ajeemaniz wrote:

additionally,
01:01:384 (61384|4,61718|5,62051|6,62384|0,62717|0,63051|2,63384|1,63717|0,64051|0,64384|4,64717|2,65051|6,65384|2,65718|0,66051|6,66384|4) - you can copy these grc_**.wav to this part 01:12:051 - until 01:21:051 - , those piano feels empty in there
and 01:23:383 (83383|6,84050|0,84716|5,85383|0,86050|3,86716|6,87383|5,88050|3,88716|4,89383|2,90050|3,90716|4) - still not have C / clap on kiai..
01:31:383 (91383|6,91716|1,92049|5,92383|0) - lol i think you can use soft-hitclap in sample because the notes already full
/w/

Wonki wrote:

호이

하퍼

00:04:219 (4219|2) - 손꼬임 방지를 위해 2로 이동 피아노 치는 느낌을 표현했수다. 초반에 같은 col에 있는 노트들은 다 같은 음

00:05:553 (5553|2) - 5 이것두

00:11:219 (11219|3) - 7로 00:11:386 (11386|4,11553|3,11719|2) - 이부분을 좀더 편하게 치기위해 여기도 위와 같은 이유

00:12:719 (12719|1) - 1로 모양이 더이쁘당 Fixed

00:13:386 (13386|4,13553|2) - 우측으로 한칸씩이동 Fixed

00:20:969 - 음있음 일부러 하이퍼에는 안넣었우 1/1 한 스냅 속에서만 1/4를 표현하기위해

00:25:719 - 00:25:969 (25969|2,26053|1,26136|0,26219|6,26303|5,26386|4) - 이 모양이 이쁘고, 또 00:26:386 - 00:26:719 이 부분은 깔짝거리는 소리와 피아노의 왓다갓다 하는 음이 트릴이 어울릴 것 같아서 표현했수

00:31:886 - 이렇게 두 칸씩 띄어서 하는걸 희망함 한칸씩은 너무어렵 요건 생각해 보겠음

00:39:886 - 여기도 위와 마찬가지로 해줬으면 위와 같음

어나

00:11:886 (11886|3) - 2 넘치기업렵다 올라갔다 내려갔다 하는 음에 의해 필연적이고, 잘 들어보면 스페가 다 같은음

00:50:052 - 이게더 쉬울거같은디 어나더에서는 2개를 연타하는 느낌이고, 막난은 짤연 느낌이라 더 어려움

00:52:552 (52552|4) - 7로 옮겨서 그냥 67에 두는게 좋아보임 7에 4개 연속 나오는건 별로 맘에안들고, 00:52:385 (52385|5,52385|6,52552|4,52552|5,52718|3,52718|4,52718|6) - 이 구조에 만족하는중

01:20:051 - 좀더 깔금 Fixed

01:41:383 - 아무래도 4놋이 어울림 노트량 조정에 관해서 조금 생각해 보겠소

01:54:716 (114716|3,114799|4) - 이거 빡침 딱 조음 꺅

막난

00:28:886 - 갈금 패턴이 너무 단순해지는 느낌이라 일단 킵

00:29:386 - 패턴에 관해 좀더 생각해봐야겠우

01:12:134 - 01:12:801 - 이런곳들은 왜 1놋임 드럼의 칫칫 노트를 01:12:217 - 01:12:384 - 요런 위치만 넣음

01:51:883 (111883|6,111938|5) - 자리바꾸는게 좋을거같음 Rearranged

1. -.

