From my NM/M4M queue.
Columns 4K 0|1|2|3
General
MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS
Hitsound: FAIL
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: PASS
Preview Point: MISS
BG: PASS
Video: PASS
- Because doesn't need a video. Lol.
- To be honest, i tried 1411 for offset. Try consult somebody more expert in that. lol. And take care of those SV's in the last diff, if you change the offset...SV's need to be changed as well.
Diff.Name: PASS
- very original xD
Hitsound: FAIL
- There is a Hitsound called soft-hitnormal2 that have a length of 76ms. Screenshot. You need at least 100ms. It's a rule, here it is:
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file.
NOTE: Due to a technical issue having any files that are 0 bytes in size in the beatmap folder will cause files after the (first) 0-byte file to be missing. Please do NOT use any 0-byte files. The one linked above is 44KB in size and won't cause issues.
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: PASS
- From here? https://soundcloud.com/redshiftvocaloid/ninelie-redshift-x-vesuvia-remix All clear.
Preview Point: MISS
- Personal opinion. For me fits better in 03:07:487.
Mod!
[Beginner Nue]
[Intermediate Bushi]
[Hyper Koutetsujou]
[Another Kabaneri]
From 00:01:420 to 00:21:644 - I think all this section needs rolls for the piano.
From 00:01:420: 0->1->2->3.
And from 00:12:206: 3->2->1->0 until 00:21:644.
01:16:082 (76082|0,76251|3,76504|2,76757|3,76925|1) - http://i.imgur.com/z3XnxuY.jpg
01:25:352 (85352|0) - Move to |3|. That space is too long.
01:25:352 to 02:16:251 - I think all this section needs staircases. 0->1->2->3->2->1->0 ...
02:53:667 (173667|3) - Move to |2| for more breath there.
03:55:352 (235352|1,235521|0,235689|2) - http://i.imgur.com/vBFJRBr.jpg Fits better for me.
From 00:01:420: 0->1->2->3.
And from 00:12:206: 3->2->1->0 until 00:21:644.
01:16:082 (76082|0,76251|3,76504|2,76757|3,76925|1) - http://i.imgur.com/z3XnxuY.jpg
01:25:352 (85352|0) - Move to |3|. That space is too long.
01:25:352 to 02:16:251 - I think all this section needs staircases. 0->1->2->3->2->1->0 ...
02:53:667 (173667|3) - Move to |2| for more breath there.
03:55:352 (235352|1,235521|0,235689|2) - http://i.imgur.com/vBFJRBr.jpg Fits better for me.
[Intermediate Bushi]
00:31:251 (31251|2,31419|1,31588|0,31925|0) - Is too forced that stair there after the chord? I would move these notes one column to right.
tbh all that section with the snares have some patters like this: 00:27:375 (27375|2,27543|0,27712|2) and this: 00:34:453 (34453|1,34622|0,34790|2). I don't know what will be the correct. Try stick with one in particular for consistency.
01:01:925 (61925|2,62262|2) - Move these two notes to |1|, I don't like that stack.
01:08:835 (68835|1,68835|3,69004|0,69172|3,69172|1,69341|2,69509|0,69509|1,69678|3,69846|0,69846|2,70015|1) - http://i.imgur.com/1gDfSax.jpg Rearranged better...
01:19:622 (79622|3,80127|3,80633|3) - This is more like a Hard pattern tbh. I would move the 2nd LN...
01:25:015 (85015|3) - There's too much notes in |2| and |3| here... move this note to |1|.
02:06:476 (126476|1) - Move to |2|, evade stack there...
02:46:251 (166251|3,166419|2) - Move one column to left.
02:56:363 (176363|0) - to |1|.
03:35:464 (215464|2) - to |3|.
03:55:352 (235352|3,235352|2,235521|2,235521|3,235689|0,235689|1,235858|3,235858|2) - http://i.imgur.com/mca9Vki.jpg ...if you like.
By the way:
0:34:622 LR_Drum Click.wav@70%
0:35:970 LR_Drum Click.wav@70%
3:0:745 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
I don't use too much those... storyboard hitsounds? Are intended? If not, quit them, because i don't see those HS in the Beginner diff.
tbh all that section with the snares have some patters like this: 00:27:375 (27375|2,27543|0,27712|2) and this: 00:34:453 (34453|1,34622|0,34790|2). I don't know what will be the correct. Try stick with one in particular for consistency.
01:01:925 (61925|2,62262|2) - Move these two notes to |1|, I don't like that stack.
01:08:835 (68835|1,68835|3,69004|0,69172|3,69172|1,69341|2,69509|0,69509|1,69678|3,69846|0,69846|2,70015|1) - http://i.imgur.com/1gDfSax.jpg Rearranged better...
01:19:622 (79622|3,80127|3,80633|3) - This is more like a Hard pattern tbh. I would move the 2nd LN...
01:25:015 (85015|3) - There's too much notes in |2| and |3| here... move this note to |1|.
02:06:476 (126476|1) - Move to |2|, evade stack there...
02:46:251 (166251|3,166419|2) - Move one column to left.
02:56:363 (176363|0) - to |1|.
03:35:464 (215464|2) - to |3|.
03:55:352 (235352|3,235352|2,235521|2,235521|3,235689|0,235689|1,235858|3,235858|2) - http://i.imgur.com/mca9Vki.jpg ...if you like.
By the way:
0:34:622 LR_Drum Click.wav@70%
0:35:970 LR_Drum Click.wav@70%
3:0:745 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
I don't use too much those... storyboard hitsounds? Are intended? If not, quit them, because i don't see those HS in the Beginner diff.
[Hyper Koutetsujou]
Same here...
1:4:790 LR_Drum Click.wav@70%
2:26:195 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
2:26:195 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
2:38:667 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
03:06:476 (186476|1,186728|1,186981|1,187150|1) - I would move 03:07:150 (187150|1) - to |2|.
03:40:858 (220858|1) - to |0|.
03:42:206 (222206|1) - ^
03:50:464 (230464|1,230633|1) - Move both one column to the right, and 03:50:802 (230802|2) - to |1|.
03:53:835 (233835|0) - to |3|.
1:4:790 LR_Drum Click.wav@70%
2:26:195 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
2:26:195 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
2:38:667 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
03:06:476 (186476|1,186728|1,186981|1,187150|1) - I would move 03:07:150 (187150|1) - to |2|.
03:40:858 (220858|1) - to |0|.
03:42:206 (222206|1) - ^
03:50:464 (230464|1,230633|1) - Move both one column to the right, and 03:50:802 (230802|2) - to |1|.
03:53:835 (233835|0) - to |3|.
[Another Kabaneri]
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2:38:667 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
3:28:891 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
3:53:414 LR4_Kick HrW BRF.wav@50%
01:01:588 (61588|2,61757|2) - I would move to |3| to evade stack there...
03:39:004 (219004|2) - to |0|.
03:41:195 (221195|1,221363|1) - to |2| and 03:41:532 (221532|2) - to |1|.
Those SV's tho xD
I check all the possible stacks but i don't see too much trouble...(I played too, but too lazy for take screenshot lol)
2:38:667 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
3:28:891 LR_Snare Fast.wav@70%
3:53:414 LR4_Kick HrW BRF.wav@50%
01:01:588 (61588|2,61757|2) - I would move to |3| to evade stack there...
03:39:004 (219004|2) - to |0|.
03:41:195 (221195|1,221363|1) - to |2| and 03:41:532 (221532|2) - to |1|.
Those SV's tho xD
I check all the possible stacks but i don't see too much trouble...(I played too, but too lazy for take screenshot lol)
Really good song!
Bye and Good luck, Alsty-!