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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dinsdag 16 mei 2017 at 13:57:15

Artist: YURiKA
Title: Shiny ray (TV Size)
Source: リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags: lwa little witch academia Hytex Xenochronicles Celektus
BPM: 183
Filesize: 8501kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,35 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Hytex's Hard (3,36 stars, 235 notes)
  3. Insane (4,91 stars, 321 notes)
  4. Light Insane Collab (3,99 stars, 292 notes)
  5. Normal (2,14 stars, 154 notes)
  6. Shining Chariot (5,79 stars, 320 notes)


Download: YURiKA - Shiny ray (TV Size)
Download: YURiKA - Shiny ray (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is going out of loved as soon as I rank something (which may take another year but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ )

I ranked something so I have taken this out of loved to improve the quality of loved as maps like this gave the category a negative connotation to trashmaps of mapper who were just starting out (which was exactly what this was)

Still thanks to everyone who played the map while it was in loved ^^


Thanks to:
Celektus for the hitsounding
Victorfernando for the video
Yogurtt for a better MP3 of the song (as of 7/4)

txt file for the old shining chariot
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54901
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Shiny ray (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Shiny ray (TV Size)
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:gottagof4ast
Version:Shining Chariot (WIP)
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:lwa, little witch academia, tv, Hytex, Xenochronicles
BeatmapID:1237908
BeatmapSetID:584389

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,200,"lwa op.mp4"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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456,200,79819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,79983,6,0,P|308:128|352:124,1,70
456,276,80311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,360,80474,2,0,P|269:357|235:346,1,70
172,180,80802,2,0,P|132:168|88:168,2,70
320,84,81294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,81458,6,0,P|416:244|324:272,1,140
188,144,81950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,144,82032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,144,82114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,140,82278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,82442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,82606,6,0,P|252:44|212:32,1,70
52,24,82934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,112,83097,2,0,P|180:156|140:168,1,70
140,344,83425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,200,83589,2,0,P|299:194|332:202,2,70
380,124,84081,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,344,84245,2,0,P|96:356|60:344,1,70
172,108,84573,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,348,84737,2,0,P|452:360|488:348,1,70
408,80,85065,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,85229,2,0,P|116:326|102:294,1,70
124,24,85556,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,85720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,85884,1,0,0:0:0:0:


Mapset finished as of 18/4
posted
Well. First of all - offset. I think u need +10ms more. As i see u changed offset so place all sections on a bit please.
Second is a Volume. 100% is too much. Always there is 40-60%. Volume of a sections the same.
Insane
Use ctrl+a. You use not an all square.
00:07:655 (3,4,1) - Overlap
00:12:737 (2,3) - 00:26:835 (5,6) - u have a much parts like that. U stop the flow and spacing. Space between all these notes should be the same, cauze its slow part.
00:24:376 (1,2,3) - There is no triple. its double, u can do it like ^. I mean in one place.
00:29:294 (6,7,1) - And again there is no triple. Triple after slider, not before. Slider on a white bit. then doubles
00:36:999 (8,13) - and again overlap. Its just insane diff. If these overlaps are сan not be explained either rhythmically or by playing, it is better not to do them at all. Really. At all.
00:39:458 (8,1) - Why is it break here? U can do slow sliders and very slow part and then its kiai from here 00:55:852 (2) -
00:55:524 (1,2) - u can place a note betbeen these two. And rythmicaly this kiai beginning sounds wierdly from the end of a slider. Better to start by single note here.
01:25:688 (10) - NC
01:21:425 (1) - delete NC
01:22:081 (3) - NC
01:16:835 (4) - NC
01:10:606 (1) - delete NC
01:11:425 (4) - Bad idea to start tact in the end of a slider. NC here. btw just saw there many NC mistakes. Mostly u should put NC on a start of a tact
Well i won't write all of NC, u should to hear it by yourself
Shining Chariot
Again ctrl+a
00:05:524 (6,1) - overlap
00:07:819 (4,5,6) - bad triangle, use ctrl+shift+D
00:09:950 (6,8) - and again there are more overlaps so won't write about each of them. Try to use all space.
00:13:065 (2,3) - try not 2 these sliders. Its extra, so u can do it like that https://yadi.sk/i/63vz9WwZ3FpJ7X
00:14:868 (2,3) - Well, if u want do it like that, make it in one place. BUT that 00:16:179 (8,9) - 00:17:327 (11,1) - Make that moments it not ion one place.
00:18:147 (2,3,4) - after that to much free space.
BTW, spacing on a slow part is too high.
00:22:081 (5) - again after slider free space. If u are following to the vocal, there is vocal after slider so slider must be longer.
00:23:229 (1,2,3,4) - these part is too pretty wierd. delete 4. no music for that. And try to Rebuild this slow part
00:24:376 (1,2,3) - But there triple should be before the slider, so https://yadi.sk/i/YoKdxYF_3FpKgJ
00:29:130 (8,9,10,1) - again^
00:33:884 (1,1,1) - try to Figure out what's what with NC
00:38:966 (3,4) - u can do this part more interesting and plz NO BREAK.
00:45:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - without slider, its uncomfortable to play, u can do it like that https://yadi.sk/i/QuNANjpk3FpLbd
01:25:852 (1,2,3,4) - in this diff ending is good, :thinking: https://yadi.sk/i/9Gmle1ro3FpLox
Put kiai at the same place like in the pred diff. and try to some rebuild it without bad overlaps


Well, Hope i helped u.
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Firebool wrote:

