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Hishiro Chizuru

FuruSatori wrote:

from q

very general mod INCOMING

your map is honestly pretty good. You are mostly consistent with spacing and timing, but work on aesthetics! your blanketing skills could use a little sharpening
00:47:028 (4,1,1,1) hi rrtyui
00:50:457 (4,5) look for areas like this to blanket better
i didnt see anything in here that was really standing out, you seem to be very ahead of the curve in terms of beginner knowledge on mapping
look for areas to improve flow and consistency
If you havent already, i suggest watching pishifats mapping guides and mapping commentaries, they can help you a lot
good luck with the map!
also, check AIMod (ctrl+shift+a)
Thanks for the mod, and thanks for linking those videos, I actually haven't watched them yet :o

Also you just taught me about the ctr shift a :O thx fam lmao
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Azulae wrote:

hi from my mod queue

[General]
Vary volume and sampleset
Disable countdown and activate widescreen support
Add combo colours
Change the name of insane to extra

[Insane]
Honestly not too much to say.
Since you are still a beginner you need to improve yourself.
Just look at other people's map, who are experienced with mapping and try to learn how to use these patterns.
You can also watch some youtube videos explaining some mapping mechanics.

https://www.youtube.com/user/Pishifat
Will do, thanks for the insight!
rs_fadeaway
hello~ NM as ur req)

[Insane]

00:11:542 (2,3) - fix the DS
00:13:085 (3,4) - increase DS, the distance between slider and note could be more big than note and note.
00:16:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make them symmetrical with x-axis,will looks more neat
00:19:257 (2,3) - so close, pls always take attention on that the DS fit the rhythm.
01:17:800 (3) - no sound here,this overmap feels so strange,remove it.
01:25:085 (4,1) - these too close, Usually we add a little distance to distinguish between the two bars.
01:58:342 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i dont think these fit the music, indeed i could clear here the vocal
at 01:58:514, the rest part just like the resonance of it.
02:09:314 (1,2,3,4) - same ^
02:13:257 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - dont think should stay here and keep circling
02:33:142 (3) - dont get the point why reverse slider here

I can see u used a lot of patterns, but some times they are not fit well.make sure use them in right time, dont forget u are mapping the music.
And the distance problem is that whole map kinda random, we decrease DS when music soft, increase when intense, and use 1 kind DS when it constant.
Add hitsound, learn and try, or u never imoprove.
keep working on ~
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

rs_fadeaway wrote:

hello~ NM as ur req)

[Insane]

00:11:542 (2,3) - fix the DS
00:13:085 (3,4) - increase DS, the distance between slider and note could be more big than note and note.
00:16:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make them symmetrical with x-axis,will looks more neat
00:19:257 (2,3) - so close, pls always take attention on that the DS fit the rhythm.
01:17:800 (3) - no sound here,this overmap feels so strange,remove it.
01:25:085 (4,1) - these too close, Usually we add a little distance to distinguish between the two bars.
01:58:342 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i dont think these fit the music, indeed i could clear here the vocal
at 01:58:514, the rest part just like the resonance of it.
02:09:314 (1,2,3,4) - same ^
02:13:257 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - dont think should stay here and keep circling
02:33:142 (3) - dont get the point why reverse slider here

I can see u used a lot of patterns, but some times they are not fit well.make sure use them in right time, dont forget u are mapping the music.
And the distance problem is that whole map kinda random, we decrease DS when music soft, increase when intense, and use 1 kind DS when it constant.
Add hitsound, learn and try, or u never imoprove.
keep working on ~
Thanks for the mod, updated the beatmap! :)
WildCry
Hello NM From my modding queue post.

Insane

00:28:857 (5) - put this slider first of this 00:28:514 (4) - and make a blanket with them.
00:29:885 (4,5) - ^ same but not the blaket
00:32:628 (4,5) - ^
02:14:114 (3,4) - change this with something like...

02:33:142 (3) - change this for other thing like a long slider then a circle



Good map only try to do more repetitive if the song requires it ,only change the pattern and maintain the distance ,that's all See you!

Oh... and 02:44:971 (1) - this is so Beautiful!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

WildCry wrote:

Hello NM From my modding queue post.

Insane

00:28:857 (5) - put this slider first of this 00:28:514 (4) - and make a blanket with them.
00:29:885 (4,5) - ^ same but not the blaket
00:32:628 (4,5) - ^
02:14:114 (3,4) - change this with something like...

02:33:142 (3) - change this for other thing like a long slider then a circle



Good map only try to do more repetitive if the song requires it ,only change the pattern and maintain the distance ,that's all See you!

Oh... and 02:44:971 (1) - this is so Beautiful!

Thank you for the mod ^-^ <3

Your first couple suggestions I didn't follow exactly to keep good flow, but nevertheless made changes.

Also the slider took so long to do because I suck at sliders :P
vrnl
hello from my q /w/

nice song and for a new mapper this isnt all that bad really! ill give a general overview of stuff then get into things that dont fall under those categories.

general:

first use the AIMod to do some things that need to be done right away, like snapping objects.

second get some custom combo colors ! you can find them in song setup > colours. make them go with the background, since thats what theyre there for ^w^

next, a lot of ur sliders have some odd shapes. like this 00:01:771 (1) - could be easily fixed to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7026322 just by moving the anchors around a little. it goes a long way just by making every slider look nice. thats what makes the map as a whole fun to play : )

i didnt notice this before but theres no kiai! you need to use kiai to show where the biggest and best parts of the song are. get to it by using the timing and control points box, and selecing the Style tab. since u have a lot of timing points already u might have to work around some of them to make your kiais on point.

also, volume with ur hitsounds (whenever u do them) is important too. lower and raising the volume when the song is louder/softer make the map have a more professional feel to it so i recommend it! (and also its needed for rank too)

another big thing i saw was a lot of unnecessary small/large spacing. like here 01:19:600 (4,5) - theres no real reason for it to be this big since the vocals nor the beats are big here
and with small spacing, most of all the beginning section of the map seems too close, because all of a sudden at the drop of the song, the jumps get super big and its very sudden. so rather make the big jumps smaller or space the beginning stuff out more to make it more predictable

ok now for the dif:

00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - 00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - 00:31:257 (1,2,1,2) - having perfect stacking on any of these 4 slider things is sometimes confusing, so move them apart a little
00:21:657 (1) - dont make a new combo, and there are no beats here 00:22:000 (1) - so just but a single circle after the last repeat slider and make it be the (7) of that combo
00:40:171 (1,2,3,4) - maybe space these out more than the previous 1,2,3,4 jumps since the buildup is growing
00:41:542 (1,2,3,4) - here too
00:47:028 (1,2,3) - instead of just having these 3 sliders, have some notes after them like this and having them stack on the sliderends. it goes with the song and looks good too
00:56:457 - 00:57:142 - missing beats here, just simply putting a circle somewhere in the flow of the current setup will do
00:58:000 (1,2,3) - same thing here as before
01:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - on this theres a 1/8 spam, so doing something like a 1/8th repeat slider would be better. so if u were to do this you'd have to remake the stream
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - thats some pretty high SV. i think 2.5, maybe 3 should be ok
01:17:200 (1,2) - cute
01:30:142 (4,5) - stacked weird, make them smoother
01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you can use the distance snap tool to make streams the same distance apart and you should use it on this and any stream u want to make.
01:33:400 (6,7,8) - theres no beats here for this so delete it and make the transition to the next slider smoother
01:37:942 (2) - what to heck is this slider
01:54:571 (1,1) - dont make these new combo, just go with the old combo
01:55:257 (1) - theres no roll here, just do a circle in stead and keep it going with the old combo
01:58:342 (1,1,1) - same thing here with what i said towards the beginning of the mod. also no new combos are needed
02:09:314 (1,1,1) - ^
02:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - same thing here with what i said towards beginning of the mod with the 1/8th stream
02:34:000 (1,1) - this overlapping is a nono. makes it difficult to read and just not fun to play ;w;
02:36:742 (1,1) - ^
02:44:714 (7) - no beat on this
02:44:971 (1) - very pretty slider! but the ending could be moved outward a little to still end on the same tick and look symmectrical. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7026438 < 3
03:09:657 - this part to 03:20:628 - here could easily be mapped. leaving it out seems kinda pointless to me at least
03:20:628 - also here to 03:23:371 - you can do more than just one slider ;w;
same for 03:23:371 - to 03:26:114 -
03:43:942 (5,6,7) - too high SV imo just like before ;w;
03:52:514 (1,1,1) - same thing here with the other 2 i mentioned before this.
03:53:542 - if ur gonna end it here, make this 03:53:542 (2) - just a circle. but what u really should do is map til the end. u still have a good 25ish seconds u can map.

dang this is a long mod. i hope u find it helpful /w/
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

cute boy wrote:

hello from my q /w/

nice song and for a new mapper this isnt all that bad really! ill give a general overview of stuff then get into things that dont fall under those categories.

general:

first use the AIMod to do some things that need to be done right away, like snapping objects.

second get some custom combo colors ! you can find them in song setup > colours. make them go with the background, since thats what theyre there for ^w^

next, a lot of ur sliders have some odd shapes. like this 00:01:771 (1) - could be easily fixed to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7026322 just by moving the anchors around a little. it goes a long way just by making every slider look nice. thats what makes the map as a whole fun to play : )

i didnt notice this before but theres no kiai! you need to use kiai to show where the biggest and best parts of the song are. get to it by using the timing and control points box, and selecing the Style tab. since u have a lot of timing points already u might have to work around some of them to make your kiais on point.

also, volume with ur hitsounds (whenever u do them) is important too. lower and raising the volume when the song is louder/softer make the map have a more professional feel to it so i recommend it! (and also its needed for rank too)

another big thing i saw was a lot of unnecessary small/large spacing. like here 01:19:600 (4,5) - theres no real reason for it to be this big since the vocals nor the beats are big here
and with small spacing, most of all the beginning section of the map seems too close, because all of a sudden at the drop of the song, the jumps get super big and its very sudden. so rather make the big jumps smaller or space the beginning stuff out more to make it more predictable

ok now for the dif:

00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - 00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - 00:31:257 (1,2,1,2) - having perfect stacking on any of these 4 slider things is sometimes confusing, so move them apart a little
00:21:657 (1) - dont make a new combo, and there are no beats here 00:22:000 (1) - so just but a single circle after the last repeat slider and make it be the (7) of that combo
00:40:171 (1,2,3,4) - maybe space these out more than the previous 1,2,3,4 jumps since the buildup is growing
00:41:542 (1,2,3,4) - here too
00:47:028 (1,2,3) - instead of just having these 3 sliders, have some notes after them like this and having them stack on the sliderends. it goes with the song and looks good too
00:56:457 - 00:57:142 - missing beats here, just simply putting a circle somewhere in the flow of the current setup will do
00:58:000 (1,2,3) - same thing here as before
01:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - on this theres a 1/8 spam, so doing something like a 1/8th repeat slider would be better. so if u were to do this you'd have to remake the stream
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - thats some pretty high SV. i think 2.5, maybe 3 should be ok
01:17:200 (1,2) - cute
01:30:142 (4,5) - stacked weird, make them smoother
01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you can use the distance snap tool to make streams the same distance apart and you should use it on this and any stream u want to make.
01:33:400 (6,7,8) - theres no beats here for this so delete it and make the transition to the next slider smoother
01:37:942 (2) - what to heck is this slider
01:54:571 (1,1) - dont make these new combo, just go with the old combo
01:55:257 (1) - theres no roll here, just do a circle in stead and keep it going with the old combo
01:58:342 (1,1,1) - same thing here with what i said towards the beginning of the mod. also no new combos are needed
02:09:314 (1,1,1) - ^
02:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - same thing here with what i said towards beginning of the mod with the 1/8th stream
02:34:000 (1,1) - this overlapping is a nono. makes it difficult to read and just not fun to play ;w;
02:36:742 (1,1) - ^
02:44:714 (7) - no beat on this
02:44:971 (1) - very pretty slider! but the ending could be moved outward a little to still end on the same tick and look symmectrical. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7026438 < 3
03:09:657 - this part to 03:20:628 - here could easily be mapped. leaving it out seems kinda pointless to me at least
03:20:628 - also here to 03:23:371 - you can do more than just one slider ;w;
same for 03:23:371 - to 03:26:114 -
03:43:942 (5,6,7) - too high SV imo just like before ;w;
03:52:514 (1,1,1) - same thing here with the other 2 i mentioned before this.
03:53:542 - if ur gonna end it here, make this 03:53:542 (2) - just a circle. but what u really should do is map til the end. u still have a good 25ish seconds u can map.

dang this is a long mod. i hope u find it helpful /w/
Hoyl that's an insightful mod!

Thanks for the input, really appreciated! Updated my beatmap with the changes recommended in your mod (not all however, some I could justify, although some things may be because I'm too lazy right now xd)

Wish I could return the favor with a mod but I suck at mapping fundamentals and concepts so I'll just do the next best thing and throw you a kudosu xp

Really nice and clear mod!
Bursthammy
hello

Expert

00:00:400 (1,1) - I would try to fiddle with the first slider so that the curve blankets properly around the next slider. Giving a good first impression with maps as long as this will help you in the long run.
00:05:885 (1,1) - Visibility is pretty bad with the second slider coming in just as the last one fades out, I would try to end the first slider about 1/1 shorter and add a hitcircle in the 1/1 gap left behind so the player has a better opportunity to react.
00:11:028 (1) - Rotate this slider a little bit clockwise so it blankets around 00:10:342 (2,3,4) - a little better
00:42:914 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally I think these should be the same spacing as 00:43:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as there isn't really that buildup to warrant the spacing change. I would also try to improve the visual flow of the stream a little more.
00:52:342 (3,2,4,2) - These don't really need to be 1/4 sliders, they work better with the music as regular hitcircles.
01:01:771 (3,5) - ^
01:10:343 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This stream can be improved alot, both in terms of visual flow as well as spacing. For example, 01:11:200 (3,4,5) - Why are these spacings different?
01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - Neat pattern, I like it
01:33:657 (1,3) - Whats up with these CUHRAYZEE repeat slider shapes?
02:43:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also really nice pattern.
03:32:114 (2) - Doesn't need to be a slider, inconsistent with your previous identical patterns

Honestly, there's a lot more I could talk about but I think I can summarize most of what i'm missing right here:

The map's biggest problem is the inconsistency and overcomplexified between slider design. There are tons of sliders that have 2 or more anchor points where all it accomplishes is making the entire map visually inconsistent and well, not very pretty to look at. I think 00:44:628 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is one of the biggest offenders of this kind of thing. Is there any reason sliders this short need to have that many curves? Another prime offender that I mentioned earlier were 01:33:657 (1,3) - which actually, now that I look at them closely, I'm fairly sure these are unrankable since the slider balls are vibrating back and forth for a fraction of a second.

Good luck.
Graffin
nm from queue

fix sliderends and preview point


  • 00:10:685 (4) - turn this like 15 degrees counterclockwise
    01:06:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - triples in this whole section aren't good imo, there's not any sounds for them
    01:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - a 1/8 kickslider would fit the music a lot better
    01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is kinda ugly xd, give it a more aesthetic look
    02:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - same as before, 1/8 kickslider, also that stream could look better
    02:33:142 (2,3) - these arent perfectly aligned on a straight line fix pls
    02:36:400 (4) - better blanket here
    03:01:600 (1,2,3) - this fits the voice way better imo
good map overall!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Weber wrote:

hello

Expert

00:00:400 (1,1) - I would try to fiddle with the first slider so that the curve blankets properly around the next slider. Giving a good first impression with maps as long as this will help you in the long run.
00:05:885 (1,1) - Visibility is pretty bad with the second slider coming in just as the last one fades out, I would try to end the first slider about 1/1 shorter and add a hitcircle in the 1/1 gap left behind so the player has a better opportunity to react.
00:11:028 (1) - Rotate this slider a little bit clockwise so it blankets around 00:10:342 (2,3,4) - a little better
00:42:914 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally I think these should be the same spacing as 00:43:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as there isn't really that buildup to warrant the spacing change. I would also try to improve the visual flow of the stream a little more.
00:52:342 (3,2,4,2) - These don't really need to be 1/4 sliders, they work better with the music as regular hitcircles.
01:01:771 (3,5) - ^
01:10:343 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This stream can be improved alot, both in terms of visual flow as well as spacing. For example, 01:11:200 (3,4,5) - Why are these spacings different?
01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - Neat pattern, I like it
01:33:657 (1,3) - Whats up with these CUHRAYZEE repeat slider shapes?
02:43:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also really nice pattern.
03:32:114 (2) - Doesn't need to be a slider, inconsistent with your previous identical patterns

Honestly, there's a lot more I could talk about but I think I can summarize most of what i'm missing right here:

The map's biggest problem is the inconsistency and overcomplexified between slider design. There are tons of sliders that have 2 or more anchor points where all it accomplishes is making the entire map visually inconsistent and well, not very pretty to look at. I think 00:44:628 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is one of the biggest offenders of this kind of thing. Is there any reason sliders this short need to have that many curves? Another prime offender that I mentioned earlier were 01:33:657 (1,3) - which actually, now that I look at them closely, I'm fairly sure these are unrankable since the slider balls are vibrating back and forth for a fraction of a second.

