cipse oh my gOD
also ppaeaeg star
also ppaeaeg star
still think about kiai part, maybe remap that owoajeemaniz wrote:
additionally,
01:01:384 (61384|4,61718|5,62051|6,62384|0,62717|0,63051|2,63384|1,63717|0,64051|0,64384|4,64717|2,65051|6,65384|2,65718|0,66051|6,66384|4) - you can copy these grc_**.wav to this part 01:12:051 - until 01:21:051 - , those piano feels empty in there
and 01:23:383 (83383|6,84050|0,84716|5,85383|0,86050|3,86716|6,87383|5,88050|3,88716|4,89383|2,90050|3,90716|4) - still not have C / clap on kiai..
01:31:383 (91383|6,91716|1,92049|5,92383|0) - lol i think you can use soft-hitclap in sample because the notes already full
/w/
>w<)bWonki wrote:
호이하퍼00:04:219 (4219|2) - 손꼬임 방지를 위해 2로 이동 피아노 치는 느낌을 표현했수다. 초반에 같은 col에 있는 노트들은 다 같은 음
00:05:553 (5553|2) - 5 이것두
00:11:219 (11219|3) - 7로 00:11:386 (11386|4,11553|3,11719|2) - 이부분을 좀더 편하게 치기위해 여기도 위와 같은 이유
00:12:719 (12719|1) - 1로 모양이 더이쁘당 Fixed
00:13:386 (13386|4,13553|2) - 우측으로 한칸씩이동 Fixed
00:20:969 - 음있음 일부러 하이퍼에는 안넣었우 1/1 한 스냅 속에서만 1/4를 표현하기위해
00:25:719 - 00:25:969 (25969|2,26053|1,26136|0,26219|6,26303|5,26386|4) - 이 모양이 이쁘고, 또 00:26:386 - 00:26:719 이 부분은 깔짝거리는 소리와 피아노의 왓다갓다 하는 음이 트릴이 어울릴 것 같아서 표현했수
00:31:886 - 이렇게 두 칸씩 띄어서 하는걸 희망함 한칸씩은 너무어렵 요건 생각해 보겠음
00:39:886 - 여기도 위와 마찬가지로 해줬으면 위와 같음어나00:11:886 (11886|3) - 2 넘치기업렵다 올라갔다 내려갔다 하는 음에 의해 필연적이고, 잘 들어보면 스페가 다 같은음
00:50:052 - 이게더 쉬울거같은디 어나더에서는 2개를 연타하는 느낌이고, 막난은 짤연 느낌이라 더 어려움
00:52:552 (52552|4) - 7로 옮겨서 그냥 67에 두는게 좋아보임 7에 4개 연속 나오는건 별로 맘에안들고, 00:52:385 (52385|5,52385|6,52552|4,52552|5,52718|3,52718|4,52718|6) - 이 구조에 만족하는중
01:20:051 - 좀더 깔금 Fixed
01:41:383 - 아무래도 4놋이 어울림 노트량 조정에 관해서 조금 생각해 보겠소
01:54:716 (114716|3,114799|4) - 이거 빡침 딱 조음 꺅막난00:28:886 - 갈금 패턴이 너무 단순해지는 느낌이라 일단 킵
00:29:386 - 패턴에 관해 좀더 생각해봐야겠우
01:12:134 - 01:12:801 - 이런곳들은 왜 1놋임 드럼의 칫칫 노트를 01:12:217 - 01:12:384 - 요런 위치만 넣음
01:51:883 (111883|6,111938|5) - 자리바꾸는게 좋을거같음 Rearranged
Thx for modding!!Etsu wrote:
Hello o/
Mania mod request from my queue (NM)
[General]Columns:
0|1|2|3|4|5|6[Another]
- -.