1. 00:02:719 (2719|4) - move column 0? i like column 0|6 00:02:719 (2719|6,2719|0) - also you could add a note for triple the sound is strong similar like 00:10:719 - is better for this diff imo
2. 00:25:803 (25803|3) - move column 4 to stairs piano
3. 00:10:719 (10719|4) - move column 5
4. 00:41:886 (41886|2) - move column 1?
5. 01:00:884 - add note? like 01:00:551 - , 00:59:218 - and 1/1 you map 4 note for cymbal strong
6. 01:01:218 - ^
7. 01:01:384 - ^
8. 01:49:549 - missing note?
9. 01:58:049 (118049|2) - move column 1
10. 02:01:716 - add note sound similar like 02:00:383 -
11. 02:03:049 - ^ since in diff hyper have 3 note but here no?
12. 02:05:716 - ^

1. 00:18:053 (18053|2) - move column 1?
2. 01:09:384 (69384|1) - maybe column 0 for variation
3. 01:52:549 (112549|2) - move column 1
4. 02:02:049 (122049|6,122049|3,122049|2) - delete a note no strong piano also consider like diff another have 2 note?

1. 00:03:053 - 00:08:719 - i would put note 1/1 for piano imo need map this section is better for this normal diff for the spread of the next diff is general sound considering like 00:25:053 (25053|1,25386|3) -
2. 00:25:053 (25053|1,25386|3) - control + g since is some repetitive like 00:34:386 (34386|0,34553|3,34719|6,35053|1,35386|3,35719|5) - and 00:37:386 (37386|0,37719|2,38053|3) -
3. 00:48:718 (48718|6,48718|6) - delete a note is on top of another note (check aimod)
4. 01:09:051 (69051|3) - column 2 and 01:09:384 (69384|1) - column 0?
5. 01:22:050 - feel that missing note here
6. 01:28:216 (88216|4) - i like column 2 as stairs combine better the piano

Etsu wrote:

Hello o/

Mania mod request from my queue (NM)

[General]
Columns:
0|1|2|3|4|5|6

1. -.

[Another]

1. 00:02:719 (2719|4) - move column 0? i like column 0|6 00:02:719 (2719|6,2719|0) - also you could add a note for triple the sound is strong similar like 00:10:719 - is better for this diff imo Add one note at 0
2. 00:25:803 (25803|3) - move column 4 to stairs piano It's for pitch
3. 00:10:719 (10719|4) - move column 5 Keep this
4. 00:41:886 (41886|2) - move column 1? Fixed
5. 01:00:884 - add note? like 01:00:551 - , 00:59:218 - and 1/1 you map 4 note for cymbal strong Keep this for note amount balance
6. 01:01:218 - ^ same reason with above
7. 01:01:384 - ^ same reason with above
8. 01:49:549 - missing note? for this part 01:44:383 - 01:49:716 at another, I didn't put any notes for piano.
9. 01:58:049 (118049|2) - move column 1 Fixed
10. 02:01:716 - add note sound similar like 02:00:383 -It's not same.
11. 02:03:049 - ^ since in diff hyper have 3 note but here no? Deleted one note at hyper
12. 02:05:716 - ^ ?

[Hyper]

1. 00:18:053 (18053|2) - move column 1? Keep this
2. 01:09:384 (69384|1) - maybe column 0 for variation Keep this
3. 01:52:549 (112549|2) - move column 1 Keep this
4. 02:02:049 (122049|6,122049|3,122049|2) - delete a note no strong piano also consider like diff another have 2 note? Fixed

Etsu wrote:

Hello o/

[Wonki's Normal]

1. 00:03:053 - 00:08:719 - i would put note 1/1 for piano imo need map this section is better for this normal diff for the spread of the next diff is general sound considering like 00:25:053 (25053|1,25386|3) -
2. 00:25:053 (25053|1,25386|3) - control + g since is some repetitive like 00:34:386 (34386|0,34553|3,34719|6,35053|1,35386|3,35719|5) - and 00:37:386 (37386|0,37719|2,38053|3) -
3. 00:48:718 (48718|6,48718|6) - delete a note is on top of another note (check aimod)
4. 01:09:051 (69051|3) - column 2 and 01:09:384 (69384|1) - column 0?
5. 01:22:050 - feel that missing note here
6. 01:28:216 (88216|4) - i like column 2 as stairs combine better the piano

