Sorry for the late reply. I actually had a mod post half-done then comp restarted and it all got deleted and I was so sad that day. Anyway, here's it again, from memory:
Overall, the map is already very solid (as I'm sure you know). All changes are suggestions, green for highly suggest, black for ramblings.
And that's all I have to say. If you feel that there are certain parts you would like me to look at in particular, please PM me. I am happy to remod whenever.
Overall, the map is already very solid (as I'm sure you know). All changes are suggestions, green for highly suggest, black for ramblings.
Mod Stuff
00:45:864 (196,197,198) - Change from kdd to dkk. Personally I feel this improves flow and matches music better.
00:46:441 (201) - Possible change to k
00:47:172 (209) - Still rankable if you put a d here, though it's understandable if you want to leave it empty
01:22:234 - Here's another person telling you about possible finishers, to time in with the cymbal crashes, although perfectly understandable if you want to preserve readability. If you do actually change it, be sure to do it for all future instances.
01:33:184 - Current stream does not fit very well, and I'm guessing you've been thinking about changing it? Here is my suggestion, change from kdkkddkkddkkkd(kdddkddd....) to ????kkkdkdkkdd(kdddkddd....). First 4 ?'s could be kddd or kdkd (if you want to preserve 2nd k), up to you, but I highly recommend the suggested pattern. THIS REALLY NEEDS TO CHANGE.
02:04:759 (941,942) - Not sure why these two notes are the way they are. Can you justify it? I suppose you're doing it for variety. Will get back to you on this.
03:03:184 - Maybe vary the ???? of 01:33:184 - here? Regardless CHANGE THE STREAM
03:34:759 (1787,1788) - Same as before
06:30:109 (3269,3272) - Possible change to k to reflect the rising pitch
06:49:834 - Because I really can't be bothered to type it ALL out, I highly suggest you cut the stream short and change it into something that resembles this. If anything, at least change at least the first half.
00:46:441 (201) - Possible change to k
00:47:172 (209) - Still rankable if you put a d here, though it's understandable if you want to leave it empty
01:22:234 - Here's another person telling you about possible finishers, to time in with the cymbal crashes, although perfectly understandable if you want to preserve readability. If you do actually change it, be sure to do it for all future instances.
01:33:184 - Current stream does not fit very well, and I'm guessing you've been thinking about changing it? Here is my suggestion, change from kdkkddkkddkkkd(kdddkddd....) to ????kkkdkdkkdd(kdddkddd....). First 4 ?'s could be kddd or kdkd (if you want to preserve 2nd k), up to you, but I highly recommend the suggested pattern. THIS REALLY NEEDS TO CHANGE.
02:04:759 (941,942) - Not sure why these two notes are the way they are. Can you justify it? I suppose you're doing it for variety. Will get back to you on this.
03:03:184 - Maybe vary the ???? of 01:33:184 - here? Regardless CHANGE THE STREAM
03:34:759 (1787,1788) - Same as before
06:30:109 (3269,3272) - Possible change to k to reflect the rising pitch
06:49:834 - Because I really can't be bothered to type it ALL out, I highly suggest you cut the stream short and change it into something that resembles this. If anything, at least change at least the first half.
And that's all I have to say. If you feel that there are certain parts you would like me to look at in particular, please PM me. I am happy to remod whenever.