Well. First of all - offset. I think u need +10ms more. As i see u changed offset so place all sections on a bit please.
Second is a Volume. 100% is too much. Always there is 40-60%. Volume of a sections the same.
Insane
Use ctrl+a. You use not an all square.
00:07:655 (3,4,1) - Overlap
00:12:737 (2,3) - 00:26:835 (5,6) - u have a much parts like that. U stop the flow and spacing. Space between all these notes should be the same, cauze its slow part.
00:24:376 (1,2,3) - There is no triple. its double, u can do it like ^. I mean in one place.
00:29:294 (6,7,1) - And again there is no triple. Triple after slider, not before. Slider on a white bit. then doubles
00:36:999 (8,13) - and again overlap. Its just insane diff. If these overlaps are сan not be explained either rhythmically or by playing, it is better not to do them at all. Really. At all.
00:39:458 (8,1) - Why is it break here? U can do slow sliders and very slow part and then its kiai from here 00:55:852 (2) -
00:55:524 (1,2) - u can place a note betbeen these two. And rythmicaly this kiai beginning sounds wierdly from the end of a slider. Better to start by single note here.
01:25:688 (10) - NC
01:21:425 (1) - delete NC
01:22:081 (3) - NC
01:16:835 (4) - NC
01:10:606 (1) - delete NC
01:11:425 (4) - Bad idea to start tact in the end of a slider. NC here. btw just saw there many NC mistakes. Mostly u should put NC on a start of a tact
Well i won't write all of NC, u should to hear it by yourself
Shining Chariot
Again ctrl+a
00:05:524 (6,1) - overlap
00:07:819 (4,5,6) - bad triangle, use ctrl+shift+D
00:09:950 (6,8) - and again there are more overlaps so won't write about each of them. Try to use all space.
00:13:065 (2,3) - try not 2 these sliders. Its extra, so u can do it like that https://yadi.sk/i/63vz9WwZ3FpJ7X
00:14:868 (2,3) - Well, if u want do it like that, make it in one place. BUT that 00:16:179 (8,9) - 00:17:327 (11,1) - Make that moments it not ion one place.
00:18:147 (2,3,4) - after that to much free space.
BTW, spacing on a slow part is too high.
00:22:081 (5) - again after slider free space. If u are following to the vocal, there is vocal after slider so slider must be longer.
00:23:229 (1,2,3,4) - these part is too pretty wierd. delete 4. no music for that. And try to Rebuild this slow part
00:24:376 (1,2,3) - But there triple should be before the slider, so https://yadi.sk/i/YoKdxYF_3FpKgJ
00:29:130 (8,9,10,1) - again^
00:33:884 (1,1,1) - try to Figure out what's what with NC
00:38:966 (3,4) - u can do this part more interesting and plz NO BREAK.
00:45:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - without slider, its uncomfortable to play, u can do it like that https://yadi.sk/i/QuNANjpk3FpLbd
01:25:852 (1,2,3,4) - in this diff ending is good, :thinking: https://yadi.sk/i/9Gmle1ro3FpLox
Put kiai at the same place like in the pred diff. and try to some rebuild it without bad overlaps


Well, Hope i helped u.
I changed nearly all the mistakes except for the flow stopping circle into slider combo and filling in the break which im still mapping q_q.
I Still think 00:45:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) is mapped to the music and fits but ill see and maybe ill find something more comfortable to play.
Ty for the mod :)
posted
Q

[shining cariot]
00:07:829 (4,5,6) - try to avoid overlap
00:14:222 (1,2,3) - HArd to read it because distance looks similar. not consistency.
00:16:189 (8,1) - stack
00:18:649 - add a vocal beat
00:32:255 (5,11) - add NC
00:33:894 (1,1,1) - Not necessary NC
00:55:370 (2,1) - stack
01:18:157 (1,4) - avoid overlap

GL
posted
Hi, M4M from my modding queue
[ShiningChariot]
  1. You have a green timing point before the red one
  2. 00:03:649 - There is a sound there, try putting slider end there and add circle 1/4 beat later (on the white note), alsi i think 00:03:894 (2, 3) : a slider would better fit
  3. 00:07:993 (5, 6) : Ctrl+H to break the circulare flow, too boring imo
  4. 00:07:501 (2) : stack with 00:06:681 (4)
  5. 00:09:796 - It's a strong beat there, it should be clickable. Btw take a closer look to all your triplets and put them on the same sonuds : 00:07:173 - is the same sound and you put a triplet, so put it on 00:09:796
  6. 00:09:960 (1, 2, 3, 4) : it's nice to play, but it doesn't represent the music at all, 1 should be in the triplet as suggested before, 2 is okay but the angle between 1 an 2's body is too sharp, 3 ok, 4 should be jumps according to the music
  7. 00:11:599 (3) : totally useless, no sounds but you force a jump, i definitely don't agree with this (same for 6), if you want, i guess sliders on 2 and 5 would also fit
  8. 00:12:747 (2) : almost the same issue of fitting the music, you need 2 circles there
  9. 00:13:894 (6) : music have stopped on 5, not on 6
  10. 00:15:534 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 1) : A jump don't really fit there, music is pretty slow and you force a speed up, and overlap between 8 and 1 doesn't look good, try using more complex slider shapes to a kind of blanket like that :
  11. 00:17:173 (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8) : all this have to be move 1/2 beat later, and so delete 8 (+ circle at 00:19:140)
  12. 00:21:927 (5) : no circle there too, there is no sound, perhaps a slider on 4, but no clickable object on 5
  13. 00:22:091 (6, 7) : according to this pattern, both notes are 1 beat 1/2 long, but it's 1 beat according to the music, you should put both sliders on white note and make 6 3/4 long
  14. 0 0:24:386 (1, 2, 3, 4) : a triplet is not really useful there, i understand you want to emphasis this note, but it makes you skipping the strong beat at 00:24:714. Also 4 is totally shifted, its head should not necesserarely be clickable but its end yes

I'll stop there, because the reste of the map is made by the same mistakes
This make hase A LOT of rhythm issues, it's like if you didn't hear the music while mapping, be more careful about what you choose to be clickable and what should clickable. I guess you currently have a lack of experience to map Extra difficulties, obviously you tried to put as much jumps as possible, but it often just doesn't fit at all. I think it's just about a big lack of experience (i saw you've uploaded only 2 maps) but currently you have to work on 'fitting the music' - take a closer look at this video (and also the playlist this guy have done about mapping), it's for me all about mistakes you've done
There are also some overlap and aestatics issues, but i do so i can't really criticize