[Hyper]
- 00:02:719 (2719|4) - move column 0? i like column 0|6 00:02:719 (2719|6,2719|0) - also you could add a note for triple the sound is strong similar like 00:10:719 - is better for this diff imo Add one note at 0
- 00:25:803 (25803|3) - move column 4 to stairs piano It's for pitch
- 00:10:719 (10719|4) - move column 5 Keep this
- 00:41:886 (41886|2) - move column 1? Fixed
- 01:00:884 - add note? like 01:00:551 - , 00:59:218 - and 1/1 you map 4 note for cymbal strong Keep this for note amount balance
- 01:01:218 - ^ same reason with above
- 01:01:384 - ^ same reason with above
- 01:49:549 - missing note? for this part 01:44:383 - 01:49:716 at another, I didn't put any notes for piano.
- 01:58:049 (118049|2) - move column 1 Fixed
- 02:01:716 - add note sound similar like 02:00:383 -It's not same.
- 02:03:049 - ^ since in diff hyper have 3 note but here no? Deleted one note at hyper
- 02:05:716 - ^ ?
- 00:18:053 (18053|2) - move column 1? Keep this
- 01:09:384 (69384|1) - maybe column 0 for variation Keep this
- 01:52:549 (112549|2) - move column 1 Keep this
- 02:02:049 (122049|6,122049|3,122049|2) - delete a note no strong piano also consider like diff another have 2 note? Fixed
thanks some are fixedEtsu wrote:
Hello o/
[Wonki's Normal]
- 00:03:053 - 00:08:719 - i would put note 1/1 for piano imo need map this section is better for this normal diff for the spread of the next diff is general sound considering like 00:25:053 (25053|1,25386|3) -
- 00:25:053 (25053|1,25386|3) - control + g since is some repetitive like 00:34:386 (34386|0,34553|3,34719|6,35053|1,35386|3,35719|5) - and 00:37:386 (37386|0,37719|2,38053|3) -
- 00:48:718 (48718|6,48718|6) - delete a note is on top of another note (check aimod)
- 01:09:051 (69051|3) - column 2 and 01:09:384 (69384|1) - column 0?
- 01:22:050 - feel that missing note here
- 01:28:216 (88216|4) - i like column 2 as stairs combine better the piano
Thx for modding owoNiks wrote:
- halo Mod request
- Offset :: Perfect!
1ㅣ2ㅣ3ㅣ4ㅣ5ㅣ6ㅣ7
[Beginer]- 00:52:718 (52718|1) - 1번라인으로 이동 2번에 너무 몰려있네요 예
- 01:05:384 (65384|2) - 2번라인으로 이동 2번에 너무 없네요 예
- 01:48:549 (108549|5,108549|2) - 2번 및 5번으로 이동 (01:45:883 (105883|2,105883|5) - 같은곳에있으니 적합하지 않은 느낌이네요) 대칭 조아다
- 02:04:049 (124049|2,124383|1) - 6번 및 5번으로 이동 왼손에 너무 몰려있습니다 재배치했수다
[Hyper]- 00:20:969 - 의도적인 부분인가요? 예
- 00:41:053 - 노트 추가 (00:40:719 - ) 노트 밸런스를 위해 킵
- 00:41:219 - 이부분은 피아노 소리때문에 노트를 2개로둔건가요?
위에 적은것처럼 00:41:053 - 이부분에 노트를 추가하고 00:39:219 (39219|6) - 이부분처럼 한개로하는게 어떨까요 피아노 때문이 맞소. 이 패턴은 킵하겠소- 01:55:883 - 01:57:216 (117216|0,117383|0) - 요 패턴이 빠졌습니다 재배치 완료
[Another]- 00:41:219 - 노트 2개? 3개는 많다느껴집니다 예
- 01:34:549 (94549|3) - 5번라인으로 이동 예
- 02:03:049 (123049|3) - 이 히트사운드 맞는음 맞겠죠?
왠지 갑자기 툭튀는 기분이들어서.. 노래 자체가 그럽디다
[Sayakather]
00:18:719 (18719|5,19386|5) - 2번라인으로 이동
00:19:719 - 위에부분도그렇고 이부분도 그렇고 너무 6,7번에 몰려있어서 치는데 어색함이 많이 느껴졌습니다
1/1마다 12 67이 번갈아가면서 반복되는 구조로 매핑하였었습니다. 리어레인지
오랜만에 퀄리티 굉장한맵을 보고갑니당
Thx for mod :3Ereedon wrote:
Lazy Sloth Mod, lmao too fast lmao
[Beginner]
00:15:719 (15719|6,16053|4,16386|2,16719|0) - I'd change this part to more "pitch-following" part Rearranged
01:04:051 (64051|0) - Isn't that high pitch?