Good luck.
Cheers! thanks for the mod and indicating overlying problem with the map >.<

I'll work on the big problem, and for now the map has been updated with changes
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Graffin wrote:

nm from queue

fix sliderends and preview point


  • 00:10:685 (4) - turn this like 15 degrees counterclockwise
    01:06:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - triples in this whole section aren't good imo, there's not any sounds for them
    01:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - a 1/8 kickslider would fit the music a lot better
    01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is kinda ugly xd, give it a more aesthetic look
    02:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - same as before, 1/8 kickslider, also that stream could look better
    02:33:142 (2,3) - these arent perfectly aligned on a straight line fix pls
    02:36:400 (4) - better blanket here
    03:01:600 (1,2,3) - this fits the voice way better imo
good map overall!
Thanks you very much for the mod! a lot of the changes sound better aligned with the music! :D

Cheers!
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Q

[Expert]
00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read and play
01:33:657 (1,3) - Hard to read reversearrow, looks unrankable, imo
01:48:571 (4,2) - stack
03:23:371 (1,2,3) - looks bad overlap
Gl
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Expert]
00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read and play
01:33:657 (1,3) - Hard to read reversearrow, looks unrankable, imo
01:48:571 (4,2) - stack
03:23:371 (1,2,3) - looks bad overlap
Gl
Thanks for the mod! o/
Ryuusei Aika
from queue

General
no kiai part and preview point?
cancel countdown and widescreen support

Expert
00:11:371 (2) - nc should be here
01:02:800 (1,1) - cancel nc
00:47:714 (3,5) - use two lower sv here would be better
00:58:686 (3,5) - ^
01:59:028 (3,5) - ^
02:10:000 (3,5) - ^

that's all, btw i like the way u use 1/4 silders
gl
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Neanmoins wrote:

from queue

General
no kiai part and preview point?
cancel countdown and widescreen support

Expert
00:11:371 (2) - nc should be here
01:02:800 (1,1) - cancel nc
00:47:714 (3,5) - use two lower sv here would be better
00:58:686 (3,5) - ^
01:59:028 (3,5) - ^
02:10:000 (3,5) - ^

that's all, btw i like the way u use 1/4 silders
gl
Thanks for the mod, updated!
terratropic
hi from nm

Expert
-felt that there were many triples that were mapped to nothing so consider fixing those overmaps if you're aiming for rank
-as nice as those patterns look i dont think SV multipliers above 2.00 are allowed either so watch out for that too
00:02:457 (1) - sliderend should be on red tick not blue
00:03:828 (2,3,4) - i dont see what these are mapped to, 1/2 sliders would be more appropriate here
00:08:457 - missing note?
00:11:885 (3,4,5) - you could silence the sliderends of these throughout the map
00:10:600 (3) - i think its better off without this
00:17:114 (2) - again, i'm not sure if you really need these
00:18:485 (2) - see above
00:25:942 (2,4) - you could space these a tad bit apart from 00:25:771 (1,3)
00:38:457 (3) - i think it would be more consistent if you make this a 1/2 slider
00:54:742 - shorten this slider a bit so its 1/2
00:55:085 (4) - add a circle on top of 00:55:257 (1)
01:11:714 (1) - no kiai here?
01:03:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - i dont see the reason for these stacked triples.. i dont hear it in the song
01:17:200 (1,2) - nice touch there
01:30:571 (6) - feel that its too close to the previous note, maybe make 01:30:228 (5,6) into 1/2 sliders. https://puu.sh/tso3M/b88bf7ca96.jpg
01:39:485 (3,4) - too far apart imo, id just copy and flip 01:40:171 (5) and make a blanket out of it http://puu.sh/tsoDP/89ded38bfe.jpg
01:44:285 (3) - i'd ctrl-g this for better flow
02:07:257 (4) - again, sliderend should be on the red tick
02:13:771 (2) - see above
02:14:800 (1,2,3) - these should be individual circles to emphasize the kicks
02:23:028 (1) - again, no kiai?
02:32:628 (1) - slider should end on white tick if you want to add hitsound
02:33:142 (2,3) - again, i dont hear anything in the music with these notes, 1/2 beats sound more appropriate here
example

02:55:257 (2) - extend the slider to the blue tick
02:55:942 (1) - instead of a reverse slider it make more sense to have 4 1/1 notes kinda like this (i used 15° angles)
- then blanket 02:58:685 (1) with the previous slider https://puu.sh/tsl0V/fc7cbd19b3.jpg
03:02:971 (6) - not a fan of these type of reverse sliders, maybe just reverse once and add a 1/1 slider at 03:03:485
03:05:542 (2) - why not have one long slider here
03:06:914 - then put a spinner here
03:50:800 (1,2,3,4) - again, there should be individual circles covering the kicks here
03:53:200 (7) - this kickslider should be a circle instead

you got some really nice patterns here.. good luck
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

terratropic wrote:

hi from nm

Expert
-felt that there were many triples that were mapped to nothing so consider fixing those overmaps if you're aiming for rank
-as nice as those patterns look i dont think SV multipliers above 2.00 are allowed either so watch out for that too
00:02:457 (1) - sliderend should be on red tick not blue
00:03:828 (2,3,4) - i dont see what these are mapped to, 1/2 sliders would be more appropriate here
00:08:457 - missing note?
00:11:885 (3,4,5) - you could silence the sliderends of these throughout the map
00:10:600 (3) - i think its better off without this
00:17:114 (2) - again, i'm not sure if you really need these
00:18:485 (2) - see above
00:25:942 (2,4) - you could space these a tad bit apart from 00:25:771 (1,3)
00:38:457 (3) - i think it would be more consistent if you make this a 1/2 slider
00:54:742 - shorten this slider a bit so its 1/2
00:55:085 (4) - add a circle on top of 00:55:257 (1)
01:11:714 (1) - no kiai here?
01:03:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - i dont see the reason for these stacked triples.. i dont hear it in the song
01:17:200 (1,2) - nice touch there
01:30:571 (6) - feel that its too close to the previous note, maybe make 01:30:228 (5,6) into 1/2 sliders. https://puu.sh/tso3M/b88bf7ca96.jpg
01:39:485 (3,4) - too far apart imo, id just copy and flip 01:40:171 (5) and make a blanket out of it http://puu.sh/tsoDP/89ded38bfe.jpg
01:44:285 (3) - i'd ctrl-g this for better flow
02:07:257 (4) - again, sliderend should be on the red tick
02:13:771 (2) - see above
02:14:800 (1,2,3) - these should be individual circles to emphasize the kicks
02:23:028 (1) - again, no kiai?
02:32:628 (1) - slider should end on white tick if you want to add hitsound
02:33:142 (2,3) - again, i dont hear anything in the music with these notes, 1/2 beats sound more appropriate here
example

02:55:257 (2) - extend the slider to the blue tick
02:55:942 (1) - instead of a reverse slider it make more sense to have 4 1/1 notes kinda like this (i used 15° angles)
- then blanket 02:58:685 (1) with the previous slider https://puu.sh/tsl0V/fc7cbd19b3.jpg
03:02:971 (6) - not a fan of these type of reverse sliders, maybe just reverse once and add a 1/1 slider at 03:03:485
03:05:542 (2) - why not have one long slider here
03:06:914 - then put a spinner here
03:50:800 (1,2,3,4) - again, there should be individual circles covering the kicks here
03:53:200 (7) - this kickslider should be a circle instead

you got some really nice patterns here.. good luck
Cheers! thanks for the insightful mod, changes have been made and map has been updated!
Agatsu
qqqqqqqqueeuee

  • expert

  1. change the volume, 100% is loud ;w;
  2. 01:37:942 (2) - this slider is unrankable pls change shape
  3. 01:44:628 (1) - ^
  4. 01:45:314 (3) - ^
  5. i recommend you to look at patterns in some ranked maps and maybe you could apply them to your map :D

good luck
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Agatsu wrote:

qqqqqqqqueeuee

  • expert

  1. change the volume, 100% is loud ;w;
  2. 01:37:942 (2) - this slider is unrankable pls change shape
  3. 01:44:628 (1) - ^
  4. 01:45:314 (3) - ^
  5. i recommend you to look at patterns in some ranked maps and maybe you could apply them to your map :D

good luck
TY for the mod! o/
bezbashn
[Expert]
TsugumiIsObvBestGirl.mp3 - Haven't been used. Don't forget about it.
p.s. Convert this to wav
00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - Put them on the same level, because it's hard to read that mapping with 1/4 sliders. Or just put them a bit higher.
00:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1) - Overlap
01:17:542 - Put here a 2x slider velocity point, and make a better heart. It won't be a huge difference in reading, but it will look more prettier. You can do much better than I did.
02:52:857 - This should be the end of this slider. You'll need some time listening this on 25% speed
03:38:800 (2) - You can put this higher, to make a stack with next combo slider. This way you can avoid weird overlapping going here.

Good luck !
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

bezbashn wrote:

[Expert]
TsugumiIsObvBestGirl.mp3 - Haven't been used. Don't forget about it.
p.s. Convert this to wav
00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - Put them on the same level, because it's hard to read that mapping with 1/4 sliders. Or just put them a bit higher.
00:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1) - Overlap
01:17:542 - Put here a 2x slider velocity point, and make a better heart. It won't be a huge difference in reading, but it will look more prettier. You can do much better than I did.
02:52:857 - This should be the end of this slider. You'll need some time listening this on 25% speed
03:38:800 (2) - You can put this higher, to make a stack with next combo slider. This way you can avoid weird overlapping going here.

Good luck !

o/ Thanks for the mod!~

also I didn't even know changing the file to wav would fix a problem like that
TheKingHenry
Hello mod from my queue~
Expert
  1. I feel like the hitsounds are bit too loud in the beginning
  2. 00:00:400 (1,1) - fix blanket
  3. Mostly visual things I found here, I'm gonna give examples instead of listing all of each thing. First is that blanket above, a lot of places to fix, such as 00:12:228 (5,6) - 01:02:800 (2,3) - 02:13:771 (2,3) - and so on.
  4. Another one is triangles, I'm not gonna force you to do them but when you have almost done it but it's not perfect that's when you should finish it. For example 00:49:257 (2,3,4) - 00:50:457 (2,3,4) - 00:52:514 (1,2,3) -
  5. Some miscellaneous visual things like 00:13:771 (3,1) - need to be addressed too, like the blanket is okay but the visual distance isn't stable and it doesn't look too good. You can see how 00:13:771 (3) - is closer to 00:14:114 (1) - from the other end. Other misc thing, recycle more slider shapes, you have a lot of little random looking sliders which you sure use again but it feels like only for sec. You could reduce the amount and then use similar shapes for all similar things in the music. It will make it look more neat.
  6. As I said playability is mostly cool, but one thing came pretty quickly to mind when playing. Those kickslider patterns you use here a lot. They are little inconsistent. Sometimes they all have their own space like 00:16:171 (1,2,3,4) - sometimes these spaced ones have clear pattern in them like the one before, but 00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - for example doesn't really follow any. Then there are these partly stacked ones like 00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - and finally ones where you use longer kickslider for part of it like 00:18:914 (1,2,1) - Variation is cool, but I couldn't grasp any underlying motive according to which you change them, so it just felt little random instead. Playability-wise then especially stacked vs non stacked was confusing at times. It's especially important in cases like this when the sounds you map are relatively quiet so the player can't really comprehend too much by himself
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello mod from my queue~
Expert
  1. I feel like the hitsounds are bit too loud in the beginning
  2. 00:00:400 (1,1) - fix blanket
  3. Mostly visual things I found here, I'm gonna give examples instead of listing all of each thing. First is that blanket above, a lot of places to fix, such as 00:12:228 (5,6) - 01:02:800 (2,3) - 02:13:771 (2,3) - and so on.
  4. Another one is triangles, I'm not gonna force you to do them but when you have almost done it but it's not perfect that's when you should finish it. For example 00:49:257 (2,3,4) - 00:50:457 (2,3,4) - 00:52:514 (1,2,3) -
  5. Some miscellaneous visual things like 00:13:771 (3,1) - need to be addressed too, like the blanket is okay but the visual distance isn't stable and it doesn't look too good. You can see how 00:13:771 (3) - is closer to 00:14:114 (1) - from the other end. Other misc thing, recycle more slider shapes, you have a lot of little random looking sliders which you sure use again but it feels like only for sec. You could reduce the amount and then use similar shapes for all similar things in the music. It will make it look more neat.
  6. As I said playability is mostly cool, but one thing came pretty quickly to mind when playing. Those kickslider patterns you use here a lot. They are little inconsistent. Sometimes they all have their own space like 00:16:171 (1,2,3,4) - sometimes these spaced ones have clear pattern in them like the one before, but 00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - for example doesn't really follow any. Then there are these partly stacked ones like 00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - and finally ones where you use longer kickslider for part of it like 00:18:914 (1,2,1) - Variation is cool, but I couldn't grasp any underlying motive according to which you change them, so it just felt little random instead. Playability-wise then especially stacked vs non stacked was confusing at times. It's especially important in cases like this when the sounds you map are relatively quiet so the player can't really comprehend too much by himself
Good luck!
Thank you for the mod!~
Map has been updated!
Enkrypton
From my Queue.

EXPERT
00:02:457 (1,2) - feels off beat, try not to use the blue ticks
00:28:514 (1,2,3,4) - is an entire combo, make 00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - follow that pattern. remove new combo at 00:30:228 (1) -
00:31:257 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:35:371 (1,2,1,2) - ^
Note on above: i get that the ones with NC are different patterns but theres no need for a 2 length combo esp when the music there strings together
00:36:742 (1,2,3,4) - try sticking to your original pattern here.
00:56:200 (5) - remove
00:56:885 (2) - remove
01:03:828 (6) - NC
01:04:685 (5,1) - transition here feels off
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - the unnecessary high SV here will throw the player off, just use 3 regular sliders like you done here: 01:15:142 (3,4,5) -
01:46:000 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:48:057 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:37:942 (2) - this reverse slider is completely messed up
Note: theres quite a lot of sliders like these, if your going for ranked i suggest removing all these, but if its just for fun then sure.
01:57:914 (5) - remove
02:21:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - stay consistent with ur DS
02:53:200 (1) - i highly recommend putting another slider art here. a spinner after a slider art is really weird
03:43:942 (5,6,7) - SV issue as explained above.

There are some inconsistency with kick sliders besides that its a pretty good start imo, Good luck!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Enkrypton wrote:

From my Queue.

EXPERT
00:02:457 (1,2) - feels off beat, try not to use the blue ticks
00:28:514 (1,2,3,4) - is an entire combo, make 00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - follow that pattern. remove new combo at 00:30:228 (1) -
00:31:257 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:35:371 (1,2,1,2) - ^
Note on above: i get that the ones with NC are different patterns but theres no need for a 2 length combo esp when the music there strings together
00:36:742 (1,2,3,4) - try sticking to your original pattern here.
00:56:200 (5) - remove
00:56:885 (2) - remove
01:03:828 (6) - NC
01:04:685 (5,1) - transition here feels off
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - the unnecessary high SV here will throw the player off, just use 3 regular sliders like you done here: 01:15:142 (3,4,5) -
01:46:000 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:48:057 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:37:942 (2) - this reverse slider is completely messed up
Note: theres quite a lot of sliders like these, if your going for ranked i suggest removing all these, but if its just for fun then sure.
01:57:914 (5) - remove
02:21:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - stay consistent with ur DS
02:53:200 (1) - i highly recommend putting another slider art here. a spinner after a slider art is really weird
03:43:942 (5,6,7) - SV issue as explained above.

There are some inconsistency with kick sliders besides that its a pretty good start imo, Good luck!
Thanks for the mod, some of your points I can justify with concepts but other points really helped out with the general play-ability of the map! Cheers, map has been updated!~
aaronboon
Chitoge best grill :3
03:52:514 (5,1) - slider 5 covers alot of circle 1 u may wanna move the slightly so that the circle is more visible.

00:47:714 (1,1,1) - these sliders look ugly u may want to change the shape.