• halo Mod request

1. Offset :: Perfect!
   
   1ㅣ2ㅣ3ㅣ4ㅣ5ㅣ6ㅣ7
   
   [Beginer]
2. 00:52:718 (52718|1) - 1번라인으로 이동 2번에 너무 몰려있네요
3. 01:05:384 (65384|2) - 2번라인으로 이동 2번에 너무 없네요
4. 01:48:549 (108549|5,108549|2) - 2번 및 5번으로 이동 (01:45:883 (105883|2,105883|5) - 같은곳에있으니 적합하지 않은 느낌이네요)
5. 02:04:049 (124049|2,124383|1) - 6번 및 5번으로 이동 왼손에 너무 몰려있습니다
   
   [Hyper]
6. 00:20:969 - 의도적인 부분인가요?
7. 00:41:053 - 노트 추가 (00:40:719 - )
8. 00:41:219 - 이부분은 피아노 소리때문에 노트를 2개로둔건가요?
   위에 적은것처럼 00:41:053 - 이부분에 노트를 추가하고 00:39:219 (39219|6) - 이부분처럼 한개로하는게 어떨까요
9. 01:55:883 - 01:57:216 (117216|0,117383|0) - 요 패턴이 빠졌습니다
   
   [Another]
10. 00:41:219 - 노트 2개? 3개는 많다느껴집니다
11. 01:34:549 (94549|3) - 5번라인으로 이동
12. 02:03:049 (123049|3) - 이 히트사운드 맞는음 맞겠죠?
    왠지 갑자기 툭튀는 기분이들어서..
    [Sayakather]
    00:18:719 (18719|5,19386|5) - 2번라인으로 이동
    00:19:719 - 위에부분도그렇고 이부분도 그렇고 너무 6,7번에 몰려있어서 치는데 어색함이 많이 느껴졌습니다
    
    이와같이 변경해주세요

    
    그리고 02:05:716 - 이부분 변속이 급감해서 약간 위화감이 들었습니다 살짝만 높여주심이 어떨까 싶네요
    
    오랜만에 퀄리티 굉장한맵을 보고갑니당

Niks wrote:

• halo Mod request

1. Offset :: Perfect!
   
   1ㅣ2ㅣ3ㅣ4ㅣ5ㅣ6ㅣ7
   
   [Beginer]
2. 00:52:718 (52718|1) - 1번라인으로 이동 2번에 너무 몰려있네요 예
3. 01:05:384 (65384|2) - 2번라인으로 이동 2번에 너무 없네요 예
4. 01:48:549 (108549|5,108549|2) - 2번 및 5번으로 이동 (01:45:883 (105883|2,105883|5) - 같은곳에있으니 적합하지 않은 느낌이네요) 대칭 조아다
5. 02:04:049 (124049|2,124383|1) - 6번 및 5번으로 이동 왼손에 너무 몰려있습니다 재배치했수다
   
   [Hyper]
6. 00:20:969 - 의도적인 부분인가요? 예
7. 00:41:053 - 노트 추가 (00:40:719 - ) 노트 밸런스를 위해 킵
8. 00:41:219 - 이부분은 피아노 소리때문에 노트를 2개로둔건가요?
   위에 적은것처럼 00:41:053 - 이부분에 노트를 추가하고 00:39:219 (39219|6) - 이부분처럼 한개로하는게 어떨까요 피아노 때문이 맞소. 이 패턴은 킵하겠소
9. 01:55:883 - 01:57:216 (117216|0,117383|0) - 요 패턴이 빠졌습니다 재배치 완료
   
   [Another]
10. 00:41:219 - 노트 2개? 3개는 많다느껴집니다 예
11. 01:34:549 (94549|3) - 5번라인으로 이동 예
12. 02:03:049 (123049|3) - 이 히트사운드 맞는음 맞겠죠?
    왠지 갑자기 툭튀는 기분이들어서.. 노래 자체가 그럽디다
    [Sayakather]
    00:18:719 (18719|5,19386|5) - 2번라인으로 이동
    00:19:719 - 위에부분도그렇고 이부분도 그렇고 너무 6,7번에 몰려있어서 치는데 어색함이 많이 느껴졌습니다
    