01:05:718 (65718|3,66051|5,66384|4) - move one column -->
from 01:06:717 - to 01:10:717 - <- this part needs to be fixed (pitch issue)
01:49:716 - to 01:52:383 - <--- PITCH
I don't want to map too pitch relevance, but just hand balance
01:56:383 - add note?
01:57:716 - ^
01:59:049 - ^
I wanna use single note only at this part
etc etc (to this moment: 02:07:049 - ) :o
not necessary changes (which means you can ignore this stuff over here):
00:07:386 - maybe add note to 7?
00:09:053 - add 4?
00:09:386 - add 5?
00:15:386 - add somewhere (try to hear the pitch)
00:17:053 - add note
00:17:386 - add note
00:23:386 - ^
I used LN for 1/2 main melody structure that sound isn't 00:23:886
Maybe add some long notes here? (just like you did here 00:50:052 (50052|3) - )
00:43:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:44:719 - (delete 00:44:052 (44052|4) - )
00:45:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:46:718 - ^ (delete notes between that time)
00:47:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:48:718 - ^
already seems fine tho
SV SUGGESTION:
Maybe you should make little teleports here? between 01:41:716 - and 01:42:216 -
01:42:216 - and 01:42:549 -
01:42:549 - and 01:42:883 - etc.
to this moment 01:44:383 -
only for last diff
[Hyper]
00:34:719 (34719|0) - move to 3 (but you would have to change part after 00:34:886 - somehow just a little bit :p) looks fine to me, keep this
01:09:384 (69384|1) - move to 1 (lack of notes in first column) overall this section, first column already take adequate part
[Another]
00:52:552 (52552|4) - I would change this somehow ._. (Maybe try to move those short lns? for example pattern like this: 3256) hmm but seems fine to me and diff
I really like this song. This map looks great, those hitsounds are marvelous. Good job, awesome beatmap! =DD
thanksEreedon wrote:
Lazy Sloth Mod, lmao
[Wonki's Normal]
00:25:719 (25719|5) - Maybe you should make this long note longer? (from 00:25:719 - to 00:26:719 - , but in this way move 00:26:719 (26719|5) - this note somewhere else)
not necessary changes:
00:47:885 (47885|3,48052|4,48218|5) - move one column to the right
01:27:716 - I suggest this pattern
I really like this song. This map looks great, those hitsounds are marvelous. Good job, awesome beatmap!
Really Big Thanks Archer love you <3ArcherLove wrote:
okay I'm back and just pointing out something I[ve been feel weird lately when playing this beatmapbcz u no reply PM plz
sayakather
name diff is bms-ish while the map itself LN-ish <_< sayaka good girl
1234567
00:04:553 (4553|2) - to 5 I want them to feel like playing a piano, when playing those notes
00:05:553 (5553|2) - to 5 ^
00:09:553 (9553|3) - to 5 ^
00:18:719 (18719|0) - to 3? Rearranged
00:26:053 (26053|6) - http://puu.sh/uvCu7/325401b32b.jpg change to LN, and not add note
00:35:136 (35136|1,35219|2,35219|5,35303|4) - the.. electro sound emphaszie? http://puu.sh/uvCyP/f81bf05984.jpg I don't want to put LN at this part
00:36:136 (36136|4,36219|1,36219|5,36303|2) - ^ http://puu.sh/uvCBl/b697b75edb.jpg ^
00:46:219 (46219|4,46219|2,46219|1,46302|5,46302|3,46302|0) - awkward imo, how about http://puu.sh/uvCMd/41e92b0d2c.jpg I think it's fine
00:50:052 (50052|0,50052|4,50052|3,50163|5,50163|4,50163|1,50274|5,50274|6,50274|2,50385|0,50385|3,50385|1,50496|1,50496|4,50496|2,50607|2,50607|3,50607|5) - this is seriously not hard, but I feel uncomfortable, I remember you say you want to keep jack, how about http://puu.sh/uvCXR/e9d9d8fe62.png (I feel a lot better when play) Awesome!