01:00:057 (1) - ^

01:11:371 (1) - this repeat slider has alot of repeats which can break rhythm,u could change it to a fast slider instead.

Expert
00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - the sliders overlap too much imo it makes it hard to notice during gameplay consider moving them slightly
00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) -^
00:35:371 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:36:742 (1,2,1,2) - ^

<3 the song hope u can get it ranked :D
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

aaronboon wrote:

Chitoge best grill :3
03:52:514 (5,1) - slider 5 covers alot of circle 1 u may wanna move the slightly so that the circle is more visible.

00:47:714 (1,1,1) - these sliders look ugly u may want to change the shape.

01:00:057 (1) - ^

01:11:371 (1) - this repeat slider has alot of repeats which can break rhythm,u could change it to a fast slider instead.

<3 the song hope u can get it ranked :D
Thanks for the mod, but why mod the one labelled "don't mod or play' ;~;

I mean I got a nice throwback modding my old map, so thanks for that, maybe I can rework this diff :thinking:
Net0
Late mod from my queue

[General]
  1. Not sure why but you have 2 audio files in your folder. Keep only one and check if it’s the same that is being used on the .osu to avoid bugs.
[Expert]
  1. Fix blanket 00:00:400 (1,1) – like, it’s a really noticeable one, the sliderart is great but the lack of blanketing there really kills the visual aspect of it.
  2. In various spots of your map you do overlaps. I’ll list some examples; 00:04:857 (2,4) – ; 00:11:028 (1,3,4) - ; 00:12:400 (6,2) - ; 00:15:828 (2,2) - ; 00:23:542 (4,1,1,2,1) - ; 00:26:457 (1,2) - . The reason I’m mentioning this is because at some other spots you actually have stacked 00:26:800 (2,3) - , what makes the diff feels randomly placed objects. Another example of that contrast; stacked 00:35:028 (2,2) - ; and overlapped 00:34:685 (1,2) - .
  3. There’s also some lack of consistency in the difficulty. In this first instrumental intro here that starts the beat; 00:11:371 - ~ 00:22:342 - . There’s a repetition happening in every measure;
    00:11:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –
    00:12:742 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
    00:14:114 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
    00:15:485 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
    00:16:857 (1,2,1,2,1,2) –
    Ideally you want both combo, flow and rhythm to be the consistent or at least work logically. Rhythm is entirely consistent, but flow wise it starts with circular flow, then switches into linear, then you have a back and forth later on 00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) – and all that makes it feels not consistent. You can add variation to the pattern and you should to avoid boring maps, but you need make it follow some sort of logic. In this case you have 5 phrases , so you could probably make odd and even pattern idea. Making a pattern for phrases 1,3,5 similar and 2,4 similar, etc.
  4. Try to avoid burai sliders 01:37:942 (2) - , this means never make the slider path inside of the own slider. (this in case you’re aiming for ranked mapping)
I won’t pick specific stuff because you could probably work better the basics. Some stuff I really liked such as your rhythm choices (using kicksliders in this songs fits a lot) , some sliders designs were really good. Good luck with your future maps and hopefully you can improve a lot o/
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Net0 wrote:

Late mod from my queue

[General]
  1. Not sure why but you have 2 audio files in your folder. Keep only one and check if it’s the same that is being used on the .osu to avoid bugs.
[Expert]
  1. Fix blanket 00:00:400 (1,1) – like, it’s a really noticeable one, the sliderart is great but the lack of blanketing there really kills the visual aspect of it.
  2. In various spots of your map you do overlaps. I’ll list some examples; 00:04:857 (2,4) – ; 00:11:028 (1,3,4) - ; 00:12:400 (6,2) - ; 00:15:828 (2,2) - ; 00:23:542 (4,1,1,2,1) - ; 00:26:457 (1,2) - . The reason I’m mentioning this is because at some other spots you actually have stacked 00:26:800 (2,3) - , what makes the diff feels randomly placed objects. Another example of that contrast; stacked 00:35:028 (2,2) - ; and overlapped 00:34:685 (1,2) - .
  3. There’s also some lack of consistency in the difficulty. In this first instrumental intro here that starts the beat; 00:11:371 - ~ 00:22:342 - . There’s a repetition happening in every measure;
    00:11:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –
    00:12:742 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
    00:14:114 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
    00:15:485 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
    00:16:857 (1,2,1,2,1,2) –
    Ideally you want both combo, flow and rhythm to be the consistent or at least work logically. Rhythm is entirely consistent, but flow wise it starts with circular flow, then switches into linear, then you have a back and forth later on 00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) – and all that makes it feels not consistent. You can add variation to the pattern and you should to avoid boring maps, but you need make it follow some sort of logic. In this case you have 5 phrases , so you could probably make odd and even pattern idea. Making a pattern for phrases 1,3,5 similar and 2,4 similar, etc.
  4. Try to avoid burai sliders 01:37:942 (2) - , this means never make the slider path inside of the own slider. (this in case you’re aiming for ranked mapping)
I won’t pick specific stuff because you could probably work better the basics. Some stuff I really liked such as your rhythm choices (using kicksliders in this songs fits a lot) , some sliders designs were really good. Good luck with your future maps and hopefully you can improve a lot o/
Thank you for the great mod!

I was always in a state of :thinking: wondering why my map seems so messy and random xd

It seems there are a lot of places where stacking seems more systematic and clean rather than overlapping, and I'll experiment with that!

Cheers!
Alex3i2
Extra diff :
00:00:400 (1,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7268277
00:05:200 (3,1) - looks bad this overlap
00:08:628 (1) - x259 y204 , also a self blanket for more beauty https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7268296
00:17:542 (1,1) - those are completed stacked , i would rotate 00:17:885 (1) - -15* , 00:18:057 (2) - 15*
00:22:000 (8) - i would nc , i want to put this strong beat in evidence more
00:23:542 (4) - keep the same like 1 2 3 , this supposed to be 90* rotate
00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - can be even more less stacked
00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks lazy , do a more fun pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7268337
01:12:400 (3) - Nc , sv changed , and can be confusing
01:18:571 (1) - blanket can be better
01:24:057 (1) - adjut a little bit blanket on slider end
01:26:800 (1,2) - space is huge
01:55:600 (8) - nc maybe here too
01:58:342 (1,2,3,4,5) - check those sliders , looks boring and lazy ,im msure u can do better
02:07:600 (5,2) - overlap
02:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - part undermapped , more circles , you can stack 2 by 2
02:21:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - looks bad this stream ,
02:26:457 (1,2,3,4) - why 4 is not ctrl +g? to keep this pattern the same
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

TwillghtSparkle wrote:

Extra diff :
00:00:400 (1,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7268277
00:05:200 (3,1) - looks bad this overlap
00:08:628 (1) - x259 y204 , also a self blanket for more beauty https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7268296
00:17:542 (1,1) - those are completed stacked , i would rotate 00:17:885 (1) - -15* , 00:18:057 (2) - 15*
00:22:000 (8) - i would nc , i want to put this strong beat in evidence more
00:23:542 (4) - keep the same like 1 2 3 , this supposed to be 90* rotate
00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - can be even more less stacked
00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks lazy , do a more fun pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7268337
01:12:400 (3) - Nc , sv changed , and can be confusing
01:18:571 (1) - blanket can be better
01:24:057 (1) - adjut a little bit blanket on slider end
01:26:800 (1,2) - space is huge
01:55:600 (8) - nc maybe here too
01:58:342 (1,2,3,4,5) - check those sliders , looks boring and lazy ,im msure u can do better
02:07:600 (5,2) - overlap
02:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - part undermapped , more circles , you can stack 2 by 2
02:21:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - looks bad this stream ,
02:26:457 (1,2,3,4) - why 4 is not ctrl +g? to keep this pattern the same
Thanks for the mod! o/

Map has been updated :D
stUwUpid
NM from my queueue

general
who tf is tsugumi? you sure that spell check didnt change it from chitoge?

Also add silent sliderslide.wav plz

Expert
00:03:142 (3) - NC, it's start of new measure. Also since it's different sound, I would either space from 00:02:800 (2) - more so they don't confuse it with 1/4 timing and/or point in different direction
00:11:028 (1) - no need for NC
00:14:114 (1,2) - Little bit too linear flow. Maybe change up 2 a bit so its more interesting, something like

00:15:314 (4) - since this one doesn't have a drum beat attached, maybe you can change the shape, or simply make it a circle instead of kickslider
00:20:971 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make the curve a little neater, 00:21:057 (3,4) - these seem to make it a little flat
00:49:085 (1,2) - Would be nice if it was the same distance here and 00:49:428 (3,4) - here, your map is pretty geometric after all, and having it be equal distances would make it look nicer
00:56:971 (2,4) - I don't really like this overlap, I would space the jump out a bit more. In fact i think the whole section from 00:55:257 (1) - to 01:06:228 (1) - should be spaced out more because as of right now, the jump distances are about the same as the section starting from 00:44:285 (1) - here, whereas in fact, it is quite a bit more emphasized and louder due to the drum beat.
01:02:457 (1,2) - maybe copy paste rotate these to make it look the same
01:11:371 (2) - maybe make a bit more even in terms of all the anchor points. Pulling the starting point down a little should do the trick

also I think it would have a better effect if you pointed it downwards. It'll have more of the "drop" effect, yknow what i mean
01:10:685 (1,2,3,4,1) - smooth out to make more circular
01:12:914 (1,2) - Don't stack, hard to read with such high SV here 01:12:400 (1,2,3) - . It might make it easier to tell if you didn't NC 01:12:914 (1) - this too
01:15:142 (3,4,5,6) - You did it here, for the same sound, so try to be consistent
01:46:000 (1,2,3,4) - these are amazing. They play well and look cool, they fit the music well. Maybe do these more often, but with different shapes
01:52:857 (1,2) - I would make these single circle jumps. Sliders don't emphasize the drum buildup well enough
01:56:628 (1) - NC off here and NC on 01:57:657 (4) - here if you really want to NC somewhere
01:59:714 (5) - NC
02:10:000 (3,4) - Curve 3 more to properly blanket
02:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - why are you just skipping the drum beats? perfect time to do some jumps
02:17:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty bad flow here. try to think about where the slider is pointing and which directions the triplets should go in to accomodate that
02:22:685 (1) - Make a cool slider shape like before
02:37:085 (1) - NC off
02:44:971 (1) - Dang this is sick!
02:53:200 (1) - Maybe stack this somewhere on the heart slider before so it doesn't look so randomly out of place
02:54:914 (1) - and don't overlap this with the infinity slider, it looks messy
03:05:542 (2) - For the break after this, you should move the break to begin on 03:09:657 - . if you don't know how, you go to time line and you drag the beginning of the break. Should look like this after you do it

03:50:800 (1,2,3,4) - Again, you should make all jumps

in general, I think you could spread out your mapping a bit more. I didn't mention any specific issues, but if you ctrl-a your map, almost all of the notes appear to be in the center of the map. You have a few spread out jumps, but in general, your sliders and circles tend to just revolve around the middle. A good way to fix that, that I found, is to improve more on blankets and overlaps. By focusing on blankets, you can automatically place sliders or circles somewhere that is not near, not far from the blanket and thus will spread things out. Overlaps shouldn't really happen unless it's on purpose in my opinion. A lot of good mappers have a lot of overlaps, but the majority of them follow some sort of pattern and aren't done extremely often. If you overlap willy nilly, it starts to look messy, and most importantly start to cramp up the map, making it annoying to play (you're not moving your cursor across the map at any point, just circling around a small area) and hard to read. If you want to talk more about this, feel free to message me irc.

Another tip i suggest is to map more to the music, in terms of spacing emphasis and NC. If there are strong beats somewhere, make the spacing higher. Heck, even make the SV for sliders higher. If it's extremely emphasized, you can give it an NC of it's own. Otherwise NCs are used for measure down beats only. Again, if you have questions on spacing emphasis, find me in game as well

It's a great song, and a good map to start with. Keep it up and get this shit ranked for the waifus!!

whew that was a long NM... probably won't be doing that very often xD

good luck!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Kami-senpai wrote:

NM from my queueue

general
who tf is tsugumi? you sure that spell check didnt change it from chitoge?

Also add silent sliderslide.wav plz

Expert
00:03:142 (3) - NC, it's start of new measure. Also since it's different sound, I would either space from 00:02:800 (2) - more so they don't confuse it with 1/4 timing and/or point in different direction
00:11:028 (1) - no need for NC
00:14:114 (1,2) - Little bit too linear flow. Maybe change up 2 a bit so its more interesting, something like

00:15:314 (4) - since this one doesn't have a drum beat attached, maybe you can change the shape, or simply make it a circle instead of kickslider
00:20:971 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make the curve a little neater, 00:21:057 (3,4) - these seem to make it a little flat
00:49:085 (1,2) - Would be nice if it was the same distance here and 00:49:428 (3,4) - here, your map is pretty geometric after all, and having it be equal distances would make it look nicer
00:56:971 (2,4) - I don't really like this overlap, I would space the jump out a bit more. In fact i think the whole section from 00:55:257 (1) - to 01:06:228 (1) - should be spaced out more because as of right now, the jump distances are about the same as the section starting from 00:44:285 (1) - here, whereas in fact, it is quite a bit more emphasized and louder due to the drum beat.
01:02:457 (1,2) - maybe copy paste rotate these to make it look the same
01:11:371 (2) - maybe make a bit more even in terms of all the anchor points. Pulling the starting point down a little should do the trick

also I think it would have a better effect if you pointed it downwards. It'll have more of the "drop" effect, yknow what i mean
01:10:685 (1,2,3,4,1) - smooth out to make more circular
01:12:914 (1,2) - Don't stack, hard to read with such high SV here 01:12:400 (1,2,3) - . It might make it easier to tell if you didn't NC 01:12:914 (1) - this too
01:15:142 (3,4,5,6) - You did it here, for the same sound, so try to be consistent
01:46:000 (1,2,3,4) - these are amazing. They play well and look cool, they fit the music well. Maybe do these more often, but with different shapes
01:52:857 (1,2) - I would make these single circle jumps. Sliders don't emphasize the drum buildup well enough
01:56:628 (1) - NC off here and NC on 01:57:657 (4) - here if you really want to NC somewhere
01:59:714 (5) - NC
02:10:000 (3,4) - Curve 3 more to properly blanket
02:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - why are you just skipping the drum beats? perfect time to do some jumps
02:17:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty bad flow here. try to think about where the slider is pointing and which directions the triplets should go in to accomodate that
02:22:685 (1) - Make a cool slider shape like before
02:37:085 (1) - NC off
02:44:971 (1) - Dang this is sick!
02:53:200 (1) - Maybe stack this somewhere on the heart slider before so it doesn't look so randomly out of place
02:54:914 (1) - and don't overlap this with the infinity slider, it looks messy
03:05:542 (2) - For the break after this, you should move the break to begin on 03:09:657 - . if you don't know how, you go to time line and you drag the beginning of the break. Should look like this after you do it

03:50:800 (1,2,3,4) - Again, you should make all jumps

in general, I think you could spread out your mapping a bit more. I didn't mention any specific issues, but if you ctrl-a your map, almost all of the notes appear to be in the center of the map. You have a few spread out jumps, but in general, your sliders and circles tend to just revolve around the middle. A good way to fix that, that I found, is to improve more on blankets and overlaps. By focusing on blankets, you can automatically place sliders or circles somewhere that is not near, not far from the blanket and thus will spread things out. Overlaps shouldn't really happen unless it's on purpose in my opinion. A lot of good mappers have a lot of overlaps, but the majority of them follow some sort of pattern and aren't done extremely often. If you overlap willy nilly, it starts to look messy, and most importantly start to cramp up the map, making it annoying to play (you're not moving your cursor across the map at any point, just circling around a small area) and hard to read. If you want to talk more about this, feel free to message me irc.

Another tip i suggest is to map more to the music, in terms of spacing emphasis and NC. If there are strong beats somewhere, make the spacing higher. Heck, even make the SV for sliders higher. If it's extremely emphasized, you can give it an NC of it's own. Otherwise NCs are used for measure down beats only. Again, if you have questions on spacing emphasis, find me in game as well

It's a great song, and a good map to start with. Keep it up and get this shit ranked for the waifus!!

whew that was a long NM... probably won't be doing that very often xD

good luck!
Hoyl thanks for the awesome mod!

Made changes that were specified in your mod ATM and I will make an effort to follow through with your last comment!

It's true, my map seems a bit cramped and messy, and I've been wondering why for a while xd

If I need any input or help, I'll take up on your offer and shoot you a message in game! Thanks for the mod and help, cheers! o/

Map has been updated and will be more in the close future :D
MrMenda
Menda from the OSUWOT Mod queue here o/. Ready to serve.

