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Alan Luo & Jolin Tsai - Zhen Ming Tian Zi

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_llkey_18
199 posts
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_llkey_18
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 05 de noviembre de 2010 at 10:43:36

Artist: Alan Luo Feat. Jolin Tsai
Title: Zhen Ming Tian Zi
Tags: Show
BPM: 184
Filesize: 4842kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,49 stars, 88 notes)
  2. Hard (4,89 stars, 299 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 441 notes)
  4. Normal (2,92 stars, 159 notes)
Download: Alan Luo Feat. Jolin Tsai - Zhen Ming Tian Zi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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New map old song

mod mod
Last edited by _llkey_18 , edited 17 times in total.
LirsRosso
159 posts
Joined April 2009
LirsRosso
star
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
>~</
Andzia
7 posts
Joined December 2008
Andzia
Cool map *-*, staaaaaaaaaaaaar~
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
nice
[Hard] may be a bit boring(too many sticken 2 notes)

star
lolyf
8 posts
Joined June 2009
lolyf
Good map~~I hope more people can make map of Chinese song ~ :P
lolyf
8 posts
Joined June 2009
lolyf
I forget the star :o
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
●Timing :

BPM : 184.00 / offset : 11,014

Don't forget snap all notes and green lines.

●Set a preview point.

●[Normal] is fine for me.

●[Insane]

00:33:349 (10,11,12) - it's not a good jump,consider to change it.(Just a suggestion.)

star.
Secu_old
21 posts
Joined January 2009
Secu_old
oooh good map
i love all your maps =3
Uan
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
176 posts
Joined August 2009
Uan
Good!!^^
Star~
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

my modding

[Normal]
00:24:057 (4) - End Notes add clap
00:46:557 (1) - End Notes add finish


[Insane]
01:16:068 (4) - add clap
02:18:840 (1) - add finish


good song!
+star
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Insane]
0:32:209 (4,5,6) up 1 grid
1:09:546 (5,6) up a bit?
2:17:861 (2) left 1 grid, adjust the ending of (2) nearer to (3)

no spacing errors found, star~
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[Normal]
00:52:753 (1,2) - I dont like stuff like this on the whole of this diff, 'cuz this map have high BPM and It's 'normal' as well. change them to something that not just click-click. but maybe other modder will see they're fine idk but for me not, sorry ;w; but silder like this 00:55:361 (1,2) look better to me.

[Insane]
look fine ~
xierbaliti
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Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
-Normal-
00:42:807 (1) - start at 00:42:644 and end at 00:43:622
00:48:024 (1) - start at 00:47:861 and end at 00:48:840
01:24:546 (1) - start at 01:24:383 and end at 01:25:361
01:29:763 (1) - start at 01:29:600 and end at 01:30:579
01:44:927 (1) - end at 01:46:231

some spinner suggestions >_>

have a star :D
_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
_llkey_18

xierbaliti wrote:

-Normal-
00:42:807 (1) - start at 00:42:644 and end at 00:43:622
00:48:024 (1) - start at 00:47:861 and end at 00:48:840
01:24:546 (1) - start at 01:24:383 and end at 01:25:361
01:29:763 (1) - start at 01:29:600 and end at 01:30:579
01:44:927 (1) - end at 01:46:231 done

some spinner suggestions >_>

have a star :D
others i dont know, maybe too short ?
_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
_llkey_18

orioncomet wrote:

[Normal]
00:52:753 (1,2) - I dont like stuff like this on the whole of this diff, 'cuz this map have high BPM and It's 'normal' as well. change them to something that not just click-click. but maybe other modder will see they're fine idk but for me not, sorry ;w; but silder like this 00:55:361 (1,2) look better to me.

[Insane]
look fine ~
fixed maybe its more easy now
Garven
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Garven
As per your request:
As per your request:

[General]
You should add a yellow hit circle overlay if you're going to use the yellow slidertrack borders. Looks weird with the white on yellow like that.
Considering where you end your maps, putting a kiai fountain burst at 02:30:579 is a really cool effect, I'm thinking.