01:00:718 (60718|3,60718|4,60801|1,60801|2) - http://puu.sh/uvD7C/24078e64b7.png It's not bad to me
01:13:051 (73051|0,73134|1) - ctrl+j play better for me (for me) lmao but keep this
01:14:384 (74384|6,74467|5) - ^ ^
01:15:717 (75717|0,75801|1) - ^ ^
01:18:967 (78967|5,78967|3,79051|6,79051|4) - ^ ^
01:22:384 (82384|4,82550|4,82717|4) - hmm jack here is not really fun to play really .. how about http://puu.sh/uvDi6/5d5b8cbaaa.jpg don't you think it's flows better? you can also do this when doing that flow nicely with music http://puu.sh/uvDkp/5623dfa3fc.jpg Thx for suggestion! I take first one
01:25:966 (85966|0,86050|1) - ctrl+j? Keep this
01:30:883 (90883|5) - to 4? for visual Good!
01:31:383 (91383|0,91549|6) - you can make 1/8 or 1/4 LN here for cymbal finish emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDwt/adad0ebc21.png I don't want to put LN at this part
01:31:883 (91883|6,92216|0) - ^ ^
01:32:716 (92716|6,93049|6,93383|6,93716|6) - ^ ^
01:41:549 (101549|1) - to 4? Good!
you can make 01:52:383 (112383|0,112883|5) - a 1/2 but cut like this for melody long (the long synth) emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDLP/cdc2409655.jpg or the 2nd can be changed to 01:52:883 (112883|2) - instead Sorry but keep this
01:53:383 (113383|6) - ^ ^
01:58:883 (118883|2) - ctrl+h flow better Oki
02:01:216 (121216|4,121216|5,121383|5,121383|4) - different sound, how about http://puu.sh/uvDYy/61b3319cb4.png also the note before need 1 more note because the same sound with note after piano is different but I want to show organ piano-like sound
02:02:716 (122716|2) - to 2 Same reason with above
kkk no kudosu this is as thanks doing irc many times with me ;;
SV will effect to emphasize chart structure, it won't exaggerate it tho. I emphasize kick/crash structure more strong to use SV. It'll be problem if that has LN in SV part, it's clearly stream pattern. Players already recognize the pattern of chart before passing that SV section. It's different as each player's skill, what I said before (recognizing pattern and passing that), It's not any problem. As RC, Problem will be appeared that SV used at part where can't feel to add any SV. I don't have enough skill to pass this chart perfectly, I had many testers already so it'll be not problem by my opinion and their opinion.Maxus wrote:
Hello Garalulu! M4M
[SayaKather]
00:08:886 (8886|4,9053|2) - you should switch notes here, because the second note is higher PR compared to previous? Fixed
00:09:553 (9553|3) - in that case, also move this note to col 2 because of a lot lower pitch. Fixed
00:10:886 - why single note? it's not double piano sound
00:15:219 - 00:23:219 - 00:16:886 - 00:17:219 - I recommend you to make this triple note so that the chord pattern you try to make here can signify the piano sound better.. since from the way i see it is that it's 4 note 2 note pattern with lack of diversity for the moment. Fixed. make 3 3 pattern
For some of the mod above, you may apply on lower diff as well. applied
00:24:719 - well, i will suggest you try to use this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497908 , it signifies the pitch rising sound better here, and it gives symmetry and complement the pattern you make at 00:25:719 - , which gives double advantages. Fixed
00:26:386 (26386|4,26469|5,26553|3,26636|4) - this kind of sound can be made into jack to complement the same snare sound here.. i recommend move 00:26:386 (26386|4,26553|3) - to col 6 and col 5 here, it fit the sound better. or you can arrange to fit the jack there.. I don't want to put a jack at this part
00:32:886 - 00:33:219 - this triple is kinda questionable imo, there isn't any piano sound that you follow for 3 notes sound at 00:31:553 - 00:31:886 - ,etc .. makes the double? Thx for suggestion!