    이와같이 변경해주세요

    
    1/1마다 12 67이 번갈아가면서 반복되는 구조로 매핑하였었습니다. 리어레인지
    오랜만에 퀄리티 굉장한맵을 보고갑니당

Ereedon wrote:

Lazy Sloth Mod, lmao too fast lmao
[Beginner]

00:15:719 (15719|6,16053|4,16386|2,16719|0) - I'd change this part to more "pitch-following" part Rearranged
01:04:051 (64051|0) - Isn't that high pitch?
01:05:718 (65718|3,66051|5,66384|4) - move one column -->
from 01:06:717 - to 01:10:717 - <- this part needs to be fixed (pitch issue)
01:49:716 - to 01:52:383 - <--- PITCH
I don't want to map too pitch relevance, but just hand balance

01:56:383 - add note?
01:57:716 - ^
01:59:049 - ^
I wanna use single note only at this part

etc etc (to this moment: 02:07:049 - ) :o

not necessary changes (which means you can ignore this stuff over here):
00:07:386 - maybe add note to 7?
00:09:053 - add 4?
00:09:386 - add 5?
00:15:386 - add somewhere (try to hear the pitch)
00:17:053 - add note
00:17:386 - add note
00:23:386 - ^
I used LN for 1/2 main melody structure that sound isn't 00:23:886

Maybe add some long notes here? (just like you did here 00:50:052 (50052|3) - )
00:43:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:44:719 - (delete 00:44:052 (44052|4) - )
00:45:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:46:718 - ^ (delete notes between that time)
00:47:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:48:718 - ^
already seems fine tho

SV SUGGESTION:
Maybe you should make little teleports here? between 01:41:716 - and 01:42:216 -
01:42:216 - and 01:42:549 -
01:42:549 - and 01:42:883 - etc.
to this moment 01:44:383 -
only for last diff

[Hyper]
00:34:719 (34719|0) - move to 3 (but you would have to change part after 00:34:886 - somehow just a little bit :p) looks fine to me, keep this
01:09:384 (69384|1) - move to 1 (lack of notes in first column) overall this section, first column already take adequate part

[Another]
00:52:552 (52552|4) - I would change this somehow ._. (Maybe try to move those short lns? for example pattern like this: 3256) hmm but seems fine to me and diff

I really like this song. This map looks great, those hitsounds are marvelous. Good job, awesome beatmap! =DD

Ereedon wrote:

Lazy Sloth Mod, lmao
[Wonki's Normal]
00:25:719 (25719|5) - Maybe you should make this long note longer? (from 00:25:719 - to 00:26:719 - , but in this way move 00:26:719 (26719|5) - this note somewhere else)

not necessary changes:
00:47:885 (47885|3,48052|4,48218|5) - move one column to the right
01:27:716 - I suggest this pattern



I really like this song. This map looks great, those hitsounds are marvelous. Good job, awesome beatmap!

ArcherLove wrote:

okay I'm back and just pointing out something I[ve been feel weird lately when playing this beatmap bcz u no reply PM plz
sayakather
name diff is bms-ish while the map itself LN-ish <_< sayaka good girl
1234567