Expert
Consider changing it to AR9.2 instead of 9.4 for a song that close to Insane range. I'd also change HP from 1.5 to something between 6-7.

-00:02:800 (2,1) - Consider Curving the slider and making it back and forward and change 1 for a circle in the Red tick.
-00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of repeating the same pattern try to alternate it with streams, so it doesn’t get repetitive. The pattern works and looks good tho.
-01:12:400 (3,4,5,1) - Really good pattern here, but 1 is too far away for a 1/4 jump compared to the others
-01:15:142 (3,4) - 4 is too far away again for a 1/4 jump
-01:17:200 (1,2) - Nice slider fitting word Koi ^^
-01:19:257 (3,4) - Blanket
-01:19:942 (1,2,3) - Copy slider 1 in 2 and make it go for the head of 3-
-01:27:828 (4) - Either curve it or remove the white point in there, as it is pretty much useless
-01:33:657 (1) - Fix slider back sign
-01:34:342 (3) - ^
-01:37:942 (2) - ^
-01:44:628 (1) - ^
-01:45:314 (3) - ^
-01:46:000 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe not the best form to give them, but it is your choice
-01:48:057 (1,2,3,4) - ^
-01:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 and 4 are too close imo. Curve 5
-02:32:628 (1,2,3) - Extend 1 to the red tick, change 2 into a circle in the blue tick.
-02:58:685 (1) - I personally don’t like the shape of this slider.
-03:04:000 (1,2,1,2) - Curve both sliders a bit more
-03:20:628 (1) - Curve it
-03:23:371 (1) - ^
-03:26:114 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too straight for a build up imo, but they work like that.
-03:31:600 (1,3) - More reverse arrows problems
-03:42:571 (1,3) - Again.

Really nice map nonetheless, plays really good and looks even better!! Let me know if it is possible to M4M it. I leave you here the sotarks HO-KAGO TEA TIME song he mapped, also remixed by Asterisk if you want to get some ideas they are pretty similar songs (https://osu.ppy.sh/b/821691). Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

MrMenda wrote:

Menda from the OSUWOT Mod queue here o/. Ready to serve.

Expert
Consider changing it to AR9.2 instead of 9.4 for a song that close to Insane range. I'd also change HP from 1.5 to something between 6-7.

-00:02:800 (2,1) - Consider Curving the slider and making it back and forward and change 1 for a circle in the Red tick.
-00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of repeating the same pattern try to alternate it with streams, so it doesn’t get repetitive. The pattern works and looks good tho.
-01:12:400 (3,4,5,1) - Really good pattern here, but 1 is too far away for a 1/4 jump compared to the others
-01:15:142 (3,4) - 4 is too far away again for a 1/4 jump
-01:17:200 (1,2) - Nice slider fitting word Koi ^^
-01:19:257 (3,4) - Blanket
-01:19:942 (1,2,3) - Copy slider 1 in 2 and make it go for the head of 3-
-01:27:828 (4) - Either curve it or remove the white point in there, as it is pretty much useless
-01:33:657 (1) - Fix slider back sign
-01:34:342 (3) - ^
-01:37:942 (2) - ^
-01:44:628 (1) - ^
-01:45:314 (3) - ^
-01:46:000 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe not the best form to give them, but it is your choice
-01:48:057 (1,2,3,4) - ^
-01:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 and 4 are too close imo. Curve 5
-02:32:628 (1,2,3) - Extend 1 to the red tick, change 2 into a circle in the blue tick.
-02:58:685 (1) - I personally don’t like the shape of this slider.
-03:04:000 (1,2,1,2) - Curve both sliders a bit more
-03:20:628 (1) - Curve it
-03:23:371 (1) - ^
-03:26:114 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too straight for a build up imo, but they work like that.
-03:31:600 (1,3) - More reverse arrows problems
-03:42:571 (1,3) - Again.

Really nice map nonetheless, plays really good and looks even better!! Let me know if it is possible to M4M it. I leave you here the sotarks HO-KAGO TEA TIME song he mapped, also remixed by Asterisk if you want to get some ideas they are pretty similar songs (https://osu.ppy.sh/b/821691). Good luck!!
o/

Thanks for the mod!~

I took a look at your Wagakki Band map, but I couldn't find anything wrong with the diffs (as they were too hard for me to play properly, but scanning through the editor didn't reveal any problems in my eyes), so that's a good sign for your map :p

Also thanks for the reference to Sotarks' map :D

Map has been updated!~
TequilaWolf
mod
Koi-

00:02:457 (1,2) - isn't it supposed to be this one http://puu.sh/ubA53/82eba04593.jpg
00:05:885 (1) - your sliderart is pretty but consider shrinking it and adding circles on 00:07:942 00:08:200 00:08:285 and 00:08:457
00:16:171 (1,2,3,4) - direction of 2 and 4 don't feel right to me as you did 00:11:885 (3,4,5) - 00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - in generally all the same direction so you might wanna ctrl+g both of them
01:20:971 (4,5,1) - consider moving 5 closer to 4 to emphasise the 5->1 jump
01:33:657 (1) - 01:34:342 (3) - and 200 other times elsewhere in the song, I don't think this is rankable, but someone should correct me/confirm
01:35:885 (6) - sounds like a triple to me rather than slider
01:46:685 (5,6) - stacking 5 on 6 makes it seem like a 1/4 double kinda thing
01:48:742 (1,2) - consider http://puu.sh/ubAPy/c759586fdf.jpg
01:55:257 (7,1) - 1 needs to be further away
02:21:657 (1,2,3,4) - could use bigger spacing
02:30:914 (1,2) - consider http://puu.sh/ubAZA/52b6f10143.jpg instead
02:40:857 (1,2) - why are slider shapes so different, I think copypasting is better here
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Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

TequilaWolf wrote:

mod
Koi-

00:02:457 (1,2) - isn't it supposed to be this one http://puu.sh/ubA53/82eba04593.jpg this does sound better
00:05:885 (1) - your sliderart is pretty but consider shrinking it and adding circles on 00:07:942 00:08:200 00:08:285 and 00:08:457 I think it's fine the way it is
00:16:171 (1,2,3,4) - direction of 2 and 4 don't feel right to me as you did 00:11:885 (3,4,5) - 00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - in generally all the same direction so you might wanna ctrl+g both of them Hmmm, the pattern is a bit awkward especially at the beginning of the song, a more linear flow pattern seems more fit
01:20:971 (4,5,1) - consider moving 5 closer to 4 to emphasise the 5->1 jump Made it only a bit closer, otherwise it felt odd for me
01:33:657 (1) - 01:34:342 (3) - and 200 other times elsewhere in the song, I don't think this is rankable, but someone should correct me/confirm That's just a little gimmick I put in there for fun :> Probably will change it soon tho as I keep getting more mods and the quality of the map goes up as well
01:35:885 (6) - sounds like a triple to me rather than slider It really does :thinking:
01:46:685 (5,6) - stacking 5 on 6 makes it seem like a 1/4 double kinda thing I didn't stack because otherwise it feels a bit hard to read
01:48:742 (1,2) - consider http://puu.sh/ubAPy/c759586fdf.jpg Will consider in the future, but the bit before follows vocals so it might be a bit weird to suddenly put circles on drum sounds, especially in a fast part like that
01:55:257 (7,1) - 1 needs to be further away tru tru made it blanket the next slider
02:21:657 (1,2,3,4) - could use bigger spacing ehhh, the sudden slowdown fits the music for me
02:30:914 (1,2) - consider http://puu.sh/ubAZA/52b6f10143.jpg instead It actually was like this before, but since they are 1/4 sliders I decided to break flow, like other 1/4 sliders do in previous parts
02:40:857 (1,2) - why are slider shapes so different, I think copypasting is better here It does look a bit ugly at a second glance :/, thanks
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Thanks for the mod, map has been updated!~~
Monarch
nm
00:00:400 (1) - weird for the first slider to be faster than the second slider, especially at such a calm part of this song I'd really only use 0.75x for this

00:01:771 (1) - this curved slider looks very ugly and disproportionate (curve next to the start is much shaper than the curve at the end making it look ugly) just make it even

00:03:828 (3,5) - cant hear any sound on these blue ticks tbh but if you want to keep it like that then 00:04:171 (5) - should just be two 1/4 sliders, dont see a reason for the reverse to end of a hard note

00:18:914 (1,3) - ^

00:08:628 (1,1,2) - dont understand why different timing spaces (1/2 and 1/1/) have the same distance spacing

00:11:028 (4,1) - jump to show intensity?

00:11:885 (3,4,5) - really arent any sounds on these blue ticks

00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - same with these, should just be normal circle jumps or 1/2 slider, simply overmapped right now

00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - ^

00:16:171 (1,3) - ^

00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - ^

00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - ^ gonna stop mentioning these as you've done them throughout the whole map, however, they are overmapped greatly, should really just be circles because the slider literally isn't landing on anything 00:32:800 (2) - 00:19:085 (2) - 00:38:285 (2) - these are like some of the few ones taht aren't actually overmapped, the rest are

00:20:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - very ugly stream, should just be a straight stream, making the notes overlap like this just looks bad

00:39:314 (4,1) - dont understand why this jump is so big

00:40:685 (4,1) - same here

00:41:200 (2,2) - overlap just looks ugly

00:44:628 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all these sliders look plain ugly, just do simple curves you dont need top overcomplicate such a small slider

00:18:228 (1) - same with this

00:48:914 (6) - dont understand why this breaks the pattern by not being blanketed by the slider00:48:400 (5) -

00:49:771 (5,1,2) - overcomplicating sliders again

00:51:828 (2) - looks ugly, especially at the start of the slider where its pinched, wires should be across the centre like this

00:53:200 (3) - ^

01:08:457 (7) - ^

01:13:085 (2) - ^

00:54:572 (3) - no reason for this to be on the offbeat

00:59:885 (6) - this should be blanketed with the slider, and the next circle should be, as you have done, breaking the pattern

01:01:428 (2,3,4) - very weird flow choice, awkward to play

01:01:428 (2) - overcomplicating

01:05:371 (2) - ^

01:06:914 (7,10) - ^

all these overcomplicated sliders could just be a simple slight curve and would look much better

01:04:171 (5) - why is the spacing so lowwww

01:08:971 (1,2,3) - ^

01:11:371 (2) -ok so youve been mapping to blue ticks for the whole map, if you're not changing that why isn't this extended to the blue tick

01:13:771 (4) - dunno why you're going over the hard notes

01:28:171 (1,1) - just look very ugly imo

01:32:799 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make this a propper circle shape, just looks ugly as it is

01:33:657 (1,2,3) - this is just overcomplicating the sliders, they don't look good at all and the same playing feel could be made using a simple red wired slider like this

01:37:942 (2) - i dont know why you've got wires going everywhere and why you;'ve left a nub on the end, just do a simple slider like above ^

01:44:628 (1,3) - just ocvercomplicated

01:51:657 (2) - the pattern this goes into is ok but the jump from the tripple should be larger

01:55:257 (7) - no nc here but a nc 00:22:000 (1) - here, just make sure NC's are only on big white ticks for consistency meaning that stuff like 01:55:942 (1) - should have a nc

02:00:571 (4,5,6,1) - more flow that dosnt make sense, slider whould be going upwards

02:07:257 (4) - slider shouldn't end on hard note

02:07:257 (4,5) - this slider should really flow off of the other slider, just looks bad when the jump is at a different angle to the slider

02:11:542 (8,9,10,1) - just weird flow tbh doesn't make sense why you change the flow

02:15:485 (5) - why is spacing of this intense note same as this 02:15:314 (4) - less intense note?

02:16:514 (3,4) - dont make sliders land on hard notes

02:20:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why such low sapcing?

02:26:800 (3,4) - more over complication

02:34:342 (2,3) - dont understand this jump, why it does not flow off the slider but instead is just akwardly placed next to it breakign the flow

02:37:600 (4,5,6,1) - same with the flow of these jumpos, just weird to play

02:39:485 (1,2,3) - overcomplicated

02:42:228 (1) - your jumps dont travel around the map, this is most shown by tjhe fact that you dont even ttouch parts of the map specifically the top left and bottom left of the map, if you croud your jumps in an extra like you've done throughout with small spacing in kaias where it should be alrger and direction changes that rotate aroudn themselves instead of going around the map (these often also have bad flow ) then you end up not touching parts opf the map which is just bad

03:02:971 (6) - overcomplicated

03:04:857 (4) - ^

03:20:628 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

03:26:114 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

03:34:171 (7) - ^

03:39:142 (1,2,3) - ^ all you need is imple sliders, these are overcomplicated and ugly

03:40:685 (4,5) - ^

03:42:571 (1,3) - more weird stuff with the wires that you dont need where the slider is going back in on itself which is probably unrankable as it doesnt make sense to play, just make it a normal slider with a red wire like i suggested above

03:53:542 (8) - NC( look over all ncs and make sure nc's are on big white ticks for consistency

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Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Monarch wrote:

nm
00:00:400 (1) - weird for the first slider to be faster than the second slider, especially at such a calm part of this song I'd really only use 0.75x for this

00:01:771 (1) - this curved slider looks very ugly and disproportionate (curve next to the start is much shaper than the curve at the end making it look ugly) just make it even

00:03:828 (3,5) - cant hear any sound on these blue ticks tbh but if you want to keep it like that then 00:04:171 (5) - should just be two 1/4 sliders, dont see a reason for the reverse to end of a hard note

00:18:914 (1,3) - ^

00:08:628 (1,1,2) - dont understand why different timing spaces (1/2 and 1/1/) have the same distance spacing

00:11:028 (4,1) - jump to show intensity?

00:11:885 (3,4,5) - really arent any sounds on these blue ticks

00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - same with these, should just be normal circle jumps or 1/2 slider, simply overmapped right now

00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - ^

00:16:171 (1,3) - ^

00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - ^

00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - ^ gonna stop mentioning these as you've done them throughout the whole map, however, they are overmapped greatly, should really just be circles because the slider literally isn't landing on anything 00:32:800 (2) - 00:19:085 (2) - 00:38:285 (2) - these are like some of the few ones taht aren't actually overmapped, the rest are

00:20:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - very ugly stream, should just be a straight stream, making the notes overlap like this just looks bad

00:39:314 (4,1) - dont understand why this jump is so big

00:40:685 (4,1) - same here

00:41:200 (2,2) - overlap just looks ugly

00:44:628 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all these sliders look plain ugly, just do simple curves you dont need top overcomplicate such a small slider

00:18:228 (1) - same with this

00:48:914 (6) - dont understand why this breaks the pattern by not being blanketed by the slider00:48:400 (5) -

00:49:771 (5,1,2) - overcomplicating sliders again

00:51:828 (2) - looks ugly, especially at the start of the slider where its pinched, wires should be across the centre like this

00:53:200 (3) - ^

01:08:457 (7) - ^

01:13:085 (2) - ^

00:54:572 (3) - no reason for this to be on the offbeat

00:59:885 (6) - this should be blanketed with the slider, and the next circle should be, as you have done, breaking the pattern

01:01:428 (2,3,4) - very weird flow choice, awkward to play

01:01:428 (2) - overcomplicating

01:05:371 (2) - ^

01:06:914 (7,10) - ^

all these overcomplicated sliders could just be a simple slight curve and would look much better

01:04:171 (5) - why is the spacing so lowwww

01:08:971 (1,2,3) - ^

01:11:371 (2) -ok so youve been mapping to blue ticks for the whole map, if you're not changing that why isn't this extended to the blue tick

01:13:771 (4) - dunno why you're going over the hard notes

01:28:171 (1,1) - just look very ugly imo

01:32:799 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make this a propper circle shape, just looks ugly as it is

01:33:657 (1,2,3) - this is just overcomplicating the sliders, they don't look good at all and the same playing feel could be made using a simple red wired slider like this

01:37:942 (2) - i dont know why you've got wires going everywhere and why you;'ve left a nub on the end, just do a simple slider like above ^

01:44:628 (1,3) - just ocvercomplicated

01:51:657 (2) - the pattern this goes into is ok but the jump from the tripple should be larger

01:55:257 (7) - no nc here but a nc 00:22:000 (1) - here, just make sure NC's are only on big white ticks for consistency meaning that stuff like 01:55:942 (1) - should have a nc

02:00:571 (4,5,6,1) - more flow that dosnt make sense, slider whould be going upwards

02:07:257 (4) - slider shouldn't end on hard note

02:07:257 (4,5) - this slider should really flow off of the other slider, just looks bad when the jump is at a different angle to the slider

02:11:542 (8,9,10,1) - just weird flow tbh doesn't make sense why you change the flow

02:15:485 (5) - why is spacing of this intense note same as this 02:15:314 (4) - less intense note?