00:40:719 - should be 5 notes chord if following what you want at 00:41:053 - Oki
00:41:719 - the bracket stream seem focused on right hand which kinda unnecessary imo.. i think you can spread it a bit more to provide bracket balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497976 Fixed
00:43:052 (43052|5,43052|4,43052|6,43052|2) - This chord should be Ctrl+H'ed mainly because it's lower pitch chord that should be accented with left hand chord, and it provide variation with 00:44:052 - too. Oki
01:06:217 (66217|1,66551|0,66717|1) - i believe you can make it more symmetrical by make it 1-2-1 , it will mirrored the pattern at 01:05:718 (65718|6,65884|6,66051|6) - Good
01:16:217 (76217|5,76217|1,76301|4,76301|2) - you miss out the potential sound that can be made jack. Rearranged
01:20:051 - i find the svs here kinda hard to manage since you make them in the middle of harsh and dense chord, probably you can nerfed the svs?
change SV 2.0 0.67 -> 1.8 0.73. I think player will not confuse with this sv because svs already appear with strong drum sound, so they can understand why svs are here, play well this part.
01:31:383 (91383|6,91549|6,91716|6,91883|6,92049|6,92216|6,92383|6) - please avoid the anchor.. move 01:31:716 (91716|6,92049|6) - to 6
01:41:383 - you can add another note for finish sound, i don't think it will be too hard when it's finish sound.. Added
[Another]
00:33:719 - I find the pattern to be not symmetrical enough, how about try this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498275 Oki
00:54:385 - well this one has 2 note + 1 LN while the one at 00:52:385 - have 3 note + 1 ln, might wanna make them consistent. add one note
01:01:051 - i suggest to reduce the chord into double to differentiate with other finish sound. fixed
01:23:216 (83216|2,83300|0,83383|1) - not make this col 2,3,1? will be more symmetrical and easier to hit. nice point
01:32:049 - its worth to be added another note for piano i think.. I don't add that piano sound at this part
01:42:216 - i suggest differentiate the chord with 01:42:549 - 01:41:716 - because of different pitch. main piano is same pitch so keep this.
01:49:049 - 01:49:383 - 01:49:716 - felt underemphasized, you can probably add another note for each of the timeline here.. Fixed
[Hyper]
00:33:386 - Instead of making them the same as 00:31:886 - , how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498323 ? give symmetry and other pattern too. rearranged
01:00:551 - shouldn't this be double to make it consistent like 01:00:884 - ? add note at 01:00:884 - 01:01:218 -
01:22:717 (82717|4,82800|3,82884|2,82967|1) - I prefer this to be trill to differentiate with stair sound from before, it won't be too hard either .. rearranged
01:31:716 - 01:32:049 - I sort of hope you make this into single instead to differentiate from strong sound like 01:32:216 - , kinda awkward they have same note chord.. it will be consistent with 00:26:386 - too.. Fixed
01:52:883 - Random double imo, not kick sound.. 01:52:549 with melody sound so it's double
Have no time to mod all for a while.. hope this will be suffice :3
This map is quite interesting for me, but I still have my doubt over the SV in hardest diff, which sometimes kinda over the top for me and kinda forced in the middle of dense pattern.. i will watch this one for a while, but if you can tone down the sv / show proof that the SVs are alright, then i can help you push this i think
doneMaxus wrote:
Well, I understand your elaboration about the SVs, i didn't really ask to delete it or anything, but just asked for it to be nerfed a bit if you want it.. but if top players find it fine, i am fine with it.
anyway, here's the rest of mod.
[Wonki's Normal]
Note: If you apply my add notes mod, please don't forget to also put the HS..