00:04:553 (4553|2) - to 5 I want them to feel like playing a piano, when playing those notes
00:05:553 (5553|2) - to 5 ^
00:09:553 (9553|3) - to 5 ^
00:18:719 (18719|0) - to 3? Rearranged
00:26:053 (26053|6) - http://puu.sh/uvCu7/325401b32b.jpg change to LN, and not add note
00:35:136 (35136|1,35219|2,35219|5,35303|4) - the.. electro sound emphaszie? http://puu.sh/uvCyP/f81bf05984.jpg I don't want to put LN at this part
00:36:136 (36136|4,36219|1,36219|5,36303|2) - ^ http://puu.sh/uvCBl/b697b75edb.jpg ^
00:46:219 (46219|4,46219|2,46219|1,46302|5,46302|3,46302|0) - awkward imo, how about http://puu.sh/uvCMd/41e92b0d2c.jpg I think it's fine
00:50:052 (50052|0,50052|4,50052|3,50163|5,50163|4,50163|1,50274|5,50274|6,50274|2,50385|0,50385|3,50385|1,50496|1,50496|4,50496|2,50607|2,50607|3,50607|5) - this is seriously not hard, but I feel uncomfortable, I remember you say you want to keep jack, how about http://puu.sh/uvCXR/e9d9d8fe62.png (I feel a lot better when play) Awesome!
01:00:718 (60718|3,60718|4,60801|1,60801|2) - http://puu.sh/uvD7C/24078e64b7.png It's not bad to me
01:13:051 (73051|0,73134|1) - ctrl+j play better for me (for me) lmao but keep this
01:14:384 (74384|6,74467|5) - ^ ^
01:15:717 (75717|0,75801|1) - ^ ^
01:18:967 (78967|5,78967|3,79051|6,79051|4) - ^ ^
01:22:384 (82384|4,82550|4,82717|4) - hmm jack here is not really fun to play really .. how about http://puu.sh/uvDi6/5d5b8cbaaa.jpg don't you think it's flows better? you can also do this when doing that flow nicely with music http://puu.sh/uvDkp/5623dfa3fc.jpg Thx for suggestion! I take first one
01:25:966 (85966|0,86050|1) - ctrl+j? Keep this
01:30:883 (90883|5) - to 4? for visual Good!
01:31:383 (91383|0,91549|6) - you can make 1/8 or 1/4 LN here for cymbal finish emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDwt/adad0ebc21.png I don't want to put LN at this part
01:31:883 (91883|6,92216|0) - ^ ^
01:32:716 (92716|6,93049|6,93383|6,93716|6) - ^ ^
01:41:549 (101549|1) - to 4? Good!
you can make 01:52:383 (112383|0,112883|5) - a 1/2 but cut like this for melody long (the long synth) emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDLP/cdc2409655.jpg or the 2nd can be changed to 01:52:883 (112883|2) - instead Sorry but keep this
01:53:383 (113383|6) - ^ ^
01:58:883 (118883|2) - ctrl+h flow better Oki
02:01:216 (121216|4,121216|5,121383|5,121383|4) - different sound, how about http://puu.sh/uvDYy/61b3319cb4.png also the note before need 1 more note because the same sound with note after piano is different but I want to show organ piano-like sound
02:02:716 (122716|2) - to 2 Same reason with above

kkk no kudosu this is as thanks doing irc many times with me ;;

Maxus wrote:

Hello Garalulu! M4M

[SayaKather]
00:08:886 (8886|4,9053|2) - you should switch notes here, because the second note is higher PR compared to previous? Fixed

00:09:553 (9553|3) - in that case, also move this note to col 2 because of a lot lower pitch. Fixed

00:10:886 - why single note? it's not double piano sound

00:15:219 - 00:23:219 - 00:16:886 - 00:17:219 - I recommend you to make this triple note so that the chord pattern you try to make here can signify the piano sound better.. since from the way i see it is that it's 4 note 2 note pattern with lack of diversity for the moment. Fixed. make 3 3 pattern

For some of the mod above, you may apply on lower diff as well. applied

00:24:719 - well, i will suggest you try to use this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497908 , it signifies the pitch rising sound better here, and it gives symmetry and complement the pattern you make at 00:25:719 - , which gives double advantages. Fixed

00:26:386 (26386|4,26469|5,26553|3,26636|4) - this kind of sound can be made into jack to complement the same snare sound here.. i recommend move 00:26:386 (26386|4,26553|3) - to col 6 and col 5 here, it fit the sound better. or you can arrange to fit the jack there.. I don't want to put a jack at this part

00:32:886 - 00:33:219 - this triple is kinda questionable imo, there isn't any piano sound that you follow for 3 notes sound at 00:31:553 - 00:31:886 - ,etc .. makes the double? Thx for suggestion!

