kinda sad that you didn't map the guitar at the beginning but that's just me being biased
00:57:034 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293) - this offhand pattern sounds pretty clunky, I'd recommend instead increasing the kat note count here to reflect higher pitch, something along the lines of this:
02:10:234 - 05:28:234 - and 07:04:234 - definitely need kiai
03:39:034 (1845) - until 03:40:084 - substitute for a spinner for the guitar tremolo
04:23:434 (2263) - Finisher? Has a subtle yet noticeable crash
07:45:034 - expected them fast, but not that fast. Maybe make it 1,5x at least, so people don't get too frustrated missing the last 3 notes
05:13:834 - WOW NICE COPYPASTE PLAGIARISM PLAGIARMIASFMAIFMAIFSNAFINA
06:02:734 (2990,2991,2992,2993) - this pattern doesn't seem to fit the overall tone you've been using till now, try 06:02:884 (2992) - making this a don
06:16:234 - oh my god i didn't think about making this a full stream :psy: kudos to you