02:16:514 (3,4) - dont make sliders land on hard notes

02:20:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why such low sapcing?

02:26:800 (3,4) - more over complication

02:34:342 (2,3) - dont understand this jump, why it does not flow off the slider but instead is just akwardly placed next to it breakign the flow

02:37:600 (4,5,6,1) - same with the flow of these jumpos, just weird to play

02:39:485 (1,2,3) - overcomplicated

02:42:228 (1) - your jumps dont travel around the map, this is most shown by tjhe fact that you dont even ttouch parts of the map specifically the top left and bottom left of the map, if you croud your jumps in an extra like you've done throughout with small spacing in kaias where it should be alrger and direction changes that rotate aroudn themselves instead of going around the map (these often also have bad flow ) then you end up not touching parts opf the map which is just bad

03:02:971 (6) - overcomplicated

03:04:857 (4) - ^

03:20:628 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

03:26:114 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

03:34:171 (7) - ^

03:39:142 (1,2,3) - ^ all you need is imple sliders, these are overcomplicated and ugly

03:40:685 (4,5) - ^

03:42:571 (1,3) - more weird stuff with the wires that you dont need where the slider is going back in on itself which is probably unrankable as it doesnt make sense to play, just make it a normal slider with a red wire like i suggested above

03:53:542 (8) - NC( look over all ncs and make sure nc's are on big white ticks for consistency

x
Thank you very much for the mod! Web browser isn't working on my laptop and i had to use the timing point by reading it and going to it manually on the editor while reading off my phone, so i can't give a response to each of your mods >.<

However, thank you for confirming the ugliness of my sliders >.<, as well as other errors, map has been updated!~
Arbane
Koi mod from my queue
00:05:542 (4,5) - Maybe Ctrl - G these two notes for better flow and move the slider at 00:05:885 - down a bit.

00:11:371 - Change SV to 1.50 00:11:714 - change it back to 1 and put a slider 00:11:885 (3,4,5) - move these kicksliders to here 00:12:057 - and add a 4th kickslider 00:12:400 - remove this timing point 00:12:742 - change SV to 1.5 00:12:742 - change it back to 1. I've added photos at the bottom of this post that gives you a better idea of what i'm talking about if you're confused.

00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is pretty ugly, i would suggest replacing it with something else but it's up to you.

A lot of times where you make patterns with curved sliders such as here 00:39:485 (1,2) - 01:17:885 (1,2,3,4) - or here i've noticed that you make seperate sliders for the whole pattern. If you instead take the first slider of the pattern and Ctrl - C Ctrl - V it and rotate it to how you want it, it will look much cleaner.

00:47:028 - The change in SV here is too drastic. Change it so it's the same as it is here 01:58:342 -

00:58:000 - ^

01:04:857 - I would suggest changing all your sliders with a bunch of red ticks like this but its up you.

01:06:228 - to 01:08:457 - The stack placement here doesn't follow the music properly. Listen more closely and change this section.

01:12:400 (1,2,3) - Having these 3 kicksliders have a high SV while the ones at 01:15:142 (1,2,3,4) - or 01:17:885 (1,2,3,4) - Has a low SV doesn't make much sense.

01:23:371 - Why did you stop using kicksliders here. It worked pretty well imo.

01:33:657 - Sliders shouldn't overlap themselves.

02:17:542 - to 02:20:285 - Again the stack placement here doesn't follow the music properly. Listen more closely and change this section.

02:44:971 (1) - Just wanted to point out how ridiculously nice this slider is, Good job.

02:53:200 - Remove the SV change here and change the slider.

03:35:714 (1,2,3) - Up the spacing.

03:46:685 (1,2,3) - ^

Photos
00:11:371 -



Sorry for bad english :D
Arbane
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Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Arbane wrote:

Koi mod from my queue
00:05:542 (4,5) - Maybe Ctrl - G these two notes for better flow and move the slider at 00:05:885 - down a bit.

00:11:371 - Change SV to 1.50 00:11:714 - change it back to 1 and put a slider 00:11:885 (3,4,5) - move these kicksliders to here 00:12:057 - and add a 4th kickslider 00:12:400 - remove this timing point 00:12:742 - change SV to 1.5 00:12:742 - change it back to 1. I've added photos at the bottom of this post that gives you a better idea of what i'm talking about if you're confused.

00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is pretty ugly, i would suggest replacing it with something else but it's up to you.

A lot of times where you make patterns with curved sliders such as here 00:39:485 (1,2) - 01:17:885 (1,2,3,4) - or here i've noticed that you make seperate sliders for the whole pattern. If you instead take the first slider of the pattern and Ctrl - C Ctrl - V it and rotate it to how you want it, it will look much cleaner.

00:47:028 - The change in SV here is too drastic. Change it so it's the same as it is here 01:58:342 -

00:58:000 - ^

01:04:857 - I would suggest changing all your sliders with a bunch of red ticks like this but its up you.

01:06:228 - to 01:08:457 - The stack placement here doesn't follow the music properly. Listen more closely and change this section.

01:12:400 (1,2,3) - Having these 3 kicksliders have a high SV while the ones at 01:15:142 (1,2,3,4) - or 01:17:885 (1,2,3,4) - Has a low SV doesn't make much sense.

01:23:371 - Why did you stop using kicksliders here. It worked pretty well imo.

01:33:657 - Sliders shouldn't overlap themselves.

02:17:542 - to 02:20:285 - Again the stack placement here doesn't follow the music properly. Listen more closely and change this section.

02:44:971 (1) - Just wanted to point out how ridiculously nice this slider is, Good job.

02:53:200 - Remove the SV change here and change the slider.

03:35:714 (1,2,3) - Up the spacing.

03:46:685 (1,2,3) - ^

Photos
00:11:371 -



Sorry for bad english :D

Thank you very much for the mod!

I took into account all of your suggestions except for the triple stacks and the slider jump art, as the triples I used it because it fits the beat to me and the arts are for a conceptual reason!

Thanks, and cheers!
-CD
Modding that map boi

I would suggest getting someone to hitsound this, the hitsounding just sounds really really off, it somewhat makes the voice of the singer unheard. I don't know if it's my volume but yeah, find someone for that

Jay from the Carpel Tunnel modding queue
Starting off with this 00:20:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is a downbeat after the eight here. Maybe make that 8 note a slider?

01:12:400 (1,2,3,1,2) - Transition from those three to the circle slider feel odd, spacing could be a little better.

01:27:485 (3,4) - Any need for the curve on the fourth note here? there is a beat on the red tick that you could end the slider on. There is nothing that says ending slider points have to be on beat but, it would be better in a way.

03:44:628 (1,2) - spacing

01:28:857 (1,2,3) - spacing the 2 and the 3

01:33:571 (4,1) - This might be hard to read? I'm not sure, it feels good playing, but just make sure it's good

01:36:742 (3,4) - 1/2 stack might feel a little weird while playing, seems blanketed by the other jumps but still check

I believe that is it. I will have the people in my modding queue also review if I need to add anything.

PS. It is a really fun map, I might add it to my favorites!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

JayJay-San wrote:

Modding that map boi

I would suggest getting someone to hitsound this, the hitsounding just sounds really really off, it somewhat makes the voice of the singer unheard. I don't know if it's my volume but yeah, find someone for that

Jay from the Carpel Tunnel modding queue
Starting off with this 00:20:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is a downbeat after the eight here. Maybe make that 8 note a slider? single note is to indicate the change in the song, has a little more umph with a sudden stop

01:12:400 (1,2,3,1,2) - Transition from those three to the circle slider feel odd, spacing could be a little better. added more spacing, hopefully fixes it

01:27:485 (3,4) - Any need for the curve on the fourth note here? there is a beat on the red tick that you could end the slider on. There is nothing that says ending slider points have to be on beat but, it would be better in a way. Just to keep flow better
03:44:628 (1,2) - spacing added more spacing, hopefully feels better

01:28:857 (1,2,3) - spacing the 2 and the 3 fixed

01:33:571 (4,1) - This might be hard to read? I'm not sure, it feels good playing, but just make sure it's good rotated a tiny bit

01:36:742 (3,4) - 1/2 stack might feel a little weird while playing, seems blanketed by the other jumps but still check the vocalist makes the same . . . noise? lmao same singing note for those two notes, so I stacked them

I believe that is it. I will have the people in my modding queue also review if I need to add anything.

PS. It is a really fun map, I might add it to my favorites!

Thanks for the mod, responded to your suggestions in the quote!

Cheers!, map has been updated!
walaowey
Hi nm req from my queue :D

general
you're using your own preference skin now lol, its better to change it back to user's preference imo https://puu.sh/ukm5v/329ccff3bf.png
Koi
  1. 00:18:571 (2) - improve this blanket :P
  2. 00:20:285 (1) - this circle should have bigger spacing, considering its beat to be stronger than all previous notes instead of same spacing jump.
  3. 00:20:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - stack it with 00:20:285 (1) -
  4. 00:49:085 (1) - this note is quite hard to play, place it somewhere else maybe?
  5. 00:55:257 (1) - you can have bigger jump here, the beat was strong
  6. 01:02:114 - map this as circle? the beat was very strong, slider tail was not enough to emphasize the strong beat here
  7. 01:04:857 (1) - map this as a 1/2 slider+ circle? bcoz they're sound at 01:05:028 -
  8. 01:06:314 (2) - they're no beat here lol, u should remove it
  9. 01:13:428 (3) - can improve this blanket
  10. 01:17:542 (2) - place this abit further? the overlap looks not that good imo
  11. 01:33:657 (1) - the reverse lol, remove the last slider point?? that point dont have any function imo and it looks weird too. 01:34:342 (3) - 01:37:942 (2) - stuff like this, you'll see the slider body in the end, it looks not neat imo.. they're still more of it, i suggest u to fix them
  12. 01:41:885 (1,2) - blanket improve?
  13. 02:02:285 (6) - NC this? the current combo was quite long
  14. 02:19:942 (8) - stack is off
  15. 02:23:714 (1,2,3,4) - copy paste for 4 of these sliders? i notice you (4) was not copied pasted
  16. 02:34:342 (2) - stack it?
  17. 02:44:971 (1) - NICEEEEE :D
  18. some of the stacks are off, look through your map again and find them to fix
Sorry for all those blanket nitpick stuff, but i just cant ignore them when they're quite obvious :P

That's all from me, good luck :D
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

walaowey wrote:

Hi nm req from my queue :D

general
you're using your own preference skin now lol, its better to change it back to user's preference imo https://puu.sh/ukm5v/329ccff3bf.png
Koi
  1. 00:18:571 (2) - improve this blanket :P
  2. 00:20:285 (1) - this circle should have bigger spacing, considering its beat to be stronger than all previous notes instead of same spacing jump.
  3. 00:20:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - stack it with 00:20:285 (1) -
  4. 00:49:085 (1) - this note is quite hard to play, place it somewhere else maybe?
  5. 00:55:257 (1) - you can have bigger jump here, the beat was strong
  6. 01:02:114 - map this as circle? the beat was very strong, slider tail was not enough to emphasize the strong beat here
  7. 01:04:857 (1) - map this as a 1/2 slider+ circle? bcoz they're sound at 01:05:028 -
  8. 01:06:314 (2) - they're no beat here lol, u should remove it
  9. 01:13:428 (3) - can improve this blanket
  10. 01:17:542 (2) - place this abit further? the overlap looks not that good imo
  11. 01:33:657 (1) - the reverse lol, remove the last slider point?? that point dont have any function imo and it looks weird too. 01:34:342 (3) - 01:37:942 (2) - stuff like this, you'll see the slider body in the end, it looks not neat imo.. they're still more of it, i suggest u to fix them
  12. 01:41:885 (1,2) - blanket improve?
  13. 02:02:285 (6) - NC this? the current combo was quite long
  14. 02:19:942 (8) - stack is off
  15. 02:23:714 (1,2,3,4) - copy paste for 4 of these sliders? i notice you (4) was not copied pasted
  16. 02:34:342 (2) - stack it?
  17. 02:44:971 (1) - NICEEEEE :D
  18. some of the stacks are off, look through your map again and find them to fix
Sorry for all those blanket nitpick stuff, but i just cant ignore them when they're quite obvious :P

That's all from me, good luck :D
Currently replying through phone (browser for some reason doesn't work with forums, ppy fix pls xd)

Can't respond to every one of your mods, but be assured every one of them was looked at!

Map has been updated, thank you for the mod! Cheers!
Mordred
from q

Koi
idk what you did to your repeat sliders like 03:31:600 (1) - the reverse arrows point in the wrong direction

hp1.5?

00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - kinda annoying to read because of the way they overlap, why not have them the same way as here 00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) -
00:31:257 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:35:371 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:36:742 (1,2,1,2) - ^
just change those up a little

00:42:914 (5) - I'd NC here and remove those 00:43:257 (1,1) -

01:11:371 (2) - can you NC this to indicate the SV change

01:16:514 (3,4) - not sure if a blanket is intended here, but if it is, it's quite off

01:24:400 (2) - you could stack this on 01:23:714 (5) - looks neat

01:31:342 (4) - I don't hear anything here, 01:32:028 (9) - same with this note

01:33:657 (1) - weird to play because of it's angle, you could stack it on 01:32:971 (1) - and rotate it a bit to make it more intuitive to play

01:35:971 (7) - there is nothing on this tick

01:36:485 (1) - same here, just delete this and move the NC to 01:36:571 (2) -

01:37:085 (5,7) - you could also NC those two

01:39:657 (4) - strong sound on the reverse, should be clickable imo, something like this works better

01:42:571 (3) - kickslider to emphasis the vocal?

01:51:400 (9) - overmapped (you seem to have a lot of those in your map, I'll stop mentioning them here)

01:52:771 (9) - ^

02:16:857 (4) - should probably NC this because of the SV change

02:22:685 (2) - same here

02:44:971 (1) - alright, this is super optional, but what you could do here is muting the sliderticks that don't have a somewhat strong sound on them to highlight those which do; you can do this by using green lines to change the hitsound volume but I assume you already know this xd

if you decide to do this you should mute the following: 02:45:314 - 02:46:000 - 02:46:685 - 02:47:371 - 02:48:057 - 02:48:742 - 02:49:428 - 02:50:114 - 02:50:800 - 02:51:485 - 02:52:171 - 02:52:857 -

02:55:942 (1,2,3,4) - I'd gradually decrease the hitsound volume on those

03:02:971 (6) - plays boring as a repeat, why not change it to circles?


fun map, good luck with it
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Yoshino-- wrote:

from q

Koi
idk what you did to your repeat sliders like 03:31:600 (1) - the reverse arrows point in the wrong direction

hp1.5?

00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - kinda annoying to read because of the way they overlap, why not have them the same way as here 00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) -
00:31:257 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:35:371 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:36:742 (1,2,1,2) - ^
just change those up a little

00:42:914 (5) - I'd NC here and remove those 00:43:257 (1,1) -

01:11:371 (2) - can you NC this to indicate the SV change

01:16:514 (3,4) - not sure if a blanket is intended here, but if it is, it's quite off

01:24:400 (2) - you could stack this on 01:23:714 (5) - looks neat

01:31:342 (4) - I don't hear anything here, 01:32:028 (9) - same with this note

01:33:657 (1) - weird to play because of it's angle, you could stack it on 01:32:971 (1) - and rotate it a bit to make it more intuitive to play

01:35:971 (7) - there is nothing on this tick

01:36:485 (1) - same here, just delete this and move the NC to 01:36:571 (2) -

01:37:085 (5,7) - you could also NC those two

01:39:657 (4) - strong sound on the reverse, should be clickable imo, something like this works better

01:42:571 (3) - kickslider to emphasis the vocal?

01:51:400 (9) - overmapped (you seem to have a lot of those in your map, I'll stop mentioning them here)

01:52:771 (9) - ^

02:16:857 (4) - should probably NC this because of the SV change

02:22:685 (2) - same here

02:44:971 (1) - alright, this is super optional, but what you could do here is muting the sliderticks that don't have a somewhat strong sound on them to highlight those which do; you can do this by using green lines to change the hitsound volume but I assume you already know this xd

if you decide to do this you should mute the following: 02:45:314 - 02:46:000 - 02:46:685 - 02:47:371 - 02:48:057 - 02:48:742 - 02:49:428 - 02:50:114 - 02:50:800 - 02:51:485 - 02:52:171 - 02:52:857 -

02:55:942 (1,2,3,4) - I'd gradually decrease the hitsound volume on those

03:02:971 (6) - plays boring as a repeat, why not change it to circles?


fun map, good luck with it
Browser still not working with forum ;~; posting from my phone

Sorry for not being able to respond to each of your mods, but I took into account all them don't worry :p

The blankets, stacks and hit volumes I all agree with, but the triples seem justified for me, as the vocals are elongated for them, but maybe I can use reverse sliders instead :thinking: I'll try out both.