00:40:719 - should be 5 notes chord if following what you want at 00:41:053 - Oki

00:41:719 - the bracket stream seem focused on right hand which kinda unnecessary imo.. i think you can spread it a bit more to provide bracket balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497976 Fixed

00:43:052 (43052|5,43052|4,43052|6,43052|2) - This chord should be Ctrl+H'ed mainly because it's lower pitch chord that should be accented with left hand chord, and it provide variation with 00:44:052 - too. Oki

01:06:217 (66217|1,66551|0,66717|1) - i believe you can make it more symmetrical by make it 1-2-1 , it will mirrored the pattern at 01:05:718 (65718|6,65884|6,66051|6) - Good

01:16:217 (76217|5,76217|1,76301|4,76301|2) - you miss out the potential sound that can be made jack. Rearranged

01:20:051 - i find the svs here kinda hard to manage since you make them in the middle of harsh and dense chord, probably you can nerfed the svs?
change SV 2.0 0.67 -> 1.8 0.73. I think player will not confuse with this sv because svs already appear with strong drum sound, so they can understand why svs are here, play well this part.

01:31:383 (91383|6,91549|6,91716|6,91883|6,92049|6,92216|6,92383|6) - please avoid the anchor.. move 01:31:716 (91716|6,92049|6) - to 6

01:41:383 - you can add another note for finish sound, i don't think it will be too hard when it's finish sound.. Added

[Another]

00:33:719 - I find the pattern to be not symmetrical enough, how about try this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498275 Oki

00:54:385 - well this one has 2 note + 1 LN while the one at 00:52:385 - have 3 note + 1 ln, might wanna make them consistent. add one note

01:01:051 - i suggest to reduce the chord into double to differentiate with other finish sound. fixed

01:23:216 (83216|2,83300|0,83383|1) - not make this col 2,3,1? will be more symmetrical and easier to hit. nice point

01:32:049 - its worth to be added another note for piano i think.. I don't add that piano sound at this part

01:42:216 - i suggest differentiate the chord with 01:42:549 - 01:41:716 - because of different pitch. main piano is same pitch so keep this.

01:49:049 - 01:49:383 - 01:49:716 - felt underemphasized, you can probably add another note for each of the timeline here.. Fixed

[Hyper]

00:33:386 - Instead of making them the same as 00:31:886 - , how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498323 ? give symmetry and other pattern too. rearranged

01:00:551 - shouldn't this be double to make it consistent like 01:00:884 - ? add note at 01:00:884 - 01:01:218 -

01:22:717 (82717|4,82800|3,82884|2,82967|1) - I prefer this to be trill to differentiate with stair sound from before, it won't be too hard either .. rearranged

01:31:716 - 01:32:049 - I sort of hope you make this into single instead to differentiate from strong sound like 01:32:216 - , kinda awkward they have same note chord.. it will be consistent with 00:26:386 - too.. Fixed

01:52:883 - Random double imo, not kick sound.. 01:52:549 with melody sound so it's double

Have no time to mod all for a while.. hope this will be suffice :3

This map is quite interesting for me, but I still have my doubt over the SV in hardest diff, which sometimes kinda over the top for me and kinda forced in the middle of dense pattern.. i will watch this one for a while, but if you can tone down the sv / show proof that the SVs are alright, then i can help you push this i think

Maxus wrote:

Well, I understand your elaboration about the SVs, i didn't really ask to delete it or anything, but just asked for it to be nerfed a bit if you want it.. but if top players find it fine, i am fine with it.

anyway, here's the rest of mod.

[Wonki's Normal]

Note: If you apply my add notes mod, please don't forget to also put the HS..

