean like
00:51 Rizen: just for neatness
00:51 Rizen: not really a stack
00:51 Rizen: like what u did at 01:16:459 (4,4) -
00:51 Lilyanna: like look this jump 01:13:946 (5,6) -
00:51 Lilyanna: ahh
00:52 Lilyanna: fixed
00:52 Lilyanna: xd
00:52 Rizen: okie
ty ;w; updatedezek wrote:
ok let's see NO KUDOS let's see if they finally drop me from the bng with less activity xp
[General]
- First BPM line is actually 74 BPM~ checked more bpm with few people including Bonsai and its 74 so fixed
[HB's Insane]
- 01:26:825 (6) - touches the score on 4:3 resolutions fixed
I can't pass the last diff, which is demotivating for me to check this in more depth since I'm not allowed to nominate diffs I can't pass xp (and I usually check sets when I'm interested in nomination)
well, good luck! ;w;
thank u >w<Zero__wind wrote:
recheck, no kd
General
Clear.
Easy
the map generally feels fine but I'm quite fed up with the hitsounding in the kiai tbh. I can see that you have made the hitsounds consistent in a way, but it's not matching with the music and it really doesn't sound that nice.
since the rhythm is sticked to 1/1 in this Easy, all you need to do is to use soft whistle on the 1st and 3rd white tick of every stanza like 00:49:443 - and 00:50:071 -
, while using soft clap for the 2nd and 4th white tick of every stanza instead, like 00:49:757 - and 00:50:386 - . in this way, your hitsounds can match with the music more accurately.
take some examples of what you need to fix:
00:49:443 (1) - soft whistle instead of clap at its end
00:50:700 (2) - ^
00:50:386 (2,1) - ^
00:54:469 (1) - soft whistle at the reversing point instead
00:56:354 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
00:56:668 (1) - soft clap instead of whistle for both its head and end
00:57:611 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
and on...
so you actually need to change quite some stuff if you agree on the reasoning, just be sure to make the whole kiai consistent if you decide to change
changed
HB's Insane
00:38:448 (2) - missing clap fixed
01:03:265 (1,2) - I think they're too close to each other can you move 2 to somewhere else to make the spacing more fitting? maybe something like this well i changed it but not like u said cuz will create big jump after also there is another object under it so i moved it up u will see
01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to switch order like this to make the flow to 01:18:187 (1) - smoother? aww fixed xd
01:22:428 (2) - should use soft clap on head for consistency oups is cuz i copy pasted the slider i forgot to fix hitsound fixed
01:23:056 (5) - and probably remove the whistle on head for consistency yep fixed
Normal and Hard are fine to me so this should be all
call me back
thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bnNaotoshi wrote:
placeholdered like i promised
i dont even know why this is becoming a thingKisses wrote:
thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bn
a meme my dear, a memeLilyanna wrote:
i dont get it o_o what happening
Kisses wrote:
thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bnNaotoshi wrote:
placeholdered like i promised