Thanks for the mod and cheers! Thanks for the good luck too! :D
LwL
hi, from my q

Koi
00:03:828 (3,4) - Since these are kinda overmapped might wanna mute the sliderends

00:12:057 (3,4,5,6) - This is a pretty awkward pattern imo, it's essentially low angle jumps but as 1/4 sliders. Some slightly sharper angles would make this nicer to play.

00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - ^

00:22:000 (8) - line it up with the slider?

00:51:485 (1) - Vocal on the red tick should be a click imo, it's about equally as strong as the vocals on the white ticks surrounding it

01:01:085 (1) - ^

00:57:314 (3,4,5,1) - flow is eh. Especially the transition from (5) into the slider that goes in the same direction the movement is coming from, can be ok on it's own but with so many flow breaks before that it just becomes awkward.

01:03:142 (5) - Again, I think the red tick should be clickable, as it is the sound on the sliderend is stronger than on the sliderhead.

01:05:371 (2) - ^, while you could prioritize the drums here, too, that doesn't really work when you skip over them at 01:05:028

01:06:228 (1,2) - Is it just me or is the blue tick between these stronger than the one in the middle of (1)? You should map it imo, probably as a circle.

01:07:171 - the sound here is stronger than on the red and white tick surrounding it, and it seems to be the same instrument the rest of the section is mapped to, yet it gets completely skipped here.

01:07:428 (6) - Stronger sound on sliderend than on sliderhead.

01:08:457 (11) - What is this trying to emphasize? The vocal starts earlier, and with this you're skipping over the rather prominent sound on the white tick, which I don't really see a justification for since you're not properly emphasizing the vocal either.

01:09:656 (2) - It's stronger than 01:09:485 (1), yet the spacing emphasizes (1).

01:31:342 (4) - This seems to be overmapped for no particular reason

01:32:028 (9) - ^

01:35:971 (7) - ^ might be in other places too (definitely later on when there are similar sections)

02:17:542 - pretty much the same issues as in the section at 01:06:228

02:32:628 (5,6,7) - looks a bit messy

03:20:628 - is there a specific instrument you're mapping these sliders to? It feels like you're just mapping a random 1/1 rhythm that sometimes coincides with vocals but often skips them.

03:27:828 (2,3) - awkward flow imo

03:52:857 (6,8) - make the overlap the same as 03:52:514 (5,7) -

Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

LawL4Ever wrote:

hi, from my q

00:03:828 (3,4) - Since these are kinda overmapped might wanna mute the sliderends It's an introduction to the 1/4 sliders I use in my map, and it's not too hard to read so i'll keep it the same

00:12:057 (3,4,5,6) - This is a pretty awkward pattern imo, it's essentially low angle jumps but as 1/4 sliders. Some slightly sharper angles would make this nicer to play. Shifted the position a tiny bit, but I found it comfortable enough, and others as well, but will keep an eye on that

00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

00:22:000 (8) - line it up with the slider? Fixed

00:51:485 (1) - Vocal on the red tick should be a click imo, it's about equally as strong as the vocals on the white ticks surrounding it Fixed, as well as the same issue a bit before that part

01:01:085 (1) - ^ Fixed

00:57:314 (3,4,5,1) - flow is eh. Especially the transition from (5) into the slider that goes in the same direction the movement is coming from, can be ok on it's own but with so many flow breaks before that it just becomes awkward. Fixed flow, feels much cleaner now

01:03:142 (5) - Again, I think the red tick should be clickable, as it is the sound on the sliderend is stronger than on the sliderhead. Feels fine as it is now, as imo I don't think the red tick is as important

01:05:371 (2) - ^, while you could prioritize the drums here, too, that doesn't really work when you skip over them at 01:05:028 The hard drum sounds after are the most important, and making those two notes just as important feels off

01:06:228 (1,2) - Is it just me or is the blue tick between these stronger than the one in the middle of (1)? You should map it imo, probably as a circle. Reverse slider is fine

01:07:171 - the sound here is stronger than on the red and white tick surrounding it, and it seems to be the same instrument the rest of the section is mapped to, yet it gets completely skipped here. Remapped the area based on this point

01:07:428 (6) - Stronger sound on sliderend than on sliderhead. ^

01:08:457 (11) - What is this trying to emphasize? The vocal starts earlier, and with this you're skipping over the rather prominent sound on the white tick, which I don't really see a justification for since you're not properly emphasizing the vocal either. Got rid of triple and made slider stand alone and followed vocals properly

01:09:656 (2) - It's stronger than 01:09:485 (1), yet the spacing emphasizes (1). I spaced based on vocals

01:31:342 (4) - This seems to be overmapped for no particular reason Now that I tried, no triples sounds better, thx

01:32:028 (9) - ^ ^

01:35:971 (7) - ^ might be in other places too (definitely later on when there are similar sections) ^

02:17:542 - pretty much the same issues as in the section at 01:06:228 Again, reverse sliders seem fine

02:32:628 (5,6,7) - looks a bit messy kinda made it less messy

03:20:628 - is there a specific instrument you're mapping these sliders to? It feels like you're just mapping a random 1/1 rhythm that sometimes coincides with vocals but often skips them. Mapping to significant vocals, syllables that stick out more

03:27:828 (2,3) - awkward flow imo Added more spacing

03:52:857 (6,8) - make the overlap the same as 03:52:514 (5,7) - fixed

Good Luck! :)
Thanks for the mod! ~~~

Cheers!
aru-
Hey, here's your requested Mod from the q.

Koi:


>Like everyone said before fulfill the AiMod<

01:04:171 (5,6,7) - I would avoid this wide angle jump kinda feels weird to me, Try putting it more leftsided and shift it up a little
01:06:228 (1,2,3) - This sounds not fitting to the music.
Explanation
In the timespan between the 1 and 2 the music kinda stops so i would stack the 2 ontop of the 1. Then there is the 1/4 tripple afterwards and then a 1/2 beat which sounds kinda "dragged" so i would recommend using a slider there. In this way the music keeps on until here 01:08:628 -
You could try and try to fit the patterns more to the music there.
01:51:314 (8,1,2) - this translation to a square pattern looks awkward
01:54:571 (5,6) - I would make some distance between those rewerse slider, like a little jump
02:15:142 (3,4,5) - I just really dont like wide angle jumps. They take away the maps flow
02:17:542 (1,2) - Sounds wrong to my ears
Try this timing
(ofc this applies till here 02:20:285 - )
02:22:000 (1,5) - Why did u put those a little bit away from the stream? :o
02:53:200 (1) - Huiiiii this one is way faster then the one before
03:53:200 (7,8) - I'd replace them with a long slider from there: 03:53:200 - to there: 03:53:542 -

Thats all i could find.
Im really surprised this map is actualy alot of fun to play!!! So good luck with it c:
If my mod was helpful please cinsider giving some kudosu :)
brdzxh
hi from my queue

- I wouldnt put Nisekoi as source, but as a tag instead since its just a remix and maybe add some more other tags? Possibly the artists in japanese letters.

- disable countdown

Insane
not sure if im supposed to mod this or not but whatever
00:24:742 (4,1,2) - improve blankets here
00:25:942 (3,4) - not sure if i would stack this
00:26:457 (1,2) - blanket
00:27:314 (3,4) - i guess its fine to stack like before, but fix stack then
00:30:914 (2) - ctrl+g
00:31:600 (4) - ^

seems to me that u are kinda overusing return sliders but whatever :p

Koi
00:02:457 (1) - slider should end at 00:02:628
00:08:457 - should be clickable
00:10:000 (1) - make slider
00:12:400 (5,6) - it sounds better with singles here to be honest, but I can see where you are coming from
00:11:714 (2,1) - stack?
00:13:085 (2) - would make it something like this

00:24:571 (2) - sliderend has clap hitsound; not sure if its supposed to be there
00:28:514 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+g all of them individually?
00:50:971 (5,1,2,3) - spacing might be a bit too big
01:04:857 (1) - slider should end on the red tick in the middle of the slider and maybe put a circle after?
01:11:714 (1) - not a fan of this shape :p
01:23:371 (3) - NC
01:26:114 (3) - ^
01:33:657 (1,3) - this shape zz
01:46:685 (5) - NC?
02:02:628 (2,4) - stack
02:03:485 (5,2) - stack 5 with 2's sliderend?
03:26:114 (1,2,3,4) - same spacing?
03:33:657 (5) - NC
03:53:200 (7) - no sound for kickslider; maybe make a single slider or just a circle?

Looks promising, good luck! :D
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Shifu Touka wrote:

Hey, here's your requested Mod from the q.

Koi:


>Like everyone said before fulfill the AiMod<

01:04:171 (5,6,7) - I would avoid this wide angle jump kinda feels weird to me, Try putting it more leftsided and shift it up a little Music is a bit different at that part, thus the odd jumps
01:06:228 (1,2,3) - This sounds not fitting to the music. :thinking: Yeah sounds better c:
Explanation
In the timespan between the 1 and 2 the music kinda stops so i would stack the 2 ontop of the 1. Then there is the 1/4 tripple afterwards and then a 1/2 beat which sounds kinda "dragged" so i would recommend using a slider there. In this way the music keeps on until here 01:08:628 -
You could try and try to fit the patterns more to the music there.
01:51:314 (8,1,2) - this translation to a square pattern looks awkward made it actually look like a square from the beginning
01:54:571 (5,6) - I would make some distance between those rewerse slider, like a little jump added tiny jumps to keep the players cursor moving :3
02:15:142 (3,4,5) - I just really dont like wide angle jumps. They take away the maps flow again, it's because of the part of the song
02:17:542 (1,2) - Sounds wrong to my ears f i x e d c:
Try this timing
(ofc this applies till here 02:20:285 - )
02:22:000 (1,5) - Why did u put those a little bit away from the stream? :o asthetics
02:53:200 (1) - Huiiiii this one is way faster then the one before But i want to keep my infinity slider art like that ;~;
03:53:200 (7,8) - I'd replace them with a long slider from there: 03:53:200 - to there: 03:53:542 - i think its good as it is :3

Thats all i could find.
Im really surprised this map is actualy alot of fun to play!!! So good luck with it c:
If my mod was helpful please cinsider giving some kudosu :)

That was a helpful mod, thanks and cheers!~~

Map has been updated!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

brdzxh wrote:

hi from my queue

- I wouldnt put Nisekoi as source, but as a tag instead since its just a remix and maybe add some more other tags? Possibly the artists in japanese letters.

- disable countdown

Insane
not sure if im supposed to mod this or not but whatever
00:24:742 (4,1,2) - improve blankets here
00:25:942 (3,4) - not sure if i would stack this
00:26:457 (1,2) - blanket
00:27:314 (3,4) - i guess its fine to stack like before, but fix stack then
00:30:914 (2) - ctrl+g
00:31:600 (4) - ^

seems to me that u are kinda overusing return sliders but whatever :p
Gonna take a look at this a bit later dw

Koi
00:02:457 (1) - slider should end at 00:02:628
00:08:457 - should be clickable Doesn't fit for me :/
00:10:000 (1) - make slider Slider feels off
00:12:400 (5,6) - it sounds better with singles here to be honest, but I can see where you are coming from yeah the whole map is based on these 1/4 sliders :3
00:11:714 (2,1) - stack? Stacked
00:13:085 (2) - would make it something like this This pattern looks way better thanks ~~ :)

00:24:571 (2) - sliderend has clap hitsound; not sure if its supposed to be there Fixed :p
00:28:514 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+g all of them individually? Done, better flow now
00:50:971 (5,1,2,3) - spacing might be a bit too big Fixed it and made it smaller
01:04:857 (1) - slider should end on the red tick in the middle of the slider and maybe put a circle after? Current rhythm seems fine
01:11:714 (1) - not a fan of this shape :p B-but I like it ;~;
01:23:371 (3) - NC Done
01:26:114 (3) - ^ ^
01:33:657 (1,3) - this shape zz ResidentSleeper? but i like it ;~;
01:46:685 (5) - NC? NC
02:02:628 (2,4) - stack El stacko
02:03:485 (5,2) - stack 5 with 2's sliderend? Fixed
03:26:114 (1,2,3,4) - same spacing? Done, didnt catch that :p
03:33:657 (5) - NC Done
03:53:200 (7) - no sound for kickslider; maybe make a single slider or just a circle?
Kick sliders go with the vocals, and I've been doing that the whole song, but I might change this pattern throughout the whole song. Just not rn

Looks promising, good luck! :D
Thanks for the mod, responses in the box! ~~~~~
Einja
Mod incoming! o/

Koi

SPOILER
-00:02:800 (2,1) - Space these out slighty away from each other

-00:25:771 (1,2,3,4) - Once again, space these sliders away so they don't look as clustered

-00:34:000 (1,2,3,4) - Do the same with these sliders

-00:34:685 (1,2) - This looks better imo


-00:38:800 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest making these jumps as wide as the other jumps that come after it

-00:49:085 (1,2,3,4) - That looks a bit diffcult to read than the previous patterns, maybe this pattern would be nicer


-01:12:400 (1,2,3) - Changing the patter completely like that doesn't make the flow comfortable. Changing these to normal kicksliders would feel a lot more nice

-01:17:542 (2) - Make this the same size as 01:17:200 (1) -

-01:43:085 (5,1) - Don't let these overlap

-02:01:428 (2) - Start a NC here instead of 02:01:085 (1) -

-02:21:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make this stream evenly spaced. Suddenly spacing out like that doesn't make the stream look as neat.

-02:23:714 (1,2,3,4) - Keep the slider velocity here the same as the rest of the pattern

-02:26:971 (4) - Change this slider to the rest of the kicksliders

-02:53:200 (1) - The sudden SV change here can throw off players. Keep the SV the same as the previous slider pattern

-03:39:142 (1) - Do not start a NC here

-03:39:142 (1,2) - This looks a bit more neat
http://image.prntscr.com/image/0cb9549b ... d247e8.png

-03:39:485 (3,1) - Don't let these overlap

-03:44:457 (4) - Change this to make it look like 03:43:942 (1,2,3)
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Einja wrote:

Mod incoming! o/

Koi

-00:02:800 (2,1) - Space these out slighty away from each other Spaced a bit further

-00:25:771 (1,2,3,4) - Once again, space these sliders away so they don't look as clustered spaced

-00:34:000 (1,2,3,4) - Do the same with these sliders ^

-00:34:685 (1,2) - This looks better imo
Did sorta what you suggested, while getting things stacked

-00:38:800 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest making these jumps as wide as the other jumps that come after it Nah, it's for build-up effects

-00:49:085 (1,2,3,4) - That looks a bit diffcult to read than the previous patterns, maybe this pattern would be nicer
Made a triangle pattern instead

-01:12:400 (1,2,3) - Changing the patter completely like that doesn't make the flow comfortable. Changing these to normal kicksliders would feel a lot more nice It's meant to be a flower because the songs said "cute" ;~;

-01:17:542 (2) - Make this the same size as 01:17:200 (1) - There'd have to be SV change then, and it'd be a bit awkward

-01:43:085 (5,1) - Don't let these overlap Oki

-02:01:428 (2) - Start a NC here instead of 02:01:085 (1) - NC fixed

-02:21:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make this stream evenly spaced. Suddenly spacing out like that doesn't make the stream look as neat. It's for aesthetics, I don't think it's too hard to follow even tho it's shifted over

-02:23:714 (1,2,3,4) - Keep the slider velocity here the same as the rest of the pattern fixed

-02:26:971 (4) - Change this slider to the rest of the kicksliders fixed

-02:53:200 (1) - The sudden SV change here can throw off players. Keep the SV the same as the previous slider pattern somewhat fixed

-03:39:142 (1) - Do not start a NC here It's to indicate the 1/4 sliders

-03:39:142 (1,2) - This looks a bit more neat
http://image.prntscr.com/image/0cb9549b ... d247e8.png I like the way it is tho ;~;

-03:39:485 (3,1) - Don't let these overlap Note overlapping anymore

-03:44:457 (4) - Change this to make it look like 03:43:942 (1,2,3)
Pattern only has three, I think it's fine


Thank you for the mod!~~~

Map has been updated, cheers! o/
X Light
from my queue lol
[hitsound]
http://puu.sh/uyfmW/0b60abb2f4.rar
Feel free to use this set of hitsound!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

X Light wrote:

from my queue lol
[hitsound]
http://puu.sh/uyfmW/0b60abb2f4.rar
Feel free to use this set of hitsound!
I'll keep that on tab, other hitsounds are coming tho, I'll compare the two and then choose


tyty o/
KnightC0re
modd
Hp 1.5?