00:02:719 - I get that you want to make your own variation of the opening, but this still feels too empty around here... i suggest you change 00:02:719 (2719|6,6719|2,9719|1) - to LN at the very least.. don't forget to shorten 00:08:719 - to 00:09:719 - if you apply. I want to keep this

00:48:052 - this part feels inconsistent with 00:44:052 - ... :/ lol

01:18:051 (78051|0,78717|5,79384|6) - it would be really great if you can turn these into 1/1 LN emphasizing the synth BG sound. Fixed

01:21:051 - make this double for consistency with 01:20:051 - Fixed

01:32:716 - Should be double too according to 01:32:216 - Fixed

01:34:049 - Should be 2 notes according to 01:23:050 - and apparently you forgot F HS here. then i put 1note 01:23:050 - here

01:46:716 - add another note for consistency with 01:46:383 - , don't forget to add HS cym_4dW Fixed

Call me back if you already done.

Maxus wrote:

Well, I understand your elaboration about the SVs, i didn't really ask to delete it or anything, but just asked for it to be nerfed a bit if you want it.. but if top players find it fine, i am fine with it.

anyway, here's the rest of mod.

[Beginner]
00:41:386 - i kinda wonder why is this double while at 00:42:053 - it's double with no F sound tbh.. I used double at drum roll like 00:40:719 - 00:41:053 - 00:42:053 - 00:42:719 - to emphasize them.

01:02:384 - I think you can expressed Pitch better here with https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7505219 Fixed

01:14:051 (74051|2) - move to col 5? the left hand movement a bit too hard for beginner imo. Oki

01:16:717 (76717|4) - also move to col 3 if you agree with above, since i know you try to mirror this. Good

02:00:049 (120049|2,120383|0) - move to col 2 and col 4? i find that col 2 doesn't have a note for a while there, and emphasis at 02:00:383 - can be expressed better with the note being at col 4. I don't want to add note more, so just moved

02:06:383 (126383|2,126716|3) - I find these to be a lot more fit in col 7 and col 5.. it mirroring the end part at 02:07:049 - which musically fit and good imo. Rearranged

Well, Please recheck all the hitsound in case there's unused / wrong HS, because it's really important, thank you :3
Call me back if you already done.

Maxus wrote:

I find it fine now :3
Good luck lulu

ArcherLove wrote:

ascended to madoka

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi, sorry for the huge delay
just a little stuff before qualify


Wonki's Normal
- 00:25:386 (25386|1) - move to 1? it would make a much neater pattern
- 00:41:886 - better not to miss a note for 1/2 stream (1/4 sound)

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi, sorry for the huge delay No problem!
just a little stuff before qualify

Beginner
- 00:15:053 (15053|3) - instead of long note, how about use 1/2 note pattern here? i think it would be better
- 00:16:719 (16719|0) - 00:23:053 (23053|3) - same goes to here ^ suggest to add note at white line here instead of LN
I didn't put note only with this sound 00:14:886. so I could make 1/1 pattern. there is melody at 1/2, so I want to express with LN.
- 00:56:718 (56718|3,56718|1) - move to the left by 1? Fixed
- 01:49:049 (109049|0,109383|2,109716|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/vqfFO/77ae8c3b5c.png , similiar idea with 01:46:383 (106383|4,106716|2,107049|0,107049|6) - Good! Fixed

Another
- 01:21:300 - why not add a note here? there is still 1/4 sound. added

Sayakather
- 00:44:219 (44219|3) - move to 5 to reduce the tension on thumb finger
- 00:48:218 (48218|3) - move to 2 same reason like before, i find it would be hard for later pattern on 00:48:385 (48385|3,48385|0,48385|5,48385|6,48441|2,48496|4,48552|6,48552|3,48552|0,48593|5,48593|1,48635|2,48635|4,48677|3,48718|6,48718|5,48718|0,48718|1) - should give a little spacing before the excecution
all fixed
- 01:00:218 (60218|3) - move to 3 could be much comfortable to play oki!
- 01:00:551 (60551|3) - suggest to move to 3 I want to make 01:00:384 (60384|6,60384|0,60384|3,60551|0,60551|3,60551|6) - this position with SV, so keep this.

Critical_Star wrote:

alright everything is good to go!
nyan