[Normal]
00:42:807 (1) - These short spinners might be better off mapped through. They're fairly short in the easiest difficulty and the notes after them are fairly too soon.
01:21:448 (2) - Feels better like this:

02:12:318 (1) - Okay, these ones are just way too short for a difficulty like this to me. Map through them please.
02:22:753 (1) - ^
Mostly just worried about the spinner use in this difficulty. I think there was only one that I felt was fine, haha.

[Insane]
01:29:274 (6) - Make this into a single beat? All the other times you lead into the female singer spinner, you go strictly vocals, and this feels weird when it breaks that pattern.

Looks fine minus the spinners in Normal.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
[Normal]
00:44:600 (1) - Notes shouldn't come this close to the end of a slider on the easiest difficulty.
00:49:818 (1) - ^
01:00:579 (1) - Maybe Lengthen this to 01:03:187?
01:26:340 (1) - Too close to the end of spinner.
01:31:557 (1) - ^
01:52:753 (1) - Maybe shorten to 01:54:709?

[Insane]
02:18:187 (3) - Add a new combo because it has a different rhythm.
02:28:622 (3) - ^
02:29:274 (6) - Add a new combo to look good?
_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
_llkey_18

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Normal]
00:44:600 (1) - Notes shouldn't come this close to the end of a slider on the easiest difficulty. fixed
00:49:818 (1) - ^ fixed
01:00:579 (1) - Maybe Lengthen this to 01:03:187? agreed
01:26:340 (1) - Too close to the end of spinner. fixed
01:31:557 (1) - ^ fixed
01:52:753 (1) - Maybe shorten to 01:54:709? yeah

[Insane]
02:18:187 (3) - Add a new combo because it has a different rhythm. done
02:28:622 (3) - ^ done
02:29:274 (6) - Add a new combo to look good?


All fixed ,thank you so much for mod it ^^
ZLOdeuka-
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Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
[General]

I like it, as always)

[Normal]

(✹) 00:26:340 (1) - can align the slider? does not look carefully

(✹) 00:55:850 (2) - add a cotton? and then remove

(✹) 01:40:198 (2) - ^

(✹) 01:42:807 (2) - ^

[Insane]

~fine ^^

~STAR
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- You have over 1 min left of the mp3 at the end, cut it? (Or maybe map it)
-- You could add a Hard I guess.

Normal:

Approach Rate +1?

00:39:709 (4) - New combo?
00:41:340 (1) - Remove new combo if done ^
00:42:807 (1) - Start at 00:42:644? (More spinning time...)
00:48:024 (1) - Start at 00:47:861? ^
00:54:383 (x) - Note?
00:54:709 (x) - ^
00:55:035 (x) - ^ (The gap feels weird)
01:24:546 (1) - Start at 01:24:383?
01:29:763 (1) - Start at 01:29:600?
01:36:122 (x) - Note?
01:36:448 (x) - ^
01:36:774 (x) - ^ (Gap feels weird)
01:41:340 (x) - Note?
01:41:666 (x) - ^
01:41:992 (x) - ^ (Or you could do something like 01:51:774 (6) -)

Insane:

Approach Rate +1 (please!)

00:42:807 (1) - Start at 00:42:644? (Plays better imo)
00:48:024 (1) - Start at 00:47:861? ^
01:02:209 (4) - New combo?
01:02:861 (8) - Place where 01:02:535 (6) - was, plays better (imo!)
01:18:513 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:24:546 (1) - Start at 01:24:383?
01:29:763 (1) - Start at 01:29:600?
01:34:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern isn't really intuitive, I had to look at editor just to see what was going on. Maybe try something else?
02:24:383 (2) - This one is hard to see after a spinner imo, maybe move it away from the center?

The combo's are a bit weird on this diff, especially if you compare them to Normal, but doesn't really matter.

All opinions, sorry, here's a star though! :D
yaya
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yaya
you need full upload .
Selee
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Selee
;) Star
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Hi :)

  1. Timing looks good to me
  2. Make a Hard? Normal and Insane are kinda balanced, but the difficulty gap is still pretty big. A hard would help fill that gap a bit more. (and if you can, make an Easy since Normal is bordering on being too hard for the easiest diff)
[NORMAL]

The layout is kinda boring (Too many straight lines with the beats), but the rhythms with the beats are pretty good, which makes up for it. It might be a bit hard for the easiest diff though, buuut I can let it pass, but only just. it would be a good idea to make an Easy if you can.