[Insane]
This diff faces exactly the same rhythm issues as extra, it's all pretty well playable but you didn't really map your song. The most illustrative example is at 00:45:370 and 00:47:993, the jumps are pretty cool to play, but the music doesn't suggested jumps at all ! It's simply overmapped. I'm pretty sure a great mapper would have do the same, and it could have been ranked, but you're not famous enough to get through it^^

[Hard]
First, i hoped it would be better, but as you chose to make the hard like a non-jumy insane (nothing against that) => Rhythm issues !
Since ar is also pretty low (7.2 is really low when you put triplets and stacks on a 183 bpm song), i can't even ply the map :/
  1. 00:08:649 (8, 9, 1, 2) - randomly picked - 8's end have to be clickable, and 1's end too, also 2 is not really useful, perhaps just remove it.
  2. 00:10:288 (7, 8, 9, 10) - First, Combos are quite big, 10 is high for an hard - Then, 7 have to be splitted into 3 circles, and 8, 9 and 10 are really weird. I Guess it's aslo because of 00:09:796 (4, 5, 6) : 4 is okay, but not the 2 others

I just take those 2 examples to show you that it's not fitting the music at all, once again, it's just because of a lack of experience


I will be honest with you, except if you want to remap the 3 diffs i've taken a look at, it will not have a chance to get ranked (at least for my opinion), you could ask a BN for it but don't expect too much. Be sure you'll get better in the future, soon to problems ive mentionned would just disappear from your maps, so keep training mapping, and don't surrender because someone (me lol) told you it's not a good map. As i like to say : "c'est en forgeant que l'on devient forgeron" (search google trad if you don't speak french^^)

Gl for the next

Oh yeah and btw i really like the music^^
posted

Zonthem wrote:

Hi, M4M from my modding queue
[ShiningChariot]
  1. You have a green timing point before the red one ~fixed~
  2. 00:03:649 - There is a sound there, try putting slider end there and add circle 1/4 beat later (on the white note), alsi i think 00:03:894 (2, 3) : a slider would better fit ~fixed~
  3. 00:07:993 (5, 6) : Ctrl+H to break the circulare flow, too boring imo ~fixed~
  4. 00:07:501 (2) : stack with 00:06:681 (4) ~fixed~
  5. 00:09:796 - It's a strong beat there, it should be clickable. Btw take a closer look to all your triplets and put them on the same sonuds : 00:07:173 - is the same sound and you put a triplet, so put it on 00:09:796 ~fixed~
  6. 00:09:960 (1, 2, 3, 4) : it's nice to play, but it doesn't represent the music at all, 1 should be in the triplet as suggested before, 2 is okay but the angle between 1 an 2's body is too sharp, 3 ok, 4 should be jumps according to the music ~fixed~
  7. 00:11:599 (3) : totally useless, no sounds but you force a jump, i definitely don't agree with this (same for 6), if you want, i guess sliders on 2 and 5 would also fit ~fixed~, i just removed the notes on useless sounds inbetween, but left the jump otherwise it wouldnt have much impact
  8. 00:12:747 (2) : almost the same issue of fitting the music, you need 2 circles there ~fixed~
  9. 00:13:894 (6) : music have stopped on 5, not on 6 ~fixed~
  10. 00:15:534 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 1) : A jump don't really fit there, music is pretty slow and you force a speed up, and overlap between 8 and 1 doesn't look good, try using more complex slider shapes to a kind of blanket like that : ~fixed~
  11. 00:17:173 (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8) : all this have to be move 1/2 beat later, and so delete 8 (+ circle at 00:19:140) ~fixed~
  12. 00:21:927 (5) : no circle there too, there is no sound, perhaps a slider on 4, but no clickable object on 5 ~fixed~, accidently changed when remapping slow part(lol)
  13. 00:22:091 (6, 7) : according to this pattern, both notes are 1 beat 1/2 long, but it's 1 beat according to the music, you should put both sliders on white note and make 6 3/4 long ~fixed~, i think, i just simplified it
  14. 0 0:24:386 (1, 2, 3, 4) : a triplet is not really useful there, i understand you want to emphasis this note, but it makes you skipping the strong beat at 00:24:714. Also 4 is totally shifted, its head should not necesserarely be clickable but its end yes I don't see another way to map this since i hear a sound ending on 00:24:714

I'll stop there, because the reste of the map is made by the same mistakes
This make hase A LOT of rhythm issues, it's like if you didn't hear the music while mapping, be more careful about what you choose to be clickable and what should clickable. I guess you currently have a lack of experience to map Extra difficulties, obviously you tried to put as much jumps as possible, but it often just doesn't fit at all. I think it's just about a big lack of experience (i saw you've uploaded only 2 maps) but currently you have to work on 'fitting the music' - take a closer look at this video (and also the playlist this guy have done about mapping), it's for me all about mistakes you've done
There are also some overlap and aestatics issues, but i do so i can't really criticize

Thank you for just saying that my map wasnt mapped to the song, while mapping i was thinking in myself that i could probably copy paste the map on any 183 bpm song and it would still make some kind of sense. I've also only made 2 maps before this but they were so unbelieveably bad that i don't want anyone to ever see them.

[Insane]
This diff faces exactly the same rhythm issues as extra, it's all pretty well playable but you didn't really map your song. The most illustrative example is at 00:45:370 and 00:47:993, the jumps are pretty cool to play, but the music doesn't suggested jumps at all ! It's simply overmapped. I'm pretty sure a great mapper would have do the same, and it could have been ranked, but you're not famous enough to get through it^^

Also here, ill edit the map so the notes on which I placed on nonexistent sounds won't be there anymore.