00:03:828(3,4) - Short sliders not really necessary
Please just stop spamming sliders
00:24:400(1,2,3,4) - Stack 4 better, aka move all 4 of these as well
01:08:800 - (ayy 0108) This pattern started early -_-
01:30:914 - This pattern is... bleh. Make a more unique one man.
01:33:657 - Just... don't

Everything else... is basically the same.
Some sliders are overdone, some shorter sliders should be replaced with circles, the jumps are kinda plain and times and the map itself is kinda blend.
I'll say go improve mapping jumps, I'm not trying to be mean, I'm trying to help you stop using ctrl+c ctrl+v (At least don't do those for jumps and just flip them)
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

KnightC0re wrote:

modd
Hp 1.5?

00:03:828(3,4) - Short sliders not really necessary
Please just stop spamming sliders
00:24:400(1,2,3,4) - Stack 4 better, aka move all 4 of these as well
01:08:800 - (ayy 0108) This pattern started early -_- fixed
01:30:914 - This pattern is... bleh. Make a more unique one man.
01:33:657 - Just... don't

Everything else... is basically the same.
Some sliders are overdone, some shorter sliders should be replaced with circles, the jumps are kinda plain and times and the map itself is kinda blend.
I'll say go improve mapping jumps, I'm not trying to be mean, I'm trying to help you stop using ctrl+c ctrl+v (At least don't do those for jumps and just flip them)
I'm glad someone else had the same feeling about my jumps as I expressed in my map description :p

I always had a sneaking suspicion that my jumps were plain (but the ctrl-v concept is imo fine, as some jumps were copy-pasted because, well the song vocals and rhythm was literally copy-pasted by the artist)

Tried a more different approach to the jumps, however, I kept all the 1/4 sliders as that pretty much defines my map xd

Thanks for the mod!
Yamicchi
Hello
[General]
• Either remove TsugumiIsObvBestGirl.mp3 or audio.mp3. You only use 1 right?
[Koi]
• Might wanna reduce the volume to 20%. 30% is still a bit loud
• 00:02:628 - are you sure you wanna skip this beat?
• 00:03:828 (3,4) - Overmap is not suitable here
• 00:08:628 (1) - ehhhh bad blanket http://puu.sh/uMZk7/8691faa8e9.jpg
• 00:11:028 (4) - Should continue what you're doing with 00:10:342 (2,3) - 's flow instead of breaking the flow
• 00:12:057 (3,4,5,6) - Overmap again. And the others like 00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - 00:16:171 (1,2,3,4) - ... I know you wanna make the map more exciting but you should do this somehow different from this. There are clearly no sound on blue ticks so 1/4 sliders are not necessary at all
• 00:36:742 (1,2,1,2) - Really hard to read, and idk if you're trying to stack them properly or just a tiny overlap which I can't even see clearly. Fix it
• 00:44:285 (1) - Need more spacing for intensity
• 01:04:857 (1) - 01:11:371 (1) - Must reduce the number of red anchors in order not to slow the slider down (unrankable issues)
• 01:08:452 - only this place has a missing circle?
• 01:12:400 (1,2,3) - 01:15:142 (1,2,3) - different pattern and different SV for the same rhythm, no please
• 01:33:657 (1) - Why not stacking it to 01:32:971 (1) - ?


Yeah it should really be fixed and improved a lot
Good luck
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Yamicchi wrote:

Hello
[General]
• Either remove TsugumiIsObvBestGirl.mp3 or audio.mp3. You only use 1 right? trying to not use audio.mp3 but it's being iffy ;~; gonna ask around and try to get it working
[Koi]
• Might wanna reduce the volume to 20%. 30% is still a bit loud I'll do that if need be from gathering more opinion.
• 00:02:628 - are you sure you wanna skip this beat? Yeah, an elongated slider feels better as the beat feels a bit extended
• 00:03:828 (3,4) - Overmap is not suitable here fixed, was trying to introduce the map's gimmick, but i guess not as it's in the first 3 seconds of the map :c
• 00:08:628 (1) - ehhhh bad blanket http://puu.sh/uMZk7/8691faa8e9.jpg bro this slider has been killing me for so long. I think i fixed it now
• 00:11:028 (4) - Should continue what you're doing with 00:10:342 (2,3) - 's flow instead of breaking the flow fixed to stay consistent
• 00:12:057 (3,4,5,6) - Overmap again. And the others like 00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - 00:16:171 (1,2,3,4) - ... I know you wanna make the map more exciting but you should do this somehow different from this. There are clearly no sound on blue ticks so 1/4 sliders are not necessary at all This gimmick defines my whole map, so I'll keep it.
• 00:36:742 (1,2,1,2) - Really hard to read, and idk if you're trying to stack them properly or just a tiny overlap which I can't even see clearly. Fix it stacked
• 00:44:285 (1) - Need more spacing for intensity fixed
• 01:04:857 (1) - 01:11:371 (1) - Must reduce the number of red anchors in order not to slow the slider down (unrankable issues) asked around, a bn said it's probably fine
• 01:08:452 - only this place has a missing circle? fixed pattern and timing
• 01:12:400 (1,2,3) - 01:15:142 (1,2,3) - different pattern and different SV for the same rhythm, no please it's a gimmick reference to the lyrics during those first slider art pattern
• 01:33:657 (1) - Why not stacking it to 01:32:971 (1) - ? thought i stacked it in editor xd fixed


Yeah it should really be fixed and improved a lot
Good luck
Thanks for the mod!~~~

Map has been updated!
Voli
Hey, modding this from my m4m queue.
Modding the Koi difff since I assume WIP is WIP :p

Btw maybe consider replying in green to points you accept instead of red, most people use red to deny things so yeah might be less confusing haha

Koi


  1. 00:02:457 (1) - end one tick earlier, theres nothing on blue
  2. 00:05:885 (1) - interesting shapes, but it's kinda weird how some of this rhythm is completely overlapped by extended sliders and some is mapped in detail (00:03:142 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ). Using slider-art is cool, but mapping a rhythm and then completely ignoring the same rhythm kinda isn't - that goes for the entirety of this section. I'd make a choice if i were you, only extended sliders OR map to the entire rhythm.
  3. 00:13:428 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think it's a bit early in the map to start spamming minisliders, the music isn't anywhere near intense, just 4 normal notes will play and look way better. If you do intend to keep these, maybe consider silencing the sliderends because the blue ticks feel overmapped
  4. 00:21:314 (5,6,7) - now THIS is where i'd expect those 1/4 minisliders as this is a far more intense part than the parts you mapped with mini sliders. As a result, using reverses and holding the momentum here (you barely move with your cursor), this feels rather underwhelming.
  5. 00:22:171 - I'd suggest you map this red tick as the break feels a bit random there
  6. 00:38:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - so many notes here.. and the pattern before is only sliders aswell, why not make a nice blend? Too many repetitive elements often play badly.
  7. 00:41:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You can do something with the spacing here because the drums in the background are more intense than previous rhythms, I'd increase the spacing here.
  8. 00:43:942 (13) - I think this is a kinda lame way to finish the stream, how about some more action? https://voli.s-ul.eu/4mjgEJ2W.png
  9. 00:44:457 - Map this note, break feels random
  10. 00:58:514 (2,3) - unstack the note and move it somewhere else because holding the momentum feels a bit weird, I'd expect a jump to 00:58:686 (3) - . perhaps something like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/cYuWGa8J.png
  11. 00:59:200 (4,5) - same story
  12. 01:05:371 (2) - I don't really like the downbeat on a slider end, in my opinion the white tick is strong enough to be clickable. perhaps make it a note/slider pattern? (red tick note, white tick slider)
  13. 01:08:542 (5,6) - hmm just make it the same as 01:07:857 (2,3) - for consistency (and the first one is a better pattern anyways :P)
  14. 01:12:914 (1,2) - Unstack? i want a jumping movement to 01:13:085 (2) - \o/
  15. 01:30:142 (4) - this note is overmapped, theres nothing on the blue tick
  16. 01:36:228 (8) - same thing with white tick on slider end, please make 01:36:400 - a clickable object the sound's so strong haha
  17. 01:46:685 (1,2) - jump pls, holding the momentum feels bad here
  18. 01:53:885 (7,8) - why does this have such low spacing compared to 01:53:542 (5,6,7,8) - when its the same sound?
  19. 01:56:971 (1) - maybe 3 sliders here to follow the vocals just like you did here 02:07:942 (1,2,3) - ? seems more fitting than a repeat.
  20. 02:09:142 (5,1) - unstack please, 02:09:314 (1) - is too strong to hold the momentum
  21. 02:14:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm i think you can make a better pattern here, this one seems kinda random and plays lackluster, something like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/8WzPgq6f.png
  22. 02:23:714 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - hmm you make neat structure here, cool stuff, I kinda missed that in some other parts of the map tho! :p
Lots of the issues I pointed out occur multiple times, so make sure to go through the map and fix similar things aswell if you decide to apply. The map has interesting ideas and sometimes the structure is neat, but I feel some parts are still lacking. You've shown that you can make cool structure and patterns, but a lot of patterns (mostly in the first 1:30 mins) seem kinda random and not all that fitting.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Voli wrote:

Hey, modding this from my m4m queue.
Modding the Koi difff since I assume WIP is WIP :p

Btw maybe consider replying in green to points you accept instead of red, most people use red to deny things so yeah might be less confusing haha Never thought of that :o tyty xd

Koi


  1. 00:02:457 (1) - end one tick earlier, theres nothing on blue Done
  2. 00:05:885 (1) - interesting shapes, but it's kinda weird how some of this rhythm is completely overlapped by extended sliders and some is mapped in detail (00:03:142 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ). Using slider-art is cool, but mapping a rhythm and then completely ignoring the same rhythm kinda isn't - that goes for the entirety of this section. I'd make a choice if i were you, only extended sliders OR map to the entire rhythm. used sliders throughout instead
  3. 00:13:428 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think it's a bit early in the map to start spamming minisliders, the music isn't anywhere near intense, just 4 normal notes will play and look way better. If you do intend to keep these, maybe consider silencing the sliderends because the blue ticks feel overmapped I want to keep it like that, to introduce the gimmick of this map; but how in the world do you silence slider ends? Idk how ;~;
  4. 00:21:314 (5,6,7) - now THIS is where i'd expect those 1/4 minisliders as this is a far more intense part than the parts you mapped with mini sliders. As a result, using reverses and holding the momentum here (you barely move with your cursor), this feels rather underwhelming. Fixed, as well as another same part in the song at 1:54
  5. 00:22:171 - I'd suggest you map this red tick as the break feels a bit random there I feel like it's to emphasize the conclusive vocals
  6. 00:38:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - so many notes here.. and the pattern before is only sliders aswell, why not make a nice blend? Too many repetitive elements often play badly. I wanted to highlight the drum buildup with the circle spam :p
  7. 00:41:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You can do something with the spacing here because the drums in the background are more intense than previous rhythms, I'd increase the spacing here. I'm not too sure if I want that much of a difficulty spike especially in a part that's not even kiai
  8. 00:43:942 (13) - I think this is a kinda lame way to finish the stream, how about some more action? https://voli.s-ul.eu/4mjgEJ2W.png fjxed
  9. 00:44:457 - Map this note, break feels random highlights final finish note
  10. 00:58:514 (2,3) - unstack the note and move it somewhere else because holding the momentum feels a bit weird, I'd expect a jump to 00:58:686 (3) - . perhaps something like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/cYuWGa8J.png sorta fixed as well as the same pattern throughout the song
  11. 00:59:200 (4,5) - same story :ok_hand:
  12. 01:05:371 (2) - I don't really like the downbeat on a slider end, in my opinion the white tick is strong enough to be clickable. perhaps make it a note/slider pattern? (red tick note, white tick slider) fixed
  13. 01:08:542 (5,6) - hmm just make it the same as 01:07:857 (2,3) - for consistency (and the first one is a better pattern anyways :P) it already is following a pattern ;~;
  14. 01:12:914 (1,2) - Unstack? i want a jumping movement to 01:13:085 (2) - \o/ unstacked \o/
  15. 01:30:142 (4) - this note is overmapped, theres nothing on the blue tick removed
  16. 01:36:228 (8) - same thing with white tick on slider end, please make 01:36:400 - a clickable object the sound's so strong haha Compromised
  17. 01:46:685 (1,2) - jump pls, holding the momentum feels bad here fixed
  18. 01:53:885 (7,8) - why does this have such low spacing compared to 01:53:542 (5,6,7,8) - when its the same sound? redid the pattern completely
  19. 01:56:971 (1) - maybe 3 sliders here to follow the vocals just like you did here 02:07:942 (1,2,3) - ? seems more fitting than a repeat. fixed
  20. 02:09:142 (5,1) - unstack please, 02:09:314 (1) - is too strong to hold the momentum fixed
  21. 02:14:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm i think you can make a better pattern here, this one seems kinda random and plays lackluster, something like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/8WzPgq6f.png trying that pattern out, i wasn't really confident in mine :p sorta just randomly placed circles for that xd
  22. 02:23:714 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - hmm you make neat structure here, cool stuff, I kinda missed that in some other parts of the map tho! :p read below
Lots of the issues I pointed out occur multiple times, so make sure to go through the map and fix similar things aswell if you decide to apply. The map has interesting ideas and sometimes the structure is neat, but I feel some parts are still lacking. You've shown that you can make cool structure and patterns, but a lot of patterns (mostly in the first 1:30 mins) seem kinda random and not all that fitting.

Thanks a lot for the mod! your mod made me realize that my slider jumps were mostly just randomly placed, so I fixed earlier patterns to be more structured!
Map has been updated, cheers! (and gl on bn if you're aiming for that :p)


Good luck!
Emperor of Time
Hello xD

Here's GD for Mania 4K = This
Einja
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Einja wrote:

I was really confused for a while because those errors didn't pop up for me.

Then I saw the update beatmap sign.

Map update >.> thanks for catching that!
JierYagtama
Boi imma GD insane also thanks for the Kurumi Pic <3
Inversal
Is this rankable without easy or normal diff? It can't be a marathon map.
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Inversal wrote:

Is this rankable without easy or normal diff? It can't be a marathon map.
Unfortunately, I need a nice spread of diffs to rank this ;~; I thought around 4 minutes was long enough, but a BN told me its not D:

And I can't map low diffs for my life ;~;
No_sync
hi!

Sorry for the delay!

4K GD

At least is 3.5* xD (So hard! :$)

Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

No_sync wrote:

hi!

Sorry for the delay!

4K GD

At least is 3.5* xD (So hard! :$)

Good Luck! :)
Thanks for the GD >w<//

uwu sorry for asking tho, can you hitsound it? I'm not good at hitsounding mania ;~;

Sorry if it's bothering you :(
No_sync
Update with Hitsounds + tiny fixes :)

The Code surpass 60000 characters so i can't paste it :S rip.
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

No_sync wrote:

Update with Hitsounds + tiny fixes :)

The Code surpass 60000 characters so i can't paste it :S rip.
Map updated! Thanks! >w<//
Umo-
Hi! NM request from: p/5949275#p5949275
a rough mod
No_S' MX
Check A.I Mod because theres alot of stuff there cx
00:31:600 - in my opinion it would be better if there is 2 note pattern
00:55:257 - ^
01:11:028 - This pattern looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7846692
02:16:342 - Make 2 note pattern
02:16:685 - ^
02:52:771 - ghost note?
03:30:228 - Remove those notes and leave the LN because there are no any sounds that support that pattern
03:34:400 - remove the note on the 3rd column

Emperor's Time
Countdown is not allowed in mania so uncheck it
01:08:971 - remove the note in the 3rd column
01:09:657 - make it 3 note pattern, sound is not that strong for a 4 note pattern
01:11:028 - make pattern look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7846804
01:43:085 - I belive those 3 notes are ghost notes
02:22:342 - make the pattern look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7846834
Good Luck! :)
No_sync
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imtdb1 wrote:

Hi! NM request from: p/5949275#p5949275 hi!
a rough mod
No_S' MX
Check A.I Mod because theres alot of stuff there cx Just kiai and tags (expecting to be more consistent...not my fault xD), the preview point one is from Emperor's diff, i can't touch that xD. Nothing more there.
00:31:600 - in my opinion it would be better if there is 2 note pattern Will be weird, i mapped the snares to 3 notes. Keep.
00:55:257 - ^ Same as before but in this case cymbal, 3 notes too... Keep.
01:11:028 - This pattern looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7846692 For now i will keep it: I want the trill there in |2|3| and 02:22:342 - is another one but using |1|4|. Keep.
02:16:342 - Make 2 note pattern I hear cymbals there, 3 notes. 02:16:000 (136000|0,136000|1,136000|3) - are three, LN is the third. 02:17:028 (137028|3,137028|1) - I erase one note here, for evading a 4-stack note in column |3|. Keep.
02:16:685 - ^ ^ ^
02:52:771 - ghost note? I think those 3 whistles in the song are very clear to hear. Like: 02:49:771 (169771|1,170028|2,170285|1) - , 02:47:028 (167028|0,167285|1,167542|2) - , 02:55:257 (175257|0,175514|2,175771|0) - Etc,etc... Keep.
03:30:228 - Remove those notes and leave the LN because there are no any sounds that support that pattern I think is pretty clear to hear the whistles. If more mods say something, i will nerf it. For now, i will keep it. Keep.
03:34:400 - remove the note on the 3rd column You say one of 03:34:342 (214342|0,214342|2) - ? Both are good in my opinion. Keep.