00:02:719 - I get that you want to make your own variation of the opening, but this still feels too empty around here... i suggest you change 00:02:719 (2719|6,6719|2,9719|1) - to LN at the very least.. don't forget to shorten 00:08:719 - to 00:09:719 - if you apply. I want to keep this
00:48:052 - this part feels inconsistent with 00:44:052 - ... :/ lol
01:18:051 (78051|0,78717|5,79384|6) - it would be really great if you can turn these into 1/1 LN emphasizing the synth BG sound. Fixed
01:21:051 - make this double for consistency with 01:20:051 - Fixed
01:32:716 - Should be double too according to 01:32:216 - Fixed
01:34:049 - Should be 2 notes according to 01:23:050 - and apparently you forgot F HS here. then i put 1note 01:23:050 - here
01:46:716 - add another note for consistency with 01:46:383 - , don't forget to add HS cym_4dW Fixed
Call me back if you already done.
Rechecked all HS and applied!Maxus wrote:
Well, I understand your elaboration about the SVs, i didn't really ask to delete it or anything, but just asked for it to be nerfed a bit if you want it.. but if top players find it fine, i am fine with it.
anyway, here's the rest of mod.
[Beginner]
00:41:386 - i kinda wonder why is this double while at 00:42:053 - it's double with no F sound tbh.. I used double at drum roll like 00:40:719 - 00:41:053 - 00:42:053 - 00:42:719 - to emphasize them.
01:02:384 - I think you can expressed Pitch better here with https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7505219 Fixed
01:14:051 (74051|2) - move to col 5? the left hand movement a bit too hard for beginner imo. Oki
01:16:717 (76717|4) - also move to col 3 if you agree with above, since i know you try to mirror this. Good
02:00:049 (120049|2,120383|0) - move to col 2 and col 4? i find that col 2 doesn't have a note for a while there, and emphasis at 02:00:383 - can be expressed better with the note being at col 4. I don't want to add note more, so just moved
02:06:383 (126383|2,126716|3) - I find these to be a lot more fit in col 7 and col 5.. it mirroring the end part at 02:07:049 - which musically fit and good imo. Rearranged
Well, Please recheck all the hitsound in case there's unused / wrong HS, because it's really important, thank you :3
Call me back if you already done.
Thank you >w <)//Maxus wrote:
I find it fine now :3
Good luck lulu
ascension to chexArcherLove wrote:
ascended to madoka
All fixed!Critical_Star wrote:
Hi, sorry for the huge delay
just a little stuff before qualify
Wonki's Normal
- 00:25:386 (25386|1) - move to 1? it would make a much neater pattern
- 00:41:886 - better not to miss a note for 1/2 stream (1/4 sound)
Thx CS nyan! >w<Critical_Star wrote:
Hi, sorry for the huge delay No problem!
just a little stuff before qualify
Beginner
- 00:15:053 (15053|3) - instead of long note, how about use 1/2 note pattern here? i think it would be better
- 00:16:719 (16719|0) - 00:23:053 (23053|3) - same goes to here ^ suggest to add note at white line here instead of LN
I didn't put note only with this sound 00:14:886. so I could make 1/1 pattern. there is melody at 1/2, so I want to express with LN.
- 00:56:718 (56718|3,56718|1) - move to the left by 1? Fixed
- 01:49:049 (109049|0,109383|2,109716|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/vqfFO/77ae8c3b5c.png , similiar idea with 01:46:383 (106383|4,106716|2,107049|0,107049|6) - Good! Fixed
Another
- 01:21:300 - why not add a note here? there is still 1/4 sound. added
Sayakather
- 00:44:219 (44219|3) - move to 5 to reduce the tension on thumb finger
- 00:48:218 (48218|3) - move to 2 same reason like before, i find it would be hard for later pattern on 00:48:385 (48385|3,48385|0,48385|5,48385|6,48441|2,48496|4,48552|6,48552|3,48552|0,48593|5,48593|1,48635|2,48635|4,48677|3,48718|6,48718|5,48718|0,48718|1) - should give a little spacing before the excecution
all fixed
- 01:00:218 (60218|3) - move to 3 could be much comfortable to play oki!
- 01:00:551 (60551|3) - suggest to move to 3 I want to make 01:00:384 (60384|6,60384|0,60384|3,60551|0,60551|3,60551|6) - this position with SV, so keep this.
XD Really big thanks about it!!!! 'W'w'W'Critical_Star wrote:
alright everything is good to go!
nyan