[Hard]
First, i hoped it would be better, but as you chose to make the hard like a non-jumy insane (nothing against that) => Rhythm issues !
Since ar is also pretty low (7.2 is really low when you put triplets and stacks on a 183 bpm song), i can't even ply the map :/
  1. 00:08:649 (8, 9, 1, 2) - randomly picked - 8's end have to be clickable, and 1's end too, also 2 is not really useful, perhaps just remove it.
  2. 00:10:288 (7, 8, 9, 10) - First, Combos are quite big, 10 is high for an hard - Then, 7 have to be splitted into 3 circles, and 8, 9 and 10 are really weird. I Guess it's aslo because of 00:09:796 (4, 5, 6) : 4 is okay, but not the 2 others

I just take those 2 examples to show you that it's not fitting the music at all, once again, it's just because of a lack of experience


I really disliked making a hard version, I was stuck between using the 1/1 and 1/2 rythym form the normal and the rythym with alot of 1/2 and 1/4's from the insane. I couldn't hear an inbetween, so i just unconciously copied the insane rythym and just lowered spacing and put down more sliders.

I will be honest with you, except if you want to remap the 3 diffs i've taken a look at, it will not have a chance to get ranked (at least for my opinion), you could ask a BN for it but don't expect too much. Be sure you'll get better in the future, soon to problems ive mentionned would just disappear from your maps, so keep training mapping, and don't surrender because someone (me lol) told you it's not a good map. As i like to say : "c'est en forgeant que l'on devient forgeron" (search google trad if you don't speak french^^)

Im going to stick with the song as its the only one i haven't gotten bored of hearing for hours on end, i was kind of waiting for someone to just break down the entire thing so better sooner than later. Im probably going to be busy remapping those diifs for a while now but hopefully they'll be better when im done. ^^

Ty for the mod, beacause its probably the most usefull ive ever had/seen :)


Gl for the next

Oh yeah and btw i really like the music^^
posted

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[shining cariot]
00:07:829 (4,5,6) - try to avoid overlap ~fixed~
00:14:222 (1,2,3) - HArd to read it because distance looks similar. not consistency. ~fixed~ (after remap)
00:16:189 (8,1) - stack ~fixed~
00:18:649 - add a vocal beat ~fixed~ (long slider)
00:32:255 (5,11) - add NC
00:33:894 (1,1,1) - Not necessary NC
00:55:370 (2,1) - stack I really don't want a stack here beacause then the map goes from no movement to fast sliders and jumps all of a sudden
01:18:157 (1,4) - avoid overlap ~fixed~

Ty for the mod :)

GL
posted
From modding queue (thanks for the m4m =) )

[Normal]

(timing points)
00:14:048 - Change audio to Soft and volume to 90%

00:11:261 (3,4) - Too far from each other
00:12:245 (1,1) - Not enough time between spinner end and object for a normal (2-3 beats at least)
00:22:737 (1,1) - ^
00:52:573 (12) - Should be a hitcircle, and there should be a slider (preferably a circle slider) from 00:53:229 to 54:540.
01:05:032 (1,1) - Not enough time between spinner end and object for a normal (2-3 beats at least)


[Hard]

(timing points)
00:13:876 - Change audio to Soft and volume to 90%

00:13:311 (39) - snap to white tick and make the end snap to the next white tick
also pls finish diff


[Insane]

(timing points)
00:14:408 - Change audio to Soft and volume to 90%
00:54:540 - Create a new timing point here, and set the audio to Soft and volume to 30%.

00:13:393 (5) - Should only reverse once
00:53:229 (1) - End should be silent, or at least soft set. See above in the timing sections part, 00:54:598.
00:55:524 (1) - No sound on the white tick, should just be a hitcircle on the red tick


[Shining Chariot]

(timing points)
00:13:876 - Move to 00:14:222 and change the audio to the soft set and 90% because from 00:14:222 (1) to 00:22:583 (7) the hitsounds are too loud
00:39:950 - Move to 00:40:124 and change audio to soft set
00:43:894 - Change audio to soft set
00:44:550 - ^
00:54:598 - Move this to the end of the spinner, and set the audio to Soft and volume to 30%.
00:55:584 - Move to 00:55:206
01:05:934 - Bring this green tick up to 1:06:353

00:06:026 (1) - overlap with 00:05:534 (6)
00:10:452 (8) - overlap with 00:09:960 (6)
00:13:567 (3) - don't give this slider a reverse, there is no sound on the next beat
00:14:878 (2,3) - Having this and 00:14:222 (1,2) the exact same spacing doesn't really make sense, especially when 00:15:698 (4,5) is spaced the way it is
00:20:288 (4,1) - Unnecessary stack/overlap
00:30:124 (3) - overlap with 00:29:140 (8,9,1)
00:31:271 (9) - overlap with 00:30:944 (7)
00:44:058 (11) - Not snapped to the white tick
00:44:714 (12) - ^
00:53:239 (1) - End should be silent, or at least soft set. See above in the timing sections part, 00:54:598.
00:57:665 (5) - Overlap with 00:58:322 (8,9,1)
01:00:123 (3) - Overlap with 00:59:633 (1)
01:01:763 (4) - Overlap with 01:01:271 (1)



Thanks for the m4m
posted

lilligantEX wrote:

From modding queue (thanks for the m4m =) )

[Normal]

(timing points)
00:14:048 - Change audio to Soft and volume to 90% ~fixed~

00:11:261 (3,4) - Too far from each other ~fixed~
00:12:245 (1,1) - Not enough time between spinner end and object for a normal (2-3 beats at least) ~fixed~
00:22:737 (1,1) - ^ ~fixed~
00:52:573 (12) - Should be a hitcircle, and there should be a slider (preferably a circle slider) from 00:53:229 to 54:540. ~fixed~
01:05:032 (1,1) - Not enough time between spinner end and object for a normal (2-3 beats at least) ~fixed~


[Hard]

(timing points)
00:13:876 - Change audio to Soft and volume to 90%

00:13:311 (39) - snap to white tick and make the end snap to the next white tick
also pls finish diff


[Insane]

(timing points)
00:14:408 - Change audio to Soft and volume to 90%
00:54:540 - Create a new timing point here, and set the audio to Soft and volume to 30%.

