Lulu- wrote:
Hey, m4m! Just pointing out some major stuff here, there repeated mistakes, which would've made this post much longer than needed, so I just left them out. The map seemed a bit messy to me in general, you should be more consistent with your spacing, avoid overlapping stuff that much and use cleaner patterns/sliders
[Vow]
00:01:963 (4,5,1) - You should make this flow better, it's not very pleasant to play like many other parts in the map, but they're easy to fix with blankets, so I won't point most of them out. 4 and 5's placement also makes the pattern look pretty messy, so try moving them further away from the other objects to make it look less dense and cleaner ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
00:09:849 (4) - Add a red sliderpoint in the middle so you can make the slider look nicer fixed
00:11:086 (6,1,2) - I'd rotate this by something like -30°, feels better to me than straight sliders in straight lines fixed
00:16:808 (3) - Change this slider so it blankets with 00:17:272 (5) fixed
00:18:818 (1,2,3,4) - You can emphasize the sliders more by placing the circles closer to the slidertail moved closer
00:19:746 (5) - Why is the spacing here suddenly so high? The song isn't really intense here and it would be better for you to just keep the DS low incalmer parts like this oop fixed
00:42:323 (1) - This slider should end on the next blue tick fixed
01:03:355 (1) - This breaks the flow pretty hard, try finding a more comfortable direction for the slider breaks the flow hard? idk
01:40:468 (5) - Don't place this directly below 4, this will play better if placed somewhere around 2's sliderend moved
02:23:458 (2) - Lower the SV here lowered
03:18:200 (1,1,1) - Change the way of how you place these, it's really hard for the player to read this moved further from 5, but really this shouldn't be hard to read for players who play six star maps lo
03:22:840 (2,1,1,1) - All of these have to end on blue ticks, no breaks inbetween fixed
04:43:560 (9) - Redo this slider, but use a medium/small sized grid this time to make it easier to create symmetrical sliderart. The SV is also way too slow here, try increasing it by a bit and make the slider a bit more wider, so it won't end up shorter than the current one this damn slider ;_; ill see what i can do
edit: I chose not to increase the SV, but I redid the slider to be more symmetrical
If you have any more questions feel free to message me!
Thanks!