Good Luck! :) Thx for mod!
Thanks for your help!


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@amb1d3x: ehm... the Tags are inconsistent.
JierYagtama
took me like 3-4 days to reach this point
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also heres the custom bg xd http://puu.sh/vmRVd.jpg (note I've mapped the song until the end of the 2nd kiai so far rip Ill try to finish this as soon as I can or expect it to be finished this week) also mutual pls thx
Ambrew
amb1 <3
Sorry I replied so late! Here's your mod as promised
Koi
General Feedback! :D
Strengths:
  1. Very accurately mapped according to vocals and drums
  2. Good job on the NCing
  3. Consistent rhythms throughout the map!
Growth areas:
  1. A couple of strange patterns/overlaps
  2. Overall improvement on visuals
  3. Some spacing inconsistencies that need polishing
Mod-specific
00:01:771 (1) - slider shape needs to be fixed a little. see photo https://puu.sh/vnhlz/6b3e940cfb.JPG
00:12:400 (5) - inconsistent spacing
00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - how come smaller spacing?
00:18:228 (1) - wave shape could be improved a bit
00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - not sure if I like this design choice, but it's playable
00:43:342 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - unnecessary green ticks when there's no slider or volume change
00:49:085 (1,2,3,4) - weird spacing and overlap
01:00:057 (1,2,3,4) - same as above, equal ds would look better here imo
01:11:371 (1) - mute this sliderend, it sticks out a lot when there's no sound
01:17:200 (1,2) - maybe ctrl-g on 2? flow could improve
01:41:885 - you could use bigger sv here and then slowdown gradually at 01:43:600 (1,2,3) -
01:54:914 (7) - spacing is off a bit
02:01:771 (3) - not quite blanketed, and then copy onto 02:02:285 (5) -
02:01:771 (3) - why another green tick here? lol
02:01:085 (7,1) - NC should be on 7 since it was on downbeats previously and again on 02:02:628 (6) - possibly
02:16:514 (3) - bad blanket xd
02:18:228 (3) - could be spaced out bigger
02:21:657 (9) - NC and remove NC on 02:22:000 (1) -
02:35:200 (6) - imo doesn't lead well into the next slider because the shape looks askew compared to 02:34:685 (3,4,5) - . I think if you move it up and align with 02:35:028 (5) - it would look better
02:44:114 - stream needs polishing, the spacing is all over (.91, .96, .88, 1.02, etc.)
03:05:542 (2) - nice shape but are all those vertices necessary? :P
03:32:971 (1) - move this one back a little so it's closer to 03:33:314 (3) -

Cool map! I might get around to making a GD for this :) Best of luck <3
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Ambrew wrote:

amb1 <3
Sorry I replied so late! Here's your mod as promised
Koi
General Feedback! :D
Strengths:
  1. Very accurately mapped according to vocals and drums
  2. Good job on the NCing
  3. Consistent rhythms throughout the map!
Growth areas:
  1. A couple of strange patterns/overlaps
  2. Overall improvement on visuals
  3. Some spacing inconsistencies that need polishing
Mod-specific
00:01:771 (1) - slider shape needs to be fixed a little. see photo https://puu.sh/vnhlz/6b3e940cfb.JPG fixed
00:12:400 (5) - inconsistent spacing didnt seem inconsistent, adjusted it slightly i guess to make it even
00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - how come smaller spacing? I was following bigger spacing, smaller spacing, bigger spacing, smaller spacing with the 1/4 sliders
00:18:228 (1) - wave shape could be improved a bit slightly improved shape
00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - not sure if I like this design choice, but it's playable I like it :c
00:43:342 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - unnecessary green ticks when there's no slider or volume change for spacing
00:49:085 (1,2,3,4) - weird spacing and overlap adjusted to feel better
01:00:057 (1,2,3,4) - same as above, equal ds would look better here imo ^
01:11:371 (1) - mute this sliderend, it sticks out a lot when there's no sound done
01:17:200 (1,2) - maybe ctrl-g on 2? flow could improve nah it's fine this way, it's more noticeably a heart when done like this
01:41:885 - you could use bigger sv here and then slowdown gradually at 01:43:600 (1,2,3) - sure but only slight :3
01:54:914 (7) - spacing is off a bit changed to gradually smaller spacing
02:01:771 (3) - not quite blanketed, and then copy onto 02:02:285 (5) - jfc i suck at blankets hopefully fixed
02:01:771 (3) - why another green tick here? lol sv
02:01:085 (7,1) - NC should be on 7 since it was on downbeats previously and again on 02:02:628 (6) - possibly done
02:16:514 (3) - bad blanket xd I really need to work on my blankets xd
02:18:228 (3) - could be spaced out bigger S P A C E D B I G G E R
02:21:657 (9) - NC and remove NC on 02:22:000 (1) - :ok_hand"
02:35:200 (6) - imo doesn't lead well into the next slider because the shape looks askew compared to 02:34:685 (3,4,5) - . I think if you move it up and align with 02:35:028 (5) - it would look betterit's good for now, i find the flow fine
02:44:114 - stream needs polishing, the spacing is all over (.91, .96, .88, 1.02, etc.) fixed stream
03:05:542 (2) - nice shape but are all those vertices necessary? :P YES IT TOOK SO LONG TO MAKE THAT INTO A ROUND SHAPE BLANKETING THE OTHER SLIDER
03:32:971 (1) - move this one back a little so it's closer to 03:33:314 (3) - moved back

Cool map! I might get around to making a GD :o for this :) Best of luck <3
Thanks, map has been updated!
Drum-Hitnormal
hitsound finished, applied to both mania difficulty so you can testplay (won't overwrite your current ones)
http://puu.sh/vnQ1a/dcd4eeb82d.rar

Please listen to hitsound with 50% mp3 volume and 100% hitsound when checking it.

To copy hitsound use Magic Copy:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330

Quick mod for both , the 1/8 stream feels a bit awkward in terms of pattern.
stUwUpid
sup, here with the gd you requested from my queue

chitoge best grill
osu file format v14

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just as a quick heads up, for this kind of song, I think the highest difficulty should be at least somewhere around 5.5* or more, especially since your highest diff right now (Koi) isn't even considered an Extra by the submission system. It may or may not call for remaps of some parts, but I believe that it would fit the spread of a map like this much better if you were to buff the highest diff a bit. Also, I suggest just making your Light Insane an Insane, since it is already 4*and you're barely into the map. This way, I would suggest you get a Normal and Hard GD, then attempting to make an Easy yourself, which I think I might contact you in game to walk you through the basics of.

Also just be wary that if you're going to include mania in the set, you'll need a full spread for that as well (and it makes it infinitely harder to rank since you have to get BN approval for both mania AND std). Just giving you a notice beforehand xD.

Other than that, this is a great map, great song, and I had a lot of fun making a GD. Please poke me in game or via forums if i ever have any mods I need to respond to :)

edit: I'll also hitsound this myself, either using dudehackers hitsounds or providing my own, so you don't need to worry about that for now
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Kami-senpai wrote:

sup, here with the gd you requested from my queue

chitoge best grill
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just as a quick heads up, for this kind of song, I think the highest difficulty should be at least somewhere around 5.5* or more, especially since your highest diff right now (Koi) isn't even considered an Extra by the submission system. It may or may not call for remaps of some parts, but I believe that it would fit the spread of a map like this much better if you were to buff the highest diff a bit. Also, I suggest just making your Light Insane an Insane, since it is already 4*and you're barely into the map. This way, I would suggest you get a Normal and Hard GD, then attempting to make an Easy yourself, which I think I might contact you in game to walk you through the basics of.

Also just be wary that if you're going to include mania in the set, you'll need a full spread for that as well (and it makes it infinitely harder to rank since you have to get BN approval for both mania AND std). Just giving you a notice beforehand xD.

Other than that, this is a great map, great song, and I had a lot of fun making a GD. Please poke me in game or via forums if i ever have any mods I need to respond to :)

edit: I'll also hitsound this myself, either using dudehackers hitsounds or providing my own, so you don't need to worry about that for now
I have another GD coming up (extra) and i'm getting some normal and easy GDs, so what'll end up happening is that my diff name will change to insane or something (or I could get the extra GD to come up with a fancy name and keep mine as well :thinking:) and my light insane will stay light insane at a low 4*.

So I'll have the extra, my diff, light insane, hard (?), normal, and easy and then see from there.

Oh and of course your diff xd

Lots of fun playing for the first time, some parts are questionable and had me surprised on sightread, but I genuinely had fun playing (what I was aiming at! I want fun rather than a strict fast path to rank!)

I'll wait on the hitsounds, but I might get someone to hitsound the whole mapset when it's done (because mine are literal ass). But if you want to you can hitsound yours and I'll exclude it if someone helps hitsound the mapset as a whole.

Cheers~ o/
JierYagtama
welp
tbh im kinda unsure if the way I mapped 01:35:028 - 01:46:000 - 01:53:714 - 03:32:971 - 03:43:942 - 03:43:942 - 03:50:714 - is ok for you. welp just say the word then ill just remap those parts
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neonat
Koi

Combo Colours 1 and 2 are really similar to each other, it's not easy to distinguish them. If you had combo colour 3 in between them, that would help.

00:10:342 (2,3,4,1) - the whistles do sound pretty jarring with the song

There is a lot of extra beats added into the map where there is no such beats in the actual song. You can see this happening at 00:12:057 (3,4,5,6) - 00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:800 (3,4,5,6) - 00:16:171 (1,2,3,4) - 00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - 00:18:914 (1,2) - they do not warrant 1/4s

00:22:342 (1,2) - the change in SV seems random and out of place, the song does not have any changes to it to make it require a decrease in speed. Same with 00:30:571 (1,2) - and any other similar places

Again with the unnecessary beats added into the song at places like 00:23:028 (1,2,1,2) - 00:24:400 (1,2,1,2) - and so on, so forth

Normal whistles do not really fit into the song, especially listening from 00:44:628 onwards, the music lightens up, and those whistles are pretty loud

Spacing seems odd, there is very little use of it for emphasis between parts, between phrases, between sections and major parts that could be emphasized with it, including between NCs and all

01:06:914 (4,5,6) - 01:08:285 (4,5,6) - using the odd different spacings between 1/4s, it looks sloppy and not really well structured

01:12:400 (1,2,3) - the change of SV, solely for the sake of a pattern, when there is no need to speed it up over 3x, is not needed, and sticks out. Such adjustments should not be done just for the sake of a pattern, not only does it deviate from everything around it and makes it look off, but making something for the sake of just a pattern and not for the overall idea of the song makes it seem like a very shallow decision

01:17:542 (2) - that red node at the end, it makes the slider look worse

01:34:857 (4,1) - the spacing is really underwhelming, especially between 2 phrases, and when the subsequent objects are even further apart, it feels ironic



Overall, I feel there is a lot to improve on, the spacing can be utilised better, or at least used more appropriately. Rather than prioritizing patterns, which seems to be what is being done so, I'd always say that it would feel more natural if they suited the music more and moved the way the music sounds like, as that tends to help make things, especially movement, move together better. Sometimes, the patterns now look isolated and random and do not match with what comes after or before it. Then sometimes, when it's the exact same pattern like 01:54:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:20:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they have that differences and disorderness that just makes things more disorganised. There is a lot of added beats that could be avoided, because the song is not that loaded with 1/4s. While the use of changing SVs can be done well, it has to be done at the right time, where it can be justified, as well as done effectively without being used just because.

I hope to see that the map can be improved, good luck and all the best
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

neonat wrote:

Koi

Combo Colours 1 and 2 are really similar to each other, it's not easy to distinguish them. If you had combo colour 3 in between them, that would help. Just a prototype right now xd will fix once i get the mapset done

00:10:342 (2,3,4,1) - the whistles do sound pretty jarring with the song ^

There is a lot of extra beats added into the map where there is no such beats in the actual song. You can see this happening at 00:12:057 (3,4,5,6) - 00:13:428 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:800 (3,4,5,6) - 00:16:171 (1,2,3,4) - 00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - 00:18:914 (1,2) - they do not warrant 1/4s keeping them as they are justified in they the beginnings of the sliders continue the sound until the sliderends, and I'm consistent with them in those mentioned parts. Worse comes to worst I'll silence the sliderends

00:22:342 (1,2) - the change in SV seems random and out of place, the song does not have any changes to it to make it require a decrease in speed. Same with 00:30:571 (1,2) - and any other similar places Same in they introduce a new pattern in the song (I mean literally the song not map)
and I stay consistent in the SV changes


Again with the unnecessary beats added into the song at places like 00:23:028 (1,2,1,2) - 00:24:400 (1,2,1,2) - and so on, so forth Already mentioned

Normal whistles do not really fit into the song, especially listening from 00:44:628 onwards, the music lightens up, and those whistles are pretty loud Already mentioned

Spacing seems odd, there is very little use of it for emphasis between parts, between phrases, between sections and major parts that could be emphasized with it, including between NCs and all I'll look over and get other feedback

01:06:914 (4,5,6) - 01:08:285 (4,5,6) - using the odd different spacings between 1/4s, it looks sloppy and not really well structured changed

01:12:400 (1,2,3) - the change of SV, solely for the sake of a pattern, when there is no need to speed it up over 3x, is not needed, and sticks out. Such adjustments should not be done just for the sake of a pattern, not only does it deviate from everything around it and makes it look off, but making something for the sake of just a pattern and not for the overall idea of the song makes it seem like a very shallow decisionIt's a gimmick, a NC was added, and the 3x speed isn't all too convincing since relatively, the change is around 1.5, as the SV before that patter was 1.5; it's like going from 0.5 to 2 speed in a slider-only pattern that is fairly easy to read and not spaced too far apart.

01:17:542 (2) - that red node at the end, it makes the slider look worse changed

01:34:857 (4,1) - the spacing is really underwhelming, especially between 2 phrases, and when the subsequent objects are even further apart, it feels ironic I was emphasizing the vocals and that note didn't have one.



Overall, I feel there is a lot to improve on, the spacing can be utilised better, or at least used more appropriately. Rather than prioritizing patterns, which seems to be what is being done so, I'd always say that it would feel more natural if they suited the music more and moved the way the music sounds like, as that tends to help make things, especially movement, move together better. Sometimes, the patterns now look isolated and random and do not match with what comes after or before it. Then sometimes, when it's the exact same pattern like 01:54:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:20:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they have that differences and disorderness that just makes things more disorganised. There is a lot of added beats that could be avoided, because the song is not that loaded with 1/4s. While the use of changing SVs can be done well, it has to be done at the right time, where it can be justified, as well as done effectively without being used just because.

I hope to see that the map can be improved, good luck and all the best
Thanks for the mod, map's been updated and will take into account your opinion in the future! :D Hopefully I can come with a nice compromise between patterns and spacing emphasis!
- Ly0572 -
im super late~
sorry bout that
map got deleted idk how
so remap everything >w<
boop
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

- Ly0572 - wrote:

MARKED :3
:eyes:
Emperor of Time

imtdb1 wrote:

Hi! NM request from: p/5949275#p5949275
a rough mod

Emperor's Time
Countdown is not allowed in mania so uncheck it
01:08:971 - remove the note in the 3rd column
01:09:657 - make it 3 note pattern, sound is not that strong for a 4 note pattern
01:11:028 - make pattern look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7846804
01:43:085 - I belive those 3 notes are ghost notes
02:22:342 - make the pattern look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7846834
Good Luck! :)
it's already applied ?
- Ly0572 -
might want to change No_s' MX to HD since there is no HD and it has H icon :3
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

- Ly0572 - wrote:

might want to change No_s' MX to HD since there is no HD and it has H icon :3
Noted ;)
No_sync
yes, change it ambi... i was :thinking: that something was skipped there lol
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