00:13:393 (5) - Should only reverse once
00:53:229 (1) - End should be silent, or at least soft set. See above in the timing sections part, 00:54:598.
00:55:524 (1) - No sound on the white tick, should just be a hitcircle on the red tick


[Shining Chariot]

(timing points)
00:13:876 - Move to 00:14:222 and change the audio to the soft set and 90% because from 00:14:222 (1) to 00:22:583 (7) the hitsounds are too loud
00:39:950 - Move to 00:40:124 and change audio to soft set
00:43:894 - Change audio to soft set
00:44:550 - ^
00:54:598 - Move this to the end of the spinner, and set the audio to Soft and volume to 30%.
00:55:584 - Move to 00:55:206
01:05:934 - Bring this green tick up to 1:06:353

00:06:026 (1) - overlap with 00:05:534 (6)
00:10:452 (8) - overlap with 00:09:960 (6)
00:13:567 (3) - don't give this slider a reverse, there is no sound on the next beat
00:14:878 (2,3) - Having this and 00:14:222 (1,2) the exact same spacing doesn't really make sense, especially when 00:15:698 (4,5) is spaced the way it is
00:20:288 (4,1) - Unnecessary stack/overlap
00:30:124 (3) - overlap with 00:29:140 (8,9,1)
00:31:271 (9) - overlap with 00:30:944 (7)
00:44:058 (11) - Not snapped to the white tick
00:44:714 (12) - ^
00:53:239 (1) - End should be silent, or at least soft set. See above in the timing sections part, 00:54:598.
00:57:665 (5) - Overlap with 00:58:322 (8,9,1)
01:00:123 (3) - Overlap with 00:59:633 (1)
01:01:763 (4) - Overlap with 01:01:271 (1)



Thanks for the m4m
Thanks for the M4M and ill keep these points in mind but im busy remapping large portions of all diffs but normal
posted
q m4m

[General]

  1. Since your normal is way over 2* you'll need an easy diff too
  2. Different timing on last diff..?
  3. Some unsnapped objects and greenlines on last diff
  4. Hitsounds are pretty loud... Could turn the volume down a bit


[Normal]

  1. Well first of all since this is a normal diff you should probably use distance snap... Right now there's 87 spacing errors from AImod
  2. 00:06:016 (6,1) - Idk what happened here but I'd definitely read this as 1/2 gap so please make it consistent with the rest of the section
  3. Overall the first section (00:03:393 - 00:14:212 - ) is pretty boring since it's just 1/1 rhythms all over with no variation... You could try to map to the melody instead of the drums for more interesting rhythms there tbh or at least use something else than just 1/1 sliders and circles with 1/1 gaps
  4. 00:21:917 (5) - There's no sound here so I don't see a reason for this one here...
  5. 01:24:376 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This looks hella confusing to play and is way harder than the rest of the map


Actually looking at the whole map it's rhythmically very boring as it consists of mostly just 1/1 spam with the exception of kiai... You could try to follow the melody/vocals to make the rhythm more interesting. Also your spacing is way too huge you should try to use distance snap for the whole map with the ds value of something between 0.8 and 1.2
Also your comboing is really a mess in most of the places... You should try to keep it consistent and new combo every or 2nd downbeat.

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:540 (5,6,1,2,3) - You use the same spacing for 1/2 and 1/4 gaps so this will be very hard to read...
  2. 00:11:261 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Since the emphasis pattern on music is basically 123 123 with 00:11:261 (4) - 00:11:753 (7) - being 1s your pattern should somehow reflect that instead of doing random back and forth jumps
  3. 00:16:016 (5,6) - should probably ctrl + g rhythm here since you were following vocals and the vocal hits are on 00:16:016 - and 00:16:343 -
  4. 00:16:507 (7,1) - Should swap ncs here
  5. 00:18:311 (6,7,8,9) - Rhythm was pretty okay until this but repeat on 3 strong vocal notes and then 3 random 1/2s on very weak ticks doesn't make much sense to me
  6. 00:19:130 (9) - Should NC here for consistency (you had nc every 2 downbeats
  7. 00:21:425 (3) - Bad rhythm here. there's a vocal on the middle and because you made it 1/1 slider the downbeat isn't clickable like it should be (which you should also nc instead of 00:20:770 (1) - )
  8. 00:21:917 (4,5,6) - Random 1/2s again. There isn't anything very audible in the music except 00:22:245 (6) -
  9. 00:22:901 (1) - If you want to make a spinner for the vocals you should just make 00:22:409 (7) - a circle and start it right after
  10. 00:24:376 (1,2,3) - Idk why you overmapped a triple here, 1/1 slider would work just well
  11. 00:25:524 - Doesn't make sense to have this on slider end since there's both vocals and a kick
  12. 00:26:835 (5,6) - This weird spacing again... Very easy to misread for 1/4
  13. 00:26:917 - Could possibly add a triple here
  14. 00:28:639 (3,5,6) - 3 and 5 6 are basically the same thing but you've mapped them very differently
  15. 00:29:458 (1) - With a cymbal crash and all the downbeat is very strong so it's weird to have it on slider end
  16. 00:29:786 (2,3,4,5) - Pretty weird rhythm here... 2 is on no sound 5 starts on no sound and ends on vocals
  17. 00:34:048 (1) - Would probably work better as 2 circles
  18. 00:34:704 - No sound on here
  19. 00:35:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Rhythm gets 1/2 spam here with no focus on either vocals or drums and you also ignore the 1/4 notes to get more jumps... Not good
    00:45:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pretty bad rhythm again. The emphasis is on 00:45:360 - 00:45:852 - 00:46:343 - but your rhythm doesn't represent that in anyway. Could try to make all the emphasized notes 1/2 sliders and add circles in between or smtng
  20. 00:50:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Random 1/2 spam again without really following anything in the music
    00:55:524 (1) - Basically nothing on the sliderhead with the powerful sound being on the tail... You really need to work a lot on your rhythms
  21. 01:00:114 (3,4,5,6,7) - This weird spacing again
  22. 01:04:540 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - More random 1/2 spam. 01:05:360 (7,8,9,10) - would actually work well as jumps but having all that 1/2 spam before takes emphasis away from it
  23. 01:05:360 (7,8,9,10) - Really uneven and sudden low spacing, you've never done it before so why now?
  24. 01:22:573 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmapped triple on 01:23:065 (7,8,9) - while you ignore an actual one on 01:22:655 -
  25. 01:24:704 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The stack things are really weird here since they are all fairly powerful notes


In general the way you handle rhythm is very inconsistent... Just looking at the intro I can say tha you just seem to throw slides and circles randomly and adding repeats here and there without thinking how you did it just a while ago... You should try to keep your rhythms more consistent since if the music doesn't change then the rhythms should pretty much the same anyway. Also why no kiai on this one? You should keep it same on every diff.

