I changed nearly all the mistakes except for the flow stopping circle into slider combo and filling in the break which im still mapping q_q.Firebool wrote:
Well. First of all - offset. I think u need +10ms more. As i see u changed offset so place all sections on a bit please.
Second is a Volume. 100% is too much. Always there is 40-60%. Volume of a sections the same.InsaneUse ctrl+a. You use not an all square.
00:07:655 (3,4,1) - Overlap
00:12:737 (2,3) - 00:26:835 (5,6) - u have a much parts like that. U stop the flow and spacing. Space between all these notes should be the same, cauze its slow part.
00:24:376 (1,2,3) - There is no triple. its double, u can do it like ^. I mean in one place.
00:29:294 (6,7,1) - And again there is no triple. Triple after slider, not before. Slider on a white bit. then doubles
00:36:999 (8,13) - and again overlap. Its just insane diff. If these overlaps are сan not be explained either rhythmically or by playing, it is better not to do them at all. Really. At all.
00:39:458 (8,1) - Why is it break here? U can do slow sliders and very slow part and then its kiai from here 00:55:852 (2) -
00:55:524 (1,2) - u can place a note betbeen these two. And rythmicaly this kiai beginning sounds wierdly from the end of a slider. Better to start by single note here.
01:25:688 (10) - NC
01:21:425 (1) - delete NC
01:22:081 (3) - NC
01:16:835 (4) - NC
01:10:606 (1) - delete NC
01:11:425 (4) - Bad idea to start tact in the end of a slider. NC here. btw just saw there many NC mistakes. Mostly u should put NC on a start of a tact
Well i won't write all of NC, u should to hear it by yourselfShining ChariotAgain ctrl+a
00:05:524 (6,1) - overlap
00:07:819 (4,5,6) - bad triangle, use ctrl+shift+D
00:09:950 (6,8) - and again there are more overlaps so won't write about each of them. Try to use all space.
00:13:065 (2,3) - try not 2 these sliders. Its extra, so u can do it like that https://yadi.sk/i/63vz9WwZ3FpJ7X
00:14:868 (2,3) - Well, if u want do it like that, make it in one place. BUT that 00:16:179 (8,9) - 00:17:327 (11,1) - Make that moments it not ion one place.
00:18:147 (2,3,4) - after that to much free space.
BTW, spacing on a slow part is too high.
00:22:081 (5) - again after slider free space. If u are following to the vocal, there is vocal after slider so slider must be longer.
00:23:229 (1,2,3,4) - these part is too pretty wierd. delete 4. no music for that. And try to Rebuild this slow part
00:24:376 (1,2,3) - But there triple should be before the slider, so https://yadi.sk/i/YoKdxYF_3FpKgJ
00:29:130 (8,9,10,1) - again^
00:33:884 (1,1,1) - try to Figure out what's what with NC
00:38:966 (3,4) - u can do this part more interesting and plz NO BREAK.
00:45:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - without slider, its uncomfortable to play, u can do it like that https://yadi.sk/i/QuNANjpk3FpLbd
01:25:852 (1,2,3,4) - in this diff ending is good, :thinking: https://yadi.sk/i/9Gmle1ro3FpLox
Put kiai at the same place like in the pred diff. and try to some rebuild it without bad overlaps
Well, Hope i helped u.
I Still think 00:45:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) is mapped to the music and fits but ill see and maybe ill find something more comfortable to play.
Ty for the mod