[INSANE]

I shouldn't like this, but It's kinda fun. It's not amazing, and it's kinda overmapped with that spacing, but I still found it fun.
That said, pretty much everything before 01:55:035 didn't seem mapped to the music too well. I don't think you were mapping to the lyrics there, but it felt odd. The bit after that seemed fine though. It was still alright so I won't bother you too much about that.

02:28:622 (1,2,3,1) - I dunno, but these jumps don't feel right. Sure, it was jumpy before this, but these don't feel right. Perhaps you could remove these.

This one is an odd one. I shouldn't like it, because of all those straight lines and how Insane doesn't follow the music too great, but it has an odd fun factor about it. I dunno, but I kinda liked it. It could use more difficulties to fill the diff gaps there. If you can make an Easy and a Hard for me, and they're all good, I'll give you a bubble, something I don't do very often.

Starred
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_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
_llkey_18
Thanks for modding ^_^, ill make easy and hard ;P
Selee
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Selee
=w=

Download: Alan Luo Feat. Jolin Tsai - Zhen Ming Tian Zi (_llkey_18) [Normal].osu
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
And to check those 2 new diffs.

[EASY]

00:20:796 (1) - This might be a bit close to that last spinner. Could you move this to start at maybe 00:21:448? (and make it smaller too so it doesn't overlap with that note after this.

[HARD]

Maybe decrease the Overall Difficulty and Approach Rate by 1? Feels a bit high to me.

01:02:209 (2,3,4,5,6) - The way the stream overlaps itself doesn't look too great. Plays weird too. Could you rearrange it so it doesn't overlap like that?

Apart from that, good stuff. Get those fixed and I'll bubble!
_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
_llkey_18

Doomsday wrote:

And to check those 2 new diffs.

[EASY]

00:20:796 (1) - This might be a bit close to that last spinner. Could you move this to start at maybe 00:21:448? (and make it smaller too so it doesn't overlap with that note after this.

[HARD]

Maybe decrease the Overall Difficulty and Approach Rate by 1? Feels a bit high to me.

01:02:209 (2,3,4,5,6) - The way the stream overlaps itself doesn't look too great. Plays weird too. Could you rearrange it so it doesn't overlap like that?

Apart from that, good stuff. Get those fixed and I'll bubble!

All fixed ^^ thanks
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
I don't quite like insane like I used to, but I can't see anything actually wrong though, and I did promise a bubble, so here you go
Larto
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Larto
Overall:

Insane:
01:00:008 - Why does the Kiai end here? Make the Kiai end at 01:01:883 - or at 01:03:187 -

00:42:318 (5) - Is not stacking under the slider correctly.
01:00:090 (1) - Spinner is veeery unfitting. Please map this part differently.
02:24:383 (2) - Could you move that slider a bit? the spinner before it makes it kinda hard to see.
SPOILER

Hard:
00:59:600 (1) - Spinner is veeery unfitting. Please map this part differently.
02:18:432 (1) - Remove New combo?
02:28:867 (1) - ^

Normal:
02:16:231 (5) - New Combo?

Easy:
00:18:513 (1) - That spinner isn't very fitting either
_llkey_18
199 posts
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Topic Starter
_llkey_18

Larto wrote:

Overall:

Insane:
01:00:008 - Why does the Kiai end here? Make the Kiai end at 01:01:883 - or at 01:03:187 -

00:42:318 (5) - Is not stacking under the slider correctly.
01:00:090 (1) - Spinner is veeery unfitting. Please map this part differently.
02:24:383 (2) - Could you move that slider a bit? the spinner before it makes it kinda hard to see.
SPOILER

Hard:
00:59:600 (1) - Spinner is veeery unfitting. Please map this part differently.
02:18:432 (1) - Remove New combo?
02:28:867 (1) - ^

Normal:
02:16:231 (5) - New Combo?

Easy:
00:18:513 (1) - That spinner isn't very fitting either
All fixed ^_^thanks for modding :)
Larto
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Larto
o/
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
That bass.

Ranked!
Curisu
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Curisu
GJ llkey~
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