Well I'll skip the top diff since it's really weird to me... It uses simpler rhythm than the insane in a lot of places but has insane spacing. It also has pretty much the same issues as insane so you can try to apply many things from my mod to insane on it too.
posted

Metaku wrote:

q m4m

[General]

  1. Since your normal is way over 2* you'll need an easy diff too I'll give a try at making one, otherwise ill just scale down the medium a bit.
  2. Different timing on last diff..? Last 2 diffs are WIP after Zonthem's mod
  3. Some unsnapped objects and greenlines on last diff Last 2 diffs are WIP after Zonthem's mod
  4. Hitsounds are pretty loud... Could turn the volume down a bit
~Fixed~

[Normal]

  1. Well first of all since this is a normal diff you should probably use distance snap... Right now there's 87 spacing errors from AImod ~Fixed~
  2. 00:06:016 (6,1) - Idk what happened here but I'd definitely read this as 1/2 gap so please make it consistent with the rest of the section ~Fixed~
  3. Overall the first section (00:03:393 - 00:14:212 - ) is pretty boring since it's just 1/1 rhythms all over with no variation... You could try to map to the melody instead of the drums for more interesting rhythms there tbh or at least use something else than just 1/1 sliders and circles with 1/1 gaps I'll see what i can do, but i still need to keep it simple.
  4. 00:21:917 (5) - There's no sound here so I don't see a reason for this one here... ~Fixed~(changed pattern)
  5. 01:24:376 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This looks hella confusing to play and is way harder than the rest of the map
I need some time to think out a different pattern to still reflect the instruments without

Actually looking at the whole map it's rhythmically very boring as it consists of mostly just 1/1 spam with the exception of kiai... You could try to follow the melody/vocals to make the rhythm more interesting. Also your spacing is way too huge you should try to use distance snap for the whole map with the ds value of something between 0.8 and Mostly fixed?, maybe
Also your comboing is really a mess in most of the places... You should try to keep it consistent and new combo every or 2nd downbeat. ~Fixed~

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:540 (5,6,1,2,3) - You use the same spacing for 1/2 and 1/4 gaps so this will be very hard to read... ~Fixed~
  2. 00:11:261 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Since the emphasis pattern on music is basically 123 123 with 00:11:261 (4) - 00:11:753 (7) - being 1s your pattern should somehow reflect that instead of doing random back and forth jumps I don't want the 123 pattern in the insane as the notes are really quiet and ill probably only map them in the extra as back and forths
  3. 00:16:016 (5,6) - should probably ctrl + g rhythm here since you were following vocals and the vocal hits are on 00:16:016 - and 00:16:343 - ~Fixed during remap~
  4. 00:16:507 (7,1) - Should swap ncs here ~Fixed during remap~
  5. 00:18:311 (6,7,8,9) - Rhythm was pretty okay until this but repeat on 3 strong vocal notes and then 3 random 1/2s on very weak ticks doesn't make much sense to me~Fixed during remap I think~
  6. 00:19:130 (9) - Should NC here for consistency (you had nc every 2 downbeats) ~Fixed during remap~
  7. 00:21:425 (3) - Bad rhythm here. there's a vocal on the middle and because you made it 1/1 slider the downbeat isn't clickable like it should be (which you should also nc instead of 00:20:770 (1) - ) ~Fixed~
  8. 00:21:917 (4,5,6) - Random 1/2s again. There isn't anything very audible in the music except 00:22:245 (6) - ~Fixed~
  9. 00:22:901 (1) - If you want to make a spinner for the vocals you should just make 00:22:409 (7) - a circle and start it right after ~Fixed~
  10. 00:24:376 (1,2,3) - Idk why you overmapped a triple here, 1/1 slider would work just well ~Fixed (oh god, mapped this part badly)~
  11. 00:25:524 - Doesn't make sense to have this on slider end since there's both vocals and a kick ~Fixed~
  12. 00:26:835 (5,6) - This weird spacing again... Very easy to misread for 1/4 ~Fixed~
  13. 00:26:917 - Could possibly add a triple here ~Fixed~
  14. 00:28:639 (3,5,6) - 3 and 5 6 are basically the same thing but you've mapped them very differently~Fixed during remap~
  15. 00:29:458 (1) - With a cymbal crash and all the downbeat is very strong so it's weird to have it on slider end ~Fixed~
  16. 00:29:786 (2,3,4,5) - Pretty weird rhythm here... 2 is on no sound 5 starts on no sound and ends on vocals ~Fixed~
  17. 00:34:048 (1) - Would probably work better as 2 circles ~Fixed~
  18. 00:34:704 - No sound on here
  19. 00:35:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Rhythm gets 1/2 spam here with no focus on either vocals or drums and you also ignore the 1/4 notes to get more jumps... Not good ill fix this by changing the pattern alltogether
    00:45:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pretty bad rhythm again. The emphasis is on 00:45:360 - 00:45:852 - 00:46:343 - but your rhythm doesn't represent that in anyway. Could try to make all the emphasized notes 1/2 sliders and add circles in between or smtng ~Fixed~
  20. 00:50:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Random 1/2 spam again without really following anything in the music ill fix this somehow
    00:55:524 (1) - Basically nothing on the sliderhead with the powerful sound being on the tail... You really need to work a lot on your rhythms ~Fixed~
  21. 01:00:114 (3,4,5,6,7) - This weird spacing again~Fixed~
  22. 01:04:540 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - More random 1/2 spam. 01:05:360 (7,8,9,10) - would actually work well as jumps but having all that 1/2 spam before takes emphasis away from it ~Fixed~, I put a 1/1 slider on 01:04:212 (1) but kept the jumps as i think 01:04:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - all need emphasis
  23. 01:05:360 (7,8,9,10) - Really uneven and sudden low spacing, you've never done it before so why now? ~Fixed~
  24. 01:22:573 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmapped triple on 01:23:065 (7,8,9) - while you ignore an actual one on 01:22:655 - ~Fixed~
  25. 01:24:704 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The stack things are really weird here since they are all fairly powerful notes
~Fixed~

In general the way you handle rhythm is very inconsistent... Just looking at the intro I can say tha you just seem to throw slides and circles randomly and adding repeats here and there without thinking how you did it just a while ago... You should try to keep your rhythms more consistent since if the music doesn't change then the rhythms should pretty much the same anyway. Also why no kiai on this one? You should keep it same on every diff.

Well I'll skip the top diff since it's really weird to me... It uses simpler rhythm than the insane in a lot of places but has insane spacing. It also has pretty much the same issues as insane so you can try to apply many things from my mod to insane on it too.
I'm aware of the rythym issues which is why im remapping the top 2 diffs atm, should take a while but it should be alot better when im done.
Thanks for the mod :)
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[Insane]

Helped fixing rhythm on these points:

00:09:622 (1) -
00:18:311 (6) -
00:21:425 (1) -
00:26:835 (1) -
00:29:294 (11) -
00:31:589 (4) -
00:31:589 (4) -
00:33:393 (10) -
00:35:032 (4) -
00:36:671 (4) -
00:37:983 (11) -
00:49:786 (7,8,9) -
00:39:458
00:49:622 (6) -
00:58:639 (6) -
01:00:278 (5) -
01:01:753 (1) -
01:02:409 (3) -
01:03:393 (7) -
01:07:491 (5) -
01:09:950 (4) -
01:09:458 (3) -
01:10:442 (7) - moet weg
01:10:114 (6) -
01:10:114 (6) -
01:10:442 (1) -
01:15:524 (1,2,3,4) -
01:17:983 (10) -
01:17:983 (10) -
01:18:639 (4) -
01:18:639 (4) -
01:18:802 (5) -
01:20:606 (7,8) -
01:23:229 (9,10) -
01:23:884 (1) -
01:23:720 (1) -
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XenoChronicles wrote:

[Insane]

Helped fixing rhythm on these points:

00:09:622 (1) -
00:18:311 (6) -
00:21:425 (1) -
00:26:835 (1) -
00:29:294 (11) -
00:31:589 (4) -
00:31:589 (4) -
00:33:393 (10) -
00:35:032 (4) -
00:36:671 (4) -
00:37:983 (11) -
00:49:786 (7,8,9) -
00:39:458
00:49:622 (6) -
00:58:639 (6) -
01:00:278 (5) -
01:01:753 (1) -
01:02:409 (3) -
01:03:393 (7) -
01:07:491 (5) -
01:09:950 (4) -
01:09:458 (3) -
01:10:442 (7) - moet weg
01:10:114 (6) -
01:10:114 (6) -
01:10:442 (1) -
01:15:524 (1,2,3,4) -
01:17:983 (10) -
01:17:983 (10) -
01:18:639 (4) -
01:18:639 (4) -
01:18:802 (5) -
01:20:606 (7,8) -
01:23:229 (9,10) -
01:23:884 (1) -
01:23:720 (1) -
Thank you for helping me fix the rythym :)
posted
Done remapping Normal, Insane and Shining Chariot so these can be modded.
Im just taking a break from mapping a new diff (hard) for a day or two.

Until I have posted another post that says that the Hard can be moded, just leave it alone for now.
posted
i could probably make a hard since this is tv size
ill make it quick
posted

Hytex wrote:

i could probably make a hard since this is tv size
ill make it quick
Sure, give it a go, I am aiming at about 3,5 stars for a hard diff
I am going to give it all I have to rank this set BTW (even if I have to remap it multiple times)

remap counter: 1 2
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H e l l o T h e r e!

Shining Chariot
00:08:321 (14) - listen to the sound, you can make it as a triple.
00:11:599 (3,3) - the great rhythm choice will be if you gonna remove this notes, and increase spacing here 00:11:763 (1,2)
01:25:042 (3,3) - ^
00:12:419 (2) - strong sound is always on white tick, red is less important here, try to add red tick as a note and white tick as a slider
00:12:747 (3) - ^
00:13:075 (4) - make this slider as a regular 1/2 notes.
00:14:878 (2,3) - stack them
00:21:763 (1) - increase spacing, strong sound
00:34:550 (10) - don't try to stack them, very uncomfortable to play
00:34:878 (1,13) - you don't need to make changes in a spacing so big, as the sound does not become louder
00:39:304 (10,1) - better if you will map this section between note and slider
00:47:665 (8) - increase spacing, strong sound
01:26:189 (3,4,5) - improve this pattern, please


gl in further mapping!
:)
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DendyMudak wrote:

H e l l o T h e r e!

Shining Chariot
00:08:321 (14) - listen to the sound, you can make it as a triple. Its a possibility ill think about but for now ill keep this as it is beacause i don't want to many cirlces in a row
00:11:599 (3,3) - the great rhythm choice will be if you gonna remove this notes, and increase spacing here 00:11:763 (1,2) There is actually a sound on the first 3 but not on the second, I have overmapped the second to keep consistency in the jumps, ill change to the 12 jumps you propsed for now
01:25:042 (3,3) - ^ ~fixed~
00:12:419 (2) - strong sound is always on white tick, red is less important here, try to add red tick as a note and white tick as a slider ~fixed~
00:12:747 (3) - ^ ~fixed~
00:13:075 (4) - make this slider as a regular 1/2 notes. ~fixed~, although I really feel a reverse slider fits in this section so i put it 1/2 gap further back so it starts and ends on the white ticks
00:14:878 (2,3) - stack them ~fixed~
00:21:763 (1) - increase spacing, strong sound ~fixed~
00:34:550 (10) - don't try to stack them, very uncomfortable to play ~fixed~
00:34:878 (1,13) - you don't need to make changes in a spacing so big, as the sound does not become louder ~fixed~, i kept the jumps but reduced spacing on them
00:39:304 (10,1) - better if you will map this section between note and slider ~fixed~, a long slider fits quite well here
00:47:665 (8) - increase spacing, strong sound ~fixed~
01:26:189 (3,4,5) - improve this pattern, please ~fixed, made it not so square-shaped~


gl in further mapping!
:)
Ty for the mod :)
posted
Problem Solution/Alternative Comment
Shining Chariot
00:39:386 (10) - Why is this starting on a blue tick? If anything, this burst of violin in the song can be represented with more 1/2 jumps, either with hit circles or 1/4 sliders. This extended slider doesn't really make sense here.
00:46:845 (4,5,6) - Do you see how visually, these three notes look like they would be the same distance in time, but they're not? This causes confusion when reading and should be avoided. You can fix this in several ways:
1. Change 00:47:009 (5,8) into 1/4 sliders so that there are only 1/2 gaps in this part instead of 1/2 and 1/1 gaps.
2. Change the pattern so that the 1/2 and 1/1 gaps appear differently. See below for some examples. In this example, I placed 6 and 7 in a similar line while also placing 6 farther than 4, making 6 stand out but not as a 1/2 jump.

3. This is another pattern where I represented the 1/1 gaps as stacks so they look very distinct from the 1/2 jumps. See below for the picture.


00:49:632 (6,7) - You haven't done any anti-jumps like this before, so this may be confusing to read. It might be best to move 7 farther left so that 6 and 7 don't look like a stream at all, whether 6 and 7 touch or not (I would prefer they don't touch at all).
00:55:206 (1,2,1) - Like the earlier issue, this also does not represent 1/2 and 1/1 gaps that well. Flip the direction of 1 and 2 horizontally and either have 1-2 lead away from the following slider like in #2 above or have 1-2 lead to the slider with 2 stacked on the slider like #3 above. Probably keep things consistent, whichever ones you choose. Or you can change 2 to a 1/4 slider like #1 above.
01:05:862 (12,1) - Similar issue here. Pick one of the solutions above.
The reason 00:11:271 (1,2,1,2,1,2) and 01:24:714 (1,2,1,2,1,2) are fine is because you established a diagonally top-to-bottom pattern with your new combos and circle placements. Overall it's a pretty great map so far :D
Insane
00:07:337 (7,8) - I would lower this spacing slightly.
00:19:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some readability issue as in Shining Chariot. Unless you want to stack the 1/1 gaps, I would probably just increase the spacing of the 1/1 gaps by at LEAST double.
00:40:124 (11) - I would start the break here. You could map the violin burst like you should in Shining Chariot as well.
00:46:353 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Another readability issue like before. The fact that you stacked 6 and 7 makes it very difficult to represent the 1/1 gaps. I suggest remapping this.
00:49:632 (6,7) - Same anti-jump issue as in Shining Chariot.
00:55:206 (1,2,1) - Same readability issue as in Shining Chariot.
01:05:862 (12) - Honestly I would move this farther left by about a circle's width.
01:26:189 (1,2) - For the song ending in a big fanfare like this, the 1-slider might be better as another jump. As in, turn the 1-slider into two hitcircles, putting the second one where 2 is moving 2 back near the 1-slider.
Normal
00:09:632 (7) - In normal difficulties, you want the mapping conventions to mimic those of easy except with a higher note density and spacing. One of those conventions is the fact that players at this level will follow completely through the slider. Putting 7 at a sharp angle away from the previous slider end conflicts with this. I would just move 7 to the left past the 6-slider's end.
00:19:796 (4,1) - Another convention in this level of difficulty is time-distance equality. You had your 1/1 jumps previously all represented as 1-1.2x spacing. Why is this one 0.6x spacing? It will confuse the player.
00:27:993 (3,4,5) - I don't know about this. At least raise the spacing to 1-1.2x. You might have to remove it altogether.
00:55:206 (1,2) - ????
01:05:370 (5,6) - ???????
01:14:550 (1) - Why is this a new combo?
01:22:091 (1) - This slider isn't 1/1 length.


Not too bad a mapset so far. Keep working on things and good luck to you! :3
posted
idk i asked nm but you said it's m4m in my thread, but it's okay! i'm fine with m4m
insane
  1. 00:25:862 (6,8) - Avoid these overlaps
  2. 00:39:468 - you should add notes until big white tick bcs looks unrankable.
  3. 00:49:632 (6,7) - same as extra
  4. on chorus, you didn't put kiai for that. i need to mention this to make same like extra
shining chariot
  1. 00:05:534 (13,1) - Avoid these overlaps
  2. 00:16:353 (1) - Not a good emphasize bcs big white tick has sound. so, pls add it
  3. 00:39:386 (10) - i don't think so why you put long slider at blue tick. fix it for example like this http://i.imgur.com/0qYcReF.png
  4. 00:49:632 (6,7) - Making unstacked for kick drum aren't good enough. Maybe stack them or make jump as well
  5. 00:55:206 (1) - In this time, a chorus does not starts here, it just ready for begin the hook. i suggested you put kiai at 00:55:598 (1)
  6. 01:06:845 (3) - You missed note in the middle of the slider. Replace them to circle/slider 1/2 as well
add hard diff here to make complete this map
nothing say for normal bcs looks fine for me

good luck!
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